Fantasy Lucifer- The fallen angel(completed)

[Lone survivor]

WRITER’s NOTE

School times se likhne ka bahut shauk tha mujhe mostly poems hi likhta tha. School me hi ek ladki mili bahut pyaari thi. College ke 3rd year tak relationship chala fir vo chali gaye door. Uske baad kabhi socha nahi tha dobara kuch likunga. Bilkul man hi nahi karta tha. Nashe to jaise jindagi ban gaye the. Pehle bhi nashe karta tha lekin uske baad jada ho gaye. Akela rahna acha lagne lagega aur dheere dheere sab door hote chale gaye. Main akela hi bacha tha. Tab kahi se xf ka pata chala aur pata nahi kyu aise hi ek raat pehli story ka first update post kar diya. Ek medium mil gaya tha mujhe kuch share karne ka aur acha bhi lagne laga tha. Dheere dheere vapas likhna start kiya aur es baar stories. Xf par kuch stories likhi fir vo band hua to yaha aa gaya. Aur vohi silsila yaha bhi kamyaab raha. Aap sabko sayad idea nahi hoga ki jo thoda bahut interact hota hai humara yaha vo kitna important ho sakta hai kisi ki life me. Es waqt mere pass almost sab kuch hai lekin agar kisi ko kuch share karna chahu to aisa person nahi hai esliye beech beech me kuch updates me apni situation likh deta hu to acha lagta hai. I hope ki humara sath aise hi aage bana rahe.

Ek mew story ka dimag me kuch idea hai lekin kab start hogi eske liye abhi sure nahi hu

May be main kuch dino ke liye rehab chala jau ya fir kuch aur mil jaye sath chalne ke. Lets see

In the end i want to thank each and everyone of you guys who has supported me and gave me so much love. Means a lot

Thank you so much guys. Jaldi hi milte hai ek new story ke sath tab tak ke liye

 

[Rohit1988]

UPDATE-09
Suresh- beta tum dono se kuch baat karni thi
Tara- bataeye dad

Suresh- main soch raha tha ki tum dono thoda thoda business bhi sambhalne lago
Ashmita- lekin humara to college chal raha hai dad

Suresh- mujhe pata hai beta
Dekho Tara to final year me hai usko jada stress nahi hai aur tum bhi apne exams dene chali jaya karna

Tara- lekin dad aise achanak?
Suresh- achanak nahi beta main kafi dino se es baare me soch raha tha aur ab main buddha bhi hone laga hu sab kuch akele se handle nahi ho raha

Ashmita- haha mere dad ab buddhe hone lag gaye
Vaise bol to sahi rahe ho aap chehra murjha gaya hai aapka
Hahaha
Tara- dad aap humse kuch chhupa rahe ho

Suresh- ab main tumse kya chhupaunga?
Jitna jaldi business join karoge, samjhne lagoge utna hi acha hai na beta
Aur baad me bhi to tum dono ko hi dekhna hai esse acha abhi se start kar do
Ashmita- jab tak aap sach nahi batoge main kuch nahi karenge

Suresh- are ye hi sach hai beta
Tara- ashmita sahi bol rahi hai
Ab agar aap chahte ho ki hum business join kare to aapko hume sab sach sach batana padega

Suresh- tum dono to mujh par bilkul bhi trust nahi karte
Tara- aap sach nahi bataoge to kaise karenge?

Suresh- dekho beta jab aadmi tarakki karne lag jata hai na to uske dusman bahut ban jate hai fir vo sirf unse fayda kaise uthaya jaye ye hi sochta hai
Esliye bol raha hu ki business join kar lo yaha security issues bhi nahi hoga aur mera workload bhi kam ho jayega
Ashmita- aap esliye bol rahe ho na kyuki aapko dar hai ki hume kuch ho na jaye college me?

Suresh- ye bhi ek reason hai
Tumhe mana thodi kar raha hu main
Exam dene chale jana
Tara- theek haia hum soch ke batayenge lekin aap hume force nahi karoge?

Suresh- aaj tak kiya hai kya?
Ashmita- mere pyaare dad
Thank you

Uske baad vo dono suresh ke room se chale jate hai

Ab suresh ko pura yakeen tha ki uski dono betiya ha hi karegi kyuki usne baaton me fasaya hi aisa hai dono ko
Esliye thoda relax hogya tha vo

Dusri taraf

Naag- bhai vo ashmita kisi se pyaar karti thi bachpan me
Lucifer- to main kya karu?

Naag- bhai vo ladka fir kahi chala gaya Ashmita ko chhod ke
Lucifer- to?

Naag- esliye usse ladke pasand nahi hai ab
Vo sochti hai jisse vo pyaar karegi vo fir usse chhod ke bhag jayega
Lucifer- kuch jada hi chutiya hai insaan jitna maine socha tha usse bhi jada

Naag- bhai maine bata di information aapko ab mujhe nikalo es muskil se
Lucifer- Abe underground hojana kuch dino ke liye
Main bachaunga to fir kuch logo ko marna padega aur fir aur log teri marne aayenge

Naag- ye to dhokha hai
Aapne bola tha aap bachaoge mujhe
Lucifer- dekh mujhe ek hi tarika pata hai bas fir baad me mat bolna ki aur jada fasa diya maine tujhe

Naag- kaha underground hu?
Koe jagah to bata do
Lucifer- sale gunda tu hai ya main?

Naag- aap to hawan ho
Lucifer- to fir aana hell me kabhi achi achi jagah dikhaunga

Naag- bhai please kuch kar do
Mere sare addo par police ka kabja hai
Lucifer- thoda under ground rah karta hu main kuch

Fir lucifer phone kaat deta hai aur college chala jata hai lekin aaj dono behane to aaye hi nahi thi

Fir usse laga koe issue na ban gaya ho esliye bechara bhagte hue unke ghar ke bahar pahuch gaya

Ashmita aur Tara terrace par ghum rahi thi esliye unhone lucifer ko dekh liya tha aur lucifer ko bhi unki smell aagaye thi esliye usne bhi acting start kar di aur kisi se address puchne laga

Ashmita upar se lucifer ko hi dekhe ja rahi thi fir pata nahi usse kya hua ki vo niche aagye aur bahar nikal aaye

Tab tak lucifer guards se thoda door ja chuka tha aur ashmita uske piche piche ja rahi thi

Kuch hi door me ashmita ne lucifer ko pakad liya ya fir yu kaha jaye ki lucifer ne khud ko pakdva diya

Lucifer- aap mera picha kyu kar rahi ho?
Ashmita- ye to main tumse puchna chahti hu
Aur aap?

Lucifer- mujhe kaam hai to bye
Ashmita- tum mere ghar ke bahar kya kar rahe the?

Lucifer- man nahi lag raha tha tumhe dekhe bina esliye dekhne aagya tha
Ashmita- aagaye na apni aukat me

Lucifer- tumhri problem kya hai?
Main apne kaam se ja raha hu vo bhi tumse dekha nahi ja raha kya?
Ashmita- tum mere ghar ke bahar kyu khade the?

Lucifer- konsa ghar tha tumhra?
Ashmita- jada bano mat
Bahut ache se janti hu main tum jaise logo ko

Lucifer- kyu istemaal karti ho fir etne jada ko?
Ashmita- youuuu

Lucifer- jada you you you karne ki koe jarurat nahi hai
Tum ameer baap ki beti ho swarg jaisi zindagi hai aur meri narak jaisi
Esliye apne kaam se kaam rakho
Ashmita- vohi rakh rahi thi lekin fir tu aagya

Lucifer- ha ha vo bachpan wala to nahi aaya na?
Sala ek dhokha saha jata nahi ense aur bante aise hai jaise pata nahi kya hi kar denge
Bathi rahna puri zindagi aur rote rahna ki meri kya galti thi kyu chhod ke gaya vo mujhe kya main etni buri hu...
Yehi karna kyuki tum jaisi kamjor ladkiya sirf etna hi kar sakti hai
Baki ladkiyo ka bhi naam kharab kar rahi hai
Dobara mere samne mat aana nahi to jo thodi bahut izzat main rakh raha hu vo bhi utaar dunga puri

Aur lucifer etna sab sunane ke baad vaha se chala gaya lekin ashmita ke dil ke chithade uda gaya
Usne jo dard salo se daba rakha tha aaj vo ek jhatke me hara hogya
Usse ab vaha khada bhi nahi raha ja raha tha aisa lag raha tha jaise uske pairo me jaan hi nahi bachi
Aankhon se lagatar aashu bahe ja rahe the aur najare door jate lucifer par tiki hue thi

Vo tab tak vahi khadi rahi jab tak Tara usse dundte dundte vaha nahi aagaye ho fir badi muskil se usse samjha bujha kar ghar leke aaye

Lucifer ko bhi nahi pata tha ki usse kya hogya tha vo to bc vaha ashmita ko sahi salamaat dekhne aaya tha aur yaha usse dunia bhar ka gum deke chala gaya

Lekin abhi tak usse realize nahi hua tha ki usne kya kar diya tha

Vo ghum fir ke dusre raste se vapas aa raha tha
Raste se kuch chocolates vagra li aur vahi tahalne laga

Lucifer ka man to tha madhuri ma'am ke pass jane ka
Vo ma'am se kahi na kahi attract ho raha tha kyu?
Ye to pata nahi lekin ashmita ya Tara se kahi jada lucifer madhuri ma'am ki taraf khich raha tha aur usse ye bhi pata tha ki ma'am ki ek beti hai jispar lucifer ka galat asar pad sakta hai
Lekin jab insaano ke bich rahega aur soch bhi to insaano jaisi ho jayegi
KUTTI

Kya yaar itna chota update
Update acha hai but suru hote hi khatam ho gaya ese to interest hi chala jata hai padhne ka please kuch karo

 

[kingkhankar]

UPDATE-09
Suresh- beta tum dono se kuch baat karni thi
Tara- bataeye dad

Suresh- main soch raha tha ki tum dono thoda thoda business bhi sambhalne lago
Ashmita- lekin humara to college chal raha hai dad

Suresh- mujhe pata hai beta
Dekho Tara to final year me hai usko jada stress nahi hai aur tum bhi apne exams dene chali jaya karna

Tara- lekin dad aise achanak?
Suresh- achanak nahi beta main kafi dino se es baare me soch raha tha aur ab main buddha bhi hone laga hu sab kuch akele se handle nahi ho raha

Ashmita- haha mere dad ab buddhe hone lag gaye
Vaise bol to sahi rahe ho aap chehra murjha gaya hai aapka
Hahaha
Tara- dad aap humse kuch chhupa rahe ho

Suresh- ab main tumse kya chhupaunga?
Jitna jaldi business join karoge, samjhne lagoge utna hi acha hai na beta
Aur baad me bhi to tum dono ko hi dekhna hai esse acha abhi se start kar do
Ashmita- jab tak aap sach nahi batoge main kuch nahi karenge

Suresh- are ye hi sach hai beta
Tara- ashmita sahi bol rahi hai
Ab agar aap chahte ho ki hum business join kare to aapko hume sab sach sach batana padega

Suresh- tum dono to mujh par bilkul bhi trust nahi karte
Tara- aap sach nahi bataoge to kaise karenge?

Suresh- dekho beta jab aadmi tarakki karne lag jata hai na to uske dusman bahut ban jate hai fir vo sirf unse fayda kaise uthaya jaye ye hi sochta hai
Esliye bol raha hu ki business join kar lo yaha security issues bhi nahi hoga aur mera workload bhi kam ho jayega
Ashmita- aap esliye bol rahe ho na kyuki aapko dar hai ki hume kuch ho na jaye college me?

Suresh- ye bhi ek reason hai
Tumhe mana thodi kar raha hu main
Exam dene chale jana
Tara- theek haia hum soch ke batayenge lekin aap hume force nahi karoge?

Suresh- aaj tak kiya hai kya?
Ashmita- mere pyaare dad
Thank you

Uske baad vo dono suresh ke room se chale jate hai

Ab suresh ko pura yakeen tha ki uski dono betiya ha hi karegi kyuki usne baaton me fasaya hi aisa hai dono ko
Esliye thoda relax hogya tha vo

Dusri taraf

Naag- bhai vo ashmita kisi se pyaar karti thi bachpan me
Lucifer- to main kya karu?

Naag- bhai vo ladka fir kahi chala gaya Ashmita ko chhod ke
Lucifer- to?

Naag- esliye usse ladke pasand nahi hai ab
Vo sochti hai jisse vo pyaar karegi vo fir usse chhod ke bhag jayega
Lucifer- kuch jada hi chutiya hai insaan jitna maine socha tha usse bhi jada

Naag- bhai maine bata di information aapko ab mujhe nikalo es muskil se
Lucifer- Abe underground hojana kuch dino ke liye
Main bachaunga to fir kuch logo ko marna padega aur fir aur log teri marne aayenge

Naag- ye to dhokha hai
Aapne bola tha aap bachaoge mujhe
Lucifer- dekh mujhe ek hi tarika pata hai bas fir baad me mat bolna ki aur jada fasa diya maine tujhe

Naag- kaha underground hu?
Koe jagah to bata do
Lucifer- sale gunda tu hai ya main?

Naag- aap to hawan ho
Lucifer- to fir aana hell me kabhi achi achi jagah dikhaunga

Naag- bhai please kuch kar do
Mere sare addo par police ka kabja hai
Lucifer- thoda under ground rah karta hu main kuch

Fir lucifer phone kaat deta hai aur college chala jata hai lekin aaj dono behane to aaye hi nahi thi

Fir usse laga koe issue na ban gaya ho esliye bechara bhagte hue unke ghar ke bahar pahuch gaya

Ashmita aur Tara terrace par ghum rahi thi esliye unhone lucifer ko dekh liya tha aur lucifer ko bhi unki smell aagaye thi esliye usne bhi acting start kar di aur kisi se address puchne laga

Ashmita upar se lucifer ko hi dekhe ja rahi thi fir pata nahi usse kya hua ki vo niche aagye aur bahar nikal aaye

Tab tak lucifer guards se thoda door ja chuka tha aur ashmita uske piche piche ja rahi thi

Kuch hi door me ashmita ne lucifer ko pakad liya ya fir yu kaha jaye ki lucifer ne khud ko pakdva diya

Lucifer- aap mera picha kyu kar rahi ho?
Ashmita- ye to main tumse puchna chahti hu
Aur aap?

Lucifer- mujhe kaam hai to bye
Ashmita- tum mere ghar ke bahar kya kar rahe the?

Lucifer- man nahi lag raha tha tumhe dekhe bina esliye dekhne aagya tha
Ashmita- aagaye na apni aukat me

Lucifer- tumhri problem kya hai?
Main apne kaam se ja raha hu vo bhi tumse dekha nahi ja raha kya?
Ashmita- tum mere ghar ke bahar kyu khade the?

Lucifer- konsa ghar tha tumhra?
Ashmita- jada bano mat
Bahut ache se janti hu main tum jaise logo ko

Lucifer- kyu istemaal karti ho fir etne jada ko?
Ashmita- youuuu

Lucifer- jada you you you karne ki koe jarurat nahi hai
Tum ameer baap ki beti ho swarg jaisi zindagi hai aur meri narak jaisi
Esliye apne kaam se kaam rakho
Ashmita- vohi rakh rahi thi lekin fir tu aagya

Lucifer- ha ha vo bachpan wala to nahi aaya na?
Sala ek dhokha saha jata nahi ense aur bante aise hai jaise pata nahi kya hi kar denge
Bathi rahna puri zindagi aur rote rahna ki meri kya galti thi kyu chhod ke gaya vo mujhe kya main etni buri hu...
Yehi karna kyuki tum jaisi kamjor ladkiya sirf etna hi kar sakti hai
Baki ladkiyo ka bhi naam kharab kar rahi hai
Dobara mere samne mat aana nahi to jo thodi bahut izzat main rakh raha hu vo bhi utaar dunga puri

Aur lucifer etna sab sunane ke baad vaha se chala gaya lekin ashmita ke dil ke chithade uda gaya
Usne jo dard salo se daba rakha tha aaj vo ek jhatke me hara hogya
Usse ab vaha khada bhi nahi raha ja raha tha aisa lag raha tha jaise uske pairo me jaan hi nahi bachi
Aankhon se lagatar aashu bahe ja rahe the aur najare door jate lucifer par tiki hue thi

Vo tab tak vahi khadi rahi jab tak Tara usse dundte dundte vaha nahi aagaye ho fir badi muskil se usse samjha bujha kar ghar leke aaye

Lucifer ko bhi nahi pata tha ki usse kya hogya tha vo to bc vaha ashmita ko sahi salamaat dekhne aaya tha aur yaha usse dunia bhar ka gum deke chala gaya

Lekin abhi tak usse realize nahi hua tha ki usne kya kar diya tha

Vo ghum fir ke dusre raste se vapas aa raha tha
Raste se kuch chocolates vagra li aur vahi tahalne laga

Lucifer ka man to tha madhuri ma'am ke pass jane ka
Vo ma'am se kahi na kahi attract ho raha tha kyu?
Ye to pata nahi lekin ashmita ya Tara se kahi jada lucifer madhuri ma'am ki taraf khich raha tha aur usse ye bhi pata tha ki ma'am ki ek beti hai jispar lucifer ka galat asar pad sakta hai
Lekin jab insaano ke bich rahega aur soch bhi to insaano jaisi ho jayegi
KUTTI

Lucifer jeisa teacher ho to say students ek dum sudhar jayenge........

 

[Thakur]

Awesome update

 

[A.B.KING]

Nice update

 

[Reza]

Superb Update Bro...
Waiting for Next

 

[Naik]

UPDATE-8
Guruji- tum mujhe baar baar aake uske karname mat bataya karo
Agar maine lucifer ko bejha hai to kuch soch samjh ke hi bejha hoga esliye uske baare ne sochna ban karo
Aadmi- lekin guruji usne do aadmiyo ko zinda jala diya

Guruji- unka waqt aagya tha aur vaise bhi ye to prakarti ka niyam hai jo aaya hai usse jana to hoga hi
Aadmi- lekin hum kon hote hai ye batane wale ki kab kise jana hai?
Lucifer ko ye haq kisne diya?

Guruji- jab insaano ke bich insaniyat khatam ho jati hai tab bhagwan khud lucifer jaise hawaan ko vaha bejhte hai taki uski hawaniyat dekh ke insaaniyat jaag sake
Aadmi- aisa bhi to ho sakta hai ki vo pehle se bhi jada kharab ho jaye?

Guruji- tum jante nahi ho usse
Abhi to bas suruvaat hai
Ye kahani bahut kuch dikhane wali hai
Aadmi- aap bhi kaha us nashedi writer ki baato me aa rahe ho?
Usse khud nahi pata hota vo kab kya kar raha hota hai

Guruji- lekin uske character ko pata hai ki vo kya kar raha hai
Aadmi- aur ashmita ka kya?
Vo etni jaruri kyu hai?

Guruji- pucho ussi writer se
Kya pata bata de
Aadmi- main ja raha hu
Lekin abhi bhi vahi bolunga lucifer ko vaha bejhne ka faisla theek nahi hai

Dusri taraf

Suresh- sab theek tha aaj?
Guard- sir sab theek tha
Ma'am ghar se college aur college is sidha ghar hi jati hai

Suresh- good
Kuch aisa dikha jo unusual ho?
Guard- aisa to kuch nahi tha sir aaj

Suresh- dhayan rakho
Jaise hi kuch aisa lage bina kuch soche samjhe maar dena baki main sambhal lunga
Guard- okay sir

Suresh- aur meri betiyo ko kuch nahi pata chalna chahiye
Guard- hum duriya bana ke rahte hai

Suresh- etni door bhi mat rahna ki kuch galat ho jaye tumhre pahuchne ke pehle hi
Guard- hum dhyan rakhenge sir

Suresh- theek hai jao ab
Guard vaha se chale jate hai aur suresh kuch sochne lag jata hai

"Agar ashmita aur Tara ko college chhudva ke business me laga du to jada sahi rahega, yaha apno ke bich me rahenge aur jada khatra bhi nahi hoga
Agar jada hi college ki karegi to bol dunga ki exam exam dene chale jao mujhe business me help chahiye main akela pad raha hu, Agar aisa bolunga to mana to bilkul nahi karengi aur aisa bolna hi padega mujhe aur koe option bhi to nahi hai

College me to kuch bhi ho sakta hai unke sath aur har time guards ka sath hona bhi muskil hi hai
Ek second ki bhi chuk muskil me daal sakti hai vaise bhi Sala dusman kuch jada hi hogaye hai humare
Mujhe koe risk nahi lena chahiye
Jaldi se jaldi mujhe dono se baat karni padegi aur unhe samjhna padega "
Suresh yehi sab sochta raha ki kaise karna jada sahi rahega kyuki usse dusra koe option bhi nahi dikh raha tha

Vahi tisri taraf

1-"Kaha hai vo dono jinko un ladkiyo ke peeche dala tha?"
2-"Bhai pata nahi phone bhi nahi utha rahe aur kuch Intel bhi nahi aa rahi ab to "
1-"Unke ghar jake pata kiya kya?"
2-"Kiya tha lekin vo ghar bhi nahi pahuche hai tab se"
1-"Kaha mar gaye sale etna important kaam hai"
2-"Bhai kisi aur ko laga dete hai?"
1-"Lagana to padega hi lekin sath me ye bhi pata karo ki unka kya hua?
Kisi ne tapka to nahi diya hai?"
2-"Bina kisi reason ke?
Muskil lagta hai bhai"
1-"Aisa bhi to ho sakta hai ki koe reason ho aur hume hi na pata ho?"
2-" theek hai bhai main karta hu kuch"
1-"jaldi kar agar humare admiyo ko kuch hua hai to hume jaldi pata karna padega kahi sala koe humari hi fielding lagaye batha ho"
2- "main abhi lagata hu kuch bando ko kaam pe
1-"yaha kyu khada hai fir ja aur kaam kar"

Vapas lucifer ki taraf

Raat ka waqt tha aur lucifer apne real face par aa raha tha vo bahut control karne ki kosis kar raha tha ki aisa na ho lekin uska control khud ke upar se khatam sa hota ja raha tha

Lucifer- ye kya ho raha hai mere sath
Aise to pehle kabhi nahi hua ki main apne aap real face me aajau
Kuch to gadbad hai yaha
Agar aisa hi chalta raha to main bilkul apna control kho dunga aur mujhe raat ko chhup kar rahna padega
Mujhe kuch na kuch to eska ilaaz karna hoga aur vo bhi jaldi se jaldi lekin kaise?
Guruji se puchu?
Lekin vo humesha ki tarah mujhe kuch batayenge nahi
Fir kya karu main?
Abhi to yaha aaye kuch hi din hue hai aur abhi se aisa hone lag gaya pata nahi aage kya kya hoga
Guruji ne mujhe kaha fasa diya
Dhayan lagana suru karta hu vapas se usse se ab kuch ho sakta hai
Bahut saalo se dhayan lagaya hi nahi maine kya pata ussi vajah se sab ho raha ho
Aaj se vapas dhayan lagana suru karunga

Yaha sab ke life me kuch na kuch chod to chal hi raha tha aur sab apne apne tareeko se usse suljane ki kosis bhi kar rahe the lekin dekhna ye hoga ki kon kar pata hai
Kyuki sab aapas me interlinked to hai hi aur essi vajah se Agar ek success hua to automatically dusra haar jayega aur agar ek haar gaya to dusra jeet jayega
Bahut locha hai bhai

Aise hi subah hogaye aur lucifer ka phone bajane laga
Lucifer- kya hua?
Naag- bhai police kutto ki tarah hume doond rahi hai
Aapko bola tha na ki police walo ko maroge to vo hume doguna marenge

Lucifer- mujhe kyu phone kar raha hai?
Naag- aapki vajah se hi to ye sab hua hai

Lucifer- apni deal thi jo dono side se puri ho gaye
Maine tere aadmi bahar nikale aur tu mujhe un ladkiyo ki information de raha hai
Eske baad jo tere sath hoga usme maine kaise involve ho gaya?
Naag- bade matlabi ho bhai
Aapki vajah se hi main fas raha hu
Kuch dino me bande to vaise bhi nikal jate ab Sala police meri aur gand todenge

Lucifer- mujhe 24 ghanto me kuch achi new suna aur main tujhe bacha lunga police se lekin 24 hours ke ander ander
Naag- ab main kya batau?
Sab to pehle hi bata chuka hu

Lucifer- ye mujhe nahi pata
24hours hai tere pass
Aur lucifer phone kaat deta aur bahar aajata hai

Aaj Sunday tha to college vagra to band the esliye vaha jana nahi tha to yuhi gumne lag gaya

Abhi market ke side se nikal raha tha ki madhuri ma'am sabjiya lete dikh gaye aur usne vo kiya jo nahi karna chahiye tha vo ma'am ke pass pahuch gaya

Lucifer- ma'am maas (flesh) jada acha hota hai body ke liye
Bilkul ma'am ke pass jake bola
Ek baar to madhuri ma'am thoda dar gaye lekin fir lucifer ko dekh ke vapas sabjiya lene lag gaye

Lucifer- mujhe aisa kyu lag raha hai ki main yaha hoke bhi nahi hu?
Ma'am- kyuki tumhe yaha nahi hona chahiye

Lucifer- acha ma'am main soch raha tha ki agar aap mujhe apne hatho ka khana khilao to main aapko ek favor de sakta hu
Ma'am- kaisa favor?

Lucifer- aap us favor ke badle kuch bhi maang sakte ho
Aur kuch bhi ye mera matlab kuch bhi hai
Ma'am- khane ke badle favor maang ke khane ki bejjati nahi karungi main

Lucifer- to fir bina favor ke khila do
Ma'am- aajana shayam ko

Lucifer- shayam hi to ho rakhi hai
Ma'am ne ab tak samaan le liya tha aur beg utha ke chalne lag gaye thi

Lucifer- theek hai bye
Lucifer ma'am ko jate dekh ke bola
Ma'am ruki ek second ke liye piche mudi fir tumhra naam kya hai?

Lucifer- shishy (student)
Vaise aap mujhe lucifer bula sakti hai
Ma'am- bye
Aur Ma'am bolke vaha se chali gaye

Lucifer thoda gumta ghumta ashmita ke ghar ka ek round mara, sab check kiya aur vapas aagaya

Abhi raste me kuch sochta aa raha tha ki ma'am ke ghar jaye ya nahi fir yaad aaya ki sala raat ho gaye hai aur kahi vaha chehra na badal jaye bc gand fat jayegi sab ki esliye ye plan cancel kar diya aur apne hi flat aagaya....

Bahot badhiya
Shaandaar update
Lajawab

 

[Naik]

UPDATE-09
Suresh- beta tum dono se kuch baat karni thi
Tara- bataeye dad

Suresh- main soch raha tha ki tum dono thoda thoda business bhi sambhalne lago
Ashmita- lekin humara to college chal raha hai dad

Suresh- mujhe pata hai beta
Dekho Tara to final year me hai usko jada stress nahi hai aur tum bhi apne exams dene chali jaya karna

Tara- lekin dad aise achanak?
Suresh- achanak nahi beta main kafi dino se es baare me soch raha tha aur ab main buddha bhi hone laga hu sab kuch akele se handle nahi ho raha

Ashmita- haha mere dad ab buddhe hone lag gaye
Vaise bol to sahi rahe ho aap chehra murjha gaya hai aapka
Hahaha
Tara- dad aap humse kuch chhupa rahe ho

Suresh- ab main tumse kya chhupaunga?
Jitna jaldi business join karoge, samjhne lagoge utna hi acha hai na beta
Aur baad me bhi to tum dono ko hi dekhna hai esse acha abhi se start kar do
Ashmita- jab tak aap sach nahi batoge main kuch nahi karenge

Suresh- are ye hi sach hai beta
Tara- ashmita sahi bol rahi hai
Ab agar aap chahte ho ki hum business join kare to aapko hume sab sach sach batana padega

Suresh- tum dono to mujh par bilkul bhi trust nahi karte
Tara- aap sach nahi bataoge to kaise karenge?

Suresh- dekho beta jab aadmi tarakki karne lag jata hai na to uske dusman bahut ban jate hai fir vo sirf unse fayda kaise uthaya jaye ye hi sochta hai
Esliye bol raha hu ki business join kar lo yaha security issues bhi nahi hoga aur mera workload bhi kam ho jayega
Ashmita- aap esliye bol rahe ho na kyuki aapko dar hai ki hume kuch ho na jaye college me?

Suresh- ye bhi ek reason hai
Tumhe mana thodi kar raha hu main
Exam dene chale jana
Tara- theek haia hum soch ke batayenge lekin aap hume force nahi karoge?

Suresh- aaj tak kiya hai kya?
Ashmita- mere pyaare dad
Thank you

Uske baad vo dono suresh ke room se chale jate hai

Ab suresh ko pura yakeen tha ki uski dono betiya ha hi karegi kyuki usne baaton me fasaya hi aisa hai dono ko
Esliye thoda relax hogya tha vo

Dusri taraf

Naag- bhai vo ashmita kisi se pyaar karti thi bachpan me
Lucifer- to main kya karu?

Naag- bhai vo ladka fir kahi chala gaya Ashmita ko chhod ke
Lucifer- to?

Naag- esliye usse ladke pasand nahi hai ab
Vo sochti hai jisse vo pyaar karegi vo fir usse chhod ke bhag jayega
Lucifer- kuch jada hi chutiya hai insaan jitna maine socha tha usse bhi jada

Naag- bhai maine bata di information aapko ab mujhe nikalo es muskil se
Lucifer- Abe underground hojana kuch dino ke liye
Main bachaunga to fir kuch logo ko marna padega aur fir aur log teri marne aayenge

Naag- ye to dhokha hai
Aapne bola tha aap bachaoge mujhe
Lucifer- dekh mujhe ek hi tarika pata hai bas fir baad me mat bolna ki aur jada fasa diya maine tujhe

Naag- kaha underground hu?
Koe jagah to bata do
Lucifer- sale gunda tu hai ya main?

Naag- aap to hawan ho
Lucifer- to fir aana hell me kabhi achi achi jagah dikhaunga

Naag- bhai please kuch kar do
Mere sare addo par police ka kabja hai
Lucifer- thoda under ground rah karta hu main kuch

Fir lucifer phone kaat deta hai aur college chala jata hai lekin aaj dono behane to aaye hi nahi thi

Fir usse laga koe issue na ban gaya ho esliye bechara bhagte hue unke ghar ke bahar pahuch gaya

Ashmita aur Tara terrace par ghum rahi thi esliye unhone lucifer ko dekh liya tha aur lucifer ko bhi unki smell aagaye thi esliye usne bhi acting start kar di aur kisi se address puchne laga

Ashmita upar se lucifer ko hi dekhe ja rahi thi fir pata nahi usse kya hua ki vo niche aagye aur bahar nikal aaye

Tab tak lucifer guards se thoda door ja chuka tha aur ashmita uske piche piche ja rahi thi

Kuch hi door me ashmita ne lucifer ko pakad liya ya fir yu kaha jaye ki lucifer ne khud ko pakdva diya

Lucifer- aap mera picha kyu kar rahi ho?
Ashmita- ye to main tumse puchna chahti hu
Aur aap?

Lucifer- mujhe kaam hai to bye
Ashmita- tum mere ghar ke bahar kya kar rahe the?

Lucifer- man nahi lag raha tha tumhe dekhe bina esliye dekhne aagya tha
Ashmita- aagaye na apni aukat me

Lucifer- tumhri problem kya hai?
Main apne kaam se ja raha hu vo bhi tumse dekha nahi ja raha kya?
Ashmita- tum mere ghar ke bahar kyu khade the?

Lucifer- konsa ghar tha tumhra?
Ashmita- jada bano mat
Bahut ache se janti hu main tum jaise logo ko

Lucifer- kyu istemaal karti ho fir etne jada ko?
Ashmita- youuuu

Lucifer- jada you you you karne ki koe jarurat nahi hai
Tum ameer baap ki beti ho swarg jaisi zindagi hai aur meri narak jaisi
Esliye apne kaam se kaam rakho
Ashmita- vohi rakh rahi thi lekin fir tu aagya

Lucifer- ha ha vo bachpan wala to nahi aaya na?
Sala ek dhokha saha jata nahi ense aur bante aise hai jaise pata nahi kya hi kar denge
Bathi rahna puri zindagi aur rote rahna ki meri kya galti thi kyu chhod ke gaya vo mujhe kya main etni buri hu...
Yehi karna kyuki tum jaisi kamjor ladkiya sirf etna hi kar sakti hai
Baki ladkiyo ka bhi naam kharab kar rahi hai
Dobara mere samne mat aana nahi to jo thodi bahut izzat main rakh raha hu vo bhi utaar dunga puri

Aur lucifer etna sab sunane ke baad vaha se chala gaya lekin ashmita ke dil ke chithade uda gaya
Usne jo dard salo se daba rakha tha aaj vo ek jhatke me hara hogya
Usse ab vaha khada bhi nahi raha ja raha tha aisa lag raha tha jaise uske pairo me jaan hi nahi bachi
Aankhon se lagatar aashu bahe ja rahe the aur najare door jate lucifer par tiki hue thi

Vo tab tak vahi khadi rahi jab tak Tara usse dundte dundte vaha nahi aagaye ho fir badi muskil se usse samjha bujha kar ghar leke aaye

Lucifer ko bhi nahi pata tha ki usse kya hogya tha vo to bc vaha ashmita ko sahi salamaat dekhne aaya tha aur yaha usse dunia bhar ka gum deke chala gaya

Lekin abhi tak usse realize nahi hua tha ki usne kya kar diya tha

Vo ghum fir ke dusre raste se vapas aa raha tha
Raste se kuch chocolates vagra li aur vahi tahalne laga

Lucifer ka man to tha madhuri ma'am ke pass jane ka
Vo ma'am se kahi na kahi attract ho raha tha kyu?
Ye to pata nahi lekin ashmita ya Tara se kahi jada lucifer madhuri ma'am ki taraf khich raha tha aur usse ye bhi pata tha ki ma'am ki ek beti hai jispar lucifer ka galat asar pad sakta hai
Lekin jab insaano ke bich rahega aur soch bhi to insaano jaisi ho jayegi
KUTTI

Badhiya shaandaar update bhai
Asmita ka saalo ka gam jo kahi daba huwa tha aaj Lucifer n hawa leker taza kar dia ab dekhte h yeh gam kia kerta h asmita ko
Tow Lucifer bhai ka Madhuri mam ki tarf jhukaow badhta jaa raha h dekhte h yeh jhukaow kia kia rang dikhata h
Badhiya shaandaar update bhai

 

[Anu3832]

UPDATE-09
Suresh- beta tum dono se kuch baat karni thi
Tara- bataeye dad

Suresh- main soch raha tha ki tum dono thoda thoda business bhi sambhalne lago
Ashmita- lekin humara to college chal raha hai dad

Suresh- mujhe pata hai beta
Dekho Tara to final year me hai usko jada stress nahi hai aur tum bhi apne exams dene chali jaya karna

Tara- lekin dad aise achanak?
Suresh- achanak nahi beta main kafi dino se es baare me soch raha tha aur ab main buddha bhi hone laga hu sab kuch akele se handle nahi ho raha

Ashmita- haha mere dad ab buddhe hone lag gaye
Vaise bol to sahi rahe ho aap chehra murjha gaya hai aapka
Hahaha
Tara- dad aap humse kuch chhupa rahe ho

Suresh- ab main tumse kya chhupaunga?
Jitna jaldi business join karoge, samjhne lagoge utna hi acha hai na beta
Aur baad me bhi to tum dono ko hi dekhna hai esse acha abhi se start kar do
Ashmita- jab tak aap sach nahi batoge main kuch nahi karenge

Suresh- are ye hi sach hai beta
Tara- ashmita sahi bol rahi hai
Ab agar aap chahte ho ki hum business join kare to aapko hume sab sach sach batana padega

Suresh- tum dono to mujh par bilkul bhi trust nahi karte
Tara- aap sach nahi bataoge to kaise karenge?

Suresh- dekho beta jab aadmi tarakki karne lag jata hai na to uske dusman bahut ban jate hai fir vo sirf unse fayda kaise uthaya jaye ye hi sochta hai
Esliye bol raha hu ki business join kar lo yaha security issues bhi nahi hoga aur mera workload bhi kam ho jayega
Ashmita- aap esliye bol rahe ho na kyuki aapko dar hai ki hume kuch ho na jaye college me?

Suresh- ye bhi ek reason hai
Tumhe mana thodi kar raha hu main
Exam dene chale jana
Tara- theek haia hum soch ke batayenge lekin aap hume force nahi karoge?

Suresh- aaj tak kiya hai kya?
Ashmita- mere pyaare dad
Thank you

Uske baad vo dono suresh ke room se chale jate hai

Ab suresh ko pura yakeen tha ki uski dono betiya ha hi karegi kyuki usne baaton me fasaya hi aisa hai dono ko
Esliye thoda relax hogya tha vo

Dusri taraf

Naag- bhai vo ashmita kisi se pyaar karti thi bachpan me
Lucifer- to main kya karu?

Naag- bhai vo ladka fir kahi chala gaya Ashmita ko chhod ke
Lucifer- to?

Naag- esliye usse ladke pasand nahi hai ab
Vo sochti hai jisse vo pyaar karegi vo fir usse chhod ke bhag jayega
Lucifer- kuch jada hi chutiya hai insaan jitna maine socha tha usse bhi jada

Naag- bhai maine bata di information aapko ab mujhe nikalo es muskil se
Lucifer- Abe underground hojana kuch dino ke liye
Main bachaunga to fir kuch logo ko marna padega aur fir aur log teri marne aayenge

Naag- ye to dhokha hai
Aapne bola tha aap bachaoge mujhe
Lucifer- dekh mujhe ek hi tarika pata hai bas fir baad me mat bolna ki aur jada fasa diya maine tujhe

Naag- kaha underground hu?
Koe jagah to bata do
Lucifer- sale gunda tu hai ya main?

Naag- aap to hawan ho
Lucifer- to fir aana hell me kabhi achi achi jagah dikhaunga

Naag- bhai please kuch kar do
Mere sare addo par police ka kabja hai
Lucifer- thoda under ground rah karta hu main kuch

Fir lucifer phone kaat deta hai aur college chala jata hai lekin aaj dono behane to aaye hi nahi thi

Fir usse laga koe issue na ban gaya ho esliye bechara bhagte hue unke ghar ke bahar pahuch gaya

Ashmita aur Tara terrace par ghum rahi thi esliye unhone lucifer ko dekh liya tha aur lucifer ko bhi unki smell aagaye thi esliye usne bhi acting start kar di aur kisi se address puchne laga

Ashmita upar se lucifer ko hi dekhe ja rahi thi fir pata nahi usse kya hua ki vo niche aagye aur bahar nikal aaye

Tab tak lucifer guards se thoda door ja chuka tha aur ashmita uske piche piche ja rahi thi

Kuch hi door me ashmita ne lucifer ko pakad liya ya fir yu kaha jaye ki lucifer ne khud ko pakdva diya

Lucifer- aap mera picha kyu kar rahi ho?
Ashmita- ye to main tumse puchna chahti hu
Aur aap?

Lucifer- mujhe kaam hai to bye
Ashmita- tum mere ghar ke bahar kya kar rahe the?

Lucifer- man nahi lag raha tha tumhe dekhe bina esliye dekhne aagya tha
Ashmita- aagaye na apni aukat me

Lucifer- tumhri problem kya hai?
Main apne kaam se ja raha hu vo bhi tumse dekha nahi ja raha kya?
Ashmita- tum mere ghar ke bahar kyu khade the?

Lucifer- konsa ghar tha tumhra?
Ashmita- jada bano mat
Bahut ache se janti hu main tum jaise logo ko

Lucifer- kyu istemaal karti ho fir etne jada ko?
Ashmita- youuuu

Lucifer- jada you you you karne ki koe jarurat nahi hai
Tum ameer baap ki beti ho swarg jaisi zindagi hai aur meri narak jaisi
Esliye apne kaam se kaam rakho
Ashmita- vohi rakh rahi thi lekin fir tu aagya

Lucifer- ha ha vo bachpan wala to nahi aaya na?
Sala ek dhokha saha jata nahi ense aur bante aise hai jaise pata nahi kya hi kar denge
Bathi rahna puri zindagi aur rote rahna ki meri kya galti thi kyu chhod ke gaya vo mujhe kya main etni buri hu...
Yehi karna kyuki tum jaisi kamjor ladkiya sirf etna hi kar sakti hai
Baki ladkiyo ka bhi naam kharab kar rahi hai
Dobara mere samne mat aana nahi to jo thodi bahut izzat main rakh raha hu vo bhi utaar dunga puri

Aur lucifer etna sab sunane ke baad vaha se chala gaya lekin ashmita ke dil ke chithade uda gaya
Usne jo dard salo se daba rakha tha aaj vo ek jhatke me hara hogya
Usse ab vaha khada bhi nahi raha ja raha tha aisa lag raha tha jaise uske pairo me jaan hi nahi bachi
Aankhon se lagatar aashu bahe ja rahe the aur najare door jate lucifer par tiki hue thi

Vo tab tak vahi khadi rahi jab tak Tara usse dundte dundte vaha nahi aagaye ho fir badi muskil se usse samjha bujha kar ghar leke aaye

Lucifer ko bhi nahi pata tha ki usse kya hogya tha vo to bc vaha ashmita ko sahi salamaat dekhne aaya tha aur yaha usse dunia bhar ka gum deke chala gaya

Lekin abhi tak usse realize nahi hua tha ki usne kya kar diya tha

Vo ghum fir ke dusre raste se vapas aa raha tha
Raste se kuch chocolates vagra li aur vahi tahalne laga

Lucifer ka man to tha madhuri ma'am ke pass jane ka
Vo ma'am se kahi na kahi attract ho raha tha kyu?
Ye to pata nahi lekin ashmita ya Tara se kahi jada lucifer madhuri ma'am ki taraf khich raha tha aur usse ye bhi pata tha ki ma'am ki ek beti hai jispar lucifer ka galat asar pad sakta hai
Lekin jab insaano ke bich rahega aur soch bhi to insaano jaisi ho jayegi
KUTTI

Awesome update brother

 

[Sandy307]

Thank you so much bhai
Bhai ye sasta wala maal hai har chorahe par mil jata hai
Ek baar phuko aur pure din ka intezaam ho jata hai
Baki story to aise hi chalte rahegi bas bakchodi thodi aur badh jayegi

Saste Nashe Ke Bi Apne Hi Majey Hai
Sasta nasha

 

[Sandy307]

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