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Fantasy Kaisa Yeh Ishq Hai.... Ajab Sa Risk Hai...... (Completed)

Naina

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Har sainik ki fusfusahat shuru ho gayi thi. Apini aur Rijo ashrya se ek dusre ka muh dekh rahe the. Aur thik Rijo ke piche se kadak dahar si awaz sunai di…. "Thode aaschrya thode dar me dikh rahe, dono. Baat kya hai"..


Nischal piche se Rijo ke kandhe par hath dete huye kaha, lekin Rijo jaise hi pichhe muda wo uske thik samne khada tha….. "Wahan pichhe kise dhundh raha hai be.. samne dekh"..


Samne ka najara dekh'kar to Rijo aur Apini ki dhakane aur bhi jor marne lagi. Bahrupiye Rijo ke pass baitha bahrupiye Apini ke sharir par dhire-dhire lambi si khanjar chal rahi thi aur Nischal uske badan ko bade maje se square shape me kat raha tha… Rijo apna thuk gatakte huye… "Ye aap kya kar rahe hai Viggo"..


Nischal apna kaam teji se pura kiya, khada hokar shaynn se thik uske samne khade hokar… "Apne bahrupiye ko tune kat'te huye nahi dekha na Rijo, isliye iss kide Apini ke bahrupiye ko slow motion me kat kar dikha raha tha. Waise ye square shape me mast dikh raha hai tera behrupiya.... Le apni bhukh mita le kha'kar.


Apini, apna sar jhukaye hath jode… "Viggo aap to baat karke samsya ka hal nikalne aaye the na"..


Nischal:- Haan yaar aaya to wahi sochkar tha lekin ye 2 ek jaise shakl ke kidon makodon ki prajati bahut confusion paida kar rahi thi. Baith jao tum dono, ab koi confusion nahi hai"…


Nischal ke apmanit shabd sabko chubhe to jaroor, khun bhi khaula kintu uska hona hi wahan par bhay tha aur har koi ussi bhay me daba sa ja raha tha. Rijo aur Apini apne mathe ka pasina pochh'kar baith gaye aur Rijo kahne laga…. "Viggo aap to yahan ke samaynusar 9 baje aane wale the na"..


Nischal:- Tune kisi ko mujh par najar rakhne nahi kaha tha kya? Matter tujhe pata to chal hi chuka hoga. Fir bhi yadi koi shanka hai to main usse dur kiye deta hun…

Nischal un dono ke charo ore chakkar lagana shuru kiya.. aur apni attahas bhadi awaz me bolna shuru kiya… "Mujhe, mera joda iss prithvi par mil gaya..… Naam Jivisha hai aur chunki aaj hi pyar ka izhar hua hai isliye maine socha 7 baje tak kaam khatm karke usse thoda samay dun… koi galat socha kya"..


Nischal un dono ke charo ore chakkar kat'te huye aise bhay paida kar raha tha ki wo agar piche se hath bhi unke kandhe par rakhta to shwans atak jati aur aisa lagta jaise ab gardan gaya uska. Nichal agar piche hota to dono ke gardan piche ghum jata aur jab bayen hota to gardan bayen hoti.


Wahin dur bhid ke bich me baithi Tanisha, pure gusse se chillati hui kahne lagi…

"Rakhail maa ke kokh se paida hua ek badjaat sahjada, jo apne grah ka bhagoda hai, wo Viggo kya nikal gaya tum sab to dar ke mare jamin me gade ja rahe. Prithvi ke kamjor se begairat prajati, jiske maans hum jab chahe noch-noch kar khate hain, un badjaat insano ke liye, ye Nischal, apne pita ka ye najayaj santan tum sab ko jalil kar raha hai aur tum sab sun rahe… 2 tukdi ek sath humla karo aur iska sar kaat kar mere kadmon me lakar do.


Nischal, Rijo aur Apini ko dekhte huye… "Kya yaar main to yahan pyar se mamla suljhane aaya tha… Khair, let the show begin"…


Tanisha ne yuddh bigul funk dee. 2 nahi balki apman jhel rahe sabhi sainik ek sath khade ho gaye. Har do sanik ke pass ek adrishi janwar aur 2 sainik tukdi, mauth ka ghere me fasa kar Nischal ko marne ke irade se teji se aage badh gayi. Nischal bhi unki ore daud laga diya… Itni tej wo dauda ki Rijo aur Apini ko aisa laga jaise Nischal yahan se gayab hokar wahan pahuch gaya aur wahan se gayab ho kar,l daur rahe sainikon ke najdik…


Nischal ko marne ke liye jabtak hath upar uth'ta, lagbhag na dekh wali speed se chalta khanjar apna faisla karte aage badh chuki hoti. Gala fade dard bhari chinkh bahar hoti… sharir se kata hua hissa hawa me upar hota aur bacha hua dhar niche jamin par. Aisa lag raha tha halal hone ke baad bakda jamin par gida hai aur farfrate badan se nikalte pran ke sath khun bhi nikal raha ho.


Sainikon ke jhund ke bich Nischal aisa ghira ki usse ab Rijo aur Apini to nahi dekh pa raha tha, lekin kata, fata hath, kamar se upar ka sarir aur chinkhte huye kata sar jamin par gir rahe the aur lashon ke dher wahan banta ja raha tha.. Koi beraham katil unke bich me ghusa, iss kadar kahar barsa raha tha ki wahan se sabhi sainik apne-apne adrishi janwar ke sath, apni jaan bachakar bhagna shuru kar chuke the…


60 sainik aur 30 adrishi janwar ke jatthe ko katne ke baad, khun me nahaya hua Nischal, lashon ke dher ke upar khada tha. Apne ek hath me bada sa khanjar aur dusre hath ki mutthi me Tanisha ke baal ko daboch kar, uska kata hua sar upar uthaye huye tha… taja khun ab bhi Tanisha ke gardan se tap-tap kar chu raha tha…


Nischal lashon ke dher ke upar khade hokar Tanisha ke chehre ko apne chehre ke karib laya aur khun se sane apne honth se uske honth chumte puchne laga….

"Janeman aise naraj hokar chup kyon hai… kya bol rahi thi jara fir se bol."…. Tanisha ke ore se koi jawab na aane par Nischal jor se daharte huye puchne laga…. "Bol na nich prajati, mai uss waqt sun nahi paya tha"..… Dobara puchne par bhi koi jawab na milne par, kata sar Rijo aur Apni ke kadmo me fekte huye… "Oye Apini, ye teri maasooqa kya kah rahi thi yaar, puchh kar bata jara. Lagta hai mere se naraj ho gayi hai. Je mayla Rijo, ye tere log aur wo kamjor se janwar kahan bhag gaye re"


Nischal ke aatank ke bhay se Rijo aur Apini kanp rahe the… jaise hi Tanisha ka kata sar Apini ke kadmon me gira, wo sar ko pakad kar rone laga… Idhar Nischal ke sawal ka jawab nahi mila tha isliye wo shaynnn se hawa bankar thik Rijo aur Apini ke samne tha… "Oye Apini tu romance baad me kar lena, pahle uss se puch ki wo kah kya rahi thi.. Aur sannata tu.. abe idhar udhar kya dekh raha hai, tujh se hi kah raha hun chutiye Rijo"..


Rijo:- Jaaa .. jaaaaa … ji Viggo..


Nischal:- sala tu to yahan shahrukh khan ko fail kar de… kaaa.. kaaaa… Kiran… Abe wo tere Zoren ke khatarnak tukdi kidhar gayi be..


Rijo:- Viggo . Wooo .. Woooooo..


Nischal usse ek thappad khich kar marte…. "Sale saste mimikary artist, ek hi baar haklana achha hai... Baar-baar bore karta hai... Fir mujhe gussa aa jayega… tere wo khatrnak tukdi aur kide jaisa wo tera janawar ki fauj kahan gayab hai..


Rijo:- wo bhag gaye ..


Nischal fir se usse ek thappad marte … "Abe kahne ko to tum sab sale apni badai me kahte ho .. hum toofan hain... nakara se grah Zoren ki shan hai.. kiske pichwade me ghused aaya aan, ban shan… Sale tujh se acha to mera sasur hai... Koi sainya prasikshan nahi liya usne, lekin fir bhi baat-baat me mera collor pakad leta hai aur ek ye tere trained log the.. dar ke bhag gaye... Thuuuuu…

"Ye to cheating hai yaar, main yahan baat karke masla suljhane aaya, to pahle ye Tanisha bhadak gayi aur uske sath sena ki ek tukdi bhadki. Unko samjane gaya to tumhare sena ke bache log yahan se bhag gaye. Sala ye chal kya raha hai. Tu bus apne Mahamahim ke hilane ke liye uska khas bana kya chutiye, koi control hi nahi tera to tere sena par.. ruk teri izzat bacha deta hun aur jara unko saja dekar aata hun, fir aaram se baat karenge…


Nischal apni baat kahkar lagbhag gayab sa ho gaya wahan se aur jo un fizaon me sunai de rahi thi, wo tha kahar. Rijo ke sath aaye adrishi janwaron ke maut ki changhar aur unke sainikon ki chinkh aur pukar dil dahlane wala tha.


Mar kahin bhi rahe the, lekin kate-fate sharir ek jagah hi lakar jama kiya ja raha tha… Rijo Apini ke hath se Tanisha ka kata sar lekar unhi lash ke dher me fekte huye… "Apini wo Sigma Viggo humare logon ko marne me laga hai.. Apini .. hosh me aao . Jab tak wo vyast hai hum bhag lete hain … chalo yahan se."


Apini kuch hosh me aaya aur Rijo ke sath wo bhi bhagne laga.. takriban 300 meter ki duri par jab dono pahunche to aage badh hi nahi pa rahe the.. aisa lag raha tha wahan kisi ne pardarshi dewar khadi kar di ho…


Jab najar ghuma kar Rijo aur Apini ne dekha, to kinare se uske kayi sainik aur adrishi janwar pura jor laga'kar bahar bhagne ki kosis kar rahe the.. Thabhi aisa laga jaise koi majboot pahad uske janwar ke upar giri ho aur fachak se uska sarir kisi machhar ki tarah masal kar ussi pardarshi deewar se chipka di gayi ho. Dekhte hi dekhte kuchli hui lash kisi painting ki bhanti chipak rahi thi, jiska rang diwaron se niche chu raha tha... Aatank ka aisa khufnak najara dekh kar dono ki ultiyan nikal aayi aur dono uss pardarshi deewar ke pass se hat kar apni jagah par wapas aa gaye.


Bus kuch der aur lage, sabhi sainik aur adrishi janwar ki lashon ka dher bilkul wahin ussi aag ke pass laga hua tha… Nischal aaram ki ek angdai lete un dono ke pass pahuncha… "Abe jab main apne dayre se baha bhagne walon ko masal'kar chipka raha tha, fir tum dono ko kisne kaha tha ki wahan deewar par apne sar pito. Acha hua main mud gaya wahan se, warna tum dono bhi dher me pare hote. Fir main baat karke mamla kis se suljhata…"


Apni ek pura bhada hua handi Nischal ke ore badhate… "Viggo aap sabko saza dekar kuch thaka sa mehsus kar rahe honge, isse pikar apne ander sfurti le aaeye"..


Nischal us handi ko lekar un lashon ke upar fekte huye kahne laga…. "Sale Zoren grah ke Jalil log, lana hi tha to prithvi ki ye anuthi aur sabse nayab pine ki chij le aate, jise shrab kahte hain. Ye kya utha'kar laga tha jo pesab se bhi ganda bash mar raha tha. Khair samay kya hua hai wo bata"..


Apini:- 7 baj kar 10 minute ho rahe hai..


Nischal:- Kamal hai sala Aizem grah ke sab se kamjor seema ki sabse kamjor 100 logon ki tukdi bhi mujh se ladti to kam se kam 2 ghante to tik hi jati aur saath me mujhe jaal mahal ilaz ke liye to bhej hi deti. Ye kaisa shaktishali tukdi tha be.. mahaj aadhe ghante me bhagte huye dher ho gaye. Iss se acha to lad hi lete…


Rijo:- wahan kewal ek hi ladta hai aur jab wo ladta hai tab uske samne khade hone ki himmat kisi me nahi hoti. Matr 1000 ki tukdi thi ye.. humare pass 5000 carore sainik 2000 carore adrishi janwar ki fauj hai Viggo. Aap ki hatt prithvi par ek anchana yudh ke sanket lekar aayegi. Aur jab wo khud aayega fir waqt kitna beraham ho sakta hai, ye aap bhi nahi soch sakte… beshak hum aur humare log nahi tike aapke samne lekin aapke jaise 100, Mahamahim ke samne nahi tikenge…


Nischal:- "Yaar thoda kamjor ho gaya hun yahan aakar, isliye dhang se nahi lad paya, iska ye matlab nahi ki tu bejjati karne lag jaye. Khair mudda ye hai ki maine to apni zindgi ki jivan sangni to chun liya. Aur mujhe umr bhar akele jine ki koi ikchha nahi hai. Isliye apne taam-jham samet aur tum dono niklo yahan se."

"Dono ko sirf isliye jinda chhod raha hun, kyonki jakar apne uss Mahamahim se batao ki yahan ek Viggo ko uski Malkia pasand aa gayi hai. Yahi nahi Malkia ke sath sath uss Viggo ko apna ye sasural prithvi bhi pasand aa gaya hai."

"Fir chahe tera 1 Mahamahim yahan aane ki ikchha rakhe ya 100 Mahamahim. Tere pass 5000 carore ka Sanya bal ho ya 500000 carore ka sainya bal ho… main sirf akela .. sirf akela… unhe iss grah ke orbit ke bahar khatam kar dunga.. Tumhare ek viman iss prithvi par laut kar yadi utar aaye, to main apna gala kat kar tere Mahamahim ko bhent kar dunga…"

"Jakar usko bol main akela khada hun yahan aur yadi usme dum hai to yahan ki sima me ghus kar dikhaye… Ab ja iske pahle ki mujhe uss bechari ladki Sapna ka khyal dil me aa jaye aur main shayad tumhe bhi un lash ke dher me pahuncha dun.."

"Oye aur sun, jane se pahle in sab lashon ko wo narbhakshi wala roop dete jana, jiske ajib se nakhun aur dant nikle hote hain… bade bhaiyya ko commissioner to bana hi dun yahan ka… aur laut'kar dobara mat aana yahan…"
apini aur rijo aaj pehli baar dar kya hai usse ruba ru hua hai.. shayad aakhir baar bhi par shayad nischal ne kuch sochke in par raham khake chhod diya....
tanisha.... yeh shayad bhavnao mein beh gayi... maybe josefer jagah agar ush din woh dekh leti nischal ke krurta ko shayad aisi baatein kahne se pehle sau kya hazar baar soch leti ... par kya kare.. jab tanisha jaisi aliens ki maut aati hai toh woh nischal se battamizi kar baithti hai... natiza samne hai.. aur upor se sapna ki dardnaak maut ko leke pehle se hi inlogo ke liye gussa aur nafrat kut kut ke bhara hua tha... bahot hi buri maut mari tanisha.. chalo ab jaake shayad sapna ki ruh ko bhi shanti milegi...
aaain :hmm2: nischal, tanisha ko maarne ki baad puch raha hai ki kya bol rahi thi :D

jung ki aagaz hote hi sorry jung kaha... yeh toh wohin baat ho gayi jaise kitchen mein gajar muli katna.. apini aur rijo ko chhod ke sabhi ke upor ka tickets kaat diya nischal ne..bhag bhi par koi faida nahi..apni maut se koi bhag sakta hai kya . aur sabhi ki beijjati ki so alag :D agar nischal nahin bhi maarta inlogo ko tab bhi baad mein maare sharam ke chullu bhar pani mein dubkar mar jaata :D
Rijo:- wahan kewal ek hi ladta hai aur jab wo ladta hai tab uske samne khade hone ki himmat kisi me nahi hoti. Matr 1000 ki tukdi thi ye.. humare pass 5000 carore sainik 2000 carore adrishi janwar ki fauj hai Viggo. Aap ki hatt prithvi par ek anchana yudh ke sanket lekar aayegi. Aur jab wo khud aayega fir waqt kitna beraham ho sakta hai, ye aap bhi nahi soch sakte… beshak hum aur humare log nahi tike aapke samne lekin aapke jaise 100, Mahamahim ke samne nahi tikenge…
Yeh lo... rachhi jal gayi par bal na gaya.. are in dono ko bhi maar dena chahiye tha yaar.. kuch zyada hi hakri dikha raha hai..
bada aaya woh mahamahim.. nischal ne toh open challenge kar diya..
Let's see nischal kaise band bajata hai us mahamahim ki..
Brilliant update with awesome writing skill nainu ji :yourock: :yourock:
 

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Nischal ek kahar sa barsha aur Nischal nam ka toofan jab thama tab Zoren se aaye sabhi mehman bhi shant ho chuke the. Jama lash ko narbhakshi banane ke aadesh dekar Nischal jaise hi jane laga… apne kadam rok'kar wo wapas aaya… "Apini, yaar tere se ek kaam to rah hi gaya"..


Apini:- Kaun sa kaam Viggo..


Nischal:- Tu aaj raat 9 baje pahunch jana mere sasural, aur jakar unko kah dena ki Jivisha ke liye Nischal se behtar ladka koi nahi. Aur jara tarifon ke bhi pul bandh dena.


Apini:- Kar deta shayad, lekin Tanisha ke sath aapne acha nahi kiya…


Tabhi Rijo, Apini ko apne piche lete…. "Wo abhi dard me hai Viggo usse maanf kar do. Aapka kaam ho jayega.


Nischal:- Yahan tera kaam hua ki nahi pahle wo bata..


"Khud hi dekh lo"… aur samne lash ke dher par Rijo ne ishara kiya..…


Nischal, un lashon ko dekhte…. "Sach me kide-makode jaise ho yaar, jao yahan se aaj raat ka waqt hai tumhare pass, apna taam- jham samet lo aur mera kaam karte huye niklo yahan se. Aur haan jo bhi bhagwan hai tumhara uss se dua karna ki kisi mod par fir hamari mulakat na ho."..


Nischal apni baat kah'kar wahan se pardarshi diwar ko hata diya. Turant hi usne Nandni ko call laga diya aur usse bhi wahan ki deewar hata kar bata diya ki aage kya karna hai, taki jitne bhi log behosh pare huye hain, wo jald hi hosh me aa jaye.


Idhar Nischal ne jab dekha ki Rijo aur Apini wahan se chala ja chuka hai, tab wo Sawalker ko call lagaya. Sawalker puri force ke sath wahan pahuncha. Nischal tabtak kuch special effect me sath, gande se dikh rahe janwaron aur narbhakshi ka kalpnik tasveer wahan chala diya.


Jaise hi Sawalker aur police ki puri team wahan pahunchi, vishalkay janwar aur ajib se insan ko dekhkar sab sadme me pahunch gaye. Unhe kuch samjh me nahi aaya. Tabhi un sab ko Nischal dikha jo Sawalker ke piche aakar kahne laga… "bade bhaiya ye to wahi janwar aur mutant hai jo kisi scientist ka experiment hai".


Ek kalpnik jaal Nischal ne bun diya tha aur usi jaal ke ander ghus kar Sawalker aur uski team shikar kar rahe the. Kamal ka set up kiya tha Nischal ne.. Sawalker aur uski team lagatar 2 ghate tak unko marne mein juti rahi. Kaam khatam hone ke baad media coverage aur sab kuch hua.. sabhi lash ko janch ke liye bhej diya gaya aur aaj ka hero to Sawalker hi bana… .


Nischal Sawalker ko dekh'kar hasne laga aur wahan se wapas chala aaya… Wapas aakar sabse pahle flat pahuncha, wahan Nandni se milkar sab kuch btaya, sath me yah bhi ki ab ghabrane jaisi koi baat nahi hai..


Nandni:- hmmmm ! Chalo bala tali… lekin Nischal..


Nischal:- kya ?


Nandni:- Rahne de fir kabhi baat kar lenge.. abhi to tu mara ja raha hoga Jivisha se milne ke liye..


Nischal, Nandni ke gaal khinchte…. "You are so sweet. Subah milta hun main tumse"..


Nandni se baat karke Nischal Jivisha ke ghar chala gaya. Pipe ke sahare wo ek bar sur khidki par khada tha. Jivisha aur Kasak samne film dekh rahi thi, aur sath hi sath Jivisha piche khidki par bhi dekh rahi thi…


Nischal khidki par khada hokar ander dekhna shuru hi kiya tha ki Jivisha ne Nischal ko dekh liya... Wo dhire-dhire piche khiskti hui khidki par gayi aur bilkul dhime awaz me apne honth hilati hui puchne lagi… "Abhi yahan kyon aaye ho. Subah to mil hi rahe the na"..


Nischal:- Chalo mere sath…

Jivisha:- Kahan le ja raho ho…

Nischal:- Bus chalo to sahi…


Jivisha:- lekin is waqt bahar kaise aaungi, sab lock hoga.. mujhe pakad lenge…

Nischal:- yakin hai mujh par…


Jivisha, Nischal ke chehre par pyar se hath ferti, haan me sir hilane lagi. Nischal ne ishare se khidki ke bahar aane ke liye bola… Jivisha khidki se lagi ussi patli railing par paun rakhi aur khidki ke bahar aa gayi..


Nischal, Jivisha ko apne kandhe par utha kar pipe ke sahare niche laya.. baat jab boundry kudne ki aayi tab Jivisha ko kuch kahna hi nahi para, wo pass ke ek ped ke sahare boundry par chadh gayi aur boundry ke pass ek thela lagi hui hoti hai, uske sahare uss par….


Nischal, Jivisha ko ghurte huye…. "Ye batao mujhe, tum pahle bhi khidki se niche aa chuki ho na"..


Jivisha, Nischal ko dekhkar hansti hui haan me sar hilati hui kahne lagi….. "Kisi ke sath ghar se kahin bhagna para to uske liye pahle se bahut practice kar rakhi thi"..


Nischal:- Kamal hai, aur kya taiyari hai… main to impress ho gaya..


Jivisha:- Acha ji.. chalo ye batao itni raat ko kya sochkar mujhe bahar lekar aaye ho…


Nischal:- Tumhe miss kar raha tha isliye tumhe le aaya..


Jivisha:- Acha ek baat batao tum mujhe padesan kyon karte the, aur kaise karte the…


Nischal:- Matlab main samjha nahi...


Jivisha:- Tum log mujhe pagal samjhte ho na, jise kuch bhi akal nahi…


Nischal, Jivisha ke thik samne khade hote huye kahne laga… "mujhe pata hai ki tumhe har baat ka aabhash hai jo kabhi tum bhrm manti ho, to kabhi satya. Jaise tum mujh me apne kayi sare sawalon ke jawab dhundh rahi ho is waqt, meri haalat tum se bhi jyada puzzle bani hui hai.... Vishwas karo main bhi bich mazdhar me hun"..


Jivisha:- bus mujhe ye bata do ki parinam jo bhi ho, lekin tum mujhe chhod kar to kabhi nahi jaoge na..


Nichal:- Tumhe aisi feeling kyon aayi jara bataogi..


Jivisha:- meri harkaten.. mujhe kabhi-kabhi aisa lagta hai main sabko khote ja rahi hun.. mammi, papa, bhabhi, bhai, Nandni .. sab mujhse kuch dino me dur ho jayenge… ..


Nischal:- Kisi ko andaja nahi tumhari haalat ka aur ab unhe pata bhi nahi chalega.. tum chulbuli aur natak karte hi achhi lagti ho… aise serious look me bilkul bakwas lagti ho..


Jivisha hanste huye Nischal ke gale lag gayi. Kuch der tak gale lagne ke baad wo kahne lagi…. "Aaj sham main fir tunhe dhakka de deti, ye jo tum mere balon me hath dene ke bahane jo mujhe behosh kar gaye the... Mar dala Sapna ke katilon ko, ya koi jinda bhi bacha hai".. ..


Nischal:- Ye tum kya kah rahi ho?


Jivisha:- wahi jo tum sun rahe ho. Mujhe ache se pata hai ki tum yahan is prithwi ke nahi ho.. aur na hi wo Shresh tha . Bus fark itna hai ki tum mere wahi sapno ke rajkumar ho, jo kahin dur se aaya hai aur wo koi jalil kism ke prani the. Jaise yahan prithvi par insano me bhi tarah-tarah ke insan hote hain…


Nischal:- hahaha… matlab tumhe apne bhrm par yakin hone laga hai haan… Jivisha mujhe sari baat janni hai.. shuru se.. kab tumhe kya laga tha…


Jivisha:- nah aise nahi.. mujhe pahle gode me uthao.. aur gode me utha'kar mujhe wahan le chalo jahan hum pahli baar mile the .. fir main bataungi…


Nischal:- sach me tum abhi pune se kalyan jana chahti ho.


Jivisha pyara sa chehra banati haan me apna sir hila di. Nischal bhi Jivisha ko dekh'kar muskuraya aur usse gode me utha'kar daud laga diya… Uski daud me itni raftar thi ki jagta aadmi uss gati ko na to dekh pata aur na hi sah pata.. aankh to uski band hi hoti lekin Jivisha, Nischal ki aakhon me dekh'kar muskura rahi thi.


Kuch hi der me Nischal apne thikane par tha aur wahan se viman lekar dono kalyan. Aur kuch hi der me dono kalyan junction par the… Jivisha apni ikchha anusar Nischal ko fir se wahin khadi hone kahi, jahan wo pahli baar khada tha..


Nischal Jivisha ki ikchha par kya kahe.. bus uske bachpana me wo bhi thoda bacha banta ja raha tha… fir se wahi sab dohraya ja raha tha… Nischal se Jivisha takrayi, chehre ke baal ko Nischal ne hataya aur Nischal ko dekh'kar punah wahi bhawana jaag gayi jo pahli mulakat me jagi thi.


Na to bhid dikha aur na hi Kalyan junction ki wo chahal pahal. Jivisha ke liye khamosh sama tha aur najron ke samne fir se wahi manmohak drishy tha jise dekh'kar Jivisha khud ko rok nahi payi thi...


Honth se honth lagati Jivisha ek bar fir Nischal ko chum rahi thi, fark sirf itna tha ki aaj bus ek chhote se sprash matr se wah anubhaw ho gaya jo us din adhura sa rah gaya tha... Nischal ka sath aur uske hone ka ehsas…


Jivisha Nischal ke kano me kahne lagi... "Kahin khamosh jagah mujhe le chalo.. jahan kewal hum tum ho"…


Nischal usse aise hi jagah par le aaya.. dono chandni raat me ek jhil kinare baithe the... Kuch khamoshi aur dher sara pyar dono ke aakhon me dikh raha tha… Jivisha nischint hokar Nischal ke sine se apne sar ko tikaye thi…


Nischal:- Tumhe ascharya nahi hua ki main ek alian hun..


Jivisha:- tunhare grah par main bhi ek alian hi rahungi… don't worry..


Nischal:- Hammm ! Ab mujhe shuru se batao… kya hua tha..


Jivisha:- Bahut pahle ki baat hai ye.. main bachpan se jawani ki dahlij par kadam rakh rahi thi… sarir me kuch badlaw ke bare me maa batayi thi, lekin usi dauran mere ander ajib si chijen hone lagi... Aisa lag raha tha mere ander koi soyi hui hai aur jagne ki kosis to kar rahi hai, lekin thik se jaag nahi pa rahj.. ..


Tumhe sunne me ajib lag raha hoga kyonki ye baat maine tab sabko batayi thi aur kisi ne meri baat par dhyan tak nahi diya, lekin wo baat sach hai. Uske baad sab dhundhla sa ho gaya. Jindgi maze me hanste-khelte kat rahi thi. Lekin achanak hi meri jindgi ne karwat li. Papa meri shadi ki baat kar rahe the. Mujhe kuch samajh me nahi aa raha tha aur mere sabhi ghar wale ek sur me the. Yahan tak ki Nandita bhabhi bhi.


Mujhe shak hua aur maine Kasak se baat ki.. jab usse phone ki tab mujhe ek bhawihshyawani ke bare me wo batayi, jisme kaha gaya tha ki yadi meri shadi sahi samay par nahi hui to is prithvi par anarth aayega… aur jis waqt mere papa paglon ki tarah meri shadi karwana chahte the tab sahar me ajib ghatna hona shuru ho chuka tha.. logon ki lash ajib tarike se mil rahi thi.


Ussi dauran Kasak bhi kahin gayab ho gayi. Sabko yahi dar tha ki ye ho na ho mere hi karan ho raha hai. Shadi to karni hi thi aur kewal ek shadi se sab kuch thik ho jata hai to shadi karne me harj hi kya hai.


Main raji ho gayi. Pata na mere gharwale kyon uss Shresh ki baton se khush ho jate, lekin pahli najar se hi wo mujhe ek behrupiya najar aata tha. Jaymala stage par jaise hi usne apna phone apne jeb se nikala tha.. mere dimag me ajib hi tasveer ban rahi thi.


Kahin dur jungle me ek ladki ko jinda chabaya ja raha tha. Aisi ladki jo apni khushi se apna sab kuch sunpkar ek Prem milan me thi. Us taveer me wo kuch ajib tarike ka wo narbhakshi tha, aur waisa hi taveer uss Shresh ki bhi mujhe dikhne lagi... Main bhag aayi wahan se.. dar ke sath iss baat ki bhi anubhuti ho rahi thi ki ye mere pure pariwar ko mar dalega…


Haan uss waqt ye sab mere liye kewal ek bhrm hi tha, jo itna majbut tha ki mujhe koi bhi step lene me majboor kar deta tha… aur ussi bhagne ke kram me kuch aisa hua jo maine pahle kabhi anubhaw nahi kiya tha…


Main Pune Mumbai train me thi.. Kalyan junction utarne ki koi wajah nahi thi, ulta main agar kalyan paar karke mumbai pahunch jati to koi dhundh bhi nahi pata... Lekin mere kadam khud-w-khud darwaje par chale gaye….. train dhimi hokar ruk rahi thi, aur mera man bechain hua ja raha tha..


Main darwaje par aakar idhar-udhar dekhne lagi.. pata nahi kya hua tha mujhe uss waqt, lekin jo bhi bhawna thi wo bahut hi strong thi, aur mere kadam khud-w-khud tunhare ore khinche ja rahe the… aisa lag raha tha, main chal nahi rahi hun, balki koi hanth pakad kar mujhe khinchte huye tunhare pass jabardasti le ja rahi hai… dimag sunya ho gaya tha .. main apni aakhen puri jor se mund chuki thi… mujhe bus itna yaad tha ki main train se utri.. aur jab aakhen khuli to main tumhare bahon me thi…
 

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yaha malika ki kya koi raksha kare ga vo khud apne aap main em army hai.
vese ye last vala update mere dimag se nikal he gaya tha.
shayad tum hare achanak se do sal aage bhadha dene ki koshish main ye story ke main part dimag main hote huai bhi gul se ho gaye the :dazed:
 

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Nischal ek kahar sa barsha aur Nischal nam ka toofan jab thama tab Zoren se aaye sabhi mehman bhi shant ho chuke the. Jama lash ko narbhakshi banane ke aadesh dekar Nischal jaise hi jane laga… apne kadam rok'kar wo wapas aaya… "Apini, yaar tere se ek kaam to rah hi gaya"..


Apini:- Kaun sa kaam Viggo..


Nischal:- Tu aaj raat 9 baje pahunch jana mere sasural, aur jakar unko kah dena ki Jivisha ke liye Nischal se behtar ladka koi nahi. Aur jara tarifon ke bhi pul bandh dena.


Apini:- Kar deta shayad, lekin Tanisha ke sath aapne acha nahi kiya…


Tabhi Rijo, Apini ko apne piche lete…. "Wo abhi dard me hai Viggo usse maanf kar do. Aapka kaam ho jayega.


Nischal:- Yahan tera kaam hua ki nahi pahle wo bata..


"Khud hi dekh lo"… aur samne lash ke dher par Rijo ne ishara kiya..…


Nischal, un lashon ko dekhte…. "Sach me kide-makode jaise ho yaar, jao yahan se aaj raat ka waqt hai tumhare pass, apna taam- jham samet lo aur mera kaam karte huye niklo yahan se. Aur haan jo bhi bhagwan hai tumhara uss se dua karna ki kisi mod par fir hamari mulakat na ho."..


Nischal apni baat kah'kar wahan se pardarshi diwar ko hata diya. Turant hi usne Nandni ko call laga diya aur usse bhi wahan ki deewar hata kar bata diya ki aage kya karna hai, taki jitne bhi log behosh pare huye hain, wo jald hi hosh me aa jaye.


Idhar Nischal ne jab dekha ki Rijo aur Apini wahan se chala ja chuka hai, tab wo Sawalker ko call lagaya. Sawalker puri force ke sath wahan pahuncha. Nischal tabtak kuch special effect me sath, gande se dikh rahe janwaron aur narbhakshi ka kalpnik tasveer wahan chala diya.


Jaise hi Sawalker aur police ki puri team wahan pahunchi, vishalkay janwar aur ajib se insan ko dekhkar sab sadme me pahunch gaye. Unhe kuch samjh me nahi aaya. Tabhi un sab ko Nischal dikha jo Sawalker ke piche aakar kahne laga… "bade bhaiya ye to wahi janwar aur mutant hai jo kisi scientist ka experiment hai".


Ek kalpnik jaal Nischal ne bun diya tha aur usi jaal ke ander ghus kar Sawalker aur uski team shikar kar rahe the. Kamal ka set up kiya tha Nischal ne.. Sawalker aur uski team lagatar 2 ghate tak unko marne mein juti rahi. Kaam khatam hone ke baad media coverage aur sab kuch hua.. sabhi lash ko janch ke liye bhej diya gaya aur aaj ka hero to Sawalker hi bana… .
chalo yeh kaam toh khatam hua... Kya baat hai sawalker toh cha gaya ekdum se... ab toh uske hi jalwe har taraf...
Woh alag baat hai ki mare huye aliens ko phir se maar giraye bharam ke chalte
.......


Nischal Sawalker ko dekh'kar hasne laga aur wahan se wapas chala aaya… Wapas aakar sabse pahle flat pahuncha, wahan Nandni se milkar sab kuch btaya, sath me yah bhi ki ab ghabrane jaisi koi baat nahi hai..


Nandni:- hmmmm ! Chalo bala tali… lekin Nischal..


Nischal:- kya ?


Nandni:- Rahne de fir kabhi baat kar lenge.. abhi to tu mara ja raha hoga Jivisha se milne ke liye..


Nischal, Nandni ke gaal khinchte…. "You are so sweet. Subah milta hun main tumse"..


Nandni se baat karke Nischal Jivisha ke ghar chala gaya. Pipe ke sahare wo ek bar sur khidki par khada tha. Jivisha aur Kasak samne film dekh rahi thi, aur sath hi sath Jivisha piche khidki par bhi dekh rahi thi…
nandu ne bhi bahot madad ki... btw yeh ansh kaha gaya.. ekdum se gayab ho gaya woh toh... aur us blood sample ka kya hua.. joh ansh lab le gaya tha ...
Shayad kuch puchna chaahti thi nandu par ruk gayi... kya puchna chaahti thi woh?


Nischal khidki par khada hokar ander dekhna shuru hi kiya tha ki Jivisha ne Nischal ko dekh liya... Wo dhire-dhire piche khiskti hui khidki par gayi aur bilkul dhime awaz me apne honth hilati hui puchne lagi… "Abhi yahan kyon aaye ho. Subah to mil hi rahe the na"..


Nischal:- Chalo mere sath…

Jivisha:- Kahan le ja raho ho…

Nischal:- Bus chalo to sahi…


Jivisha:- lekin is waqt bahar kaise aaungi, sab lock hoga.. mujhe pakad lenge…

Nischal:- yakin hai mujh par…


Jivisha, Nischal ke chehre par pyar se hath ferti, haan me sir hilane lagi. Nischal ne ishare se khidki ke bahar aane ke liye bola… Jivisha khidki se lagi ussi patli railing par paun rakhi aur khidki ke bahar aa gayi..


Nischal, Jivisha ko apne kandhe par utha kar pipe ke sahare niche laya.. baat jab boundry kudne ki aayi tab Jivisha ko kuch kahna hi nahi para, wo pass ke ek ped ke sahare boundry par chadh gayi aur boundry ke pass ek thela lagi hui hoti hai, uske sahare uss par….


Nischal, Jivisha ko ghurte huye…. "Ye batao mujhe, tum pahle bhi khidki se niche aa chuki ho na"..


Jivisha, Nischal ko dekhkar hansti hui haan me sar hilati hui kahne lagi….. "Kisi ke sath ghar se kahin bhagna para to uske liye pahle se bahut practice kar rakhi thi"..


Nischal:- Kamal hai, aur kya taiyari hai… main to impress ho gaya..


Jivisha:- Acha ji.. chalo ye batao itni raat ko kya sochkar mujhe bahar lekar aaye ho…


Nischal:- Tumhe miss kar raha tha isliye tumhe le aaya..


Jivisha:- Acha ek baat batao tum mujhe padesan kyon karte the, aur kaise karte the…


Nischal:- Matlab main samjha nahi...


Jivisha:- Tum log mujhe pagal samjhte ho na, jise kuch bhi akal nahi…


Nischal, Jivisha ke thik samne khade hote huye kahne laga… "mujhe pata hai ki tumhe har baat ka aabhash hai jo kabhi tum bhrm manti ho, to kabhi satya. Jaise tum mujh me apne kayi sare sawalon ke jawab dhundh rahi ho is waqt, meri haalat tum se bhi jyada puzzle bani hui hai.... Vishwas karo main bhi bich mazdhar me hun"..


Jivisha:- bus mujhe ye bata do ki parinam jo bhi ho, lekin tum mujhe chhod kar to kabhi nahi jaoge na..


Nichal:- Tumhe aisi feeling kyon aayi jara bataogi..


Jivisha:- meri harkaten.. mujhe kabhi-kabhi aisa lagta hai main sabko khote ja rahi hun.. mammi, papa, bhabhi, bhai, Nandni .. sab mujhse kuch dino me dur ho jayenge… ..


Nischal:- Kisi ko andaja nahi tumhari haalat ka aur ab unhe pata bhi nahi chalega.. tum chulbuli aur natak karte hi achhi lagti ho… aise serious look me bilkul bakwas lagti ho..


Jivisha hanste huye Nischal ke gale lag gayi. Kuch der tak gale lagne ke baad wo kahne lagi…. "Aaj sham main fir tunhe dhakka de deti, ye jo tum mere balon me hath dene ke bahane jo mujhe behosh kar gaye the... Mar dala Sapna ke katilon ko, ya koi jinda bhi bacha hai".. ..


Nischal:- Ye tum kya kah rahi ho?


Jivisha:- wahi jo tum sun rahe ho. Mujhe ache se pata hai ki tum yahan is prithwi ke nahi ho.. aur na hi wo Shresh tha . Bus fark itna hai ki tum mere wahi sapno ke rajkumar ho, jo kahin dur se aaya hai aur wo koi jalil kism ke prani the. Jaise yahan prithvi par insano me bhi tarah-tarah ke insan hote hain…


Nischal:- hahaha… matlab tumhe apne bhrm par yakin hone laga hai haan… Jivisha mujhe sari baat janni hai.. shuru se.. kab tumhe kya laga tha…


Jivisha:- nah aise nahi.. mujhe pahle gode me uthao.. aur gode me utha'kar mujhe wahan le chalo jahan hum pahli baar mile the .. fir main bataungi…


Nischal:- sach me tum abhi pune se kalyan jana chahti ho.


Jivisha pyara sa chehra banati haan me apna sir hila di. Nischal bhi Jivisha ko dekh'kar muskuraya aur usse gode me utha'kar daud laga diya… Uski daud me itni raftar thi ki jagta aadmi uss gati ko na to dekh pata aur na hi sah pata.. aankh to uski band hi hoti lekin Jivisha, Nischal ki aakhon me dekh'kar muskura rahi thi.


Kuch hi der me Nischal apne thikane par tha aur wahan se viman lekar dono kalyan. Aur kuch hi der me dono kalyan junction par the… Jivisha apni ikchha anusar Nischal ko fir se wahin khadi hone kahi, jahan wo pahli baar khada tha..


Nischal Jivisha ki ikchha par kya kahe.. bus uske bachpana me wo bhi thoda bacha banta ja raha tha… fir se wahi sab dohraya ja raha tha… Nischal se Jivisha takrayi, chehre ke baal ko Nischal ne hataya aur Nischal ko dekh'kar punah wahi bhawana jaag gayi jo pahli mulakat me jagi thi.


Na to bhid dikha aur na hi Kalyan junction ki wo chahal pahal. Jivisha ke liye khamosh sama tha aur najron ke samne fir se wahi manmohak drishy tha jise dekh'kar Jivisha khud ko rok nahi payi thi...


Honth se honth lagati Jivisha ek bar fir Nischal ko chum rahi thi, fark sirf itna tha ki aaj bus ek chhote se sprash matr se wah anubhaw ho gaya jo us din adhura sa rah gaya tha... Nischal ka sath aur uske hone ka ehsas…


Jivisha Nischal ke kano me kahne lagi... "Kahin khamosh jagah mujhe le chalo.. jahan kewal hum tum ho"…


Nischal usse aise hi jagah par le aaya.. dono chandni raat me ek jhil kinare baithe the... Kuch khamoshi aur dher sara pyar dono ke aakhon me dikh raha tha… Jivisha nischint hokar Nischal ke sine se apne sar ko tikaye thi…


Nischal:- Tumhe ascharya nahi hua ki main ek alian hun..


Jivisha:- tunhare grah par main bhi ek alian hi rahungi… don't worry..


Nischal:- Hammm ! Ab mujhe shuru se batao… kya hua tha..


Jivisha:- Bahut pahle ki baat hai ye.. main bachpan se jawani ki dahlij par kadam rakh rahi thi… sarir me kuch badlaw ke bare me maa batayi thi, lekin usi dauran mere ander ajib si chijen hone lagi... Aisa lag raha tha mere ander koi soyi hui hai aur jagne ki kosis to kar rahi hai, lekin thik se jaag nahi pa rahj.. ..


Tumhe sunne me ajib lag raha hoga kyonki ye baat maine tab sabko batayi thi aur kisi ne meri baat par dhyan tak nahi diya, lekin wo baat sach hai. Uske baad sab dhundhla sa ho gaya. Jindgi maze me hanste-khelte kat rahi thi. Lekin achanak hi meri jindgi ne karwat li. Papa meri shadi ki baat kar rahe the. Mujhe kuch samajh me nahi aa raha tha aur mere sabhi ghar wale ek sur me the. Yahan tak ki Nandita bhabhi bhi.


Mujhe shak hua aur maine Kasak se baat ki.. jab usse phone ki tab mujhe ek bhawihshyawani ke bare me wo batayi, jisme kaha gaya tha ki yadi meri shadi sahi samay par nahi hui to is prithvi par anarth aayega… aur jis waqt mere papa paglon ki tarah meri shadi karwana chahte the tab sahar me ajib ghatna hona shuru ho chuka tha.. logon ki lash ajib tarike se mil rahi thi.


Ussi dauran Kasak bhi kahin gayab ho gayi. Sabko yahi dar tha ki ye ho na ho mere hi karan ho raha hai. Shadi to karni hi thi aur kewal ek shadi se sab kuch thik ho jata hai to shadi karne me harj hi kya hai.


Main raji ho gayi. Pata na mere gharwale kyon uss Shresh ki baton se khush ho jate, lekin pahli najar se hi wo mujhe ek behrupiya najar aata tha. Jaymala stage par jaise hi usne apna phone apne jeb se nikala tha.. mere dimag me ajib hi tasveer ban rahi thi.


Kahin dur jungle me ek ladki ko jinda chabaya ja raha tha. Aisi ladki jo apni khushi se apna sab kuch sunpkar ek Prem milan me thi. Us taveer me wo kuch ajib tarike ka wo narbhakshi tha, aur waisa hi taveer uss Shresh ki bhi mujhe dikhne lagi... Main bhag aayi wahan se.. dar ke sath iss baat ki bhi anubhuti ho rahi thi ki ye mere pure pariwar ko mar dalega…


Haan uss waqt ye sab mere liye kewal ek bhrm hi tha, jo itna majbut tha ki mujhe koi bhi step lene me majboor kar deta tha… aur ussi bhagne ke kram me kuch aisa hua jo maine pahle kabhi anubhaw nahi kiya tha…


Main Pune Mumbai train me thi.. Kalyan junction utarne ki koi wajah nahi thi, ulta main agar kalyan paar karke mumbai pahunch jati to koi dhundh bhi nahi pata... Lekin mere kadam khud-w-khud darwaje par chale gaye….. train dhimi hokar ruk rahi thi, aur mera man bechain hua ja raha tha..


Main darwaje par aakar idhar-udhar dekhne lagi.. pata nahi kya hua tha mujhe uss waqt, lekin jo bhi bhawna thi wo bahut hi strong thi, aur mere kadam khud-w-khud tunhare ore khinche ja rahe the… aisa lag raha tha, main chal nahi rahi hun, balki koi hanth pakad kar mujhe khinchte huye tunhare pass jabardasti le ja rahi hai… dimag sunya ho gaya tha .. main apni aakhen puri jor se mund chuki thi… mujhe bus itna yaad tha ki main train se utri.. aur jab aakhen khuli to main tumhare bahon me thi…
Oh toh jivu ko pehle se hi sab malum hai... waise bhi uski shaktiya kuch alag hi level ki hai... shayad uski woh power hi ushe har baar kuch bura hone pehle hi bacha leti thi... ya ushe chetavani de deti aane wale khatre ko lekar...
sath hi shayad koi bikalp bhi dhundne mein madad karti hai ... jiske jariye jivu khud surakshit mehsus kare... jaise nischal se milna..
Btw shayad ishi adbhut par behad takatwar shakti ki wajah se hi bhram hi sahi par jivu yeh jaan gayi thi ki shresh aur nischal insaan nahi hai..
aur ab tak joh nischal ne kiya... jaise baar baar uski samne aake gayab hona... yeh jivu ko pata hai..
Khair let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skill nainu ji :applause: :applause:
 

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nice update .....kasak kab gayab huyi thi ? aur waapas aane ka bhi nahi bataya ....jaymala ke waqt phone ko dekhke jivisha ko kaise jungle ki ghatna dikh gayi ? ( jivisha me power hai par sirf phone ko dekhke kaise pata chala ?? )

Leon bhai update me thoda dhyan de ... Ye update bhrm aur vastavikta ke bich fasi hui hai.. yahan dikhna matlab feel hona ... Ki aisa laga jaise kahin koi gahtna ho rahi hai jiska sabandah uske hone wale husband se hai... Ab jab abhi Jivisha ke ander kya hai uska nahi pata chala hai to yah kaise clear ho jayega ki Jivisha ko Pune se Jim Coebet National Park kaise dikh gaya...

Ab aate hain kasak par .. to simple si baat hai.. kahani ke surwat me hi kakak ko behrupiya dikhaya gaya hai... Aur wo apni bahan ki shadi me nahi thi .. in fact uske chacha ki puri family nahi thi .. soooo Kasak shadi ke dauran ho gayab hui ... Aur usi dauran nakli Kasak ki entry pahle uske chacha ke ghar hui jahan se fir Kasak Jivisha ke ghar aayi... Mujhe nahi lagta ki Kasak ke gayab hone aur uske lautne ko link nahi kiya ja sakta tha .... Khair ummid hai Kasak ka gayab hona aur lautna clear ho gaya hoga ..
 
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