Update:-74
Shwetna ne jaise hi dhyan upar aakash me kee, aaschrya se uski aankhen badi ho gayi… muh khula ka khula rah gaya... "Ab ye kya hai?????"
Nischal aur Jivisha ke badan ek dusre me pura samaye the. Jivisha, Nischal ke gardan me haath dal'kar uss se poora chipki hui thi... Aur Nischal apna ek hath Jivisha ke kamar ke upar aur dsura hath uski pith par dale, khud se poora chipkaye huye tha…
Hotnth, honth se lage huye the… Dono ke badan ke darmiyan inch bhar ki bhi jagah nahi thi.… Lekin dono ke thik sar par, kafi alokik raushni ho rahi thi... Aisi raushni Zoren grah par pahle bhi dekhi ja chuki thi, Jab Nischal aur Jivisha ne apni jodi banayi thi...
Lok kahtaon ki maane to Viggo apne jode ka nishan ek dusre ke chhati par lagate hain.... Aur unke prem jode ki raushni wahin se nikalti hai.… Chunki Nandni, Ansh aur Shwetna teeno hi yah kahani jante the, isliye upar phail rahi raushni ka source Shwetna bhi dhundh rahi thi...
Nandni:- Dono ek dusre se chipke hai... Sina se raushni nahi nikal rahi...
Shwetna:- Haan main bhi wahi dhundh rahi thi… fir iss divya raushni ka source...
Nandni:- Inke anguthe me jo naag dansh samaya hai ussi se nikal raha...
Shwetna:- Dono ke prem ko hi samjhna muskil hai Nandni... Sath rahte hain to ek dusre se jyada hum sab ke liye prem dikhta hai... Aur yahan dekho...
Nandni:- Haan main bhi wahi soch rahi thi… Viggo itihaas ke hisab se to Viggo ka dil milne aur sacchi chahat ki raushni to purn jivan kaal me ek hi baar dekhi ja sakti hai na...
Un dono ke kandhe se Serin lagti... "Haan lekin dono ke sine se sacchi chahat ki chhap chali gayi thi aur mere khyal se iss baar Bhabhi ke sine par bhi ek sath chhap aayi hai...
Shwetna aur Nandni, Serin ko sawaliya najron se ghurti... "Matlab"..
Serin:- Matlab wo hriday jo ek Viggo ki sacchi chahat ko mehsus kare... Tab ja'kar kisi anya samuday ke partner ke sine par bhi wo nishan aane shuru ho jate hain.... Ek sath hriday par sacchi chahat ke nishan ka matlab hai, bhabhi bhi apne sathi ke liye komal hridayni hai aur... aur uska hriday bhi ek Viggo ke jaisa hi hai jo apne…
Ansh:- Bus aage nahi samjhao... Aur un dono ke fevicol ka jod hatao...
Serin:- Rahne bhi do... Kabhi kabhi to dono ek dusre se pyar jatate hain..
"Ye taali taali aanthe"….
"Ye gole gole gaal"….
Fuuuuuuhhhhh.… Fuhhhhhhhhhh...
"Alle gaana ga lahe... Aad kahe bhalka lahe"…..
"Ye gana Nandu masi ne nahi sikhaya... Sab katar me aaooo.. Sab ek sath gayenge aur har koi shararti bitti aur uski toli ko pakad kar rakho... Chalo ab gao"..
"Hawa ke jhonke aaj mausamon se rooth gaye Gulon ki shokhiyaan jo bhanwre aake loot gaye"
"Hav ke dhoke aad mamon te looth gaye"
"Humala pulana dana tahi tha"
"Tab wahi gao.. gole gole gaal wale"…
Jivisha ke dragon babies ki kachhi-pakki aawaj jaise hi Jivisha ke kaan me padi.. wah hont ko chhodti hui alag hui... Idhar sar ke upar totli boli me lagbhag sabhi dragon babies bol rahe the...
Achanak hi mahol khamosh. Itni badi baahn uthi jisme sabhi dragon babies sama gaye... Sabhi chahakne lage.. Jivisha muskurati hui sabko thoda bahon me samti, aisa ki apne sine se laga rahi ho... "Kitna pyara bolte ho... Kisne sikhya"
Ande se nikla phla dragon baby Gopal... "Aap to gumsum rahti thi hume nandni massi ne sikhaya"…
Tabhi wahan kayi sari totli boli ek sath nikalne lagi... Ek gopal ko chhod diya jaye to lagbhag sabhi dragon babies tutla rahe the…. Ek sath 8400 totli awaj..... "Ek dum khamosh.... Ja'kar khelo... Machhli bajar mat banao"… Nischal jhunjhlate huye kahne laga..
Jivisha, aur baki sab Nischal ki haalat par jor-jor se hansne lage…. "Mere sath bahut laad pyar dikha liye... Jao ab tum log khelo.. Yahan hum kuchh jaroori kaam kar rahe"…
Shayad ye baat kisi bhi dragon babies ko achhi nahi lagi... Ek baar fir se wo sab Jivisha ke sar par mandrane lage.. kacche pakke totli boli me 2 shabd gaate aur gardan hawa me kar'ke… aag, pani, hawa muh se jis chij ka spray nikalta, nikal lete..
Jivisha hansti hui un sab ko daanti aur aakar Nandni ke gale lagti... "Maasi haan... Aur kitna cute bolte hain na bacche"…
Nandni:- Tu to meri bahan hai... Nischal se rista gahra hai iska ye matlab thode na hota hai ki tujhse kamjor hai...
Shwetna:- Areee jahilon... Kahin bhi romance, kahin bhi emotion aur jhagre ka to puchho hi mat... Pahle ranbhumi ka kaam samapt kar len... Ya wapas se sab apne apne sathi ke sath, chonch me chonch mila'kar chipakne wale ho...
Nandni:- Tu bhi chipak ja Lin ke sath... Humse chhipane ki kya jaroorat hai ki dono pyar me nahi...
Shwetna:- Chuppp ho jaooo sabhi... Warna poore grah se main sab ko tadipad kar dungi... Aur ek shabd nahi counter reply me...
Shwetna jaise hi garji waise hi sab apne apne muh par tala laga'kar, apna aasan grahan kar liye... Jaise hi mahol shant hua Shwetna HuYu se..... "HuYu poore universe ko connect karo"…
Lagbhag ghante bhar baad middle aur dark Universe ko connect kiya ja raha tha... Sabhi grah bilkul suspence me the lekin jaise hi visuals aaye aur fate huye lashon ka dher dikha... Middle Universe wale khushi se jhum uthe aur Dark universe wale bilkul fati aankhon se dekh rahe the...
Shwetna apna naag dansh liye… poore abhimana aur Swabhiman ke sath khadi hui... "Jaisa ki main pahle kahi thi, mutthi bhar gundey... Ab sun lo Astak.. 2400 caror tumhare joker ho ya 24000 carore... Bhale hi sab tarah-tarah ke kala me maharat hasil kyon na kiye ho, aur bhale hi unke sharir ko hum kisi bhi astr ya shastr se bhed na paye… lekin yahan aakar tumhare sabhi sainikon yahi anjaam hoga... Hum uske sarir ko faad kar tumhe yah sandesh denge ki.… Zoren na kabhi kamjor tha aur na wo kabhi kamjor rahega... Bus apne logon ke liye jhuka tha"
"Tujhe to dhanywaad kahna chahiye iss Universe ki ek mahan sena nayika Serin ka, jisne tumhare gande aur ghatiye mansikta wale vansaj ko dard bhari maut se bacha liya warna tu dekhega... Bol tu dekhega kaise humne inhe dard bhari maut di hai... Vish-Jivisha, iss badjaat ko niche bhumi par aane djiye... Aur yahan baithe sab log apna kaan band kar lijiye"…
Jivisha ne jaise hi Javo ko mukt ki, uska vishalkay sharir niche dhamnn se gira.. jaise hi wo niche gira... Teji se khada ho'kar apne viman ke ore bhagne laga... Lekin bhumi se saanp nikale aur Javo ke paun ki bediyan ban gaye...
"Astak humari dahsat ko mehsus kar apne iss bhagte vansaj ko dekh'kar... Aur ab pesh hai humari darindgi... Nilbhut yodhha humla"…
Jaise hi Shwetna humla kahi... Fir to wo 700 fit ka vishalkay sharir, jamin par aundhe muh gira... Jaan bachane ke liye wah apne hath se vayu ke enegry se humla karna chah raha tha. Lekin wo asahay sa tha aur sabse pahle uske dono haath hi bandhe the…
Uske baad jo hua fir to Dark Universe aur Astak ke liye aisa sabak tha, jise dekh'kar uske ahankar ki dhajjiyan hi udd gayi... Javo ke har dard bhari chhat'patahat par Shwetna ki wo khufnak dahar aur aakhir me Adrishi janvaron dwara jab uske sarir ko hi khinch'kar faada ja raha tha....
"Tere aur tere vansajon ke liye to bhayanak maut intzar kar rahi hai Astak... Koi dusra dushman hota to hum uske sine me khanjar utar dete... Lekin tum to abhedi ho na jiske sharir ko koi bhed nahi sakta... Isliye apne bhavishya ki maut apne aakhon se dekh le"…
Jaise hi wo aakhri lash giri... Shwetna l ne HuYu ko ishara kiya aur sare visuals band... "Aise hi sabhi log khamosh achhe lag rahe ho... Mujhe aap sab ki maujoodgi me ek aur aham kaam nipta lene do chalo sath me"…
Shwetna sabko le'kar sabha bhavan pahunchi jahan pahle se hi hazaron logon ko doshiyon ki jagah khada kiya gaya tha, jisme sabse aage Jatin hi tha... Yun to Jatin, Nischal, Jivisha, Ansh aur Nandni ka kafi madad'gar raha tha aur Mahamahim ke pass se, Jivisha ko quid se chhudane ki aham kadi tha... Tabhi to Zoren ke Dirdh Aayu rastr ke satta ki kaman Jatin aur uski bahan Baby ko mili thi...
Chunki Shwetna ne shakt hidayat dee thi isliye sab chup hi the. Shwetna ek baar Serin ko dekhi, dono ke aankhon ke bich kuchh sahmati sa banne ke baad, Shwetna ne faisla sunana shuru kiya...
Shwetna ne satta me rahkar pure rastr ko khatre me dalne ke liye 800 logon ko tatkal faansi ki saja de di. Wahan ke tatkal shashak Jatin aur Baby ko wahan ke satta se hata'kar, poore Zoren ko Shwetna apne shashan me le lee.
Issi ke sath Jatin, 2000 aala adhikari aur Sena ke 20 lakh lonon ko planet se tadipad kar dee, jisne na to pahle surkasha ke intzamat kiye aur na hi vipatti ke samay yojna bana'kar bahar se aaye gundon ko apne rastr se bhaga sake... Ulta poore middle universe me apne viman bhej'kar afratafri ka mahol paida karwaya… Aur kisi any rastr ke svabhiman ko iss sabha bhavan me beejat hota dekhe...
Hakani jin 800 satta dhariyon ko maut ki saja hui, wo sabha me upasthit wo badi hastiyan the jinke dimag ko Surpmarich ne control nahi kiya tha fir bhi wo bejjat hote dekhte rahe... Kuch khamosh rahe to kuchh maze lete rahe...
Wahin tadipad wale list me takriban 100 bade aise naam the jisnka dimag control tha aur bakiyon ko chup rahne athva Surpmarich ke sath mil'kar galat me haami bharne ki saja mili thi...
Un sab tadioadon ko, 20 sal ke liye desert planet par visham paristithi me khud ko jinda rakhne aur wahan jivan basane ke liye bhej diya gaya... Tadipad logon ko 3 mahine ke anaj ke sath mulbhut suvidha ke sath bheja jane ke aadesh mile, taki kuchh mahino me usse viran planet par apne rahne aur khane ka intzam kar le...
Shwetna issi ke sath sabse aakhri farman jaari ki.… "Mamahim se ladai samapan ke baad ek narbhakshi ko maaf karna aur bina jane usse satta ka sarvochya banana ek bahut badi galti thi... Aur issi galti ka bhugtan na sirf Zoren ne kiya, balki 2 lakh narbhakshiyon ke sath 1 lakh Adrishi jaanvar prithvi ki seema me pahunche. Yah ek gair jimmedarana faisla tha."
Serin, kuchh bolne hi wali thi uss se pahle hi Nischal aur Jivisha ne usse hath dikha'kar shant rahne kaha... "Humari saja kya hai Shashika"…
Shwetna:- "Jabtak saja ka purn bhugtan nahi hota, Zoren ke har musibat me, pahli khabar ke sath hi yahan dono ko upasthit hona hoga... Humse sada sampark me rahenge… Dono kisi bhi planet ke satta aur shasan ke mamle me hatschhep nahi karenge"…
"10000 Nilbhut aur 10000 Dridh Aayu ke log aapke sath rahenge... Unme se jyadatra sainik hain... Kuch doctors aur kuchh scientist... Apne sath rakh'kar unhe trained karna hoga... aur jab wo trained ho jaye to yahan chhod dijiyega... Aur agla 20 hazar logon ko lekar jaeyega"...
Nischal aur Jivisha jab'tak samne doshiyon ki jagah par aa chuke the… dono Shwetna ke samne apna sar jhukate.… "Hume manjoor hai.. aur koi saza"…
Shwetna:- Aap dono wahan khade na ho... Aaj ki sabha samapt hoti hai...
Jaise hi sabha samapt hui... Shwetna daud'kar dono ke pass pahunchi... Nischal aur Jivisha dono muskura rahe the...
Nischal:- Ye 20 hazar angrakshak dene ka matlab... 20 hazar kya main to poore fauj ko sanyukt abhyas karwane wale tha Aizem ke fauj ke sath...
Shwetna:- Mujhe aap dono ke safar ke bare me pata hai... Issi bahane humare 20 hazar log trained bhi ho jayenge aur main thoda sukoon me bhi rahungi...
Jivisha:- Pagal ladki..
Shwetna:- Ziddi aap bhi kam nahi...
Shwetna:- Waise haan galti to hui thi mujhse... Shayad main saja kee hakdar hun, bura bus Nischal ke liye lag raha hai...
Nandni:- Kisi ko koi bura maan'ne ki jaroorat na hai, galti ka bhugtan aise hi sar jhuka'kar karo baccha... Waise Kasak aur Sahil nahi dikh rahe yahan...
Jivisha:- Main nahi chahti thi ki Jatin aur Kasak ka aamna-samna ho... Isliye usse Viggo viman me hi sabke saath runkne bol di thi…
Thodi der baat-chit ke baad sabhi Viggo viman ke ore hi nikle... Viggo viman par sabhi baithe, antriksh aur jamin par huye ladai ke baare me hi charcha kar rahe the... Jaise idhar se sabhi pahunche... Kasak.… "Kya tum dono (Jivisha aur Shwetna) ne chhadi ghumayi thi, wo aag wala stunt kafi romanchak tha"…
Nischal, hanste huye Kasak ke dono gaal khinchte.… "Tumhara pani aur lohe ka hathoda wala idea bhi adbhut tha... Ab to hum apne sare viman water proof karwane wale hain"…
Kasak:- Achha ab samjhi... Issi ladai ke liye yahan jaldi jaldi me aaye the na tum sab...
Jivisha:- Nahi hume to kahin aur jana hai
.. shayad 2-3 mahine ki uddan hogi, jab uss raste par honge... Lekin haan uss se pahle 3-4 planet ho'kar jayenge…
Luna:- Abhi ek gahra dard Astak ko diya hai... Hum Middle Universe nahi chhod sakte...
Serin:- Hmmm baat to sahi hai Luna... Aaj se main apni service se khud ko relief karti hun... Aizem ki total battlian control ke sath, organisations of miidle universe planets ki Air commandent chief tum ho…
Luna:- Lekin main..
Nischal:- Apne sub ordinate dhundh lo... Kyonki raaj parivar ke log hi sarvochya pad par rahe wo din chale gaye... Lobhu se hum baat kar lenge..
Luna:- Kya main apne husband ko apne mayke le ja sakti hun...
Luna ki baat par sabhi hasne lage issi bich Kasak... "Ab main bhi ye udd-udd kar bore ho gayi hun... Main aur Sahil bhi, Luna ke sath chipak jate hain... Itni badi post par hai.. maan swagat to waise bhi hoga...
Ert:- Mera bhi Aizem ghumne ka mann hai..
Abhishek:- Fir main akela thode na in sab ke sath jaunga...
Ert:- Jodi akele ghumne ke liye thode na banayi hai... Dono sath mil'kar nagin dance karenge...
Nischal:- Hmmm ! Ek kaam karo fir sena ka training aur aur total command control mere sahar me hi develope kar lo... Issi bahane Rajdhani aur Lobhu ke sar se kuchh bhar bhi kam ho jayega aur mere mahal ko rennovate karwa lo... Wahin tum sab rahna...
Luna ki badi badi gol aakhen hairani se Nischal ko dekhti... Serin Adhmya ko le'kar Luna ki padesani samjhti hui... "Aree chidiyaghar ke itne bhanti-bhanti prakar ke janvar ja rahe hain... Adhmya to bilkul khush ho jayega"…
Nischal:- Ek kaam kar na Serin, Adhmya aur uske parivar ko le hi aao... Main kuchh waqt uske sath bitana chahta hun. Soch raha hun usse sath rakhun…
Serin:- To sab sath me hi chalte hain... Kuchh din Aizem me ruk'kar wahin se niklenge...
Iss baar hairan hone ki bari Nischal ki thi... Lekin Jivisha ke shabd jaise amritvani ban'kar nikle ho... "Nahi Zoren par hum kuchh din rukenge.. tum Adhmya ke pariwar ko le bhi aana aur wahan ruk'kar Aizem ko poora dekh bhi lena"…
Serin kutil hansi hansti…. "Jaisa tum chaho bhabhi... Thik hai fir na jane wale log iss viman se utar jayen... Hum abhi nikalte hain"…
Wahan kewal 4 log bach gaye baki sab Aizem ke liye nikal gaye... Unogon ke jane ke baad Jivisha, Nischal, Nandni aur Ansh ke sath Nilbhut rajya pahunchi... Jahan poore garm joshi ke sath swagat kiya gaya...
Wo madhur sa bajta inka dhun aur sab kuchh bhul'kar jhumte, nachte log... Issi bich ek baar fir Nilbhut Samuday ki ladkiyon ne Nischal ko gher liya... Haan lekin iss baar kewal Nischal hi nahi ghira tha, balki Ansh bhi ghir gaya tha... Jivisha jor se hooting karti hui... "Khub nachao mere jiju ko"…
Idhar se Nandni bhi hooting karti... "Nischal ko to chhodna mat"…
Pichhe se Shwetna ki awaj aayi.… "Kisi ne naag phaans ka istamal kiya to usse suli par taang dungi aur ye mera wada hai... Isliye apne armano ko masti aur mazak tak hi samete rahna... Aur jab'tak main in dono ke sath thodi masti karti hun"…
Shwetna, Jivisha aur Nandni ko le'kar bich me aa gayi... Jaise hi wo bich me pahunchi.. teeno ko hi kayi parivaron ne gher liya... Sabke bich Shwetna, Nandni aur Jivisha masti bhikherti hui nachne lagi... Nachne ke kram me Jivisha ko dragon baby ka dhyan aaya. Wo praty se nikal'kar, wahin kuchh dur aage aa'kar ret par baith gayi aur muskurate huye... "Mere baal gopal kidhar hain"…
Turant hi jhund ke jhundh dragon baby wahan pahunchne lage…. Nischal bhi ladkiyon ke bich se nikal'kar Jivisha ke pass baith gaya. Apne pass Nischal ko baithe dekh, Jivisha uske honth par pyar bhara apne hont ka chhota sa sparsh deti.… "Baby sorry, meri vajah se tumhe bhi doshi samjha gaya"…
Nischal:- Wo to main hoon hi... Mujhe Jatin ko maar dena chahiye tha... Uska hriday parivatan iss baat ki bharpai nahi kar sakta tha ki usne bhi jinda maans noche tha..
Jivisha, apna sir Nischal ke kandhe se tika di.. aur apne hath ke pass aaye dragon baby ke upar pyar se hath pherti... "Galtiyon se hi to sikhte hain... Hum bhagvan thode na ban sakte hain"
Unke pichhe se Ansh aa'kar dono ke gale me hath daalte.… "Aaj raat jhil ka kinara mera hai... Isliye please tum dono wahan mat aana"…
Jivisha aur Nischal hanste huye....
"Doc chinta nahi... Aadhi raat ke baad main, Jivisha, Nandu aur Shwetna sab uss Surpmarich ke mahal jayenge… wahan ke tilishm ko aaj raat tod'kar, wahan dekhna hai ki aisi kaun si siddhi hai jiske bute par Zoren ko wo baar-baar apne control me le leta hai"…
lazwab update nain bhai
phle to astak ke sath sath pure dark universe or middle universe ko hi nilbhut samuday ne apni darindgi se parichit karwaya
jisme javo ki maut ke live telicast ne to rongte hi khde kr diye honge ghinone logo k
or phir apne rosni paida krne wale couple jivi - nischl ka to kya hi khne
kamine log yudh k maidan m hi romance krne lge
kher swetna ne inhe sza k sath sath bodyguard hi de dale
or phir kuch log ekant k liye ja pahuche aizam
kher nischal jivisa k sath apne home planet kyo na bheja
nain11ster sir ne
shayad wo abhi jivisa ka samna nischl ki baki biviyo bole to uske baccho ki maa se na krwana chahte ho
philhal to bnde drk universe jane ka plan bna rhe h
but usse phle zoren se super machis bhaiya ka connection hi dundh rhe h
## apne dragon baby ka totli aawaz m bolna aaj ka sbse behatrin seen tha ###
hai udhar. Kahani par pahunchne ke liye story title par ulgi karne ka...
