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Fantasy Kaisa Yeh Ishq Hai.... Ajab Sa Risk Hai...... (Completed)

nain11ster

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Update:-7



Koi kaam nahi tha, Jivisha tv on kar ke baith gayi.... Tv jaise he on ki wahan bhi khabren Pune se he aa rahi thi.... Pune me kisi bhayanak jungli janwar ke lagatar humle ho raha tha, jisme 2 dino me 2 lashen mili thi. News ke anushar ab tak janwar pakda nahi gaya tha aur logon ko raat ke sannate mein ya kisi sunshan jagah na jane ki salah di jar ahi thi.



"Hey bhagwan ye Pune me ho kya raha hai, chirag ko phone kar ke samjha dun ki bahar bikul na nikle".


Jivisha, apne number par call lagayi, par kai baar call connect karne ke baad bhi call waiting he show hua..... "Ye chal kya raha hai, mera phone busy kyon aa raha"


Jivisha soch he rahi thi ki tabhi wapas udhar se call back hua.... Jivisha call pick kar ke bas shant rahi aur udhar ki awaz sun'ne ki kosis karne lagi. Tabhi udhar se Chirag ne "Hello" kaha...


Jivisha.... Oyeee, itne der se mera phone busy kyon aa raha tha...

Chirag... Chhoro na di biti baton ko Di, abhi to maine call lagaya na. Aap thik to hai ki nahi. Khana pina thik se mil raha hai na. Paison ki jaroorat ho to batana, main bhijwa dunga. Thik hai bye Di, aap se baat karke achha laga…


Jivisha....Oyeeee, hoshyari haan. Beta mera hi sikhaya aaj tu mujhe ko padhane laga haan. Chal ab bakna suru kar, kis se baat kar raha tha?


Chirag.... Aap bhi na jabardasti puchhti rahti ho. Phone busy hai to samjhna chahiye na main apni gf se baat kar raha tha. Aap to mera breakup karwa kar manogi.


Jivisha.... Haynnn ! Tu apni gf se baat kar raha tha. Uske pass bhi phone hai kya ?


Chirag.... Nahi di, uske pass phone nahi hai, par maine usse class me he bol diya tha ki main raat ko baat karunga, to wo apne papa ka phone maar kar le aayi.


Jivisha.... Dekh rahi hun, tu bahut bara ho gaya hai...


Chirag.... Di aap bhi kahan mere pyar ki dushman bani ho. Aakhir meri uss se shadi hogi to wo sewa aap ki he karegi na...


Jivisha.... Bas bahut hua. Sun dhyan se meri baat, Pune me koi janwar ka humla ho raha hai, isliye aaj se bilkul tera bahar nikalna band. Jab tak wo pakra nahi jata tu bahar nahi khelne jayega.


Chirag.... Ye kya baat hui, janawar bahar khule me ghumega aur main ghar me band...


Jivisha.... Mera pyara betu hai na, mera kaha nahi manega...


Chirag... Ok Di maan liya aap ka kahna. Waise aap jaroori baat to suno.


Jivisha... Haan, puchhne he wali thi, udhar ki khabar bata. Sab kaise hain. Mamma papa, bhaiya bhabhi aur chote bhaiya, sab kaise hain. Jyada paresan to nahi. Mere vajah se unhe kitni paresaniyan uthani pari hongi. Unka samna main kaise kar paungi.


Chirag..... Nahi to di, itni to baten yahan hui he nahi. Haan, dadi ka bata nahi sakta, sayad wo aap ko dekhe to aap ke baal pakar kar sut de, wo alag baat hai. Idhar baki ke sare logon ko bas aap ki he fikr hai.


Jivisha.... Nahi re pagla, in mother india ko samjhna aasan nahi. Paresan wo bhi hongi. Khair tu wo sab jane de, aur jo boli hun wo karna. Apna aur sab ka khyal rakhna.


Chirag.... Di suno 2 min.


Jivisha.... Haan bol na...


Chirag.... Di wo hai na jin se aap ki shadi hone wali thi, wo aap ke sapno ke prince charm banege aise puri family ko kaha aur tab wo aap se shadi karenge...


Jivisha.... Chhor jane de usse. Usse jo ban'na hai bane, mere sapno ka prince charm jab mujhe milna hoga tab mil jayega.


Chirag.... Thik hai di. Aap aaram se kuch din wahin raho aur baat karte rahna, aap ki bahut yaad aati hai...


Jivisha.... Mujhe bhi tum sab ki bahut yaad aati hai. Rakhti hun phone, baad me baat karungi....



Ashis & Nischal... At walk....


Nischal ko lekar Ashis ghumne chala aaya tha. Ghumne kya aaya tha, usse to bas pata karna tha ki aakhir ye hai kaun. Usse bilkul bhi achha nahi lag raha tha ki koi anjaan ladka uske ghar me rahe. Rah-rah kar bas itna he khyal aa raha tha.... Kaun hai, kahan se aaya hai aur pata nahi ye humare ghar me rah kar kya gul khilayega.....


Ashis, Nischal ko le kar apne doston ke group me pahunch gaya. Jahan Sudeep, Ajit, Manjit aur Ankit tha. Ashis, Nischal ko sab se milwaya. Sab apna naam ke sath apna short bio-deta bhi bata rahe the.... Wo kahan rahte hain aur kya karte hain.


Sab log apni-apni kah kar Nischal se puchhne lage..... "Apne bare me bhi kuch batao dost".


Nischal..... Meri sirf itni kahani hai ki main ek anath hun. Mujhe waqt ne pala aur haalat ne bara kiya hai.


Ajit.... Fir bhi koi to pahchan hogi...


Nischal.... Pahchan kya kah sakte ho. Dekha jaye to kuch bhi nahi...


Manjit.... Paglon jab wo anath hai to pahchan kahan se layega. Jane do Nischal, tum ye batao kaun si jagah se aaye ho aur Indore kaise pahunch gaye.


Nischal.... Jise jahan pahuchna hota hai, phunch he jate hain. Mujhe yahan ke jaghon ke naam pata nahi. Bas yun samjh lo bhatakte-bhatakte pahunch gaya.


Asis, Nischal ko apni jagah par rukne ka bol kar sare dost thodi dur khadey ho gaye... Ashis sare doston ke samne sawal rakha..... "To doston ye batao ki iss ka kya kiya jaye. Ye to pura doubtful hai".


Ankit.... Arre ye to humari baat sun raha hai...


Sab chaunk kar Ankit ki ore dekhe.... Phir Nischal jahan khada tha wahan dekhne lage..... "Oye pagal, wo to wahin khada hai apni jagah, ab kya urr kar aa gaya yahan"


Ankit.... Nahi yaar wo abhi yahin khada tha...


Ashish... Khair jane do usse, bharam ho gaya hoga... to tum sab batao ab iss ka kya kiya jaye.


Sudeep... Karna kya hai, bhagao isse... ghar par bol dena ki ladka kahin bhag gaya.


Manjeet... Nahi to kah dena kahin gum ho gaya. Kuch bhi bahane bana dena situation ke hisab se par main kah raha hun ki ye khatrnak hai... isse bhagao.


"Oho, to anjaan aadmi ka bhay sata raha hai inhe. Koi nahi kosis kar lo main bhagne wala nahi. Filhaal to nahi, jab tak main iss jagah ko samjh na jaun. Jab tak ki mujhe meri khoyi chijen wapas nahi mil jata. Fir tum kaun aur main kaun"


Idhar sare log meeting kar ke sidha pahunche Nischal ke pass..... "Dekho Mr. Ab tak jo bhi hua wo mahaj ek ittifaq tha, lekin ab tumhe apne raste jana hoga".


Nischal.... Kyon, meri galti kya hai... sirf itna na ki meri koi pahchan nahi, aur tum sab mujhe nahi jante.


Ashis.... Dekho dost tum kuch bhi kah lo sau baat ka ek jabaw, tumhe jana hoga...


Nischal.... Aur yadi maine naa kaha to...


Ashis..... Na kaha to... fir jute maar kar bhaga denge...


Nischal.... Sochna bhi mat, tum char logon se to nahi he ho payega. Ek kaam karo tumhare jitne dost hain sab ko bulao aur ek kosis kar ke dekh lo. Yadi tum jute marne me kamyab ho gaye to main chala jaunga. Warna main Jivisha ke sath he rahne wala hun, wo mujhe bahut pasand hai aur usse main nahi chhor sakta.


Sudeep.... Bahut bolta hai, maro sale ko. Ye sale sadak chhap bina jute khaye baat nahi man'ne wala.


Sudeep ka itna kahna tha ki Manjeet aur Ankit badhe aage.... bechare kitna aage badhte... daurte rahe dono par Nischal hath nahi aaya. Kya speed me bhag raha tha. Nahi hath aaya Nischal anth me dono thak kar sab ke pass pahunch gaye.


Ankit.... Sala pakka ye chor hai, kitna tej bhagta hai. Olympic me bhage to jaroor gold madel jit layega.


Nischal.... Juban sambhal kar, main koi chor nahi. Ye tum sab ke liye achha hoga ki mera ego hurt na karo, warna main wo tandav karunga ki fir tum sab usse sah nahi paoge.


Ashis.... Stadium khula hai isliye na, abhi kisi gali me hote, fir batate.


Nischal.... Kitni bari gali mile to mujhe pakar kar dikhaoge batao.... 2 fit chauri 8 fit lambi gali banao yahin. Yadi line se bahar gaya ya tum charo me se kisi ne mujhe pakar liya to main chala jaunga...


Ashis.... Rahne de bhai, main samjh gaya tu pakka veer hai. Par ye bata tu anjaan ladka hai, main tumhe apne ghar par kaise rahne dun.


Nischal..... Suno dost tumne bhai bola na, to bhai par viswas rakho. Tumhe kisi bhi waqt yadi aisa laga ki mere wajah se tumhe paresani hui to bata dena main ussi waqt chup-chap chala jaunga...


Manjeet, hafte huye.... Maan le iski baat, banda jab itna kah raha to ek baar bahrosa kar lete hain...



Idhar kamre me Nandni...


Saroj ko samne dekhte he uske purane dard samne aa gaye. Pariwar ke samne apni nam aankhen dikha to nahi sakti thi, par jab se kamre me ghusi uske aankhon ke aanshu tham he nahi rahe the.... Roti aankhon ke samne bhi kewal Saroj ka he chehra ghum raha tha.
 

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Ye Meri Aakhri Kahani Thi, Jo Main Xossip Par Likh Raha Tha....... Unfortunately XP Band Ho Gayi Aur Ye Kahani Bich Mein Hi Atak Gayi. Halanki mein bhi atak gaya tha fir, bhid-bhad me khoya sa aur likhna bhi bhul gaya tha....

Kuch kamine dost jo xp se mera picha nahi chhod rahe.... unhone fir mujhe bahut hadkaya aur wapas likhne ki zid par bhukh hartal ko baith gaye..... mein lagbhag 3 sal baad laut raha tha...... Apne chir parichit section Romance se fir maine Bhanwar likhna shuru kiya....

Mujhe ummid nahi thi ki, itne salon baad bhi wapas se likhne ke baad bhi readers ke bich Bhanwar ko itna pyara response milega...... Main yahan ke sabhi readers ko aabhar vyakt karna chahunga jinhone meri kahani ko saraha aur kahani ke sath bane huye hain....

Mujhe laga tha logon ne bhula diya hoga iss kahani ko ... lekin aisa nahi tha. Bahut sare readers ke jahan me ab bhi ye story apna chhap banaye huye the... Main naam likh kar yahan dusron ki bhawnao par koi aaghat to nahi karna cahhata.. lekin unhi readers ke bich ek reader ne mujhse itna aagrah ki ... ki main khud se hi sawal puchne laga.... Jinhone viswas kiya ek purn kahani ka.. kya unhe ek adhuri kahani dena jayaj hai...

khas dhanywad us pathika ko jisne mujhe ye sochne par majboor kiya aur is soch ke baad ab main bilkul taiyar hun "Ishq-Risk" ko uske anjam tak pahunchane ke liye.... So taiyar ho jaeye ek mindless fantasy ke liye..... jo sachai se koson dur hai aur main apeksha karunga ki aap ise matr ek fantasy love story ki tarah padhe jisme facts ko takh par rakh kar kahani ko enjoy kare....

Isi ke sath main apni baaten samapt karta hun... aur ummid karta hun ki aap readers ke bich ye kahani jagah bana sake.....

Dhanywaad....
Welcome back nainu sarkar itna lamba bhasan to aajkal neta log bhi nahi detey?? welcome back to ishq risk??
 

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I love the pairing of Chirag and Jeevisha, both very naughty. :lol1: Jivisha does not want to get married right now, that does not mean she will not marry, housemates should understand. :rolleyes:
Nischal is lying most and what items have been lost, tell us in detail about Nischal. Nothing has happened yet and Nischal likes Jeevisha. :firstmove:
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.

Thank You...

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