Fantasy Kaisa Ye Ishq Hai ~ Ajab Sa Risk Hai ~ Reload (Completed)

[nain11ster]

Page 766 Se 775 tak har panne par update hai.

Final closing update on page:-792


Issi ke sath Ishq Risk reloaded ka ye season poora hua. Next fantasy journey announce ho jayegi. Ummid hai pahle

"Arymani:- The Pure Alfa Between Two World's."

Yahi aaye... Jo bhi hoga purv suchna mil jayegi... Fihlaal end enjoy karenge... Aur kahani ka poora safar kaisa rahega wo ek baar jaroor sajha karen...


Filhaal Abhi vyast hun ek pure romantic journey par....

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Aap sab ka hai udhar. Kahani par pahunchne ke liye story title par ulgi karne ka...

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[nain11ster]

Update:-17 ​

Nichal ek chhota sa viram liya hi tha ki wo ladki sabko sunati hui kahne lagi... "Bus ab aur aage tum kuch nahi kaho... Kuch baten mujhe kah lene do.. aur kuch hum aapas me, akele me kar lenge"…


Nischal ne ishara kiya, uske logon ne apne sath laye pani ka ek thaili usse badha diya... Wo ladki 2 ghunt pani pi'kar sukoon sa mehsus karti.…

"Mera naam Orja hai. Main Astak ki beti hun, aur mai wahan wapas nahi jana chahti aur naa hi mujhe abhi marna hai.."


Nischal:- Unke bare me batao jo iss planet par aaye hain…


Orja:- Main Astak ki vansaj hun to wo kisi sena ko nahi bhejega, balki vansaj sena aayi hogi. Ek sardar ke sath 8 vansaj.


Nischal:- Kya hum lad sakte hai...


Orja:- Mat lado... Mai yah nahi janti ki tum jitoge ya nahi.. lekin mai unhe janti hun... Yadi tum sab ladne ke irade se ho to mujhe bata do.. Mai na chahte huye bhi wapas laut jati hun. Aur haan tumhare 12 log jinda hai, lekin viman ke sath hi unka exit panel fasa hua hai. Unke jahaj ka malwa Dark Universe ke dakhini dwar ke ore badh raha hai, jo 4 din me Dark universe ki seema ke ander hoga...


Nischal:- Boys sab ready hai..


"Yahan girls bhi hai" Ek crew member boli..


Nischal:- Mai chup hun Serin tum hi command sambhalo …


Orja, wahan ka mahol bhaanpti… "Tum sab karne kya wale ho????"


Niachal:- Tumne jo circuit joda hai uss se tumhari technology parakh rahe the.. report aa gayi hai…


Orja:- Kaisi report..


Nischal:- Yahi ki tecnically tum log achhe ho, lekin hum se achhe nahi… Tumhari technology ab bhi pichhe hai aur purely Dakshat samuday ki technology hai.. iss technology ko humare yahan ka baccha bhi beat kar de...


Orja:- Dushman se milne se pahle hi usse kamjor parakh rahe ho... Unhe iss faltu ke machino ki jaroorat nahi, kyonki unke hath hi technology hai... Yahan ki ret tumhari dushman hogi. Yahan ki hawa tumhari dushman hogi. Yahan ret ke niche ke saanp tumhare dushman honhe. Unki taknik ke aage tum kuch bhi nahi... Tumhari faltu ki machine chalegi, tab unhe bhedne se pahle uske dhatu (metal) aur rashayan (chemical) hawa me bikhar jayenge aur wo log unhi rashayan ko sagrahit karke tum par hi.….


Nischal:- Hum par hi humla kar denge..


Orja chehre par aisi bhavna thi mano kah rahi ho, bhavna me bah'kar bahut kuch bol gayi.… "Ye mai tumhe baad me bhi bata deti, lekin jigyasu insan jab tak aakhon se dekh na le, tabtak unhe viswas nahi hota isliye taal rahi thi..."


Nischal:- Tumne jo abhi bataya usse kaun si taknik bolte hain...


Orja:- Ye nature science hai... Apni sharirik urja se prakritik urja ko niyantran karna aur usse istamal karna..


Nischal:- Tum me kaun sa gun hai...


Orja:- Mere ander bij daloge to kal tak tunhare jaisa ek bacha tumhare god me dal dungi, jo parso hi tunhare jitna bada ho jayega... Aur kuch jan'na hai...


Orja ki baat sun'kar sabhi hansne lage. Serin jigyasavash… "Kya sach me aisa hota hai…. Iss shakti ko mai parakhna chahungi"…


Orja:- Ab to mujhe bhi lag raha hai ki tum logon ke pass had se jyada advance technology hai, jo nature ko bhi challenge kar de. Tumhare yahan kya madayen bhi bij dal sakti hai... Shayad ungliyon me technology laga rakha hoga... Nar na mile to madyen khud se ungli karke bij daal le... Mujhe bhi sikha dena...


Nischal:- Iss lihaj se to tum log rachayita se bhi aage nikal gaye. Kyonki tumne rachayita ki banayi chij ko kewal control hi nahi kiya, balki unme badlaav bhi le aayi..


Orja:- Ae Viggo Sigma, unclassified first Alfa… itne bhi na pratibha dikhao ki main rijhti chali jaun... Tum mujhe pasand aaye... Mujh me koi shaktiyan nahi… Main bus ek sandesh vahak hun… kisi bhi medium me main sandesh bhej sakti hun... Tumhara viman gujra to maine sanket de diya..
Mujhe pata nahi tha ki kisi sardar ka viman ass pass hai... Tum chaho to apna badla mujhse le sakte ho. Tumhare sath hui ghatna ke pichhe mera hath hai. Bus maarna mat pleaseee. Mujhe abhi jina hai"..


Nischal:- Unhe suchna bhejo aur iss location par bulao.


Worrier head Remmy:- Yahan bahut sare bacche hain..


Nischal:- Befikr raho mujhe unse kewal baat karni hai..


Orja:- Off O tumhe baat karni hai, lekin wo baat nahi karte... Baat hi karni hoti to tum par humla kyon karte..


Serin:- Tum ho na, tumhari liye baat karenge... Kuch bahut purana hisab barabar karna hai.. Kyon half..


Nischal:- Bilkul sahi kahi Serin..Unhe baat karna pasand ho ki na ho, mujhe baat karni hai. Abhi usse yahan bulao... Serin meri chijen do.…


Orja bahut samjhati rahi, lekin koi nahi maana. Ant me haar'kar, Orja ne unhi ki suchna pranali se sandesh bheja. Sandesh bhejne ke thik agle pal hi ek viman unke samip aa'kar ruki.


Iss baar uss viman ke ander se koi bhi humla nahi hua. Shayad Orja sath thi, aur unka maksad Orja ko jinda le jana tha. Ek ore Nischal apne logon ke thik aage khada aur dusri ore takriban 200 meter ki duri par Dark Universe ke Astak ke vansaj ka viman.


Viman ka bada sa darvaja khula. Sidhiyon se log utar rahe the. "Orja, unhe humari bhasha samjao"..


Orja:- Puri bhasha wo tumhari jaan chuke hain. Wo baat-chit karenge, lekin baat chit ke baad tum mujhe inke sath jane doge..


Nischal:- Ab ye to unke baat-chit par nirbhar karta hai...


Nischal apni baat puri kar hi raha tha, tabhi Serin, Nischal ki banayi suraksha ghere ko khol'kar bahar nikal aayi aur Nischal ke kandhe par hath rakhi...


Nischal, Serin ki iss harkat par kuch kahta, uske thik pahle hi usse bhi samne kuch log najar aa rahe the... Nischal ke aakhon me bhi wahi khun utar aaya, jo iss waqt Serin ki aakhon me tha...



Kuch varsh purv.….


Kai varsh purv Nischal aur Serin dono science exhibition aayojan me Aizem ke Madhya rastra ka pratinidhitwa kar rahe the. Ussi science exhibition me Serin aur Nischal ne pahli baar "complete safe exit panel" ke nirman ko sabke samne rakha tha..


Ek aisa safe exit panel jo Unerverse ocean me bhi feka gaya to apne aas pass ke kisi bhi grah ka vayumandaliya kshetr dhundh'kar, wo panel wahan tak ka safar tay kar sakta tha.


Ye wirless circuit ka bana apne tarah ka pahla exit panel tha, jo 3 mahine tak Universe Ocean me urr sakta tha. Iske ander ka rashayan (chemical) kisi bhi prani ko 3 mahine tak poshan de sakta tha jo tube ke jariye naak se auto-connect ho jata aur sarir ke jarooraton ke hisab se usse poshan dete...


Poshan dene wale rashayan ko ek sal ke baad badalna tha. Uss rashayan ko banane ki vidhi kafi saral thi aur chhote se chhote lab me bhi taiyar kiya ja sakta tha.


Charo ore Nischal aur Serin ke aawishkar ki dhoom machi hui thi. 60km ka bada sa maidani kshetr tha jahan ye exhibition chal raha tha. Takriban 3000 vaigyanik, 20000 mukhya log jo kayi grah ke shashak ki ore se yah exhibition dekhne pahunche huye the. Suraksha ke lihaj se 1 lakh uss grah ke sainik, jahan ye exhibition chal raha tha. 10 lakh any grah ke sainik.. aur itne logon ki maujudgi me yah science exhibition aayojit hua tha…


Tabhi achanak hi wahan par humla ho gaya... Kisi ko kuch pata nahi ki ye humla kisne kiya aur kyon kiya. Wahan Aizem ke 2000 sainik jattha bhi tha, jinki lash any surksha karmiyon ke sath palak jhapkte hi gir chuki thi.


Kiski kis se dushmani thi kisi ko pata nahi. Hawai kshetr me kab ghuspaith hui kisi ko pata nahi. Har koi vigyan ke kshetr me huye aawiskaron ka luft utha raha tha… Bus ek pal se dusre pal matr ka fark tha.


Abhi aankh khole the, palak jhapak'kar jab wapas aankh khole to sab badal chuka tha. Sab kuch itni jaldi hua ki kisi ko samjh me nahi aaya ki wahan hua kya. Serin ko Nischal ki fikr thi aur Nischal, Aizem ka nirbhik Sahjada apne hath me bada sa khanjar liye, apni na dikhne wali gati se tej daud laga chuka tha...


Ek aisa kshn (moment) aaya jab wo chhota ladka Nischal teji se daudte huye hawa me chhalang laga chuka tha. 4 fit ka ek ladka, samne 8 fit se jyada lambe kad ka ek anjaana dushman, jiski na to wo kshmta janta tha aur na hi uss par humla karne ka kya natija hoga uski koi parwah.


Uske aankhon ke aage to bus unki lashen dikh rahi thi, jinhe yah tak pata nahi tha ki unhe mitrtyu dand kyon mili. Teji se daudta hua wo chhota ladka 50 fit se uncha chhalang laga chuka tha.


Apni sari urja hatahon me lekar aaya. Uss chhote ladke ki khanjar chal chuki thi jiske bare me wahan ke sabhi planet wasiyon ko pata tha ki jab uski khanjar chalti hai to saikdon salon se majboot khade ped ko bhi ek hi bar me upar se niche tak chirta hua wo ladka jamin par kadam rakhta hai..


Uss chhote ladke ki khanjar ki dastan sabne kuch din pahle suni thi. Jab khelte huye wo uttri seema me ghus gaya tha aur jab wahan ke fauj me samil 20 fit unche janwar ko katna shuru kiya, tab kewal maans ke lothre aur khun hi khun charo ore tha.… Jab bhi ye khanjar chali thi raktranjit hi hua tha...


50 fit ki unchai, aur ek baar fir wah ladka apni khanjar chala chuka tha. Jab uss ladke ki khanjar apne dushman ke sar se takrayi, visphot jaisa awaj hua tha. Aisi awaj jise sun'kar wahan ka pura mahol hi tham gaya ho. Bijli si raushni hui thi.


Nischal ki khanjar uske dushman ke sar par lagi lekin pahli baar uski khanjar ne dhokha de diya aur sar se takrane ke baad khajar ka dhatu jaise dhul ke kan me badal gaye ho. Ek Abhed dushman, jise Nischal ki khajar bhed nahi payi thi.


Sarir Abhed hua to kya hua, lekin sar par khajar lagne se jo visphot ki awaj ke sath raushni hui, uss se ek baat to saaf thi ki itni takat se sar par humle ke baad uski akl to thikane aayi hi hogi.


Sath hi sath ek chhote se Viggo ke gusse ka samna bhi karna para tha, jo itna nirbhik tha ki usne yah nahi socha dushman ki takat kya hai, balki hath se khanjar khone ka gum bhulate agle hi pal jab wo uske sine ke pass tha, logon ne fir se wahi visphotak awaj ke sath raushni dekhi...


Dono visphot aur raushni me second ke 100we hisse se bhi kam ka samay tha... Uss 4 fit chhote ladke ki laat apne dhushman ke chhati par chali thi. Nischal jab niche jamin par khada hua tab uska wo dushman kahin dur-dur tak uss madan ki seema me najar nahi aaya jo ki 60 kilometer ke kshetr me faila hua tha…


Jaise hi wo anjaana duhman kahin dur jaa'kar gira, bahut hi teji se teen log kuch fit ki duri par ek chhote ladke ko ghere khade the. Wo teen aur naye dushman kuch bol to nahi the, lekin aakhon se unke soley barash rahe the.


Dekhte hi dekhte teeno ne apna naqab hataya aur ek sath apne hath ko disha de diya. Thik ussi waqt Serin, Nischal ke sath khadi ho gayi. Jaise hi un-logon ne apni shaktiyan chalayi, aisa laga do shaktiyan takra gayi ho.


Nischal aur Serin ki jab aakhen khuli tab wo jaal mahal ke medical section me the. Dono ki maa.. unke karib baithi muskura rahi thi... Serin ki maa ek kusal Dakshat sumday ki sahjadi thi, to Nischal ki maa ek kushal Viggo.


Jahir hai dono bacche ke man me kayi sare sawal the. Serin ki maa ne Nischal aur Serin ka sar chumte huye kahne lagi.… "Tum dono pahle aise insan ho jo Astak ke vansaj sena ke samne khade the, aur jivit bhi ho. Nischal mujhe afsos hai, tumhare guruji ka diya hua pendent wo le gaye."..


Jaise hi Serin ki maa ne yah bataya, thik ussi pal Serin apna pendent dekhne lagi jo Nischal ki maa ne usse diya tha....


Serin:- Mera wala pendent to hai...


Nischal ki maa... "Kise pata iss pendent ki wajah se dono jivit ho. Tum dono aaram karo aur kuch hi dino me ek chhota sa badlav tum dono apne ander mehsus karoge. Ye ek Dakshat aur Viggo (Serin aur Nischal ki maa) ki mehnat hai. Dono kabhi alag mat hona... Hum chalte hain"…


Wakai, dono ne kuch din baad apne ander badlav mehsus kiya tha. Vayumandaliya aavran ye khud apne hathon se bana sakte the... Dono ne mil'kar fir iske ek device banane par kaam kiya, jiska naam diya tha fasal-raksha. Kyonki bahut se sukshm jiv aur janvar fasal ko barbad kar dete the, isliye unhe bachane ke liye ye device banane lage taki pure fasal ki raksha ho sake.


Dono sath milkar fir se ek bade project par kaam to shuru kiye, lekin banate waqt dono hi viprit aur jigzag the. Waise to Nischal aur Serin ke bich jitna gahra pyar tha, utni hi ladai bhi hoti thi. Upar se ye project...


Nichal apne haton se prawaah hone wale aur mastisk se control hone wale iss project ko bahut barikiyon se parakh kar. Yadi Nuschal urja ki reading yadi +2 leta to wahin Serin ke result -2 hua karta tha. Ek ka natija jo hota wo dusre ke na kewal thik viprit balki aara-tirchha bhi hua karta tha...


Jaise nischal ne koi manak nikala +5 to ussi ka manak Serin ka hota +12. Nischal 1 negative wiring ki baat karta aur Serin 2 positive wiring karke test karti... Kya hi ladaeyan hua karti thi dono ke bich iss project ko le'kar…


Ladai jhagre wala yah project dhire-dhire progress karta 2 sal me taiyar hua tha. Shayad dono ki maa iss device ki kimat janti thi, isliye medical section me jab dono aankh munde behosh the aur dono ke upar dono ki maa medical experiment kar rahi thi, tab anti jigzag visualisation dal diya tha…


Dono hi apne dono bachon ko jante the, aur unhe pata tha ki ye dono mil'kar vayumandal aavran device ko banane par kaam shuru karenge aur bana bhi lenge. lekin dono ki maa ye kabhi nahi chahti thi ki kuch gupt chijen bahar aaye.


8 aise vachan the jo Serin aur Nischal ki maa ne marne se pahle, kuch kewal Serin se to kuch dono se liye the. Nischal ke ore se Serin ne hi wo wada kiya tha, jisme se ek ye vayumandaliya aavran device bhi tha. Jo device ye bana rahe the kewal uski swikriti mili thi, lekin kewal ek shart par ki aage ye iski copy nahi banayenge. Koi bhi reserach paper taiyar nahi karenge. Aur jin'par itna bharosa ho ki jindgi apni unke hawale kar sake kewal unhi ko istamal karne denge…


Vayumandaliya aavran device ka nirman to dono ne kar liya tha, aur iss dauran Serin ko bhi andruni kayi sari baton ka pata chal chuka tha, ki inke pariwarik mahol me kya khel chal raha tha...


Uss device ko banate waqt dono ne ek nayi paddhati ko janm diya.. Tum kuch kaho hum kuch kare aur nirman hote rahe. Issi ke tarj par bahut se nirman huye jinme se wo hand mask bhi tha, jise iss waqt Nandni istamal kar rahi thi.. pardarshi energy gloves ke naam se.


Aur yahi karan bhi raha hai ki Nischal ke dimag se jab Surpmarich chori kar raha tha to usse anokhe aur nayab nirman safalta purvak hote to dikhe lekin unka nirman nahi kar paya.


Iska sadharan sa karan yah bhi tha ki Surpmarich kewal Nischal aur Jivisha ke dimag par focus kiye huye tha. Dono ke mahasagar jaise dimag ko pahle chori karne ke karm me kuch Nischal ke dimagi hisse ki yaad chhut gayi aur Serin ka puri yaden rah gayi...


Surpmarich ke pass waqt itna bhi nahi bacha ki wo Serin ke dimag ki ek jhalak le sake. Bewakoof Surpmarich, kyonki Nischal ke jivan ki puri aham janakari to Serin ke dimag me thi... Aakhri me bus teeno ke dimag ke softwere ko corrupt kar'ke maara gaya… Aaj jab Nischal ke nirman ki dekh'kar nirman ki sochta hai to kewal visphote hi hota hai.. kyonki sare nirman dono ne viprit jigzag policy ke tahat kiya…


Nischal ne -1 socha to Serin bus uski aakhen padh'kar chup chap +6 kar deti thi. Mudda yah nahi tha ki unhe ya unki maa ko Surpmarich ke aane aur dimag se kuch churane ka purvanuman hua tha... Wo dono to bus Jaal mahal me faile, apne hi pariwar bane dushman se apne nirman ko surakhit rakhte the, jo har waqt in par najar diye hote… jiski jankari Serin ko to thi, lekin Nischal ko bahut baad me hui.....


Chaliye vartman samay me chala jaye kyonki kuch varsh purv jo narsanhar ke jimeedar the. 3 benaquab huye log Nischal aur Serin ke samne the. Aur ek jo Nischal ke guruji ka pendent lekar bhaga tha, Wo pendent pahne huye hi thik samne khada tha, Sardar Dreda.…

 

[Naina]

Thanks ... I will try for my writer .. pichhli baar ki bahas me usne mujhe samne se likh diya .. don't mail me again

matlab main reader naina is kahani ke update
-har baat, shabd aur panktiyon ko padhke pehle mulyakan kar lijiye ki akhir kis disha aurr ja rahi hai kahani.. kya karya raha un kirdaaro ki, etc aur
Writer dwara chhode gaye hints ko khojiye yaani aapke dwara chhode gaye hints .. phir uspe ek baar phir se vichar karke revo likhke post karte rahiye.. yaani ki main aise revo du.. Agar baaki naye readers bhi chahe to de sakte hai agar ye idea achha lage to ..simple
aur aap khud pe le liya is baat ko

 

[DARK WOLFKING]

nice update ....

 

[Naina]

Main uske reader hun ... Harry Potter ki rachayita....

Idhar Harry Potter kahani kaha hai..
Idhar aapki kahani chal rahi hai.. jiski reader main hu..

 

[nain11ster]

Idhar Harry Potter kahani kaha hai..
Idhar aapki kahani chal rahi hai.. jiski reader main hu..

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[Naina]

Haan mai samjh sakta hun but don't worry ... Every mistake teach u something .. waise u can flirt Naina also... Samne se parose bhi kar sakte hai.. pan idhar nahi lounge jane ka..

Darne ka nahi aur na hi abhadr karne ka.. main to bahut flirt karta tha.. ek do ne aana band kar diya isliye warna dikha deta ..

Waise lounge me ab bhi dekh sakte hai.

Haan phir ek bawal ho udhar..

 

[Naina]

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[krish1152]

Mast update & for complete 100 page

 

[nain11ster]

tarif jiska aap sach mein hakdaar hai...

Its really appeasing... Thankooo sooo much

 

[DARK WOLFKING]

orja ne kaha ki wo bachche paida karne ki machine hai ..par serin ne kaha ki usko aajmana hai to orja murkh jaise lagi ki serin maada hokar beej daal sakti hai ..
nischal ke kehne par orja ne dushmano se sampark kiya aur jo aaye wo nischal aur serin ke jaani dushman nikle ..

jab dono chhote the aur science exhibition me apna project leke gaye the waha pe dark planet ke logo ne hamlaa karke bahut narsanhaar kiya .
nischal ne apni bahaduri se ladhke ek ko maar diya par pehli baar uska khanjar kaam nahi aaya aur khanjar pighal gaya ..
shayad sab wahi kahani se nischal ki bahaduri jaante honge jab usne uttari seema ke sainiko ko chir diya tha apne khanjar se ..

to ye aaye huye log astak ke vanshaj sainik hai jinse muthbhed huyi thi science exhibition me aur ye dreda unme se hi ek hai jisko dekhkar serin aur nischal ka gussa badh gaya hai ..
dreda aur uske saathi bahut powerful hai dekhte hai ab serin aur nischal inko dardnaak maut de paate hai yaa nahi ..