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Fantasy Kaisa Yeh Ishq Hai.... Ajab Sa Risk Hai...... (Completed)

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Update:- 64​





Jivisha apni baat aage badhati….


"Bhrm aur sachai ka kissa bhi ajib hai. Ab tak jitni bhi baten hui wo mujhe bhrm hi lagti thi, lekin jis raat tum baar-baar aa-ja rahe the, main apna pura dhyan kitabon me lagayi hui thi, tabhi tum mujhe ehsas ho gaya tha ki tum khidki par ho.


"Baad me Kasak ki baton se main ek baar aur confuse ho gayi. Lekin uske baad to jaise mujhe apne bhrm par yakin hona shuru ho chuka ho. Pahle college me tumhe dhakka dena."


"Jab tum Nandni ke pass se daure, tabhi tum mujhe dikh gaye the. Aur jab maine dhyan lagakar tumhe dhakka diya, uss waqt mujhe aisa laga jaise tumhare ander ki 1-2 pasliyan chatak gayi hai. Iss baat ki pusti ke liye, uss din main college se sidha tumse milne gayi."


"Sach kahun to jalan kya hoti hai, wo uss din mujhe ehsas ho raha tha. Nandu tunhare itne karib thi jise dekh'kar main apna aapa kho hi deti. Kintu agale hi pal khyal aaya ki yah to meri Nandu hai, aur fir sab kuch samanya ho gaya. Jab maine tunhara badan dekha tha, uss pal hi mujhe aabhash ho chala tha ki jise main bhrm maan rahi thi, wah Sathya hai."


"Uske baad kayi aise mauke aaye jisme aisa laga jaise koi ander ka soya jagne wala hai, jaise Chirag ko lekar ek baar main aawesh me aayi aur fir wahan pura dar ka aisa sannata pasra, mano wahan main sabke liye khatra hun..."


"Ab aur kitna mai tumhe bataun Nischal… bus is bhrm aur staya ke bich mere sare arman bhent chadh gaye. Tum par pyar barsana tha aur ulta tumhe hi dhutkar di. Thik se Nandu ko bhi kabhi samay nahi de payi aur na hi kabhi gharwalon ki najar me ek achhi beti ban payi..."


Nischal khamoshi se Jivisha ko sunne ke baad kahne laga….. "Ab tum sari chinta ko chhod'kar muskurao aur itni dur jo lekar aaya hun, uske mehnat ka kuch fal to do…


"Hihihihihi… aisa lag raha hai jaise bhikh mang rahe ho Nischal, mujhe wo akdu hi pasand hai, jo hamesa tana hua sa khada rahta hai. Aur mujhe nahi lagta ki uss Nischal ko aise kahna parta. Suno mister tum jao aur mere akdu ko behj do"… pyari si muskan aur dher sari sharaten Jivisha ke aakhon me dikh rahi thi...


Nischal hanste huye Jivisha ke gale lag gaya. Wo waqt aur jagah ka dhyan dilate huye Jivisha ko lekar wapas Pune chala aaya. .. dono ek dusre ko chhod'kar raat bhar ke liye alag to ho rahe the, lekin Jivisha ki tanik bhi ikchha nahi thi ki Nischal ab uss se dur ho.
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yaar inlogo ki toh baatein hi khatam nahi hoti hai... Thik hai thik hai jivu teko sab malum hai... zyada gyaan dene Ki jarurat nahi...
Bechari kasak...


Kisi tarah raat katne ke baad Jivisha subah-subah college ke liye taiyar ho gayi.. idhar Nandni aur Nischal bhi college jane ke liye taiyar ho chuke the. Kamal ki baat ek aur thi ki doctor Ansh bhi aaj badi subah taiyar hokar hospital ke liye nikal rahe the…


"To kaisi rahi tum dono ki kal raat ki mulakat" khamosh dono chale ja rahe the, aur Nischal, Nandni ki khamoshi ko kal raat se hi bhanp raha tha…


Nischal:- Tu janti hai, mere bache bhi tere dost honge aur unke bache bhi. Isliye jyada dimag par jor mat dal.


Nandni:- Haaynnnnn !!! Maine kya pucha aur tu kya jawab de raha hai.


Nischal:- mai uss sawal ka jawab de raha hun, jo kal raat se tere dimag me ghum raha. Ye sochne ki jara bhi bhul na karna ki ab mera aur Jivisha ka ho gaya to tujhe chhod'kar kahin mai bhag jaunga…


Nandni:- koi bhi chij hamesa nahi hoti Nischal…


Nischal:- Hmmm ! Thik hai ye le car pakad aur mai jata hun.


Nandni usse rokti rah gayi lekin wo ruka nahi. Bich sadak par gadi khadi karke chala gaya. Nischal ka yun nakhre karke jana Nandni ko akhar gaya. Kafi tej uspar gussa hoti wo bhi college nikli.


Idhar Nandni ko chhod'kar, Nischal naraj ho kar to chala aaya lekin uske dimag me kewal yahi chal raha tha ki, shayad usse aisa nahi karna chahiye tha, Nandni pahle se udas thi to kahan se meri baat samjh pati...
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phir se jhagdne lage... are yaar kitna ladte hai yeh dono... baad mein khud pachtate hai ki kyun jhagda kiya... :sigh:

Khair wo teji se bhagta hua college pahuncha, lekin ab tak koi bhi college nahi pahunchi thi, isliye Nischal college ghumne laga… tabhi college ke pahle din mili ladki Kiran usse mili gayi, jo hath hilati ussi ke ore aa rahi thi… Nischal usse dekh kar bhi andekha karke, idhar-udar najar dene laga…


"Hey handsome, kab se hath de rahi hun aur tum baar baar mujhe dekh'kar bhi andekha karne ka natak kyon kar rahe"… Kiran aati hi sawalon ke bauchhar karne lagi.


Nischal:- Sorry main commited hun.


Kiran apne sar khujati…. "Oye duffer, mai kya puchh rahi hun aur tum kya jawab de rahe ho"…


Nischal:- Nahi, baki sari baton ka jawab dene se pahle maine jaroori baat bata di hai, ki main commited hun, ab pucho jo puchna hai.


Kiran:- Pagal kahin ka… Pure mood ki aisi ki taisi kar di. Yaar main yahan madad magne aayi hun.


Nischal:- Kis tarah ki madad chahiye…


Kiran:- Yaar ek chipku mere piche hai, please uss se picha chhudwa do.


Nischal:- Na baba na… meri janeman puri filmy hai, upar se gusse wali bhi, kahin koi shak ho gaya to, mera to aaj ka din usse manane me hi chala jayega. Tum kisi aur ko dhundh lo.


"Jakar uske aanchal tale chhip ja…"… Gusse me apni baat kahti Kiran wahan se nikli, fir dobara laut kar aayi aur apni chudiyan uske hath me deti kahne lagi…. "Achal me chhipne se pahle, ye chudiyan bhi pahan lena fattu sale. Dekhna teri gf nahi aaj naraj ho gayi tujhse, fir kahna… mera shrap hai tujhe"..


Nischal:- Achha suno suno… aise baddua na do, batao paresani kya hai...


Kiran:- Chalo sath me padesani hi dikha deti hun…


Kiran aage-aage chal rahi thi aur Nischal se kah chuki thi ki bus dekhte jaye… jaise hi wo uss jagah se 10 kadam aage badhi hogi… ek ladki Kiran ka rasta roke khadi ho gayi aur kahne lagi…. "Kya hua baby kal tumne meri baat ka jawab nahi diya"..


Nischal:- Oye Kiran, tu iss se gappe kyon ladane lagi, chalkar problem dikha na…


Ladki:- Kaun tang kar raha hai tumhe Kiran, mujhe bhi uske bare me batao abhi…


Kiran, Nischal ke ore ungli dikhati…. "Jao usse pakad lo, wahi mujhe tang kar raha hai."..


Nischal:- Pagal ho gayi hai ye ladki, mujhe yahan problem ka naam bata kar layi aur ab mujhe hi fasane me tuli hai.


Nischal Kiran se apni baat kahta raha, lekin jaise hi uss ladki ne Kiran ka rasta chhod kar Nischal ke ore jane lagi, Kiran wahan se bhagi.. aur idhar tabtak wo ladki isharon me apne dosto ko to bula hi rahi thi, upar se gurti wo Nischal ke pass pahunchi aur puchne lagi…. "Kyon be sale, tu meri gf ko kyon chhed raha tha"…


"Haynnn !! Gf.. oh to Kiran jis problem ki baat kar rahi thi ye wahi hai. Hey bhagwan ye Kiran to apni problem mere gale bandh kar bhag gayi"..


Idhar Kiran bhagti hui Jivisha ko dhundhne lagi… thodi hi der me Jivisha, Kasak aur Nandni teeno sath hi mil gaye… Kiran teeno ka rasta rokti hui kahne lagi…. "Yaar ek gadbad ho gayi. Wo Andrea college me laut aayi thi aur maine pichha chhudane me chakkar me Nischal ko fasa aayi, please usse jakar bacha le"…


Andrea ka naam sunkar hi teeno hasne lagi…. Jivisha aage badhkar Kiran ko thanks kahti…. "Aaj usne Nandu ke sath jhagra kiya hai, isliye usse saja bhugatne do"
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ab yeh group kahan se tapki... :mad:
aainn.. yeh ladki kahe bol rahi hai ki kiran iski gf hai... chhori ki lakshan thik na hain.. lagta hai Andrea ki taste kuch alag hi hai...
Kamal hai yeh teeno bhi khush hai nischal ko us andriya ki hatho fansata dekh


Idhar Dr Ansh ghar se nikalte hi sidha reserch lab pahuncha. Doctors ki team bhi wahan maujood thi aur jo blood sample Ansh lekar aaya tha uski report bhi aa gayi thi….


Sabhi test result ko dekhte huye ek senior scientist kahne lage….. "Aisa blood sample na to kisi samanya insan ka hai aur na hi prithvi par paye jane wale kisi bhi janwar ka."..


Ansh:- doctor aap kahna kya chahte hai jara khulkar bataeyega…


Scientist:- Baat bahut simple hai Dr Ansh, aap jiska sample lekar aaye hain wo iss prithvi ka prani nahi hai, balki dusre kisi grah se aaya hai.


Ansh puri tarah se hairan hote huye scientist ka chehra dekhte huye…. "Doctor kahin koi confusion to nahi hai na.."


Scientist test result dikhate huye kahne lage…. "Doctor Ansh jaisa ki aap screen par dekh sakte hai… ye jis kisi ka bhi blood sample hai, uska DNA structure samnya insan ke mukable kitna alag hai… kamal ka DNA hai… Dr Ansh jitni kshmta ka aakaln main kar pa raha hun, uss se ek baat to saaf hai ki ye itna khatarnak ho sakta hai ki akele hi ye kai logon ko chir sakta hai."

"Haan ek baat aur Police forensic lab me kuch din pahle ek high secure kamre me ghuspaith hui thi, aur wahan bhi kuch khun ke dhabbe subject (Sapna) ke upar se mile the… wo blood sample aur ye blood sample ek hi hai. Ho na ho police kal jin janwaron se bhidi thi wo matr ek science experiments ho, asli narbhakshi yahi hai…


Us scientist ki baat par Ansh jhatke khakar gir gaya. Achet awastha me wo bus Nischal ke sath apni hui bhidant ko hi yaad kar raha tha aur yaad karte huye usse khud ka haal bhi Sapna jaise lagne laga…


Tabhi wahan, kal raat ke karname ke baad, Raton raat sohrat aur naam kamane ke alawa pramotion pane wale Sawalker bhi uss reserch lab me pahunch chuke the, jo ab sahar ke Assistent Commissioner Of Police yani ki ACP ban chuke the…


"Kay re ghodpade, ACP ko bhi case solve karna parta hai"… Sawalker ko apni chamchamati wardi dikhate huye puchhne laga…


Ghodoade:- Pata nahi saheb, lekin aap to tope ho, har penchida case solve kar loge…


Sawalker:- Haan so to hai ghodpade… tu janta hai jab se mera chhota bhai Nischal, meri jindgi me aaya hai tab se sab mangal hi mangal ho raha hai…


Ghodpade:- Ho saheb, sach kaha…


Sawalker:- Acha ghodpade ye bata ye naya case solve karke kya main commissioner ban jaunga…


Ghodpade:- Nahi pata saheb .. waise ek baat dimag me hai saheb puchh lun kya?


Sawalker:- Haan puchh puchh .. aaj main bahut khush hun…


Ghodpade:- Saheb kahin aaj ke case me wo aap ka chhota bhai Nischal involve ho, fir aap kya karoge...


Sawalker:- Ghodpade, tu ja warna main iss waqt ghoda daba dunga… sala acha nahi soch sakta to bura bhi na bol…


Ghodpade:- Sorry saheb … lekin mujhe na kabhi-kabhi aisa lagta hai ki wo Nischal koi bahut badi tope hai. Dekho na usse pahle se un janwaron ke bare me sab pata tha, Upar se wo iss sahar ka hai bhi nahi.. to shak hona lajmi hai na bhaw…


Sawalker, Ghodoade ko 4 galiyan dekar ander doctor se milne gaya, wahan doctor ne sabhi khatron se aagah karte huye usse alian ke bare me jankari de diya… Sawalker ne jaise hi alian ke bare me suna, usse afsos hone laga ki wo aaj ke din ACP kyon banai... Halanki Sawalker ki najar abtak Ansh par nahi gayi.


Jab uss scientist ne Dr Ansh ko dikhate huye kahne lage ki yahi hain jinhone uss alian ka blood sample lakar diya tha, tab jakar Sawalker ki najar Ansh par gayi. Sawalker khud bhi dara hua tha, isliye wo Ansh ki luti-piti haalat dekh'kar samajh chuka tha ki usne yadi alian ka blood sample laya hai to uske dekhne ka anubhaw kuch aisa hi hoga...


Sawalker Dr Ansh ko kopche me le jate huye kuch der khamosh hokar usse dekhte raha, fir uski luti haalat par santwana dete huye khane laga…. "Koi baat nahi hai doctor, us alian se jara bhi darne ki jaroorat nahi hai… iss bar bhi main aur Nischal mil'kar uss Alian ko pakad lenge aur main sidha commissioner ban jaunga…


Ansh:- Nahi sir aap jaisa soch rahe hai waisa kuch nahi hoga.. ulta aap ki wardi utarne wali hai…


Sawalker:- doctor sahab aap sadme me ho isliye aapka dimagi santulan bigad gaya hai... Aap kuch der aaram kar lo main uss Alian ki detail aap se baad me leta hun...


Ansh:- Bus ruk'kar uss Alian ka naam sun lo, aap ka bhi haal mujhsa hi hoga…


Sawalker:- Dr sahab paheli bujhane se acha hai ki bata kyon nahi dete…


Ansh:- Thik hai dhyan se suno… main yahan Nischal ka blood sample laya hun, aur tab se aap jis Alian ki baat kar rahe the, wo alian aur koi nahi balki Nischal hai…


"Kya Nischal" .. chaun'kar Sawalker ke muh se sirf itna hi nikla aur puri tarah se hairan hokar wo Ansh ko dekhne laga…
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lo.. ho gaya naya chyappa...
in dono ko hi pata chal gaya ki nischal alien hai... dono hi hairan padesaan...
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skill nainu ji :applause: :applause:
 
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Jivisha is very clever, she already knew everything but she did not tell anything, instead she was silently understanding everything. By the way Nandini is a very good friend, do not fight with her. Only Ansh did not know the truth but today he also came to know, but can it cause any trouble.
Tu janti hai, mere bache bhi tere dost honge aur unke bache bhi. Isliye jyada dimag par jor mat dal.
"Jakar uske aanchal tale chhip ja…"
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As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.
Thank You...
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