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Fantasy Lucifer- The fallen angel(completed)

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Lone survivor

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WRITER’s NOTE

School times se likhne ka bahut shauk tha mujhe mostly poems hi likhta tha. School me hi ek ladki mili bahut pyaari thi. College ke 3rd year tak relationship chala fir vo chali gaye door. Uske baad kabhi socha nahi tha dobara kuch likunga. Bilkul man hi nahi karta tha. Nashe to jaise jindagi ban gaye the. Pehle bhi nashe karta tha lekin uske baad jada ho gaye. Akela rahna acha lagne lagega aur dheere dheere sab door hote chale gaye. Main akela hi bacha tha. Tab kahi se xf ka pata chala aur pata nahi kyu aise hi ek raat pehli story ka first update post kar diya. Ek medium mil gaya tha mujhe kuch share karne ka aur acha bhi lagne laga tha. Dheere dheere vapas likhna start kiya aur es baar stories. Xf par kuch stories likhi fir vo band hua to yaha aa gaya. Aur vohi silsila yaha bhi kamyaab raha. Aap sabko sayad idea nahi hoga ki jo thoda bahut interact hota hai humara yaha vo kitna important ho sakta hai kisi ki life me. Es waqt mere pass almost sab kuch hai lekin agar kisi ko kuch share karna chahu to aisa person nahi hai esliye beech beech me kuch updates me apni situation likh deta hu to acha lagta hai. I hope ki humara sath aise hi aage bana rahe.

Ek mew story ka dimag me kuch idea hai lekin kab start hogi eske liye abhi sure nahi hu

May be main kuch dino ke liye rehab chala jau ya fir kuch aur mil jaye sath chalne ke. Lets see

In the end i want to thank each and everyone of you guys who has supported me and gave me so much love. Means a lot

Thank you so much guys. Jaldi hi milte hai ek new story ke sath tab tak ke liye 👋
 

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Badhiya shaandaar update bhai
Asmita ka saalo ka gam jo kahi daba huwa tha aaj Lucifer n hawa leker taza kar dia ab dekhte h yeh gam kia kerta h asmita ko
Tow Lucifer bhai ka Madhuri mam ki tarf jhukaow badhta jaa raha h dekhte h yeh jhukaow kia kia rang dikhata h
Badhiya shaandaar update bhai
Thank you bhai
Bhai gam jada din tak daba ke nahi rakhna chahiye dikkat dene lag jata hai nahi to
 

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Pehle Bolne Ka Tha Apun Supply Kar Deyta

:cigg::cigg::cigg::cigg::cigg::cigg::cigg::cigg::cigg::cigg: Ye Tera Brand Hai
🚬🚬🚬🚬🚬🚬🚬🚬🚬🚬 Ye Mere Vala

Jab Khatam Ho Jaye To Bata Diyo Apun Aur Bhej Dega, Update Me Kami Nahi Ani Chahiye
Bhai bina bole hi supply kar diya karo waste nahi hone dunga ye vada raha
 

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Shandaar Update Bhai

Pita Ji Ne Order De Diya Par Pita Ji Ko Kon Bataye Agar Itni Aasani Se Bache Baat Maan Ne Lag Jaye To Fir Ham Jese Maal Na Fhoonk Rahe Hotey, Aur Agar Dono Me Se Kisi Ke Piche Gunde Hi Na Lage To Fir Hamare Lucifer Bhaiya Ka Keya Hoga Unka To Yaha Ana Hi Bekaar Ho Jaye Ga.

Ashmita Behanji Ki To Bin Baat Ke Vaat Laga Dali Apne Lucifer Bhaiya Ne Bhai Bichari Ka Dil Hi Tod Diya, Ab Ashmita Behanji Keya Kare Gi Keya Vo Bi Maal Fhoonk Apna Dukh Dur Kare Gi Ya Koyi Aur Tarika Apnaye Gi, Vasey Maal Vala Scene Badiya Hoga Dono Nadi Kinare Bethe Honge Aur Ek Suta Tun Maar Ek Main Marta Hun.

Naag To Mujey Lagta Backchodi Ke Liye Rakha Hai Aur Kisi Kam Nahi Aney Vala Vo.

Lucifer Ne Chocolate Le Hai To Khud To Vo Khane Nahi Vala Alisha Ko Hi Dega Matlab Lucifer Chachu Chocolate Le Kar Ja Rahe Hai.

Ma'am Ke Sath Mujey Lagta Jald Hi Kuch Hoga Itni Jaldi Attract Ho Raha Hai To Haweli Me Jald Hi Dikhe Gaye Dono.

Ab Bhai Jab Soch Hi Badal Rahi Hai To Insan Keyse Na Badle Ab Dekhte Hai Keya Keya Sochte Hai Apne Lucifer Bhaiya.
Bhai idea to bahut acha hai ye ek na ek din karna padega ya fir yahi karana padega(vaise to ho chuka hai bahut baar) lekin fir karne ka man ho gaya ab
I think log gum se bhagne ke liye phukte hai gum bhulane ke liye nahi I know it sounds same but...
Bhai haveli wala scene etna jaldi nahi aayega kisi main character ke sath es story me
 

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Bahut hi shandaar update bhai. Ashmita ke purane jakhm hare kar diye Lucifer ne.
Ab dekhte hai aage kya hota hai
Waiting for next update brother...
Thank you so much Bhai
Stay tuned
 

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UPDATE-10

Lucifer raat ko vapas aaya aur apne flat ka gate khol raha tha ki piche se aawaz aae
Ma'am- tum to khane ke liye aa rahe the?
Lucifer piche muda ma'am ki taraf dekha fir unke flat ki taraf chalne laga

Lucifer- lo main aa gaya
Ma'am- kal bola tha tumne to?

Lucifer- Ma'am aaj ko hi kal maan lo na
Ma'am- kya?

Lucifer- Ma'am agar koe kuch kar raha ho aur aap us kaam ko kisi aur din chahte ho to its better ki aap aaj hi vo din maan lo aur khush raho
Ma'am- tum ajeeb ho

Alia- mumma mujhe bukh lag rahi hai
Alia ander se chhilate hue bahar aae aur bahar hall me lucifer aur Ma'am ko khada dekha lekin lucifer se kuch kaha nahi

Alia- mumma bhukh lag rahi hai
Ma'am- ha beta aaj maine aapka favorite khana banaya hai
Chalo hand wash karo aur dinning table par jake batho
Alia- okay mamma
Aur vo bathroom ki taraf dood jati hai

Ma'am- tum aa rahe ho kya?
Lucifer- etna bol rahe ho to kha leta hu Ma'am

Ma'am- veg hai
Lucifer- adaat to nahi hai lekin fir bhi try kar lete hai

Fir sab dinning table par bath jate hai aur khana start karte hai

Ma'am- tum kya karte ho?
Lucifer- kuch kaam

Ma'am- vohi puch rahi hu main
Lucifer- hifaazat kar raha hu kisi ki

Ma'am- mujhe to lagta hai tumhe hi hifazaat ki jarurat hai
Lucifer- Ma'am kabhi kabhi vo kaam bhi karna pad jata hai jiske bare me hum kabhi sochte bhi nahi hai

Ye sunte hi Ma'am apne past me chali jati hai aur sab yaad aane lagta hai fir vo sab bhi jo halaato ne unse karaya

Lucifer- you good Ma'am?
Ma'am ek dam se hosh me aae fir ha ha mujhe kya hoga

Alia- aap fir juth bol rahe ho
Humesha aise hi karti hai mumma
Baat karte karte kahi hi sochne lag jati hai
Ma'am- acha maine kab kiya bataya jara?

Alia- abhi to kiya aapne
Ma'am- esse pehle kab kiya?

Alia- humesha hi karte ho aap
Mujh to bata sakte ho na main to bari ho gaye hu ab
Ma'am- ale ale sorry beta mujhe pata nahi chala ki aap bari ho gaye ho
Ab se main aapse sab share karungi

Alia- aap mera mazak uda rahe ho
Ma'am- main kyu aapka mazak udaungi?
Main to bilkul mazak nahi uda rahi

Alia- nahi aap bana rahe ho
Main aapse naraj hogaye aur vo apne room me bhag gaye
Actually uska khana to hogya tha esliye Alia bas masti kar rahi thi

Ma'am- pagal ladki
Ma'am muskurate hue boli
Lucifer- you two are blessed to have each other

Ma'am- yeah I know
Tumhre mummy Papa kaha hai?
Lucifer- pata nahi

Ma'am- what do you mean by pata nahi?
Lucifer- jis chhij ke bare me mujhe pata hi nahi hai uske bare me kya hi batau main aapko?

Ma'am- I'm sorry
Lucifer- koe baat nahi
Ma'am kisi ko dost banane ke liye kya karna padta hai?

Ma'am- dosti ke liye dil milne chahiye
Lene dene se dost nahi bante
Lucifer- dil ke alava kuch aur batao Ma'am

Ma'am- tumhe kisse dost banana hai?
Lucifer- hai koe batao na Ma'am
Agar samne wala aapko bilkul pasand nahi karta lekin aapki majburi hai usse dosti karne ki aur esse samne wale ko bhi fayda ho to kaise kare?

Ma'am- fayda dekh ke ki gaye dosti jada din nahi chalti
Lucifer- kuch din hi chalani hai
Batao na Ma'am
Aap ko to bahut time hogaye yaha rahte hue

Ma'am- dekho sachae hi sabse acha option hai
Tum sach sach bata do fir dekho kya hota hai
Lucifer- yehi to nahi kar sakta

Ma'am- dekho friendship is very pure thing esme fayda nuksaan nahi dekha jata
Do logo ki mutual understanding hoti hai
Vo dono sath me kaise rahte hai, kaise feel karte hai ,khush rahte hai ya boredom feel hoti hai
Ye sab chhije dekhi jati hai
Lucifer- enme to kuch mujhe feel hi nahi hoti
Shit Ma'am aap se nahi ho payega Ma'am

Ma'am- tum mujhe sach batao
Kya pata main kuch kar saku
Lucifer- ma'am main chalta hu
Raat hone lag gaye hai
It's not good for me to stay at your place this late
And thank you for the food
Ye bol kar lucifer bina Ma'am ki koe baat sune vaha se chala gaya lekin jata jata Alia ki chocolates Ma'am ko de di thi ki vo Alia ko de dengi morning me

Apne flat par aakar kuch nahi hua bas aage kya karna hai ye hi sochta raha

Dusri taraf

Bunty- bhai pata chal gaya
Ek ladke ne college me mara tha apne bando ko aur vahi vaha se utha ke leke gaya
Sumer- to bc pata kar na koe hai vo ladka aur kyu utha ke leke gaya hai

Bunty- main pure college me pata kar chuka hu koe nahi janta usse yaha tak ki college me bhi pichle kuch dino se hi dikhne laga hai
Bas Park me batha rahta hai
Sumer- mujhe bahane mat de
Vo ladka chahiye to chahiye mujhe

Bunty- kuch aur bhi pata chala hai uske bare me
Sumer- to kya mere se permission lega batane ki
Jaldi bhok

Bunty- un dono ladkiyo se baat karte dekha gaya tha us ko aur ek vaha teacher hai college me hi padhati hai usse bhi baat karte dekha hai
Sumer- un dono ladkiyo se to door raho abhi
Vo teacher ko utha ke la usse jarur kuch na kuch pata hoga

Bunty- kahi hungama na ho jaye
Teacher hai vo
Sumer- college me se thodi utha ke Lana hai
Dekh kaha rahti hai aur fir mokka dekb ke utha lena
Ab bas vohi sahara haj

Bunty- vo to maine pata kar liya *** es building me rahti hai apni beti ke sath
Sumer- utha lao to maa beti ko
Vohi pahuchaegi us ladke tak

Uske baad kuch aur baatein hoti hai fir bunty vaha se chala jata hai


Tara- yaar tum log khane par kyu apni dusmani nikalte ho?
Gussa apni jagah hai aur khana apni jagah
Ashmita- mujhe bukh nahi hai didi

Tara- dekh tu agar khana kha legi to us ladke ko main shabak sikhane me teri help karungi
Ashmita- mujhe nahi chahiye aapki help
Usko to main akele dekhungi
Bahut pasand hai na usko dusro ki zindagi me dhakhal dena dekhna uski zindagi nahi ruth gaye usse to kehna

Tara- ha ha main maan liya lekin ab khana to kha le
Agar bhukhe pet rahi aur bimar pad gaye to kaise badla legi usse?
Ashmita- etni kamjor nahi hu main
Main bas ye soch rahi hu ki vo aaya to esi month hai fir usse mere bare me etna sab kaise pata hai?

Tara- ashu humare bare me sabko pata hota hai
Chahe baat chhoti se chhoti hi kyu na ho usko bhi bahut badi dikhaya jata hai
Ashmita- lekin etni purani baat jiske bare me bahut kam logo ko pata hai ye usse kaise pata chal gaye?

Tara- kya pata vo general way me bola ho?
Ashmita- nahi
Uske aawaz me confidence tha
Usse pata hai sab kuch lekin kaise?

Tara- tu khana to kha fir dekhna kitna tez dimag chalega aur fat se sab yaad aane lag jayega
Ashmita- mujhe sach me bhukh nahi hai
Ab to usse sabak sikha ke dawat lungi main

Tara- pagal hai kya?
Tab tak kya bhukhi bathi rahegi?
Please ashu zid chhod aur khana kha le
Ashmita- lao khana do pehle
Main kha rahi hu fir aap mujhe akela chhod dogi
Promise?

Tara- ha baba promise
Chhod dungi tujhe akele

Uske baad ashmita jaldi jaldi thoda bahut khana khati hai aur Tara vaha se chali jati hai

Kafi der tak ashmita sochti rahti hai ki kya karna hai uske baad kisi ko call karke lucifer ke bare me information nikalne ko bolti hai

Ashmita se lucifer ke bole sabad sahan nahi ho rahe the agar lucifer usse aur kuch bol deta to sayad usse jada fark nahi padta lekin jab pyaar par baat aati hai to log aksar Lund se sochne lag jate hai aur ashmita ke pass to Lund bhi nahi tha

Jiske pass tha vo to sab ki zindagi me tuffan lake aaram se chhilam fuk raha tha apne flat par

Chehre par koe bhav nahi the bas aankhon me bahut sara nasha tha
Ab uska yaha man lagane lag gaya tha jisma ek bada reason tha ki yaha bahut sundar sundar ladkiya thi aur ab lucifer ki najar vaha ja chuki thi to bahut jaldi vo ras chusna bhi start kar hi dega

Abhi to vaise bhi lucifer ke pass jada options nahi the lekin jis tarah se vo dikhta tha usse jada mahnat bhi nahi karni padegi bahut sare options dundne ke liye

Yehi sab sochte sochte fukte fukte subah hogaye

Aur lucifer tayar hoke naag se milne chala gaya

Naag lucifer ke liye bahut bada assets tha kyuki ek to vo lucifer se darta tha aur dusra uski ek gang thi,choti hi sahi gang to thi hi
Esliye usse musibat me nikalna lucifer ke liye faydeman ho sakta tha

Vo vaha gaya naag ko kuch important tips di aur ye bhi bataya ki kaise sab solve ho sakta hai lekin khud ne kuch nahi Kiya
Vo ideas deke naag se favors bhi le raha tha aur khud kuch na karke limelight se bhi bach raha tha

Uske baad vapas ashmita ke ghar ke ghar ki taraf chal diya

Uski kismat achi thi ya kharab ye to pata nahi lekin ashmita gusse me laal peeli hue chhat par ghum rahi thi

Lucifer vahi khada ho gaya aur wait karne laga ki ashmita usse notice kare aur uska intezaar jada der nahi raha kyuki ashmita ki najar uspar ja chuki thi aur uska gussa aur jada bhad gaya tha

Vo bhagte hue niche aae aur lucifer ko kuch sunane wali hi thi ki vo bol pada
Lucifer- I'm sorry us din ke liye, mujhe aisa nahi bolna chahiye tha actually I was in bad phase aur tum mere piche hi pad gaye thi esliye galti se mere muh se nikal gaya
I never in my life disrespected any women and this was the first time
Har kisi ki zindagi me uske pehle pyaar ka bahut mahtav hota hai aur uski jagah koe aur nahi le sakta
MUJHE LIFE ME KABHI PYAAR MILA NAHI ESLIYE BHI THODA KAM RELATE KAR PATA HU
lekin agar kabhi galat karta hu to usse maan bhi leta hu
Es baar meri galti thi aur uske liye main maafi chahta hu
If you want to punish.. actually I'm already being punished so if you want I can do anything you want for you just my way of apologizing

I'm really really sorry.....
 
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