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Fantasy Kaisa Yeh Ishq Hai.... Ajab Sa Risk Hai...... (Completed)

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2 din pahle tak kisi ko pata nahi tha ki yudh ke liye kahan jaye. Lekin Jivisha ke prem vibhor ikchha shakti ne jab pure NilBhut samrajya ko satah ke upar la khada kiya, tab sabko NilBhut day ki seema bhi samjh me aa gayi thi aur humla kahan karna wo bhi...


4 sena nayak ki tukdi unke rajya ko charo ore se gher kar humla karne ke aadesh mil chuke the aur Avinashi khud bilkul samne se uske seema me ghuskar humla karta. Humla karte huye sabhi aage ki ore badhte aur unke mukhya rajya mahal ko apne kabje me lekar iss yudh ka samapan karte..


Dono ore se ran saj chuka tha aur aakhri daw khela jana tha. Universe ke jitne bhi grah aapasi sampark me the, wo sabhi iss yudh par najar banaye huye the…



Shuryodaya hua.. kaan fadne wale siren se Avinashi ne yudh ka aagaj kiya aur sena ko aage badhne ka hukum diya... 100 carore ki 4 tukdi, 4 dishaon se humla karne ke liye ek katar me aage badh chali.. aur bilkul madhya se Avinashi apne 100 caror tukdi aur 1 lakh khatarnak hathiyar parsikshit logon ke sath aage badh chala…


Setllite se dekhne wale jab yah yudh dekh rahe the, tab kewal unhe hansi aur chunauti dene wale bewakoof najar aa rahe the. Pura ka pura 40000 varg kilometre ka area sainikon se ghira hua tha… najar jahan tak daurao charo ore Mahamahim ke sainik najar aa rahe the… ek hara hua yudh jiska Faisal chand Minto me ho jana tha…


Aaj NilBhut kheme ke shurwat junior master Chirag aur Junior Master Aarsi ke taknik se hua. Unke dwara kharide gaye reactor me kiya gaya re-modling se Nischal ke pardarshi surakha ghera ko kayi hajar guna kashmta wala banaya ja chuka tha..


Kayi carore varg kilometer ka yah Zoren grah, jiske pure ilake par Mahamahim ka jhanda lahrata tha, uske matr 40000 varg kilometer ki jagah par, faila hua tha NilBhut samrajya. Aarsi aur Chirag ke reactor se suraksha ghera ki kshmata badhane ke baad Nischal ne kewal ek seema ke 1000 meter ka passage khol rakha tha Jahan sabse aage khadi thi Shwetna aur uske piche takriban 5 carore ki sainya shakti…


Mahamahim ke sainik kewal unhi 1000 meter ke dayre se humla karne ke liye vivas the… Humla karne ke liye utni badi jagah hi nahi thi jitne bade sainya bal ye le'kar ye aa chuke the..


Sena ke 2 mukhya sena nayak apni tukdi ke sath humla karne ke liye kamar kase… 500 meter ki katar se ek sena nayak ki tukdi to 500 meter ki katar se dusre sena-nayak ki sainya tukdi humla karne ke liye aage badi..


Shwetna ne bhi humla ka ishra kiya aur uske bhi sainik badh chale… jaise hi humla ka ishara hua… Mahamahim ki humla karne wali 200 carore ki sainya tukdi, alag hi formation me humla shuru kar chuke the. Sainik ek ke upar ek chadha'kar piramid ka nirman kiye the… samne se bhale hi ghusne ki jagah kam thi lekin ek sath humla karne ki taknik kargar…


Katar ka nirman kuch aisa tha ki sabse pichhe ke katar wale sainik, ek ke upar ek kar'ke 500 log chadhaye the... Uske aage 499 aur aise hi karke sabse aage akela sainik khada tha taki sabse pichhe ke raw wala sainik bhi dur se apne gun ka nishana le sake..


Issi formation ke sath 500 logon ki lambi katar ke sath 30000 sainikon ka raw banaye the. Kul mila'kar 30000X500 sainikon ne sath humla bol diya… Jabki Shwetna ke aage khade kewal 30000 log hi humla kar sakte the aur jab wo girte tab pichhe ke log humla karte.. kabhi aise formation ki to Shwetna ne kalpna bhi nahi ki thi… Ab jab 30000 sainikon ke jawabi humle me 1 crore 50 lakh sainik apna gun chalaye to kya hoga…


Bhishan golabari ka namuna shuru ho chuka tha… humle ka aadesh milte hi apne duhmano par iss kadar wo log haawi huye ki Shwetna ke 5 karor ka sainya bal bhumi par leta hua najar aa raha tha..


Kitne mare kitne ghayal the, uss baat ki pusti to viman ke hospital section me hi hoti, jahan Doctor Ansh, Shwetna ke 50000 logon ke sath sabke upchar keiye tatpar the..


15 minute ke humle ke baad ek chhota sa viram hua aur samne ka dhuan chhatne ka intzar hone laga.. Mahamahim ke sainik ek lay me aawaz laga rahe the.. aisa lag raha tha ek ore nihatthe sainik the aur dusri ore Mahamahim ki hathiyaron se laish sena…


Shwetna:- Shasika lagta hai hum yah yudh haar chuke hain… aap apne logon ke sath yahan se nikal jayen, aaj jab yudh chhida hai to jillat ki zindgi se nijad pakar hi jayenge…


Serin:- Tum bahut bhawuk ho Shwetna… yudh me sahadat to hoti hi hai.. lekin jab tak shwans hai, tab tak hum haar nahi sakte… tum dhairya mat kho… mere sainikon ko taiyar karo ran ke liye.... Aaj sham dhalne tak hum inke bhid ko dikha denge ki jit kiski hai…


Jivisha:- Shwetna main tumhe ab hukum deti hun ki tum viman me jakar Chirag, Aarsi aur Nandni ki madad karo, aur jaisa humne samjhaya hai, thik waisa hi command dena.. hum tay yojna se aage badhenge… to kya hua jo humara pahla yojna puri taraj vifal raha… abhi pura din baki hai…


Serin apne waki par sab ko cordinate karti… "Hum apne logon ko aur nahi kho sakte… teesra phage main abhi activate kar rahi hun… Juniors tumhe jo maine fensing system diya tha unhe kitni der me activate kar sakte ho..



Chirag aur Aarsi ek sath… "Bua 2 minute lagenge..


Serin:- Good, .. Nandni .. kya tum taiyar ho wahan..


Nandni:- Haan puri tarah se taiyar hun… bus idhar ek baar tumhara ishara hua aur udhar main tandav dikhaungi…


Serin:- Jivisha aur Nischal ab sab tum dono par hai… inke dusre phase ke humle ke shuru hote hi pahle Jivisha shuru hogi… main sabse aage khadi hokar apne logon ka netritw karungi…


Jabtak duan chhata, tabtak Serin puri ran-niti tay karke apne 10 lakh khas hathiyar band sainikon ke sath sabse aage khadi thi… Mahamahim ki sainya tukdi hansti hui kuch fasle aur tay kar chuki thi…


Serin ke sainya bal aur Mahamahim ke sainya tukdi ke bich matr 100 meter ka fasla rah chuka tha… tabhi dono tukdi ke sena-nayak jor-jor se hanste huye kahne laga… "Sun ladki tu wo Aizem ke shashak ki complete blood hai na.. maine kabhi kisi raj pariwar ko nanga nahi dekha.. apne kapde utar kar humari ore chali aa.. tujhe chhod denge"..


Dushman se 100 meter ki duri par khade hokar bhasan nahi dena chahiye, ye baat Serin ne uss sena-nayak ko turant hi samjha diya… uski attahas bhadi hansi shuru hi hui thi aur idhar Serin me uske sar par itna high wave chhoda ki uske sar ke chithre udd gaye..


Ek sena-nayak ke marte hi dusra sena-nayak katar ke bich se pichhe jate huye humla ka aadesh diya… idhar humla ka aadesh hua, udhar Jivisha ne apni dono hath khokar hawa me uthayi.. hawa me uthte hath ke sath he aage ke katar ke log bhi hawa me upar deewar banakar tang se gaye… aur agle hi pal Jivisha ka uthta hua hath teji ke sath bhumi par..


Aage ki teen katar hawa me jaise hi uncha gayi, pichhe se nishana lene wale sainik humla ki khabar se itne utsahit the ki apne hi logon par gola bari kar chuke the aur rahi sahi kasar Jivisha ke tandav ne kar dala..


Jivisha teji se aage badhi, fir se hawa me hath aur wapas se teen katar hawa mein… hathon ke ishare se sab upar hawa ki unchaeyon me aur jaise hi hath bhumi par jod se parte, sab se sab tarbuj ki tarah fat jate..


Jivisha ke bhay ke kahar se puri rahbhumi tarra uthi.. issi ke sath … ab tandav ka naya najara shuru hone wala tha.. Nischal, Jivisha se turant sampark banate huye usse ab apni urja wapas aane tak rukne ke liye kaha...


Jaise hi Jivisha ruki Serin ne apne juniors ko ishara kar diya.. 3 din scrape viman par mehnat se banaya fensing device ka najara ab pesh hone wala tha. Ishara milte hi juniors ne reactor ke kshetr ko sabhi ore se aage failana shuru kar diya.. jaise-jaise reacter ka dayra faiil raha tha, surksha ghera aur uske aage ka fensing bhi failna shuru ho chuka tha…


Fencing ka dayra jo thik uss surksha cover ke upar se chadha tha, wo failna shuru ho chuka tha aur sath me shuru hua Nandni ke hatho ke globes ki takat, jise uske pichhe katar me khade 5 lakh NilBhut samuday ke logon ki energy mil rahi thi…


Nandni puri energy control kiye fensing se Mahamahim ke sainikon ke touch hone ka intzar karne lagi. Reactor ke process se fancing aage badhna shuru ho chuka tha aur fensing ke charo ore 22000 volt ki bijli lagatar prawah ho rahi thi.. aur jab se pran ghatak bijli apna dayra badha raha tha thik uss waqt, Jivisha ke humle band ho chuke the. Mahamahim ki bhaybhit sena, kisi tarah humle ke liye himmat juta hi rahi thi.


Jivisha ke kahar se aage ke raw aise tahas nahash huye ki, dono rajya ke sainik ke bich ki duri 100 meter se badh'kar 200 meter ho gayi, aur ab shuru hone wali thi kahar ka nanga nach…


500 meter ki 2 patli electronic blade Serin ke hathon ki gulam thi. Serin apne hath jaise-jaise lahrati wo blade bhi waise waise lahrata.. unka kya adrishi janwar aur kya uske sath khade hathiyaron le laish sainik… Serin ne jab apne blade se kahar barsana shuru kiya to ek sath 300 meter ke dayre ke log kat kar aise gir rahe the mano koi gajar muli kaat raha ho.


1000 meter ka dayra hi Serin ke kahar ke liye sahayd banaya gaya, aur baki ki golai Nandni ke kahar ke liye, jiska 22000 volt ka jhatka, Mahamahim ke sainikon se touch hona shuru ho chuka tha…


Aahhh ! Kya najara tha… Serin ke lachakte blade ki dhar par sainik kat'te huye ja rahe the, jiski kahufnak chinkh uske sena ka hausla tod rahi thi. Wahin thik pichhe ke 10 lakh khas hathiyar dharak sainik ki ek tukdi leti thi, dusri tukdi baithi aur tisri tukdi thik uske piche khadi ho'kar, jab apne hathiyar chalati to pure 500 logon ke raw ko ek sath chhed karke nikal rahe the.. aur idhar hatash sainik jo surakhsha ghera tod nahi paye wo failte dahre ke sath badhati hui fencing se touch ho rahi thi aur dil chirne wala chinkh uski nikal kar rah thi….


Maut ka aisa tandav macha ki dekhte hi dekhte Mahamahim ke sena ki ginti badi teji ke sath ghatna shuru ho gayi. Charo ore bhagdar si machi thi aur 1000 meter samne ke khule passage ke samne koi ek bhi jivit khada nahi tha…


Mukhya sena-nayak Avinashi ne puri sena ko hi NilBhut Rajya se kam se kam 10 kilometer ki duri banane kah chuka tha. 1000 meter ka passage khali hote hi Abhinashi ne yahan maujood 1 sena-nayak ko kosis karna band karke, 10 kilometer piche hatne ke liye bol diya. Idhar bhagte sainik ko dekh'kar Serin ne bhi sab ko rukne ka ishara kiya…


Serin:- Nandni jhatke bahut ho gaye, ab real time aa gaya hai.. tum apne sath ke sabhi prashikshit 4000 logon ko lekar additional control room me pahuncho.


Uss additional control room me Nischal aur Jivisha ke kuch purane aur prithvi ke naye technology ka aisa Sangam tha jise Serin ne 2 dino me taiyar kiya tha, aur ab Nandni aur anay 4000 prashikshit log usse command dene wale the..
 
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Avinashi ke order milte hi sabhi tukdi NilBhut ke rajya se duriyan banana shuru kar chuki thi... Sabhi lagbhag 10 kilometer tak piche hat chuke the.. Samne ka ran pura khali ho chuka tha aur kahin koi jivit sainik najar nahi aa raha tha kewal lasen hi bichhi hui thi.


Avinashi kahin dur baitha humla karne ka aadesh diya, aur NilBhut Rajya par missiles ke badal mandra chuke the. Ek sath itne missiles chhode gaye ki pura aakash dhak chuka tha..


Serin, Avinashi ke redio frequency par aa kar…. "Kyon be chuje mere banaye hatiyar se mujhe hi marne chala hai"..


Avinashi:- Marne chala nahi hun Serin, mar hi diya hun ab bus main apne screen par tumhare chithre hote dekhunga…


Idhar Nandni control room me baith'kar command dena shuru kar di. Anti blasting missile active ho chuke the… aur dekhte hi dekhte hawa me he sare missile dhuan-dhuan ho chuke the…


Serin, ab bhi Avinashi ke frequency par thi, aur usse sunati hui kahne lagi…. "Juniors jara inpar choclet missile girao. Hum bhi to jarra iss dhille ki taiyari to dekhe..


Avinashi:- Bus kya Serin purani baten .. jab tumne mujhe haraya tha, tab main bacha tha.. ab main faulad hun.. aur tumhe nahi lagta ki ye chhote patakhe (chocklet missile) humara kya bigad lenge…..


Serin:- Bewakoof..


Avinashi jab tak apni bewakoofi samjh pata, tabtak usne anti blasting missiles command de diye… missile se missile hawa me takrayi aur chhote chhote-chocklet ki barish aakash se hone lagi.


Jaise hi wo niche jamin par girte, halake pile rang ke dhuyen ke sath, itna tej acid hawa me chhod rahe the ki Mahamahim ke lagbhag sainik uss acid ke chapet me aa gaye…


Duan sarir ke jis hisse me lagta kapde sahit mans ko aisa gala raha tha ki charo ore pira se sabhi karrah rahe the… 500 carore ki kul sena se lagbhag 2 carore log hi samne ki ladai me mare gaye the. Lekin jab se tecnology ladai shuru hui thi, Serin ke pahle hi war se Mahamahim ki lagbhag sabhi tukdiyan prabhavit ho chuki thi.. aur jo prabhawit nahi huye the wo bhid se alag hokar apne adrishi janwar par sawar hokar bhagna shuru kar chuke the…


Serin:- Kya Avinashi, dhile mujh se technology ladai ladne aaya hai.. next item pesh kar…


Next item pesh karne ke liye uska swasthaya hona bhi to jaroori tha.. wo aur uske 1 lakh log iss prakar acid ki chapet me aaye the unke chehre se lekar paun aur hath tak jhulse huye the. Radio ke dusre ore se kewal chinkh hi sunai de rahi thi…


Lagbhag 600 km dur ke sainya base par Mahamahim pura yudh dekh raha tha. Shurvat ke jit ki khushi ke alawa pichhle 2 ghante me usse koi achhi khabar nahi mili thi… baukhlahat me Mahamahim ne apne teeno sena-nayak se wapas ussi formation me ladne ke aadesh de diye jiski shurwat se unhe jit mili thi…


Mahamahim apne logon ko aadesh de hi raha tha, ki tabhi uss sainya base par katuhal ka mahol sa ho gaya. Bhagte huye kayi sainik Mahamahim ke pass aakar bahar ka najara dekhne ke liye kahne lage…


Virane me bana ek bada sa sainya base, jahan 5 lakh sainikon ke sath Mahamahim yudh ka najara dekh rahe the. Ye 5 lakh Mahamahim ke mukhya angrakshak kahlate the jo kafi kurur aur atyachari the aur inke atyachar ki kahani ka anth likha ja raha tha….


Kahin dur me Jivisha khadi hokar hans rahi thi aur apne hathon ko jaise hi wo hawa me lahrati, log khud-w-khud upar uth jate. Aur upar ka jo najara tha usse dehkar to Mahamahim ke mathe se bhi pasina chune laga…


Jivisha ke hath hawa me faile aur Nischal ki wo tej daur.. jabtak Jivisha hath upar utha kar niche bhumi par marti, uss se pahle hi Nischal ka khanjar faisla kar jati aur niche kati fati lash girna shuru ho jati..


Maut ka aisa tandav karne me dono vyast the ki wahan ke sainik me bhagdar si machne lagi, lekin apne maut se tej koi bhag paya hai kya…


Nischal apni raftar se jiske pass se gujar jata, piche uske chira hua badan 2 hisson me bant'kar gir jata… "Baby kuch chuhon ka shikar mujhe bhi karna hai, sab tum hi maar rahe ho"..


Nischal:- My love, tumne to rajya ke dwar par bhi to kitno ko mara tha. Tum to yahan uss chuhe ko lalkaro na, jo chhipa hua hai.. baki uss Parijivi Mittoso ke kidon ko main dekhta hun…


Jivisha:- Good idea… oye kide Mittoso, kahan apne base par khada hai sale.. chal aa ja maidan me.. pura din nahi hai mere pass ladne ke liye… baby sala apne base se bahar na aa raha hai.. apne kaan band karo main 2-4 achi wali, aur sanskaron wali gali de dun..


Nischal, bina raham ke lagatar uske angrakshakon ko kat'te huye…. "Nana muh ganda mat karo.. ruko main bulata hun... Chutiye Mahamahim.. aa ja ranbhumi me beta… aaj teri aisi bajegi ki sare gaaa maaa paaa wale bhi samjh na payenge ki ye tabla baja tha ya tera puchhwada…


Jivisha:- Huhhh !!! Ek to mujhe gali dene se rok diye upar se ye gali thi ya apne kisi dost se baat kar rahe the. Dhyan se suno kaise bhadas wali gali dete hai... Oye maa de fokke Mittoso.. tera double dj sale.. jaldi bahar aa..


Nischal:- Ab ye maa de fokke ka kya matlab hua.. aur tere double dj ka kya matlab hai..


Jivisha:- Wahhhh ! Sab ko maar diye.. Ab jaldi se aakar mujhe kiss do fir batati hun matlab..


"Hahaha... Intense situation me bhi iski ye adayen".. Nischal hanste huye uske pass pahuncha aur apne honth se honth laga kar Jivisha ko chumne laga


Idhar Mahamahim apne sena ko wapas aane ka hukum de chuka tha… hukum dekar wo bahar nikla… najara bahut bhishan tha aur Mahamahim apne dushman se nipatne khud bahar aa kar Jivisha ki lalkaar aur Nischal ki raftaar dekh raha tha…


Nischal ki raftar aur uska khanjar, aaj Mahamahim ke sabse kurur logon ka imtahaan lena shuru kar chuki thi aur jo bina imtahaan diye bhagne ki jee tod kosis kar rahe the, unhe pakad kar exam dilwaya ja raha tha.


Mahamahim ke aakhon ke aage jo najara tha wo kururta ki prakashth paribhasha thi, jisme Nischal daurte huye jiske pass se gujarta, uss ke kamar ke bich apna khanjar ghusa kar, bich se ridh ki haddi sahit sar ko chirte huye, aage nikal jata…


Mahamahim ke aakhon me khun utar aaya tha. Pahle apne 5 lakh logon ka marna, fir Nischal aur Jivisha ki lalkaar aur galiyan. Aur ab dono ek dusre ko aise chum rahe the, mano yahan uska koi astitwa hi nahi. Mahamahim apne ek-ek kadam badhate apne dono hath jaise hi niche se upar le gaya, ret ka bawandar niche se upar uthne laga…


Aisa lag raha tha Mahamahim ne pura ret ka samundr utha rakha tha jise hath ke ishare se usne Nischal aur Jivisha ke ore dhakel diya… Puri ret tej bawandar me tabdil ho'kar bekabu raftar se unki ore badhne lagi… Jivisha, Nischal ko chumti rahi aur chumte huye hi usne, apne ek hath ko upar uthayi aur jaise kisi traffic par gadiyon ko rukne ka ishara dete hain, Jivisha bhi uss bawandar ko hathon se rukne ka ishara ki…


Ret ka uncha tila hawa me hi ruk gaya. Puri aandhi shant ho chuki thi. Jivisha badi teji se apni mutthi ko jaise hi band ki, puri ret mutthi ka aakaar bana chuki thi. Aur Jaise hi Jivisha ne jhatke ke sath apni mutthi kholi puri ret jhatke me hi titar bitar ho gayi….


Jivisha kiss ko todti, Nischal ki aakhon me dekh'kar muskurati hui kahne lagi…. "Love action time. Main iss kide ko dekhti hun aur marne ko betaab kayi sare log humari ore badh rahe hain, tum unhe dekho"..


Nischal, hanste huye apna sar jhuka'kar…. "Jaisi aap ki aagya ho"…


Nischal badi teji ke sath Mahamahim ke ore badhne laga.. Mahamahim, apne ore teji se badh rahe Nichal ko rokne ke liye jaise hi apna hath upar karke hawa me kiya, Nischal hawa me kayi feet uncha to utha, lekin agle hi pal Gulati mar'kar wo niche thik Mahamahim ke karib pahunch chuka tha..


Nischal uski aakhon me dekh'kar apna hath jaise hi aage badhaya, Mahamahim ne apni najar bhar dali aur aisa laga uski najar Nischal ke sine ko bhed degi….


"Abe yahan main kadhi hun sale aur tu meri jaan par buri najar dal raha"… Jivisha apni baat kah'kar jaise hi apne anguthe aur middle fingers ke top ko milayi, Mahamahim ki dono palak jhapak gayi…. "Baby do ghuma kar iss 2 kaudi ke aadmi ko aur jakar bhid par kahar barasao, tabtak isse main kuch tehzib sikha deti hun"…


Jaise hi Mahamahim ki palken jhapki aur Jivisha ki aawaj kan me pari, Nischal ne ek jhannatedar tamacha uske kan ke niche jadte huye, kayi guna raftaar ke sath bahaga…


"Hahahaha.. Kya Mittoso, mere baby ne khatirdari me koi kami to nahi chhodi"…


Mahamahim pure gusse me aate huye apni aakhen mund kar dono hath aise failaya ki kale badal charo ore chhane lage… bhay ki lahar Mahamahim ke pass se uthi aur pure Zoren me logon ne mehsus kiya... ..


Tabhi Jivisha muskurati hui apni dono hath kholi aur pyar se aise jhumi ki charo ore ke kale badal chhatna shuru ho gaye… Mahamahim aakash ko dekh'kar samjh gaya ki jiski shaktiyon par wo aaj tak uchhalte aa raha tha uski asli waris uske samne khadi thi..


Mittoso teji ke sath apna ek hath Jivisha ke ore ghumaya aur dusra hath Nischal ke ore karke, hawa me le jakar gala ghotna shuru kiya. "Chatakk, chatakkk, chatakkk".. Jivisha ne apne ek hath se hawa me bane bhanwar ko rokti, dusre hath se lagatar Mahamahim ko thappad marti rahi… Mahamahim ko itne thappad pade ki uska gaal laal ho gaya…


"Abe gadhe Mittoso wo ek Viggo Sigma hai… tu chutiya uska gala ghonte rah, tabtak main tera gaal laal karti hun"… Jivisha apni baat kahkar lagatar thappad marti rahi. Mahamahim ko lag raha tha wo apni ikchha shakti se Nischal ka gala ghont sakta tha, lekin Nischal ko iss se koi fark nahi para, ulta uske gaal laal ho gaye.


Takriban 50 caror sainik Mahamahim ko sahayta dene ke liye karib pahunch chuke the, jise Nichal dure se aate huye dekh chuka tha. Nischal badi hi aasani se Mahamahim ke giraft se chhutkar, un vishalkay sainikon ke jhund ke ore daud laga diya… shaynnn ki raftar, lambi katar aur jab Nischal sabko apne khanjar se kat'te huye nikla, log kewal hawa me hi najar aa rahe the..


Aisa lag raha tha kayi lakh log ek sath kat'kar hawa me gaye aur fir niche aa gaye… raftaar aur maut ka tandav shuru ho chuka tha.. Nischal jab ek baar katna shuru kiya, tab kisi ko pata hi nahi chal raha tha ki maut kahan se aayi, kab aayi aur unhe nigal kar chali gayi.


Ab tak jis Viggo ke bare me sab ne sun rakha tha, pahli baar puri sena uska aatank dekh rahi thi.. koi raham nahi, koi mafi nahi.. bus Nischal ke hath ka khanjar aur teji ke sath uska chirna…


Rakt se ranbhumi laal ho chuki thi. Jahan bhi najar ja rahi thi, kewal hawa me uchhalte log the aur niche girti unki kati si lash. Aisa raktpaat jiski charcha kabhi Rijo ne ki thi aur ye log sun'kar bhi uspar viswas nahi karna chahte the. Aaj jab Nischal ki raftaar aur uske khanjar se samna hua, lohe ke kaleja rakhne walon ko bhi Herat attack aa gaya.


Jaan bachate huye sainik wapas bhagne lage lekin pichhe se Serin apni blad chalati hui kafi raftaar se badh rahi thi.. maut ka tandav uss pure ranbhumi me chal raha tha.. aage se Nischal aur pichhe se Serin aur bich me fase sainik apne maut aane se pahle dar ke mare mut rahe the…


"Abe ghonchu tu ye sab mat dekh. Jyada dekhega to confuse ho jayega"..


Jaise hi Nischal Mahamahim ke hath ki jakad se chhuta tha, wo hairan ho'kar bus yahi soch raha tha, ki uske itne prabal ikchha shakti se koi kaise chhut sakta hai… Abhi ek aschrya se ubra nahi tha, ki dusra jhatka lagna shuru ho gaya tha.. Kayi lakh log ek sath upar jate, kati hui lash aur rakt ki barish niche hone lagti…


Mahamahim stabdh ho'kar mano jam sa gaya tha. Jivisha ki aawaj par wo hosh me aaya aur gusse se aakhen laal karte huye… "Chalo Malkia iss khel ko yahin khatm karte hai. Ab nahi chahiye teri takat. Taiyar ho ja"..


Mahamahim ne apne baal jhatke… aankhen mund kar usne dhyan lagaya…. "Mere malik, tumhari Malkia ko ab ya to tumhi sambhalo, ya mujhe kho do"..
 
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nain11ster

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nice update ..ab ye serin ka saaman kab chori hua ,2 saal se to behosh tha aur ab jaake saaman dhund raha hai ?..hero ki maa ko kisine maara ya wo aise hi marr gayi ?? nishchal ne kaha sabse dardnak maut uske maa ki thi ..
Isse bhi sochna tha .. khaie hero ki maa aur Serin ki maa ka chepter kahani ke next part me pura dekhne milega :D
 

Naina

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Ek pratiksha ko mere pass bhi bhejna tha na... This time I am fully single :cry:
pratiksha abhi pandit dhundne gayi hai taaki aarav aur tharki pallavi ki shaadi kara sake..evil-466
Khair.... sare revo subhah ko... waise aaj toh barish ho gayi update ki.... tab tak ke liye :goodnight: have a sweet dream...
 
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