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Fantasy Lucifer- The fallen angel(completed)

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Lone survivor

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WRITER’s NOTE

School times se likhne ka bahut shauk tha mujhe mostly poems hi likhta tha. School me hi ek ladki mili bahut pyaari thi. College ke 3rd year tak relationship chala fir vo chali gaye door. Uske baad kabhi socha nahi tha dobara kuch likunga. Bilkul man hi nahi karta tha. Nashe to jaise jindagi ban gaye the. Pehle bhi nashe karta tha lekin uske baad jada ho gaye. Akela rahna acha lagne lagega aur dheere dheere sab door hote chale gaye. Main akela hi bacha tha. Tab kahi se xf ka pata chala aur pata nahi kyu aise hi ek raat pehli story ka first update post kar diya. Ek medium mil gaya tha mujhe kuch share karne ka aur acha bhi lagne laga tha. Dheere dheere vapas likhna start kiya aur es baar stories. Xf par kuch stories likhi fir vo band hua to yaha aa gaya. Aur vohi silsila yaha bhi kamyaab raha. Aap sabko sayad idea nahi hoga ki jo thoda bahut interact hota hai humara yaha vo kitna important ho sakta hai kisi ki life me. Es waqt mere pass almost sab kuch hai lekin agar kisi ko kuch share karna chahu to aisa person nahi hai esliye beech beech me kuch updates me apni situation likh deta hu to acha lagta hai. I hope ki humara sath aise hi aage bana rahe.

Ek mew story ka dimag me kuch idea hai lekin kab start hogi eske liye abhi sure nahi hu

May be main kuch dino ke liye rehab chala jau ya fir kuch aur mil jaye sath chalne ke. Lets see

In the end i want to thank each and everyone of you guys who has supported me and gave me so much love. Means a lot

Thank you so much guys. Jaldi hi milte hai ek new story ke sath tab tak ke liye 👋
 

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Payal bechari ki Lucifer ko thode se gusse me dekh ker halat kharab ho gayi or kahi devil wala gussa dekh le tab kia hoga
Tab tak usse adat pad jayegi
Budhi Amma n ek dam sahi baat boli
(kisi par yakeen rakho ya nahi lekin kabhi khud par se viswas mat tootne dena
Aakhir tak tumhre sath jo khada hoga vo tum hi honge beta)
Facts
Behad shaandaar lajawab update bhai
Thank you bhai
 

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Bechara Lucii buri tarah fans chuka hai ab to, lagta to yahi hai kuch bahut hi jayada bura hone waala hai, magar kya? Iss janam mein Ashmita hi to wo balidaan nahi Dene waali hai jisse sab kuch badal jaayega, kahin kasam ko tootne se bachane ke liye wo kudh ko sacrifice to nahi kar degi jisse sab kuch badal jaayega?
Agar aisa hua to bahut bura hoga bhai
 

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Inaaya aur Lucifer ka finally milan ho hi gaya... Shayad ek baar fir Lucifer ka apni premika se bichhadne ka safar bhi yahaan shuru ho hi chuka hai...
Sayad
Mujhe abhi bhi lagta hai ki Aghor waala chapter samaapt nahi hua hai, jo bhavishyavani Mitika ne ki thi, aakhir uska poora hona baaki jo hai... But, abhi ke liye Lucifer ki zindagi mei Inaaya roopi ek thehrav zaroor aaya hai...
Kitni der rahega ye important hai
Payal waale scene se saaf pata chalta hai ki is waqt Lucifer ki kya haalat hai... Beshak, wo baat baat par kahani ki sabhi ladkiyon se flirt karta hai, hamesha khud ko khush dikhane ka prayas bhi karta hai parantu ismein koyi doraye nahin ki wo bilkul bhi khush nahi hai... Lucifer ko agar is samay kisi cheez ki darkar hai to wo hai mukti, jo use kab aur kaise milegi ye koyi nahi jaanta...
Agar milegi to bhi aasani se to nahi milegi
Inaaya aur Lucifer, dono hi ek doosre se spasht roop se behad pyaar karte hain aur is milan ke baad us pyaar mein aur bhi gehrayi aa jaayegi... Lucifer ka uski care karna aur uski baat maankar poora din uske saath rehna, without a doubt achha khaasa impact pada hoga Inaaya par iska... Inaaya nahin jaanti hai ki Lucifer ne Suresh ko kya saza di hai, but usne keh diya hai ki wo pata karke rahegi... Dekhte hain wo ismein kaamyab hoti hai ya nahi... Aur agar hoti hai to kya uski Ashmita se baat hogi is baare mein...
Jada effect to nahi padna chahiye aur mujhe nahi lagta vo lucifer ko kuch bhi bolegi es bare me but ashmita ko sayad
Ashmita ne office jaana kuchh dinon se band kar diya hai, to be precise, Suresh ke saath jab se wo sab hua, shayad hi wo ghar se nikli ho... Lucifer ne Naag se jo kaha tha wo sach hota nazar aa raha hai, ab dekhna ye hai ki kya Ashmita sachmein poori tarah se toot chuki hai ya fir wo dobara khadi hogi aur Lucifer ke kahe mutabik sabko maat dekar unchaiyon par pahunch jaayegi... Lucifer ne bhi bhale hi wo sab kar diya ho, par Ashmita ki kami use bhi khal rahi hai... Wo achhi tarah jaanta hai ki shayad ab Ashmita us se kabhi baat tak na kare, aur unka relation kabhi bhi normal na ho... Dekhte hain kya hota hai aage...
Dono ek dusre ke liye bahut important the to jahir si baat hai effect to dono par hi pad rahe honge
Idhar Payal ne jo bharsak mehnat ki thi uska fal milna shuru ho gaya hai... Wo saare products dheere – dheere kar bikne shuru ho chuke hain... Aur isi ke chalte Payal ne Lucifer ko dinner par invite kiya tha... Lucifer ke achanak gusse mein aa jaane se Payal bhi seham gayi thi par wo bhi achhi tarah jaanti hai ki Lucifer kisi bohot badi pareshani se joojh raha hai... Abhi tak mujhe lag raha hai ki Payal, Shreya ka reincarnation hai, parantu gaur karne waali baat ye hai ki dono ke character mein kaafi antar nazar aa raha hai... Ek similarity zaroor dikhi hai, donon hi logon ke prati apne mann mein daya ki bhaavna rakhti hain iske alawa kuchh khaas nahin...
Kya pata ek ki Startin aur dusre ki ending dikh rahi ho?
Anisha apni Mom ke saath shopping par gayi thi aur wahin unki mulakat Tara se ho gayi... Anisha ki Mom ko bhi pata chal chuka hai ki Anisha ne Lucifer ke kaaran apni job chhod di thi... Unka is baat par naaraz hona banta tha, Anisha ne bhi jo kuchh apne aur Lucifer ke relation ke baare mein kaha, I think zaroor Anisha ki Mom par uska kuchh to asar hua hoga... Wo pehle hi Lucifer mein kaafi interested rahi hain, dekhte hain inki kahani kab tak saamne aati hai... Abhi ke liye Anisha ne office dobara join kar liya hai, Tara ke hi kehne par... Interesting rahega dekhna ki jab Ashmita office lautegi to wo Anisha se kya kahegi aur kya wo Lucifer ko office mein bane rehne degi, ya nahi..?
Anisha kya kahegi ya ashmita? Dono ka hi dekhna padega
Alia aur Maadhuri ka ek scene bhi aaya tha beech mein... Alia chhoti zaroor hai par uski samajh aur baatein bade badon ko maat den de... Maadhuri aur Lucifer ki shaadi, kewal Alia hi ye soch sakti hai, mujhe nahin lagta ki Lucifer aur Maadhuri ke beech kabhi kuchh hoga... Kya pata ho bhi jaaye, par at the moment mujhe Lucifer aur Maadhuri ke beech kuchh bhi hota bazar nahin aa raha hai... Beharhal, Alia is definitely the most loveable character of this story!
Mujhe to lag raha hai hota
Past scenes mein ek Shreya to ek Maya ka scene dekhne ko mila... Shreya ke saath Lucifer ka relation kaisa panpa hoga, ye apne aap mein ek mystery hai... They seem to be completely opposite of each other, obviously opposite attracts, but still, donon ke beech pyaar, would be interesting to read the past scenes of these two... Maya ka bhi concept kaafi pehle hi samajh aa gaya tha... She's an angel and so are her thoughts, chahe vyakti ya soul kaisi bhi ho, usne kitne bhi paap kiye hon, Maya ka maan na yahi hai ki unhe saza se nahi balki samjhane se sudhara jaa sakta hai, but we all very well know what Lucifer thinks about these souls...
But don't you think Shreya aur Maya ki thinking same same si hai?
Budhi Amma ki baatein ek baar fir to the point thi... Experience is definitely one hell of a thing, Lucifer ko kaise samjhana hai wo bohot achhi tarah se jaanti hain & I think unhone jo kuchh bhi kaha, yadi Lucifer unhe maane to uski problems solve to nahin hongi par uske liye mushkilen aasan zaroor ho jaayengi... Let's see ki jaise Lucifer ne indirectly kaha, Supreme kuchh karenge ya nahin...
Kya karega Supreme aur kya karega lucifer?
Sabhi Updates bohot hi khubsurat the bhai... The scenes between Inaaya abd Lucifer were the highlights, as they were written phenomenally well...
Thank you bhai
Wahin an intezar hai to bas Ashmita ka, dekhte hain Lucifer ka aage aur kis kis cheez se saamna hoga...
Abhi to suruvat hai bas
Outstanding Updates Bhai & Waiting For Next...
Thank you bhai much love to you
 

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UPDATE-105
Lucifer ashmita ke cabin me batha batha sabko kaam samjha raha tha ki cabin ka gate khula aur ashmita under enter hue

Black one piece dress me vo bahut katilnayak lag rahi thi aur aaj uske chehre par vohi gussa tha jo lucifer ke milne se pehle rahta tha

Vo jaise hi ander aaye sab sidhe khade ho kar usse morning wish karne lage aur lucifer jaha tha vahi batha raha
Usne kuch bhi karne ki koe kosis nahi ki

Ashmita- anisha where is that design?
Tum ne bejha clients ko?
Anisha- sorry Ma'am kal time nahi mila
Abhi bejh deti hu

Ashmita- kal kaha pahad tood rahi thi tum?
Office me hi thi ya office time me apne boyfriend se milne chali gaye thi?
Anisha- I'm sorry Ma'am

Ashmita- Roy 4 din tumse ek ppt tayar nahi hue abhi tak?
Roy- Ma'am kuch issue aa rahe the
Main kafi baar try kar chuka hu

Ashmita- mujhe excuse nahi sun ne hai kaam dekhna hai
Aur tum vo project file ka kya hua?
Ladka- Ma'am vo...

Ashmita- hua ya nahi ye batao bas
Ladka- nahi Ma'am

Ashmita- agar aaj shayam tak mujhe sare kaam complete nahi mile to koe aur job doond lena apne liye
I'm sure tum me se kuch ne to pehle hi doond li hogi( anisha ko dekh kar)

Ashmita- ab mera muh kya dekh rahe ho?
Get the hell out of my office
Aur sab vaha se bhag gaye

Lucifer- you looking hot
Ashmita- lucifer tum bhi ja sakte ho

Lucifer- main kaha jau?
Main to yahi rahta tha na
Ashmita- ab se nahi rahoge

Lucifer- tujhe apna promise yaad nahi hai kya?
Ashmita- sab kuch yaad hai esliye hi laat maar kar nahi bhaga rahi hi

Lucifer- tu bhaga sakti hai
Main chala jaunga bina kuch bole
Ashmita- chala ja fir

Lucifer- theek hai
Aur lucifer apni chair se khada hua aur bahar ki taraf chala gaya

Uske jate hi ashmita ke jo aashu usko dekh kar aaye the vo girne lage aur vo rote hue bathroom me bhag gaye

Bahut der tak vo vaha roti rahi aur jab aashu aane band ho gaye to apna face saaf karke pehle wale attitude me hi aakar vapas apna kaam karne lagi

Lucifer vaha se nikal fir kuch yaad aaya to vapas ashmita ke cabin me chala gaya

Agar vo jaldi aajata to ashmita ko rote hue bhi dekh leta thoda time laga diya usse aane me

Ashmita- ab kya?
Lucifer- tumhri car ki keys dene aaya tha
Ab kya hi matlab enhe apne pass rakhne ka

Ashmita ke baap ke sath usne chahe kuch bhi kiya ho lekin ashmita pyaar us se abhi bhi utna hi karti thi aur jaise hi lucifer ne keys ashmita ke samne wali table par rakhi uska dil fir se rone laga aur ab vo vapas lucifer ke Jane ka wait karne lagi

Lucifer- Rone se problem theek nahi hoti
Vo hume aur kamjor bana dete hai esliye strong ban ki mere jaise 1000 bhi aakar chale jaye to tujhe fark na pade
Etna bol kar lucifer vaha se chala gaya aur ashmita vapas se rone lag gaye

Uske baap ne sab chhod diya tha
Usse laga tha ki lucifer ki vajah se sayad inaaya bhi us se thodi bahut bolne lag jaye ya fir kabhi kabhi mulakat to ho hi jayegi lekin ab aisa kuch nahi ho sakta

Lucifer bhi bahut door chala gaya tha aur inaaya bhi
Ab vo firse akeli ho gaye thi jaise lucifer humesha raha tha bilkul vaise hi bas Tara thi uske pass aur kuch nahi

Lucifer office se bahar nikla aur naag ke farmhouse chala gaya
Vaha aaj sirf naag hi tha aur koe nahi

Lucifer- baki sab kaha gaye?
Naag- maine pure sehar me laga diye

Lucifer- kyu?
Naag- bhai abhi suresh ko pela aur vo malik bhi bacha hua hai aur pata nahi kab konsi musibat aajaye
Esliye pehle se prepare hona better hai na

Lucifer- aur koe ander se tujhe pel ke chala gaya to?
Naag- uske liye aap ho to?
Aapne hi bola tha trade kar loge meri life ko aap

Lucifer- aisi chhije bahut yaad rahti hai tujhe?
Aur behanchod main etne dino se bol raha hu arjun ke bare me pata kar de vo tujhe yaad nahi hogi?
Hai na?
Naag- bhai uske bare me kuch nahi pata chal paya
Maine gand tak ka jor laga liya

Lucifer- jor hi lagaya hai na?
Gand marae to nahi na
Naag- mara bhi lenge agar kuch pata chale to

Lucifer- mara lenge nahi mara lega tu
Bc mujhe kyu lapet raha hai?
Naag- aaj aap din me hi aagaye?

Lucifer- tujhe koe dikkat hai?
Naag- mujhe kya dikkat hogi?

Lucifer- to fir puch kyu raha hai?
Madhuri ma'am yaad hai tujhe?
Naag- ha hai na bhai

Lucifer- unke pati ke bare me pata kar
Dekh kaha rahta hai aur kya karta hai
Uski kamjori kya hai aur kitni bhasad machae hue hai usne
Sab mujhe proof ke sath chahiye
Naag- kya naam hai uska?

Lucifer- yaad nahi hai
Tu dund le
Naag- thokna bhi hai kya?

Lucifer- abhi nahi
Pehle ma'am ko unka beta mile fir thokenge aur vo bhi tarike se
Naag- main karta hu pata

Lucifer- jaldi karna
Mansi kaha hai?
Naag- uske ghar

Lucifer- vaha kya kar rahi hai?
Naag- bhai ghar hai uska

Lucifer- to?
Tu kya tab tak muthiya marega?
Naag- har chhij sex thodi hoti hai bhai

Lucifer- sab kuch sex hi hota hai
Naag- uske mumma papa aagaye the to vo vapas chali gaye

Lucifer- theek hai
Main chalta hu ab
Naag- ruk jao bhai
Saraab peete hai

Lucifer- kyu tere baap ki shadi hai?
Naag- aap peene ke liye reason dund rahe ho?

Lucifer- mujhe bahut kaam hai
Tu bhi apna kaam kar aur ab mujhe jaldi jaldi result chahiye nahi to teri gand ke sath bahut bura wala khelunga main
Naag- jee bhai****

Past

Guruji- hum kyu kar rahe hai aisa?
Supreme- kyuki unhe apno se bhichdane ka dard maloom hona chahiye

Guruji- us se koe fayda to hoga nahi
Supreme- hoga fayda jarur hoga

Guruji- kaise?
Supreme- vo maine soch liya hai

Guruji- kya kare fir?
Supreme- dikhao reality aur kya?
Kuch bhi over nahi hona chahiye jindagi me
Sab kuch ek limit me karo

Guruji- main samjha nahi
Supreme- samjhoge bhi nahi

Guruji- hum ne lucifer ke sath pehle hi bahut galat kiya hai aur ab ye sab?
Supreme- yehi chahti thi simran
Maine usko bola tha anjaam lekin vo mani nahi

Guruji- lekin ab kyu kar rahe hai?
Supreme- middle phase chhota rakhna hai mujhe
Vaise bhi logo ko lucifer ke bare me pata to chal hi gaya hai

Guruji- vo enough nahi hai
Uske pass abhi bhi bahut sympathy hai
Supreme- kyuki uske jaise log bhi dunia me banaye gaye hai esliye
Lekin masses me vo sab pahuch gaya hai jo hume pahuchana tha
Esliye ab aur der nahi karni chahiye

Guruji- aur vo khooni holi?
Uska kya?
Supreme- jisko jo milna chahiye vohi milega
Esme main ya aap koe kuch nahi kar sakte

Guruji- aapko nahi lagta ye sab bachhiya hi hai?
Supreme- humare hisab se to sab bachiya hi hai
Aap us bare me mat sochiye
Main dekh lunga unko

Guruji- mujhe unka dar nahi hai
Dar hai lucifer ka
Usse jab sab pata chalega to usse rokna na mumkeen ho jayega aur hum sab jante hai vo kya halaat karega uske baad
Agar usse sab yaad aagya to fir dunia ko nast karne se bhi piche nahi hatega vo

Supreme- mujhe pata hai
Esliye abhi uske bare me kuch nahi karna
Jo waqt bacha hua hai uske sath khelne dijiye usse
Fir sab theek ho jayega
Guruji- mujhe to aisa lagta hai ki jo waqt bacha hai usme vo humare sath khelega

Supreme- lucifer muskile to paida karega esme koe doubt nahi hai
Lekin esme hum kuch kar bhi nahi sakte
Jis daldal me vo hai usme vo karega hi
Esliye eske bare me jada mat socho
Guruji- kitni masoom jane jayegi?

Supreme- jaisa ki maine pehle bhi bola hai jiske sath jo hona hai vo ho kar rahega
Guruji- matlab hum hath par hath rakhe bathe rahe?

Supreme- maine sab soch rakha hai
Abhi usko bejh do
Guruji- jaisi aapki marji***

Eda- kavish lucifer kaha hai?
Kavish- mujhe kya pata
Aur tumhe kya matlab?

Eda- kuch kaam tha
Kavish- ha ha kuch kaam hi hoga
Tum konsa usse pyaar karti ho jo bina kaam ke uske pass jaogi?

Eda- tum mujhse aise kyu baat kar rahe ho?
Kavish- kyuki yaha par bas eda hai aur lucifer
Baki koe hai kya yaha?
Agar hai bhi to koe importance hai uski?
Mujhe to nahi lagta
Tumhe aisa lagta hai kya?

Eda- tum kya soch rahe ho?
Maine to lucifer se jada tumhre sath time gujara hai na?
Kavish- are ha main to bhul hi gaya tha
Hum dono ne to bahut acha time spend kiya hai na?

Eda- tumhe ho kya gaya hai kavish?
Kavish- aakhiri baar tum kab aaye thi mujhse milne?

Eda- hum bade ho gaye hai ab
Bahut sare kaam hote hai life me
Kavish- sahi kaha bahut sare kaam hote hai
Karo tum apna kaam aur main apna karta hu

Eda- tum kuch galat karne ki to nahi soch rahe ho na?
Kavish- kiya to tum aur lucifer ho hi mujhe marne ke liye
Dunia ke do sabse shaktishali angels

Eda- maine koe galti ki hai kya?
Mujhe tumhra aisa behavior acha nahi lag raha
Kavish- tum kab hi galti kar sakti ho?
Tum to sabse samjhdar ho

Eda- mujhe nahi pata tumhe kya ho gaya hai lekin agar tumhe kabhi kuch bhi baat karni ho to yaad rakhna main hu tumhre liye
Kavish- mujhe meri maut par milna eda

Eda- tum pagal ho gaye ho kya?
Kavish- mujhse ek wada karoge?

Eda- pehle mujhe batao tumhe hua kya hai?
Kavish- pehle mujhse ek vada karo

Eda- nahi pehle tum mujhe batao
Kavish- rahne do fir

Eda- theek hai main vada karti hu
Ab batao
Kavish- meri maut ke baad yaad rakhna ki kavish naam ka bhi koe tha tumhri life me

Eda- main tumhe kuch nahi hone dungi
Mujhe batao kya problem hai?
Kavish- koe problem nahi hai
Main lucifer ke hatho nahi marna chahta esliye jab kabhi aisi naubat aaye to mujhe lucifer se pehle tum maar dena
Ye vada chahta hu main tumse

Eda- tumne kya kiya?
Kavish- jo ho gaya vo ho gaya
Kya tum apna vada nibhaogi?

Eda- main lucifer se baat karungi please mujhe batao tumne kya kiya?
Kavish- lucifer se baat karne ka koe matlab nahi banta
Vo kisi ki baat sunta hai kya?
Aur tumhri to bilkul nahi sunega

Eda- main Supreme se baat karungi
Main tumhe kuch nahi hone dungi
Please mujhe batao kavish tumne kya kiya
Kavish- vada kar rahi ho ya nahi tum?

Eda- jab tak tum mujhe sach nahi bata dete main tumse koe vada nahi karungi
Kavish- theek hai fir tum apni aankhon se dekhna kaise marta hu main ek dardnaak maut lucifer ke hatho....
 

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UPDATE-105
Lucifer ashmita ke cabin me batha batha sabko kaam samjha raha tha ki cabin ka gate khula aur ashmita under enter hue

Black one piece dress me vo bahut katilnayak lag rahi thi aur aaj uske chehre par vohi gussa tha jo lucifer ke milne se pehle rahta tha

Vo jaise hi ander aaye sab sidhe khade ho kar usse morning wish karne lage aur lucifer jaha tha vahi batha raha
Usne kuch bhi karne ki koe kosis nahi ki

Ashmita- anisha where is that design?
Tum ne bejha clients ko?
Anisha- sorry Ma'am kal time nahi mila
Abhi bejh deti hu

Ashmita- kal kaha pahad tood rahi thi tum?
Office me hi thi ya office time me apne boyfriend se milne chali gaye thi?
Anisha- I'm sorry Ma'am

Ashmita- Roy 4 din tumse ek ppt tayar nahi hue abhi tak?
Roy- Ma'am kuch issue aa rahe the
Main kafi baar try kar chuka hu

Ashmita- mujhe excuse nahi sun ne hai kaam dekhna hai
Aur tum vo project file ka kya hua?
Ladka- Ma'am vo...

Ashmita- hua ya nahi ye batao bas
Ladka- nahi Ma'am

Ashmita- agar aaj shayam tak mujhe sare kaam complete nahi mile to koe aur job doond lena apne liye
I'm sure tum me se kuch ne to pehle hi doond li hogi( anisha ko dekh kar)

Ashmita- ab mera muh kya dekh rahe ho?
Get the hell out of my office
Aur sab vaha se bhag gaye

Lucifer- you looking hot
Ashmita- lucifer tum bhi ja sakte ho

Lucifer- main kaha jau?
Main to yahi rahta tha na
Ashmita- ab se nahi rahoge

Lucifer- tujhe apna promise yaad nahi hai kya?
Ashmita- sab kuch yaad hai esliye hi laat maar kar nahi bhaga rahi hi

Lucifer- tu bhaga sakti hai
Main chala jaunga bina kuch bole
Ashmita- chala ja fir

Lucifer- theek hai
Aur lucifer apni chair se khada hua aur bahar ki taraf chala gaya

Uske jate hi ashmita ke jo aashu usko dekh kar aaye the vo girne lage aur vo rote hue bathroom me bhag gaye

Bahut der tak vo vaha roti rahi aur jab aashu aane band ho gaye to apna face saaf karke pehle wale attitude me hi aakar vapas apna kaam karne lagi

Lucifer vaha se nikal fir kuch yaad aaya to vapas ashmita ke cabin me chala gaya

Agar vo jaldi aajata to ashmita ko rote hue bhi dekh leta thoda time laga diya usse aane me

Ashmita- ab kya?
Lucifer- tumhri car ki keys dene aaya tha
Ab kya hi matlab enhe apne pass rakhne ka

Ashmita ke baap ke sath usne chahe kuch bhi kiya ho lekin ashmita pyaar us se abhi bhi utna hi karti thi aur jaise hi lucifer ne keys ashmita ke samne wali table par rakhi uska dil fir se rone laga aur ab vo vapas lucifer ke Jane ka wait karne lagi

Lucifer- Rone se problem theek nahi hoti
Vo hume aur kamjor bana dete hai esliye strong ban ki mere jaise 1000 bhi aakar chale jaye to tujhe fark na pade
Etna bol kar lucifer vaha se chala gaya aur ashmita vapas se rone lag gaye

Uske baap ne sab chhod diya tha
Usse laga tha ki lucifer ki vajah se sayad inaaya bhi us se thodi bahut bolne lag jaye ya fir kabhi kabhi mulakat to ho hi jayegi lekin ab aisa kuch nahi ho sakta

Lucifer bhi bahut door chala gaya tha aur inaaya bhi
Ab vo firse akeli ho gaye thi jaise lucifer humesha raha tha bilkul vaise hi bas Tara thi uske pass aur kuch nahi

Lucifer office se bahar nikla aur naag ke farmhouse chala gaya
Vaha aaj sirf naag hi tha aur koe nahi

Lucifer- baki sab kaha gaye?
Naag- maine pure sehar me laga diye

Lucifer- kyu?
Naag- bhai abhi suresh ko pela aur vo malik bhi bacha hua hai aur pata nahi kab konsi musibat aajaye
Esliye pehle se prepare hona better hai na

Lucifer- aur koe ander se tujhe pel ke chala gaya to?
Naag- uske liye aap ho to?
Aapne hi bola tha trade kar loge meri life ko aap

Lucifer- aisi chhije bahut yaad rahti hai tujhe?
Aur behanchod main etne dino se bol raha hu arjun ke bare me pata kar de vo tujhe yaad nahi hogi?
Hai na?
Naag- bhai uske bare me kuch nahi pata chal paya
Maine gand tak ka jor laga liya

Lucifer- jor hi lagaya hai na?
Gand marae to nahi na
Naag- mara bhi lenge agar kuch pata chale to

Lucifer- mara lenge nahi mara lega tu
Bc mujhe kyu lapet raha hai?
Naag- aaj aap din me hi aagaye?

Lucifer- tujhe koe dikkat hai?
Naag- mujhe kya dikkat hogi?

Lucifer- to fir puch kyu raha hai?
Madhuri ma'am yaad hai tujhe?
Naag- ha hai na bhai

Lucifer- unke pati ke bare me pata kar
Dekh kaha rahta hai aur kya karta hai
Uski kamjori kya hai aur kitni bhasad machae hue hai usne
Sab mujhe proof ke sath chahiye
Naag- kya naam hai uska?

Lucifer- yaad nahi hai
Tu dund le
Naag- thokna bhi hai kya?

Lucifer- abhi nahi
Pehle ma'am ko unka beta mile fir thokenge aur vo bhi tarike se
Naag- main karta hu pata

Lucifer- jaldi karna
Mansi kaha hai?
Naag- uske ghar

Lucifer- vaha kya kar rahi hai?
Naag- bhai ghar hai uska

Lucifer- to?
Tu kya tab tak muthiya marega?
Naag- har chhij sex thodi hoti hai bhai

Lucifer- sab kuch sex hi hota hai
Naag- uske mumma papa aagaye the to vo vapas chali gaye

Lucifer- theek hai
Main chalta hu ab
Naag- ruk jao bhai
Saraab peete hai

Lucifer- kyu tere baap ki shadi hai?
Naag- aap peene ke liye reason dund rahe ho?

Lucifer- mujhe bahut kaam hai
Tu bhi apna kaam kar aur ab mujhe jaldi jaldi result chahiye nahi to teri gand ke sath bahut bura wala khelunga main
Naag- jee bhai****

Past

Guruji- hum kyu kar rahe hai aisa?
Supreme- kyuki unhe apno se bhichdane ka dard maloom hona chahiye

Guruji- us se koe fayda to hoga nahi
Supreme- hoga fayda jarur hoga

Guruji- kaise?
Supreme- vo maine soch liya hai

Guruji- kya kare fir?
Supreme- dikhao reality aur kya?
Kuch bhi over nahi hona chahiye jindagi me
Sab kuch ek limit me karo

Guruji- main samjha nahi
Supreme- samjhoge bhi nahi

Guruji- hum ne lucifer ke sath pehle hi bahut galat kiya hai aur ab ye sab?
Supreme- yehi chahti thi simran
Maine usko bola tha anjaam lekin vo mani nahi

Guruji- lekin ab kyu kar rahe hai?
Supreme- middle phase chhota rakhna hai mujhe
Vaise bhi logo ko lucifer ke bare me pata to chal hi gaya hai

Guruji- vo enough nahi hai
Uske pass abhi bhi bahut sympathy hai
Supreme- kyuki uske jaise log bhi dunia me banaye gaye hai esliye
Lekin masses me vo sab pahuch gaya hai jo hume pahuchana tha
Esliye ab aur der nahi karni chahiye

Guruji- aur vo khooni holi?
Uska kya?
Supreme- jisko jo milna chahiye vohi milega
Esme main ya aap koe kuch nahi kar sakte

Guruji- aapko nahi lagta ye sab bachhiya hi hai?
Supreme- humare hisab se to sab bachiya hi hai
Aap us bare me mat sochiye
Main dekh lunga unko

Guruji- mujhe unka dar nahi hai
Dar hai lucifer ka
Usse jab sab pata chalega to usse rokna na mumkeen ho jayega aur hum sab jante hai vo kya halaat karega uske baad
Agar usse sab yaad aagya to fir dunia ko nast karne se bhi piche nahi hatega vo

Supreme- mujhe pata hai
Esliye abhi uske bare me kuch nahi karna
Jo waqt bacha hua hai uske sath khelne dijiye usse
Fir sab theek ho jayega
Guruji- mujhe to aisa lagta hai ki jo waqt bacha hai usme vo humare sath khelega

Supreme- lucifer muskile to paida karega esme koe doubt nahi hai
Lekin esme hum kuch kar bhi nahi sakte
Jis daldal me vo hai usme vo karega hi
Esliye eske bare me jada mat socho
Guruji- kitni masoom jane jayegi?

Supreme- jaisa ki maine pehle bhi bola hai jiske sath jo hona hai vo ho kar rahega
Guruji- matlab hum hath par hath rakhe bathe rahe?

Supreme- maine sab soch rakha hai
Abhi usko bejh do
Guruji- jaisi aapki marji***

Eda- kavish lucifer kaha hai?
Kavish- mujhe kya pata
Aur tumhe kya matlab?

Eda- kuch kaam tha
Kavish- ha ha kuch kaam hi hoga
Tum konsa usse pyaar karti ho jo bina kaam ke uske pass jaogi?

Eda- tum mujhse aise kyu baat kar rahe ho?
Kavish- kyuki yaha par bas eda hai aur lucifer
Baki koe hai kya yaha?
Agar hai bhi to koe importance hai uski?
Mujhe to nahi lagta
Tumhe aisa lagta hai kya?

Eda- tum kya soch rahe ho?
Maine to lucifer se jada tumhre sath time gujara hai na?
Kavish- are ha main to bhul hi gaya tha
Hum dono ne to bahut acha time spend kiya hai na?

Eda- tumhe ho kya gaya hai kavish?
Kavish- aakhiri baar tum kab aaye thi mujhse milne?

Eda- hum bade ho gaye hai ab
Bahut sare kaam hote hai life me
Kavish- sahi kaha bahut sare kaam hote hai
Karo tum apna kaam aur main apna karta hu

Eda- tum kuch galat karne ki to nahi soch rahe ho na?
Kavish- kiya to tum aur lucifer ho hi mujhe marne ke liye
Dunia ke do sabse shaktishali angels

Eda- maine koe galti ki hai kya?
Mujhe tumhra aisa behavior acha nahi lag raha
Kavish- tum kab hi galti kar sakti ho?
Tum to sabse samjhdar ho

Eda- mujhe nahi pata tumhe kya ho gaya hai lekin agar tumhe kabhi kuch bhi baat karni ho to yaad rakhna main hu tumhre liye
Kavish- mujhe meri maut par milna eda

Eda- tum pagal ho gaye ho kya?
Kavish- mujhse ek wada karoge?

Eda- pehle mujhe batao tumhe hua kya hai?
Kavish- pehle mujhse ek vada karo

Eda- nahi pehle tum mujhe batao
Kavish- rahne do fir

Eda- theek hai main vada karti hu
Ab batao
Kavish- meri maut ke baad yaad rakhna ki kavish naam ka bhi koe tha tumhri life me

Eda- main tumhe kuch nahi hone dungi
Mujhe batao kya problem hai?
Kavish- koe problem nahi hai
Main lucifer ke hatho nahi marna chahta esliye jab kabhi aisi naubat aaye to mujhe lucifer se pehle tum maar dena
Ye vada chahta hu main tumse

Eda- tumne kya kiya?
Kavish- jo ho gaya vo ho gaya
Kya tum apna vada nibhaogi?

Eda- main lucifer se baat karungi please mujhe batao tumne kya kiya?
Kavish- lucifer se baat karne ka koe matlab nahi banta
Vo kisi ki baat sunta hai kya?
Aur tumhri to bilkul nahi sunega

Eda- main Supreme se baat karungi
Main tumhe kuch nahi hone dungi
Please mujhe batao kavish tumne kya kiya
Kavish- vada kar rahi ho ya nahi tum?

Eda- jab tak tum mujhe sach nahi bata dete main tumse koe vada nahi karungi
Kavish- theek hai fir tum apni aankhon se dekhna kaise marta hu main ek dardnaak maut lucifer ke hatho....
Fantastic update.. 💥💥
 

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UPDATE-105
Lucifer ashmita ke cabin me batha batha sabko kaam samjha raha tha ki cabin ka gate khula aur ashmita under enter hue

Black one piece dress me vo bahut katilnayak lag rahi thi aur aaj uske chehre par vohi gussa tha jo lucifer ke milne se pehle rahta tha

Vo jaise hi ander aaye sab sidhe khade ho kar usse morning wish karne lage aur lucifer jaha tha vahi batha raha
Usne kuch bhi karne ki koe kosis nahi ki

Ashmita- anisha where is that design?
Tum ne bejha clients ko?
Anisha- sorry Ma'am kal time nahi mila
Abhi bejh deti hu

Ashmita- kal kaha pahad tood rahi thi tum?
Office me hi thi ya office time me apne boyfriend se milne chali gaye thi?
Anisha- I'm sorry Ma'am

Ashmita- Roy 4 din tumse ek ppt tayar nahi hue abhi tak?
Roy- Ma'am kuch issue aa rahe the
Main kafi baar try kar chuka hu

Ashmita- mujhe excuse nahi sun ne hai kaam dekhna hai
Aur tum vo project file ka kya hua?
Ladka- Ma'am vo...

Ashmita- hua ya nahi ye batao bas
Ladka- nahi Ma'am

Ashmita- agar aaj shayam tak mujhe sare kaam complete nahi mile to koe aur job doond lena apne liye
I'm sure tum me se kuch ne to pehle hi doond li hogi( anisha ko dekh kar)

Ashmita- ab mera muh kya dekh rahe ho?
Get the hell out of my office
Aur sab vaha se bhag gaye

Lucifer- you looking hot
Ashmita- lucifer tum bhi ja sakte ho

Lucifer- main kaha jau?
Main to yahi rahta tha na
Ashmita- ab se nahi rahoge

Lucifer- tujhe apna promise yaad nahi hai kya?
Ashmita- sab kuch yaad hai esliye hi laat maar kar nahi bhaga rahi hi

Lucifer- tu bhaga sakti hai
Main chala jaunga bina kuch bole
Ashmita- chala ja fir

Lucifer- theek hai
Aur lucifer apni chair se khada hua aur bahar ki taraf chala gaya

Uske jate hi ashmita ke jo aashu usko dekh kar aaye the vo girne lage aur vo rote hue bathroom me bhag gaye

Bahut der tak vo vaha roti rahi aur jab aashu aane band ho gaye to apna face saaf karke pehle wale attitude me hi aakar vapas apna kaam karne lagi

Lucifer vaha se nikal fir kuch yaad aaya to vapas ashmita ke cabin me chala gaya

Agar vo jaldi aajata to ashmita ko rote hue bhi dekh leta thoda time laga diya usse aane me

Ashmita- ab kya?
Lucifer- tumhri car ki keys dene aaya tha
Ab kya hi matlab enhe apne pass rakhne ka

Ashmita ke baap ke sath usne chahe kuch bhi kiya ho lekin ashmita pyaar us se abhi bhi utna hi karti thi aur jaise hi lucifer ne keys ashmita ke samne wali table par rakhi uska dil fir se rone laga aur ab vo vapas lucifer ke Jane ka wait karne lagi

Lucifer- Rone se problem theek nahi hoti
Vo hume aur kamjor bana dete hai esliye strong ban ki mere jaise 1000 bhi aakar chale jaye to tujhe fark na pade
Etna bol kar lucifer vaha se chala gaya aur ashmita vapas se rone lag gaye

Uske baap ne sab chhod diya tha
Usse laga tha ki lucifer ki vajah se sayad inaaya bhi us se thodi bahut bolne lag jaye ya fir kabhi kabhi mulakat to ho hi jayegi lekin ab aisa kuch nahi ho sakta

Lucifer bhi bahut door chala gaya tha aur inaaya bhi
Ab vo firse akeli ho gaye thi jaise lucifer humesha raha tha bilkul vaise hi bas Tara thi uske pass aur kuch nahi

Lucifer office se bahar nikla aur naag ke farmhouse chala gaya
Vaha aaj sirf naag hi tha aur koe nahi

Lucifer- baki sab kaha gaye?
Naag- maine pure sehar me laga diye

Lucifer- kyu?
Naag- bhai abhi suresh ko pela aur vo malik bhi bacha hua hai aur pata nahi kab konsi musibat aajaye
Esliye pehle se prepare hona better hai na

Lucifer- aur koe ander se tujhe pel ke chala gaya to?
Naag- uske liye aap ho to?
Aapne hi bola tha trade kar loge meri life ko aap

Lucifer- aisi chhije bahut yaad rahti hai tujhe?
Aur behanchod main etne dino se bol raha hu arjun ke bare me pata kar de vo tujhe yaad nahi hogi?
Hai na?
Naag- bhai uske bare me kuch nahi pata chal paya
Maine gand tak ka jor laga liya

Lucifer- jor hi lagaya hai na?
Gand marae to nahi na
Naag- mara bhi lenge agar kuch pata chale to

Lucifer- mara lenge nahi mara lega tu
Bc mujhe kyu lapet raha hai?
Naag- aaj aap din me hi aagaye?

Lucifer- tujhe koe dikkat hai?
Naag- mujhe kya dikkat hogi?

Lucifer- to fir puch kyu raha hai?
Madhuri ma'am yaad hai tujhe?
Naag- ha hai na bhai

Lucifer- unke pati ke bare me pata kar
Dekh kaha rahta hai aur kya karta hai
Uski kamjori kya hai aur kitni bhasad machae hue hai usne
Sab mujhe proof ke sath chahiye
Naag- kya naam hai uska?

Lucifer- yaad nahi hai
Tu dund le
Naag- thokna bhi hai kya?

Lucifer- abhi nahi
Pehle ma'am ko unka beta mile fir thokenge aur vo bhi tarike se
Naag- main karta hu pata

Lucifer- jaldi karna
Mansi kaha hai?
Naag- uske ghar

Lucifer- vaha kya kar rahi hai?
Naag- bhai ghar hai uska

Lucifer- to?
Tu kya tab tak muthiya marega?
Naag- har chhij sex thodi hoti hai bhai

Lucifer- sab kuch sex hi hota hai
Naag- uske mumma papa aagaye the to vo vapas chali gaye

Lucifer- theek hai
Main chalta hu ab
Naag- ruk jao bhai
Saraab peete hai

Lucifer- kyu tere baap ki shadi hai?
Naag- aap peene ke liye reason dund rahe ho?

Lucifer- mujhe bahut kaam hai
Tu bhi apna kaam kar aur ab mujhe jaldi jaldi result chahiye nahi to teri gand ke sath bahut bura wala khelunga main
Naag- jee bhai****

Past

Guruji- hum kyu kar rahe hai aisa?
Supreme- kyuki unhe apno se bhichdane ka dard maloom hona chahiye

Guruji- us se koe fayda to hoga nahi
Supreme- hoga fayda jarur hoga

Guruji- kaise?
Supreme- vo maine soch liya hai

Guruji- kya kare fir?
Supreme- dikhao reality aur kya?
Kuch bhi over nahi hona chahiye jindagi me
Sab kuch ek limit me karo

Guruji- main samjha nahi
Supreme- samjhoge bhi nahi

Guruji- hum ne lucifer ke sath pehle hi bahut galat kiya hai aur ab ye sab?
Supreme- yehi chahti thi simran
Maine usko bola tha anjaam lekin vo mani nahi

Guruji- lekin ab kyu kar rahe hai?
Supreme- middle phase chhota rakhna hai mujhe
Vaise bhi logo ko lucifer ke bare me pata to chal hi gaya hai

Guruji- vo enough nahi hai
Uske pass abhi bhi bahut sympathy hai
Supreme- kyuki uske jaise log bhi dunia me banaye gaye hai esliye
Lekin masses me vo sab pahuch gaya hai jo hume pahuchana tha
Esliye ab aur der nahi karni chahiye

Guruji- aur vo khooni holi?
Uska kya?
Supreme- jisko jo milna chahiye vohi milega
Esme main ya aap koe kuch nahi kar sakte

Guruji- aapko nahi lagta ye sab bachhiya hi hai?
Supreme- humare hisab se to sab bachiya hi hai
Aap us bare me mat sochiye
Main dekh lunga unko

Guruji- mujhe unka dar nahi hai
Dar hai lucifer ka
Usse jab sab pata chalega to usse rokna na mumkeen ho jayega aur hum sab jante hai vo kya halaat karega uske baad
Agar usse sab yaad aagya to fir dunia ko nast karne se bhi piche nahi hatega vo

Supreme- mujhe pata hai
Esliye abhi uske bare me kuch nahi karna
Jo waqt bacha hua hai uske sath khelne dijiye usse
Fir sab theek ho jayega
Guruji- mujhe to aisa lagta hai ki jo waqt bacha hai usme vo humare sath khelega

Supreme- lucifer muskile to paida karega esme koe doubt nahi hai
Lekin esme hum kuch kar bhi nahi sakte
Jis daldal me vo hai usme vo karega hi
Esliye eske bare me jada mat socho
Guruji- kitni masoom jane jayegi?

Supreme- jaisa ki maine pehle bhi bola hai jiske sath jo hona hai vo ho kar rahega
Guruji- matlab hum hath par hath rakhe bathe rahe?

Supreme- maine sab soch rakha hai
Abhi usko bejh do
Guruji- jaisi aapki marji***

Eda- kavish lucifer kaha hai?
Kavish- mujhe kya pata
Aur tumhe kya matlab?

Eda- kuch kaam tha
Kavish- ha ha kuch kaam hi hoga
Tum konsa usse pyaar karti ho jo bina kaam ke uske pass jaogi?

Eda- tum mujhse aise kyu baat kar rahe ho?
Kavish- kyuki yaha par bas eda hai aur lucifer
Baki koe hai kya yaha?
Agar hai bhi to koe importance hai uski?
Mujhe to nahi lagta
Tumhe aisa lagta hai kya?

Eda- tum kya soch rahe ho?
Maine to lucifer se jada tumhre sath time gujara hai na?
Kavish- are ha main to bhul hi gaya tha
Hum dono ne to bahut acha time spend kiya hai na?

Eda- tumhe ho kya gaya hai kavish?
Kavish- aakhiri baar tum kab aaye thi mujhse milne?

Eda- hum bade ho gaye hai ab
Bahut sare kaam hote hai life me
Kavish- sahi kaha bahut sare kaam hote hai
Karo tum apna kaam aur main apna karta hu

Eda- tum kuch galat karne ki to nahi soch rahe ho na?
Kavish- kiya to tum aur lucifer ho hi mujhe marne ke liye
Dunia ke do sabse shaktishali angels

Eda- maine koe galti ki hai kya?
Mujhe tumhra aisa behavior acha nahi lag raha
Kavish- tum kab hi galti kar sakti ho?
Tum to sabse samjhdar ho

Eda- mujhe nahi pata tumhe kya ho gaya hai lekin agar tumhe kabhi kuch bhi baat karni ho to yaad rakhna main hu tumhre liye
Kavish- mujhe meri maut par milna eda

Eda- tum pagal ho gaye ho kya?
Kavish- mujhse ek wada karoge?

Eda- pehle mujhe batao tumhe hua kya hai?
Kavish- pehle mujhse ek vada karo

Eda- nahi pehle tum mujhe batao
Kavish- rahne do fir

Eda- theek hai main vada karti hu
Ab batao
Kavish- meri maut ke baad yaad rakhna ki kavish naam ka bhi koe tha tumhri life me

Eda- main tumhe kuch nahi hone dungi
Mujhe batao kya problem hai?
Kavish- koe problem nahi hai
Main lucifer ke hatho nahi marna chahta esliye jab kabhi aisi naubat aaye to mujhe lucifer se pehle tum maar dena
Ye vada chahta hu main tumse

Eda- tumne kya kiya?
Kavish- jo ho gaya vo ho gaya
Kya tum apna vada nibhaogi?

Eda- main lucifer se baat karungi please mujhe batao tumne kya kiya?
Kavish- lucifer se baat karne ka koe matlab nahi banta
Vo kisi ki baat sunta hai kya?
Aur tumhri to bilkul nahi sunega

Eda- main Supreme se baat karungi
Main tumhe kuch nahi hone dungi
Please mujhe batao kavish tumne kya kiya
Kavish- vada kar rahi ho ya nahi tum?

Eda- jab tak tum mujhe sach nahi bata dete main tumse koe vada nahi karungi
Kavish- theek hai fir tum apni aankhon se dekhna kaise marta hu main ek dardnaak maut lucifer ke hatho....
Bahut hi shaandar update diya hai @lobe survivor bhai....
Nice and lovely update....
 
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