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Fantasy Kaisa Yeh Ishq Hai.... Ajab Sa Risk Hai...... (Completed)

nain11ster

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Ab aapki tareef karte karte to hamare ungliyon me chhale pad jayenge bhai lekin khatam nahi hoga... Aapke liye to pura ek update likh diya 8-10 line ki kya bat hai :)
:D haan wo bhi aaj raat me padh lenge .. aur dekh b lenge tarif thi ya roasting :D

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Ye Jatin koi alien to nahi hai na bhai nahi to ye alien apna roop badal kar aa jate hai aur shikar karte rehte hai aur rahi baat jivisha ki to, ab to fir se sabhi ki shaamat aane wali hai. Fir purane wale roop me aakar pura ghar sir par utha lena hai.
Jatin to abhi aaya hai kahani me waise past history ko dekh kar aap ka anuman ek hisab se sahi bhi hai.. baki puri detail ab update se hi milegi.. baki jisa ke karname to abhi wale update se hi samjh me aa jaynge .. dekhiye ab kya hoga hai aur dekh kar bata jaroor dijiyega :yo:

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Aur isike sath nischal ko ek badi kamyabi mila hai ush baat ko lekar jis ke baade mein soch soch kar itne dino se pareshan tha... waise nandu ne bhi is mamle mein apni rai rakhi thi uske samne ...Khair.. ab koi confusion nahi rah gaya hai uske mann mein..



ab chinta kar rahi hai.. tab yeh chinta nahi huyi jab kunal ko bhadka rahi thi nischal ke khilaf... ya phir yeh soch li ki nischal thehra itna shaktishali.. kunal toh tik hi nahi payega nischal ke aage.. Agar yeh soch hai toh yeh sarasar galat hai... isse logo ko nischal pe shaq bhi ho sakta hai..



akhir jivu kya soch rakhti hai.... kyun woh bhaagi thi.. kya reasons hain ki nischal se pyar bhi karti hai aur samne se jatati bhi nahi... shresh ke baade mein kya sochti hai.. kya mayne rakhti hai nandu uske liye.. apne pariwar ke liye farz aur chinta.. sabse badi baat woh maaf karna jaanti hai.. jaise kasak ko maaf kar di usne..
in sabhi baaton ko bahot sahi tarike se explain kiya aapne nainu ji.. taki koi aage chalke confusion na rah jaaye...




hmm... toh yeh jatin (:shhhh:) ne kasak ko apne pyaar k jaal mein fansha hi liya.. Kab?
jaan bachane wali ki sath hi dhokha (:listen:)
Kyun (aur kaise)?
Ohh toh kasak ki band bajne wali hai.. jivu aur nandu ne joh dekh liya inhe :D
Khair let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skill :applause: :applause:

Nischal ko kya mila himalya me ye to ek tarfa hai.. bole to baten abhi clear nahi hai lekin jab maidan me hoga to asar bhi dekhne ko milega :) .. lekin abhi usme waqt hai..

Rahi baat nischal aur Kunal ke ladai ki to mujhe b samjh me nahi aata ki ek taraf to ye ladkiyan jaan b chhidakti hai dusri ore fasane me b kasar nahi chhodti hai... To basically mudda wahi uthta hai.. kyu kiya .. ti jawab ek swabhawik aa aata hai... Har ek friend kamina hota hai :D

Jatin ka chepter baad me hai isliye uspar koi baat nahi .. aur haan pichli baar yahan ek feeling dab gayi thi ... Halanki hint me aab samjh jate lekin mujhe laga ek chhota chepter to hona hi tha .. aur yahi wajah tha uss scene me ...Nandu me flat par puri family plot karna..

Iske alawa role Nandita ka b rah gaya tha jo ek aham bhumika me thi par wo silent hokar rah gayi thi.. baki best judge u r...

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mast update ....jivisha bhi hero se pyar karne lagi hai .....par ye jatin ke saath do din me pyar ho gaya kahi wo bhi to alien nahi ..kyunki alien apna impression bahut jaldi banate hai ...
aur ye hero abhi tak lauta kyu nahi himalaya se ...jivisha ko chinta ho rahi hai uski ...
Jatin ka chepter abhi aage aane wala hai abhi bata kar koi fayda b nahi hoga ..baki Jivisha ke case me wo pahle din se hi dil dekar baithi thi .. :) .. baki wapas bula lete hain chhode ko bhi Himalaya se jaldi kyon hai :D kuch sikhne gaya hai thoda abhyas kar lene dijiye...

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I like to see Nandni cares about Nischal because he is alone in this planet.:hug: Jivisha also has feelings for Nischal, Just love is not just expressed. :yippi: Things are being done wisely, since when did this happen? :shocking: Everything is happening as I like, just now let's put a romantic and cute scene between the two. :kiss2:
How is Kasak's boyfriend, I mean good boy or not.? Well, I await Jivisha's revenge. Call Nischal early. Everything is going well, don't break my heart by putting a twist in the middle.:(
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.

Thank You...

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Nandni aur Nischal yahan ke super star hai... Baki Jivisha like nahi karti nischal ko balki pahle din se pyar me pari hai ho.. bus pata der se chal raha hai :D..

Koi nahi pm mi .. mere pass tute dil ka behtar anubhaw hai sath me apne pass ilaz bhi hai :D

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Fantastic update bhai
Kahin ye jatin gangs me to ek nahin aur wo kutta jo kasak ke pas he wo sure Joseph hoga let see aage kya hota hai
Haa. Kasak ka kutta josefer hai .. aur wahi to info diya tha ki nischal Sapna ke khuni ki talash me nikalne wala hai .. :yo: .. baki jatin ke bare me jald hi detail pata chal jayegi :)

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