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Fantasy Manhoos - Part 2 (completed)

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To Dosto m a new writer on xf xp ka purana writer hu xp gayi baat gayi
Yeh sirf meri ek koshish hai to plz sath dena aasha karta hu apko pasand ayegi yeh story
Ismein thoda sa powers ka use hoga thoda sa romance aur incest bhi ho sakta hai
to plz kisi ki agar incest vajha se bhavnao ko thes pohanchti ho plz ignore kar dena story ko
Iss kahani ke sare patar kalpnik hai agar kisi se mel khate hai to kripya panic mat hona woh sab ek itefak hai

Main Pehle kisi vajha se is story ko pura nahi kar paya pura karne ki Koshish karunga

Iss kahani mein sex bagera ko shayad hi mahatab diya jaye to yeh baat bhi note kar lena
Ek aur baat story shayad kisi aur story se thoda bohat matching ho sakti hai to plz isse pehle padhna fir us bare mein baat karna
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Update 47


"To bataye kya puchna chahti hai mrs. Rajput"

Chachi - kam se kam bade chote ka lihaz to karo


Main - yeh to lehaz se hi baat kar raha hu verna soch to main bhi raha hu tum logo ki hi bhasha use karu jese tum log meri Komal ke liye use karte the kaho to bulau ese


Chachi - nai nai rehne do ese hi theak hai kam se kam thodi izzat to hoti hai


Main - acha chorho bhi ab batao butau tumhare bhai ke bare mein


Chachi - han jaldi batao bohat saal ho gaye na woh milne aye na hi unki koi khabar

Main - bata to deta hu par seh nahi paogi (baaki logo ko) sambhal lena in mohatrama ko doctor ko nahi bulane wala

Chacha - esa kya batane wale ho

Main - to suno iske bhai saheb is duniya main nahi hai

Chachi - kya bakwas kar rahe ho esa nahi ho sakta

Main - jo such hai bata diya tumse jyada mujhe hai is baat ka dukh ke tumhare liye woh bhai the bs par mere liye baap the woh unho ne hi bachpan se pala posa hai unho ne hi mujhe tum jese darindon se bachaya tha mere dada ji ke kehne pe par kuch din pehle unke hi bhai ne jani ki tumhare bade bhai ne unhe property ke lalach mein marwa diya ab yeh sawal hoga tumhare mann mein ki bade bhai ko jab chote bhai ka pata malum tha to tumhe kyu nahi bataya to yeh jo property ka lalach hai na ache ache rishton ko khatam kar deta hai ek aur news du issi ke sath tumhe

Chachi - (rote hue) ab kya bacha hai sab kuch to cheen liya tumhari manhoosiyat ne

Main - itna sab sunne ke baad bhi tumhe tumhare bade bhai ki yaad nahi shayad sadma jyada laga hai


Chachi - (mera coller pakadte hue) mera bada bhai woh kaha bol jaldi kaha hai woh kuch din se unka bhi pata nahi hai


Main - maar diya use aur uske biwi bete ko apne inhi hatho se mara hai jala kar


Yeh sunke woh apne sar pe hath rakh baith gayi aur rone lagi

Chachi - kyu akhir kyu kiya tumne yeh sab un logo ne kya bigada tha tumhara


Main - kya bigada tha to suno tumhare chote bhai ko mara tha tumhare bhai ne property ke lalach mein mera baap tha ristey mein woh insan jisko usne mara tha aur meri biwio pe gandi nazar dali thi un haramzado ne unhe zinda rehne ka haq nahi tha


Main yeh bolke hata hi tha ki chachi behosh ho gayi

Aarti - maa maa kya hua utho maa

Main - pani maro iske chehre pe uth jayegi

Kuch der mein chachi ko hosh aa gaya aur woh fir se rone lagi mummy prachi aur aarti bhi ro rahi thi

Main - kya hua yeh dard bardasht nahi ho raha chu chu chu chu abhi to just shuruhwat hai age age dekho kya hota hai

Maine yeh bol ke do chutki bajayi dusri chutki mein chachi behosh ho gayi aur maine vahan uth lawan mein unse thoda door akar asmaan ko dekhne laga

Aur sochne laga us waqt ko jab Meera aur Megha ke mummy papa ki death hui thi

# Flashback chota sa...



Yeh baat tab ki hai jab mujhe woh ghar chorhe 2 saal hue the tab ek hadsa hua tha hadsa kya sazish bolo jo ki Abhay jani ki Meera ke papa ke bade bhai ne rachi thi unho ne property ke lalach mein aakar

Hua kuch iss tarha tha ki Abhay aur Avantika (Meera Megha ke mummy papa) kisi kaam se dusre city gaye the idhar Abhay ka bada bhai apne bete ki beizzati ka badla laina chahta tha woh pal pal inpe nazar rakhta tha

Aur us din use woh mauka mil gya aur vapsi ke waqt raste mein usne in dono ka accident karwa diya aur rahi sahi kasar isne unko goli maar ke puri kar di taki woh zinda na rahe khair uske baad Esha ko bhi mauka mila uski sazish ka usne Abhay aur Avantika ka clone banaya aur bhej diya Meera ke ghar

Aur Esha ki sazish ka to apko pata hi hai kya thi usne clone iss liye banaye the ki sahi waqt ane pe woh unko use kare matlab maar kar mujhe emotional break karke meri powers cheen le aur hua bhi tha esa khair yeh tha Flashback

Mujhe us waqt is sab ka pata nahi chala kyu ki main khud mein uljha hua tha bussiness aur college fir Pihu yeh 3 cheez thi meri life mein aur Megha Abhay aur Avantika ki shakal tak ni dekhta tha main



Main abhi apni hi soch mein gun tha ka kisi ne mujhe akar hilaya aur yeh koi aur nahi Aarti thi jo ro rahi thi

Aarti - plz plz doctor ko bula do meri mummy ko hosh nahi aa raha

Main - pehle malik bol aur dusri baat tum logo ko pehle hi bola tha maine ki usko sambhalna tum logo ka kaam hai main doctor nahi bulaunga

Aarti - esa mat kariye malik plz bacha lijiye unhe


Main - ismein mera kya fyada

Aarti - sab kuch to le liya apne ab mere paas kuch bhi nahi hai

Main - hai tumhare paas kuch esa jo mujhe chahiye

Aarti - main such kehti hu mere paas kuch nahi hai malik

Main - tumhara yeh jism.. yeh jism chahiye mujhe

Aarti - tumhari himmat kese hui yeh baat kehne ki

Yeh bolke usne mujhe pe hath utha diya par maine woh hath vich mein rok liya aur apne dusre hath se use pakad ke apne aap se laga liya tightly

Main - tum is halat mein nahi ho ki mujh se is tune mein baat kar sako aur hath utha sako apne iss laheze ko control mein rakho aur han udhar dekho tumhari maa ko ek baar fir faisla karo maa chahiye ki yeh jism agle 30 mins mein woh akhiri sans le lengi agar unhe time pe treatment nahi mila to ab tumhari marzi hai

Aarti ne ek bar apni maa ki aur dekha aur fir meri taraf ek baar dekh ke usne gardan jhuka li uski ankhein num thi

Aarti - (dheemi awaaz mein) mujhe manzoor hai aap plz meri maa ko bacha lijiye

Main - yahi nahi main jab yahan chahu kahi bhi tumhe touch karunga kisi ke bhi sahmne agar tumne roka to tumhare mummy kisi ko bhi marne mein mujhe ek second bhi sochna nahi padega bolo manjur hai

Aarti - (usi lehze mein) ji manjur hai

Main - to theak hai fir aaj raat ko mere room mein aa jana


fir maine Diya ko awaaz lagayi wph kuch hi seconds mein mere paas aa gayi

Diya - ji sir

Main - Diya jao aur iski maa ko first aid do

Diya - ji sir

Yeh bolke woh ander gayi aur first aid le ayi yeh maine hi use diya tha jab woh ghar mein ayi thi

Aarti - lekin aap doctor ka bol...

Main - (uski baat kaatte hue) Diya allrounder hai fikar mat karo tumhari maa theak hp jayegi


Yeh bolke main ghar ke ander aa gya aur chutki bajayi jis se chachi behoshi se bahar aa gayi par gehri neend mein thi
 

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Update 47


"To bataye kya puchna chahti hai mrs. Rajput"

Chachi - kam se kam bade chote ka lihaz to karo


Main - yeh to lehaz se hi baat kar raha hu verna soch to main bhi raha hu tum logo ki hi bhasha use karu jese tum log meri Komal ke liye use karte the kaho to bulau ese


Chachi - nai nai rehne do ese hi theak hai kam se kam thodi izzat to hoti hai


Main - acha chorho bhi ab batao butau tumhare bhai ke bare mein


Chachi - han jaldi batao bohat saal ho gaye na woh milne aye na hi unki koi khabar

Main - bata to deta hu par seh nahi paogi (baaki logo ko) sambhal lena in mohatrama ko doctor ko nahi bulane wala

Chacha - esa kya batane wale ho

Main - to suno iske bhai saheb is duniya main nahi hai

Chachi - kya bakwas kar rahe ho esa nahi ho sakta

Main - jo such hai bata diya tumse jyada mujhe hai is baat ka dukh ke tumhare liye woh bhai the bs par mere liye baap the woh unho ne hi bachpan se pala posa hai unho ne hi mujhe tum jese darindon se bachaya tha mere dada ji ke kehne pe par kuch din pehle unke hi bhai ne jani ki tumhare bade bhai ne unhe property ke lalach mein marwa diya ab yeh sawal hoga tumhare mann mein ki bade bhai ko jab chote bhai ka pata malum tha to tumhe kyu nahi bataya to yeh jo property ka lalach hai na ache ache rishton ko khatam kar deta hai ek aur news du issi ke sath tumhe

Chachi - (rote hue) ab kya bacha hai sab kuch to cheen liya tumhari manhoosiyat ne

Main - itna sab sunne ke baad bhi tumhe tumhare bade bhai ki yaad nahi shayad sadma jyada laga hai


Chachi - (mera coller pakadte hue) mera bada bhai woh kaha bol jaldi kaha hai woh kuch din se unka bhi pata nahi hai


Main - maar diya use aur uske biwi bete ko apne inhi hatho se mara hai jala kar


Yeh sunke woh apne sar pe hath rakh baith gayi aur rone lagi

Chachi - kyu akhir kyu kiya tumne yeh sab un logo ne kya bigada tha tumhara


Main - kya bigada tha to suno tumhare chote bhai ko mara tha tumhare bhai ne property ke lalach mein mera baap tha ristey mein woh insan jisko usne mara tha aur meri biwio pe gandi nazar dali thi un haramzado ne unhe zinda rehne ka haq nahi tha


Main yeh bolke hata hi tha ki chachi behosh ho gayi

Aarti - maa maa kya hua utho maa

Main - pani maro iske chehre pe uth jayegi

Kuch der mein chachi ko hosh aa gaya aur woh fir se rone lagi mummy prachi aur aarti bhi ro rahi thi

Main - kya hua yeh dard bardasht nahi ho raha chu chu chu chu abhi to just shuruhwat hai age age dekho kya hota hai

Maine yeh bol ke do chutki bajayi dusri chutki mein chachi behosh ho gayi aur maine vahan uth lawan mein unse thoda door akar asmaan ko dekhne laga

Aur sochne laga us waqt ko jab Meera aur Megha ke mummy papa ki death hui thi

# Flashback chota sa...



Yeh baat tab ki hai jab mujhe woh ghar chorhe 2 saal hue the tab ek hadsa hua tha hadsa kya sazish bolo jo ki Abhay jani ki Meera ke papa ke bade bhai ne rachi thi unho ne property ke lalach mein aakar

Hua kuch iss tarha tha ki Abhay aur Avantika (Meera Megha ke mummy papa) kisi kaam se dusre city gaye the idhar Abhay ka bada bhai apne bete ki beizzati ka badla laina chahta tha woh pal pal inpe nazar rakhta tha

Aur us din use woh mauka mil gya aur vapsi ke waqt raste mein usne in dono ka accident karwa diya aur rahi sahi kasar isne unko goli maar ke puri kar di taki woh zinda na rahe khair uske baad Esha ko bhi mauka mila uski sazish ka usne Abhay aur Avantika ka clone banaya aur bhej diya Meera ke ghar

Aur Esha ki sazish ka to apko pata hi hai kya thi usne clone iss liye banaye the ki sahi waqt ane pe woh unko use kare matlab maar kar mujhe emotional break karke meri powers cheen le aur hua bhi tha esa khair yeh tha Flashback

Mujhe us waqt is sab ka pata nahi chala kyu ki main khud mein uljha hua tha bussiness aur college fir Pihu yeh 3 cheez thi meri life mein aur Megha Abhay aur Avantika ki shakal tak ni dekhta tha main



Main abhi apni hi soch mein gun tha ka kisi ne mujhe akar hilaya aur yeh koi aur nahi Aarti thi jo ro rahi thi

Aarti - plz plz doctor ko bula do meri mummy ko hosh nahi aa raha

Main - pehle malik bol aur dusri baat tum logo ko pehle hi bola tha maine ki usko sambhalna tum logo ka kaam hai main doctor nahi bulaunga

Aarti - esa mat kariye malik plz bacha lijiye unhe


Main - ismein mera kya fyada

Aarti - sab kuch to le liya apne ab mere paas kuch bhi nahi hai

Main - hai tumhare paas kuch esa jo mujhe chahiye

Aarti - main such kehti hu mere paas kuch nahi hai malik

Main - tumhara yeh jism.. yeh jism chahiye mujhe

Aarti - tumhari himmat kese hui yeh baat kehne ki

Yeh bolke usne mujhe pe hath utha diya par maine woh hath vich mein rok liya aur apne dusre hath se use pakad ke apne aap se laga liya tightly

Main - tum is halat mein nahi ho ki mujh se is tune mein baat kar sako aur hath utha sako apne iss laheze ko control mein rakho aur han udhar dekho tumhari maa ko ek baar fir faisla karo maa chahiye ki yeh jism agle 30 mins mein woh akhiri sans le lengi agar unhe time pe treatment nahi mila to ab tumhari marzi hai

Aarti ne ek bar apni maa ki aur dekha aur fir meri taraf ek baar dekh ke usne gardan jhuka li uski ankhein num thi

Aarti - (dheemi awaaz mein) mujhe manzoor hai aap plz meri maa ko bacha lijiye

Main - yahi nahi main jab yahan chahu kahi bhi tumhe touch karunga kisi ke bhi sahmne agar tumne roka to tumhare mummy kisi ko bhi marne mein mujhe ek second bhi sochna nahi padega bolo manjur hai

Aarti - (usi lehze mein) ji manjur hai

Main - to theak hai fir aaj raat ko mere room mein aa jana


fir maine Diya ko awaaz lagayi wph kuch hi seconds mein mere paas aa gayi

Diya - ji sir

Main - Diya jao aur iski maa ko first aid do

Diya - ji sir

Yeh bolke woh ander gayi aur first aid le ayi yeh maine hi use diya tha jab woh ghar mein ayi thi

Aarti - lekin aap doctor ka bol...

Main - (uski baat kaatte hue) Diya allrounder hai fikar mat karo tumhari maa theak hp jayegi



Yeh bolke main ghar ke ander aa gya aur chutki bajayi jis se chachi behoshi se bahar aa gayi par gehri neend mein thi
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Update 47


"To bataye kya puchna chahti hai mrs. Rajput"

Chachi - kam se kam bade chote ka lihaz to karo


Main - yeh to lehaz se hi baat kar raha hu verna soch to main bhi raha hu tum logo ki hi bhasha use karu jese tum log meri Komal ke liye use karte the kaho to bulau ese


Chachi - nai nai rehne do ese hi theak hai kam se kam thodi izzat to hoti hai


Main - acha chorho bhi ab batao butau tumhare bhai ke bare mein


Chachi - han jaldi batao bohat saal ho gaye na woh milne aye na hi unki koi khabar

Main - bata to deta hu par seh nahi paogi (baaki logo ko) sambhal lena in mohatrama ko doctor ko nahi bulane wala

Chacha - esa kya batane wale ho

Main - to suno iske bhai saheb is duniya main nahi hai

Chachi - kya bakwas kar rahe ho esa nahi ho sakta

Main - jo such hai bata diya tumse jyada mujhe hai is baat ka dukh ke tumhare liye woh bhai the bs par mere liye baap the woh unho ne hi bachpan se pala posa hai unho ne hi mujhe tum jese darindon se bachaya tha mere dada ji ke kehne pe par kuch din pehle unke hi bhai ne jani ki tumhare bade bhai ne unhe property ke lalach mein marwa diya ab yeh sawal hoga tumhare mann mein ki bade bhai ko jab chote bhai ka pata malum tha to tumhe kyu nahi bataya to yeh jo property ka lalach hai na ache ache rishton ko khatam kar deta hai ek aur news du issi ke sath tumhe

Chachi - (rote hue) ab kya bacha hai sab kuch to cheen liya tumhari manhoosiyat ne

Main - itna sab sunne ke baad bhi tumhe tumhare bade bhai ki yaad nahi shayad sadma jyada laga hai


Chachi - (mera coller pakadte hue) mera bada bhai woh kaha bol jaldi kaha hai woh kuch din se unka bhi pata nahi hai


Main - maar diya use aur uske biwi bete ko apne inhi hatho se mara hai jala kar


Yeh sunke woh apne sar pe hath rakh baith gayi aur rone lagi

Chachi - kyu akhir kyu kiya tumne yeh sab un logo ne kya bigada tha tumhara


Main - kya bigada tha to suno tumhare chote bhai ko mara tha tumhare bhai ne property ke lalach mein mera baap tha ristey mein woh insan jisko usne mara tha aur meri biwio pe gandi nazar dali thi un haramzado ne unhe zinda rehne ka haq nahi tha


Main yeh bolke hata hi tha ki chachi behosh ho gayi

Aarti - maa maa kya hua utho maa

Main - pani maro iske chehre pe uth jayegi

Kuch der mein chachi ko hosh aa gaya aur woh fir se rone lagi mummy prachi aur aarti bhi ro rahi thi

Main - kya hua yeh dard bardasht nahi ho raha chu chu chu chu abhi to just shuruhwat hai age age dekho kya hota hai

Maine yeh bol ke do chutki bajayi dusri chutki mein chachi behosh ho gayi aur maine vahan uth lawan mein unse thoda door akar asmaan ko dekhne laga

Aur sochne laga us waqt ko jab Meera aur Megha ke mummy papa ki death hui thi

# Flashback chota sa...



Yeh baat tab ki hai jab mujhe woh ghar chorhe 2 saal hue the tab ek hadsa hua tha hadsa kya sazish bolo jo ki Abhay jani ki Meera ke papa ke bade bhai ne rachi thi unho ne property ke lalach mein aakar

Hua kuch iss tarha tha ki Abhay aur Avantika (Meera Megha ke mummy papa) kisi kaam se dusre city gaye the idhar Abhay ka bada bhai apne bete ki beizzati ka badla laina chahta tha woh pal pal inpe nazar rakhta tha

Aur us din use woh mauka mil gya aur vapsi ke waqt raste mein usne in dono ka accident karwa diya aur rahi sahi kasar isne unko goli maar ke puri kar di taki woh zinda na rahe khair uske baad Esha ko bhi mauka mila uski sazish ka usne Abhay aur Avantika ka clone banaya aur bhej diya Meera ke ghar

Aur Esha ki sazish ka to apko pata hi hai kya thi usne clone iss liye banaye the ki sahi waqt ane pe woh unko use kare matlab maar kar mujhe emotional break karke meri powers cheen le aur hua bhi tha esa khair yeh tha Flashback

Mujhe us waqt is sab ka pata nahi chala kyu ki main khud mein uljha hua tha bussiness aur college fir Pihu yeh 3 cheez thi meri life mein aur Megha Abhay aur Avantika ki shakal tak ni dekhta tha main



Main abhi apni hi soch mein gun tha ka kisi ne mujhe akar hilaya aur yeh koi aur nahi Aarti thi jo ro rahi thi

Aarti - plz plz doctor ko bula do meri mummy ko hosh nahi aa raha

Main - pehle malik bol aur dusri baat tum logo ko pehle hi bola tha maine ki usko sambhalna tum logo ka kaam hai main doctor nahi bulaunga

Aarti - esa mat kariye malik plz bacha lijiye unhe


Main - ismein mera kya fyada

Aarti - sab kuch to le liya apne ab mere paas kuch bhi nahi hai

Main - hai tumhare paas kuch esa jo mujhe chahiye

Aarti - main such kehti hu mere paas kuch nahi hai malik

Main - tumhara yeh jism.. yeh jism chahiye mujhe

Aarti - tumhari himmat kese hui yeh baat kehne ki

Yeh bolke usne mujhe pe hath utha diya par maine woh hath vich mein rok liya aur apne dusre hath se use pakad ke apne aap se laga liya tightly

Main - tum is halat mein nahi ho ki mujh se is tune mein baat kar sako aur hath utha sako apne iss laheze ko control mein rakho aur han udhar dekho tumhari maa ko ek baar fir faisla karo maa chahiye ki yeh jism agle 30 mins mein woh akhiri sans le lengi agar unhe time pe treatment nahi mila to ab tumhari marzi hai

Aarti ne ek bar apni maa ki aur dekha aur fir meri taraf ek baar dekh ke usne gardan jhuka li uski ankhein num thi

Aarti - (dheemi awaaz mein) mujhe manzoor hai aap plz meri maa ko bacha lijiye

Main - yahi nahi main jab yahan chahu kahi bhi tumhe touch karunga kisi ke bhi sahmne agar tumne roka to tumhare mummy kisi ko bhi marne mein mujhe ek second bhi sochna nahi padega bolo manjur hai

Aarti - (usi lehze mein) ji manjur hai

Main - to theak hai fir aaj raat ko mere room mein aa jana


fir maine Diya ko awaaz lagayi wph kuch hi seconds mein mere paas aa gayi

Diya - ji sir

Main - Diya jao aur iski maa ko first aid do

Diya - ji sir

Yeh bolke woh ander gayi aur first aid le ayi yeh maine hi use diya tha jab woh ghar mein ayi thi

Aarti - lekin aap doctor ka bol...

Main - (uski baat kaatte hue) Diya allrounder hai fikar mat karo tumhari maa theak hp jayegi



Yeh bolke main ghar ke ander aa gya aur chutki bajayi jis se chachi behoshi se bahar aa gayi par gehri neend mein thi
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