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Fantasy Kaisa Ye Ishq Hai ~ Ajab Sa Risk Hai ~ Reload (Completed)

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Page 766 Se 775 tak har panne par update hai.

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Issi ke sath Ishq Risk reloaded ka ye season poora hua. Next fantasy journey announce ho jayegi. Ummid hai pahle

"Arymani:- The Pure Alfa Between Two World's."

Yahi aaye... Jo bhi hoga purv suchna mil jayegi... Fihlaal end enjoy karenge... Aur kahani ka poora safar kaisa rahega wo ek baar jaroor sajha karen...



Filhaal Abhi vyast hun ek pure romantic journey par....


Aap sab ka :welcome1: hai udhar. Kahani par pahunchne ke liye story title par ulgi karne ka...


 
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Aaj subah ki shurwaat jitni khinchi hui thi, raat sabke liye utna hi sukhad tha... Aisa lag raha tha jaise ye shadi ka mahol, bite khinchav bhade din ke stress ko release karne ke liye hi aayojit kiya gaya tha...

Lekin ye stress kitna jane wala tha wo to aane wala waqt hi batata, kyonki shikari apni puri taiyariyon ke sath nikal chuke the... Aur jab suhagraat ke waqt sab apni masti me vayst hote, tab Surpmarich apne uss kadadi shikasat ka badla lete... Haan lekin unki yojna me takniki roop se chhota sa badlav kar diya gaya tha…


Purv me Surpmarich ka ansh Yuvi ko mili karadi shikast ke baad jab se inki payback ki puri yojna bani thi, bahut kosis kiye Jivisha, Nischal aur unse jude har kisi par najar rakhne ki, lekin Surpmarich ko pahle to 3 mahine tak kuchh pata hi nahi chala ki ye sab aakhir Delhi me kaun se bill me ghus gaye... aur inka ilaj kahan chal raha hai...


Jab Pura parivar Pune pahuncha aur Surpmarich ko yah pata chala ki Jivisha, Nischal aur Serin ki yadast wapas laut aayi hai. Surpmarich ke sabhi ansh ko aisa jhatka laga, mano unki raaton ki nind haram ho gayi ho… Chah kar bhi kuchh pata nahi kar pa rahe the… unhe aisa lagne laga ki unke virodhi ke bare me sab kuchh jaan'ne ke baad bhi, ab tak pura anjaan dikh rahe hain...


Pahle Pune se hi Chirag aur Ansh ko uthaya jana tha, lekin inki yadast wapas aate hi Surpmarich ke kheme me matam sa pasar gaya. Nangi aurten, khula bistar aur manorajan ke sabhi intazamat ab kaatne ko daur rahe the. Baukhlahat unke chehre se saaf pata chal rahi thi aur in sab mamlon ke hone ke pichhe wo Saatvik Aashram ko hi maan raha tha... Lekin jaise sab kuchh samne ho'kar bhi kuchh najar nahi aa raha ho.


Sattvik Aasharam ka gadh kahe jane wale kanchanjangha ke gaanv ko Surpmarich ne tatola. Usse aabhash ho gaya ki kanchanjangha ki gode me ek baar fir Saatvik Aashram fal-ful raha hai, lekin ek vishes dayre ko na to wo aur na hi uska kalpnik sharir paar kar pa raha tha...


Fir Surpmarich ko samjh me aaya ki jo jagah barbaad hui thi (Kanchanjangha ka gaanv), usse aabad karne ki kosis kahin bahar se hui hogi... Pahle wo Nainital guru Nishi ke gurukul me pahuncha jahan usse pata chala ki jagah salon pahle ujad chuki hai aur sarkar wapas se iss jagah ko bana rahi. wahan se nirasha haath lagne ke baad wah pahuncha Tibbath kshetr ke Kailash marg matth ke ore...


Matth to tha lekin yahan ka dayra bhi itna majboot bandha gaya tha ki Surpmarich ka na to sharir uss dayre ko paar kar paya aur na hi uski koi siddhi. Saatvik Aashram ka Kanyakumari matth, Pasachimi Himalaya ka Gurukul, har jagah ek jaisi samsya aa rahi thi. Aisa lag raha tha jaise sab ko pata hai ki kaun Saatvik aasram aane wala hai, aur usse rokne ki pukhta taiyari ye Saatvik aasharm wale kar chuke ho...


Surpmarich ke virodhi iss baar uss se ek kadam aage nikle... Anth me haar'kar Surpmarich ke sabhi ansh ek hafte ke liye dhyan me doob gaye. Ladai se lekar har chhote se chhote pahlu par najar diya... Lekin anterman me bhi kahin koi jawab nahi tha. Jab kuchh bhi natija hasil nahi hua tab wo log wapas se Jivisha ke pure pariwar par najar banaye, jo ki uss waqt Tibbath ke resort me shadi ke liye pahunche the…


Shadi se teen din pahle pata chala tha ki ye log agli subah kisi se mil rahe hai... Lekin kis se mil rahe uss naam par aate hi jaise voice clearity ki maa bahan ek ho jati ho... Kahin ja rahe the milne, lekin kahan iss baat par bhi jaise clearity kahin gayab si dikhi..


Surpmarich ko samjhte der na lagi ki usse fasane ke liye ek alag tarah kaa jaal buna hai, jisme wo apne dushmano ke pichhe jane par majboor ho… Haan lekin iss baar apne dushman ke pichhe jane ke siway aur koi chara bhi nahi tha, kyonki samne se jo khel chal raha tha usme Surpmarich khud ko pura asahay samjh raha tha…


Shadi ke 3 raat pahle hui baat se Surpmarich samajh chuka tha ki ho na ho Saatvik Aashram ke guru aur Jivisha ke sabhi logon ke bich kisi tarah ki aham baithak hogi... Yuvi aur Arf me se to wahan ka dayra koi paar nahi kar sakta tha isliye aanan-fanan me usne apne tej-tarrar super human gulamon ki ek team bheji... Jo super-duper tarike se disappear ho gaye...


Jitni jaldi aaye the utni hi jaldi gayab bhi ho gaye. Surpmarich ko aisa laga mano ye log pahle se hi taiyar baithe ho... Jab koi chara nahi mila, tab aakhir me sab ne mil'kar ek faisla liya.... Jivisha aur Nischal se jude jo log mile usse utha lo. Pahle unke dimag ko khangalo, fir usse maar dalo... Jiski baukhlahat me Nischal aur Jivisha unse ladne aayenge...


Ladne aane wale virodhiyon ke liye Surpmarich ne mission ka maksad kisi ko maarna nahi rakha, balki Nischal aur Jivisha ke sath jo koi bhi pichhe baith'kar khel raha hai... Un sab ke dimag ko pura khangal'kar jaankari nikalna.


Sath hi sath kayi tarah ke sambhavna par vichar karne ke baad, yahi nishkarsh nikla ki Surpmarich ke 2 ansh sanyukt roop se kisi bhi ek dimag ke taktakal yadon ko bhi khangal le tou kaam ho jayega, maksad bus yah jan'na tha ki kahani me ye Saatvik aasharm aaya kahan se.


Apne lakshya me bilkul saaf aur focus planning ke sath iss baar sath aa rahe the, Zoren ke 10 hazar narbhakshi, jise biologically kayi sare sodh ke baad uss ke power ko bilkul Nischal ke power se match kar diya gaya tha aur sab ke sab khanjar'baaj. Un 10 hazar biologically modified narbhakshiyon ke sath 5000 biologically modified Adrishi janwar shirkat kar chuke the Tibbath ke barfile ilake me...


Idhar shadi ki ghatnao me sangeet ki raat sare launde tul hokar... Waise tul hone wale launden kuchh iss prakar the... Nischal, sabka sardar jo pine baitha fir kisi ko uthne nahi diya... Uske sath bade bhaiya, Ansh, HuYu, Abhishek (Jjvish ke bhaiya), Asis (Nandni ke bhaiya) aur Ravi bhaiya (Jivisha ke sabse bade bhaiya, Nandita ke pati aur Chirag ke papa) ko bhi pakad liya.. in sab ke bich char chand lagane aur kuchh der sath nibhaya tha, Papa Himanshu (Jivisha ke pita), Shudhanshu (Kasak ke piita) aur unka bharpur sath dete thumka lagaya Nandni ke papa Awedhesh ne...


Halaanki teeno papa ki shirkat jaise hi hone wali thi, waiter ne emergency sandesh de diya tha aur sabhi apne-apne peg ke galss aur daru ko bottol ko jaldi se chhipaya. Lekin baap to baap hota hai... Khushi kahe ya gum... Baith'kar un dono bhai Shudhanshu aur Himanshu ne 4 peg lagaya… aur Nandni ke papa achhe dost ki tarah unka sath nibhaye. Wo sabko kahte bhi rahe ki koi nahi aaj sab enjoy karo, lekin kisi me himmat na hui unke samne peg bana le, pine ki to dur ki baat thi...


Ladies Sangeet ke mukable gents sangeet kafi rochak tha… bina practice ke jab thumke lagte aur wo paun se jamin ko jamin me ghusane ki de laat maar kosis… fir kya kahne... Jo hi dil khol'kar jhume... Teeno papa nikal gaye, lekin baki sabhi wahin subah ke 4 baje tak pi'kar niche hi ludhke the…


Subah ke 11 baj rahe honge. Pahle to bade bhaiya hi uthe... Sir pakde, aadhe jaage, aadhe soye aur bhadi sar ke sath jaise hi aage ke mahol par najar gaya, harbadi me poori aankh khul gayi... Unke baju me Ravi bhaiya the, bade bhaiya usko thuski de rahe... Ab chhote se thuski se ghanta koi uthne wala tha...


Nandita bhabhi juda pin badhati... "Bade bhaiya isse try karo"… bade bhaiya ne naa me sar hilaya aur idhar Jyoti bhabhi chudiyan upar kar, pallu kamar me khosne ja hi rahi thi... Bade bhaiya ne Jyoti bhabhi ko hathon ke ishare se rukne kaha, aur ghap se pin Ravi bhaiya ke back par...


Tej chillahat ke sath wo jage aur samne ka najara dekh'kar awaj muh me... Aise pin pass hote rahe aur sabki chinkh jagte hi muh me...


Nandni:- Kasak, Jisa.. ye purv karmon ki saja aur dosh nivaran kuchh yaad hai kya..


Jivisha:- Betiyon ne to naak nahi katvayi, lekin ab kya kah sakte hain... Kal Kasak ko hi to meri pyari maa ne kaha tha, ladkon wale sauk palna… tou jab inke Shauk me hi pina sumar hai, fir hum kya kar sakte hain…


Kasak:- Chal vahini ab thode na koi kisi ko kaam kahega karne… Sirf purv karmon ke dosh Purohit ji humare hi kundli me nikal sakte hain… Waise yahan ek manas kam lag raha hai...


Jivisha:- Nischal kafi sarif nikla iss mamle me...


Sabhi mardon ki gang aschrya se gaur karte... "Ek doshi gayab hai"… khud fanse to fanse, lekin ek kaahe bache... Sab video evidence aur photo evidence dikhane lage aur bechare dikhane ke chakkar me Nischal to nahi fansa, kintu teeno sarif papa phans gaye. Kyonki dance to kewal ussi waqt hua tha,jis waqt teeno pahunche the, aur uss waqt pi sirf teen log hi rahe the... Papa Himanshu, Shudhanshu… aur Awdhesh...


Khair sabhi 6 ladkiyan to chali aayi, lekin ladies kahar udhar non stop baras raha tha. Kisi ek ko na baksha gaya, siway HuYu ke. Uspar kisi ka dhyan hi na gaya. Bechare bade bhaiya… ACP sahab kahin kona dhundhte rahe dubakne ke liye... Manate rahe jamin me hi 6-7 fit ka gaddha ho jaye aur wo kisi tarah apni izzat bacha le...lekin Jyoti bhabhi ne bechare ke chir haran me koi kami nahi chhodi...


Aur yahi haal aag lagi 2 mataon me bhi thi, jisne apni beti ke liye to bhadi mehfil me, sajis ke tahat kitne jatil kaam bata di, yadi sab karne lag jati tou shayad khud ke hi shadi me hosh na rahta ki hua kya. Kaun si rashm kab bit gayi. Jin betiyon ke chup hone se ghar katne ko daure un betiyon ne gusse me yah tak kah diya ki ab mayke ka muh na dekhengi... Lekin abhi un mataon ke samne kya tha…


Sare vakye ko jahan me ek baar samet'kar fir tou Durga devi aur Priya rajpoot ks kahar barsa. Samne teeno papa ke sath-sath sabhi bacchon ke haalat me bhi, bade bhaiya jaisa tourcher hota raha. Shayad jyada hi hua hoga kyonki 11-12 saal ke bacche ke pita, bole to Ravi bhaiya ko bhi thappad parte-parte rah gaya...


Trideviyan bomb ke pin ko khinch'kar bahar chali aayi aur ander bomb non-stop foot'te rahe. Waise idhar sabhi ladkiyan jab bahar nikli, sabne Jivisha ko gher liya aur Nischal ke gayab hone ke pichhe ki kahani puchhne lagi... Tabhi pichhe se Serin kahne lagi... "Nischal ke wahan se gayab hone ke pichhe bhabhi to nahi, lekin mujhe kisi Shatir dost ka hath lag raha jo chupke se dosti nibha aayi.... Wahan pati aur bhai bhi ludhka para tha, lekin usse chhod dee"...


Jaise hi Serin ne bhandaohod kiya sabhi log Nandni ko gherti aur ghurti... "Wahhh wahhh, pati aur bhai se badh'kar dosti... Koi eet lao re pith thoko"…


Nandni apna kandha jhakti, bhir se bahar aa'kar…. "Paglon koi badh'kar ya ghat'kar jaisa mamla nahi tha, balki mujhe subah matth jana tha isliye Nischal ko jagaana para tha"…


Jivisha:- Matth... Lekin kyon?


Nandni:- Vishesh kul ki ladki ki shadi hai aur uske mul gaanv ko nimantran nahi gaya tha, isliye main pahle matth gayi aur baad me kahan wo samjh sakti ho... Isliye usse jagaana para tha...


Jivisha chhota sa afsos bhada chehra banati.… "Tu na ho to humara kya hoga... Tu to life line hai Nandu"…


Nandni:- Hat pagal, unhone jo muskura'kar bataya wo bhi bata dun…


Jivisha:- Khud se jana aur dur sanchar karna, dono me anter hota hai Nandu... Ab bus koi bahas nahi...


Chhoti badi nadaniyan, dher sari sharaten aur kafi lambi chalti hansi-khushi ka daur... Ek aisa insan nahi tha, jisko andekha kiya gaya ho... Khas'kar Serin aur HuYu ko... Kyonki unke rishte kisi earth ke parivar se nahi the lekin maan, sam'maan me koi kami nahi thi…


Bade se lawn me hi sabhi ke shadi ka aayojan hua tha… baratiyon ke nachte huye dwar tak aane ke liye 2 kilometer pichhe vayvastha ki gayi thi... Sabhi nachte, gaate, jhumte darwaje tak pahunche… gharwale, baraati sab jaise ek hi to the...


Music ke sath nachte huye jaise hi baarat jaymala stage ke karib pahunchi... Ek saath 3 jhannatedar seetiyan baji... Seetiyon ki awaj itni tej ki, baj rahe loudspeaker ki awaj fail ho gayi. Trideviyon ki kaan faad seety...


Jaise hi seety baji gaane ka mood ek dum se badla.… "Tauba Tera Jalwa, tauba Tera pyar, tera emotional atyachar"… aur uski wo taiynnn taiyann wali tune.… Aur 6 couple bilkul rang bikherte waise hi naach rahe the... Dulha thode sankochi aur dulhane kafi dilfek...


Sandhya ke sadhe 4 baje ka muhrrat tha… karib 3.30 baje jaymala shuru tha. Sabhi log vidhivat lage huye the. Har koi apni dulhan ko dekh, dil me thande aahen bhare huye.. manodasha aisi ki abhi bahon me samet'kar chum le... Lekin aisa kar nahi sakte the... Unki dvidha kisi dulhan se chhipi bhi nahi thi aur sabhi ander hi ander mand-mand muskura rahi thi...


Haan par ek couple ke upar ye bandish lagu nahi thi. Bhid ke bich apni patni ko puri dulhan ki tarah taiyar dekh, bhala Ansh kyon na deewana ho... Ansh aur Nandni dono sath khade the, sab log jaymala stage ko ghur rahe the aur Ansh baar-baar Nandni ko... Jab bardast nahi hua, kamar me hath dal'kar khud se chipkate huye uske gaal par kiss kar diya...


Nandni hairani bhadi najron se jaise hi mudi, Ansh 4-5 second ka lip lock kar'ke ek wet kiss karte alag hua... Nandni hakki-bakki apni badi si aankhen kiye... Usse ab bhi yakin nahi ho raha tha Doc itne logon ke bich romance bhi kar sakta hai... Ander se to mano uski dharkan ajib tarah se badhi hui thi…


Nandni ko khud bhi raha nahi gaya... Wo hath pakad'kar uss mahol se Ansh ko khinch'kar kinare lati... "Ansh ye kya tha"… Ansh muskura'kar Nandni ko apne bahon me bhinch'kar uske gardan par kiss karte… "Tum pagal bana rahi ho Nandu"…


"Chhodo bhi Ansh baby, raat me pura pyar jata lena na... Jisa aur Nischal mujhe dhundh rahe honge"…


"Sabki haalat meri jaisi hogi... Unhe apne wali ko dekhne do, main apni wali ko dekhta hun"…. Nandni khil khila'kar hansne lagi... Dono ko garm chalti shwans aur chehre bilkul karib aate gaya... Honth pyar barsane ko betab jaise machal rahe honge.…


Dono ke hont sparsh huye hi the…. "Jarra bhi"…. Pichhe se itne awaj par hi Nandni aur Ansh jhatke ke sath alag huye aur idhar Nischal apni baat puri karte.… "Jarra bhi sharm to nahi aayi hogi"…


Nandni:- Kutta teri shadi ho rahi hai, ja'kar apni biwi ke sath romance karna... Kamina khun pi jaungi... Mujhe pata hai tu jaan bujh'kar aaya hoga...


Nandni gusse me fufkarti hui Nichal ko jhatke dene dauri... Wo gayab… Nandni thunakti hui... "Isska main khun kar dungi"…


Ansh:- Khun karne se achha hai ki dono ki suhaagraat me vighn (paresani) daal do...


Nandni:- Dono besharm hai, aur mujhe live show dekhne ka koi shauk nahi...


Ansh:- Fir porn kaise dekh leti ho..


Nandni:- Irritate na karo Ansh, warna uska jhatka tumhe de dungi...


"Sharm to na aayi hogi... Apne doston ke romance dekhne ki ikchha rakhne wali dusht"…. Nichal aaya, apni baat kaha aur gayab…


Nandni pure gusse me... "Sale ne pure romantic mood ki maa bahan kar diya... Chalo abhi, aaram se raat me mood banayenge. Kamina kahin ka"…


Ansh, Nandni ki haalat dekh'kar jor, jor se hansne laga... Nandni bhi thunkte thunakte hansne lagi... Aur dono kinare se chipk'kar, Ansh Nandni ke kandhe par hath dal diya aur Nandni, Ansh ke kamar par... tabhi fir se Nischal... "Romance hi dono karte rahna.. meri shadi nahi dekhni na"… "Arre ruk Nischal"….


Nischal ke paun thehre... Nandni hansti hui ek ore se apni baanh faila di...udhar dusre ore se Ansh… Nischal bich se dono ke gale lagkar... "Ek lamba vacation le lo Doc, tum dono ke bina jindgi adhuri si thi"..


Nandni, Nischal ko khud se alag karti, usse najar bhar dekh'kar muskurati hui... "Jaa ab, warna teri biwi mera jina haram kar degi"…


Nischal, Jivisha ke bare me jaise hi kuchh bolna chaha... Nandni hath dikhati… "Haan janti hun, ussi ne bheja hai, mujhe bulane"…


Nischal:- O' over express, uss ne 15 minute ka break diya hai... Bus tujhese milne ka mann kar raha tha aur shayad Jivisha ne bhaanp liya...


Nandni hairani se Nischal ko dekhti, uske mathe par aaye baal ko upar karti, "Pagal, abhi pura waqt Jivisha ko".…


Nandni, apni baat puri karti, uss se pahle hi Nischal, Nandni ke gale laga'kar bus rone laga… rone ke pichhe ka karan to Nandni ko bhi pata nahi tha, lekin aanshu uske bhi chhalak aaye... Dono gale lag'kar kuchh der bus rote hi rahe….


"Aree yaar, tu khud bhi ro raha, aur mujhe bhi rula raha, chup ho ja"…


Nischal apne aanshu saaf karte huye alag hua... "Jaa raha hun, raat me milte hain, sona mat aur doc aaj raat ke liye sorry"..


Nandni:- Gadhe aaj nahi, aaj to teri first night hai… fir kabhi..


Nischal:- Ye meri nahi Jivisha ki ikchha hai... Kah rahi thi aisa lagta hai varshon bite Nandu ke sath baith'kar baten kiye...


Ansh, apne dono hath jodte... "Abhi jao, raat me dekhte hain... Warna Jivisha se bhi bardast thode na ho raha hoga... Lekin wo yahan aa nahi sakti bechari"…


Nischal "thankyou Doc" kahte huye nikla aur Nandni Ansh ko khud me bhinchti hui.… "Iss jivan ke liye koti koti dhanywaad bhagwan"…

 

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Bro regular de raha tha but readers bolte hai ki copy past kar raha hai jabki mene pahle hi bol raka hai ki story thodi bhote copy ki gai

Isliye Update likne ka mane nahi kar raha but aap bol rahe ho to ab se Update dena start kar raha hu
Bhai aap ki baat sahi or aap ne jis story ke starting ka thoda bhag hi same he fir aap ki story alag he or aap ne baba bhai ki story antique love story ka Sirf starting hi copy kiya he me bhi padhata hu baba bhai ki story aap ki story alag he baad me or log to kuch na kuch kahenge hi aap unlogo ko ignore karo or jo aap sath de rahe he unke liye likho me aap ke sath hu
 

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Matlab ladies Sangeet ko choli faad Sangeet me badal dun...
ab jb nain bhai ne choli fadne ki starting kr di to apun bhi socha ki writer ji se sbki hi choli fadwa lete h😂😂
phir chahe ladies sangeet ho ya choli faad sangeet:approve:
Kahan .. kahan hai aap ...
apun to idhar hi isk risk pr update ka wait kr rha tha😎😎
Waise ye thress idiots bhang na dalti to aapko kya lagta hai ye romance kahan tak pahunchta.. :?:
jyada door nhi bs ye romantic safar upar se niche tk hi pahuchta:lotpot:
SANJU ( V. R. ) aur aap bada focus hain suhaag raat par....mann na banaeye pahle ji kahe deta hun... I am a pure veg writer :D
ab jb nain11ster 5-5 suhagraat eksath manayenge to kise intzaar nhi rahega:flowers2:
phir chahe writer koi bhi ho:flyer:
 
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ragish7357

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Kya hi kah dun.. jab gussa tha tab muh faad smiley dete the... Abhi aisa laga ki main gussa me hun :(
ab apun ko jb lga tbhi apun ne bol diya
baki muh faad smile ka ek reason ye bhi h ki nain bhai ka ngussa km ho jaye
Ye double meaning wala comment feel ho raha hai...
ab hmne to ek hi meaning m bola tha nain11ster sir
ju chahe to iske kitne bhi meaning smjh skte ho
 
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Aaj subah ki shurwaat jitni khinchi hui thi, raat sabke liye utna hi sukhad tha... Aisa lag raha tha jaise ye shadi ka mahol, bite khinchav bhade din ke stress ko release karne ke liye hi aayojit kiya gaya tha...

Lekin ye stress kitna jane wala tha wo to aane wala waqt hi batata, kyonki shikari apni puri taiyariyon ke sath nikal chuke the... Aur jab suhagraat ke waqt sab apni masti me vayst hote, tab Surpmarich apne uss kadadi shikasat ka badla lete... Haan lekin unki yojna me takniki roop se chhota sa badlav kar diya gaya tha…


Purv me Surpmarich ka ansh Yuvi ko mili karadi shikast ke baad jab se inki payback ki puri yojna bani thi, bahut kosis kiye Jivisha, Nischal aur unse jude har kisi par najar rakhne ki, lekin Surpmarich ko pahle to 3 mahine tak kuchh pata hi nahi chala ki ye sab aakhir Delhi me kaun se bill me ghus gaye... aur inka ilaj kahan chal raha hai...


Jab Pura parivar Pune pahuncha aur Surpmarich ko yah pata chala ki Jivisha, Nischal aur Serin ki yadast wapas laut aayi hai. Surpmarich ke sabhi ansh ko aisa jhatka laga, mano unki raaton ki nind haram ho gayi ho… Chah kar bhi kuchh pata nahi kar pa rahe the… unhe aisa lagne laga ki unke virodhi ke bare me sab kuchh jaan'ne ke baad bhi, ab tak pura anjaan dikh rahe hain...


Pahle Pune se hi Chirag aur Ansh ko uthaya jana tha, lekin inki yadast wapas aate hi Surpmarich ke kheme me matam sa pasar gaya. Nangi aurten, khula bistar aur manorajan ke sabhi intazamat ab kaatne ko daur rahe the. Baukhlahat unke chehre se saaf pata chal rahi thi aur in sab mamlon ke hone ke pichhe wo Saatvik Aashram ko hi maan raha tha... Lekin jaise sab kuchh samne ho'kar bhi kuchh najar nahi aa raha ho.


Sattvik Aasharam ka gadh kahe jane wale kanchanjangha ke gaanv ko Surpmarich ne tatola. Usse aabhash ho gaya ki kanchanjangha ki gode me ek baar fir Saatvik Aashram fal-ful raha hai, lekin ek vishes dayre ko na to wo aur na hi uska kalpnik sharir paar kar pa raha tha...


Fir Surpmarich ko samjh me aaya ki jo jagah barbaad hui thi (Kanchanjangha ka gaanv), usse aabad karne ki kosis kahin bahar se hui hogi... Pahle wo Nainital guru Nishi ke gurukul me pahuncha jahan usse pata chala ki jagah salon pahle ujad chuki hai aur sarkar wapas se iss jagah ko bana rahi. wahan se nirasha haath lagne ke baad wah pahuncha Tibbath kshetr ke Kailash marg matth ke ore...


Matth to tha lekin yahan ka dayra bhi itna majboot bandha gaya tha ki Surpmarich ka na to sharir uss dayre ko paar kar paya aur na hi uski koi siddhi. Saatvik Aashram ka Kanyakumari matth, Pasachimi Himalaya ka Gurukul, har jagah ek jaisi samsya aa rahi thi. Aisa lag raha tha jaise sab ko pata hai ki kaun Saatvik aasram aane wala hai, aur usse rokne ki pukhta taiyari ye Saatvik aasharm wale kar chuke ho...


Surpmarich ke virodhi iss baar uss se ek kadam aage nikle... Anth me haar'kar Surpmarich ke sabhi ansh ek hafte ke liye dhyan me doob gaye. Ladai se lekar har chhote se chhote pahlu par najar diya... Lekin anterman me bhi kahin koi jawab nahi tha. Jab kuchh bhi natija hasil nahi hua tab wo log wapas se Jivisha ke pure pariwar par najar banaye, jo ki uss waqt Tibbath ke resort me shadi ke liye pahunche the…


Shadi se teen din pahle pata chala tha ki ye log agli subah kisi se mil rahe hai... Lekin kis se mil rahe uss naam par aate hi jaise voice clearity ki maa bahan ek ho jati ho... Kahin ja rahe the milne, lekin kahan iss baat par bhi jaise clearity kahin gayab si dikhi..


Surpmarich ko samjhte der na lagi ki usse fasane ke liye ek alag tarah kaa jaal buna hai, jisme wo apne dushmano ke pichhe jane par majboor ho… Haan lekin iss baar apne dushman ke pichhe jane ke siway aur koi chara bhi nahi tha, kyonki samne se jo khel chal raha tha usme Surpmarich khud ko pura asahay samjh raha tha…


Shadi ke 3 raat pahle hui baat se Surpmarich samajh chuka tha ki ho na ho Saatvik Aashram ke guru aur Jivisha ke sabhi logon ke bich kisi tarah ki aham baithak hogi... Yuvi aur Arf me se to wahan ka dayra koi paar nahi kar sakta tha isliye aanan-fanan me usne apne tej-tarrar super human gulamon ki ek team bheji... Jo super-duper tarike se disappear ho gaye...


Jitni jaldi aaye the utni hi jaldi gayab bhi ho gaye. Surpmarich ko aisa laga mano ye log pahle se hi taiyar baithe ho... Jab koi chara nahi mila, tab aakhir me sab ne mil'kar ek faisla liya.... Jivisha aur Nischal se jude jo log mile usse utha lo. Pahle unke dimag ko khangalo, fir usse maar dalo... Jiski baukhlahat me Nischal aur Jivisha unse ladne aayenge...


Ladne aane wale virodhiyon ke liye Surpmarich ne mission ka maksad kisi ko maarna nahi rakha, balki Nischal aur Jivisha ke sath jo koi bhi pichhe baith'kar khel raha hai... Un sab ke dimag ko pura khangal'kar jaankari nikalna.


Sath hi sath kayi tarah ke sambhavna par vichar karne ke baad, yahi nishkarsh nikla ki Surpmarich ke 2 ansh sanyukt roop se kisi bhi ek dimag ke taktakal yadon ko bhi khangal le tou kaam ho jayega, maksad bus yah jan'na tha ki kahani me ye Saatvik aasharm aaya kahan se.


Apne lakshya me bilkul saaf aur focus planning ke sath iss baar sath aa rahe the, Zoren ke 10 hazar narbhakshi, jise biologically kayi sare sodh ke baad uss ke power ko bilkul Nischal ke power se match kar diya gaya tha aur sab ke sab khanjar'baaj. Un 10 hazar biologically modified narbhakshiyon ke sath 5000 biologically modified Adrishi janwar shirkat kar chuke the Tibbath ke barfile ilake me...


Idhar shadi ki ghatnao me sangeet ki raat sare launde tul hokar... Waise tul hone wale launden kuchh iss prakar the... Nischal, sabka sardar jo pine baitha fir kisi ko uthne nahi diya... Uske sath bade bhaiya, Ansh, HuYu, Abhishek (Jjvish ke bhaiya), Asis (Nandni ke bhaiya) aur Ravi bhaiya (Jivisha ke sabse bade bhaiya, Nandita ke pati aur Chirag ke papa) ko bhi pakad liya.. in sab ke bich char chand lagane aur kuchh der sath nibhaya tha, Papa Himanshu (Jivisha ke pita), Shudhanshu (Kasak ke piita) aur unka bharpur sath dete thumka lagaya Nandni ke papa Awedhesh ne...


Halaanki teeno papa ki shirkat jaise hi hone wali thi, waiter ne emergency sandesh de diya tha aur sabhi apne-apne peg ke galss aur daru ko bottol ko jaldi se chhipaya. Lekin baap to baap hota hai... Khushi kahe ya gum... Baith'kar un dono bhai Shudhanshu aur Himanshu ne 4 peg lagaya… aur Nandni ke papa achhe dost ki tarah unka sath nibhaye. Wo sabko kahte bhi rahe ki koi nahi aaj sab enjoy karo, lekin kisi me himmat na hui unke samne peg bana le, pine ki to dur ki baat thi...


Ladies Sangeet ke mukable gents sangeet kafi rochak tha… bina practice ke jab thumke lagte aur wo paun se jamin ko jamin me ghusane ki de laat maar kosis… fir kya kahne... Jo hi dil khol'kar jhume... Teeno papa nikal gaye, lekin baki sabhi wahin subah ke 4 baje tak pi'kar niche hi ludhke the…


Subah ke 11 baj rahe honge. Pahle to bade bhaiya hi uthe... Sir pakde, aadhe jaage, aadhe soye aur bhadi sar ke sath jaise hi aage ke mahol par najar gaya, harbadi me poori aankh khul gayi... Unke baju me Ravi bhaiya the, bade bhaiya usko thuski de rahe... Ab chhote se thuski se ghanta koi uthne wala tha...


Nandita bhabhi juda pin badhati... "Bade bhaiya isse try karo"… bade bhaiya ne naa me sar hilaya aur idhar Jyoti bhabhi chudiyan upar kar, pallu kamar me khosne ja hi rahi thi... Bade bhaiya ne Jyoti bhabhi ko hathon ke ishare se rukne kaha, aur ghap se pin Ravi bhaiya ke back par...


Tej chillahat ke sath wo jage aur samne ka najara dekh'kar awaj muh me... Aise pin pass hote rahe aur sabki chinkh jagte hi muh me...


Nandni:- Kasak, Jisa.. ye purv karmon ki saja aur dosh nivaran kuchh yaad hai kya..


Jivisha:- Betiyon ne to naak nahi katvayi, lekin ab kya kah sakte hain... Kal Kasak ko hi to meri pyari maa ne kaha tha, ladkon wale sauk palna… tou jab inke Shauk me hi pina sumar hai, fir hum kya kar sakte hain…


Kasak:- Chal vahini ab thode na koi kisi ko kaam kahega karne… Sirf purv karmon ke dosh Purohit ji humare hi kundli me nikal sakte hain… Waise yahan ek manas kam lag raha hai...


Jivisha:- Nischal kafi sarif nikla iss mamle me...


Sabhi mardon ki gang aschrya se gaur karte... "Ek doshi gayab hai"… khud fanse to fanse, lekin ek kaahe bache... Sab video evidence aur photo evidence dikhane lage aur bechare dikhane ke chakkar me Nischal to nahi fansa, kintu teeno sarif papa phans gaye. Kyonki dance to kewal ussi waqt hua tha,jis waqt teeno pahunche the, aur uss waqt pi sirf teen log hi rahe the... Papa Himanshu, Shudhanshu… aur Awdhesh...


Khair sabhi 6 ladkiyan to chali aayi, lekin ladies kahar udhar non stop baras raha tha. Kisi ek ko na baksha gaya, siway HuYu ke. Uspar kisi ka dhyan hi na gaya. Bechare bade bhaiya… ACP sahab kahin kona dhundhte rahe dubakne ke liye... Manate rahe jamin me hi 6-7 fit ka gaddha ho jaye aur wo kisi tarah apni izzat bacha le...lekin Jyoti bhabhi ne bechare ke chir haran me koi kami nahi chhodi...


Aur yahi haal aag lagi 2 mataon me bhi thi, jisne apni beti ke liye to bhadi mehfil me, sajis ke tahat kitne jatil kaam bata di, yadi sab karne lag jati tou shayad khud ke hi shadi me hosh na rahta ki hua kya. Kaun si rashm kab bit gayi. Jin betiyon ke chup hone se ghar katne ko daure un betiyon ne gusse me yah tak kah diya ki ab mayke ka muh na dekhengi... Lekin abhi un mataon ke samne kya tha…


Sare vakye ko jahan me ek baar samet'kar fir tou Durga devi aur Priya rajpoot ks kahar barsa. Samne teeno papa ke sath-sath sabhi bacchon ke haalat me bhi, bade bhaiya jaisa tourcher hota raha. Shayad jyada hi hua hoga kyonki 11-12 saal ke bacche ke pita, bole to Ravi bhaiya ko bhi thappad parte-parte rah gaya...


Trideviyan bomb ke pin ko khinch'kar bahar chali aayi aur ander bomb non-stop foot'te rahe. Waise idhar sabhi ladkiyan jab bahar nikli, sabne Jivisha ko gher liya aur Nischal ke gayab hone ke pichhe ki kahani puchhne lagi... Tabhi pichhe se Serin kahne lagi... "Nischal ke wahan se gayab hone ke pichhe bhabhi to nahi, lekin mujhe kisi Shatir dost ka hath lag raha jo chupke se dosti nibha aayi.... Wahan pati aur bhai bhi ludhka para tha, lekin usse chhod dee"...


Jaise hi Serin ne bhandaohod kiya sabhi log Nandni ko gherti aur ghurti... "Wahhh wahhh, pati aur bhai se badh'kar dosti... Koi eet lao re pith thoko"…


Nandni apna kandha jhakti, bhir se bahar aa'kar…. "Paglon koi badh'kar ya ghat'kar jaisa mamla nahi tha, balki mujhe subah matth jana tha isliye Nischal ko jagaana para tha"…


Jivisha:- Matth... Lekin kyon?


Nandni:- Vishesh kul ki ladki ki shadi hai aur uske mul gaanv ko nimantran nahi gaya tha, isliye main pahle matth gayi aur baad me kahan wo samjh sakti ho... Isliye usse jagaana para tha...


Jivisha chhota sa afsos bhada chehra banati.… "Tu na ho to humara kya hoga... Tu to life line hai Nandu"…


Nandni:- Hat pagal, unhone jo muskura'kar bataya wo bhi bata dun…


Jivisha:- Khud se jana aur dur sanchar karna, dono me anter hota hai Nandu... Ab bus koi bahas nahi...


Chhoti badi nadaniyan, dher sari sharaten aur kafi lambi chalti hansi-khushi ka daur... Ek aisa insan nahi tha, jisko andekha kiya gaya ho... Khas'kar Serin aur HuYu ko... Kyonki unke rishte kisi earth ke parivar se nahi the lekin maan, sam'maan me koi kami nahi thi…


Bade se lawn me hi sabhi ke shadi ka aayojan hua tha… baratiyon ke nachte huye dwar tak aane ke liye 2 kilometer pichhe vayvastha ki gayi thi... Sabhi nachte, gaate, jhumte darwaje tak pahunche… gharwale, baraati sab jaise ek hi to the...


Music ke sath nachte huye jaise hi baarat jaymala stage ke karib pahunchi... Ek saath 3 jhannatedar seetiyan baji... Seetiyon ki awaj itni tej ki, baj rahe loudspeaker ki awaj fail ho gayi. Trideviyon ki kaan faad seety...


Jaise hi seety baji gaane ka mood ek dum se badla.… "Tauba Tera Jalwa, tauba Tera pyar, tera emotional atyachar"… aur uski wo taiynnn taiyann wali tune.… Aur 6 couple bilkul rang bikherte waise hi naach rahe the... Dulha thode sankochi aur dulhane kafi dilfek...


Sandhya ke sadhe 4 baje ka muhrrat tha… karib 3.30 baje jaymala shuru tha. Sabhi log vidhivat lage huye the. Har koi apni dulhan ko dekh, dil me thande aahen bhare huye.. manodasha aisi ki abhi bahon me samet'kar chum le... Lekin aisa kar nahi sakte the... Unki dvidha kisi dulhan se chhipi bhi nahi thi aur sabhi ander hi ander mand-mand muskura rahi thi...


Haan par ek couple ke upar ye bandish lagu nahi thi. Bhid ke bich apni patni ko puri dulhan ki tarah taiyar dekh, bhala Ansh kyon na deewana ho... Ansh aur Nandni dono sath khade the, sab log jaymala stage ko ghur rahe the aur Ansh baar-baar Nandni ko... Jab bardast nahi hua, kamar me hath dal'kar khud se chipkate huye uske gaal par kiss kar diya...


Nandni hairani bhadi najron se jaise hi mudi, Ansh 4-5 second ka lip lock kar'ke ek wet kiss karte alag hua... Nandni hakki-bakki apni badi si aankhen kiye... Usse ab bhi yakin nahi ho raha tha Doc itne logon ke bich romance bhi kar sakta hai... Ander se to mano uski dharkan ajib tarah se badhi hui thi…


Nandni ko khud bhi raha nahi gaya... Wo hath pakad'kar uss mahol se Ansh ko khinch'kar kinare lati... "Ansh ye kya tha"… Ansh muskura'kar Nandni ko apne bahon me bhinch'kar uske gardan par kiss karte… "Tum pagal bana rahi ho Nandu"…


"Chhodo bhi Ansh baby, raat me pura pyar jata lena na... Jisa aur Nischal mujhe dhundh rahe honge"…


"Sabki haalat meri jaisi hogi... Unhe apne wali ko dekhne do, main apni wali ko dekhta hun"…. Nandni khil khila'kar hansne lagi... Dono ko garm chalti shwans aur chehre bilkul karib aate gaya... Honth pyar barsane ko betab jaise machal rahe honge.…


Dono ke hont sparsh huye hi the…. "Jarra bhi"…. Pichhe se itne awaj par hi Nandni aur Ansh jhatke ke sath alag huye aur idhar Nischal apni baat puri karte.… "Jarra bhi sharm to nahi aayi hogi"…


Nandni:- Kutta teri shadi ho rahi hai, ja'kar apni biwi ke sath romance karna... Kamina khun pi jaungi... Mujhe pata hai tu jaan bujh'kar aaya hoga...


Nandni gusse me fufkarti hui Nichal ko jhatke dene dauri... Wo gayab… Nandni thunakti hui... "Isska main khun kar dungi"…


Ansh:- Khun karne se achha hai ki dono ki suhaagraat me vighn (paresani) daal do...


Nandni:- Dono besharm hai, aur mujhe live show dekhne ka koi shauk nahi...


Ansh:- Fir porn kaise dekh leti ho..


Nandni:- Irritate na karo Ansh, warna uska jhatka tumhe de dungi...


"Sharm to na aayi hogi... Apne doston ke romance dekhne ki ikchha rakhne wali dusht"…. Nichal aaya, apni baat kaha aur gayab…


Nandni pure gusse me... "Sale ne pure romantic mood ki maa bahan kar diya... Chalo abhi, aaram se raat me mood banayenge. Kamina kahin ka"…


Ansh, Nandni ki haalat dekh'kar jor, jor se hansne laga... Nandni bhi thunkte thunakte hansne lagi... Aur dono kinare se chipk'kar, Ansh Nandni ke kandhe par hath dal diya aur Nandni, Ansh ke kamar par... tabhi fir se Nischal... "Romance hi dono karte rahna.. meri shadi nahi dekhni na"… "Arre ruk Nischal"….


Nischal ke paun thehre... Nandni hansti hui ek ore se apni baanh faila di...udhar dusre ore se Ansh… Nischal bich se dono ke gale lagkar... "Ek lamba vacation le lo Doc, tum dono ke bina jindgi adhuri si thi"..


Nandni, Nischal ko khud se alag karti, usse najar bhar dekh'kar muskurati hui... "Jaa ab, warna teri biwi mera jina haram kar degi"…


Nischal, Jivisha ke bare me jaise hi kuchh bolna chaha... Nandni hath dikhati… "Haan janti hun, ussi ne bheja hai, mujhe bulane"…


Nischal:- O' over express, uss ne 15 minute ka break diya hai... Bus tujhese milne ka mann kar raha tha aur shayad Jivisha ne bhaanp liya...


Nandni hairani se Nischal ko dekhti, uske mathe par aaye baal ko upar karti, "Pagal, abhi pura waqt Jivisha ko".…


Nandni, apni baat puri karti, uss se pahle hi Nischal, Nandni ke gale laga'kar bus rone laga… rone ke pichhe ka karan to Nandni ko bhi pata nahi tha, lekin aanshu uske bhi chhalak aaye... Dono gale lag'kar kuchh der bus rote hi rahe….


"Aree yaar, tu khud bhi ro raha, aur mujhe bhi rula raha, chup ho ja"…


Nischal apne aanshu saaf karte huye alag hua... "Jaa raha hun, raat me milte hain, sona mat aur doc aaj raat ke liye sorry"..


Nandni:- Gadhe aaj nahi, aaj to teri first night hai… fir kabhi..


Nischal:- Ye meri nahi Jivisha ki ikchha hai... Kah rahi thi aisa lagta hai varshon bite Nandu ke sath baith'kar baten kiye...


Ansh, apne dono hath jodte... "Abhi jao, raat me dekhte hain... Warna Jivisha se bhi bardast thode na ho raha hoga... Lekin wo yahan aa nahi sakti bechari"…


Nischal "thankyou Doc" kahte huye nikla aur Nandni Ansh ko khud me bhinchti hui.… "Iss jivan ke liye koti koti dhanywaad bhagwan"…
sbko hi talli kr diye
or phir upar se war bhi declare kr diya
bechare pati log
ye kya nain bhai 2 logo ki romantic rate hi cancel kr di
idhar apne surpmarich bhaiya pgla gye h
unhe kuch bhi smjh nhi aa rha ki kya ho rha h or kya nhi
isliye direct attack ka hi plan bna diya
kher ye plan kitna workout karega ye to aane wala wt hi batayega
 
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ragish7357

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Bhai aap ki baat sahi or aap ne jis story ke starting ka thoda bhag hi same he fir aap ki story alag he or aap ne baba bhai ki story antique love story ka Sirf starting hi copy kiya he me bhi padhata hu baba bhai ki story aap ki story alag he baad me or log to kuch na kuch kahenge hi aap unlogo ko ignore karo or jo aap sath de rahe he unke liye likho me aap ke sath hu
apun bhi read kiya King of Devils ki story
starting copy paste thi phir kuch update mn se likhe uske baad phir dr. sahab story se copy paste seen daal usme
ab reader log thoda to bolenge hi na ki bhai copy paste h
sir ko seen thoda to change krna hi tha
inke khud se likhe hue matra 2-3 update hi the baki sare copy paste
ab more then one stories ke seen copy karoge to reader log bolenge hi kisi ne bhi provoke to nhi kiya kya tha writer ko unke thread pr
phir kahe story pr update close kr diye
baki wha bhi copy seen ke bavjood writer ko hamesa motivate hi kiya gya tha aage likhne ko
ju The king ne story pdi h to comment bhi dekhe hi honge
 

Xabhi

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Awesome update bhai jabarjast Chirag is bar fir rh gya khair agla update to ansh or chirag pr hi hai Sayad
Raat me jivisha ne suhagraat ki jagah meeting pe bulaya hai
Lagta hai kuchh abhash ho gya hai
 

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Maine pahale hi comment karke aage ka plan bata Diya tha so aap mere idea copy kiye hai ...anth ham chahate hai ki iss story ke evaj me Jo aapko 4 hathi ke ande Jo Milne wale hai usme se 1 anda Naina mam ko Diya jaye ..aur 1 anda masoom Leon ko Diya jaye ..Baki ke 2 ande aap rakh le kyoki idea bhale Mera tha par execution aapka that... :lol1: :lol1:
 
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