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Fantasy Lucifer- The fallen angel(completed)

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Lone survivor

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WRITER’s NOTE

School times se likhne ka bahut shauk tha mujhe mostly poems hi likhta tha. School me hi ek ladki mili bahut pyaari thi. College ke 3rd year tak relationship chala fir vo chali gaye door. Uske baad kabhi socha nahi tha dobara kuch likunga. Bilkul man hi nahi karta tha. Nashe to jaise jindagi ban gaye the. Pehle bhi nashe karta tha lekin uske baad jada ho gaye. Akela rahna acha lagne lagega aur dheere dheere sab door hote chale gaye. Main akela hi bacha tha. Tab kahi se xf ka pata chala aur pata nahi kyu aise hi ek raat pehli story ka first update post kar diya. Ek medium mil gaya tha mujhe kuch share karne ka aur acha bhi lagne laga tha. Dheere dheere vapas likhna start kiya aur es baar stories. Xf par kuch stories likhi fir vo band hua to yaha aa gaya. Aur vohi silsila yaha bhi kamyaab raha. Aap sabko sayad idea nahi hoga ki jo thoda bahut interact hota hai humara yaha vo kitna important ho sakta hai kisi ki life me. Es waqt mere pass almost sab kuch hai lekin agar kisi ko kuch share karna chahu to aisa person nahi hai esliye beech beech me kuch updates me apni situation likh deta hu to acha lagta hai. I hope ki humara sath aise hi aage bana rahe.

Ek mew story ka dimag me kuch idea hai lekin kab start hogi eske liye abhi sure nahi hu

May be main kuch dino ke liye rehab chala jau ya fir kuch aur mil jaye sath chalne ke. Lets see

In the end i want to thank each and everyone of you guys who has supported me and gave me so much love. Means a lot

Thank you so much guys. Jaldi hi milte hai ek new story ke sath tab tak ke liye 👋
 

Yamraaj

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UPDATE-27
*** tumhe vaha ke logo ko bachane ke liye bejha tha maarne ke liye nahi
Lucifer- yudh me jaane jati hi hai lekin sabse jaruri hota hai yudh jeetna

1- tumhe bina etna khoon kharaba kiye bhi jeet sakte the
Lucifer- logo ke bich ek udharan (example) banana bhi jaruri hota hai
Ab koe galat kaam karne se pehle 100 baar sochega

1- jo tumne kiya vo bhi galat tha bahut galat, etne masoom log nahi marne chahiye the
Lucifer- maine nahi maara kisi ko
Main vaha pahucha usse pehle hi vo mar chuke the

1- kyuki tum nashe karke pade hue the tumhe hosh hi nahi tha kisi chhij ka
Lucifer- aapko to tha na?
To fir aapne kyu nahi bachaya kisi ko?
Aap to yaha bathe bathe bacha sakte the na?

1- mujhse sawal karne jitne bade nahi hue ho tum
Lucifer- aur sayad kabhi hunga bhi nahi, ye jitni jaane gaye hai ye meri vajah se nahi aapki vajah se gaye hai

1- lucifer bhulo mat tum kis se baat Kar rahe ho?
Lucifer- yehi ek chhij to nahi bhulta main kabhi bhi
Kyu na aisa kiya jaye aap mujhe ek lok de do aur us par main raaj karunga aur baki par aap fir dekhte hai kon jada kamyaab rahta hai

1- tumhe lok dene ka matlab khoon ki nadiya bahana
Lucifer- kahi aapko dar to nahi ki aap mujhse haar jaoge?

1- bahut dar hai mujhe tumse
Jab se tum paida hue ho tab se mujhe dar hi laga rahta hai
Lucifer- sun ke acha laga

1- ab jao yaha se
Tumhe jo karna tha vo to tum kar hi chuke ho jao
Aur lucifer vaha se chala jata hai****

Ashmita- lucifer tum fir so gaye kya?
Lucifer- hu?hmm vo aaj kal nind nahi aati raat ko

Ashmita- tum theek to ho?
Lucifer- hmm

Ashmita- tum kafi dino se bol rahe ho ki raat ko soya nahi raat ko soya nahi
Kya ho raha hai tumhre sath?
Lucifer- sapne aate hai

Ashmita- real lagte hai?
Lucifer- hmm

Ashmita- ye to achi baat hai
Kya pata tumhri yaaddast vapas aa rahi ho
Lucifer- jaise sapne aate hai unhe dekh ke lagta hai na hi aaye to acha hai

Ashmita- matlab?
Lucifer- matlab ki mera ....

Ashmita- kya?
Lucifer- kuch nahi bas ache sapne nahi hai

Ashmita- vo to dekhne wale ke mind set par hota hai
Lucifer- tum kuch jada free nahi ho rahi mere sath?

Ashmita- tumhe acha nahi lag raha?
Lucifer- mujhe to tum mere bed par hogi tab hi acha lagega

Ashmita- ye bhi tumhre sapne me hi hoga
Lucifer- sapne me to ho chuka hai bahut baar, detail me batau kya?

Ashmita- nahi koe jarurat nahi hai lekin tumne to bola tha ki tumhre sapne real jaise lagte hai?
Lucifer- ha to ye bhi real me hua hoga kya pata tumne mere sath kuch kiya jo hum main nashe me tha aur ab mujhe yaad nahi aa raha

Ashmita- tum kuch bhi bol dete ho
Hai na?
Lucifer- jada chhije dil me nahi rakhni chahiye

Ashmita- chalo fir chalte hai
Lucifer- chalo aaj tumhe God me bithaunga

Ashmita- hu?
Lucifer- tabhi to driving sikhaogi

Ashmita- main side wali seat se hi bata dungi tumhe
Lucifer- fir mujhe nahi sikhni
Kahi thuk gaye to mere pass paise bhi nahi hai usse thik karane ke

Ashmita- thuk gaye to main theek kara lungi, tension na lo tum aur jo etna powerful hai uske liye etni chhoti chhij sayad mayne nahi rakhti hogi
Lucifer- mere liye rakhti hai
Tum ya to mujhe gaud me bath ke sikhaogi ya fir maan lo ki tum apni deal tod rahi ho

Ashmita- ye kya jabardasti hai?
Lucifer- koe force thodi kar raha hai tumhe?
Mana kar do

Ashmita- tum mujhe touch nahi karoge
Lucifer- thoda dimag laga liya karo agar hai to
Ashmita- please maan jao na
Jid nahi karte

Lucifer- main bahut jiddi ladka hu esliye nahi manunga
Ashmita- theek hai lekin koe badtamiji nahi karoge tum

Lucifer- aaj tak kari hai?
Ashmita- main ginau?
Lucifer- nahi jarurat nahi hai

Fir dono niche parking me jate hai aur ashmita kahi shant si jagah par le jati hai ghadi
Ashmita- yaha theek hai
Aajao aur khud niche chali gaye
Pehle lucifer batha aur ashmita bahut dhyan se uski God me bath gaye bilkul aage ki side me

Ashmita- ye break, ye accelerator, aur ye clutch, gear aise lagenge aur dheere dheere clutch chodna
Abhi accelerator par pair mat rakhna
Lucifer- ye to bahut easy hai
Aur seat belt lagae dono ko ek hi jiski vajah se dono aapas me bilkul chhipak gaye

Ashmita- thoda piche hoke batho na
Lucifer ne car start ki first gear lagaya aur ashmita ko kamar se pakad ke bilkul apne upar batha liya aur accelerator daba diya
Bechari ko sambhalne ka bilkul bhi moka nahi mila aur thoda dar se sikud bhi gaye

Ashmita- aaram se
Maine bola tha na accelerator mat dabana
Lucifer- shant hoke bath jao
Aur ek hath se uske kamar ko pakad liya aur dusre hath se drive karne laga

Ashmita- lucifer dono hatho se chalao
Accident ho jayega
Lucifer- mujhe ek hath relax rakhna acha lagta hai aur ashmita ke pet wali side par hath chalane laga

Ashmita- lucifer please mat karo
Tumne bola tha tum kuch harkat nahi karoge
Lucifer- main kya kar raha hu?

Ashmita- apna hath hatao meri kamar se
Lucifer- to kaha rakhu?

Ashmita- mujhe nahi pata bas meri kamar se hatao
Lucifer ne kamar se hath hatao aur ashmita ki thighs par rakh diya aur halka halka sahlane laga

Ashmita- gear change karo
Aur lucifer ke hath par apna hath rakh diya taki vo movement na kar sake
Lucifer- tum sundar to ho no doubt

Ashmita kuch nahi boli
Aur uske ballo ko smell karne laga

Ashmita- tum kya kar rahe ho?
Ruk jao nahi to main tumse kabhi baat bhi nahi karungi
Ashmita thodi jor se boli aur lucifer piche ho gaya, apna hath bhi hata liya
Kuch der shanti se lucifer ne drive ki fir ashmita boli ki aaj ke liye bahut hai baki kal dekhenge
Eske baad ashmita kuch nahi boli
Lucifer ne bahut kosis ki baat karne ki lekin ashmita ignore karti rahi sayad usse lucifer ka behavior acha nahi laga tha

Ashmita ke ghar pahuch kar
Lucifer- soch raha hu aaj dinner yahi karke jau
Ashmita- koe jarurt nahi hai
Apne ghar kha lena ya fir kahi kothe par chale jana vaha paiso me sab milta hai aur ashmita gusse me andar chali gaye

Yaha jitna lucifer ne socha tha usse kahi jada gusse me dikh rahi thi ashmita lekin ab vo kuch kar nahi sakta tha esliye chhup chhap vaha se chala gaya

Vo apne flat pahucha to bahar hi inaaya bathi hue thi sayad ussi ka wait karte karte stairs par hi bath gaye
Lucifer ne usse dekha fir ignore karke gate khola aur andar chala gaya bina gate lock kiye
Uske piche piche inaaya bhi aagaye aur usne gate lock kar diya tha

Inaaya- mujhe kuch nahi pata chala
Lucifer- mujhe pata tha
Tum jaise sirf apne baap ke paiso par nachna jante ho

Inaaya- maine bahut try kiya samjhe
Lucifer- yaha uchhi aawaz me baat karne ki jarurat nahi hai
Apne bade se mansion me jao aur jis par man kare chhila lekin yaha nahi

Inaaya- meri family me kisi ko dard mat dena, maine tumhra kaam nahi kiya esliye dard bhi mujhe hi milna chahiye
Lucifer- ha to tumhe hi milega aur kisko milega?

Inaaya- meri hi body par milna chahiye
Lucifer- dard body par nahi dil par diya jata hai tabhi vo bhulaya nahi ja pata

Inaaya- I'm came here to do anything
Lucifer- ha?
Anything?
Tune kya samjh liya hai mujhe?
Kahi bahar jake gutter me muh maar le lekin mera naam kharab mat kar

Inaaya- tumhe meri jitni bejjati karni hai kar lo lekin family ko kuch mat karna
Lucifer- ja kiya maaf tujhko aur teri family ko, ashmita ne bola hai esliye jane de raha hu
Dobara mere raste me mat aana

Inaaya- ashmita ne kya bola?
Lucifer- vo janana tumhre liye jaruri nahi hai ab mere ghar se jaldi se nikal ja mujhe ghutan ho rahi hai tumhe dekh kar

Inaaya- meri family ko kuch nahi hoga na
Lucifer- main kuch nahi karunga teri family ko aur baki logo ka maine theka nahi le rakha ab jaldi se nikal ja kahi mera dimag fire aur aaj tera phool khila du nikal le
Lucifer gusse me bola aur inaaya vaha se bhag gaye

Fir bhai apne ne chilam jalaye aur dusri dunia ki sar karne nikal gaya

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Aadmi- boss jo aadmi bejhe the vo bhi gayab ho gaye hai
Malik- pata hai mujhe

Aadmi- mujhe to koe local gang ka kaam lag raha hai
Malik- local gang humse panga lene se pehle bahut baar sochegi

Aadmi- to fir kon ho sakta hai?
Malik- ye kisi gang ka kaam nahi ho sakta, mujhe lagta hai ki ashmita ke personal guards ne uthaya hoga

Aadmi- lekin unko pata kaise chala?
Malik- paise aur power dono hai unke pass, ye pata karna bilkul bhi muskil kaam nahi hai

Aadmi- ab hume kya karna chahiye?
Malik- es baar ashmita se door raho lekin vaha jake apne aadmiyo ka pata karne ki kosis karo

Aadmi- boss naag naam ka banda sabse badi gang chalata hai vaha aur pehle vo ek chhota mota gunda hua karta tha
Malik- us par bhi najar rakho lekin door se, es baar koe bhi pass nahi jayega

Aadmi- thik hai boss
Malik- jisne bhi mere aadmiyo ka sikar kiya hai unko chhodunga nahi
Kutto ki maut marunga ek ek ko
So lo thode din aur chain se lekin ye chain jada din nahi rahega ye mera wada hai

***
Lucifer tum fir so gaye?
Kya tumhe main yaad nahi aati kya?
Kya sach me tum mujhe bhul gaye ho?
Mujhe vapas lene aajau lucifer
Ab tumhre bina mera man nahi lagta
Nahi raha jata ab tumhre bina lucifer aajao vapas***

**** lucifer-mat jao tum mujhe chhod kar, main nahi jee paunga tumhre bina
" ye sab tumhri hi vajah se hua hai lucifer, tum khud ko bhul gaye aur sath me humara rista mar gaya
Lucifer- main sab theek kar dunga
Sab se maafi maang lunga, tum na jao
" ab kuch nahi ho sakta, us sraap ki vajah se hum kabhi sath nahi rah payenge, mujhe jane do lucifer"
Lucifer- har chhij ka tod hota hai eska bhi hoga, main pitaji se puchunga vo to kuch bhi kar sakte hai vo jarur mujhe es sraap se mukt kar denge
" sraap se mukt koe nahi kar sakta lucifer, jab tak humara sareer hai tab tak vo sraap humare sath hi rahega"
Lucifer- to fir main es sareer ko hi khatam kar deta hu ahhhhhhhhhhh

Aur lucifer fir se jaag gaya apne sapne se....
Bahut hi mast update h bhai....
 
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Hmm lucifer kosis toh kar raha h sudharne ki ha ha 🤣🤣🤣
Par adat he aisi h pahli bi punishment usko uske gamand aur takat ki wajah se mili thi aur ab pata nahi kitne salo tak khud ko dhundne ki wajah se irritated behaviour uske andar agaya
Par uski bi kya galti itne salo se bechare akela jo h....
Bhai uski hi galtiya tha sari lekin abhi situation alag hai aur frustrated irritated wali baat aapki bilkul sahi hai
 
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Hmmm ye acha h usai dheere dheere kuch memories toh dikh rahi h but vo usko brahm lagta h
But kabhi na kabhi toh usai realise hoga he ki wo real memories h
Aur kya baat h lounde ne ashmita ko godh mai baitha he liya ye acha h ..
Par sararat karke naraj kar diya but wo uski adat h 🤣🤣🤣🤣
Bina pange liye
Bina irritate kiye
Bina chilam funke
Uska din he ni banta h...... 😂😹😹🤣😹
Haha thank you so much bhai aur aapne lucifer ki aadate bilkul sahi pakdi hai
 
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