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Mujhe achchha laga yar wo emotional wala scene aansu aa gye the aankho se baki niche se aansu aaye uske liye wait kar rahe hai aise update ka
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Dinner kar raha tha, bhai. abhi free huya hoon. Ab editing per baithunga, update Kuchh hi derr Mein post Hogi.
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Aadhi rat ko dinner yar
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Aur bhi kaam rehta hai, Bhai. sirf Ghar pe baithe nahin rahte.
New year week hai friends ke saath bahar tha.
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Update 11 - Losing the V (1)
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“Yehi woh dress hai na? Myra ne isi tarah ki dress pehni thi!”
Screen par wahi design, wahi colour. bilkul wahi dress jo Myra ne birthday party mein pehna tha.
“Uss din bhaiya Myra ko aise ghoor rahe the jaise duniya mein woh akeli hi sundar ho...! humph!! Aisa dress thi na uss chudail Myra ne pehni thi? Jisse dekhkar bhaiya ki nazar hi nahi hat rahi thi?”
Usne apne purse mein dekha, phir dress ki price par nazar daudayi.
“Hmmmm!! Abhi bhi mere paas hajar rupya kam hai, koi baat nahi. Papa se mang lungi, hehe! Par ye dress toh mujhe kharidni hi hai~ *blushes* ”
Aur phir uske gaalon par ek gahri laali chha gayi. Hothon par ek sharmili bhari muskaan khil gayi. Pata nahi woh kya soch rahi th
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"Fuckkkkkkkk!!"
Aryan apne kamre mein sirf underwear mein khada tha. Uske saare purane kapde ab itne tight ho chuke the ki pehenna hi mumkin nahi tha.
Pichhle do-teen dino se uske shareer mein kuch ajeeb se badlaav aa rahe the, aur aaj unka poora asar saaf dikh raha tha. Pehle toh kapde sirf thoda tight lag rahe the, lekin ab uski muscles pehle se kaafi zyada badh chuki thi.
Inn dino woh kisi tarah wahi tight kapde ghisat kar pehen raha tha, par aaj toh purane kapde bilkul fit hi nahi ho rahe the. Height mein koi farq nahi aaya tha, "thanks God!" Nahi toh woh ceeling Tak uska sar pahunch jata, woh pehle se hi kaafi lamba tha. lekin muscles mein kafi badlaav aa gaya tha.
"Bhaiyaa!! Aaj aap late kar rahe ho!"
Bahar se Naina ki cheekh si awaaz aa rahi thi. Aaj pehli baar Aryan khud late ho raha tha, aur yeh golden mauka Naina kaise chhodti?
"Ruk na Naina! Bas aa raha hoon!"
"Whatt! Aap khud late ho rahe ho bhaiya! Jab main late karti hoon toh aap mujhe kitna daantte ho!"
Idhar Aryan alag pareshan tha, upar se Naina ki taane.
Naina : Bhaiya! Itni der se kar kya rahe ho... Main andar aa rahi hoon~
Idhar toh Aryan sirf underwear mein tha! Usne darwaze ki taraf dekha "oh shit!" Darwaza locked bhi nahi kiya tha! "Shittttttt!!" Aur Naina ne darwaza 2 inch khol bhi diya tha.
Naina : Bhai....!!!! Huh!?!?!
THUD!!
Shukr hai, last moment par Aryan tezi se darwaze ki taraf lapka tha aur use zor se band kar diya. Bas ek second ki deri hoti toh aaj Naina ko apne bhaiya ke underwear wale avatar ka seedhe darshan ho jaate~
Aryan : Nainaaa!! Huff!! Pagal ho gayi ho kya? Bola na aa raha hoon!
Naina : Hmph!! Kya kar rahe ho itni der se?
Aryan : A-areh! Woh... kapde nahi mil rahe the!
Naina : Heinnn!?!?!
Aryan : Matlab... sab kapde gande hain, toh...!
Naina : Pehle laundry mein daal dete na!
Aryan : Haan wahi bhool gaya, meri maa.
Naina : hehe! Bhaiya aap Badam khaya karo aap. Hehehe~
Idhar Aryan bechara underwear mein hi kamre mein chakkar kaat raha tha. Yeh kya naya sankat aa pada tha uski zindagi mein? Naye size ke kapde abhi kaha se laata? Kya adha nanga hi college chala jaaye?
Aryan (mann mein): Shirt!! Koi shirt kaha hai yaar!!
Naina : Oh! Bhaiya? Aap woh wali T-shirt try kyun nahi karte?
Aryan : Huh? Kaunsi wali?
Naina : Arre budhu bhaiya~ Wahi uss din mall mein aapne ek extra T-shirt liye the na? Woh oversized wali! Kya kehte hain... haan!, baggy T-shirt!
Aryan : Ohh haan!! Yaad aaya!
Naina : Toh jaldi woh pehno na, abhi tak toh pehni bhi nahi aapne!
Bas Naina ka suggestion kaam kar gaya. Aryan ne thodi der socha, haan yaar, baggy aur oversized hai, toh shayad fit aa jaaye. Usne turant woh kapde pehen liye.
Baggy oversized clothes ki wajah se uska naya muscular shareer poori tarah chhup gaya. Bahar se dekhne se bhi koi nahi keh sakta tha ki Aryan mein itna bada badlaav aaya hai. Usne aaine mein apna reflection dekha.
"Fuckkkkkk! I look so damn funny!"
Naina : Bhiyaaaaa! Jaldi karo na, late ho raha hai....!!"
Aryan : Yeah! Let's go!
***
College
10:35 AM
Idhar college mein, parking area mein ek cherry red car, Usmein ek ladki baithi thi, uska chehra utra hua tha, jaise kisi ke aane ka intezaar kar rahi ho. Ankhein door kahi takra rahi thi, lekin dimag kahi aur tha.
Myra!
Kuch gehri soch mein dubi hui thi, aisa lag raha tha. Uski ungliyan steering wheel par thap-thap kar rahi thi, aur woh apne se hi baat kar rahi thi.
"What are you thinking about? If you're in love, then why don't you call him?"
"But... I feel hesitant, and my pride is getting in the way too. How can I just call him and say, 'Come to college I'm waiting for you'?"
"But he doesn't remember anything, right? I wish he remembered everything...."
"Ugh!"
Kuch gehri hi soch mein dubi hui thi.
aisa lag raha tha. yaadon mein kho gayi thi. Dil mein ek tees uth rahi thi, ki kyun nahi usne pehle kuch kaha.
Tabhi uski nazar campus se aate hue do vyaktiyon par padi. Aryan aur Naina. Woh hi the. Dono mein behes baji chal rahi thi.
Naina Aryan ke haath pakde chali ja rahi thi, aur Aryan muskurate hue usko sunn raha tha.
Naina : Dekha na! Dekha na! Aaj aap ki wajah se hum late hain.
Aryan : Bas ek din late kya kiya, tum toh kha jaane lagi?
Naina : Aur nahi toh kya! Jab main thodi si late karti hoon, aap toh mujhe daant daant ke kha jaate ho.
Aryan : You!! Okay meri maa. I admit. I'm sorry, meri wajah se hum late hue. Ab theek hai?
Naina : Yeeesss!! Hehe~ bhaiya!
Aryan ke sorry kehte hi Naina phudak ke Aryan se chipak gayi. Uski ankhein khushi se chamak uthi, jaise usko bas yahi sunna tha. Sunte hi woh wapas se uske baahon se chipak ke chal padi, jaise duniya ki sabse khush ladki ho. Aryan ne sirr jhuka kar muskuraya.
Idhar Myra ki teekhi ankhein Aryan ko aate hue dekhti rahi. Usne apne lips ke upar ungli pheri, ek final touch-up, taaki lipstick sahi se baith jaye honton pe.
Jaise hi Aryan nazdik aaya, Aryan aur Naina parking se guzar ke ja rahe the, tab uski ankhein Myra se takra gayi.
Myra (smiles): Hi! Aryan~
Naina : *Tch*
Aryan (smiles black) : Hi!! Tum..?
Myra : Ohh! Main abhi aayi~
Aryan : Oh! Aur tumhari woh dono saheliyan kidhar hain?
Myra : Pata nahi~
Aryan : Dono toh tumhare saath hi rehti hain, aaj college nahi aayi?
Myra : Pata nahi~
Aryan : ???
Naina : *Tch*
Aryan : Huh??
Naina : *Tch* *Tch*
Myra (blink-blink) : 𓍯𓂃𓏧 ⋆˙⟡
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Naina : *Tch* *Tch* *Tch*
Bechare Aryan ko kuch pata nahi, par Naina sab kuch samajh pa rahi thi. Myra khulle mein Aryan ko ghoor rahi thi, uski ankhein jaise keh rahi thi –
"tum mujhe pasand ho, aur main tumhe apna banana chahti hoon."
Naina ki maathe pe nashein kas uthi. Woh aaj Myra ki ankhein phod hi degi, itna gussa aa raha tha. Uski mutthi band ho gayi.
Naina (in between) : bhiyaaaa!!
Naina thodi cheekhi, Myra ka bhi dhyan aaya ki woh college mein hai. Woh thodi sharma bhi gayi.
Myra (blushes) : Ahem!! Well~
Aryan : ???
Naina : Bhaiya chalo na yaha se...! *Tch* Classes shuru ho jayenge?
Aryan : Haan!
Myra : W-wait!!! I'm coming too...!!
Naina : NOO!! Bhaiya chalo.......!
Bechari Naina ka sar phata ja raha tha, uske dimag mein Myra ek warning ki ghanti ki tarah baj rahi thi ki iss Myra se bhaiya ko door rakhna hoga. Woh Aryan ko kheench kar le ja rahi thi, jaise koi khatra ho Myra.
Wahi Myra bas Aryan ko dekhti rahi, uski ankhein uspe tikki hui thi, jaise koi pyari si hunter apne shikar ko dekh rahi ho.
Aryan bechara, inn do mohtarmaon ke dimag mein kya chal raha hai, usse anjaan tha. Woh Naina ke sang chala gaya. But jaate waqt usne peeche mud ke Myra ko ek baar dekha, jo khud usko muh phade dekh rahi thi~
Myra (whispers to herself) : I think I was too late. I really shouldn't have stayed silent for an entire year... that was probably a mistake. Aryan and I might have become close friends by now or perhaps even a couple. But as things are...!! I don't think Naina likes me very much *smiles faintly* Not that I can blame her. One day, after all... I'm going to take her precious bhaiya away from her... *eyes distant* and make sure he stays mine. Fufu~
Woh apne mein badbada rahi thi, tabhi uske kandhe pe kisi ka haath mehsoos hua.
"Tum kya soch rahi ho??"
Usne dekha ye Meera thi. Jo usko iss gehri soch mein dooba dekh puch rahi thi. Myra car se bahar aati hai.
Myra : Oh! It's nothing! Tum kab aayi?
Meera : Abhi hi!
Meera ne Myra ki nazron ka peechha kiya toh dekha Myra Aryan ko hi jaate hue dekh rahi thi.
Meera : He's tall!
Myra : W-who?
Meera : Aryan! He's tall, na?
Myra (smiles) : Hai na? Yeah he is!~ *blushes*
Woh aise keh rahi thi jaise kehna chahti ho 'yeah! My man is tall'. Idhar ye dekh Meera bahein sekud ke Myra ko dekh rahi thi. Kya yehi thi uski woh best friend jo rich hone ke saath saath famous for her looks bhi thi, jo launde lapadon ko bhao tak nahi deti thi?
Meera sidhi ladki thi, Sanya, myra se bilkul Alag. usko dusron ke baaton mein zyada mattha nahi pachti thi, uspe achchi bacchi ka title sahi rahega. Myra uski best friend hone ke naate woh puchna toh chahti thi par woh jaanti thi Myra kuch batane se rahi.
Myra : Anyways Sanya kaha hai?
Meera : idk! Mujhse keh rahi thi 2nd period mein aayegi.
Myra : Oh!!
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Idhar dusri taraf canteen mein Rohan apne doston ke saath baitha Myra ko tad raha tha. Usne bhi dekha tha Myra Aryan se baat kar rahi thi, aur Aryan se baat karte waqt Myra ka chehra kaise khil utha tha. Ye dekh Rohan ki gand aise jali jaise koi garam loha uske gand mein daal diya ho. Uske chehre pe gussa saaf dikhai de raha tha, mutthi band ho gayi thi.
Rohan (smiles) : Sab ready hai na?
Dost 1 : Yes bhai sab set hai.
Rohan : Good!
Dost 2 : Rohan bhai tum college ke peeche rehna, hum Aryan ko lekar aayenge.
Rohan : Aaj uss chutiya ko aise sabak sikhaunga.... *smiles*
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Ek local chemist shop ke saamne ek car khadi thi, ek khoobsurat si ladki mask pahane car se utarti hai. Woh idhar udhar dekhti hai taaki koi usse dekh toh nahi raha, sab clear hai. Woh shop pe aati hai. 20k rupees ki ek bundle chemist wale ladke ko deti hai.
Ladki : LSD and 20k kafi hai na?
Ladka : Kafi hai, par ismein main nahi fansunga na, mam?
Ladki : Just take the money and shut up!
Ladka : O-okay! Ye rahi aap ki order!
Ladka ne ek kaali polythene ladki ki ore badhai, ladki der na karte hue uss polythene ko leti hai aur mask ko theek se chehre pe adjust karti hai, aur wapas apne car mein baith jaati hai.
"Mujhe sorry bolna pada tha, uski wajah se. Main nahi chhodungi usko. Poora college ke saamne sorry kehlaungi aur *evil smiles* uss gandi nali ke kide ko uski aukat pata chalega. Hehehe~"
Ladki apne chehre se mask utarti hai, uska chehra saamne aati hai. Ladki koi aur nahi balki –
Sanya thi.
Vroom! Vroom!
Clutch dabate hi car dhuan nikalte hue aage badh gayi, college ki taraf.
Sanya Meera ko iss liye boli thi ki woh aaj 2nd period mein aayegi. Kyunki woh chemist shop gayi thi.
College pohoch ke usne car parking area mein nahi park kiya, balki male bathroom ke theek peeche jaha college ka emergency exit tha waha park karke, woh seedha ghusi canteen mein.
Sanya : Veer uncle? Ye rahi 5k aap ko meri ek kaam karni hogi?
"Mujhe!?!?!"
Sanya : Yes! Suniye, iss packet mein ek chhota sa cheez hain, main jab ishara karu aap ko toh aap coffee mein ye mila dena! Theek hai.
Sanya uss packet ko Veer uncle ki taraf karti hai jismein LSD tha. Akhir plan kya tha uska sirf woh hi jaanti thi. Veer uncle ne uss packet ko dekh.
"Par..!"
Sanya : Ohho! Uncle. Paisa zyada le lena bas mera kaam kar do.
Veer uncle bhi paise ke lalach mein aake haan keh dete hain.
Sanya unhe sab samjha ke apni class ki taraf badhti hai, 1st lecture ho chuka tha abhi baari thi 2nd lecture ki.
Woh classroom mein aate hi uski nazar Aryan pe jaati hai jo last bench mein Naina ke saath baitha tha.
Sanya ke honton pe ek saitani muskaan aati hai.
Sanya (mann mein) : Bacchu ab dekhna tu~
Meera : Oyeee! Tum kidhar thi?
Sanya : M-main! Oh! Mujhe thoda ajeeb feel ho raha tha toh late aayi. Hehe!!
---
Class ki last bench par Naina Aryan ke bagal mein bilkul chipak kar baithi thi. Uska shoulder Aryan ke shoulder se takra raha tha, aur har baar jab woh thoda hilti, uska baal Aryan ke galon ko chhoo leta.
Myra, jo teen seat aage baithi thi, baar-baar peeche mud kar Aryan ko dekhti. Pehli baar shayad coincidence, doosri baar curiosity, teesri baar... jaise kuch kehna chahti ho par aankhein bol nahi pa rahi thi.
Aur Ye sab kuchh hote huye Naina dekh rahi thi, uske dimaag ne ek warning diya -myra!! warning!! isse bhaiya ko bachana hai.
Usne apna haath Aryan ki thigh par achanak rakh deti hai, aur khud ko aur kareeb kheench leti hai, jaise keh rahi ho “ye mera bhaiya hai, sirf mere bhaiya.”
Aryan ko laga jaise uspe do nazarein ek saath tikki hui hain. Ek pyaari, toh ek... alag.
Aryan : Naina?
Naina : Hmm bhaiya~?
Aryan : main jara Barthroom hoke aata hoon!
Naina ekdum laal ho gayi. Usne jhatke se apna haath hataaya aur sharma kar nazrein dusri ore ghuma leti hai.
Naina : Oh... w-woh... *Blush* S-sorry!
Aryan (smiles) : It's okay.
Bechara Aryan. Usne bathroom ka bahana banaya kyuki Myra ki wo baar-baar peeche mud kar dekhne wali nazrein uske dimag par chadh gayi thi. Sab kuch uske sarr ke upar se guzar raha tha. Woh samajh hi nahi pa raha tha ki achanak ye myra peeche mud mud ke uski taraf kya dekh rahi thi?
Jaise hi woh classroom se bahar nikla, corridor mein Rohan ke do dost gidaron ki tarah pehle se nazar gadata hue baithe the. Aryan ke kadam dekhte hi dono uth khade hue aur Aryan pehle kuch samajh paata, dono ne usko dono taraf se jakad liya.
Aryan : Huh...??
Dost 1 : Kaha ja raha hai, Aryan bhai?
Dost 2 : Hamare saath chalo na. Rohan bhai tere saath thoda hisaab-kitab karna chahte hain. Haha!
Aryan sab samajh gaya tha. Kuch din pehle Rohan ne usko peet kar warning di thi – Myra se door rehna. Aaj shayad Myra ka usse baat karna Rohan ne dekh liya tha. Isliye ye dono aaye the.
Lekin iss baar... iss baar Aryan ke andar kuch badal chuka tha. Woh dara nahi. Usne seedha jawab diya.
Aryan (confident awaaz mein) : Okay. Chalo.
Dono ek doosre ka chehra dekhe, thoda hairan. Phir vah Aryan ko pakad kar college ke peeche wali sunsaan jagah par le gaye. Waha koi nahi aata tha. Perfect jagah thi hisaab chukta karne ki.
Rohan pehle se waha khada tha, haath mutthi mein band, aankhein gussa aur jalan.
Jaise hi dono ne Aryan ko dhakka dekar aage kiya, Aryan ne peeche mud kar dekha. Dono dost ab bhi uske kandhon par haath rakhe the.
Rohan : Gussa aa raha hai na ab?
Aryan : ???
Rohan (zor se) : Chutiye! Tujhe bola tha na Myra se door rehne ko!
Rohan ko laga aaj toh Aryan ka band bajega. Lekin Aryan shaant khada raha.
Aryan : Dekho, maine pehle bhi kaha tha ki-
Baaki baat uski gale mein hi atak gayi. Kyunki Rohan ne achanak uska collar pakda aur gala daboch liya.
Rohan (daant peeste hue) : Chup kar bishdike!
Lekin iss baar Aryan ka shareer react kiya. Uske haath ne khud-b-khud Rohan ka haath pakda aur ek jhatke mein chhuda diya. Itni aasani se, jaise koi baccha khel raha ho.
Rohan : Huh...???
Uske dono dost bhi hairani se ek doosre ka muh dekhe.
Aryan : Maine kaha na, mera aur Myra ke beech kuch nahi hai. Aur...
Rohan : !?
Aryan : Aur hoga bhi... tujhe kya problem?
Ye sunn kar Rohan ke kaanon tak laal ho gaya. Woh Aryan jo hamesha sarr jhuka kar nikalta tha, aaj palat kar jawab de raha tha?
Rohan (chillate hue) : Fuuuuckerrrr!!
Usne gusse mein dobara haath uthaya, lekin Aryan ne uska haath beech mein hi pakad liya, kas kar.
Rohan : Ahhh... bc!!!
Aryan : Maine kya kaha tha? Myra aur mere beech kuch nahi hai... aur hoga bhi, toh tujhe kya?
Rohan : Youuu!! And Tum dono haath mein lund pakde ho kya? Maaro isko!! Bahanchood aaj jaan se maar do isko! Mera mama police mein hai, sab sambhal lenge!
Dono dost aage badhe. Aryan ne Rohan ka haath chhoda aur tezi se mud gaya.
Dost 1 (daant dikha kar) : Bahut muh chala raha hai aaj?
Woh daud kar aaya aur muh todne ke liye punch maara. Lekin Aryan ek kadam se side hua, punch hawa mein hi chala gaya.
Dost 1 : Huh?!
Agli hi pal Aryan ka haath uske kandhe par pada aur zor se dhakka diya. Dost 1 peeche girta hua chilla utha.
Ye dekh Dost 2 turant aage badha, lekin Aryan ne uska gala hu pakad liya.
Dost 2 : *gasp*
Aryan : Main kuch kiya bhi nahi tha... phir bhi tum log kyun peeche pade ho mere??
Rohan (chillate hue) : Shut the fuck up! Chutiya tu myra ke peeche pada hai? Bishdike ke myra meri hai.
Rohan, Woh bhi daud kar aaya. Aryan ne Dost 2 ko chhoda aur-
CHATAK!!!
Rohan ke gaal par ek zor ka thappad pada. Rohan ka sar side ho gaya.
Rohan : Ahhhh bc!!
Woh dobara aage badha-
CHATAK!!!
CHATAK!!!
Do aur thappad. Rohan ke gaal laal ho gaye, woh neeche gir pada.
Rohan : Ughhh!!
Dono dost turant uth kar Aryan ke peeche se lapak gaye. Iss baar koi kami nahi chhodi unhone. dono ne mil kar Aryan ko itni zor se pakda ki Aryan hil bhi nahi paaya.
Dost 1 : Bahut charbi chadh gayi hai na tujhme? Ab dikha!
Dost 2 : Rohan bhai utho, hum pakde hue hain!
Rohan dhire-dhire utha, muh se laar tapak rahi thi, aankhein khoon si laal.
Rohan : Chhodna mat isko... pakad ke rakho.
Woh aage badha, ghurate hue.
Rohan : Teri itni himmat ki tu mujh pe haath uthayega? Chutiya! Teri behen hai na woh Naina... tujhe maarunga pahele, phir teri behen ko main-
Galti. Bahut badi galti.
Naina Aryan ke liye sirf behen nahi thi. Woh uska pehla rishta thi jisne usko apnaya tha. Jinhone khoon ka rishta hone ke bawajood usko thukraya tha, wahi uske beech woh ek chhoti si ladki ne usko “bhaiya” kaha tha. Uske liye Naina sab kuch thi.
Aryan ka sar dheere se utha. Aankhein gusse se laal. Mutthi itni kas gayi uski ki ungliyan safed pad gayi.
Aryan : ROHAN!
Ek guhar, thi iss Aryan ke aawaz mein. Jisse Rohan ki rooh bhi kaanp gayi ho .
Rohan : Ayy... isko pakad ke rakho! Dekho ye uss din ki tarah paagal na ho jaye!
Woh bathroom incident ki baat kar raha tha, jab Aryan past trauma se kamp raha tha. Lekin aaj... aaj woh darr nahi raha tha. Aaj woh gusse mein tha.
Dost 1 (haste hue): Abe ye toh uss din bathroom mein pagalon ki tarah pada tha!
Dost 2 : Hahahaha!! Rohan bhai jaldi haath saaf karo!
Rohan aage badha, Aryan jamuh todne ke liye.
Rohan : Aankh dikha raha hai madar—
Lekin!-
THUDDDDD!!
Aryan ne apna sar aage kiya. Dono dost usko peeche se pakde the, lekin Aryan ne apna sar Rohan ke muh par zor se maara.
Headbutt!!
Rohan (chillate hue) : AAAAAAAA!!!
Uske naak se khoon nikal aaya. Woh neeche gir pada.
Rohan ke Dono dost shock mein the, itni zor se pakda tha phir bhi Aryan aage kaise badh gaya?
Rohan (angerly) : Chhodna maat! BAHANCHODDDD!! ... ahhhh!!
Aryan ne unki taraf dhyan nahi diya. Woh aage badha, peeche latke dono dost uske saath khinche chale aa rahe the. Unki taakat ab bhari nahi pad rahi thi.
Aryan neeche jhuka, Rohan ke chehre ke bilkul paas.
Rohan (darte hue) : Teri... teri itni himmat? Mera mama police mein hai... tujhe mein-
Aryan : Tujhe pata hai main kya hoon?
Rohan : ???
Aryan : Main ek manhus hoon!!.
Sab hairan!
Aryan : Jise kisi ne nahi apnaya. Sabne thukraya.
Rohan : ???
Dost 1 : ???
Dost 2 : ???
Aryan : Jaha sab mujhe “yeh, woh” kehte the... waha uss bechari ladki ne mujhe “bhaiya” kaha.
Rohan ki aankhein badi ho gayi, usko ek avash laga ki usne kucch galti kar diya hai.
Aryan (awaaz mein dard aur gussa) : Aur tu... TU USKI BAARE MEIN GANDI BAAT KAR RAHA THA?
Rohan ke muh se awaaz nahi nikli. Sirf darr. Ek saaf darr. Agli pal Aryan ki mutthi uthi-
POW!!
Rohan ka muh side ho gaya.
"Aahhh!"
BAMM!!
Naak se khoon ki dhaar.
"Aghhhhhh!!"
POWWW!!
Honth phat gaya.
"Ughhhhhhhhhhh!!"
WHAMMM!!
Aankh ke neeche neela pad gaya.
"Uaaghhhhh"
BAMMM!!
Rohan ki cheekbone par lagi.
Rohan bas cheekh raha tha : AAAAHHH!! NAAAHHH!!
Aryan nahi ruk raha tha. Har muukka Naina ke liye tha.
Jab uske haath par khoon ke chhinte dikhne lage, tab jaise usne hosh sambhala.
Woh ruk gaya.
Aryan : huff!! Huff!!
Uski Saans tez thi. Aankhein ab bhi laal thi.
Rohan neeche pada tha, muh se khoon, honth phate, aankhein sooji hui. Woh dard se karah raha tha.
Rohan (kamzor awaaz mein) : Tu... tujhe main nahi chhodunga...!!
Aryan uski taraf dekha. Phir apne khoon se sane haathon ko dekha. Uske andar kuch toot gaya tha... aur kuch jud gaya tha.
Woh dheere se mud gaya. Dono dost ab bhi usko pakde the, lekin unke haath ab kaanp rahe the ab.
Aryan ne unko dekha bhi nahi. Bas chalta hua wapas chala gaya. Peeche Rohan pada tha... aur aaj pehli baar, college ka sabse famous ladka, darr gaya tha. Woh bhi ek sadharan ladke se.
Dono dost jaldi se Rohan ke pass Aaye usko uthane.
Dost 1 : B-bhaiii!??
Rohan : huuuuu! Bahanchood!!
Dost 2 : B-bhai! Bhai...!!
Rohan : k-kya huya???
Dost 1 : tumhare saamne ke daat kaha gaya?
*Silence*
Rohan : huh? Kya matlab??? Kaha gaya???
Rohan turant apne muh pe hat phera toh paya ki... Uske teen daant waha nahi the. Aryan ke inte zor se mukke asar tha ye.
Rohan : shitttttttt!!
Dost 1 : Bhai w-waha dekho... Udhar!!
Rohan uss taraf dekhta hai toh, waha door jamin pe uske hi ukdhe huye teen daat pade the.
Rohan (angerly) : fuckkkkkkkk!!
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Udhar Aryan Rohan ko peet ke wapas classroom mein aaya. Doosra period khatam hua, aur dekhte hi dekhte baaki saare lectures bhi khatam ho gaye. Bell baji, corridors mein students ki bheed lag gayi, sab apne-apne bags utha kar canteen ya gate ki taraf badh rahe the.
Sanya (mann mein): Hmm! Yeh bilkul sahi time hai. Thoda risk toh hai... haha!! Tension mat le Sanya, sab silk jaisa smooth chalega.
Woh apne khayalon se bahar aati hai, apni smile ko perfect banate hue Meera aur Myra ki taraf dekhti hai.
Sanya : Hey... chalte hain canteen? Bahut bhook lagi hai yaar!
Meera : Mujhe aaj jaldi ghar jaana hai.
Sanya : Oh c'mon Meera! Aise baacho waali baatein mat karo ab.
Meera : Well... Myra??
Myra : Hmm?... Well...!
Sanya Myra ke paas aati hai, uske kaan mein dheere se fisfisati hai.
Sanya (whisper) : Myra! what are you daydreaming about, huh?
Come on, let's go!! Oho, look over there, tell Aryan to join us for the canteen too! After all, you're the one who said you looove him, remember? 
So... chop chop~ so, ready to make a move?Myra (thinks) : M-make a move haa!! Hmmm!
Myra mann mein sochti hai- yeh toh perfect mauka hai. Aryan se dosti badhane ka, thodi baat karne ka. Woh door se dekhti hai Aryan aur Naina dono apne bags utha kar corridor mein nikal rahe the. Myra ka dil zor se dhadka, usne tutak se awaaz nikaali.
Myra : A-Aryan!!
Aryan (mudta hai) : Hmm??
Myra : Well~ hum sab canteen ja rahe hain... toh tum bhi chalo na?
Naina : No! Hum nahi jaayenge tum logon ke saath.
Sanya (smile) : Arre kyun Naina? Hum friends nahi hain kya?
Naina : Friends apne doston pe aise gande mazak nahi karte jo tumne Bhaiya ke saath kiya.
Sanya (mann mein) : Abhi toh party shuru bhi nahi hui, bohat kuch baaki hai, hehehe~
Myra (sar jhuka kar, dheemi awaaz mein) : Aryan... I-I think hum abhi friends hain na... *heads down* toh... canteen toh chal hi sakte hain, right?
Myra bahut narmi se kahti hai. Usne toh sab clear kar diya tha na pehle hi, ab misunderstanding khatam ho chuki thi. Aryan ek baar Naina ko dekhta hai jo naa mein sar hila rahi thi, uski eyebrows furrowed thi.
Aryan : Well... theek hai. Hum chalenge canteen.
Naina : Bhaiyaaa?? Hmphhh!!
Bechari Naina bilkul khush nahi thi iss decision se. Woh nahi chahti thi ki Aryan Myra ke itne paas rahe. Par hua wahi jo Sanya chahti thi.
Meera, Sanya, Myra, Naina aur Aryan paanchon canteen ki ek corner table pe baithe the. Canteen mein loud chatter, chai-coffee ki khushboo, aur thodi si bhajiye ki smell thi.
Sanya : Arre Veer uncle! Haan, idhar paanch coffee please!
Myra, jo normally confident aur bold thi, aaj Aryan ke saamne thodi nervous thi. Woh baar baar apne hair strands ko kaan ke peeche daal rahi thi, sharma rahi thi. Wahi Naina full angry mode mein thi.
Meera ne silence todne ke liye baat shuru ki.
Meera : So... yeh sab shuru kaise hua actually?
Aryan : Kya?
Meera : Hmm? Myra-
Woh Myra aur Aryan ke connection ke baare mein poochne wali thi, par usko nahi pata tha ki yeh one-sided tha, Aryan ko toh kuch pata hi nahi. Woh pooch paati usse pehle Myra ne usko rok diya.
Myra (aankhein dikhate hue) : Aaaa! Meera!!
Meera sekud kar Myra ko dekhti hai, woh samajh jaati hai ki Myra abhi iss topic pe nahi baat karna chahti.
Meera : Well, Aryan!!
Aryan : Hmm??
Meera : We are really, really sorry for that stupid prank.
Naina (tch karke) : *tch*
Aryan : It's okay.
Meera : No, seriously, we never should have done that prank. It was only meant to be a harmless, but we genuinely had no idea that Palak would call everyone and turn it into such a huge scene. We didn’t expect the situation to get so intense and out of control like that. We’re truly sorry, yaar. Please forgive us.
Aryan: It's okay, bas ab aage se koi prank mat karna.
Meera : Promise! Aise pranks kabhi nahi karenge.
Aryan (muskurate hue) : *Smiles*
Myra ghoor ke Sanya ko dekh rahi thi jo abhi tak sorry nahi boli thi, prank ka mastermind toh wohi thi.
Myra : Sanya! You too. You also ought to apologise to Aryan, don't you agree
Sanya (fake smile ke saath) : Aaa! M-me? Y-yes! Aryan... I'm sorry.
Aryan ab kya kehta? Prank ho chuka tha, uspe baar baar baat karne se kya faayda? Usne badppan dikhaya.
Aryan : Yeah, it's okay.
Par usko kya pata tha ki Sanya ke mann mein kya zehar bhara hai. Woh Aryan ko sajish bhadi nazron se dekhti hai.
Sanya (mann mein) : Sorry? Hahaha!! Meri jutti ka sorry! Aryan tum bas ruko... mujhe sorry bulaya? Abhi thodi der aur intezaar karo~
Meera : Kya soch rahi ho itna?
Sanya : Haa? Kuch nahi!... Oh dekho coffee aa gayi! Thanks Veer uncle!!
Sanya Veer uncle ko ishaare se poochti hai, Aryan ki coffee mein woh cheez daali thi na? Veer uncle ne bhi dheere se sar haan mein hila diya. Sanya ke honthon pe ek khatarnak, victorious smile aa gayi.
Sanya : Okay guys, coffee aa gayi hai. Enjoy!
Sab coffee peene lage. Myra coffee peete-peete beech beech mein Aryan ko chupke se dekhti, aur jab Naina uski taraf dekhti toh Myra jaldi se nazrein hata kar muskurate hue dusri taraf dekh leti. Naina full detective mode mein thi, har movement notice kar rahi thi.
Wahi Sanya bhi Aryan ko ghoor rahi thi. Woh coffee jo Aryan pee raha tha, usme LSD tha woh drug jo insaan ko colourful hallucinations mein le jaata hai. Ab sirf intezaar tha ki Aryan kucch react kare, phir shuru hoga asli khel.
Aryan ne pehla sip liya toh usko thoda ajeeb laga. Yeh kaisa coffee hai? Taste itna weird kyun? Dheere dheere andar se ajeeb sa feel hone laga, sar halka sa, body mein ek tingling si hone lagi.
Sanya yeh dekh kar apne honthon pe saitaani muskaan chupa nahi paayi.
Woh mann mein dohra rahi thi: “Ab hoga asli khel bacchu. Hmm! Ab mujhe yaha se nikalna hai.”
Woh apni coffee jaldi se khatam karti hai. Akhir sip leti hi.
Sanya : *slurp* Mmm!~ Myra mujhe abhi nikalna hoga!
Meera : Tumne hi toh canteen chalne ko bola tha, ab...?
Sanya : Haan par dekh na dad ka call baar baar aa raha hai. Kal milte hain. Abhi ghar jaana padega.
Sanya (mann mein) : Ghanta dad ka call, ghar pe aaj koi hai hi nahi.
Sanya : Well, bill on me today!
Meera : Arre!!
Par Sanya ne baat kaat kar uthi aur tezi se nikal gayi. Woh pehle se hi male bathroom ke peeche emergency exit point par apni car park kar chuki thi. Jaha koi aata nahi tha.
Idhar Sanya ke jaane ke thodi der baad, Aryan pe LSD ka asar shuru ho gaya. Usne table pe baithe sabhi ko dekha Meera, Myra, Naina ke chehre gol gol ghum rahe the, rang birange, jaise cartoon.
Aryan : N-Naina!
Naina : Bhaiya?
Aryan : Tum baitho, main bathroom hoke aata hoon.
Naina : Okayy~
Aryan utha aur bathroom ki taraf ladkhadata hua gaya. Pehle usne face pe paani maara, par...
Aryan : Huhh! Yeh kya ho raha hai? Fuckkkkk!! Sar kyun chakkar kha raha hai?
Ab LSD ka effect shuru ho gaya tha. Duniya uske liye gol gol ghoom rahi thi, walls colourful waves bana rahi thi, lights neon jaise chamak rahi thi.
Aryan : Huh??? Sab... sab gol gol ghoom raha hai heh~ hehehe!!
Woh ladkhadata hua sink ke paas baith gaya.
Aryan (hallucinating) : Owwweeee so colourful.... Hehe~ hmm!? Idhar itni saari titliyan kaha se aa gayi hehehe~ bathroom mein *hic* hehh~
Uska sar ghum raha tha, par saath hi ek alag hi maza aa raha tha, jaise duniya ek sapne mein badal gayi ho. Aur tabhi usko ek ladki chalte huye aati dikhai Diya.
Aryan : N-Naina????
Asal mein yeh Naina nahi, Sanya thi. Woh pehle se hi emergency exit ke paas chhup kar khadi thi. Usko pata tha LSD ka effect shuru hote hi Aryan bathroom aayega. Jab Aryan full trip pe chala gaya tabhi woh andar aayi. Woh khud ko Naina batate huye-
Sanya (smiles) : Ohh bhaiyaa~ ghar nahi chalna??
Aryan : Hehe~ Naina~ mera toh koi ghar nahi hai! Main toh-
Sanya : Bhaiya, pehle ghar chalo, waha baat karenge.
Aryan : Hmm?? Naina tumhari awaaz itni alag kyun lag rahi? *hic* hehe~
Sanya : Thandi lag gayi hai na, isliye. Chalo bhaiya, dekho sham ho gayi hai~
Aryan : Hehhh?? Sham? Hum toh abhi college mein the na~ wowowow!!
Sanya : Haan sham ho gayi. Chalo.
Aryan sink se ladkhadata hua utha. Uske saamne kuch clear nahi dikh raha tha, sab blur aur colourful tha uske liye.
Aryan : N-Naina mujhe ajeeb sa lag raha hai! Tum... tum gol gol kyun dikhai de rahi ho~ hehe!! moti ho gayi kya? Hehehe!!
Sanya (mann mein) : Perfect! Asar dikh raha hai.
Sanya : Haan bhaiya, chalo ghar.
Sanya ne uska sahara diya aur emergency exit se bahar nikal kar car ke peeche baitha diya. Kisi ne nahi dekha kyunki yeh side alag Division mei thi, aur students sab canteen aur campus mein the. Toh yeha koi aane nahi wala. Thoda risk bhi tha, par Sanya kamiyab huye.
Sanya : Bhaiya aapka phone do zara.
Aryan : Phone...! phone...! haan! pocket mein hai...!
Aryan ka haal itna kharab ho chuka tha ki pocket se nikaal bhi nahi pa raha tha. Sanya ne khud uski pocket se phone nikala, Aryan ke finger se unlock kiya. Contacts se Naina ka number nikalti hai aur message type karke bhej deti hai.
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"Naina! Sorry! Main college se nikal chuka hoon!"
Udhar canteen mein jab Naina ke phone pe message aaya.
Naina : Huh! Bhaiya? College se nikal gaye? Aap toh bathroom gaye the na?
Aryan : Haan! Main bahar aa gaya hoon.
Naina : Whattttt??? Aap mujhe chhod ke kaise jaa sakte ho??
Aryan : Mujhe kahi jaana tha urgently, bathroom ke bahane nikalna pada.
Naina : Huh? Kaha jaana hai??
Aryan : Baad mein bataunga. Theek hai. Bye!
Naina : Arre!! Main akeli ghar jaungi??
Aryan : Haan!! tum chali jao, ghar pe milte hain.
Naina : Arre!!??
Aryan : Bye!
Sanya ne Aryan banke naina ko massage Bejh diya tha. Naina Woh canteen mein sirf Aryan ke liye ruki thi, ab woh hi chale gaye toh...
Naina (uth kar) : Okay main chalti hoon.
Meera : Hmm? Tumhare Bhaiya abhi tak nahi aaye!
Myra : ???
Naina : Oh woh ghar chale gaye already, hehe!!
Myra : whattt??
Meera: !!!
Naina Myra aur meera ko ek taana maarti hui,
Naina (smiles) : Bhaiya bhale hi bhole hain, par itne bhole nahi ki jo unke saath itna ganda prank kare uske saath baith kar coffee peeye. *Pause* *turns to myra* Aur myra tumne kaise soch liya ki Janamdin pe invited karke tum bhaiya ke karib aa payogi? Mujhe pata nahi kya? Tum jaise log ham jaise logo ko kis Nazar se dekhti ho? Tumhare dad bhi bhaiya ko neeche dikhaye the, remember? Kal ki hi toh baat hai.
Meera : NOO!! n-naina i- i l...!!
Bas, naina apni baat kehke waha se nikal gayi, par jaate jaate Ek sabdhani usne myra samne jahir Kar Diya, uske kehne ka matalab tha, woh Aryan se door rahe.
Naina (mann mein): Achha hua Bhaiya yaha se nikal gaye, nahi toh yeh Myra Bhaiya ko kaise ghoor rahi thi, chudail kahin ki. Par bhaiya iss Samay gaye kaha.
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Guys! Likhte likhate update 11 limited word count se jyada ho chuka tha, yeha pe dekh sakte ho.
Is update Mein Aur bhi bahut Kuchh the, iske baad bhi bahut Kuchh likha tha but ek hi update Mein post nahi kar paunga, so iss update pe likes and review dedo fir update 12 mein Yeha jo adhura rah Gaya Hai usko pura kar dunga.
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Shaandar update
Ekdum dhaadu update.
Ab aage dekhna hai ki Aryan aage aane wali musibato se kaise ladta hai .
And usko jo bhi power mili hai wo kya hai ye jaanna bhi jaruri hai . To dekhte hai ki agle update me iska khulaasa hota hai ya uske baad ke update me pata chalega ki Aryan ko kon si power mili hai.
Can't wait for next update brother.
Excellent update bhai
Let's review
Aryan ka side wo raat ka intense pain sequence, burning sensation, muscles tearing jaise sounds, aur bathroom mein gir kar paani ke neeche rehna... wah
"WTFFF???" wala reaction perfect tha.
Hmmm! Realistic bhi lagta hai Kyunki ek dam se Aryan bodybuilder nahi ho gaya, woh pahle Se thoda bas muscular Ho Gaya. Jyadatar writer yahi dikha deta hai ki ekadam se Hero powerful ban jata hai, but Aryan dhire dhire ho raha hai and uski abhi tak apni powers ke bare mein pata hi nahi Kuchh, suspense Mein Hamare Sath Aryan bhi hai hai
Yeh supernatural element story mein ek fresh layer add kar raha hai, aur ab sahi mei lag raha hai Aryan koi hidden power wala character banne wala hai.
Dhua nikalna shirt se, constant garmi ye sab details bohot vividly describe kiye gaye, jo mujhe bhi physically feel hone laga wo discomfort.
Naina ka jealousy arc super cute tha. Wo Myra ko dekh kar badbadana, nakchadhi bolna, phir uski dress dekh kar same wali shopping app pe search karna ye chhoti-chhoti cheezein uske growing feelings ko naturally show kar rahi hain bina over-the-top kiye.
Wo scene jaha Aryan Naina ko maa bolta hai aur Naina gale lagati hai, bohot heartwarming tha
Ye scean iss update ka sabse best tha.
College drama bhi top-notch. Myra ka openly confess karna ki she loves Aryan that bold move, but myra uske Piyar mei kaise giri? Not to mention Sanya baar baar ye kehti hai ki Myra Jaisi ladki kisi ko Piyaar nahi kar sakti, isska reason Kya hai?
Rohan ka jalna aur uska ego down hona satisfying tha
Ab aate hai Sanya ki saazish wali smile end mein dangerous vibe de rahi hai ki ab lag raha hai college mein bada hungama hone wala hai Aryan ke against.
Viraj Kapoor ka villain reveal through Avni's backstory devastating tha. Wo flashback jaha Viraj manipulate karta hai, job se nikaalta hai, paise deta hai phir goonde bhejta hai, Yeh part ne story ko serious stakes de diye.
Ab land grabbing aur Naina pe gandi nazar ka threat real danger lag raha hai, kyunki hamne avni ke flashback Se dekha Viraj kaisa Admi hai. Aryan ka ek naturally protective mode on hona aur Avni ko bhai bol kar support dena ek emotional depth add karta hai.
Elders ka sudden appearance Wo dark jungle setting, unki baatein about koi powerful entity ke baare mein, yeh supernatural track ko aur mysterious bana diya. Ab lag raha hai Aryan ka transformation usi se connected hai.
Last mein ghar ke scenes belan chase, Tom & Jerry wala that was funnyheavy drama ke baad ek perfect light moments the. Nice contrast
Overall pacing tight thi, har scene ka purpose clear tha dialogues natural aur funny jab chahiye, emotional jab chahiye. jealousy, conspiracy, action, supernatural sab balanced tha aur cliffhangers multiple, narration bhi bahut achcha tha.
Kuchh sawal jaise Aryan's powers?Sanya ka plan kya hai? And ye Elders kon hai?
next update ka intezaar bilkul nahi ho raha!
Humare me to himmat na hai apne ghar ki lugaai bahu beti ko Bahar walo se chudte dekhn ki (sochn ki) Tum Free Ho iska mtlb sb thode na Hai Dekho adult socho adult
APne ko to koi maa behan ki gali bardasht na hai. To socho bahu beti ko khairrrr TC
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