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Fantasy Pyare Rishte - Bhai Bahan Ki Pavitra Prem Ka Ek Safar (part 1 and 2 completed) part 3 in running

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Markesh ki mrityu dekh samraat gusse me pagal ho gusse se chila raha tha


Samraat :- kisne mara mere bhai ko, kisneeeeeeee.

Tabhi uske kano m ek aawaz padi.

M batata hu samraat kisne mara aapke bhai ko.

Samraat ne jab us disha m dekha to turant ghutno k bal beth gaya .

Samraat :- mahaprabhu aap yaha.


Ji ha dosto ye aawaz kisi or ki ni vp ki thi or sath me kubdi bhi thi.

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jab markesh ko pathar me tabdil hote kubdi ne dekha to uski himmat na hui naina or uske sathiyo k pas jane ki himmat na ker payi

.wo turant waha se bhag ker samraat ki haveli pahunch gayi.

Kubdi ghabrayi hui khud se :- mar dala , un dushto ne to humare yuvraj tak ka ant ker dala, aakhir kon h ye log jinhone ek pahale vrushali ko or fir ek tritiya yuvraj ko mar dala, kya dushmani h in logo ki hum danvo se.

Isse pahale ki wo samul danav vansh ka nash kare mujhe hi kuch kerna hoga

Parantu kya or kese.

Jin logo ne markesh tak ko ni choda unko m kese haraungi.

Ab to keval ek hi rasta h, ek hi shaks h jo un logo ka kal ban sakte h, tritiyao k raja, humare malik.


"Samraat"
Samraat ki manosiyat to dekho dosto kitni jabardast thi ki uske nam ko pukarne bhar se haveli k aas pass ka mosam badal gaya or charo or joro shoro se bijli kadkne lagi, jisse aas pas ka vatavaran bahut hi bhayanak ho gaya.

Kubdi shetani hasi k sath :- ha ab humare maharaj hi lenge apne bhai or baki sabhi danav veero ki mrityu ka prtishodh.

Tabhi kuch sochte hue

Kubdi :- per samraat to, apni guft sthan pe sadhana ker rahe h, jis sthan ka mujhe tak na pata, ab m kya karu, kese dhundu apne malik ko.

Tabhi kubdi ko vp ki yaad aayi.

mahaprabhu

ha mahaprabhu hi ab meri madad ker sakte h samraat ko dhundne Or danvo ki raksha hetu

Ye sochte hi kubdi waha se gayab ho gayi.

Wahi mahal k us kone m jaha megha ko rakha gaya tha,waha jab rakshasiyo unhone mosam m aaye badlaav ko dekha to wo barish se bachne k liye ghar k bhitar ki Or jane lagi lekin megha apni jagah se hili ni.

Balki jaha sab rakshasiyo k man m chinta utpan ho gayi thi mosam k is sanket se wahi megha k chahre per ek muskaan aagayi thi, jise dekh trijata chonk gayi.

Kyunki megha ko itne varsho me aaj pahali baar usne yu khul ker muskurate hue dekha tha.

Trijata :- kya baat h putri jaha baki sab is mosam k bhayankar parivartan ko dekh chintit h wahi tumhare chahre P ye muskan.

Wese m to bahut khush hu beti aaj itne warsho m tumhe muskurate hue dekh, isliye wajah janne k liye utsuk bhi hu.

Megha :- khushi ka avsar hi to h ye amma, ye mosam ka badlaav ye sab sankeet h ki samraat ka ant aaagaya h Or ye ashubh sanket h us dusht k liye jo use bata rahe h ki uska kaal aagaya h.

Megha abhi ye sab baate bata rahi thi ki tabhi ek dasi waha pahunch sabko markesh k ant ki khabar sunati h.

Megha :- dekha ama kaha tha na mane.

Trijata :- ha putri ab to ishvar se yahi prathna h ki jald hi is dusht samraat ka ant bhi ho jaye or hume mukti mile is papi k gulami se.

Megha :- esa shighra hi hoga amaa, ishvar pe bharosa rakhe.

Wahi dusri or

Aaiye ek najar sonam pe dal lete h.

Raat ka time

Sonam jo apne kamre m karan k jane k baad se hi gumsum bethi thi , wo kuch na bol rahi thi na uske chahre pe koi bhav the, bas uske ankho se ansu bah rahe the Or hatho m krishna ki tasvir thi

Sonam man hi man :- kyu kanha kyu, aakhir kyu kiya tumne mere sath esa, mane humesha bina kisi swaarth k tumhari seva ki , aj tak tumse kuch ni manga apne liye , fir meri bhakti m esi kami raha gayi jo tumne esa kiya mere sath.

Kya yahi sila diya tune apni bhakti ka mujhe, sari duniya tumhe prem ka devta premio ko milane wala kahati h per tumne to apni bhakt se uska prem hi chin liya.

Abhi sonam ye sab shikaayat kerte hue ro hi rahi thi ki achanak se uske kandhe per kisi ne hath rakha Or kuch kaha jiski aawaz sun sonam chonk gayi.

Kya baat h bhai, meri pyari gudiya sona kyu lo lahi h.

Sonam chonk ker us Or dekhte hue :- rohan bhai aap.

Ji ha dosto sonam ko awaz dene wala rohan hi tha jo karan k kahane P waha bus m clone chod ker.

Rohan pyaar se uske gal sahalate hue:- meri sona ro rahi ho or m waha maje karu esa kabhi ho sakta h.

Sonam :- apne ansu chupate hue :- udaas or m ni to bhai, per aap yaha kese aap to nikal gaye the n ganv k liye.

Rohan :- yahi baat meri ankho m ankhe dal ker kah sakti ho sona ki m galat hu.

Sonam najre churane lagi.

Rohan :- sona meri gudiya tumhe apne is bhai se kuch bhi chupane ki jarurat ni h , m sab janta hu gudiya ki tum karan se pyaar karti ho or wo bhi ek bahan k satb sath ek premika ki tarah bhi.


Sonam ye sun buri tarah chonk gayi.

Sona :- kya aap ko kese pata is bare m kya karan bhai ne aapko is bare m bata diya.

Rohan :- sona meri bahan, is bare m mujhe kisi k batane ki jarurat hi kaha padi, 3 mahine humne jo ek sath gujare the usme hi m tumhare man or tumhare prem ko achi tarah samjh chuka tha gudiya .

Karan k liye tumhara prem, unki judai me tumhara yu tadafna, ye sab hi tumhare prem k pramaan hi to the.

Sonam ye sun sharma ker or chinta m sir niche ker leti h ye soch ker ki rohan kya sochega uske bare m ki wo apne bhai ko hi dil de bethi.

Rohan sonam k sir ko uthate :- na mera bacha na tumhe lajjit hone ki koi jarurat nhi h, jo ho raha h wo na sirf tumhari balki karan or jyoti ki bhi niyati h.

Ha gudiya m sab janta hu karan kon h or uski shaktiyo k bare m bhi or itna hi ni ek satya or h jisse tum anbhigya ho.

Ye bol sonam ko rohan apne bare m batata h Or apna kaal wala roop dikhata h.

Jise dekh sonam or chonk gayi or aakhir chonke bhi kyu na in 2 dino m uski duniya badal si gayi.

Sonam :- rohan bhai aap bhi, ye sab kya ho raha h bhai, aakhir kon h ye dandnayak karan, kya maksad h unka Or ye shakti ye prem mujhe to kuch samjh ni aaraha.


Rohan :- tumhari manodasha m samjh sakta hu m sona, achanak se ye sab samne aana vyakti k astitv ko jhajhor k rakh deta h.

Parantu tum chinta mat kero tumhare sabhi prashno k uttar nikat bhavishya m shighr hi gyaat honge tumhe (man me Or khud karan ko bhi)

Lekin usse pahale tumhe apni niyati ko swikar kerna hoga gudiya, karan kabhi kisi ek ka ni ho sakta, esa vk khud bhi chahe to sambhav ni.

Sona rote hue :- kese swikar ker lu bhai , bataiye kese swikar ker lu apne prem ka batwara, ek ladki ka sirf yahi to ek khawab hota h ki uska hone wala humsafar sirf uska ho , usko prem kare, uska dukh pida samjhe Or uske liye loyal ho, yani ki uske alawa kisi or k alawa soche tak ni, per yaha too

(Siskte hue) kese ker lu bhai apne prem ka batwara wo bhi apni hi badi bahan se.

Rohan sonam ko hriday se laga :- na sona, na mera bacha rote ni, m tumhare dard ko samjh sakta hu gudiya, parantu tum khud hi socho kya karan k liye bhi ye kerna aaasan h, karan k pran baste h to wo h sirf uski bahano m.

Or jyoti jyoti to karan ki aatma h, tumhe apna dukh to dikhayi diya sona per kya tumne socha ki us jyoti per kya but rahi hogi, jisne tumhari hi bhanti karan ko apna sab kuch mana.

Lekin unhone un sab baato ko dar kinar ker apni niyati ko swikar kiya, kyu, kyunki yahi sansaar k hit me h.

Mahan shaktiya apne sath mahan jimmedaariya bhi lati h gudiya, jise unhone samjha Or sansar k kalyan k liye ye tyag kiya.

Sona krishna ne bhi yahi to kaha h gita m dharm ki raksha m apna sarvasv tyagna pade to bhi piche ni hatna chahiye .

Isliye meri baat mano gudiya Or apni niyati ko swikar kero.

Sonam rohan se alag ho kuch ni bolti bas wapas muh niche karke beth jati h


Rohan :- hmm, samjh sakta hu tumhe is sab k liye waqt Or ekant chahiye, tumhe jitna samay chahiye utna lo gudiya Or soch samjh ker apna nirnay lena.

Or ha koi bhi chij ki jarurat ho ya madad chahiye ho to bas yad ker apne rohan bhai ko apne pass hi paogi ye bol rohan waha se anterdhyan ho gaya.

Rohan k jate hi sonam jo itni der khud ko control ki hui thi fir se rone lagi lekin kuch der baad wo ruki or is baar uske dimag m rohan ki kahi bate ghumne lagi jisse prabhavit ho wo sochne ko vivash ho gayi.

Wahi rohan wapas se bus m pahunch jo hua uske bare m karan ko man hi man bata deta h.

Jise sun karan ko taklif bhi hui per usne rohan k nirnay ko sahi bhi taharaya.


Agli subah 5 baje k karib karan and family rajsthan m enterr ker chuke the Or karib 7 baje k karib wo ganv k pas pahunch gaye.

Ram garh wese to yaha aaj bhi 80 ℅ log kheti se apna ghar chalate h, per yaha jyadatar sab sampann the, kaaran jai prakash yani k karan k dada ka yaha ka jagirdaar Or surpanch hona.

Karan k dada wese to ek ache Or imaandar insan h, dayalu bhi, lekin unki ek bhul ne hi unke ghar ka sukha chain mita diya tha, jo tha apni bahu ka tiraskaar kerna, use pratadit kerna.

Bhale hi jai prakash ne kabhi khud asha k sath vesa kuch na kiya, per unhone apni patni ko bhi na roka balki usko Or utsaahit kiya tha, jis kaaran aaj ye sab hua tha.


Karan yahi sab bate man m sochte hue ganv ko dekh raha tha, vo humesha ki tarah jaldi uth gaya tha or baki sab so rahe the

Karan :- maa ab samay aagaya h apke pratyek gunehgar ko unke karmo k fal milne ka, isliye hi m yaha aaya hu jaha se is sab ki shuruaat hui.

Karan yahi soch raha tha ki tabhi jyoti ne uske kandhe per hath rakha, jisse dekh karan uske gal chum ker.

Karan :- uth gayi meri gudiya good morning my love.

Jyoti bhi karan k gal chum :- good morning my sweetu bhaiya.

Wese subah subah kin khayalo m khoye hue the aap.

Karan :- kuch ni bas bahar k najare dekh raha tha, (ankh marte hue) per ander ka hasin najara to iske aage kuch ni.

Jyoti sharma k :- kya bhai kuch bhi, vese sach me bhai ye jagah kitni beautiful h.

Karan dhime se apna hath jyoti ki kamar m dal apni or khechte hue :- ha bilkul meri jan bole to romance k liye bilkul perfect.

Jyoti to khud karan k sath romantic time spend kerna chahti thi jo pichle din aayi pareshaaniyo k kaaran ni ho paya tha, lekin abhi yaha sab mojud the jis kaaran vo dar 'brahi thi

Jyoti jhut muth ka vir:- bhai kya ker rahe ho aap koi dekh lega.

Karan :- sab so rahe h gudiya, ab chal ab morning to ho gayi ab apne in komal hotho ka ras pilake use good bhi bana de meri jaan

Jyoti karan ko dhakelte hue :- koi kiss viss ni milne wali aapko chaliye chhodiye mujhe.

Per karan ni man raha tha.

Jyoti request kerte hue :- bhaiya plz chodiye na abhi yaha koi dekh lega baad m jitna chahe utna pyar ker lena m to aapki hi hu kahi bhage thodi ja rahi hu.

Ye bol jyoti ne jaldi se kuch second k liye karan k hotho ko chum liya or ankh mar di.
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Jyoti k is sexy andaaz pe to karan fida ho gaya or wo bhi jaldi se jyoti k hoth chum bola.

Karan ankh marte hue:- haye ye teri ada, lagta h ab jaldi se koi jugaad lagana hoga av control ni hota.

Jyoti sharma k karan k sine pe mukka marti h pyaar se or fir kuch der yuhi nokjhok or pyar bhari bato k baad wo sab ko jagate h kyonki ganv bas aane hi wala tha.


Sab bahut hi excited the ganv m jese hi bus enter kerti h to sab ganv valo ki najre usi pe jam gayi thi, aakhir pahali baar unhone esi shandar bus apne ganv m dekhi thi.

Bache apni aadat k anusaar gadi k piche piche bhagte h kuch door tak, karib 15 20 min baad karan ki bus ek badi si haveli k bahar ruki , jo karan k dada ka ghar tha.

Gadi k rukne ki aawaz sunte hi sab ghar k bahar aagaye, or intezaar kerne lage apne khandan k chirag or apni pyari poti or bhatiji ka.

Sabse pahale radha or garima uterte h, rajiv ko dekhte hi radha unki or mamu kahate hue dod k gale lag gayi.

Rajiv :- kesi ho meri choti guddu.

Radha :- ek dam first class mamu humesha ki tarah or aap kese ho or komal kaha h.

Dadi :- arr ab sara pyar apne mamu ko hi dogi ya nani se bhi milogi.

Fir radha apne nana nani k gale milti h uske piche piche garima bhi aati h or sabse pehle wo bhi apne bhai k gale milti h.

Rajiv garima ka matha chum :- are aagayi meri guddu kesa raha safar koi taklif to ni hui na raste m.

Fir wo apne maa bap k bhi per chuti h or fir dadi bol padi.

Dadi :- garima beti tune to kaha tha tumhare sath mere pota poti bhi aayenge.

Kaha h vo jaldi se unhe bula beta, teri is maa ki ankhe taraf gayi h apne jigar k tukde ko dekhne ko.

Dada :- ha beta kaha h humare ghar ka chirag.

Rajiv excited hote hue :- ha guddu kaha h mere bache.

Garima :- ji bhai abhi bulati hu.

Fir garima radha ko ishara kerti h, wo bhag ker jati h or sab ko bahar leke ati h.

Sabse pahale geeta shivani priya or kavya uterte h, fir rohan or riya, or jav last m radha karan or jyoti ka hath tha me niche uterte h to dono bhai bahan k mukh per tez or gambhir parantu somya mudra dekh karan k dada dadi or chacha unme kho se jate h.

Radha karan or jyoti ko lekar garima k pas leker jati h or garima sabse pahale apne maa baap se milwate hue boli.

Garima :- beta inse milo ye h tumhare dada dadi.

Karan or jyoti bhale hi un dono se kara the lekin apne sanskaar na bhule karan jyo hi apne dada k per chune ko hotha h to uske dada uss rok k apne sine se laga lete h.

Dada :- mere sher mere jigar k tukde aagaya Tu tera ye dada kabse taraf raha tha tujhe apne sine se lagane ko.

Fir yu hi karan dadi se milta h lekin ek shabd ni bolta.

Fir garima apne bhai k pas le jate hue.

Garima :- beta ye h tumhare.

Karan bich me hi :- chachuuuu..

Ye bol karan khushi se rajiv k per chune ko hua per rajiv ne bhii karan ko apne sine se laga liya.

Rajiv :- mera beta mere sher m bata ni sakta hu aaj m kitna khush hu tum se mil ker mere bache, wo to teri is bhua ne Mujge rok diya tha m verna khud hi waha aaphunchta.

Tabhi jyoti bhi rajiv k per chune ko hui to rajiv ne use rokte hue.

Rajiv :- are are meri bachi ye kya ker rahi ho tum to meri pyari beti ho or betiya ghar ki lakshmi hoti h, unhe per ni chuate.

Ye bol rajiv jyoti ko bhi gale se laga leta h, itne salo baad ek chacha apne bhatije bhatiji se ek dada dadi apne pote poti se mile the to sabki ankho m khushi k ansu the.

Rajiv :- vese manna padega bhatije kya mast body banayi h tumne, 2 4 tips apne chachu ko bhi de.

Garima majak karte hue :- ha beta taki tere chachu ka nikla hua pet ander ho, verna log inhe tere ni mere chacha ji samajhne lagenge

Ye bol wo has padi or sath me sab bhi.

Rajiv :- kya boli chuhiya Tu m or mota, shayad tujhe pata ni ganv ki adhi ladkiya aaj bhi marti h mujhe per.

Garima :- bhai unhe ladkiya ni aunty bolte h or thoda dhire bolo vern bhabhi jhadu leke aati hi hogi .

Rajiv bat badalte hue :- vese meri beti dekh kitni pyari h na guddu, wahi nain naksh wahi tez ese lagta h jese bhabhi ka bachpan hi lot aaya ho h na maa.

Asha ka jikra sun dadi ka mood kharab ho gaya, vo kuch bolne hi wali thi ki dada ne use ishare m roka.

Garima ne bhi ye sab dekh liya tha, aate hi koi bhakheda khada na ho isliye wo savko ander leker jane ki kosis kerti h ki tabhi dadi ki najar shivani P padi.

Dadj :- are ye pyari si rajkumaari kon h, idhar aao beta.

Rajiv :- ha guddu ye baki sab kon h jara humare mahamano se humara parichay to karao.

Garima samjh gayi ki ab samay aagaya h bomb futne ka.

Garima kavya ko aage late hue :- bhai ye h humari choti bhabhi kavya or ye inki beti or humari choti bhatizi shivani.

Garima ki ye baat jese hi karan k dada dadi or chacha ne suni wo heran raha gaye, kyunki garima ne sirf karan or jyoti k bare m hi bataya tha unhe.

Rajiv :- ye tum kya bol rahi ho guddu, ye humari bhabhi

Garima :- ha bhai ye sach h.

Fir garima kavya k bare m unhe sab batati h siway ranveer k kaaran karan or jyoti se uske natak k vishay me chod.

Rajiv :- ni m ni man sakta bhaiya esa kese ker sakte h, unhone unke 13 vi tak ka intezar na kiya.

Dadi shivani ko apne gale laga ker :- haye kitni pyari h meri choti poti, bilkul rajkumaari jesi, najar na lage ise kisi ki.

(Garima se) kya galat kiya tere bhai ne rajiv, aakhir mere pote poti ko sambhalne wala bhi to koi chahiye hi tha, m to acha hua mere bete ka picha to chuta us kamini se.

Garima gusse se :- maa.

Dadi :- chilao mat garima, mane kuch galat ni kaha, us kamini ne pahale mere bete ko fasa ker use ghar walo k khilaaf hi shadi kerne ko uksaya, uske peso k liye, fir mere bache k dil m jahar bhar k humse door kiya tha usne.

Rajiv :- ma bas bahut ho gaya, ab aap had se aage badh rahi ho.


Dada :- had se aage tumhaari ma ni tum bad rahe ho rajiv, mat bhulo ki tum apni maa se baat ker rahe ho.

Or tumhari maa ne bilkul sahi to kaha us kulakshini k kaaran hi aaj itne salo tak hume apne pote potiyo se.

Are m to kahata hu ki jo ladki apne maa baap ki sagi na hui thi wo humari sagi kya hoti.

Jyoti ka vinashkari krodh apne dada dadi k vachno se jagrit hone laga tha, uski ankhein laal hone lagi thi or tan kala padne laga.

Wo abhi aage bad hi rahi thi ki tabhi karan ne jyoti ka hath tham use rok liya.

Jyoti ne karan ki or dekha to karan ka bhi kuch vesa hi haal tha lekin na jane kyu usne apni ankhe band ker apne aap ko niyantran karne ka pryas ker raha tha.


Lekin rohan se chup raha na gaya or wo gusse se bol pada.

Rohan :- bas bahut hua aap bade h iska matlab ye ni ki aap kuch bhi bol lenge or hum sun lenge apni mosi k baare m.

Dadi :- e ladke tum hote kon ho humare pariwarik maamle m bolne wale, mahaman ban k aaye ho to mahaman ki had m rahana sikho.

Or ye bhi sun lo m apna kaha hua ek shabd wapas ni lungi , kyunki mane jo kaha wo sach h.

Wo kamini ek kulta , lalchi orat thi jisne mere bete ko. Na sirf mujhse door kiya balki uske dil. M mere liye jahar bhara, ek no ki charitrhin Or papi orat thi wo, acha hua mar gayi, akhir bhagwaan ne usko uske karmo ka fal de hi diya, are m to....

Abhi dadi aage kuch bol pati ki waha ek bhayanak aawaz gunj uthi.

Bassssssssssssssss...

Ye koi or ni balki karan hi tha jiski sahanshakti ki sima khatam ho chuki thi, uski ankhe laal k bajaye ab kali padne lagi thi or uske muthi bich chuki thi.

Karan aage apne dadi k pasand aaker :- bas, bahut ho gaya aapka ye natak, ab ek bhi shabd meri khilaaf kisi k muh se nikla to m bhul jaunga ki mera kya rishta h tum logo se.

(Garima ki or dekhte hue) kya isliye aap mujhe yaha leker aayi thi bhua ki yaha laker meri ankho k samne hi bich sadak pe sabke samne yu meri swargniy maa ka apman ho, unka yaha is tiraskar kiya jaye.

Garima ka sir sharmnindgi se niche ho chuka tha wo pachta rahi thi ki wo karan or jyoti ko kyu yaha leker aayi

Karan apne dada k pas jaker :- ky kaha tha apne meri maa ko lalchi, jisne apke bete se shadi sirf peso k liye ki.

Bade hi afsos k sath, ni balki bahut khushi k sath aapke is galat fehmi ko todte hue ye batana chahta hu ki lalachi meri maa ni balki aapka beta tha, jisne meri maa ko jhute pyar k jaal m fasaya kyu sirf unki property k liye, per afsos kamyab na jo paya.

Dada gusse se :- tumhari himmat kese hui esa bolne ki, sharm ni aati apne baap per esa ghinona iljam lagate hue.

Karan :- isi baat ki hi to sharmindgi h ki wo kamina mera baap h jisne meri maa ki hatya ki.

Dadi gusse se karan ko thappad maarne ko hui ki tabhi garima ne unka hath pakad liya or gusse se boli.

Garima gusse se :- mere bete ko hath lagane ki bhi mat sochna ma , karan jo bol raha h wo sach h ma, ranvir bhai ab mere bhai ya apke bete ni rahe ab vo sirf or sirf ek hatyare h jinhone na keval humari bhabhi yani apki bahu ko mara, balki unki khokh m pal rahi ek nanhi jaan ko bhi mara.

Ye bolte hue garima k ankho se ansu bahane lage or wo fir rote hue sara majra apne ghar walo ko bata deti h or sath me vo video bhi dikha deti h jo karan ne banayi thi.

Rajiv to apne bhai ki kartoot sun sadme se chala gaya or gir pada ghutno k bal.

Garima bhai chilate hue rajiv k pas gayi or rajiv garima k gale lag foot foot k rone laga.

Rajiv ka hal bhi bilkul wesa ho chuka tha jesa garima ka hua tha jab use apne bhai ki sachai pata chali thi.

Wo Dono bhai bahan bhi karan or jyoti ki tarah judwa the isliye wo ek dusre ka dard ache se samjhte the , isliye wo dono ek dusre ko santwana de rahe the.

Karan rajiv k pas aaker niche ghutno k bal beth :- itna sab hone k baad bhi m yaha aaya chachu sirf aapke liye, kyunki us mushkil ki ghadi m keval aap or bhua hi the jinhone meri maa ka sath ni choda, unki pag pag per madad ki.

Yakin maniye chachu mane kabhi pita ka prem na paya, parantu jab mujhe pahali baar beta kahake gale lagaya, jab mujhe ek shaswat prem. Ka anubhav hua jo ek pita hi apne bete ko de sakta h.

Parantu hum yaha ab yaha ni ruk sakte, kyunki jaha humari maa ka koi samman ni waha humare liye rahana bhi ek shan paap h.

Chal jyoti

Ye bol karan uth ker rajiv k per chuta h or jyoti ka hath tham bus ki or badha.

Rajiv khada ho karan ko rokte hue :- ni beta m ab tumhe yu ni jane dunga itne varsho baad to mujhe apne bete se milne ka sobhagya mila h, abhi tumhe hi to kaha na beta m tumhare liye tumhare pita saman hu to kya ek beta apne pita ki baat ni manega.

Jyoti :- chachu esi baat ni h, aapke liye to apke in dono bacho ki jan bhi hajir hhai, per please hume yaha mat rokiye.

Hum ni ruk sakte ek pal bhi waha jaha humari maa ko dukh k alawa kuch na mila yaha bitaya hua ek ek pal hume humari maa p hue hatyacharo ka anubhav kerwa raha h, isliye isse pahale ki hum aavesh me aaker kuch ker bethe isse bahater yahi hoga ki hum yaha se chale jaye.

Ye bol jyoti karan ka hath thame chal padi Or unke piche piche baki sab bhi kyunki ab kisi k rukne ka koi matlab ni tha, garima bhi ek bar rajiv k gale mil chal padi.

Abhi karan bus k pas pahuncha hi tha ki tabhi uske kano me ek pyari per dard bhari aawaz padi .


Ruk jaiyeeeee bhaiya please....

Karan samet jab piche mude to karan ne paya ki ye awaz ek ladki ki thi jo besakhi ki madad se jitna tezi se ho sake utna tezi se karan k pas aarahi thi or ruk jaiye bhaiya ruk jaiye bhaiya pukar rahi thi.

Per ye kya achanak se us ladki ka balance bigad gaya or wo jamin per gir gayi.

Radha ghabra k :- komal.

Karan samjh gaya ye ladki or koi ni komal thi, yani ki uske chacha ki ladki Or uski choti bahan.
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Komal girne k baad bhi ni ruki or roti hui khud ko ghasite hue boli.

Komal :- bhaiya ruk jaiye mujhe chod k mat jaiye.

Karan ne jab apni bahan ki ye halat dekhi to uski ankho se jhar jhar ansu bahane lage .

Wo turant bhag k komal k pas jata h or jaldi se ghutno k bal beth use uthatha h or bethne m madad kerta h.

Komal masumiyat se rote hue :- bhaiya

Or fir komal karan k sine se lipat jati h or khushi or dard k mile jhule bhav k ansuo k sath.

Kafi der tak komal karan k gale lagi rahi karan bhi bina kuch bole use apni baho me liye wahi betha raha Or uske sir ko sahalate hue.

Kuch der baad karan se yu hi gale lage rahane k baad komal boli.

Komal masumiyat se apne kaan pakad:- bhaiya dadu dadi ki taraf se m aapko sorry bolti hu, please aap mat jao na bhaiya, mere sath yaha koi ni khelta sab mujhe chidate h langdi bol ker.

(Subakte hue ) papa ne jab mujhe aapke bare m bataya tavse mujhe aap ka hi intezaar tha, ki akhir kar bhagwan ne meri sun li oe or mujhe bhi ek bhaiya diye jo mere sath khelenge mujhe khub pyar bhi karenge, per ager ab aap bhi mujhe chod k ja rahe ho.

Please mat jao na bhaiya , ager ap bhi chale jaoge to m fifir se akeli pad jaungi bhaiya or fir....

Ye sab bol komal rone lagi, apni itni masum bahan ki ankho m ansu karan se ek pal bhi bardaasht na ho rahe the.

Karan pyaar se :- ssshhh, na babu na ese rote ni h aap to meri pyaari doll ho na or aap to meri pyaari babu ho na .

Komal :- pal bhaiya.

Karan :- ale pagli ab tera ye bhai itni door se aaya h Or tu h ki bas roye ja rahi ho, ab apne bhaiya or didi ko unka room ni dikaogi.

Komal ye sun khushi se chonkte hue :- iska matlab ....

Jyoti pyaar se uske pass beth :- ha meli little dol iska matlab ye h ki aapke bhaiya or didi apko chod k kahi ni jane wale.

Komal khushi se :- sachi didi.

Karan komal k gal chum :- muchi mela babu.

Komal khusi se karan or jyoti k ek sth gale lag gayi, khusi k ansu k sath.

Karan komal ko chedte hue :- are babu ab bas yahi khada Hi rakhogi ya apne is bhai ko kuch khilaogi pilaogi bhi, bahut bhuk lagi h yaar.

Jyoti haste hue :- lo aate hi shuru ho gaye petu kahi ke

Komal :- oh ha sorry bhaiya m to bhul hi gayi, aap chaliye mere sath bhaiya ander apko malum h mane apke liye special halva banaya h apne hatho se.

Karan :- are wah fir to aapko mujhe apne hatho se khilana bhi padega, jyoti se puch lo ye hum bhai bahan k rules .

Komal :- ha ha bhaiya kyu ni, aap chaliyebto sahi aaj m apne bhaiya ko apne hatho se hi khilaungi.

Ye bol komal uthne ki koshish kerti h per dhadam. Se gir jati h kyunki uske hatho m uski besakhiya ni thi.

Ek baar to komal ka dil ro padta h apni majburi per humesha ki tarah per wo khud P control ker apni baisakhi ko dhundne lagi.

Tabhi karan jo apni bahan ki is halat ko dekh bahut dukhi tha usne jhat se komal ko apni god m utha liya or ghar ki or le jane laga.

Komal :- bhaiya ye aap kya ker rahe h ap thake hue ho esa kerne se aapko or pareshaani hogi, please mujhe niche utar dijiye m khud chal lungi.

Lekin karan ni mana or bola.

Karan :- hat pagli mujhe apni ful jesi bahan ko uthane m bhala kya pareshani hogi balki ulta mere liye to ye khushi ka moka h ki aaj m apni pyari bahan k kaam aa pa raha hu.


Ese hi pyari pyari bate kerte hue karan wapis ghar ki or bada or apne dada dadi ki or bina dekhe rajivv k pas pahuncha

Rajiv khushi se :- beta m Bahut khush hu ki tum itna sab hone k baad bhi yahi ruk rahe ho.

Karan :- chachu ab humari choti princess ko kese m. Rula sakta hu bhala , to aap mera or mere sabhi dosto k liye bhi room saf kerwa dijiye.

Rajib :- beta wo to mane kal hi kerwa diya the gudu ne mujhe sab bata diya tha, tum ander jaker aaram kero komal tumhe tumhara room bata degi or baki sabki chinta mat kero sabka saman unke room tak pahuch jayega.

Karan :- thanks chachu.

(Komal se) chale choti gudiya.

Komal ha m sir hilati h.

Karan apne dada dadi ko bilkul ignore kerte hue ghar Me chala jata h Or komal k bataye kamre m jaker dono bhai bahan fresh ho ker aaram Kerne lage.

Karan ki chachi yani nidhi to yaha mojud thi hi ni wo kal raat ko hi bahana bana k apne mayke chali gayi thi.

Karan k dada dadi ka to fir bhi samjha aata tha per kyu unki chachi bhi karan or jyoti k sath esa behave ker rahi thi, ye to samjh se pare tha

Wahi dusri Or

Location :- gufa.

Haveli se gayab ho sidha kubdi vp k pas pahunch use sari baate batati h jinhe sun vp bhi chonk jata h Or wo turant kubdi k sath samrat k pas pahunch gya tha.

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Vp :- ha samraat m, or mere aane ka udeshya bhi yahi h ki m tumhe bata saku ki tumhare bhai ki hatya kisne ki h.

Samraat :- yadi esa h prabhu to kripya shigra us dusht ka nam bataiye jisne mere bhai ko. Mara, m uska samool nash ker dunga.

Kubdi :- yuvraj ko marne wale 3 insan the malik o

Samraat :- kya, ye kya bakwas ker rahi h tu insan to , unki kya okaat k tritiya yuvraj ko mar sake.

Kubdi :- yahi sach h malik or itna hi ni malik unhone kayi bhut pishach dayano ko. Mar yaha wo pahunch chuke h wo dusht.

Fir kubdi ab tak ki sari kahani samraat ko batati h

Samraat gusse se :- bhut pishach to kide makode h, per is baar unhone ek tritiya ko mara h kere bhai. Ko

Esi mot marunga unko ki mot bhi unko apne aghosh m lene se kamp jayegi

Vp. :- ni samrat ye samy josh se ni balki hosh se kam lene ka h, dushman utna bhi kamzor ni jitna tum samjh rahe ho.

Kubdi :- ha malik mahaprabhu bilkul. Sahi bol rahe h, or to or un logo k pas ab trishastr bhi h.

Samrat chomk ker :- kya trishastra

Vp :- ha samrat, dracula, vikraal or vidheansika tino mare ja chuke h Or unme se 2 ko marne wale wo hi h jinhone tumhare bhai ko mara.

Kubdi :- or sabse badi sharm ki baat to ye h malik ki un logo ka sath bhi ek tritiya ladki hi de rahi h.

Samrat herani or gusse se :- kya kaha ek tritiya, esi kon gadar aagayi jo apne hi kul k nash P tuli h.

Apne bhai k hathiyaari us ladki naina ko to m baad m marunga pahale m us gadar ko esi saja dunga ki bhavishy me koi bhi humse gaddari ka khwab tak na dekhega


Vp :- m bhi yahi chahta hu samraat.

Samraat :- parantu mahaprabhu apne kaha ki us ladki naina k pas keval 2 bhag h to tisra bhag kaha h.

Vp gusse se :- tisra bhag us kamine k pas h samraat jo us shani ka ansh h jise hum usne hum danvo k nash k liye bheja h, us rakshak k pas.

Samraat :- kahi aap usi karan ki to bat ni ker rahe maharaj jise varsho purv

Vp :- ha samraat vahi rakshak jo hum danvo k rah ka sabse bada kata h, ab uske marne ka samay aa chuka h samraat or ye kaam ab keval tum hi ker sakte ho kyunki tumhare pas brahma k vardan ka vo kavach h jise khud shani tak ni tod sakta.

Samraat :- yadi esa h maharaj to samjhiye aapka kam ho gaya, parantu usse pahale m apne bhai ki mot ka badla lunga.

Tez aawaz me chilate hue.

Naina tujhe samrat chahiye tha na, to le aaraha h ye samraat teri mot ka pegam le ker

Ye bol samraat jor jor se shetani hasi hasne laga or sath m vp or kubdi bhi

Aakhir kya chal raha h samraat k dimag me, kya hogi is dusht ki agli chal, kese samna karegi naina Or uske dost samraat ka or kese dand dega karan apne dada dadi ko janne k liye hi yu hi sath bane rahiye

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Markesh ki mrityu dekh samraat gusse me pagal ho gusse se chila raha tha


Samraat :- kisne mara mere bhai ko, kisneeeeeeee.

Tabhi uske kano m ek aawaz padi.

M batata hu samraat kisne mara aapke bhai ko.

Samraat ne jab us disha m dekha to turant ghutno k bal beth gaya .

Samraat :- mahaprabhu aap yaha.


Ji ha dosto ye aawaz kisi or ki ni vp ki thi or sath me kubdi bhi thi.

Flashback

jab markesh ko pathar me tabdil hote kubdi ne dekha to uski himmat na hui naina or uske sathiyo k pas jane ki himmat na ker payi

.wo turant waha se bhag ker samraat ki haveli pahunch gayi.

Kubdi ghabrayi hui khud se :- mar dala , un dushto ne to humare yuvraj tak ka ant ker dala, aakhir kon h ye log jinhone ek pahale vrushali ko or fir ek tritiya yuvraj ko mar dala, kya dushmani h in logo ki hum danvo se.

Isse pahale ki wo samul danav vansh ka nash kare mujhe hi kuch kerna hoga

Parantu kya or kese.

Jin logo ne markesh tak ko ni choda unko m kese haraungi.

Ab to keval ek hi rasta h, ek hi shaks h jo un logo ka kal ban sakte h, tritiyao k raja, humare malik.


"Samraat"
Samraat ki manosiyat to dekho dosto kitni jabardast thi ki uske nam ko pukarne bhar se haveli k aas pass ka mosam badal gaya or charo or joro shoro se bijli kadkne lagi, jisse aas pas ka vatavaran bahut hi bhayanak ho gaya.

Kubdi shetani hasi k sath :- ha ab humare maharaj hi lenge apne bhai or baki sabhi danav veero ki mrityu ka prtishodh.

Tabhi kuch sochte hue

Kubdi :- per samraat to, apni guft sthan pe sadhana ker rahe h, jis sthan ka mujhe tak na pata, ab m kya karu, kese dhundu apne malik ko.

Tabhi kubdi ko vp ki yaad aayi.

mahaprabhu

ha mahaprabhu hi ab meri madad ker sakte h samraat ko dhundne Or danvo ki raksha hetu

Ye sochte hi kubdi waha se gayab ho gayi.

Wahi mahal k us kone m jaha megha ko rakha gaya tha,waha jab rakshasiyo unhone mosam m aaye badlaav ko dekha to wo barish se bachne k liye ghar k bhitar ki Or jane lagi lekin megha apni jagah se hili ni.

Balki jaha sab rakshasiyo k man m chinta utpan ho gayi thi mosam k is sanket se wahi megha k chahre per ek muskaan aagayi thi, jise dekh trijata chonk gayi.

Kyunki megha ko itne varsho me aaj pahali baar usne yu khul ker muskurate hue dekha tha.

Trijata :- kya baat h putri jaha baki sab is mosam k bhayankar parivartan ko dekh chintit h wahi tumhare chahre P ye muskan.

Wese m to bahut khush hu beti aaj itne warsho m tumhe muskurate hue dekh, isliye wajah janne k liye utsuk bhi hu.

Megha :- khushi ka avsar hi to h ye amma, ye mosam ka badlaav ye sab sankeet h ki samraat ka ant aaagaya h Or ye ashubh sanket h us dusht k liye jo use bata rahe h ki uska kaal aagaya h.

Megha abhi ye sab baate bata rahi thi ki tabhi ek dasi waha pahunch sabko markesh k ant ki khabar sunati h.

Megha :- dekha ama kaha tha na mane.

Trijata :- ha putri ab to ishvar se yahi prathna h ki jald hi is dusht samraat ka ant bhi ho jaye or hume mukti mile is papi k gulami se.

Megha :- esa shighra hi hoga amaa, ishvar pe bharosa rakhe.

Wahi dusri or

Aaiye ek najar sonam pe dal lete h.

Raat ka time

Sonam jo apne kamre m karan k jane k baad se hi gumsum bethi thi , wo kuch na bol rahi thi na uske chahre pe koi bhav the, bas uske ankho se ansu bah rahe the Or hatho m krishna ki tasvir thi

Sonam man hi man :- kyu kanha kyu, aakhir kyu kiya tumne mere sath esa, mane humesha bina kisi swaarth k tumhari seva ki , aj tak tumse kuch ni manga apne liye , fir meri bhakti m esi kami raha gayi jo tumne esa kiya mere sath.

Kya yahi sila diya tune apni bhakti ka mujhe, sari duniya tumhe prem ka devta premio ko milane wala kahati h per tumne to apni bhakt se uska prem hi chin liya.

Abhi sonam ye sab shikaayat kerte hue ro hi rahi thi ki achanak se uske kandhe per kisi ne hath rakha Or kuch kaha jiski aawaz sun sonam chonk gayi.

Kya baat h bhai, meri pyari gudiya sona kyu lo lahi h.

Sonam chonk ker us Or dekhte hue :- rohan bhai aap.

Ji ha dosto sonam ko awaz dene wala rohan hi tha jo karan k kahane P waha bus m clone chod ker.

Rohan pyaar se uske gal sahalate hue:- meri sona ro rahi ho or m waha maje karu esa kabhi ho sakta h.

Sonam :- apne ansu chupate hue :- udaas or m ni to bhai, per aap yaha kese aap to nikal gaye the n ganv k liye.

Rohan :- yahi baat meri ankho m ankhe dal ker kah sakti ho sona ki m galat hu.

Sonam najre churane lagi.

Rohan :- sona meri gudiya tumhe apne is bhai se kuch bhi chupane ki jarurat ni h , m sab janta hu gudiya ki tum karan se pyaar karti ho or wo bhi ek bahan k satb sath ek premika ki tarah bhi.


Sonam ye sun buri tarah chonk gayi.

Sona :- kya aap ko kese pata is bare m kya karan bhai ne aapko is bare m bata diya.

Rohan :- sona meri bahan, is bare m mujhe kisi k batane ki jarurat hi kaha padi, 3 mahine humne jo ek sath gujare the usme hi m tumhare man or tumhare prem ko achi tarah samjh chuka tha gudiya .

Karan k liye tumhara prem, unki judai me tumhara yu tadafna, ye sab hi tumhare prem k pramaan hi to the.

Sonam ye sun sharma ker or chinta m sir niche ker leti h ye soch ker ki rohan kya sochega uske bare m ki wo apne bhai ko hi dil de bethi.

Rohan sonam k sir ko uthate :- na mera bacha na tumhe lajjit hone ki koi jarurat nhi h, jo ho raha h wo na sirf tumhari balki karan or jyoti ki bhi niyati h.

Ha gudiya m sab janta hu karan kon h or uski shaktiyo k bare m bhi or itna hi ni ek satya or h jisse tum anbhigya ho.

Ye bol sonam ko rohan apne bare m batata h Or apna kaal wala roop dikhata h.

Jise dekh sonam or chonk gayi or aakhir chonke bhi kyu na in 2 dino m uski duniya badal si gayi.

Sonam :- rohan bhai aap bhi, ye sab kya ho raha h bhai, aakhir kon h ye dandnayak karan, kya maksad h unka Or ye shakti ye prem mujhe to kuch samjh ni aaraha.


Rohan :- tumhari manodasha m samjh sakta hu m sona, achanak se ye sab samne aana vyakti k astitv ko jhajhor k rakh deta h.

Parantu tum chinta mat kero tumhare sabhi prashno k uttar nikat bhavishya m shighr hi gyaat honge tumhe (man me Or khud karan ko bhi)

Lekin usse pahale tumhe apni niyati ko swikar kerna hoga gudiya, karan kabhi kisi ek ka ni ho sakta, esa vk khud bhi chahe to sambhav ni.

Sona rote hue :- kese swikar ker lu bhai , bataiye kese swikar ker lu apne prem ka batwara, ek ladki ka sirf yahi to ek khawab hota h ki uska hone wala humsafar sirf uska ho , usko prem kare, uska dukh pida samjhe Or uske liye loyal ho, yani ki uske alawa kisi or k alawa soche tak ni, per yaha too

(Siskte hue) kese ker lu bhai apne prem ka batwara wo bhi apni hi badi bahan se.

Rohan sonam ko hriday se laga :- na sona, na mera bacha rote ni, m tumhare dard ko samjh sakta hu gudiya, parantu tum khud hi socho kya karan k liye bhi ye kerna aaasan h, karan k pran baste h to wo h sirf uski bahano m.

Or jyoti jyoti to karan ki aatma h, tumhe apna dukh to dikhayi diya sona per kya tumne socha ki us jyoti per kya but rahi hogi, jisne tumhari hi bhanti karan ko apna sab kuch mana.

Lekin unhone un sab baato ko dar kinar ker apni niyati ko swikar kiya, kyu, kyunki yahi sansaar k hit me h.

Mahan shaktiya apne sath mahan jimmedaariya bhi lati h gudiya, jise unhone samjha Or sansar k kalyan k liye ye tyag kiya.

Sona krishna ne bhi yahi to kaha h gita m dharm ki raksha m apna sarvasv tyagna pade to bhi piche ni hatna chahiye .

Isliye meri baat mano gudiya Or apni niyati ko swikar kero.

Sonam rohan se alag ho kuch ni bolti bas wapas muh niche karke beth jati h


Rohan :- hmm, samjh sakta hu tumhe is sab k liye waqt Or ekant chahiye, tumhe jitna samay chahiye utna lo gudiya Or soch samjh ker apna nirnay lena.

Or ha koi bhi chij ki jarurat ho ya madad chahiye ho to bas yad ker apne rohan bhai ko apne pass hi paogi ye bol rohan waha se anterdhyan ho gaya.

Rohan k jate hi sonam jo itni der khud ko control ki hui thi fir se rone lagi lekin kuch der baad wo ruki or is baar uske dimag m rohan ki kahi bate ghumne lagi jisse prabhavit ho wo sochne ko vivash ho gayi.

Wahi rohan wapas se bus m pahunch jo hua uske bare m karan ko man hi man bata deta h.

Jise sun karan ko taklif bhi hui per usne rohan k nirnay ko sahi bhi taharaya.


Agli subah 5 baje k karib karan and family rajsthan m enterr ker chuke the Or karib 7 baje k karib wo ganv k pas pahunch gaye.

Ram garh wese to yaha aaj bhi 80 ℅ log kheti se apna ghar chalate h, per yaha jyadatar sab sampann the, kaaran jai prakash yani k karan k dada ka yaha ka jagirdaar Or surpanch hona.

Karan k dada wese to ek ache Or imaandar insan h, dayalu bhi, lekin unki ek bhul ne hi unke ghar ka sukha chain mita diya tha, jo tha apni bahu ka tiraskaar kerna, use pratadit kerna.

Bhale hi jai prakash ne kabhi khud asha k sath vesa kuch na kiya, per unhone apni patni ko bhi na roka balki usko Or utsaahit kiya tha, jis kaaran aaj ye sab hua tha.


Karan yahi sab bate man m sochte hue ganv ko dekh raha tha, vo humesha ki tarah jaldi uth gaya tha or baki sab so rahe the

Karan :- maa ab samay aagaya h apke pratyek gunehgar ko unke karmo k fal milne ka, isliye hi m yaha aaya hu jaha se is sab ki shuruaat hui.

Karan yahi soch raha tha ki tabhi jyoti ne uske kandhe per hath rakha, jisse dekh karan uske gal chum ker.

Karan :- uth gayi meri gudiya good morning my love.

Jyoti bhi karan k gal chum :- good morning my sweetu bhaiya.

Wese subah subah kin khayalo m khoye hue the aap.

Karan :- kuch ni bas bahar k najare dekh raha tha, (ankh marte hue) per ander ka hasin najara to iske aage kuch ni.

Jyoti sharma k :- kya bhai kuch bhi, vese sach me bhai ye jagah kitni beautiful h.

Karan dhime se apna hath jyoti ki kamar m dal apni or khechte hue :- ha bilkul meri jan bole to romance k liye bilkul perfect.

Jyoti to khud karan k sath romantic time spend kerna chahti thi jo pichle din aayi pareshaaniyo k kaaran ni ho paya tha, lekin abhi yaha sab mojud the jis kaaran vo dar 'brahi thi

Jyoti jhut muth ka vir:- bhai kya ker rahe ho aap koi dekh lega.

Karan :- sab so rahe h gudiya, ab chal ab morning to ho gayi ab apne in komal hotho ka ras pilake use good bhi bana de meri jaan

Jyoti karan ko dhakelte hue :- koi kiss viss ni milne wali aapko chaliye chhodiye mujhe.

Per karan ni man raha tha.

Jyoti request kerte hue :- bhaiya plz chodiye na abhi yaha koi dekh lega baad m jitna chahe utna pyar ker lena m to aapki hi hu kahi bhage thodi ja rahi hu.

Ye bol jyoti ne jaldi se kuch second k liye karan k hotho ko chum liya or ankh mar di.
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Jyoti k is sexy andaaz pe to karan fida ho gaya or wo bhi jaldi se jyoti k hoth chum bola.

Karan ankh marte hue:- haye ye teri ada, lagta h ab jaldi se koi jugaad lagana hoga av control ni hota.

Jyoti sharma k karan k sine pe mukka marti h pyaar se or fir kuch der yuhi nokjhok or pyar bhari bato k baad wo sab ko jagate h kyonki ganv bas aane hi wala tha.


Sab bahut hi excited the ganv m jese hi bus enter kerti h to sab ganv valo ki najre usi pe jam gayi thi, aakhir pahali baar unhone esi shandar bus apne ganv m dekhi thi.

Bache apni aadat k anusaar gadi k piche piche bhagte h kuch door tak, karib 15 20 min baad karan ki bus ek badi si haveli k bahar ruki , jo karan k dada ka ghar tha.

Gadi k rukne ki aawaz sunte hi sab ghar k bahar aagaye, or intezaar kerne lage apne khandan k chirag or apni pyari poti or bhatiji ka.

Sabse pahale radha or garima uterte h, rajiv ko dekhte hi radha unki or mamu kahate hue dod k gale lag gayi.

Rajiv :- kesi ho meri choti guddu.

Radha :- ek dam first class mamu humesha ki tarah or aap kese ho or komal kaha h.

Dadi :- arr ab sara pyar apne mamu ko hi dogi ya nani se bhi milogi.

Fir radha apne nana nani k gale milti h uske piche piche garima bhi aati h or sabse pehle wo bhi apne bhai k gale milti h.

Rajiv garima ka matha chum :- are aagayi meri guddu kesa raha safar koi taklif to ni hui na raste m.

Fir wo apne maa bap k bhi per chuti h or fir dadi bol padi.

Dadi :- garima beti tune to kaha tha tumhare sath mere pota poti bhi aayenge.

Kaha h vo jaldi se unhe bula beta, teri is maa ki ankhe taraf gayi h apne jigar k tukde ko dekhne ko.

Dada :- ha beta kaha h humare ghar ka chirag.

Rajiv excited hote hue :- ha guddu kaha h mere bache.

Garima :- ji bhai abhi bulati hu.

Fir garima radha ko ishara kerti h, wo bhag ker jati h or sab ko bahar leke ati h.

Sabse pahale geeta shivani priya or kavya uterte h, fir rohan or riya, or jav last m radha karan or jyoti ka hath tha me niche uterte h to dono bhai bahan k mukh per tez or gambhir parantu somya mudra dekh karan k dada dadi or chacha unme kho se jate h.

Radha karan or jyoti ko lekar garima k pas leker jati h or garima sabse pahale apne maa baap se milwate hue boli.

Garima :- beta inse milo ye h tumhare dada dadi.

Karan or jyoti bhale hi un dono se kara the lekin apne sanskaar na bhule karan jyo hi apne dada k per chune ko hotha h to uske dada uss rok k apne sine se laga lete h.

Dada :- mere sher mere jigar k tukde aagaya Tu tera ye dada kabse taraf raha tha tujhe apne sine se lagane ko.

Fir yu hi karan dadi se milta h lekin ek shabd ni bolta.

Fir garima apne bhai k pas le jate hue.

Garima :- beta ye h tumhare.

Karan bich me hi :- chachuuuu..

Ye bol karan khushi se rajiv k per chune ko hua per rajiv ne bhii karan ko apne sine se laga liya.

Rajiv :- mera beta mere sher m bata ni sakta hu aaj m kitna khush hu tum se mil ker mere bache, wo to teri is bhua ne Mujge rok diya tha m verna khud hi waha aaphunchta.

Tabhi jyoti bhi rajiv k per chune ko hui to rajiv ne use rokte hue.

Rajiv :- are are meri bachi ye kya ker rahi ho tum to meri pyari beti ho or betiya ghar ki lakshmi hoti h, unhe per ni chuate.

Ye bol rajiv jyoti ko bhi gale se laga leta h, itne salo baad ek chacha apne bhatije bhatiji se ek dada dadi apne pote poti se mile the to sabki ankho m khushi k ansu the.

Rajiv :- vese manna padega bhatije kya mast body banayi h tumne, 2 4 tips apne chachu ko bhi de.

Garima majak karte hue :- ha beta taki tere chachu ka nikla hua pet ander ho, verna log inhe tere ni mere chacha ji samajhne lagenge

Ye bol wo has padi or sath me sab bhi.

Rajiv :- kya boli chuhiya Tu m or mota, shayad tujhe pata ni ganv ki adhi ladkiya aaj bhi marti h mujhe per.

Garima :- bhai unhe ladkiya ni aunty bolte h or thoda dhire bolo vern bhabhi jhadu leke aati hi hogi .

Rajiv bat badalte hue :- vese meri beti dekh kitni pyari h na guddu, wahi nain naksh wahi tez ese lagta h jese bhabhi ka bachpan hi lot aaya ho h na maa.

Asha ka jikra sun dadi ka mood kharab ho gaya, vo kuch bolne hi wali thi ki dada ne use ishare m roka.

Garima ne bhi ye sab dekh liya tha, aate hi koi bhakheda khada na ho isliye wo savko ander leker jane ki kosis kerti h ki tabhi dadi ki najar shivani P padi.

Dadj :- are ye pyari si rajkumaari kon h, idhar aao beta.

Rajiv :- ha guddu ye baki sab kon h jara humare mahamano se humara parichay to karao.

Garima samjh gayi ki ab samay aagaya h bomb futne ka.

Garima kavya ko aage late hue :- bhai ye h humari choti bhabhi kavya or ye inki beti or humari choti bhatizi shivani.

Garima ki ye baat jese hi karan k dada dadi or chacha ne suni wo heran raha gaye, kyunki garima ne sirf karan or jyoti k bare m hi bataya tha unhe.

Rajiv :- ye tum kya bol rahi ho guddu, ye humari bhabhi

Garima :- ha bhai ye sach h.

Fir garima kavya k bare m unhe sab batati h siway ranveer k kaaran karan or jyoti se uske natak k vishay me chod.

Rajiv :- ni m ni man sakta bhaiya esa kese ker sakte h, unhone unke 13 vi tak ka intezar na kiya.

Dadi shivani ko apne gale laga ker :- haye kitni pyari h meri choti poti, bilkul rajkumaari jesi, najar na lage ise kisi ki.

(Garima se) kya galat kiya tere bhai ne rajiv, aakhir mere pote poti ko sambhalne wala bhi to koi chahiye hi tha, m to acha hua mere bete ka picha to chuta us kamini se.

Garima gusse se :- maa.

Dadi :- chilao mat garima, mane kuch galat ni kaha, us kamini ne pahale mere bete ko fasa ker use ghar walo k khilaaf hi shadi kerne ko uksaya, uske peso k liye, fir mere bache k dil m jahar bhar k humse door kiya tha usne.

Rajiv :- ma bas bahut ho gaya, ab aap had se aage badh rahi ho.


Dada :- had se aage tumhaari ma ni tum bad rahe ho rajiv, mat bhulo ki tum apni maa se baat ker rahe ho.

Or tumhari maa ne bilkul sahi to kaha us kulakshini k kaaran hi aaj itne salo tak hume apne pote potiyo se.

Are m to kahata hu ki jo ladki apne maa baap ki sagi na hui thi wo humari sagi kya hoti.

Jyoti ka vinashkari krodh apne dada dadi k vachno se jagrit hone laga tha, uski ankhein laal hone lagi thi or tan kala padne laga.

Wo abhi aage bad hi rahi thi ki tabhi karan ne jyoti ka hath tham use rok liya.

Jyoti ne karan ki or dekha to karan ka bhi kuch vesa hi haal tha lekin na jane kyu usne apni ankhe band ker apne aap ko niyantran karne ka pryas ker raha tha.


Lekin rohan se chup raha na gaya or wo gusse se bol pada.

Rohan :- bas bahut hua aap bade h iska matlab ye ni ki aap kuch bhi bol lenge or hum sun lenge apni mosi k baare m.

Dadi :- e ladke tum hote kon ho humare pariwarik maamle m bolne wale, mahaman ban k aaye ho to mahaman ki had m rahana sikho.

Or ye bhi sun lo m apna kaha hua ek shabd wapas ni lungi , kyunki mane jo kaha wo sach h.

Wo kamini ek kulta , lalchi orat thi jisne mere bete ko. Na sirf mujhse door kiya balki uske dil. M mere liye jahar bhara, ek no ki charitrhin Or papi orat thi wo, acha hua mar gayi, akhir bhagwaan ne usko uske karmo ka fal de hi diya, are m to....

Abhi dadi aage kuch bol pati ki waha ek bhayanak aawaz gunj uthi.

Bassssssssssssssss...

Ye koi or ni balki karan hi tha jiski sahanshakti ki sima khatam ho chuki thi, uski ankhe laal k bajaye ab kali padne lagi thi or uske muthi bich chuki thi.

Karan aage apne dadi k pasand aaker :- bas, bahut ho gaya aapka ye natak, ab ek bhi shabd meri khilaaf kisi k muh se nikla to m bhul jaunga ki mera kya rishta h tum logo se.

(Garima ki or dekhte hue) kya isliye aap mujhe yaha leker aayi thi bhua ki yaha laker meri ankho k samne hi bich sadak pe sabke samne yu meri swargniy maa ka apman ho, unka yaha is tiraskar kiya jaye.

Garima ka sir sharmnindgi se niche ho chuka tha wo pachta rahi thi ki wo karan or jyoti ko kyu yaha leker aayi

Karan apne dada k pas jaker :- ky kaha tha apne meri maa ko lalchi, jisne apke bete se shadi sirf peso k liye ki.

Bade hi afsos k sath, ni balki bahut khushi k sath aapke is galat fehmi ko todte hue ye batana chahta hu ki lalachi meri maa ni balki aapka beta tha, jisne meri maa ko jhute pyar k jaal m fasaya kyu sirf unki property k liye, per afsos kamyab na jo paya.

Dada gusse se :- tumhari himmat kese hui esa bolne ki, sharm ni aati apne baap per esa ghinona iljam lagate hue.

Karan :- isi baat ki hi to sharmindgi h ki wo kamina mera baap h jisne meri maa ki hatya ki.

Dadi gusse se karan ko thappad maarne ko hui ki tabhi garima ne unka hath pakad liya or gusse se boli.

Garima gusse se :- mere bete ko hath lagane ki bhi mat sochna ma , karan jo bol raha h wo sach h ma, ranvir bhai ab mere bhai ya apke bete ni rahe ab vo sirf or sirf ek hatyare h jinhone na keval humari bhabhi yani apki bahu ko mara, balki unki khokh m pal rahi ek nanhi jaan ko bhi mara.

Ye bolte hue garima k ankho se ansu bahane lage or wo fir rote hue sara majra apne ghar walo ko bata deti h or sath me vo video bhi dikha deti h jo karan ne banayi thi.

Rajiv to apne bhai ki kartoot sun sadme se chala gaya or gir pada ghutno k bal.

Garima bhai chilate hue rajiv k pas gayi or rajiv garima k gale lag foot foot k rone laga.

Rajiv ka hal bhi bilkul wesa ho chuka tha jesa garima ka hua tha jab use apne bhai ki sachai pata chali thi.

Wo Dono bhai bahan bhi karan or jyoti ki tarah judwa the isliye wo ek dusre ka dard ache se samjhte the , isliye wo dono ek dusre ko santwana de rahe the.

Karan rajiv k pas aaker niche ghutno k bal beth :- itna sab hone k baad bhi m yaha aaya chachu sirf aapke liye, kyunki us mushkil ki ghadi m keval aap or bhua hi the jinhone meri maa ka sath ni choda, unki pag pag per madad ki.

Yakin maniye chachu mane kabhi pita ka prem na paya, parantu jab mujhe pahali baar beta kahake gale lagaya, jab mujhe ek shaswat prem. Ka anubhav hua jo ek pita hi apne bete ko de sakta h.

Parantu hum yaha ab yaha ni ruk sakte, kyunki jaha humari maa ka koi samman ni waha humare liye rahana bhi ek shan paap h.

Chal jyoti

Ye bol karan uth ker rajiv k per chuta h or jyoti ka hath tham bus ki or badha.

Rajiv khada ho karan ko rokte hue :- ni beta m ab tumhe yu ni jane dunga itne varsho baad to mujhe apne bete se milne ka sobhagya mila h, abhi tumhe hi to kaha na beta m tumhare liye tumhare pita saman hu to kya ek beta apne pita ki baat ni manega.

Jyoti :- chachu esi baat ni h, aapke liye to apke in dono bacho ki jan bhi hajir hhai, per please hume yaha mat rokiye.

Hum ni ruk sakte ek pal bhi waha jaha humari maa ko dukh k alawa kuch na mila yaha bitaya hua ek ek pal hume humari maa p hue hatyacharo ka anubhav kerwa raha h, isliye isse pahale ki hum aavesh me aaker kuch ker bethe isse bahater yahi hoga ki hum yaha se chale jaye.

Ye bol jyoti karan ka hath thame chal padi Or unke piche piche baki sab bhi kyunki ab kisi k rukne ka koi matlab ni tha, garima bhi ek bar rajiv k gale mil chal padi.

Abhi karan bus k pas pahuncha hi tha ki tabhi uske kano me ek pyari per dard bhari aawaz padi .


Ruk jaiyeeeee bhaiya please....

Karan samet jab piche mude to karan ne paya ki ye awaz ek ladki ki thi jo besakhi ki madad se jitna tezi se ho sake utna tezi se karan k pas aarahi thi or ruk jaiye bhaiya ruk jaiye bhaiya pukar rahi thi.

Per ye kya achanak se us ladki ka balance bigad gaya or wo jamin per gir gayi.

Radha ghabra k :- komal.

Karan samjh gaya ye ladki or koi ni komal thi, yani ki uske chacha ki ladki Or uski choti bahan.
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Komal girne k baad bhi ni ruki or roti hui khud ko ghasite hue boli.

Komal :- bhaiya ruk jaiye mujhe chod k mat jaiye.

Karan ne jab apni bahan ki ye halat dekhi to uski ankho se jhar jhar ansu bahane lage .

Wo turant bhag k komal k pas jata h or jaldi se ghutno k bal beth use uthatha h or bethne m madad kerta h.

Komal masumiyat se rote hue :- bhaiya

Or fir komal karan k sine se lipat jati h or khushi or dard k mile jhule bhav k ansuo k sath.

Kafi der tak komal karan k gale lagi rahi karan bhi bina kuch bole use apni baho me liye wahi betha raha Or uske sir ko sahalate hue.

Kuch der baad karan se yu hi gale lage rahane k baad komal boli.

Komal masumiyat se apne kaan pakad:- bhaiya dadu dadi ki taraf se m aapko sorry bolti hu, please aap mat jao na bhaiya, mere sath yaha koi ni khelta sab mujhe chidate h langdi bol ker.

(Subakte hue ) papa ne jab mujhe aapke bare m bataya tavse mujhe aap ka hi intezaar tha, ki akhir kar bhagwan ne meri sun li oe or mujhe bhi ek bhaiya diye jo mere sath khelenge mujhe khub pyar bhi karenge, per ager ab aap bhi mujhe chod k ja rahe ho.

Please mat jao na bhaiya , ager ap bhi chale jaoge to m fifir se akeli pad jaungi bhaiya or fir....

Ye sab bol komal rone lagi, apni itni masum bahan ki ankho m ansu karan se ek pal bhi bardaasht na ho rahe the.

Karan pyaar se :- ssshhh, na babu na ese rote ni h aap to meri pyaari doll ho na or aap to meri pyaari babu ho na .

Komal :- pal bhaiya.

Karan :- ale pagli ab tera ye bhai itni door se aaya h Or tu h ki bas roye ja rahi ho, ab apne bhaiya or didi ko unka room ni dikaogi.

Komal ye sun khushi se chonkte hue :- iska matlab ....

Jyoti pyaar se uske pass beth :- ha meli little dol iska matlab ye h ki aapke bhaiya or didi apko chod k kahi ni jane wale.

Komal khushi se :- sachi didi.

Karan komal k gal chum :- muchi mela babu.

Komal khusi se karan or jyoti k ek sth gale lag gayi, khusi k ansu k sath.

Karan komal ko chedte hue :- are babu ab bas yahi khada Hi rakhogi ya apne is bhai ko kuch khilaogi pilaogi bhi, bahut bhuk lagi h yaar.

Jyoti haste hue :- lo aate hi shuru ho gaye petu kahi ke

Komal :- oh ha sorry bhaiya m to bhul hi gayi, aap chaliye mere sath bhaiya ander apko malum h mane apke liye special halva banaya h apne hatho se.

Karan :- are wah fir to aapko mujhe apne hatho se khilana bhi padega, jyoti se puch lo ye hum bhai bahan k rules .

Komal :- ha ha bhaiya kyu ni, aap chaliyebto sahi aaj m apne bhaiya ko apne hatho se hi khilaungi.

Ye bol komal uthne ki koshish kerti h per dhadam. Se gir jati h kyunki uske hatho m uski besakhiya ni thi.

Ek baar to komal ka dil ro padta h apni majburi per humesha ki tarah per wo khud P control ker apni baisakhi ko dhundne lagi.

Tabhi karan jo apni bahan ki is halat ko dekh bahut dukhi tha usne jhat se komal ko apni god m utha liya or ghar ki or le jane laga.

Komal :- bhaiya ye aap kya ker rahe h ap thake hue ho esa kerne se aapko or pareshaani hogi, please mujhe niche utar dijiye m khud chal lungi.

Lekin karan ni mana or bola.

Karan :- hat pagli mujhe apni ful jesi bahan ko uthane m bhala kya pareshani hogi balki ulta mere liye to ye khushi ka moka h ki aaj m apni pyari bahan k kaam aa pa raha hu.


Ese hi pyari pyari bate kerte hue karan wapis ghar ki or bada or apne dada dadi ki or bina dekhe rajivv k pas pahuncha

Rajiv khushi se :- beta m Bahut khush hu ki tum itna sab hone k baad bhi yahi ruk rahe ho.

Karan :- chachu ab humari choti princess ko kese m. Rula sakta hu bhala , to aap mera or mere sabhi dosto k liye bhi room saf kerwa dijiye.

Rajib :- beta wo to mane kal hi kerwa diya the gudu ne mujhe sab bata diya tha, tum ander jaker aaram kero komal tumhe tumhara room bata degi or baki sabki chinta mat kero sabka saman unke room tak pahuch jayega.

Karan :- thanks chachu.

(Komal se) chale choti gudiya.

Komal ha m sir hilati h.

Karan apne dada dadi ko bilkul ignore kerte hue ghar Me chala jata h Or komal k bataye kamre m jaker dono bhai bahan fresh ho ker aaram Kerne lage.

Karan ki chachi yani nidhi to yaha mojud thi hi ni wo kal raat ko hi bahana bana k apne mayke chali gayi thi.

Karan k dada dadi ka to fir bhi samjha aata tha per kyu unki chachi bhi karan or jyoti k sath esa behave ker rahi thi, ye to samjh se pare tha

Wahi dusri Or

Location :- gufa.

Haveli se gayab ho sidha kubdi vp k pas pahunch use sari baate batati h jinhe sun vp bhi chonk jata h Or wo turant kubdi k sath samrat k pas pahunch gya tha.

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Vp :- ha samraat m, or mere aane ka udeshya bhi yahi h ki m tumhe bata saku ki tumhare bhai ki hatya kisne ki h.

Samraat :- yadi esa h prabhu to kripya shigra us dusht ka nam bataiye jisne mere bhai ko. Mara, m uska samool nash ker dunga.

Kubdi :- yuvraj ko marne wale 3 insan the malik o

Samraat :- kya, ye kya bakwas ker rahi h tu insan to , unki kya okaat k tritiya yuvraj ko mar sake.

Kubdi :- yahi sach h malik or itna hi ni malik unhone kayi bhut pishach dayano ko. Mar yaha wo pahunch chuke h wo dusht.

Fir kubdi ab tak ki sari kahani samraat ko batati h

Samraat gusse se :- bhut pishach to kide makode h, per is baar unhone ek tritiya ko mara h kere bhai. Ko

Esi mot marunga unko ki mot bhi unko apne aghosh m lene se kamp jayegi

Vp. :- ni samrat ye samy josh se ni balki hosh se kam lene ka h, dushman utna bhi kamzor ni jitna tum samjh rahe ho.

Kubdi :- ha malik mahaprabhu bilkul. Sahi bol rahe h, or to or un logo k pas ab trishastr bhi h.

Samrat chomk ker :- kya trishastra

Vp :- ha samrat, dracula, vikraal or vidheansika tino mare ja chuke h Or unme se 2 ko marne wale wo hi h jinhone tumhare bhai ko mara.

Kubdi :- or sabse badi sharm ki baat to ye h malik ki un logo ka sath bhi ek tritiya ladki hi de rahi h.

Samrat herani or gusse se :- kya kaha ek tritiya, esi kon gadar aagayi jo apne hi kul k nash P tuli h.

Apne bhai k hathiyaari us ladki naina ko to m baad m marunga pahale m us gadar ko esi saja dunga ki bhavishy me koi bhi humse gaddari ka khwab tak na dekhega


Vp :- m bhi yahi chahta hu samraat.

Samraat :- parantu mahaprabhu apne kaha ki us ladki naina k pas keval 2 bhag h to tisra bhag kaha h.

Vp gusse se :- tisra bhag us kamine k pas h samraat jo us shani ka ansh h jise hum usne hum danvo k nash k liye bheja h, us rakshak k pas.

Samraat :- kahi aap usi karan ki to bat ni ker rahe maharaj jise varsho purv

Vp :- ha samraat vahi rakshak jo hum danvo k rah ka sabse bada kata h, ab uske marne ka samay aa chuka h samraat or ye kaam ab keval tum hi ker sakte ho kyunki tumhare pas brahma k vardan ka vo kavach h jise khud shani tak ni tod sakta.

Samraat :- yadi esa h maharaj to samjhiye aapka kam ho gaya, parantu usse pahale m apne bhai ki mot ka badla lunga.

Tez aawaz me chilate hue.

Naina tujhe samrat chahiye tha na, to le aaraha h ye samraat teri mot ka pegam le ker

Ye bol samraat jor jor se shetani hasi hasne laga or sath m vp or kubdi bhi

Aakhir kya chal raha h samraat k dimag me, kya hogi is dusht ki agli chal, kese samna karegi naina Or uske dost samraat ka or kese dand dega karan apne dada dadi ko janne k liye hi yu hi sath bane rahiye

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Harry rocks

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Note :- yaha jitne log mujhe criticized ker rahe h first of all m unse kahna chahunga ki mujhe koi shok ni h jhut bolne ka jo aap kuch bhi bol rahe ho bina kisi ki koi vajah jane, aap sabko pahale bhi bata chuka hu or aaj dobara bata raha hu mere ghar m is samay bahut pareshaniya chal rahi h, mere father hospitalised h is chakkar m. Mujhe akele ko hi ghar or dukan dono sambhalni pad rahi h, jis chakkar m mujhe khud k liye hi time ni mil pata to m kya karu, kisi k pas koi suggestion ho to de.

Or ek ne ye bhi likha h ki story ko jabardasti lamba khechne k chakker m m ye sab ker raha hu to unko m bata dena chahta hu ki mujhe koi maja ni aaraha kisi ko pareshan kerne m or na hi mujhe koi pese mil rahe h story likhne k liye , isliye bolne se pahale kuch to soch le kero yaar or haa jinko lag raha h m bahana ker raha hu to m unka kuch ni ker sakta Kyunki ye unka khudka mindset esa ho chuka h ki unhe bas writer ki kharabi or galti najar aati h uski situation samjh ni aati.

Or rahi baat update kal raat ko na aapne ki to isme koi galti ni mane to kal raat ko hi update ko poster diya tha, per pata ni ki kese koi net problem ya server down k chakker m update post kyu ni hua, pure din se hospital se free hoker ab ye soch ker betha tha ki dekhe ki kesa laga update dosto ko per koi kami to ni rah gayi, per yaha dekha to badi nirasha hui ki ek itni si baat k liye itna sab mujhe kaha diya.

I realy get very disappointed.

By the way update mane post ker diya h dobara , jese ctitisize kerne k liye comment kiya wese ho sake to review dene k liye bhi comment ker dijiyega thanks.

 

Nadan Dill

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ab dakta ha karan apna dada or dai ka sat kiea salook karta ha or Naina samrat ko kasa khatam kartii ha or sab sa dilchesb Sonam kasa mantii ha yeha bat..............




intazar ha new update ka bhaiiu.........










Mara khayal sa karan komal ko thk kar da ga apni shaktii sa
 
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