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Fantasy Lucifer- The fallen angel(completed)

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Lone survivor

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WRITER’s NOTE

School times se likhne ka bahut shauk tha mujhe mostly poems hi likhta tha. School me hi ek ladki mili bahut pyaari thi. College ke 3rd year tak relationship chala fir vo chali gaye door. Uske baad kabhi socha nahi tha dobara kuch likunga. Bilkul man hi nahi karta tha. Nashe to jaise jindagi ban gaye the. Pehle bhi nashe karta tha lekin uske baad jada ho gaye. Akela rahna acha lagne lagega aur dheere dheere sab door hote chale gaye. Main akela hi bacha tha. Tab kahi se xf ka pata chala aur pata nahi kyu aise hi ek raat pehli story ka first update post kar diya. Ek medium mil gaya tha mujhe kuch share karne ka aur acha bhi lagne laga tha. Dheere dheere vapas likhna start kiya aur es baar stories. Xf par kuch stories likhi fir vo band hua to yaha aa gaya. Aur vohi silsila yaha bhi kamyaab raha. Aap sabko sayad idea nahi hoga ki jo thoda bahut interact hota hai humara yaha vo kitna important ho sakta hai kisi ki life me. Es waqt mere pass almost sab kuch hai lekin agar kisi ko kuch share karna chahu to aisa person nahi hai esliye beech beech me kuch updates me apni situation likh deta hu to acha lagta hai. I hope ki humara sath aise hi aage bana rahe.

Ek mew story ka dimag me kuch idea hai lekin kab start hogi eske liye abhi sure nahi hu

May be main kuch dino ke liye rehab chala jau ya fir kuch aur mil jaye sath chalne ke. Lets see

In the end i want to thank each and everyone of you guys who has supported me and gave me so much love. Means a lot

Thank you so much guys. Jaldi hi milte hai ek new story ke sath tab tak ke liye 👋
 

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update bhut acha tha lakin asmita kahi nazar nahi i 2 3 updates ma na os ky bry ma apne btya h next update ma osko b reshow kro ye aik advice h aur request h bro baqi ap bhut bhut acha likh ry ho r daily update thy ry hum es ma b khush h overall mind-blowing fantastic outclass story
 
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Next day anisha office pahuch gaye lekin vo thodi ghabrae hue thi ki ashmita ko kaise face karegi lekin majburi ke aage koe kya hi kar sakta hai?
Uski bhi majburi thi job par vapas jane ki aur ashmita ko vapas se face karne ki
Lekin aaj sayad uski kismat achi thi kyuki ashmita aaj office hi nahi aaye thi
In fact vo jab se lucifer se apne baap ko chudva kar laye thi uske baad se office hi nahi aa rahi thi
Jab anisha vaha pahuchi to bahut sara kaam bhikra pada tha aur ye dekh kar usse aur jada tension ho gaye
Chahe hi usne us din apni job chhod di thi lekin vo apne kaam ko lekar bahut passionate thi aur esliye hi jab etna Sara kaam pada dekha to sab chhod kar apne kaam me lag gaye

Ashmita jab office me hoti thi to office office jaisa lagta tha
Sab koe apna kaam sahi tarike se aur time se karta tha lekin ab jab vo nahi aa rahi thi to sabko mokka mil gaya tha free me time waste karne ka aur esliye hi Sara kaam pending pada hua tha

Lekin ab anisha ne kaam ki kamaan sambhal li thi aur sab ko ache se kheech kar le rahi thi

Vahi jab inaaya subah uthi to usse bahut jada pain ho raha tha
Uski jhange to khul bhi nahi rahi thi
Thodi si movement se hi vo kahra rahi thi
Usne apne side me dekha to vaha lucifer bhi nahi tha aur usse washroom jana tha

Fir jab us se ruka nahi gaya to khud hi khadi hone ki kosis karne lagi aur jaise hi thoda uthi uske upar se chaddar hat gaye aur vo ander se khud ko puri nangi dekh kar sarma gaye aur kal raat ko jo bhi hua vo sab uski aankhon ke samne tarne laga jiski vajah se uske chehre par ek smile bhi aagaye

Vo abhi uthane ki kosis hi kar rahi thi ki gate khula aur lucifer breakfast leke ander aagya

Inaaya usse dekh kar saram se chaddar se apne aapko dhakne lagti hai

Lucifer- wow what a good morning it is
Inaaya bas sarma gaye
Aur kya hi bolti vo

Lucifer- kaha jana hai?
Inaaya- washroom
Edhar udhar dekhte hue boli

Lucifer- to chali jao kiska wait kar rahi ho?
Lucifer bhi usko chedte hue bola

Inaaya- vohi kar rahi hu
Aur vo lagdate hue khadi hone lagi

Lucifer- tumhri tabeyat theek hai?
Aise kyu lagda rahi ho?
Vo firse majak me bola aur inaaya ne juthe gusse wala look usse diya

Lucifer- pata nahi es ladki ka kya hoga
Khud ka dhayan bhi nahi rakh sakti
Aur vo inaaya ke pass aaya chaddar ke sath hi usne inaaya ko apni bahoo me uthaya aur inaaya us se lipat gaye

Fir usse washroom leke gaya vaha garam pani se tub bhara aur fir inaaya ke mathe ko chhum kar vaha se bahar aagya

Inaaya ko bhi lucifer ka aisa behavior bahut acha laga

Lagbhag ek ghante baad inaaya washroom se bahar aaye ek dheeli dhali dress pahan kar aur bed par bath gaye

Lucifer- how's you feeling now?
Inaaya- better

Lucifer- tumhre papa aur hone wali maa bahut sawal puchte hai yaar
Ab kya main tumhre liye breakfast bhi nahi bana sakta?
Inaaya- ohh shit lucifer
Tum unke samne kyu gaye?
Vo kya soch rahe honge

Lucifer- vo kuch galat nahi soch rahe
Bas jo hua uske bare me hi soch rahe hai
Inaaya- tum bilkul pagal ho
Tumhe unke samne jane ki kya jarurat thi?

Lucifer- ab ye dekho?
Yaha banda subah subah etni pyaar se breakfast bana kar laya hai aur fir ek ghante se wait kar raha hai
Usse pyaar se ek do kiss karne ki jagah usse daat sunae ja rahi hai?

Inaaya- I'm sorry
Lucifer- kitni baar maaf karu main?
Ab to aadat si ho gaye hai

Inaaya- achi baat hai aadat daal lo
Aur batao kya banaya hai tum ne?
Lucifer fir ek plate me breakfast dalta hai aur inaaya ko khud hi khilane lagta hai
Pata nahi kyu lekin inaaya ko bahut pyaar aa raha tha lucifer par
Vaise pata to hai hi ki kyu aa raha hai etna pyaar

Inaaya- tum to bahut acha khana bana lete ho?
Lucifer- main bahut kuch kar leta hu
Ek namuna to kal dikhaya tha ek abhi dikha diya aur ek aaj raat ko dikhaunga

Inaaya- aaj kuch nahi dekhna mujhe
Bahut pain ho raha hai
Lucifer- kyu pain ho raha hai?

Inaaaya- ek mokka nahi gavate tum mujhe pareshan karne ka?
Lucifer- aur kabhi gavaunga bhi nahi

Inaaya- jana nahi hai tumhe office?
Lucifer- tum ne hi to kaha tha aaj nahi jana kahi?

Inaaya- tum meri baat kab se manane lag gaye?
Lucifer- kal se
Jab tum mere upar uchal rahi thi bilkul tabhi se
Tumhe yaad nahi kya?
Jab tumhre pair mere charo taraf....

Inaaya- bas basssss aur detail me nahi janana
Samjh gaye main
Lucifer- kya karna hai to aaj?

Inaaya- edhar aajao
Lucifer- kahi tum mujhe chedogi to nahi na?
Main nadaan parinda hu

Inaaya- nahi main tumko nahi chedungi mere nadaan parinde
Aur lucifer inaaya ke pass aajata hai
Inaaya uske shoulders par apna sar rakh leti hai aur apne aankhen band karke vaise hi bathi rahti hai****

Trisha- fir se aagaye aap?
Lucifer- mera ilaka mera jab main kare tab kahi bhi ja sakta hu

Trisha- etna bharosa hai aapko apne aap par?
Lucifer- tum aajma kar dekh lo

Trisha- mujhe kya hi aajma kar dekhna
Saaf dikh raha hai kitne toote hue ho aap
Lucifer- acha?
Batana jara kitna toota hua hu main?

Trisha- hawas dard nahi bhulati
Us dard ko sirf pyaar hi khatam kar sakta hai
Lucifer- konsa pyaar aur konsa dard?
Yaha to sab badiya chal raha hai

Trisha- badiya?
Mujhe to ek toote hue insaan ke alava aur kuch nahi dikh raha
Lucifer- dikhau kya?
Dar mat jana

Trisha- yaha batho mere pass
Lucifer- kyu?

Trisha- batho to
Lucifer- sex karegi fir mere sath?

Trisha- kya pata yaha bathne se aapka man hi na kare aisa kuch karne ko?
Lucifer- fir to nahi bathunga
Pagal thodi hu jo ye jankar bhi yaha bathunga

Trisha- batho to
Lucifer ne bhi socha kya pata kuch mil hi jaye aur vo Trisha ke side me bath gaya

Trisha- apni aankhen band karo
Lucifer ne kar li lekin vo abhi tak serious nahi tha

Trisha ne lucifer ke forehead ke bicho bich apni ek ungli rakhi aur boli
Ab relax karo, us pal ko enjoy karo yaha aap khush the bas us pal ko aur baki ke dunia ko bhul jao

Trisha- dikha kuch?
Lucifer's mind me vo saanvi ke garden pahuch chuka tha jab vo chhup chhup kar usse dekhta tha aur saanvi bhi usse khub tease kiya karti thi

Usse chehre par apne aap ek badi smile aa gaye thi aur aaye bhi kyu na?
Saanvi jo dikh rahi thi usse

Trisha- kya dikh raha hai aapko?
Lucifer kuch nahi bola bas muskurate hue apne beete hue palo ko dekhne laga

Trisha- jo abhi dikh raha hai vo hai real khushi aur jo aap karte ho vo sirf ek bhram hai aur kuch nahi

Trisha- ab vapas apni aankhen kholo lekin dheere dheere
But ab lucifer vaha se nikalna nahi chahta tha aur vo khud ki shaktiyo ko use karke vahi par rukne ki kosis karne laga

Trisha- hume sapno me jada der nahi rahna chahiye
Apni aankhen kholo nahi to galat ho jayega
Lekin lucifer ko es baat se koe matlab nahi tha vo to jitna ho sakta tha saanvi ko dekhna chahta tha

Trisha ne apni ungli uske mathe se hata li aur vahi side me ho kar lucifer ko dekhne lagi
Jo bahut kosis kar raha tha vahi rukne ka lekin ab chhije dheere dheere fade hone lagi thi aur in the end usse saanvi dikhna band ho gaye

Jab uski aankhen khuli to gusse me etni laal thi ki vo kisi ko bhi maar sakta tha es point par

Lucifer- mujhe vapas vohi dikhao
Mujhe vapas dekhna hai
Trisha- aisa karna humari health ke liye acha nahi hota

Lucifer- fuck health and fuck everyone else
Mujhe vapas vahi jana hai
Trisha- main nahi leja sakti

Lucifer- main dobara nahi bolunga
Aur yahi tumhri dead body padi hogi
Trisha- marna to sab ko hi hai ek din

Lucifer- trishaaaaa
Lucifer bahut jor se chhilaya lekin Trisha ne ek palak bhi nahi jhapakae
Vo bilkul bhi nahi dari lucifer se

Trisha- ek kaam karte hai
Aap yaha aate raha karo aur main har roj jitni mere se ho sakegi aapki help kar diya karungi
Lucifer- fuck you and fuck your help

Aur lucifer gusse me vaha se uth kar chala gaya
****

Alia- mumma chachu ko nahi aaye etne dino se?
Madhuri- beta kuch kaam aa gaya hoga
Vo job karte hai na esliye busy honge

Alia- mujhe unse milna tha
Madhuri- kya bologi us se mil kar?

Alia- mujhe kuch mangna tha unse
Madhuri- mujhe bata do main la dungi tumhe

Alia- nahi mujhe to chachu se hi chahiye tha
Madhuri- aisa kya hai jo meri princess ko mujhse nahi chahiye lekin apne chachu se chahiye?

Alia- hai kuch
Madhuri- acha theek hai
Jab vo aaye to mang lena us se

Alia- lekin vo aayenge kab?
Madhuri- ye to mujhe bhi nahi pata
Uski marji hogi tabhi aayega

Alia- aap bula lo na samne to rahte hai
Madhuri- samne aata kab hai vo?
Pata nahi konsi dunia me to rahta hai

Alia- aap unse shadi kar lo
Fir to hum sab ek jagah rahenge na?
Madhuri- beta aisa nahi bolte
Aur main to kitni badi hu na lucifer se

Alia- to kya hogya?
Aap kitni beautiful ho aur chachu bhi kitne handsome hai
Madhuri- aise nahi hoti shadi

Alia- to kaise hoti hai shadi?
Aapko chachu pasand nahi hai?
Madhuri- agar maine chachu se shadi kar li to main tumhri chachi ho jaungi fir tum mom kisko bologi?

Alia- are ha ye to maine socha hi nahi?
Aise to problem ho jayegi
Madhuri- esliye nahi karni shadi

Alia- main aapko mom aur chachu ko pa bol liya karungi
Fir koe problem nahi hogi
Madhuri- bas beta es baare me hum aur baat nahi karenge

Alia- lekin kyu?
Madhuri- kyuki aisa kuch nahi ho sakta
Ab jao aur apna homework finish karo

Alia uthi Madhuri ke gallo par ek pyaari kiss di aur vaha se bhag gaye

Madhuri ke chehre par bhi ek badi smile aa gaye ye dekh kar fir Alia ki baat ko sochne lagi
"Kya mangva hai esse lucifer se?
Kahi kuch ulta sidha na bol de jaise abhi bol rahi thi. Aaj kal ke bache na pata nahi kaha se etne sari baatein sikh lete hai hume to es umar me kuch pata bhi nahi tha es chhijo ke bare me aur ek ye hai dekho enhe
But ye lucifer hai kaha?
Dikha hi nahi hai etne dino se?
Kahi fir se koe musibat me to nahi pad gaya ye?
Esko bhi chain ki jindagi pasand nahi hai
Ashmita se puchu kya?
Lekin agar usne puch liya ki kyu? To fir kya jawab dungi?
Ek do din wait hi kar leti hu
Aayega to yahi hi usne mujhe promise jo kiya tha
Lekin Alia ke dimag me kya chal raha hai?
Agar usne lucifer ko aisa bol diya to vo to aur piche pad jayega mere
Pehle hi pagal hai vo aur na ho jaye kahi
Alia bete ye tumne kis musibat me da diya mujhe?
Kyu nahi nikal rahi ye baat mere dimag se?

Madhuri aise hi sochte sochte khana banane lag gaye fir dono kha kar so gaye....
Bahot khoob shaandaar update bhai
Mazedaar
Alia n tow apni maa ko tension m daal dia kia mangti Lucifer se
 
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Lucifer- ab theek ho tum?
Inaaya- ha abhi theek hu

Lucifer- kaha ja rahi ho?
Inaaya- office
Bahut kaam pending pada hoga

Lucifer- hmm theek hai
Inaaya- tum kya karoge?

Lucifer- main bhi office chala jata hu
Inaaya- tum ne bataya nahi ki kya kiya suresh uncle ke sath tum ne?

Lucifer- have a nice day
Inaaya- jaan ke to main rahungi hi
Aur lucifer ko ek kiss karke vo office nikal jati hai

Lucifer bhi ashmita ke office pahuch jata hai jaha aaj bhi ashmita nahi aaye thi

Usse pata tha Ashmita kyu nahi aa rahi hai esliye es bare me jada nahi socha aur anisha ki help se sare kaam time se karane laga

Lunch time me payal ki call aagaye to anisha ko bol kar vaha se payal ke pass chala gaya

Lucifer- kya chal raha hai?
Hue kuch sells?
Payal- Starting ke hisab se to theek hi hai

Lucifer- batao fir kya karna hai?
Payal- kuch nahi

Lucifer- to fir bulaya kyu?
Payal- aapne etne help ki to thank you bolne ke liye

Lucifer- ye to tum phone par bhi bol sakti thi?
Payal- I'm sorry
Mujhe laga free ho aap

Lucifer- free to main humesha rahta hu sunder ladkiyo ke liye
Payal- humare sath dinner karoge?

Lucifer- humare?
Payal- ha humare
Mere mom dad to hai nahi to orphanage ke old age log hi mera parivaar hai
Vo chahte the ki aap unke sath dinner karo

Lucifer- badle me mujhe kya milega?
Payal- kya chahiye aapko?

Lucifer- soch kar bataunga lekin baad me tum mana nahi kar sakti
Agar mana karna hai to abhi kar do
Payal- nahi karungi mana

Lucifer- then dinner it is
Kis time?
Payal- abhi chalte hai
Pahuchte Pahuchte time ho jayega

Lucifer- ye to mere nashe karne ka time hai
Es time kon dinner karta hai?
Payal- hum karte hai
Actually bahut old people hai esliye sab kuch time se kar lete hai

Lucifer- theek hai fir
Ek din sah lunga thoda sa
Payal- life gyan milta hai un se

Lucifer- tumhe lagta hai mujhe aise gyan ki jarurat hai?
Payal- jarurat to sab ko hi hoti hai
Kya pata aapko jo chahiye vo bhi mil jaye vaha

Lucifer- mujhe jo chahiye vo kahi nahi mil sakta
Payal- kya chahiye aapko?

Lucifer- mukti
Payal- kis chijj se?

Lucifer- tum nahi samjhogi
Chalo chalte hai
Aur lucifer bahar ki taraf ho liya aur payal uske piche piche

Payal- dard bhi chupa lo hasta chehra dikha kar
Lucifer- dard nahi hai
Bas dukh hai ki jo ho raha hai uska karan nahi jaan pa raha hu

Payal- hume sab chhije ke jawab pata hota hai lucifer
Bas apne ander jhakne ki jarurat hoti hai
Lucifer- pata nahi kitni baar aur kitno se same chhij sun chuka hu
Ab main pareshan ho gaya hu en sab se

Payal- kya pata tumne theek se dekha nahi ho
Lucifer- to tum bata do kaise dekhu?
Na na tum batao hi mujhe?
Main na pagal huve ja raha hu
Mera mujh par control nahi raha ab bilkul
Mera sar aisa rahta hai jaise abhi ke abhi fat jayega
Aur agar aisa hua na to vo najara dekhne ko milega jo tum ne apne sabse bure sapne me bhi nahi dekha hoga
Mera janwar jaag gaya hai aur ab vo kisi ko nahi chodega
Esliye mujhe faltu ka gyan mat diya karo
Mera dimag kharab rahta hai aajkal
Kuch bhi ho jayega Mere hatho aur tum saanvi nahi ho ki main tumhre samne shant ho jau
Esliye agar main kuch nahi bol raha to chhup raho
Lucifer etne gusse me bola ki payal bahut buri tarah ghabra gaye
Vo to bechari bas lucifer ki help karne ki soch rahi thi aur yaha to lucifer ne uski hi class laga di

Vaise dekha jaye to yaha na payal ki galti thi aur na lucifer ki
Payal ek nekdil ladki jo sabki help karna hi sab kuch samjhti thi vo Lucifer ki bhi bas help hi karna chahti thi vahi lucifer pichle kuch dino se vaise hi pareshan chal raha tha
Vo inaaya ke samne to besak apne aapko control kar leta tha lekin bahar uska dimag phatne ko tayar rahta tha
Uska sar dard bhadta hi ja raha tha aur uska chehra kabhi bhi badal jata tha

En sab chhijo se vo alag pareshan tha aur ashmita
Ashmita ke sath chahe usne kuch bhi kiya ho lekin lucifer ko us chhij ka effect bahut bura pada tha
Vo uske bare me kisi se baat nahi karta tha lekin humesha sochta jarur rahta tha

Aur usse kuch yaad ho ya na ho vo apne experience se etna to samjh hi chuka tha ki ab kuch bahut bada aur bahut bura hone wala hai
Esliye us chhij ka alag stress tha usse

Payal- I'm sorry
Mera maksad tumhe dukh pahuchane ka nahi tha
Lucifer apna sar pakad ke behanchod
I'm not good payal aur esliye main bahut gussa karne laga hu
Sala kuch samjh to aa nahi raha bas kabhi yaha bhago kabhi vaha aur jawab kuch milta nahi hai
Esliye pareshan hu
Hope you will not mind

Payal- I won't
Agar tum theek nahi ho to ghar chale jao thoda relax kar lena
Dinner fir kabhi kar lenge
Lucifer- nahi nahi chalte hai
Future me chhije bas bigdegi hi aur kuch nahi

Aur dono vaha se chale gaye

Vo jab payal ke orphanage home pahuche to vaha arohi aur baki sab ne sab kuch pehle se hi ready kar rakha tha
Vo bas un dono ka hi wait kar rahe the
Aur unhe dekh kar bade pyaar se sab ne lucifer ka welcome kiya
Lucifer vaise to etne pyaar ka aadi nahi tha lekin fir bhi usne vaha kisi ko offend nahi kiya
Vo theek tarike se hi mila vaha sab se

Fir sab khana khane ke liye bath gaye

Aunty- beta tumhra bahut sukriya humari madad karne ke liye
Aap jaiso ki vajah se hi hume rahne aur khane ki kabhi kami nahi padi
Lucifer- amma maine kuch nahi kiya
Sab kuch aapke aur payal ki mahnat hai
Samne wala to bas rasta dikha sakta hai chalna to khud ko hi hota hai

Uncle- ye baat to tumhri sahi hai lekin aajkal ke waqt me rasta dikhata bhi to koe nahi hai na beta
Lucifer- chinta mat karo uncle payal jaise insaan abhi mojud hai

Aunty- aur tumhre jaise bhi
Lucifer- Mera jaisa koe nahi hai aur dua karo koe aisa aae bhi na
Ussi me dunia ki bhalae hai

Aunty- yaad maine kaha tha sab theek ho jayega?
Kabhi apne aap se haar mat manana?
Lucifer- yaad hai amma

Aunty- to sab theek ho jayega beta
Vo sab theek kar dega
Lucifer- VO SAB THEEK KAR DEGA?
Sahi kaha aapne vo sab theek kar hi denge

Uncle- nasteek ho beta?
Lucifer- kuch bhi samjh lo Uncle

Aunty- kisi par yakeen rakho ya nahi lekin kabhi khud par se viswas mat tootne dena
Aakhir tak tumhre sath jo khada hoga vo tum hi honge beta
Lucifer- sahi kah rahe ho amma

Arohi- bas karo maa ab unko khana bhi kha lene do
Kahi vo dobara yaha aaye hi na?
Aunty- tum bachi hai tu nahi samjhegi

Arohi- main badi ho gaye hu ab
Ab koe kuch nahi bolega aur khana khayega
Ha agar kisi ko khane ki tareef karni hai to bejhijak kar sakta hai

Payal- tu bhi chhup hoja drama queen
Arohi- aapko kaisa laga khana?

Lucifer- kisne banaya hai?
Arohi- maine banaya hai

Lucifer- theek hai
Arohi- bas theek??

Lucifer- I mean theek hi hai
Namak thoda jada hai lekin theek hai
Greavy thodi pani jaisi hai lekin theek hai
Roti thodi tight hai lekin theek hai
Aur sabji thodi jali hue hai lekin theek hai

Lucifer ke aise bolne se arohi ne muh bana liya aur baki sab has diye
Aise hi unhone khana khaya aur fir lucifer vaha se nikal gaya***

Past

Lucifer chhilam hath me lekar yaha vaha bhatak raha tha aur bahut nashe me bhi tha ki vo kisi se takra gaya samne dekha to Shreya tha

Lucifer- Haye re meri kismat
Shreya- dekh ke to tum se chala nahi jata aur kya pata sunder ladki dekh kar janbujh kar andha hone ki acting karta hai

Lucifer- ha sunder ladki dekh kar karta to aisa hi hu lekin yaha sunder ladki hai kaha?
Shreya- mujhe tumhre muh lagna hi nahi hai

Lucifer- aur main to jaise mara hi ja raha hu tumhre muh lagne ke liye?
Mujhe gande naale me muh marne ka koe shok nahi hai
Shreya- you.....

Lucifer- you you you mat kiya kar mere samne
Ek to takra jao sareef insaan se aur fir us par hi chaddae kar do
Shreya- sareef insaan?
Tum?
My foot

Lucifer- tere ghar me koe problem chal rahi hai kya?
Kyu humesha ladti rahti hai mere sath?
Shreya- kyu aate ho tum mere samne?

Lucifer- ladki pyaar ho jayega Mere se nahi to door raha karo
Shreya- pyaar?
Tum se?
Etni buri kismat nahi hai meri

Lucifer- mujh se mil li na tum
Ab kismat buri honi suru ho gaye hai
Shreya- agar kabhi maine tumhe bol diya ki main tumse pyaar karti hu to tumhra jo man kare vo kar dena mere sath main tumhe bilkul nahi rokungi

Lucifer- matlab ladoo futne suru ho gaye abhi se?
Shreya- ladoo tumhre naam se?
Lucifer agar jindagi me devil aur tum me se choose karna pada to main bina soche samjhe devil choose kar lungi

Lucifer- hahahahaha
Shreya- kyu has rahe ho?

Lucifer- main hi devil hu
Shreya- mera matlab kahavat se tha

Lucifer- matlab maine nikal liya hai tum mujhe pasand karti ho aur ab bas taange failane ki deri hai
Shreya- fuck off

Lucifer- fuck you
Shreya- huuu aur Shreya muh banate hue chali gaye vaha se****

Lucifer hell me batha hua tha aur bahut jada nashe kar rakhe the ki samne ka gate khula aur Maya nikal ke aaye

Lucifer ek aankh khol kar
Are tum gaye nahi abhi tak?
Chali jao na yaha se mujhe acha lagega
Maya- jab tak tumhe theek raste par na la du tab tak main nahi jaungi

Lucifer- matlab kabhi nahi jaoge?
Aisa mat karo yaar?
Dekho yaha sab demons hai aur tum angel aur vo bhi bahut sunder wali
Kahi aisa na ho ki main kuch uch nich kar du
Aakhir ek insaan kab tak apne aap ko control me rakh payega?
Maya- mujhe tumhri yehi thinking to change karni hai

Lucifer- mujhe change karte karte khud change mat ho jana
Vaisa humari Jodi etni buri bhi nahi lagegi
Maya- mujhe jo souls aa rahi hai unhe padhane ki permission chahiye

Lucifer- vo to nahi mil sakti
Maya- kyu nahi mil sakti?

Lucifer- kyuki Mazikeen unhe bahut ache tarike se padha rahi hai aur kisi teacher ki jarurat nahi hume
Maya- unhe tourcher karke sahi nahi kiya ja sakta, sahi rasta dikha kar hi kiya ja sakta hai

Lucifer- apni philosophy apne pass kyu nahi rakhte?
Unhe kaise theek karna hai vo mujhe pata hai
Mera bistar khali hai usse garam karna ho to batao nahi to ja sakti ho

Maya- main Supreme se permission leke aaungi fir
Lucifer- le aao
Main usse bhi reject kar dunga
Yaha mera raaj hai
Jo main chahunga vo hi hoga fir samne tum khadi ho ya fir Supreme
Ab agar bistar par chalna hai to chalo nahi to dafa ho jao meri najro ke samne se....
Payal bechari ki Lucifer ko thode se gusse me dekh ker halat kharab ho gayi or kahi devil wala gussa dekh le tab kia hoga
Budhi Amma n ek dam sahi baat boli
(kisi par yakeen rakho ya nahi lekin kabhi khud par se viswas mat tootne dena
Aakhir tak tumhre sath jo khada hoga vo tum hi honge beta)
Behad shaandaar lajawab update bhai
 
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UPDATE-104
Lucifer- ab theek ho tum?
Inaaya- ha abhi theek hu

Lucifer- kaha ja rahi ho?
Inaaya- office
Bahut kaam pending pada hoga

Lucifer- hmm theek hai
Inaaya- tum kya karoge?

Lucifer- main bhi office chala jata hu
Inaaya- tum ne bataya nahi ki kya kiya suresh uncle ke sath tum ne?

Lucifer- have a nice day
Inaaya- jaan ke to main rahungi hi
Aur lucifer ko ek kiss karke vo office nikal jati hai

Lucifer bhi ashmita ke office pahuch jata hai jaha aaj bhi ashmita nahi aaye thi

Usse pata tha Ashmita kyu nahi aa rahi hai esliye es bare me jada nahi socha aur anisha ki help se sare kaam time se karane laga

Lunch time me payal ki call aagaye to anisha ko bol kar vaha se payal ke pass chala gaya

Lucifer- kya chal raha hai?
Hue kuch sells?
Payal- Starting ke hisab se to theek hi hai

Lucifer- batao fir kya karna hai?
Payal- kuch nahi

Lucifer- to fir bulaya kyu?
Payal- aapne etne help ki to thank you bolne ke liye

Lucifer- ye to tum phone par bhi bol sakti thi?
Payal- I'm sorry
Mujhe laga free ho aap

Lucifer- free to main humesha rahta hu sunder ladkiyo ke liye
Payal- humare sath dinner karoge?

Lucifer- humare?
Payal- ha humare
Mere mom dad to hai nahi to orphanage ke old age log hi mera parivaar hai
Vo chahte the ki aap unke sath dinner karo

Lucifer- badle me mujhe kya milega?
Payal- kya chahiye aapko?

Lucifer- soch kar bataunga lekin baad me tum mana nahi kar sakti
Agar mana karna hai to abhi kar do
Payal- nahi karungi mana

Lucifer- then dinner it is
Kis time?
Payal- abhi chalte hai
Pahuchte Pahuchte time ho jayega

Lucifer- ye to mere nashe karne ka time hai
Es time kon dinner karta hai?
Payal- hum karte hai
Actually bahut old people hai esliye sab kuch time se kar lete hai

Lucifer- theek hai fir
Ek din sah lunga thoda sa
Payal- life gyan milta hai un se

Lucifer- tumhe lagta hai mujhe aise gyan ki jarurat hai?
Payal- jarurat to sab ko hi hoti hai
Kya pata aapko jo chahiye vo bhi mil jaye vaha

Lucifer- mujhe jo chahiye vo kahi nahi mil sakta
Payal- kya chahiye aapko?

Lucifer- mukti
Payal- kis chijj se?

Lucifer- tum nahi samjhogi
Chalo chalte hai
Aur lucifer bahar ki taraf ho liya aur payal uske piche piche

Payal- dard bhi chupa lo hasta chehra dikha kar
Lucifer- dard nahi hai
Bas dukh hai ki jo ho raha hai uska karan nahi jaan pa raha hu

Payal- hume sab chhije ke jawab pata hota hai lucifer
Bas apne ander jhakne ki jarurat hoti hai
Lucifer- pata nahi kitni baar aur kitno se same chhij sun chuka hu
Ab main pareshan ho gaya hu en sab se

Payal- kya pata tumne theek se dekha nahi ho
Lucifer- to tum bata do kaise dekhu?
Na na tum batao hi mujhe?
Main na pagal huve ja raha hu
Mera mujh par control nahi raha ab bilkul
Mera sar aisa rahta hai jaise abhi ke abhi fat jayega
Aur agar aisa hua na to vo najara dekhne ko milega jo tum ne apne sabse bure sapne me bhi nahi dekha hoga
Mera janwar jaag gaya hai aur ab vo kisi ko nahi chodega
Esliye mujhe faltu ka gyan mat diya karo
Mera dimag kharab rahta hai aajkal
Kuch bhi ho jayega Mere hatho aur tum saanvi nahi ho ki main tumhre samne shant ho jau
Esliye agar main kuch nahi bol raha to chhup raho
Lucifer etne gusse me bola ki payal bahut buri tarah ghabra gaye
Vo to bechari bas lucifer ki help karne ki soch rahi thi aur yaha to lucifer ne uski hi class laga di

Vaise dekha jaye to yaha na payal ki galti thi aur na lucifer ki
Payal ek nekdil ladki jo sabki help karna hi sab kuch samjhti thi vo Lucifer ki bhi bas help hi karna chahti thi vahi lucifer pichle kuch dino se vaise hi pareshan chal raha tha
Vo inaaya ke samne to besak apne aapko control kar leta tha lekin bahar uska dimag phatne ko tayar rahta tha
Uska sar dard bhadta hi ja raha tha aur uska chehra kabhi bhi badal jata tha

En sab chhijo se vo alag pareshan tha aur ashmita
Ashmita ke sath chahe usne kuch bhi kiya ho lekin lucifer ko us chhij ka effect bahut bura pada tha
Vo uske bare me kisi se baat nahi karta tha lekin humesha sochta jarur rahta tha

Aur usse kuch yaad ho ya na ho vo apne experience se etna to samjh hi chuka tha ki ab kuch bahut bada aur bahut bura hone wala hai
Esliye us chhij ka alag stress tha usse

Payal- I'm sorry
Mera maksad tumhe dukh pahuchane ka nahi tha
Lucifer apna sar pakad ke behanchod
I'm not good payal aur esliye main bahut gussa karne laga hu
Sala kuch samjh to aa nahi raha bas kabhi yaha bhago kabhi vaha aur jawab kuch milta nahi hai
Esliye pareshan hu
Hope you will not mind

Payal- I won't
Agar tum theek nahi ho to ghar chale jao thoda relax kar lena
Dinner fir kabhi kar lenge
Lucifer- nahi nahi chalte hai
Future me chhije bas bigdegi hi aur kuch nahi

Aur dono vaha se chale gaye

Vo jab payal ke orphanage home pahuche to vaha arohi aur baki sab ne sab kuch pehle se hi ready kar rakha tha
Vo bas un dono ka hi wait kar rahe the
Aur unhe dekh kar bade pyaar se sab ne lucifer ka welcome kiya
Lucifer vaise to etne pyaar ka aadi nahi tha lekin fir bhi usne vaha kisi ko offend nahi kiya
Vo theek tarike se hi mila vaha sab se

Fir sab khana khane ke liye bath gaye

Aunty- beta tumhra bahut sukriya humari madad karne ke liye
Aap jaiso ki vajah se hi hume rahne aur khane ki kabhi kami nahi padi
Lucifer- amma maine kuch nahi kiya
Sab kuch aapke aur payal ki mahnat hai
Samne wala to bas rasta dikha sakta hai chalna to khud ko hi hota hai

Uncle- ye baat to tumhri sahi hai lekin aajkal ke waqt me rasta dikhata bhi to koe nahi hai na beta
Lucifer- chinta mat karo uncle payal jaise insaan abhi mojud hai

Aunty- aur tumhre jaise bhi
Lucifer- Mera jaisa koe nahi hai aur dua karo koe aisa aae bhi na
Ussi me dunia ki bhalae hai

Aunty- yaad maine kaha tha sab theek ho jayega?
Kabhi apne aap se haar mat manana?
Lucifer- yaad hai amma

Aunty- to sab theek ho jayega beta
Vo sab theek kar dega
Lucifer- VO SAB THEEK KAR DEGA?
Sahi kaha aapne vo sab theek kar hi denge

Uncle- nasteek ho beta?
Lucifer- kuch bhi samjh lo Uncle

Aunty- kisi par yakeen rakho ya nahi lekin kabhi khud par se viswas mat tootne dena
Aakhir tak tumhre sath jo khada hoga vo tum hi honge beta
Lucifer- sahi kah rahe ho amma

Arohi- bas karo maa ab unko khana bhi kha lene do
Kahi vo dobara yaha aaye hi na?
Aunty- tum bachi hai tu nahi samjhegi

Arohi- main badi ho gaye hu ab
Ab koe kuch nahi bolega aur khana khayega
Ha agar kisi ko khane ki tareef karni hai to bejhijak kar sakta hai

Payal- tu bhi chhup hoja drama queen
Arohi- aapko kaisa laga khana?

Lucifer- kisne banaya hai?
Arohi- maine banaya hai

Lucifer- theek hai
Arohi- bas theek??

Lucifer- I mean theek hi hai
Namak thoda jada hai lekin theek hai
Greavy thodi pani jaisi hai lekin theek hai
Roti thodi tight hai lekin theek hai
Aur sabji thodi jali hue hai lekin theek hai

Lucifer ke aise bolne se arohi ne muh bana liya aur baki sab has diye
Aise hi unhone khana khaya aur fir lucifer vaha se nikal gaya***

Past

Lucifer chhilam hath me lekar yaha vaha bhatak raha tha aur bahut nashe me bhi tha ki vo kisi se takra gaya samne dekha to Shreya tha

Lucifer- Haye re meri kismat
Shreya- dekh ke to tum se chala nahi jata aur kya pata sunder ladki dekh kar janbujh kar andha hone ki acting karta hai

Lucifer- ha sunder ladki dekh kar karta to aisa hi hu lekin yaha sunder ladki hai kaha?
Shreya- mujhe tumhre muh lagna hi nahi hai

Lucifer- aur main to jaise mara hi ja raha hu tumhre muh lagne ke liye?
Mujhe gande naale me muh marne ka koe shok nahi hai
Shreya- you.....

Lucifer- you you you mat kiya kar mere samne
Ek to takra jao sareef insaan se aur fir us par hi chaddae kar do
Shreya- sareef insaan?
Tum?
My foot

Lucifer- tere ghar me koe problem chal rahi hai kya?
Kyu humesha ladti rahti hai mere sath?
Shreya- kyu aate ho tum mere samne?

Lucifer- ladki pyaar ho jayega Mere se nahi to door raha karo
Shreya- pyaar?
Tum se?
Etni buri kismat nahi hai meri

Lucifer- mujh se mil li na tum
Ab kismat buri honi suru ho gaye hai
Shreya- agar kabhi maine tumhe bol diya ki main tumse pyaar karti hu to tumhra jo man kare vo kar dena mere sath main tumhe bilkul nahi rokungi

Lucifer- matlab ladoo futne suru ho gaye abhi se?
Shreya- ladoo tumhre naam se?
Lucifer agar jindagi me devil aur tum me se choose karna pada to main bina soche samjhe devil choose kar lungi

Lucifer- hahahahaha
Shreya- kyu has rahe ho?

Lucifer- main hi devil hu
Shreya- mera matlab kahavat se tha

Lucifer- matlab maine nikal liya hai tum mujhe pasand karti ho aur ab bas taange failane ki deri hai
Shreya- fuck off

Lucifer- fuck you
Shreya- huuu aur Shreya muh banate hue chali gaye vaha se****

Lucifer hell me batha hua tha aur bahut jada nashe kar rakhe the ki samne ka gate khula aur Maya nikal ke aaye

Lucifer ek aankh khol kar
Are tum gaye nahi abhi tak?
Chali jao na yaha se mujhe acha lagega
Maya- jab tak tumhe theek raste par na la du tab tak main nahi jaungi

Lucifer- matlab kabhi nahi jaoge?
Aisa mat karo yaar?
Dekho yaha sab demons hai aur tum angel aur vo bhi bahut sunder wali
Kahi aisa na ho ki main kuch uch nich kar du
Aakhir ek insaan kab tak apne aap ko control me rakh payega?
Maya- mujhe tumhri yehi thinking to change karni hai

Lucifer- mujhe change karte karte khud change mat ho jana
Vaisa humari Jodi etni buri bhi nahi lagegi
Maya- mujhe jo souls aa rahi hai unhe padhane ki permission chahiye

Lucifer- vo to nahi mil sakti
Maya- kyu nahi mil sakti?

Lucifer- kyuki Mazikeen unhe bahut ache tarike se padha rahi hai aur kisi teacher ki jarurat nahi hume
Maya- unhe tourcher karke sahi nahi kiya ja sakta, sahi rasta dikha kar hi kiya ja sakta hai

Lucifer- apni philosophy apne pass kyu nahi rakhte?
Unhe kaise theek karna hai vo mujhe pata hai
Mera bistar khali hai usse garam karna ho to batao nahi to ja sakti ho

Maya- main Supreme se permission leke aaungi fir
Lucifer- le aao
Main usse bhi reject kar dunga
Yaha mera raaj hai
Jo main chahunga vo hi hoga fir samne tum khadi ho ya fir Supreme
Ab agar bistar par chalna hai to chalo nahi to dafa ho jao meri najro ke samne se....
Bechara Lucii buri tarah fans chuka hai ab to, lagta to yahi hai kuch bahut hi jayada bura hone waala hai, magar kya? Iss janam mein Ashmita hi to wo balidaan nahi Dene waali hai jisse sab kuch badal jaayega, kahin kasam ko tootne se bachane ke liye wo kudh ko sacrifice to nahi kar degi jisse sab kuch badal jaayega?
 
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UPDATE-104
Lucifer- ab theek ho tum?
Inaaya- ha abhi theek hu

Lucifer- kaha ja rahi ho?
Inaaya- office
Bahut kaam pending pada hoga

Lucifer- hmm theek hai
Inaaya- tum kya karoge?

Lucifer- main bhi office chala jata hu
Inaaya- tum ne bataya nahi ki kya kiya suresh uncle ke sath tum ne?

Lucifer- have a nice day
Inaaya- jaan ke to main rahungi hi
Aur lucifer ko ek kiss karke vo office nikal jati hai

Lucifer bhi ashmita ke office pahuch jata hai jaha aaj bhi ashmita nahi aaye thi

Usse pata tha Ashmita kyu nahi aa rahi hai esliye es bare me jada nahi socha aur anisha ki help se sare kaam time se karane laga

Lunch time me payal ki call aagaye to anisha ko bol kar vaha se payal ke pass chala gaya

Lucifer- kya chal raha hai?
Hue kuch sells?
Payal- Starting ke hisab se to theek hi hai

Lucifer- batao fir kya karna hai?
Payal- kuch nahi

Lucifer- to fir bulaya kyu?
Payal- aapne etne help ki to thank you bolne ke liye

Lucifer- ye to tum phone par bhi bol sakti thi?
Payal- I'm sorry
Mujhe laga free ho aap

Lucifer- free to main humesha rahta hu sunder ladkiyo ke liye
Payal- humare sath dinner karoge?

Lucifer- humare?
Payal- ha humare
Mere mom dad to hai nahi to orphanage ke old age log hi mera parivaar hai
Vo chahte the ki aap unke sath dinner karo

Lucifer- badle me mujhe kya milega?
Payal- kya chahiye aapko?

Lucifer- soch kar bataunga lekin baad me tum mana nahi kar sakti
Agar mana karna hai to abhi kar do
Payal- nahi karungi mana

Lucifer- then dinner it is
Kis time?
Payal- abhi chalte hai
Pahuchte Pahuchte time ho jayega

Lucifer- ye to mere nashe karne ka time hai
Es time kon dinner karta hai?
Payal- hum karte hai
Actually bahut old people hai esliye sab kuch time se kar lete hai

Lucifer- theek hai fir
Ek din sah lunga thoda sa
Payal- life gyan milta hai un se

Lucifer- tumhe lagta hai mujhe aise gyan ki jarurat hai?
Payal- jarurat to sab ko hi hoti hai
Kya pata aapko jo chahiye vo bhi mil jaye vaha

Lucifer- mujhe jo chahiye vo kahi nahi mil sakta
Payal- kya chahiye aapko?

Lucifer- mukti
Payal- kis chijj se?

Lucifer- tum nahi samjhogi
Chalo chalte hai
Aur lucifer bahar ki taraf ho liya aur payal uske piche piche

Payal- dard bhi chupa lo hasta chehra dikha kar
Lucifer- dard nahi hai
Bas dukh hai ki jo ho raha hai uska karan nahi jaan pa raha hu

Payal- hume sab chhije ke jawab pata hota hai lucifer
Bas apne ander jhakne ki jarurat hoti hai
Lucifer- pata nahi kitni baar aur kitno se same chhij sun chuka hu
Ab main pareshan ho gaya hu en sab se

Payal- kya pata tumne theek se dekha nahi ho
Lucifer- to tum bata do kaise dekhu?
Na na tum batao hi mujhe?
Main na pagal huve ja raha hu
Mera mujh par control nahi raha ab bilkul
Mera sar aisa rahta hai jaise abhi ke abhi fat jayega
Aur agar aisa hua na to vo najara dekhne ko milega jo tum ne apne sabse bure sapne me bhi nahi dekha hoga
Mera janwar jaag gaya hai aur ab vo kisi ko nahi chodega
Esliye mujhe faltu ka gyan mat diya karo
Mera dimag kharab rahta hai aajkal
Kuch bhi ho jayega Mere hatho aur tum saanvi nahi ho ki main tumhre samne shant ho jau
Esliye agar main kuch nahi bol raha to chhup raho
Lucifer etne gusse me bola ki payal bahut buri tarah ghabra gaye
Vo to bechari bas lucifer ki help karne ki soch rahi thi aur yaha to lucifer ne uski hi class laga di

Vaise dekha jaye to yaha na payal ki galti thi aur na lucifer ki
Payal ek nekdil ladki jo sabki help karna hi sab kuch samjhti thi vo Lucifer ki bhi bas help hi karna chahti thi vahi lucifer pichle kuch dino se vaise hi pareshan chal raha tha
Vo inaaya ke samne to besak apne aapko control kar leta tha lekin bahar uska dimag phatne ko tayar rahta tha
Uska sar dard bhadta hi ja raha tha aur uska chehra kabhi bhi badal jata tha

En sab chhijo se vo alag pareshan tha aur ashmita
Ashmita ke sath chahe usne kuch bhi kiya ho lekin lucifer ko us chhij ka effect bahut bura pada tha
Vo uske bare me kisi se baat nahi karta tha lekin humesha sochta jarur rahta tha

Aur usse kuch yaad ho ya na ho vo apne experience se etna to samjh hi chuka tha ki ab kuch bahut bada aur bahut bura hone wala hai
Esliye us chhij ka alag stress tha usse

Payal- I'm sorry
Mera maksad tumhe dukh pahuchane ka nahi tha
Lucifer apna sar pakad ke behanchod
I'm not good payal aur esliye main bahut gussa karne laga hu
Sala kuch samjh to aa nahi raha bas kabhi yaha bhago kabhi vaha aur jawab kuch milta nahi hai
Esliye pareshan hu
Hope you will not mind

Payal- I won't
Agar tum theek nahi ho to ghar chale jao thoda relax kar lena
Dinner fir kabhi kar lenge
Lucifer- nahi nahi chalte hai
Future me chhije bas bigdegi hi aur kuch nahi

Aur dono vaha se chale gaye

Vo jab payal ke orphanage home pahuche to vaha arohi aur baki sab ne sab kuch pehle se hi ready kar rakha tha
Vo bas un dono ka hi wait kar rahe the
Aur unhe dekh kar bade pyaar se sab ne lucifer ka welcome kiya
Lucifer vaise to etne pyaar ka aadi nahi tha lekin fir bhi usne vaha kisi ko offend nahi kiya
Vo theek tarike se hi mila vaha sab se

Fir sab khana khane ke liye bath gaye

Aunty- beta tumhra bahut sukriya humari madad karne ke liye
Aap jaiso ki vajah se hi hume rahne aur khane ki kabhi kami nahi padi
Lucifer- amma maine kuch nahi kiya
Sab kuch aapke aur payal ki mahnat hai
Samne wala to bas rasta dikha sakta hai chalna to khud ko hi hota hai

Uncle- ye baat to tumhri sahi hai lekin aajkal ke waqt me rasta dikhata bhi to koe nahi hai na beta
Lucifer- chinta mat karo uncle payal jaise insaan abhi mojud hai

Aunty- aur tumhre jaise bhi
Lucifer- Mera jaisa koe nahi hai aur dua karo koe aisa aae bhi na
Ussi me dunia ki bhalae hai

Aunty- yaad maine kaha tha sab theek ho jayega?
Kabhi apne aap se haar mat manana?
Lucifer- yaad hai amma

Aunty- to sab theek ho jayega beta
Vo sab theek kar dega
Lucifer- VO SAB THEEK KAR DEGA?
Sahi kaha aapne vo sab theek kar hi denge

Uncle- nasteek ho beta?
Lucifer- kuch bhi samjh lo Uncle

Aunty- kisi par yakeen rakho ya nahi lekin kabhi khud par se viswas mat tootne dena
Aakhir tak tumhre sath jo khada hoga vo tum hi honge beta
Lucifer- sahi kah rahe ho amma

Arohi- bas karo maa ab unko khana bhi kha lene do
Kahi vo dobara yaha aaye hi na?
Aunty- tum bachi hai tu nahi samjhegi

Arohi- main badi ho gaye hu ab
Ab koe kuch nahi bolega aur khana khayega
Ha agar kisi ko khane ki tareef karni hai to bejhijak kar sakta hai

Payal- tu bhi chhup hoja drama queen
Arohi- aapko kaisa laga khana?

Lucifer- kisne banaya hai?
Arohi- maine banaya hai

Lucifer- theek hai
Arohi- bas theek??

Lucifer- I mean theek hi hai
Namak thoda jada hai lekin theek hai
Greavy thodi pani jaisi hai lekin theek hai
Roti thodi tight hai lekin theek hai
Aur sabji thodi jali hue hai lekin theek hai

Lucifer ke aise bolne se arohi ne muh bana liya aur baki sab has diye
Aise hi unhone khana khaya aur fir lucifer vaha se nikal gaya***

Past

Lucifer chhilam hath me lekar yaha vaha bhatak raha tha aur bahut nashe me bhi tha ki vo kisi se takra gaya samne dekha to Shreya tha

Lucifer- Haye re meri kismat
Shreya- dekh ke to tum se chala nahi jata aur kya pata sunder ladki dekh kar janbujh kar andha hone ki acting karta hai

Lucifer- ha sunder ladki dekh kar karta to aisa hi hu lekin yaha sunder ladki hai kaha?
Shreya- mujhe tumhre muh lagna hi nahi hai

Lucifer- aur main to jaise mara hi ja raha hu tumhre muh lagne ke liye?
Mujhe gande naale me muh marne ka koe shok nahi hai
Shreya- you.....

Lucifer- you you you mat kiya kar mere samne
Ek to takra jao sareef insaan se aur fir us par hi chaddae kar do
Shreya- sareef insaan?
Tum?
My foot

Lucifer- tere ghar me koe problem chal rahi hai kya?
Kyu humesha ladti rahti hai mere sath?
Shreya- kyu aate ho tum mere samne?

Lucifer- ladki pyaar ho jayega Mere se nahi to door raha karo
Shreya- pyaar?
Tum se?
Etni buri kismat nahi hai meri

Lucifer- mujh se mil li na tum
Ab kismat buri honi suru ho gaye hai
Shreya- agar kabhi maine tumhe bol diya ki main tumse pyaar karti hu to tumhra jo man kare vo kar dena mere sath main tumhe bilkul nahi rokungi

Lucifer- matlab ladoo futne suru ho gaye abhi se?
Shreya- ladoo tumhre naam se?
Lucifer agar jindagi me devil aur tum me se choose karna pada to main bina soche samjhe devil choose kar lungi

Lucifer- hahahahaha
Shreya- kyu has rahe ho?

Lucifer- main hi devil hu
Shreya- mera matlab kahavat se tha

Lucifer- matlab maine nikal liya hai tum mujhe pasand karti ho aur ab bas taange failane ki deri hai
Shreya- fuck off

Lucifer- fuck you
Shreya- huuu aur Shreya muh banate hue chali gaye vaha se****

Lucifer hell me batha hua tha aur bahut jada nashe kar rakhe the ki samne ka gate khula aur Maya nikal ke aaye

Lucifer ek aankh khol kar
Are tum gaye nahi abhi tak?
Chali jao na yaha se mujhe acha lagega
Maya- jab tak tumhe theek raste par na la du tab tak main nahi jaungi

Lucifer- matlab kabhi nahi jaoge?
Aisa mat karo yaar?
Dekho yaha sab demons hai aur tum angel aur vo bhi bahut sunder wali
Kahi aisa na ho ki main kuch uch nich kar du
Aakhir ek insaan kab tak apne aap ko control me rakh payega?
Maya- mujhe tumhri yehi thinking to change karni hai

Lucifer- mujhe change karte karte khud change mat ho jana
Vaisa humari Jodi etni buri bhi nahi lagegi
Maya- mujhe jo souls aa rahi hai unhe padhane ki permission chahiye

Lucifer- vo to nahi mil sakti
Maya- kyu nahi mil sakti?

Lucifer- kyuki Mazikeen unhe bahut ache tarike se padha rahi hai aur kisi teacher ki jarurat nahi hume
Maya- unhe tourcher karke sahi nahi kiya ja sakta, sahi rasta dikha kar hi kiya ja sakta hai

Lucifer- apni philosophy apne pass kyu nahi rakhte?
Unhe kaise theek karna hai vo mujhe pata hai
Mera bistar khali hai usse garam karna ho to batao nahi to ja sakti ho

Maya- main Supreme se permission leke aaungi fir
Lucifer- le aao
Main usse bhi reject kar dunga
Yaha mera raaj hai
Jo main chahunga vo hi hoga fir samne tum khadi ho ya fir Supreme
Ab agar bistar par chalna hai to chalo nahi to dafa ho jao meri najro ke samne se....
Nice update bhai waiting for next update
 
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Inaaya aur Lucifer ka finally milan ho hi gaya... Shayad ek baar fir Lucifer ka apni premika se bichhadne ka safar bhi yahaan shuru ho hi chuka hai... Mujhe abhi bhi lagta hai ki Aghor waala chapter samaapt nahi hua hai, jo bhavishyavani Mitika ne ki thi, aakhir uska poora hona baaki jo hai... But, abhi ke liye Lucifer ki zindagi mei Inaaya roopi ek thehrav zaroor aaya hai... Payal waale scene se saaf pata chalta hai ki is waqt Lucifer ki kya haalat hai... Beshak, wo baat baat par kahani ki sabhi ladkiyon se flirt karta hai, hamesha khud ko khush dikhane ka prayas bhi karta hai parantu ismein koyi doraye nahin ki wo bilkul bhi khush nahi hai... Lucifer ko agar is samay kisi cheez ki darkar hai to wo hai mukti, jo use kab aur kaise milegi ye koyi nahi jaanta...

Inaaya aur Lucifer, dono hi ek doosre se spasht roop se behad pyaar karte hain aur is milan ke baad us pyaar mein aur bhi gehrayi aa jaayegi... Lucifer ka uski care karna aur uski baat maankar poora din uske saath rehna, without a doubt achha khaasa impact pada hoga Inaaya par iska... Inaaya nahin jaanti hai ki Lucifer ne Suresh ko kya saza di hai, but usne keh diya hai ki wo pata karke rahegi... Dekhte hain wo ismein kaamyab hoti hai ya nahi... Aur agar hoti hai to kya uski Ashmita se baat hogi is baare mein...

Ashmita ne office jaana kuchh dinon se band kar diya hai, to be precise, Suresh ke saath jab se wo sab hua, shayad hi wo ghar se nikli ho... Lucifer ne Naag se jo kaha tha wo sach hota nazar aa raha hai, ab dekhna ye hai ki kya Ashmita sachmein poori tarah se toot chuki hai ya fir wo dobara khadi hogi aur Lucifer ke kahe mutabik sabko maat dekar unchaiyon par pahunch jaayegi... Lucifer ne bhi bhale hi wo sab kar diya ho, par Ashmita ki kami use bhi khal rahi hai... Wo achhi tarah jaanta hai ki shayad ab Ashmita us se kabhi baat tak na kare, aur unka relation kabhi bhi normal na ho... Dekhte hain kya hota hai aage...

Idhar Payal ne jo bharsak mehnat ki thi uska fal milna shuru ho gaya hai... Wo saare products dheere – dheere kar bikne shuru ho chuke hain... Aur isi ke chalte Payal ne Lucifer ko dinner par invite kiya tha... Lucifer ke achanak gusse mein aa jaane se Payal bhi seham gayi thi par wo bhi achhi tarah jaanti hai ki Lucifer kisi bohot badi pareshani se joojh raha hai... Abhi tak mujhe lag raha hai ki Payal, Shreya ka reincarnation hai, parantu gaur karne waali baat ye hai ki dono ke character mein kaafi antar nazar aa raha hai... Ek similarity zaroor dikhi hai, donon hi logon ke prati apne mann mein daya ki bhaavna rakhti hain iske alawa kuchh khaas nahin...

Anisha apni Mom ke saath shopping par gayi thi aur wahin unki mulakat Tara se ho gayi... Anisha ki Mom ko bhi pata chal chuka hai ki Anisha ne Lucifer ke kaaran apni job chhod di thi... Unka is baat par naaraz hona banta tha, Anisha ne bhi jo kuchh apne aur Lucifer ke relation ke baare mein kaha, I think zaroor Anisha ki Mom par uska kuchh to asar hua hoga... Wo pehle hi Lucifer mein kaafi interested rahi hain, dekhte hain inki kahani kab tak saamne aati hai... Abhi ke liye Anisha ne office dobara join kar liya hai, Tara ke hi kehne par... Interesting rahega dekhna ki jab Ashmita office lautegi to wo Anisha se kya kahegi aur kya wo Lucifer ko office mein bane rehne degi, ya nahi..?

Alia aur Maadhuri ka ek scene bhi aaya tha beech mein... Alia chhoti zaroor hai par uski samajh aur baatein bade badon ko maat den de... Maadhuri aur Lucifer ki shaadi, kewal Alia hi ye soch sakti hai, mujhe nahin lagta ki Lucifer aur Maadhuri ke beech kabhi kuchh hoga... Kya pata ho bhi jaaye, par at the moment mujhe Lucifer aur Maadhuri ke beech kuchh bhi hota bazar nahin aa raha hai... Beharhal, Alia is definitely the most loveable character of this story!

Past scenes mein ek Shreya to ek Maya ka scene dekhne ko mila... Shreya ke saath Lucifer ka relation kaisa panpa hoga, ye apne aap mein ek mystery hai... They seem to be completely opposite of each other, obviously opposite attracts, but still, donon ke beech pyaar, would be interesting to read the past scenes of these two... Maya ka bhi concept kaafi pehle hi samajh aa gaya tha... She's an angel and so are her thoughts, chahe vyakti ya soul kaisi bhi ho, usne kitne bhi paap kiye hon, Maya ka maan na yahi hai ki unhe saza se nahi balki samjhane se sudhara jaa sakta hai, but we all very well know what Lucifer thinks about these souls...

Budhi Amma ki baatein ek baar fir to the point thi... Experience is definitely one hell of a thing, Lucifer ko kaise samjhana hai wo bohot achhi tarah se jaanti hain & I think unhone jo kuchh bhi kaha, yadi Lucifer unhe maane to uski problems solve to nahin hongi par uske liye mushkilen aasan zaroor ho jaayengi... Let's see ki jaise Lucifer ne indirectly kaha, Supreme kuchh karenge ya nahin...

Sabhi Updates bohot hi khubsurat the bhai... The scenes between Inaaya abd Lucifer were the highlights, as they were written phenomenally well... Wahin an intezar hai to bas Ashmita ka, dekhte hain Lucifer ka aage aur kis kis cheez se saamna hoga...

Outstanding Updates Bhai & Waiting For Next...
 
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