Fantasy Kaisa Ye Ishq Hai ~ Ajab Sa Risk Hai ~ Reload (Completed)

[nain11ster]

Page 766 Se 775 tak har panne par update hai.

Final closing update on page:-792


Issi ke sath Ishq Risk reloaded ka ye season poora hua. Next fantasy journey announce ho jayegi. Ummid hai pahle

"Arymani:- The Pure Alfa Between Two World's."

Yahi aaye... Jo bhi hoga purv suchna mil jayegi... Fihlaal end enjoy karenge... Aur kahani ka poora safar kaisa rahega wo ek baar jaroor sajha karen...


Filhaal Abhi vyast hun ek pure romantic journey par....

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Aap sab ka hai udhar. Kahani par pahunchne ke liye story title par ulgi karne ka...

<<<< Too Young !! Too Old >>>>​

 

[nain11ster]

Update:-62 ​

Apasyu, apne pass se ek chhoti si potli khol'kar 2 pendent nikala. Kuchh mantr unccharit karte ek-ek pendent dono ke gale me pahnate.… "Ye Saatvik Aashram ka rakshak sutr hai. Tum dono ko har badha se dur rakhegi.… Kuchh sal apne desh chhodne ki saza mujhe bhi mili thi... Atmraksha aur koi jaan lene aaye usse jaan se marne ke liye hathiyar uthana dharm hai. Raksha sutr tumhare pass hai dharm ka palan karna... Tumhari sabhi ikchha purn hui Nischal, jald hi milenge"…


Apasyu ko Nischal pichhe se rokta rah gaya lekin wo dhire-dhire andhere me kahin gum ho gaya. Nischal, Serin ka muh dekhte... "Ye guru nahi guru ghantal hai... Main sanyas lena chahta hun aur ye mujhe raksha sutr dekar kahte hain dharm ka palan karna"…


Serin:- Main samjh gayi wo kya kahna chah rahe the...


Nischal:- Kya???


Serin:- Karm aur Parinaam… Jab se Surpmarich humare gyaan me aaya tabhi se uska astitv. Raksha sutr aur har badha se dur rakhna. Dharm ka palan aur anth me sari ikchha purn hui... Puri baat shuru se soch sab samjh jayega...


Nischal:- Tu hi samjha de na..


Serin:- Mere bhai ye to main baad me bhi samjha sakti hun, ya waqt khud-v-khud samjha dega, par kya tu kuchh bhul raha hai...


Nischal:- Kya???


Serin, muskurati hui apne bhai ko dekhi, aur uske bahn se lag'kar.… "Kuchh nahi chal ander chalte hai"…


Nischal:- Areeee, gadha hun main...


Nischal, Serin ka hath apne hath me le'kar, vachan ka ek sikka Serin ke hath me dete... "Koi bhi ek wish, niyamanusar ya niyam ke virudhh"… .


Serin hansti hui... "Achha niyam ke viruddh bhi meri chahat puri karega… dekha nahi humare purane guruji ka kya hua"...


Nischal:- Ab to sikka de diya... Ab pichhe na hat sakta


Serin:- Thik hai main apni chahat abhi mangti hun...


Nischal:- Kya???


Serin wo sikka wapas karti.… "Ye sikka fir kabhi vachanbadhh hone ke liye istamaal nahi karega"…


Nischal hanste huye wo sikka apne pass rakha aur, Serin ke kandhe par hath dal'kar, kisi dost ki tarah resort ke ore chalte.. "Serin hum kahan the aur ab kahan hai... Tujhe sapne jaisa nahi lagta kya???"


Serin:- Mujhe chhod aur ja'kar apni biwi ke sath emotion-emotion khel, main chali apne jodi ke pass...


Nischal hanste huye hanth ke ishare se ander jane kaha. Darvaje par hi Jivisha, Nischal ka intzar kar rahi thi. Wo lagatar apni najar bahar ke ore banayi hui thi... Andhera itna tha ki dekh pana mushkil...


Serin aage badhi. Yun to khush thi, lekin jaise hi usse Jivisha dikhi wo apna chehra niche karke chup'chap teji se nikli.… Jivisha usse rokne ke liye kuchh kahna chah hi rahi thi ki pichhe se Nischal bhi najar aane laga…


Jaise hi Nischal resort ke ander pahla kadam rakha, tej chudiyon ki khanak aur khankhanati payal ki awaj dayen ore se aayi aur agle hi pal Jivisha, Nischal ka hath khinch'kar usse resort ke bagiche ke ore le gayi. Dono garden me lagi bench par baith gaye… Dono hi samne dekhte bilkul khamosh….


"Love main sab kuchh samjha dungi, please tum kuchh bhi galat mat sochna"…


Nischal:- Tum kya samjhaogi.… Jane do...


Jivisha, ki pareshani uske chehre se saaf jhalakti, wahin sine me halka dard ka aabhash sa tha... Awaj utni hi ghabrayi si.… "Suno to baby, please ek baar sun lo na"…


Nischal, mud'kar Jivisha ke ore baitha, "haan sun raha hun, batao"…


Jivisha:- Love please aise gussa na ho.… Sorry main wahan fail ho gayi.…. Ek Sanyasi ke jaan jane me tumhara koi dosh nahi hai... Main shuru se uss Apasyu se kah rahi hun, lekin wo sun hi nahi raha...


Nischal:- Ho gaya tumhara... Ya aur bhi kuchh hai... Madari ka bander bana rakha hai.…


Jivisha:- Nischal, love tum to samajh jao...


Nischal:- Haan main sab samjh gaya hun... Uss Apasyu ko hi apna pakka aashiq banana hai na... Main khatak raha hun to sidha kyun nahi kah deti...


Jivisha:- Kyon meri ghutan badha rahe ho... Tum kyon nahi samajh rahe Nischal… wo to gair hai, main usse kitna samjhaun, tum to mere ho...… Tum hi samjh jao...


Nischal:- Thik hai main samjh gaya.…. Tum kosis karti rahi ki mujhe uss hatya kand me doshi na samjha jaye.….. Mujhe yakin hai... Ab kya tum meri baat sunogi...


Jivisha vyakulta me Nischal ka hath thamti... "Main tumhari baat nahi sunugi to kiski baat sunugi... Kaho na baby"…


Nischal:- Uss Apasyu se mujhe badla lena hai… usse yahan bulao...


Aanshu to pahle se chal rahe the... Nischal ki baat par jaise hont sil gaye ho… Anterman me ek hi khyal aa raha tha... "Main pahle hi baat kar leti to jyada achha tha"… Jivisha apni duvidha se jaise hi bahar aayi, samne Nischal tha hi nahi…


Uski vyakul najar charo ore Nischal ko dhundhne lagi. Kahin kuchh bhi najar nahi aa raha tha. Aanshu uske chhalak rahe the. Ander se pahli baar ye khyal aa raha tha ki uska faisla galat tha... Takti najar Nischal ko dhundh rahi thi aur aankhon se aanshu bahte ja rahe the...


Tabhi pichhe se 2 hath Jivisha ke chehre par aaye aur uske aanshu pochhne lage… Jivisha utni hi teji se palat'kar pichhe mudi... Aur samne Nandni ko dekh'kar, uss se lipat kar bechari hichkiyon me apna dukhra sunane lagi….


Nandni usse khud se alag karti uske aanshu pochhti... "Areee, bus bhi kar rona"…


Jivisha hichkiyan leti..… "Wo naraj hokar chala gaya... Usse bula rahi to aa nahi raha… main kya karu mujhe samjh me nahi aa raha"…


Nandni:- Tu pahle chup ho ja... Ye le pani pi...…


Jivisha:- Pahale usse bulao, meri sun hi nahi raha…


Nandni:- Aree wo yahin hai aur hans raha hai... Usse Saatvik Aashram ki saja ke bare me pahle pata chala hai, baad me tujhe bataya gaya...


Jivisha, hairani se Nandni ko dekhti.… "Ye tujhe kaise pata"..


Nandni:- Abhi abhi pata chala… tu jab khyalon me khoyi thi aur ro rahi thi...


Jivisha harbadi me pani pi'kar khadi hui aur jod-jod se chillati hui Nischal ko pukarne lagi… Samne Nischal hanste huye jaise hi najar aaya, Jivisha utni hi vyakulta se uske pass daud'kar pahunchi... Uska gala pakad'kar apna chhota sa muh banati, honth bichkati... "Aise din bhi koi apni biwi ko rulata hai kya???"…


Nischal:- Aise gala daba'kar kaun shikayat karti hai... Honth se honth laga'kar kar bhi to shikayat kar sakti ho na...


"Huhhhh !!!! Kuchh nahi hoga aaj… chalo"…

"Kuch der pahle hi to kahi thi sab baat manogi"…

Jivisha apna sar Nischal ke sine se lagaati... "Dara diya mujhe nirdayi"…


"Isse yadi swarth ki paribhasha kah dun to galat na hoga... Mujhe bula'kar dono lage raho, main bhi chali"… Nandni apni baat kahti bench se uth gayi...


Dono daure aur Nandni ko pakad liya.."Bina awaj kiye dono aao mere sath, aur Nandu tu Doc ko kahan chhod aayi hai"…


Nandni:- Ansh ko HuYu ki dekh'rekh me laga diya gaya hai... Usse lagta tha shadi baad hi suhaagraat hogi, isliye apni dulhan ke liye bavla ho gaya tha...


Jivisha, Jor se hansti.… "Kaun si film suggest kar aayi thi"…


Nandni:- Suhaagraat hai ghunghat utha raha tha main…


Dono hi jor jor se hasne lagi... Idhar Nischal apni bhauh, aankhen sikhodte.… "Bus bhi karo tum dono... Unki koi galti nahi hai, ab unko thode na itne riti rivaj pata hai… jo haal HuYu ka hai, wahi to Luna aur Ert ka bhi hoga"…


Nandni:- Haan to jaa teeno ki sej saja'kar aa ja, itna hi bura lag raha hai to...


Jivisha apni aankh dikha'kar usse thuski lagaate huye fusfusati... "Besharm kuchh to sharm kar, kyon chhed rahi hai uss bhole ko"…


Nandni hansti hui.… "Maza aata hai.."…


Tabhi Jivisha pichhe dekhi... "Pagal Nandu, tere mazak se bechara Sharma gaya... Lekar usse terris par pahunch, main jab'tak vayvastha banati hun"…


"Kya baat kar rahi hai... Tu chal main aayi"…


Kuchh hi der baad teeno top floor ke terris par pool side baithe the. Jivisha bich me baithi thi aur dono dayen bayen. Teeno ke hath me chhoti bottal maxican beer ki aur sip sip me khinchte huye baten kar rahe the...


Baton ke dauran hi Nandni ne puchh hi liya ki, wo Saatvik Aashram se sampark kar'ke sabse saja na dene ki request kar rahi thi lekin ek baar bhi kya wo Nischal ya Apasyu ke mann ki baat ko padh nahi payi...


"Pagal kabhi class me padhi thi jo ab ye din aa gaye ki shadi kar'ke settle ho rahi hun aur boaring si dimagi padhai padhte rahun"… Jivisha hansti hui javab di aur Nischal ka hath tham'kar… "Baby tumhe batana to tha matth ja rahe ho"…


Nischal:- Main khud me hi jujh raha tha aur tum sab shadi ki taiyariyon me lagi thi, tou maine socha mathh me chal'kar hi shanti milegi... Mere liye to meri shadi ki puri taiyari Nandu kar rahi thi fir mujhe chinta kis baat ki. Isliye main yahan aa gaya"…


Teeno line se baithe huye the. Nandni kuchh gahre khyalon me gayi... Wahi haal Jivisha ka bhi tha... Aur agle hi pal Nandni aur Jivisha hairani se ek dusre ko dekhi...


Nandni:- Kya hua??

Jivisha:- Tujhe kya hua??

Nandni:- Mujhe laga maine kuchh galat suna....

Jivisha:- Mujhe laga kuchh jhol hai… ruk issi se puchhne de...

Niachal:- Hadd hai main ja raha hun... Ye tum dono ki khusar fusar fir shuru...


Nandni, aur Jisvisha ne aapas me jagah badli…. Aur Nandni bade pyar se Nischal ka kandha sahlati…. "Beta jab tu matth me apne maar dhar aur action se bhadpur wale jivan se sanyas mangne gaya tha, tab tujhe tere guru ji mile the"…


Nischal:- Haan, Guru Apasyu aur Aacharya ji dono wahin the. Maine unhe apni manodasha bata'kar, apne aur Serin ke liye khud hi sanyas ki saza maang liya.


Jivisha aur Nandni dono ek sath.… "Ohhh !! To matlab tumhari aur Apasyu ki ladai se pahle, tum dono kayi baar mile the"…


Fir Jivisha baat aage badhati... "Aur uske baad bhi tumne ladai wale din Apasyu par janlewa humla kiya... Aur baad me Apasyu ne tumhe gali ka kutta samjh'kar pita. Nandu, galat to nahi kah rahi...


Nandni:- Tu bilkul sahi ja rahi hai Jisa... Iss jholar ki to...


Jivisha:- Ab kya main kah dun Nandu tujh se un palon ki aap biti... Tu hi puchh le aage..


Nandni:- Mai soch kar pagal hui ja rahi thi ki wahan hua kya... Aur sala yahan to raaj ke ander raaj chhipe hai... Chal oye jaldi se iss baat se parda hata..


Nischal:- Mujhe Aacharya ji ne kaha tha bhed khul jayega, lekin main nahi maana...


Nandu, ek tikha jhatka deti.… "Tu sare bhed khol abhi"…


Nischal:- Chhodo kal ki baten, ab gade murde ukhadne se kya fayda... Abhi sab thik hai na..


Nandni:- Bilkul fayda hai..... Chal ab bata jaldi...


Nischal, un dono se thoda duri banate, ek gahri shwans liya aur apni baat shuru kiya.….


Jivisha ke kanchanjangha pahunchne ke dusre din hi Apasyu ne mujhe aur Serin ko bulaya aur humse Jivisha ka poora plan discuss kiya tha. Khair hum dono bhai bahan ke reaction thik waise hi the jaisa Jivisha ne socha tha… Lekin tab wo ek padav paar kar aayi thi.

Surpmarich se yuddh ho chuka tha aur uske vishwas ke taar se hum bhi jude, bina kisi dusra khyal ke, ki mere chahne walon me se kisi ko kuchh hoga. Kyonki hume Saatvik Aashram ke na sirf Guru aur Aacharya ne bharosa dilya tha, balki wahan maujood har insan ne bharosa dilaya ki humari yadasat jab jayegi wo kisi ko kuchh nahi hone denge...

Jivisha sab akele karna chahti thi, lekin Apasyu uske plan me thoda fer badal karna chahta tha, kyonki usse yakin nahi ho raha tha ki Surpmarich jaise dhurt se, gayi hui yadon me Jivisha ka akele ladna safe hoga…

Haan ye baat mujhe shuru se pata thi ki humari khoyi yadast me, Surpmarich ko hum par humla karne ke liye vivash kiya jayega. To yojna me badlav ye tha ki jaise khoyi yaad me Jivisha shaktiyon ko punah jagrit karna Apasyu ka kaam hoga, thik waise hi mujhe aur Serin ko Aacharya ji trained karte, taki khoyi yaad me jab Jivisha Surpmarich ke dimag ke ander lad rahi hoti, tab bahar main aur Serin pura support karte...

Koi iss baat se inkar nahi kar sakta ki mera black hole me jana aur khoyi hui yaad me prashikshan na le pane ki vajah se, Surpmarich se ladai me sabki jaan jate-jate bachi... Hum sabke liye saviour ka kaam Orja ne kiya tha, warna laash girni tay thi... Apne kheme se 1 laash giri thi, ek sanyasi ki. Aur puri yojna safal rahi...

Yun to jab hum 3 mahine baad hospital se uthe, tabhi ek baithak ho jati. Hume aage ke liye plan karna tha... Lekin issi bich main, Serin, aur pura Saatvik Aashram Guru Vashudhar me ulajh gaye... Guru Vashudhar ka kalpnik ansh, humari saflta par mujhe Saatvik Aashram ke sarvochya ke roop me dekna chahte the aur Jivisha ko uske mul sthan Kanchanjangha me.…

Guru Vashudhar ke pass 1000 salon ki tap bal tha... Unme koi shakti nahi thi, lekin artificial brain me rahne ke baad wo kisi ke brain ko kabu kar sakte the... Aur wo ye sab kar bhi rahe the... Aacharya ji ke brain me ghus'kar unhe pahad se niche gira chuke the, lekin sanyasiyon ki tukdiyon ne unhe bacha liya...

Dusri ore meri anter aatma mujhe kosh rahi thi. Jo sanyasi moh-maya tyag kar dusron ke jivan ko sanjo rahe hain, unhi ki lash mere aankhon ke aage ghum rahi thi... Jab main atmglani me matth pahuncha tab mujhe pata chala ki humari agli baithak aur aage ke kaam ab tak bante kyon nahi gaye... Guru Vashudhar ne pura Saatvik Aashram ko hi uljha rakha tha...

Main jis din matth pahuncha fir ussi din Guru Vashudhar ko bandhne ki niti bani aur ussi ka natija tha mere aur Apasyu ke bich ki ladai... Jab mujhe maar khata dekh ek pita moh bus mujhe wo har baat samjhane pahunche, jiska gyaan unhone bachpan me mujhe diya tha. Bhavnatmak judav ke karan wo kamjor pare aur unhe bandhana sambhav ho paya tha...

Jivisha ko mere vishay me yah bataya gaya ki jivan ke mulya ko samjhne ke liye mujhe bachpan ke gyan ka pata karna hoga, jiska prashikshan mujhe khoyi yaad ke dauran nahi mil paya tha aur ab waqt bahut kam tha...

Ye hansti rahi, lekin mujhe pitna hoga, iss baat ke liye Jivisha roj roti thi... Love you baby. Mujhe ab bhi yakin nahi hota ki itna dhairya tumhare ander tha. Janti ho Nandu, isne aachrya ji aur Apasyu se kya kahi thi... "Yadi Apasyu ek majboot pratidwandi hai aur ladai me mere Nischal ka gala kaat dega to uske mirtyu ka jo dard main jheleungi, uss se kayi guna jyada dard mujhe uska yun chhal se maar kahte huye dekhna hoga"…

Jis prakar mujhe peeta jana tha, usme bus ek hi chinta thi, Jivisha. Sabhi logon ko bal se roka ja sakta tha lekin mujhe jalil hote dekh Jivisha ko rokna... Kalpna karna uss Apasyu ke liye mushkil tha… Orja ka kahar sabko yaad tha jab wo viyog me thi... Jivisha ka viyog shayad hi koi jhel pata. Kayi jaan jane ki sambhavna badh jati, isliye sacchi jhuth jaisi kahani bani, usse samjha'kar iss ladai ke liye Jivisha ko raaji kiya gaya tha...

Sooo ye thi sacchai mere ore se... Jo ab tak iss kahani me hum karte aaye hain wo hai Jivisha par bharosa aur aage bhi karte rahenge...


Nandni:- Fir Jivisha ki wo ikchha shakti, alokik shakti, mind read, telepaithy… in sab se ek baar bhi pata nahi chala ki tum ye jhuthi ladai lad rahe?? Aur kya Jivisha ko sach hi bata dete ki Guru Vashudhar ko bandhna hai, to Jivisha nahi samiti kya???


Jivisha:- "Kisi ke ghar me gun hota hai to kya wo load kar'ke hamesa firing karte rahta hai... Kabhi kabhar jung na lag jaye isliye servicing me bhejta hai, lekin uss shoorat me bhi firing karke apne gun ka jung ki nahi chhudata... Bus mere power bhi aisa hi hai"....

"Ye log mujhe sach isliye nahi bata sakte the kyonki ye plan kewal kewal 2 log ke bich bana hoga... Apasyu aur Nischal... Guru Vashudhar ko jhuthi ladai ki sacchai kisi ke bhi dimag se pata chal sakti thi, iske liye unhe kisi ke dimag me ghusne ki bhi jaroorat nahi...

Apasyu aur Nischal ne sacchai ko Guru Vashudhar se dur rakhne ke liye jo bhi jatan kiye ho... Lekin jitne aadmi tak ye sachai jati utna hi bhed khulne ka dar... Isliye sabke jahan me yahi daala gaya hoga Nischal ke liye yah ladai jaroori hai...


Nischal:- Haan sahi hai kyonki Guru Vashudhar ka aansik kalpnik sarir bahut takatvar hai... Uss se jita nahi ja sakta hai... Aur ye pura chhal ussi ke liye tha"…


Nandni:- Huhhh !!! Hisab barabar to hone dete...


Njschal:- Jaan se maar na deta Guruji ko.… Meri aakhen band ho gayi thi jab maine wo khanjar Guruji ke gardan par chalaya… lekin jor se chillane ki awaj se mere jaan me jaan aayi ki wo jinda bache hain..


Nandni:- Haan to tujhe goli maar deta utna dard na hota... Sahi kaha tha Jivisha ne... Jaise awara kutte ko marte hain waise pit diya…


Nischal:- O jahil kahin ki... Mujhe paun par khada dekh aur wapas ladte dekh, Guru Vashudhar ki jab chhati chaudi hui hogi aur unka moh kendrit hoga mujhe dekhne par, ki ab mera beta khun ki nadiyan yahan bahayega, ussi dauran wo pakde gaye the.. Jaise hi Guru Vashudhar poore jaal me fase, waise hi ladai roki gayi, kyonki uske baad Guru Vashudhar ko bandhne me Aacharya ji ko Apasyu ki jaroorat padti…


Nandni:- Oooo aisi baat thi… lekin kitna bhi sahi ho ya galat, jo aankhon ne dekha uske baad ye dil hai ki manta nahi... Nahi bahut jyada to 5-6 jalil karne wala laafa hi lagaa de Nischal… mere kaleje ko thandak pahunchegi. Waise bhi ek Guru Vashudhar ke liye tu kutton ki tarah pit sakta hai to mere kaleje ki thandak ke liye usse 8-10 lafa nahi laga sakta...


Jivisha:- Done... Lekin uske liye thoda intzar karna hoga, kyonki wo waqt alag hoga, halaat alag honge aur zajbaat alag honge...


"Emergency…. Emergency… Emergency…. Emergency…. Emergency... Emergency"…


Nandni, Jivisha, aur Nischal… teeno ke hi mobile par laal rang ka warning alert... Aur mobile lagatar kah raha tha Emergency… teeno ke hi aakhen badi…. Kyonki ye warning alert Chirag aur Aarsi ke liye tha….

 

[nain11ster]

Nandu ke mask ko to upgrade kr diya or guru gyan bhi de diya
Nishchal ko saza ke roop me speed hi bandh di
5 saal ka Desh nikala oh sorry planet nikala kr diya
Ab us modified sena ko kaise manage karenge Ye log
Chirag or ansh ko dekhte hai kaise bachate hai sb
Superb update with awesome writing skills
Nainu bhai ka jvaab nhi

Thoda dhyan dete bahut kuch tha update me ... Khair... Dhire dhire samajh jayenge... Thanks for your beautiful revoo

 

[nain11ster]

Bas iss update ke bare me itna kahana chahunga ki man me bhar bhar ke galiya aa rhi hai yaha likh nhi sakta ...
Haa Maine maan liya pitrahanta apasyu mahan aur nishchal papi hai ...nain sir ka Kya hai aage kah denge ki planning planning khel rahe the ...haa hame pata hai ki iss injection ka asar 5 years letter kahatm ho jayega .aur in 5 years me nishchal ki speed tatha kshamata unmatched ho chuki hogi aur injection ka asar end hone ke baad wo unstoppable ho jayenge but aap Jo bhi in kamo ke liye situation ka use kar rhe hai uske liye aap khud hi 10_12k galiya soch ke apasyu ko de de..abhi filhal iss story ka bakchodi Wala seen chal rha hai ..aur shayad aage bhi chale .. ek baat to conform hai ki story ke end me nishchal aur asatak ya hella ke bich yuddh dikhaya jayega ..aur phir waha bhi bakchodi hogi but koi na ab to bakchodi ki aadat si padane lagi hai ...
Approx half story hone ko aayi hai aur hame mauka Mila hai bas khun jalane ka wo bhi apna ...aage updato me bahut Sara yuddh hone Wala hai so hame khush hone ka mauka nhi milega ...aur last me ek baat ye jiviya bahut achchhi acting kar leti hai iske Mann me laddu phoot rhe honge ki Chalo ab 5 years apasyu ke sath hawas ka khel khelenge...yahi to wo done chahate the ...bas end of discussion in this update...

Yaar aap pahle update padhna sikho ... Fir baat karte hai.... It is just stupidity ... Meri himmat nahi bachi ki sandhi bichhed karke update likhta rahun thoda technical update aata hai to chilla chot karte ho bewakoof ki tarah...

Atmglani nischal ko hua tha.. wo gaya tha matth me ek hatya ka saja lene...

Saja diya hathiyar mat uthao ... Lekin sath me kah bhi diya rakhshak hai aur... Baki ki line padh lena... Yanj nischal ko hathiyar uthana hai... Bus nirdosh na mare... Itna Nischal janta hai...

5 saal.kah diya planet se bahar rahega... Lekin sath me ye bhi kah diya usse bhi desh nikala mila tha kuchh salon ka...

Rahi baat gati ban ki to wo nischal ki ikchha thi... Wo apna paun daan karne wala tha... So atmglani me fase nischal ki manodsah ka andaja nahi...

Kahe shabdon ka andaja nahi... Ki update me kya kaha gaya hai... Boss naam ke chakkar me mat raho... I am watching everyone...

Mujhe ek guru ka charecter create karna tha to Apasyu hai yahan... Na to wo koi action kar raha hai aur na hi kisi lead ko takeover... Update ko thik se padhiye... Ya fir kah dijiye tecnical upadate na diya karun kyonki ek naam itna prabhavi ki wo reader ki reader nature ko hi kha chuka hai...

Hell frustration only... Baki kahani gayi bhhar me

 

[nain11ster]

Ye apasyu ka story interference bahut jyada ho rha hai chahe wo technology me ho ya neeji matter Mai tang as gaya hai iss tiktok ki beti apasyu se

Mati bhram hai... Aur kuchh nahi

 

[Nevil singh]

Update:-60 ​

Aaj subah ki shurwaat jitni khinchi hui thi, raat sabke liye utna hi sukhad tha... Aisa lag raha tha jaise ye shadi ka mahol, bite khinchav bhade din ke stress ko release karne ke liye hi aayojit kiya gaya tha...

Lekin ye stress kitna jane wala tha wo to aane wala waqt hi batata, kyonki shikari apni puri taiyariyon ke sath nikal chuke the... Aur jab suhagraat ke waqt sab apni masti me vayst hote, tab Surpmarich apne uss kadadi shikasat ka badla lete... Haan lekin unki yojna me takniki roop se chhota sa badlav kar diya gaya tha…


Purv me Surpmarich ka ansh Yuvi ko mili karadi shikast ke baad jab se inki payback ki puri yojna bani thi, bahut kosis kiye Jivisha, Nischal aur unse jude har kisi par najar rakhne ki, lekin Surpmarich ko pahle to 3 mahine tak kuchh pata hi nahi chala ki ye sab aakhir Delhi me kaun se bill me ghus gaye... aur inka ilaj kahan chal raha hai...


Jab Pura parivar Pune pahuncha aur Surpmarich ko yah pata chala ki Jivisha, Nischal aur Serin ki yadast wapas laut aayi hai. Surpmarich ke sabhi ansh ko aisa jhatka laga, mano unki raaton ki nind haram ho gayi ho… Chah kar bhi kuchh pata nahi kar pa rahe the… unhe aisa lagne laga ki unke virodhi ke bare me sab kuchh jaan'ne ke baad bhi, ab tak pura anjaan dikh rahe hain...


Pahle Pune se hi Chirag aur Ansh ko uthaya jana tha, lekin inki yadast wapas aate hi Surpmarich ke kheme me matam sa pasar gaya. Nangi aurten, khula bistar aur manorajan ke sabhi intazamat ab kaatne ko daur rahe the. Baukhlahat unke chehre se saaf pata chal rahi thi aur in sab mamlon ke hone ke pichhe wo Saatvik Aashram ko hi maan raha tha... Lekin jaise sab kuchh samne ho'kar bhi kuchh najar nahi aa raha ho.


Sattvik Aasharam ka gadh kahe jane wale kanchanjangha ke gaanv ko Surpmarich ne tatola. Usse aabhash ho gaya ki kanchanjangha ki gode me ek baar fir Saatvik Aashram fal-ful raha hai, lekin ek vishes dayre ko na to wo aur na hi uska kalpnik sharir paar kar pa raha tha...


Fir Surpmarich ko samjh me aaya ki jo jagah barbaad hui thi (Kanchanjangha ka gaanv), usse aabad karne ki kosis kahin bahar se hui hogi... Pahle wo Nainital guru Nishi ke gurukul me pahuncha jahan usse pata chala ki jagah salon pahle ujad chuki hai aur sarkar wapas se iss jagah ko bana rahi. wahan se nirasha haath lagne ke baad wah pahuncha Tibbath kshetr ke Kailash marg matth ke ore...


Matth to tha lekin yahan ka dayra bhi itna majboot bandha gaya tha ki Surpmarich ka na to sharir uss dayre ko paar kar paya aur na hi uski koi siddhi. Saatvik Aashram ka Kanyakumari matth, Pasachimi Himalaya ka Gurukul, har jagah ek jaisi samsya aa rahi thi. Aisa lag raha tha jaise sab ko pata hai ki kaun Saatvik aasram aane wala hai, aur usse rokne ki pukhta taiyari ye Saatvik aasharm wale kar chuke ho...


Surpmarich ke virodhi iss baar uss se ek kadam aage nikle... Anth me haar'kar Surpmarich ke sabhi ansh ek hafte ke liye dhyan me doob gaye. Ladai se lekar har chhote se chhote pahlu par najar diya... Lekin anterman me bhi kahin koi jawab nahi tha. Jab kuchh bhi natija hasil nahi hua tab wo log wapas se Jivisha ke pure pariwar par najar banaye, jo ki uss waqt Tibbath ke resort me shadi ke liye pahunche the…


Shadi se teen din pahle pata chala tha ki ye log agli subah kisi se mil rahe hai... Lekin kis se mil rahe uss naam par aate hi jaise voice clearity ki maa bahan ek ho jati ho... Kahin ja rahe the milne, lekin kahan iss baat par bhi jaise clearity kahin gayab si dikhi..


Surpmarich ko samjhte der na lagi ki usse fasane ke liye ek alag tarah kaa jaal buna hai, jisme wo apne dushmano ke pichhe jane par majboor ho… Haan lekin iss baar apne dushman ke pichhe jane ke siway aur koi chara bhi nahi tha, kyonki samne se jo khel chal raha tha usme Surpmarich khud ko pura asahay samjh raha tha…


Shadi ke 3 raat pahle hui baat se Surpmarich samajh chuka tha ki ho na ho Saatvik Aashram ke guru aur Jivisha ke sabhi logon ke bich kisi tarah ki aham baithak hogi... Yuvi aur Arf me se to wahan ka dayra koi paar nahi kar sakta tha isliye aanan-fanan me usne apne tej-tarrar super human gulamon ki ek team bheji... Jo super-duper tarike se disappear ho gaye...


Jitni jaldi aaye the utni hi jaldi gayab bhi ho gaye. Surpmarich ko aisa laga mano ye log pahle se hi taiyar baithe ho... Jab koi chara nahi mila, tab aakhir me sab ne mil'kar ek faisla liya.... Jivisha aur Nischal se jude jo log mile usse utha lo. Pahle unke dimag ko khangalo, fir usse maar dalo... Jiski baukhlahat me Nischal aur Jivisha unse ladne aayenge...


Ladne aane wale virodhiyon ke liye Surpmarich ne mission ka maksad kisi ko maarna nahi rakha, balki Nischal aur Jivisha ke sath jo koi bhi pichhe baith'kar khel raha hai... Un sab ke dimag ko pura khangal'kar jaankari nikalna.


Sath hi sath kayi tarah ke sambhavna par vichar karne ke baad, yahi nishkarsh nikla ki Surpmarich ke 2 ansh sanyukt roop se kisi bhi ek dimag ke taktakal yadon ko bhi khangal le tou kaam ho jayega, maksad bus yah jan'na tha ki kahani me ye Saatvik aasharm aaya kahan se.


Apne lakshya me bilkul saaf aur focus planning ke sath iss baar sath aa rahe the, Zoren ke 10 hazar narbhakshi, jise biologically kayi sare sodh ke baad uss ke power ko bilkul Nischal ke power se match kar diya gaya tha aur sab ke sab khanjar'baaj. Un 10 hazar biologically modified narbhakshiyon ke sath 5000 biologically modified Adrishi janwar shirkat kar chuke the Tibbath ke barfile ilake me...


Idhar shadi ki ghatnao me sangeet ki raat sare launde tul hokar... Waise tul hone wale launden kuchh iss prakar the... Nischal, sabka sardar jo pine baitha fir kisi ko uthne nahi diya... Uske sath bade bhaiya, Ansh, HuYu, Abhishek (Jjvish ke bhaiya), Asis (Nandni ke bhaiya) aur Ravi bhaiya (Jivisha ke sabse bade bhaiya, Nandita ke pati aur Chirag ke papa) ko bhi pakad liya.. in sab ke bich char chand lagane aur kuchh der sath nibhaya tha, Papa Himanshu (Jivisha ke pita), Shudhanshu (Kasak ke piita) aur unka bharpur sath dete thumka lagaya Nandni ke papa Awedhesh ne...


Halaanki teeno papa ki shirkat jaise hi hone wali thi, waiter ne emergency sandesh de diya tha aur sabhi apne-apne peg ke galss aur daru ko bottol ko jaldi se chhipaya. Lekin baap to baap hota hai... Khushi kahe ya gum... Baith'kar un dono bhai Shudhanshu aur Himanshu ne 4 peg lagaya… aur Nandni ke papa achhe dost ki tarah unka sath nibhaye. Wo sabko kahte bhi rahe ki koi nahi aaj sab enjoy karo, lekin kisi me himmat na hui unke samne peg bana le, pine ki to dur ki baat thi...


Ladies Sangeet ke mukable gents sangeet kafi rochak tha… bina practice ke jab thumke lagte aur wo paun se jamin ko jamin me ghusane ki de laat maar kosis… fir kya kahne... Jo hi dil khol'kar jhume... Teeno papa nikal gaye, lekin baki sabhi wahin subah ke 4 baje tak pi'kar niche hi ludhke the…


Subah ke 11 baj rahe honge. Pahle to bade bhaiya hi uthe... Sir pakde, aadhe jaage, aadhe soye aur bhadi sar ke sath jaise hi aage ke mahol par najar gaya, harbadi me poori aankh khul gayi... Unke baju me Ravi bhaiya the, bade bhaiya usko thuski de rahe... Ab chhote se thuski se ghanta koi uthne wala tha...


Nandita bhabhi juda pin badhati... "Bade bhaiya isse try karo"… bade bhaiya ne naa me sar hilaya aur idhar Jyoti bhabhi chudiyan upar kar, pallu kamar me khosne ja hi rahi thi... Bade bhaiya ne Jyoti bhabhi ko hathon ke ishare se rukne kaha, aur ghap se pin Ravi bhaiya ke back par...


Tej chillahat ke sath wo jage aur samne ka najara dekh'kar awaj muh me... Aise pin pass hote rahe aur sabki chinkh jagte hi muh me...


Nandni:- Kasak, Jisa.. ye purv karmon ki saja aur dosh nivaran kuchh yaad hai kya..


Jivisha:- Betiyon ne to naak nahi katvayi, lekin ab kya kah sakte hain... Kal Kasak ko hi to meri pyari maa ne kaha tha, ladkon wale sauk palna… tou jab inke Shauk me hi pina sumar hai, fir hum kya kar sakte hain…


Kasak:- Chal vahini ab thode na koi kisi ko kaam kahega karne… Sirf purv karmon ke dosh Purohit ji humare hi kundli me nikal sakte hain… Waise yahan ek manas kam lag raha hai...


Jivisha:- Nischal kafi sarif nikla iss mamle me...


Sabhi mardon ki gang aschrya se gaur karte... "Ek doshi gayab hai"… khud fanse to fanse, lekin ek kaahe bache... Sab video evidence aur photo evidence dikhane lage aur bechare dikhane ke chakkar me Nischal to nahi fansa, kintu teeno sarif papa phans gaye. Kyonki dance to kewal ussi waqt hua tha,jis waqt teeno pahunche the, aur uss waqt pi sirf teen log hi rahe the... Papa Himanshu, Shudhanshu… aur Awdhesh...


Khair sabhi 6 ladkiyan to chali aayi, lekin ladies kahar udhar non stop baras raha tha. Kisi ek ko na baksha gaya, siway HuYu ke. Uspar kisi ka dhyan hi na gaya. Bechare bade bhaiya… ACP sahab kahin kona dhundhte rahe dubakne ke liye... Manate rahe jamin me hi 6-7 fit ka gaddha ho jaye aur wo kisi tarah apni izzat bacha le...lekin Jyoti bhabhi ne bechare ke chir haran me koi kami nahi chhodi...


Aur yahi haal aag lagi 2 mataon me bhi thi, jisne apni beti ke liye to bhadi mehfil me, sajis ke tahat kitne jatil kaam bata di, yadi sab karne lag jati tou shayad khud ke hi shadi me hosh na rahta ki hua kya. Kaun si rashm kab bit gayi. Jin betiyon ke chup hone se ghar katne ko daure un betiyon ne gusse me yah tak kah diya ki ab mayke ka muh na dekhengi... Lekin abhi un mataon ke samne kya tha…


Sare vakye ko jahan me ek baar samet'kar fir tou Durga devi aur Priya rajpoot ks kahar barsa. Samne teeno papa ke sath-sath sabhi bacchon ke haalat me bhi, bade bhaiya jaisa tourcher hota raha. Shayad jyada hi hua hoga kyonki 11-12 saal ke bacche ke pita, bole to Ravi bhaiya ko bhi thappad parte-parte rah gaya...


Trideviyan bomb ke pin ko khinch'kar bahar chali aayi aur ander bomb non-stop foot'te rahe. Waise idhar sabhi ladkiyan jab bahar nikli, sabne Jivisha ko gher liya aur Nischal ke gayab hone ke pichhe ki kahani puchhne lagi... Tabhi pichhe se Serin kahne lagi... "Nischal ke wahan se gayab hone ke pichhe bhabhi to nahi, lekin mujhe kisi Shatir dost ka hath lag raha jo chupke se dosti nibha aayi.... Wahan pati aur bhai bhi ludhka para tha, lekin usse chhod dee"...


Jaise hi Serin ne bhandaohod kiya sabhi log Nandni ko gherti aur ghurti... "Wahhh wahhh, pati aur bhai se badh'kar dosti... Koi eet lao re pith thoko"…


Nandni apna kandha jhakti, bhir se bahar aa'kar…. "Paglon koi badh'kar ya ghat'kar jaisa mamla nahi tha, balki mujhe subah matth jana tha isliye Nischal ko jagaana para tha"…


Jivisha:- Matth... Lekin kyon?


Nandni:- Vishesh kul ki ladki ki shadi hai aur uske mul gaanv ko nimantran nahi gaya tha, isliye main pahle matth gayi aur baad me kahan wo samjh sakti ho... Isliye usse jagaana para tha...


Jivisha chhota sa afsos bhada chehra banati.… "Tu na ho to humara kya hoga... Tu to life line hai Nandu"…


Nandni:- Hat pagal, unhone jo muskura'kar bataya wo bhi bata dun…


Jivisha:- Khud se jana aur dur sanchar karna, dono me anter hota hai Nandu... Ab bus koi bahas nahi...


Chhoti badi nadaniyan, dher sari sharaten aur kafi lambi chalti hansi-khushi ka daur... Ek aisa insan nahi tha, jisko andekha kiya gaya ho... Khas'kar Serin aur HuYu ko... Kyonki unke rishte kisi earth ke parivar se nahi the lekin maan, sam'maan me koi kami nahi thi…


Bade se lawn me hi sabhi ke shadi ka aayojan hua tha… baratiyon ke nachte huye dwar tak aane ke liye 2 kilometer pichhe vayvastha ki gayi thi... Sabhi nachte, gaate, jhumte darwaje tak pahunche… gharwale, baraati sab jaise ek hi to the...


Music ke sath nachte huye jaise hi baarat jaymala stage ke karib pahunchi... Ek saath 3 jhannatedar seetiyan baji... Seetiyon ki awaj itni tej ki, baj rahe loudspeaker ki awaj fail ho gayi. Trideviyon ki kaan faad seety...


Jaise hi seety baji gaane ka mood ek dum se badla.… "Tauba Tera Jalwa, tauba Tera pyar, tera emotional atyachar"… aur uski wo taiynnn taiyann wali tune.… Aur 6 couple bilkul rang bikherte waise hi naach rahe the... Dulha thode sankochi aur dulhane kafi dilfek...


Sandhya ke sadhe 4 baje ka muhrrat tha… karib 3.30 baje jaymala shuru tha. Sabhi log vidhivat lage huye the. Har koi apni dulhan ko dekh, dil me thande aahen bhare huye.. manodasha aisi ki abhi bahon me samet'kar chum le... Lekin aisa kar nahi sakte the... Unki dvidha kisi dulhan se chhipi bhi nahi thi aur sabhi ander hi ander mand-mand muskura rahi thi...


Haan par ek couple ke upar ye bandish lagu nahi thi. Bhid ke bich apni patni ko puri dulhan ki tarah taiyar dekh, bhala Ansh kyon na deewana ho... Ansh aur Nandni dono sath khade the, sab log jaymala stage ko ghur rahe the aur Ansh baar-baar Nandni ko... Jab bardast nahi hua, kamar me hath dal'kar khud se chipkate huye uske gaal par kiss kar diya...


Nandni hairani bhadi najron se jaise hi mudi, Ansh 4-5 second ka lip lock kar'ke ek wet kiss karte alag hua... Nandni hakki-bakki apni badi si aankhen kiye... Usse ab bhi yakin nahi ho raha tha Doc itne logon ke bich romance bhi kar sakta hai... Ander se to mano uski dharkan ajib tarah se badhi hui thi…


Nandni ko khud bhi raha nahi gaya... Wo hath pakad'kar uss mahol se Ansh ko khinch'kar kinare lati... "Ansh ye kya tha"… Ansh muskura'kar Nandni ko apne bahon me bhinch'kar uske gardan par kiss karte… "Tum pagal bana rahi ho Nandu"…


"Chhodo bhi Ansh baby, raat me pura pyar jata lena na... Jisa aur Nischal mujhe dhundh rahe honge"…


"Sabki haalat meri jaisi hogi... Unhe apne wali ko dekhne do, main apni wali ko dekhta hun"…. Nandni khil khila'kar hansne lagi... Dono ko garm chalti shwans aur chehre bilkul karib aate gaya... Honth pyar barsane ko betab jaise machal rahe honge.…


Dono ke hont sparsh huye hi the…. "Jarra bhi"…. Pichhe se itne awaj par hi Nandni aur Ansh jhatke ke sath alag huye aur idhar Nischal apni baat puri karte.… "Jarra bhi sharm to nahi aayi hogi"…


Nandni:- Kutta teri shadi ho rahi hai, ja'kar apni biwi ke sath romance karna... Kamina khun pi jaungi... Mujhe pata hai tu jaan bujh'kar aaya hoga...


Nandni gusse me fufkarti hui Nichal ko jhatke dene dauri... Wo gayab… Nandni thunakti hui... "Isska main khun kar dungi"…


Ansh:- Khun karne se achha hai ki dono ki suhaagraat me vighn (paresani) daal do...


Nandni:- Dono besharm hai, aur mujhe live show dekhne ka koi shauk nahi...


Ansh:- Fir porn kaise dekh leti ho..


Nandni:- Irritate na karo Ansh, warna uska jhatka tumhe de dungi...


"Sharm to na aayi hogi... Apne doston ke romance dekhne ki ikchha rakhne wali dusht"…. Nichal aaya, apni baat kaha aur gayab…


Nandni pure gusse me... "Sale ne pure romantic mood ki maa bahan kar diya... Chalo abhi, aaram se raat me mood banayenge. Kamina kahin ka"…


Ansh, Nandni ki haalat dekh'kar jor, jor se hansne laga... Nandni bhi thunkte thunakte hansne lagi... Aur dono kinare se chipk'kar, Ansh Nandni ke kandhe par hath dal diya aur Nandni, Ansh ke kamar par... tabhi fir se Nischal... "Romance hi dono karte rahna.. meri shadi nahi dekhni na"… "Arre ruk Nischal"….


Nischal ke paun thehre... Nandni hansti hui ek ore se apni baanh faila di...udhar dusre ore se Ansh… Nischal bich se dono ke gale lagkar... "Ek lamba vacation le lo Doc, tum dono ke bina jindgi adhuri si thi"..


Nandni, Nischal ko khud se alag karti, usse najar bhar dekh'kar muskurati hui... "Jaa ab, warna teri biwi mera jina haram kar degi"…


Nischal, Jivisha ke bare me jaise hi kuchh bolna chaha... Nandni hath dikhati… "Haan janti hun, ussi ne bheja hai, mujhe bulane"…


Nischal:- O' over express, uss ne 15 minute ka break diya hai... Bus tujhese milne ka mann kar raha tha aur shayad Jivisha ne bhaanp liya...


Nandni hairani se Nischal ko dekhti, uske mathe par aaye baal ko upar karti, "Pagal, abhi pura waqt Jivisha ko".…


Nandni, apni baat puri karti, uss se pahle hi Nischal, Nandni ke gale laga'kar bus rone laga… rone ke pichhe ka karan to Nandni ko bhi pata nahi tha, lekin aanshu uske bhi chhalak aaye... Dono gale lag'kar kuchh der bus rote hi rahe….


"Aree yaar, tu khud bhi ro raha, aur mujhe bhi rula raha, chup ho ja"…


Nischal apne aanshu saaf karte huye alag hua... "Jaa raha hun, raat me milte hain, sona mat aur doc aaj raat ke liye sorry"..


Nandni:- Gadhe aaj nahi, aaj to teri first night hai… fir kabhi..


Nischal:- Ye meri nahi Jivisha ki ikchha hai... Kah rahi thi aisa lagta hai varshon bite Nandu ke sath baith'kar baten kiye...


Ansh, apne dono hath jodte... "Abhi jao, raat me dekhte hain... Warna Jivisha se bhi bardast thode na ho raha hoga... Lekin wo yahan aa nahi sakti bechari"…


Nischal "thankyou Doc" kahte huye nikla aur Nandni Ansh ko khud me bhinchti hui.… "Iss jivan ke liye koti koti dhanywaad bhagwan"…

Behtreen update mitr

 

[nain11ster]

Satya vachan

Uska staya vachan ka reply diya hum aap bhi padh lena

 

[nain11ster]

Behtreen update mitr

Thankooo so muchhh Nevil bhai

 

[nain11ster]

Apasyu ko Bharat sarkar ne desh nikala ki saja di thi but apasyu ne bharat sarkar ke aadesh ki uhelana karke Bharat me ghum rha hai but ye Nishchal saja ka purn roop se palan karega kyoki nishchal ******hai ( fill in the blank with some memorable galis)

Ab lagta hai mujhe nanhe Samrat aur chacha chaudhri hi likhna hoga... Shabaash...

 

[nain11ster]

Kya ab ye bhi dekhna baki rah gaya tha.
Story me Hero ki achhi tarah se aisi-taisi ki ja rahi hai.
Pata nahi Writer Saab Hero ke sath kya hi karna chah rahe hain.

Mood off ho gaya aaj ke update me to

Sorry for your mood off... Aapke writer sahab ko khud pata nahi ki wo kya karna chahte hain... Jab pata chalega tab bata denge...

 

[nain11ster]

Kya ab ye bhi dekhna baki rah gaya tha.
Story me Hero ki achhi tarah se aisi-taisi ki ja rahi hai.
Pata nahi Writer Saab Hero ke sath kya hi karna chah rahe hain.

Mood off ho gaya aaj ke update me to

Nain sir ke threads me main gali ka use to nahi hi karna chahunga.
But sach me aaj mood off ho gaya update padke.

10 update pahale ka read kar lo gali apne aap aa jayegi

Aaj ka update read karne ke baad xforum se Sanyas Lene ka man kar raha hai.

Mujhe bhi lagata hai ki Mai bhi sanyas le hi lu aur ab daroga ki taiyari shuru kar du..aur shayad mujhe 1-2 months ke baad chhodana par bhi jaye ..

Aaj mera bhi utna hi mood off ho gaya hai... Jitna aap logon ka..... Ya fir uss se kahin jyada... And I think this shit spread just because of charecter focus... Kyonki you guys are sick about charecter name..


No worry main Apasyu ki jahag viyom, om aadarsh kuch bhi kar dunga... But story line same rahegi... Kahani padhiye aur kahani ki bhavna ko padhiye koi naam ka hona bardast naho ho raha hai them stop reading ... Hum dono ka mood off hone se bach jayega...

Main apne thread par aise hypothetical charecter name ke upar nusence pasand nahi karta....