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Fantasy Kaisa Ye Ishq Hai ~ Ajab Sa Risk Hai ~ Reload (Completed)

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Page 766 Se 775 tak har panne par update hai.

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Issi ke sath Ishq Risk reloaded ka ye season poora hua. Next fantasy journey announce ho jayegi. Ummid hai pahle

"Arymani:- The Pure Alfa Between Two World's."

Yahi aaye... Jo bhi hoga purv suchna mil jayegi... Fihlaal end enjoy karenge... Aur kahani ka poora safar kaisa rahega wo ek baar jaroor sajha karen...



Filhaal Abhi vyast hun ek pure romantic journey par....


Aap sab ka :welcome1: hai udhar. Kahani par pahunchne ke liye story title par ulgi karne ka...


 
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Shwans tootne se lage the.. Sharir jawab sa de chuka tha… dimag dono ke bojhil se the aur aakhen khuli hui... Ek lambe dard ki chinkh ko bardast kar gaye the... Pahle Nischal jis dard me tha... Wahi dard Jivisha bhi mehsus kar rahi thi...


2 bol (Astak aur Joy) chuke the, chinkh chinkh'kar... Teesri apna shikar pakadne ke baad ab sabse ru-baroo thi... Astak ke 4000 carore Viman ke vishal bede poore Middle Universe ko gher rahe the. Inme se 2000 carore vimano ka beda Zoren ki seema par, Viggo viman aur uske 1 carore ke bede ko ghere the. Vimano ki sankhya itni thi ki, Viggo Viman Universe ke kayi lakh kilomter tak dushman jahajon se ghira tha...


Yadi dushman vimano ko Viggo viman shikast deti hui rasta banati, to bhi usse lamba waqt lagte rasta bananane me. Waise bhi Luna ke pass itna waqt nahi tha, kyonki 64000 carore vansaj fauj ke sath, 2000 carore viman, middle universe ke har 6000 grahon me se, un grahon par utarte jahan jivan tha. Wo mahaj kuchh der me sabhi 6000 grah ek saman dikhte… bina jivan aur aabadi bina...


York ke maidan me Nischal fansa, Core planet par Jivisha. Jitne sare viman Dark universe me ghuse, sab 1000 carore ke bede me fase. Luna fansi thi 2000 carore vimano ke bich. Aur 64000 carore vansaj sipahi ke sath 2000 carore viman phail raha tha poore middle Universe me...


Arhcemia fir connect hui... OMU (organization of Middle Universe) se.. apne logon ke fajihat aur ghor apman ka badla lene... Tabahi ka manjar poore Middle universe me failta najar aa raha tha... Aur ussi ke sath Arhcemia sabhi planet ke kone-kone me lagi screen par dikh rahi thi...


Split screen par ek ore jahan sabhi log poore Middle Universe par 2000 carore ke khatre ko, sabhi jivan wale planet ke ore badhte dekh rahe the, wahin unki surakha ki jimmedari liye commanding viman, Viggo viman ko iss kadar ghera gaya tha ki wo nikal na sake...


Ek split screen par inke lagbhag 200 carore viman jo Dark Universe pahunche the, unhe ghera ja chuka tha aur Astak ke vimano se Middle Universe ke vimano ki jung shuru ho chuki thi... Bus in vimano ke liye York ka vayumandaliya kshetr bhadi par gaya...


Wahin ek kinare Jivisha ko dikhaya ja raha tha, jo hawa me thi... Aise lag raha tha poore badan me anginat chhed kar diye hon, khun se lahu luhan poora badan aur paun se niche tap-tap karte khun chu raha tha…


Nischal bhi ye najara dekha... Khud kitne dard me tha wo yaad nahi, lekin Jivisha ka dard dekh'kar wo chhatpata gaya... Jabki 2 khanjar, dayen aur bayen kinare se, na jane ander kis-kis organ ko chidte huye kamar tak pahuncha tha...


Khanjar ke niche se lagatar khun ki dhar bah rahi thi. Jivisha ki aankhen khuli thi. Dimag bhi poore hosh me tha aur screen ka najara usse Nischal ki toot'ti shwans ka aabash karwa raha tha... Uske aanshu chhalakne lage...


Aur 4 split screen ke bich Arhcemia ki wo paglon wali hansi... Apne heros ko marte dekh aur har grah par badhte khatre ko bhhanp'kar, aam log apne pariwar ko samete... Anjaane bhay ko apne ore badhte dekh rahe the…


"Abhi to yudhh ka pahla ghanta bhi nahi bita hai aur tum sab ghutno par ho. Kya socha rakha tha Astak aur uski vansaj sena ke bare me... Koi aam sena nahi thi ye badjaton, jo tum sab ne kabhi humara mazak bante dekha tha... Mera wada hai aaj ka din khatm hote-hote tumhe apni hansi ka poora pachtava ho jayega"...

"Abhi to bus badhti maut ko dekh'kar aanshu aa rahe honge... Abhi to in 2 nakaaron ko dekh'kar ye ehsas hua hoga ki kamjor ko kabhi bhi lalkarna nahi chahiye... Bus kuchh der ruko, fir inke jaisa haal tumhara bhi hoga... Kaat do in dono ka gala"….


"Abhi itni jaldi bhi kya hai, Arhcemia… jo log mujhe nahi jante unhe main apna parichay deti hun... Mera naam Luna hai, aur main uss bekhuff Sahjade ki sagird hun jo agni ki shwans apne jism me bhar raha hoga"…

"Meri kabiliyat ko dekh'kar mere master ne apne post se retirement le liya, aur mujh par poore middle universe ki sena ke kaman ka bhar daal diya... Arhcemia tu Dark Universe ko sambhal, kyonki aaj ka din khatm hone se pahle, tujhe bhi samjh me aa jayega ki apni maand se dobara apne jahaji bede ko bahar bhej'kar kitni badi galti ki hai... Aur mai Luna, Aizem ki ek jungi sipahi aur OMU ki sena-nayak, wada karti hun, aaj hum koi raham nahi katenge"…

"Soldiers inke 4000 carore viman humari seema ke kafi ander ghus aaye hain… rasta seal karo aur sabko maza chakhao... Ek bhi viman aur uska sawar jinda na jane paye... Screen par bhaukne wali iss joker ko iski aukaad dikhao"…


Antriksh ko ghere arbon mile vimano ka beda... 2000 carore dushman ke viman gol-gol ghera banaye, Viggo viman ke sath 1 carore viman ko ghere khade... Luna ne jaisi hi apni awaj buland ki, middle Universe ke nirjan plnets se jahajon ke bede udd chale...


199 carore Middle universe ke viman kone-kone se ek sath nikle. Kul 199 tukdiyon ki formation me thi... Jisme 2.5 lakh Hayber metel ke viman ke bich me, circle formation ke sath aage 1 carore viman aage badh rahe the... Jo apne sath bich me 5 lakh earth ke fighter jet samete the...


Yun to Astak ke vimano ka humla alag-alag planet par hota, lekin Dark Universe ke vimano ki sankhya itni vishal thi ki universe ke uss hisse me, hawai kshetr me pichhe hone ki jagah hi nahi bachi thi...


Asatk ke sabhi viman phaile huye the aur kayi sare jhundon me alag-alag direction me the... Jin tukdiyon ko planet par utarna tha, wo apne viman ka direction planet ke ore kiye the, aur jinhe Viggo viman aur uske 1 caror ki tukdi par humla karna tha wo sab ke sab viggo viman ke ore mude the...


Viggo viman aur uske 1 carore bede ke pass to arbon miles ka, dushman ke vimano ki ghumavdar sidhiyan bani thi... Humla karne ke liye ek bade circle ke thik kuchh fasle pichhe, pahle circle ke thik upar dusra circle... Aur aise hi fasla bana'kar ek ke thik upar dusra circle banaye 2000 carore viman apni formation bana rahi thi…


Luna ki command ka pahla order ke sath hi 199 tukdiyan apne formation me, 199 alag alag hisson se bahar aayi. Sabhi vimano ke bede apne round circle me aage badh rahe the... Sabhi viman apne aage ke viman se auto coonnect ho'kar, auto pilot mode par chal rahe the...


Sabhi jet viman Luna ke dusre order ke sath hi apne jahaji bedon ko chhod'kar nikal gaye... 8 carore earth ke, makhhi ke saman bhin-bhinate huye aircrafts, un pichhle vimano ke thik pichhe aa chuke the jo apni direction badal sakte the


Bilkul satika ran'niti thi ye Luna ki... Caroron viman ek direction ko face kar rahe the… humla ki soorat me yadi pichhe wala viman, apne aage ke viman ko jabtak space na de, tab tak wo sahi dhang se round laga'kar mudne me asmarth hote... Fir unhe upar ya niche hokar mudne ke liye wah jagah leni padti.. Aur iss vajah se unki katar ki band baj jani thi.


Astak ke viman ke bedon ki itni sankhya thi ki Middle Universe ke vimano ko samne se face karne ke liye unhe mudne ke liye katar todne hi padti aur ek baar katar tootne ke baad bhi inki padesani khatm nahi honi thi, iss baat ka poora calculation Luna kar chuki thi. Kyonki yah koi 100 viman ki katar to thi nahi, jo katar todne ke baad bhi aage-pichhe, upar-niche hokar, sabko apna target dikh jaye


Jaise hi viman mudne ke liye katar todti... Arbon viman chos ki pistion me hote… upar-niche, dayen-bayen... Iss paristhiti me pichhe ke arbon vimano ka target lock kar ke humla kar pana sambhav nahi tha... Jabki Luna ke commanding 1 carore ki tukdi ke pass poora aakash khula tha, aur dushman ke mahaj aage ke kuch lakh viman hi un tukdiyon par nishana laga paate...


Luna apni poori niti laga chuki thi.. 1 carore vimano ki 1 tukdi, 199 alag-alag position par pahunchi aur sidha humla... Missile artilleries ek sath load hona shuru... Jaise hi humla hona shuru hua Central command se, 199 alag-alag positions se humla shuru tha...


Arhcemia sabhi vansaj ke dimag control ki hui thi. Pratham commanding de raha tha... Lekin kaise de wo commanding... 199 position ke liye uske pass 199 alag-alag team ki tukdi kahan thi.. Ab jab commanding aisi ho... "Team Alfa, 5 lakh jahaj pichhe, 5 lakh jahaj 30⁰ north, 5 lakh jahaj west 90⁰, north 120⁰"… Fir to command sunn'ne wala team Alfa ko jaise pahli awaj aayi command ki, to picche mud gaya... Ab Alfa me kaun se 5 lakh jahaj... Arbon jahaj aur sab ke sab Alfa... Ab jab itne confusion me viman ke crew ho to humla kya kare aur kaise kare...


Itne sare position par commanding dena, Surpmarich ke baap ke bus ki baat nahi thi... Uska dimag fuse isliye bhi ho chuka tha kyonki Middle Universe ki pahli kahani ke sath-sath, dark universe me dusri aur teesri kahani chal rahi thi aur anth me yahi faisla hua ki unko bhagya me bharose chhod diya jaye...


4000 carore viman ka commanding head, pahle ghante me hi ghutne tek chuka tha... Kisi ko kuchh samjh me aane se raha ki unite counter attack kaise kare.. Pichhe se aage, 1 carore ki tukdi ko dekh pana muskil tha usme bhi 199 alag alag position me... 1 carore vimano ki formation aisi, ki kisi bhi hawai tukdi aur unke sena naykon ke pasine chhut jaye...


Astak ke lakhon viman ek sath humla karte.. Bilkul hawa me gol deewar sa bana, 2.5 lakh Hyber metal ke viman ka circle aur pichhe poore 1 carore viman ki shrknkhla. Hyber viman ek sath hawa me khade ho'kar apne dushmano ke bade-bade missile humle ko bina anti blastic missile ke sidha jhel rahe the.


Aur jab missile unke ore aa rahi hoti, tabhi Hyber metel ke 1 viman se, pichhe ke 4 viman ko command chala jata... Pichhe ke 4 viman kis angel me target karenge. Sab direction pahle se set hota… 2 second ke liye Hyber metal ki viman, apne pichhe ke vimano ke liye window open karti, 10 carore missile ek sath apne sadhe huye target ke ore aur vimano ka malwa space me...


Rahi sahi kasar earth ke figter jet plane poori kar rahe the... Sab apni tej uddan aur vimano ke bich se gujarte huye, bilkul safe passage lete, dushman vimano ke bich me pahunch chuke the... 199 alag-alag postion se 8 caror earth aurcraft arbon vimano ke jhund ke bich me the... Aage se 1 carore ka beda, Astak ke viman ko dhuan dhuan kar rahe the… bich se ye fighter plane apne single comand ke sath, 32 caror missile ek sath daagne ke turant baad, apne vimano ko dushmano ke viman ke bich se nikal'kar, dusri positin le lete...


Ab to aalam ye tha ki ye log sikudna shuru ho chuke the... 199 alag-alag position se viman jab aage badhne lage, tab unke 199 carore viman0 ke aapas ke bich ki duriyan kam ho rahi thi, aur kinaro se caroron dushman ke viman, jo jabarn unka air space ghere huye the, badi teji se sath saaf hote ja rahe the...


Kis position par humla kare, iss baat ne sabke hosh udda diye... Ab tak bina 1 bhi viman gawaye, Luna lagatar apne viggo viman me baith'kar command de rahi thi... 2000 carore viman jo Viggo viman ke charo ore sidhinuma round circle lagaye the... Ab tak in 2000 caror bedon ko bhi samjh me aa gaya tha ki tadat se kuchh nahi hota, jung aunsasan aur sahi ran'niti se hi jiti jati hai...


Haan lekin arbon missile ka nishana jaroor Viggo viman aur uske sath 1 carore viman the.. 2000 carore vimano se Ghirne ke sath hi, jitne non Hyber Matel viman the wo apne protection formation me pahunch chuke the, jahan kartab hi kartab chal raha tha...


Missile ka jawabi humla, Bitti, Gopal aur uske 10 logon ke team ke hath me thi.. Luna ko bus 1 baar un 10 dragon babies ko samjhana para tha... Kewal 1 baar us dragon babies ne key press accurecy test diya tha. Bitti aur Gopal ki team ke pass Viggo viman se le'kar wahan ke 1 carore, plus 2.5 lakh Hayber metal viman ki missile commanding sab Swatantra roop se thi...


The commanding station, Viggo viman, apne shashakt team leader Luna ki poori dekh rekh me, har bit'te pal ke sath Dark Universe walon ko air strike kise karte hain, wo samjha rahi thi…


Hyber metal vimano ko humle se fark to padne se raha, lekin arbon misslie kisi ek viman ko lage, to body bhale damage na ho, lekin wo apne position se disposition to jaroor hogi...


Sabhi accurate calculation ke sath anti blastic missile ka beda bitti aur uske 4 sahayak dragon babies ke hath me tha... Unki commanding itni tej thi ki kin aati missile ko hawa me blast karna hai aur kise takrane rikna hai, yah sab calculate kar ke poore bede ka accurate balance banayi hui thi...


Wahin 4 sahayak ke sath Gopal poore marak misslile ko oprate kar raha tha... Screen par najar banaye, kis ore se humla kitna tej ho raha hai, aur uske poori team ka nishana 5 alag alag direction...


Situation ye thi ki ek hi waqt me anti blastic missile ke sath, 5 alag-alag positions par, Viggo viman ke sath 1 carore viman ki missiles target kar rahi thi... Itni confusion create hoti ki caroron anti blastic missile ke sath aa rahi caroron distroyer missile aise ulajte ki... Dushman viman anti blastic missile ko bhi nishana bana rahe the, jo pahle se unhi ke kisi ek missile ko rokne ja rahi hoti...


Haan Astak ke vimano ki sankhya itni thi ki viggo viman ko hara pana koi muskil kaam nahi hota, lekin koi command na hone ke karan sab indipendent command me the... Yahan bhi unke round circle dhwast hote ja rahe the... Bitti aur Gopal ki team unki charity me koi kasar nahi chhod rahi thi...


Luna ne ab apne pass ke 5 lakh makkhiyon ko khula chhoda... Earth ke aircrafts madmast apni chal me bilkul vimano ke bich se ghuste huye humla karte upar ke ore badhna shuru kar chuke the…


Inke circle aise dahna shuru ho gaye mano kisi building ki sidhiyan dhwast ho'kar girna shuru ho chuki ho.. Charo ore se hawa me kewal missile hi missle the... Charo ore dhuvan aur malva... Un dhuyen aur malwe ke bich se, hawa me klaa dikhate 5 lakh earth aircrafts. Kab wo apni 40 lakh missles, ek poore circle par girate, kisi ko bhanak tak nahi lagti. Itne close range se ye log missiles gira rahe the ki inke anti blastic missile tak ke pass koi jawab nahi...


Charo ore ke lagatar humle ko dekh'kar Luna ne ek video conferencing OMU mukhyalay ke sath ki... Aur mukhyalay ne Luna ko OMU me sabhi planet par live kiya.


"Aap ki surakha ki jimmedari OMU ke hathon me hain aur aap sab surakhsit hain. Humare war heros ko laut aane dijiye, fir ek jaam jit ke naam toast karenge"….


Chal rahe ladai ke bich Luna apne logon ko poorn aaswashn de'kar, ek baar fir charo ore najar dene lagi... Vimano ki ghamashan aur missile ki ladai me ek ore jahan 199 tukdiyan aage badhti hui apne dushman vimano ko charo ore se samete ja rahi thi, wahin lagbhag 8 carore earth ke aircrafts unhe bich se aisa dard de rahe the, ki jawabi humle me dushman ke viman bus charo ore apne arbon missile ka beda kahin bhi daag rahe the, jo poora beasar...


Wahin Viggo viman ko ghere khade 2000 caror viman ke bedon par to shurwati kahar naa ke barabar hi tha... Lekin jab se earth ke fighter jets ko bahar chhoda gaya.. fir Viggo viman ke artilleries commanding officer, Bitti aur Gopal baith'kar, missile dagne ki series par aise kaam karte gaye, ki inki poori circle teji se dhwast hona shuru ho chuki thi…


Jis circle ko Earth ke fighter plane dha rahe the uss circle ke upar bahut se viman tabah hone ke liye mare ja rahe the, aur dragons team unhi par dhyan kendrit kiye thi...


Umda ran'niti ke sath ab to in 2000 carore vimano bede me bhi teji sendh lagna shuru ho chuka tha… ladte huye takriban 10 se 12 ghante ho gaye jab Luna ke pass command mila aur cease fire ke order mile...


Sabhi viman apni poretection ghere me laut chuke the… Dushman ke bache huye takriban 300 carore viman se bhi firing band ho chuki thi. Issi ke sath Luna apne sabhi viman ko wapas apne base par laut'kar sabhi causlties report karne bol di...


Middle Universe me yudhh samapti ke sath hi adhikarik ghoshna jari karte huye Luna sabko suchit kar dee... "Hum apna kshetr surakhit karte huye, jit hasil kar chuke hain... Dark Universe ke ander se ab tak koi suchna nahi pahunchi hai... Jald hi hum poore yudhh ke bare ek adhikarik ghoshna jari karenge"…
 
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Bhai nishchal ne chir phar khoob kiya Maja aa bhi giyo...but nishchal se Aisi galati ki ummid nhi thi ki wo asatak ko marane turant chal dega ..kya ho gaya aapke charactero ko ye apna 1400 g ka bheja kyo nhi use karte:cry2:...Bhai wo raja hai apne pass pahuchane ke pahale hi wo bahut sari jaal bichhaya hoga ye to clear hai phir bhi aisi galati:slap:saja milegi barabar milegi...lekin asatak bc itna bhi saja na do nishchal ko ki jab wo Bach Jaye to wo tumhare khal me bhusa bharawa de...aur wo bla bla Wala khanjar to uss namurad asatak ke hatho lag gaya...but koi na girkar uthane wale ko hi bajigar kahate hai..mujhe lagata hai ab aayenge guru vashudhar aur wahi ab kuchh guru jyan denge...aur idhar jivisha to full form me hai sabko pel rhi hai dildo laga ke ....lekin girls battal me ek namard pahuch gaya sala kuchh to ijjat rakhata apni aur wo sarvshreshath raniyo ka ...lekin Jo bhi ho yaha jivisha fans gayi ...ab to wo Marne Marne ko hai shayad swetana kuchh karke bacha le ...mujhe to lagata hai ki ju sach me jivisha ko marawakar nishchal Weds hella karawane wale ho...waise ye vardali kafi kutti chij nikali yaar...but ye unke ghar me ghuse hai marane ke liye to ye aise hi thodi ghuse honge kuchh to tagara tikaram bhidaye honge ye bhi..kyoki nishchal aur jivisha unke power ke baare achchhi tarike se janate hai..yani kuchh to golmal hai Jo najaro ke samane hokar bhi nhi dikh rha....waise apne ko bura nhi lagega jab in dono ko asatak maar bhi de to kyoki yuddh me koi na koi harata hi hai koi na koi marata bhi hai..bus apno ki gaddari na ho ....
Kya hai na uska bheje ka gram kam hai... Shayad 600.. isliye aise ul jalool harkat karta hai... Bhag gaye akele batao... Fir itna taam jham kai ko...

Maine samjha diya hai lekin mujhe na lagta ki samjha hoga ek kaam kijiye 400 gram bheja donate kar dijiye... Aap thode niche aa jayen wo thoda upar aa jaye .. 1000-1000 gram par mamala settle karte hain...

Nahi najron ka Golmaal nahi hai... Taiyari gupt hai... I mean ladna kaise hai wo part hi gum hai to kya hi log andaza lagayenge... At par bhi hone ke chances kam hai... Main clear karunga fir poore clear ho jayega... Baki yuddh hai marna aur jina to laga hi rahta hai ....

Thankoo for your detailed revoo
 

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nain11ster bhai aap ne mera comment shayad padha nahi jo mene Ristrcted bhai ki story pe diya tha wo
Padh liya maine ... Bahut der huye padhe ... Main yahan vyast tha comment karne me... And thankooo sooo muchhh... Ye unofficially yahan officially udhar likh dunga... Jald hi har jagah honge... Bahut din ke baad padhna shuru kiya hun na to abhi waqt lagta hai padhne me ... Meri reading speed bahut kam ho gayi... Almost pahle me mukable 40% bhi speed na bachi hai
 

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Nain भाई
Nain भाई लगता है आप हार्ट अटैक करवाके ही मानोगे यार इतना कहतरनाक लड़ाई तो एवेंजर सीरीज मे नहीं हुई थी आप जल्दी से ये बता दीजिये की निश्चिंल ठीक है वरना पूरा दिन बस दिमाक मे यही चलता रहेगा और उस अस्टक की रानी को ऐसी मौत देना की पढ़ने के बाद दिल झूम उठे
110 udate ki story par jab aap 14-15 revoo matr de kar gaye tab main kahne gaya ki dil jala rahe wo bhi corona kal me jahan hawa pani aur intensive care to chhoro... Hospital ke jamin par lota'kar bhi ilaj na kar rahe :( ... Ye aane wale updates bhi aisa hi hai... Aap bhi dil me chubhne ka maza le :D
 

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Bollywood ki avenger movie create kar di hai nain bhai. Kamal kar diya bhai.
 
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