Fantasy Kaisa Ye Ishq Hai ~ Ajab Sa Risk Hai ~ Reload (Completed)

[nain11ster]

Page 766 Se 775 tak har panne par update hai.

Final closing update on page:-792


Issi ke sath Ishq Risk reloaded ka ye season poora hua. Next fantasy journey announce ho jayegi. Ummid hai pahle

"Arymani:- The Pure Alfa Between Two World's."

Yahi aaye... Jo bhi hoga purv suchna mil jayegi... Fihlaal end enjoy karenge... Aur kahani ka poora safar kaisa rahega wo ek baar jaroor sajha karen...


Filhaal Abhi vyast hun ek pure romantic journey par....

<<<< Too Young !! Too Old >>>>​

Aap sab ka hai udhar. Kahani par pahunchne ke liye story title par ulgi karne ka...

<<<< Too Young !! Too Old >>>>​

 

[Xabhi]

Mai to Pahle hi kah chuka hu kya hi kha kr update likhte ho Wao! i mean Wao! Amazing kya kmentry ki hai Nainu bhai nandni ne jo tadka mara hai kya hi kahne maza a gya bhai
Bhaya nishchal or nandni ka mjo version bhi try kro
Superb update with awesome writing skills Nainu bhai

 

[Naina]

Update:- 72 Posted 0n page 531... Check the index ... And don't forget to Like, Comment and Share



Kripya Sabhi Log Upar Ke Quote Se, Ek Baar Hella Stuti Jaroor Padh Len.... Aaj Kal Neet Aur Upsc Ke Paper Me Aane Wala Sambhavit Sa Sawal Hoga..

Neti... Neti..

 

[Naina]

mahol gambhir hai... upor se ye yudh... phir isi bich aise super se upar comedy.. wah kya baat hai.. mood hi fresh ho jaye.. bole to...


Brilliant update with awesome writing skills

 

[Ankitarani]

 

[Naina]

Ek prem kahani Nischal aur Hella ki bhi

 

[SANJU ( V. R. )]

Update:-71 ​

"Ab bardast nahi hota Nischal.. Ye bhumi mujhe dhikkar rahi hai... Mujhe ab bus badla chaiye... HuYu kahan hai bulao usse... Aur bhej do sandesh Dark Universe me.… Hum jald hi uski jamin par honge..… Yahan liye gaye har jivan ka hisab karne"...


Wah hatash thi. Wah nirash thi. Jis barbarta ka parichay Dark Universe walon ne diya tha Jivisha bilkul toot chuki thi...


Sabhi log wahan se sidhe Dridh Aayu Rastr me pahunche... Jahan Jivisha sabse kati-kati gahre sok me dubu hui thi. Yah thik ussi prakar ka dard tha jo kabhi Jivisha ne Aarsi ki bahan sapna ke jane ke baad mehsus kiya tha. Bus frak sirf itna tha ki iss baar kisi insan ko wo apni aankhon se jinda chabati hui dekh rahi thi...


Nischal Sabha bhavan me pahunchte hi, Organization of middle Universe ke mukhyalay, Gleto Planet par Zoren me hui sabhi gahtan ki footage bhej diya. Jisme Dark Unverse ki kartut aur Nischal dwara di gayi saja bhej diya gaya tha... Na sirf Middle Universe me yah khabar Nischal bhej chuka tha, balki Dark Universe par bhi poori footage bhej chuka tha...


Vansaj sena ki kururta aur Zoren par usse di gayi saza, aag ki tarah pure universe me fail gayi thi. Middle Univese sangathan, Astak aur Dark Universe ke against farman jari karte huye, unke viman ko kisi bhi grah ke orbit me ghusne se pahle hi Universe me hi maar girane ke order jari kar chuke the, taki jamini yudhh jaisi koi sbhavna hi na ho... Aur idhar Dark Universe me...


Dark Universe ke core planet me matam sa pasra hua tha.… Pahle se Astak ke liye Vansaj planet sambhalna kafi muskil ho raha tha, upar se Koyyi aur Moyi ke sath huye bhayavah maut ko sabhi Vansaj Planet dekh rahe the.…


Jaise hi Koyyi aur Moyi ke maut ki khabar faili thi, Astak ka control bhi khatm hua. Core aur 4,5 vansaj planet ko chhod diya jaye to takriban 2000 palnet se 40 carore bade aur medium size viman paglon ki tarah Zoren par humle ke liye nikal chuke the…


Sabhi ke sabhi viman dark universe ke uttri seema se, aage-pichhe bina kisi sena commander ke nikle... Jaise hi dark universe ke viman Wishper Planet ke aage badhe, khabar aag ki tarah fail chuki thi ki Drak Universe se fauji viman ki badi si tukdi Zoren par humle ke liye nikal chuki thi...


Middle Universe Organisation ne turant hi ek khabar jari karte huye, sabhi planet ke sabhi country ke pass sandesh bhej'kar Zoren planet par hawai madad bhejne ke orders jari kar diye, jo ek sena commandent Serin ke ander kaam karti...


Khair Middle Univeser organization se madad milti ki nahi milti, Aizem ke 1 carore Sanya viman aur Zoren ke bache takriban 12 lakh viman agle din hi poore Zoren ke Air Space ko ghere huye the… Earth par apni kabliyat sabit karne ke baad First commandent Luna bani hui thi aur 22 commander ke adhin tha pura oreder pranali...


Lagbhag 2 din tak unverse ke alag-alag grah se, takriban 80 lakh bade sainya viman ki madad pahunch chuki thi... Middle Universe ke sath-sath Drak Universe bhi poora najar baanye huye the...


Astak apne core planet par baitha... "Kya lagta hai Messa, humri vansaj sena kitni safalta hasil karegi"…


Messa:- Vasnaj sena yadi kisi ke bhumi par kadam rakh de to humara ek viman uss pure planet ke liye kafi hai... Lekin Middle Universe wale unite hai aur unki kosis hai ki sabhi viman ko Universe me hi dhwast kar dena… kyonki sabko pata chal chuka hai ki hum purani technology istamal karte hain... Aur ek baat... ..


Astak:- Kya???


Messa:- Jitni viman Dark Universe ke bahar gayi hai, bina kisi command ke gayi hai... Na to pahle kisi yudhh me samil huye hain aur naa hi sabhi viman ek sath unite honge... Sab apne hisab se ladenge aur Universe me vansaj sena ka sharir khtam ho jayega..


Astak:- Aur wo Javo...


Messa:- Javo ke pass ran'niti to hai aur ussi par ummid bhi hai... Baki sabhi mare bhi jaye to humare liye fayda hi hai...


Astak:- Ye Surpmarich humare kitne kaam ka hai….


Messa:- Jahan tak kaam ki baat hai to wo Arhcemia se jyada kaam ka hai lekin bahut jyada dhurt hai... Ek din ke kaam ko jaan bujh'kar 1 saal ka samay diya hai... Wo kuchh to apna maksad sadh raha hai…


Astak:- Main janta hun usse kya chahiye... Arhcemia ke sath usse core planet bulao... Hume Arhcemia chahiye warna itna lamba faila samrajya mujhe sikudta hua najar aa raha hai.… Aur ek baat..


Messa:- Kya...


Astak:- Beron ki fauj lekar tum Hella ki madad ke liye prithvi jao... Hum Hella ko kho nahi sakte hain... Prithvi par Orja ko dhundho aur pakad kar lao... Dhyan rahe mujhe tum dono yahan Dark Universe me jinda chahiye... Yahan Surpmarich se jaise hi baithak samapt hogi wo prithvi par humari poori madad karega...


Messa:- Baba ek baat kahun… Prithvi par aap Namia aur uske Vansaj ko bhi to bhej sakte ho...


Astak:- Meri raniyan bahut kimti hai... Aur unke baad tum teeno (Hella, Messa aur Orja) ho... Dobara khyal rahe… Raniyon ko yuddh me bhejne ka vichar bhi na aaye...


Messa "Haan" me apna sar hilata wahan se ek Vansaj Planet Noren par nikal gaya. Ye un 5,6 planet me se ek tha, jo Astak ke hukm ke bina koi kaam nahi karta tha… aur ye Middle unverse ke sabse pass ka planet the jahan se Messa any prajati ke sainikon ke sath apni muhim ko aage badhata tha...


Astak apne bade se screen ke aage baith'kar apne vansaj sena ko aage badhte dekh raha tha.… Serin ko idhar vansaj sainikon ke pal-pal ki khabar milti ja rahi thi... Settelite viman, Universe ke kayi hazar kilometer tak, chappe-chappe par najr dale huye thi.…


Kasak:- Yaar Luna… ek baat bata... In logon ke viman jo Universe me malwa banege to unme baithe fauj ka kya hoga...


Abhishek:- Tujhe universe me fenk'kar dekh lete hain kya hota hai...


Luna:- Hona kya hai, pura sharir chhilka ban'kar udne lagega... Fir pata bhi nahi chalega ki kaun sa aisa skin tha jise koi hathiyar bhed nahi sakti thi...


Asis:- Aisa kya hota hai Universe me...


Luna:- Wahan ka Tapman jo anant minuse digree me hota hai... Aur uss Tapman me koi skin kaam nahi aata hai... Bus ek baar uss Tapman ke cotanct me aa gaye fir khud ke sharir ko parat dar parat Universe me samate huye pate hain…


Abhishek:- Fir to in maans'bhakshi ko main pyaj ki tarah chhilte dekhunga aur mera hi highest score hoga…


Kasak:- Oye Luna ki bacchi mujhe na ek aisa missile de jo pani loaded ho aur uske sath hi ek aur missile nikle. Kewal lohe ka hathoda type missile... Baki main aaj inki nani yaad dila dungi...


Sahil:- Baby bomb se to unka viman bhi tootega lekin unpar pani barsakar aur hathoda maar'kar kya pahle varsha se swagat aur baad me dhol pitogi..


Kasak:- Yahan highest socre chahiye ki nahi to bus khamosh raho aur dekhte jao...


Luna apni team ko turant inform karti, Viggo viman me load pani ko empty missile me load kar'ke Kasak ke command button me de dee, aur sath hi sath kayi sare dummy missile bhi load kar dee jo hathoda ka kaam karte... Jaisa ki kasak ka demand tha…


Kasak ke iss idea par kisi ko yakin tha ki nahi tha, lekin Luna ko Kasak ke idea par itna bharosa hua, ki usne turant Serin se discuss karke, saman dhone wale viman ko bhej'kar Zoren se pani khinch liye aur apne command me bhi aise kayi lakh pani aur dummy missile load kar liye.…


Hansi mazak ke bich 5 din nikal gaye jab pure fauj ko hi alert kiya gaya... Dushman ke viman bade-bade badal saman, jahan se guajar rahe pure hawai kshetr ko ghere aage badh rahe the... 3000 kilometer ki manak duri se unke karwaan ko rokna tha… Serin ne poori fauj ko alert par dala....


Serin ne Astak ke fauj ka poorn jayja liya aur apne aankhen badi karti... "Ye kya musibat hai"…


Viman ki sankhya dekh'kar hi kayi sare Planet ke commander ki haalat kharab ho gayi... Inke 1 viman se ladne ke liye Dark universe ke lagbhag 20 se 21 viman the. Aur aisa bhi nahi tha ki wo chhote-chhote viman me aaye the... Unka medium size viman bhi Middle unverse ke large viman se 2 guna bara tha… Eklauta Viggo viman chhod'kar jiske barabar to kya aadhe ke barabar bhi koi nahi tha…


Jahan 22 commander me se 8 other planet ke commander the unki ghabrahat aur sawal jawab aise hawi huye, ki Serin command sambhalti hui kahne lagi.… "Yahan ke poori sena ki kaman mere hath me hai aur ladai ke waqt ghabra jane wale sainik mere command me nahi chahiye, jinhe dar lag raha ho abhi chale jayen... Luna tum apni report do...


Luna:- 2000 ke dayre par ladenge... Ghera banana mera sujhao hai...


Serin:- Thik hai fir 6 commnder ki team ko tum lead karte huye bhago yahan se... Issi prakar 6,6 aur commander ki team ko Zoren ki vayu seema se tod diya gaya aur unhe seperate command de diya gaya... Seperate command milte hi wo log bade bade viman ke sath charo ore diaperse ho gaye...


Unhe disperse hote dekh vansaj sena ke hausle buland ho gaye... Tabhi Viggo viman me sandesh aana shuru hua... "Majah mutthi bhar fauj hai mere samne… tik nahi paoge kiron-makodon. Ya to raste se hato ya marne ko taiyar ho jao...


Serin:- Abe harami Astak ke faltu ki paidaish... Astak ke school me ek galat path bade jodon se padhaya jata hai... Wo hai khud ko shresth maan'na. Iss se pahle wo tera Dreda, baad me Hella, fir wo judwaa bahan Koyyi aur Moyi... Ab tu... Wada hai tumse, jab ye ladai samapt hogi... Tab tumhare Dark Universe se ek chepter hata diya jayega... Hum hi sarvshresth hain... ..


Baton ke dauran hi Vansaj fauj 3000 kilometer ki duri paar kar chuki thi... Serin ne sab ko hold kiya... HuYu apne seperate viman me baitha lagatar keyboard par apni ungliya chalaye ja raha tha... Dushman badi teji ke sath pass aa rahe the...


Serin:- Prithvi se aaye humare sathi, sabhi ko pahla mauka score banane ka.… Baki sabhi sainya daste hold karenge...


Kasak:- Ye hui na baat..… Sahil jaldi se shuru ho jao... Target lock karo...


Idhar, Abhishek aur Asis ke pass unki patniyan nahi thi... Luna apna fauji jattha le'kar nikal chuki thi aur Ert Zoren grah par hi thi, isliye ye dono ab sath kam kar rahe the.…


Asis:- Abhi bhai kya kahte ho, inhe pahle kis chij ka maza diya jaye...


Abhishek:- Wo Chocklet missile ka command do... Inki anti-blastik missile system ko jarra jhatka den... .


Serin apni aankhen badi karti…. "Dono Chor, mera idea tum dono ne churaya hai... Kasak tum gawah rahna iss baat ka... Main to Luna aur Ert ko bataungi.... Kaise dono me mere choclet missile istamal kiya...


Asis:- Jealous girl... Chalo ab jarra hume score karne do...


Asis target lock karta gaya aur Abhishek button press kar raha tha... Ek sath 10 missile alag-alag target par chala chuke thr… Jaise hi unke missile 1000 km ki duri par the, tabhi Vansaj fauj ki anti-blastik missile se uske sabhi missile takraye... 2 missile ke bich takkad se Asis dwara bheje sabhi mssile ka cover dhwast ho gaya...


Har missile dhwadt to hua, lekin unke missile me barud tha nahi jo fat jata. Barud ke jagah ek bade missile ke ander, syring numa chhote-chhote 2 fit ke missle bhade the, jo aadhe se jyada barbaad hone ke baad bhi, 1 missile me se kam se kam 50 syring nikle honge, aur har syring ko dobara command diya gaya... Ye siyring 40 ke jhund me wapas se 10 alag alag target ko ore chal diye…


Unhe rokne ke liye fir 200 se 300 anti blastik missile aur chalti… Jab'tak vansaj sena 2 baar me 200 se 300 anti-blastik missile chalate, pichhe se 10-10 ke set me Asis aur Abhishek aur missile ka chhod dete... Fir se wahi sab hota, lekin in sab ke bich Serin ke team se bheje gaye 10 missle me unke 210 se 310 anti blastik missile lagne shuru ho chuke the...


Idhar HuYu lagatar apne haath chalate huye finally key board par enter dabate... "Pure visuals ab humare control me hai... Koi bhi palnet iss yudhh ko dekh nahi payega... Shuru ho jao ek set humle ke liye"…


Idhar jaise hi HuYu ne Serin se jankari sajha ki Serin hansti hui... "Mere pass aao HuYu tumhe chumne ka mann kar raha. Abhi gurumata ka humla to dekh lun uske baad command deti hun"…


Kasak:- Haan kar rahi hun meri humshakal pahle abhi dekhne to do kahan humla karna hai...


Serin:- Main hint deti hun... Niche pendi me... Thik viman ke bich me engine ka ek section hota hai, wahan ka external layer patla hota hai, poore viman ki apeksha… aur sath me wahan par engine ka air space bhi rahta hai, jis se viman ke ander ghusa ja sakta hai...


Kasak:- Thanks humshakal…


Itni info kafi thi… Kasak ne Missile daga... Uske missile ke sath bhi wahi hua... Raste me hi dwast kar diya gaya. Lekin har missile se uske bhi 2 kilo pani ka pouch lohe ke gol box me band... Ghinghinate huye aage badhne laga...


3000 se 2000 km ke bich me aane tak kewal 2 log hi humla karte rahe aur unke anti blastik missiles ke stock ki dhajjiyan udda chhuke the... Iss baat par bhannaye vansaj sena ne anti-blastik missile ke sath-sath apna missiles ke bhi humla shuru kar diya aur har kisi ka nishan viggo viman…


HuYu:- Ye Shikar to chara nigal gaya Serin... Sala kitne bewkoof hai...


HuYu ki baat par Serin bhi hansne lagi. Vansaj sena ke arbon missile ek sath Viggo viman par chale the. Ye sankhya itni jyada thi ki Serin se sabhi 4 tukdi milkar bhi ek sath anti-blastik missile chalati to bhi lakhon missile ek sath Viggo viman se takra'kar uski dhajjiyan uda deti.


Lekin aage jo hua wo kisi chamtkar ki tarah tha, jo Astak Sena ke humla ka balatkar kar chuka tha. Sabhi missile poora hawa ko dakti chali to thi Viggo viman par humla karne, lekin 200 km tak ka safar karne ke baad har missile ek chhote se virtual point par humla kar raha tha… Astak fauj ke viman ke 200 km aage jakar arbon missile aise blast kar rahe the ki uske dhamakon ki dahsat se khud vansaj sena ke viman dahsat me aa rahe the...


Sabhi vansaj sena ne aanan fanan me dobara humla shuru kiya... Fir teesra chautah... Lagatar humala kiye ja rahe the aur aage badh rahe the lekin unka humla mano Viggo viman me na lag'kar sab aapas me hi takra gaye ho...


Bhannaye kuch viman ne apne humle ka target badal diya ab wo Viggo viman ko chhod'kar anya viman me nishana lagane lage... "Not bad enemies… lekin salon bahut der kar diye"…


Darasal Viggo viman ki virtual frequency set ki gayi thi... Jiska virtual point kayi hazar km dur ek chhote se point ko bana diya gaya tha... Ye log paglon ki tarah ek sath arbon missile aise chhodte ki anant brahmand ka khulla hissa bhi missile se poora dhaka hua najar aa raha tha. Lekin Sabhi missile ek chhote se point par aise dhwast ho rahe the ki teji se badhne wala Astak Vansaj ke viman apni jagah ruk'kar humla karne par vivash the kyonki matr 200 km par unhi ke missile aise blast ho rahe the ki unki Chapet me khud unka viman aa jata...


Ek to aage badhne ka abhiyan ruk gaya upar se paglon ki tarah missile par missile dagne ke karan unke 70% missile khatm ho chukr the… haan lekin ye apni 30% kshmta me bhi in logon se kayi guna jyada missiles rakhte the...


Jaise hi Vansaj ke kuch viman ne Serin ke dusre viman ko target kiya, tab kahin jakar Anti blastik missile chalaya gaya... Haan lekin ab Serin ke liye samasya badhne wali thi..


Serin sabhi viman ke anti blastik missile ke sath apni sabhi 4 commander tukdkiyon ko humla karne ka order deti hui... "Sabhi disperse team ek sah alag-alag disha se close range humla karo…. Yadi inke sabhi viman humari team par ek sath humla karte hain, fir humare pas ek waqt me utni sari anti-blastik missile nahi hogi...


Sabhi commander ek sath... "Don't worry... Hum postion par hai"…


Luna ko jaise hi apne Aizem ke 6 tukdi ka command mila, bade viman ko chhod'kar sab ke sab chhote ladake viman me pahle se sawar the... Takriban 18 lakh chhote viman aur 18 lakh fauji command ke intzar me...


Luna single command oreder deti... "Sabhi ek sath close range me aaj unhe dikha do ki Universe ke hero humare siwa koi nahi"


Luna ke sabhi viman ghum'kar thik unke pichhe pahunch chuki thi… 18 lakh viman apni purn gati se madrane lage... Jaise hi wo unke karib aane lage... Vansaj sena pichhe ke ore humla karne ki sochte uss se pahle hi dayen, bayen aur samne se humla shuru ho gaya...


Aur samne ka humla me iss baar Viggo viman apni purn kashmta me humla kar chuka tha... Pani ke pouch ke piche lohe ke utne hi bade gole, toot'kar jab unke viman ke nichle hisse se takraye… pahle to enegine jama aur baad me lohe ki ball aise bhed rahi thi mano koi kanch ko lohe ki ball bhed raha ho...


Wahin dusri ore wo syring jaise hi viman ke diwaar se takarati, uske ander ka acid jamne se pahle viman ke chhat ko damage kar jata aur ek sath 40, 50 acid chhat me aise surakh bana jate, ki fir to Universe ka temperature hi ander sab kuch jama jata... Emergency exit se nikalne wale jitne bhi panel the, fir to unpar bhi wahi humle hone lagte...


Abhi itna sitam kam tha ki Luna ke ek ishare par 300 se 400 meter ki duri par close range se humle hone lage... Ye humla itna kaargar tha ki unke anti bilastik missile tak kaam na aaye... Idhar Aizem ke chhote viman par jab humla hota aur wo blast karti, tab'tak pilot emergency panel me sawar aur fir un emergency exit panel ko wapas se bade viman dwara khinch liya jata...


Luna ki puri team restless thi aur koi viman blast bhi hota to pilot wapas se apne naye aur chhote viman me sawar ho jata... Dekhte hi dekhte 40 caror ki tadat jab kamti hona shuru hui tab uska poora najara universe ko dikhaya jane laga...


Ab chhote missile ki jagah bade-bade kargar missile dage ja rahe the... Kyonki unke anti blastik missile to ho chuke the khatm...


Charo ore se jab shikast hasil shuru ho gayi, ussi bich 5 carore ka ek bada viman ka jhund khud ko tabah karte huye aage badhne laga..


Ye Javo ki tukdi thi jo kuchh vansaj sena ke tukdi ke sath cordinate karke aage badhne lage... Aisa laga jaise ab aakhri dav khelne nikle ho... Na humla kar rahe the na humla se bach rahe the .. Apne bich me 10000 viman ko safe rakhte huye utni hi teji se badh rahe the...


Dekhte hi dekhte ye itni teji se karib panhunche ki takriban 2000 viman Zoren ke vayumandaliya kshter me the... Jisme takriban 5 lakh vansaj sena, Joyo ke command wali force thi… Jab wo Zoren me ghus rahe the tabhi Serin ne unhe sandesh bhej diya...


"Hawa ka swad to humne chakhya... Jamin ka swad ab Nilbhut aur Dridh Aayu Rastr ke log tumhe chakhayenge... Aur unke shashak aur Shashika jab tumhe maut ke darshsn karwayege, tab aaj tum mishrit paidaish ko apna vansaj kahne wale Astak ke dil me bhi khauff paida ho jayega.… Jao maut tumhari pratiksha me hai"..

क्या बेहतरीन नजारे थे जब आसमां में अस्तक के चालीस करोड़ विमान और निश्छल और उसके साथियों के अस्सी लाख विमान " स्टार वार " कर रहे थे ।
और जिस तरह से सेरिन ने कमांडर की भूमिका निभाई वो तो अद्भुत था । कसक को न जाने " पानी और लोहे का हथौड़ा वाला मिसाइल " आइडिया कहां से आ गया ! पर गजब का असरदार साबित हुआ वो ।
ये एक विहंगम दृश्य था । आसमां में एक दूसरे को परास्त करने का अनोखा फाइट था । गजब ।

नमिंया .... शायद अस्तक की कई रानियों में से एक है । लगता है इसके पास भी कुछ शक्तियां हैं तभी मेसा ने इसका जिक्र किया । अस्तक को अपने लड़के और लड़कियों के युद्ध में पार्टिसिपेट होने से प्रोब्लम नहीं है पर अपनी पत्नियों से है । शायद इसका भी कुछ कारण होगा !

आसमानों की सीमा सुरक्षित करने के बाद अब जोरोन ग्रह की जमीं तैयार है अस्तक को एक और शिकस्त देने के लिए । लेकिन सुपरमेरिच के दो अंश भी तो यहीं पर ही हैं न ?

बेहतरीन अपडेट नैन भाई । आउटस्टैंडिंग अपडेट ।

 

[Nevil singh]

Update:-72 ​

"Hawa ka swad to humne chakhya... Jamin ka swad ab Nilbhut aur Dridh Aayu Rastr ke log tumhe chakhayenge... Aur unke shashak aur Shashika jab tumhe maut ke darshsn karwayege, tab aaj tum mishrit paidaish ko apna vansaj kahne wale Astak ke dil me bhi khauff paida ho jayega.… Jao maut tumhari pratiksha me hai"..


5, 6 din beet chuke the. Jivisha ab bhi ekant vash me hi thi..… Usne bahar aane se mana kar diya tha. Iss dauran wo Shwetna se 2 baar mili iske alawa wo kisi se bhi nahi mil rahi thi. Baki mahal ke jis bade hisse me Jivisha thi wahan kewal dragon baby aa-ja rahe the...


Ladai wale din Nischal ek jhil ke kinare baitha hua tha. Kayi sare dragon baby pet bhar machhli kha'kar wahin Nischal ke pass hi lot-pot kar rahe the... Kuchh dragon baby thode bore dikhe aur unhe shararat sujhne lagi. Koi Nischal ke baal khinch raha tha, to kisi ne Aag ka chhota sa spray uski ungli par kar diya...


"Abe baap ke dushman, apni maa ko ja'kar bolta kyon nahi ki wo itne din se sok me kyon hai???... Janta sok ke sath-sath ab to mujhe patni sok bhi hota ja raha hai"…. Nischal apna sar ghuma'kar un dargons baby ko aankhen dikhate huye kahne laga...


Sabhi dragon ek katar banate huye apna sar uncha karke, apni aankh Nischal par gurraye aur gusse se dekhne laga… Nischal bhi unhe hul dete... "Chal nikal le beta warna baap ko hul dena manhga na par jaye"…


"Bus bhi kar in bacchon ko dantna... Jise daantna chahiye usse to kuchh kah nahi pate"…. Nandni, Nischal ke pass baith'ti...


Ek Kinare se Ansh uske pass baitha aur beer ki ek bottol badhate.… "Kya baat hai Jivisha ka khunnas uske bacche par nikal rahe"…


Nandni, Nischal ke sar par hath ferti... "Kya hi kare bechara... Suhagraat ki subh muharat bit gayi aur iska subh milan na hua".…


Nischal:- Kamine ho tum dono miyan biwi... Hat yahan se, mazak urrane aa gaye...


Ansh:- Ab maine kya kar diya jo mujhe khinch rahe ho isme...


Nischal:- Bahut dhil de rakhi hai aapne doctor sahab... Biwi ko control me rakho..


Nandni:- Tu to rahne hi de re jodu ke gulaam. Aaj tak kabhi teri himmat hui hai Jivisha se kuchh kahne ki... Iss jaisa lover na dekha hoga Ansh...


Ansh:- Kaise..


Nischal:- Bus bhi kar maze lena, warna dono ko niche jhil me fenk dunga..


Ansh:- Chup karo Nischal... Janu tum kuchh lover ke bare me kah rahi thi...


Nandni:- Arree pahli mulkat me hi iski madam ko love at first site hua aur wo isse.…


Nischal, Nandni ka muh apne hathon se dabate... "Tu kuchh nahi bolegi samjhi... Samne screen par dekh, action shuru hone wala hai"…


Ansh bada sa 100 futiya screen par samne ka najara dekhte.… "O' teri ye to lag raha hai 8, 10 lohe ke grah move kar rahe hai"…


Nandni bhi apni aankhen badi karti hui... "Abe ye kya hai... Ye jahaj ka beda kya hum par humla karne aa rahe hain"…


Nischal:- avrage viman ka size 600 meter² bhi maan le. Dark universe ke 40 carore viman hain total soch le kitne kshetrfal me faile honge. Aur unpar lagbhag 2400 caror log sawar hai…


Nandni:- Ye sala Astak mental ho gaya hai kya???...


Ansh:- Kayi carore kilometer tak kewal viman hi viman faila hua hai kya???... Ye sab kya pure universe par dadagiri karne aaye hain???...


Nischal:- Naah.. ye sirf Zoren par humla karne aa rahe hai...


Nandni:- WTF,... Itne viman ki to parking na hogi pure Zoren grah me... In salon ke pass dimag ka abhav hai kya???


Ansh:- Kash inke mukhiya se baat kar'ke puchh sakta… kyon be mental, ye fauj bheja hai haahaakaar...


Nischal, beer ki bottol aage badha'kar toast karte…. "Haan to hum live commentary karenge, aur yadi jit rahe honge tab Astak se bhi contact karenge...


Nandni:- Oye mujhe na marna hai abhi... Mere abhi bacche bhi nahi huye hain... Ek beta aur ek beti to chahiye hi.… Mujhe na marna...


Nischal:- Tera to waise bhi jyada charbi wala maans hai... Maze se tujhe hi pahle chabayenge...


Nischal hanste huye Doctor sahab ke sath hi-fi karne laga aur idhar aa gaya Nandni ko gussa... Aisa dhakka dee ki Nischal sidha pani me chhapak... "Pagal bhinga dee pura.… Doctor sahab ne bhi to hi-fi kiya tha, usse to kuchh na kahi"..


Ansh:- Nahi Nandu wo hum dono ke bich aag laga raha... Jalta hui hume dekh'kar.…


Nandni:- Baby kudo...


Ansh:- Kya???


Nandni:- Ya to kud jao ya mai pichhe aag lagwa dun... jarra aaju baju dekh lo... Aur kudo...


Ansh bechara apne charo ore dekha, charo ore udte dragon babies hi najar aa rahe the... Majboori me wo bhi kud gaya.…


Niche se ek paun Nischal aur dusra paun jaise hi Ansh ne pakda, dono ko unke hisab se jhannatedar jhatka laga... "Agar dobara pani me khinchne ki kosis kiye na to dekh lena"…


Ansh:- Ye to galat hai hume bhinga'kar khud bahar baithi ho...


Nandni:- Baat ko samjho baby, fir kabhi hum pool party kar lenge...


Ansh upar aa'kar ek aur beer ki bottol kholte... "Sarasar nainsafi. Hume bhinga'kar tum upar rahi aur jabardasti kiya to power istamal kar rahi ho"


Nandni Ansh ke kaan me kuchh kahi aur wo "Ohhh" karta hua "Sorry" kah diya. Dono hi muskura'kar ek dusre ko dekhne lage... Tabhi Nischal dono ki nautanki dekhte... "Ab ye to had hai doctor sahab... Kaan me Nandni ne aisa kya romance ka mantr foonk di, jo sikayat se sidha romance par utar aaye"…


Ansh, Nandni ke aankhon me khote... "Bechari ne ander bra nahi pahna hai"…


Nischal apne muh par hath rakh'kar hansne laga aur khoye se mahol me jab doctor sahab ko dhyan aaya ki wo kya bewakoofi kar chuka tha... Tab'tak Nandni uske baal noch'kar wahan se ja chuki thi...


Kuchh der baad jaise hi wo wapas pahunchi.… "Ab pani me kudne ki taiyari se aa gayi kya???"


Nischal apni baat bola aur dono (Ansh aur Nischal) thahake laga'kar hasne lage...


Nandni:- Pagal ho dono.… Besharm kahin ke.. Screen par dhyan do. Dushman lagbhag dware khade hain..... Unke viman 3000 km ke dayre me aane wale hai… ruk main HuYu se sampark karti hun...

Jaise hi upar space me line connect hua.... "HuYu dar to nahi lag raha hai"…


HuYu:- Bus bhid hai itna hi kah sakte hain... Baki abhi pahla focus unke teji se aage badhne ki gati par break lagaana hai...


Nischal:- Jitna ho sake utna sambhalna... Zoren me najdik jab ye aa jaye, fir unko niche utarne ka rasta de dena... Yahan Shwetna apni poori taiyari me hai… Aaj ka yudhh khatm hone tak inhe joker na ghoshit kar diya tab kahna...


HuYu:- Oh ho aisi baat hai kya... Bus ek stretgy complete ho jane do fir main Middle Universe aur Dark Universe ko ek sath connect kar dunga... Ye dark Universe wale jitna khud ke sarvshresth hone ka dhol pite hain... Poore universe me samne ek shandaar bejjati to ye deserve karta hai...


Nandni:- Wada raha, iss Astak ki bejjati karne me koi kasar na chhodungi... HuYu bus dhyan rahe ki iss baar apni yuddh niti koi chura na paye...


HuYu:- Pura visuals control kar raha hun… uske alawa pura ka pura inka contact pranali thap karne wala hun... Main ek viman se dusre viman tak information na pahunchne dun.… Bus apna stretgic part sab plan ke hisab se ho... Tab jakar main poore universe ko connect karunga... Taki dushman se le'kar dost tak sab humare air-strike dekh sake...


HuYu ke sath baat'chit ho hi rahi thi, itne me Aasis aur Abhishek ka humla shuru ho gaya... Nandni ne missile ko jab sub-missile me toot'te dekhi... "O' teri ye kiska idea tha"...


Nischal:- Aur kiska, jo sena ko command de rahi hai ussi ka.... Hawai yudhh me Serin jaisa sena nayika poore universe me nahi hai.…


Nandni:- Ye Middle Universe me sabhi kanjar planet hai kya??... Yahan 6000 palnet se matr 80 lakh viman aaye aur wo Astak walon ne to jaise poore universe par hi kabja karne layak viman ka beda laye hon...


Nischal:- Unhe tadat me yakin hai aur Serin ko apni ran'niti me…


Yudhh shuru hote hi shwans tab tham si gayi, jab missile ka jakhira upar me kayi hazar kilometer ki chhat banate, Viggo viman ke ore badhe... Nischal, Nandni aur Ansh teeno hi apne shwans thame bus screen dekh rahe the...


Lekin kuchh hi pal baad, teeno apne beer ki bottol takrate huye jhum uthe... Astak vansaj dwara chhode gaya missile jab kuchh hi dur aage ja'kar blast hona shuru hua, fir to Serin ki poori ran'niti ne vansaj sena ke caroron kilometer tak faile jahaj ke bedon ko hi naap diya...


Ek kusal sena nayika ke jaal me Astak ki ant'hin fauj ka ek bada sa hissa lapeta ja chuka tha... Fir to rahi sahi kasar Luna ne apni kashmta se poora kar dee, jab uske command ke 18 lakh ladaku viman, najdik se vansaj viman ke sar par nishana laga'kar badhte chale ja rahe the...


Vansaj sena ke king size caroron viman VS Luna ke command ke piddi se viman... Jo Astak ke bade viman par ek missile daag deta... Javavi karyavahi me jab Luna ke sianikon par humla hoti... Wo teji se upar niche hokar kartab dikhate wo vansaj sena ke 2 bade vimano ke bich se aisa nikalta ki aadhe se jyada to un logon ka humla khud ke hi viman par ho raha tha..


Luna ka command aur Aizem ke 18 lakh viman... Jab vansaj sena ke bade viman ko tabaah karti pichhe se aage badhne lagi fir to Vansaj sena khud me asahay samanya mehsus karne lage the…


HuYu jab sunischit hua ki ab ladai kitni bhi der chale, jit apni tay ho gayi hai, fir usne mirchi lagane ka kaam shuru kiya... Astak ke bare me jitna bhi HuYu ne suna tha, itna hi suna tha ki ab tak isse kisi ne thik se sunaya nahi..


HuYu, Nischal aur Nandni ko unki baaten yaad dilate huye, Middle Universe aur Dark Universe ko connect kar diya. Middle state palnet organization ke mukhyalay Galeto Planet me jaise hi prasaran shuru hua, wahan ka mukhiya screen par aate.… "Kya status hai wahan ka"…


Nischal:- Shahsak Koredor kya lagta hai in chuhon ki fauj ka kya status hona chahiye...


Koredor:- Serin poore bede ko udher dali kya?... Wo line par hai kya jo khud ko sarv'shresth kahta hai, Astak...


Nandni:- Muh chhipa liya hoga kahin, wo mishrit bacche paida karwa'ke apna naam dene wala Astak... Na aayega samne muh jo kaala ho gaya hai...


Koredor:- Tumhe pahli baar sun raha hun... Kaun ho tum...


Nischal:- Ye Nischal ki female version hai Nandni.. aur ye hain inke jodi doctor Ansh... Medical science ke vidwan aur dono prithvi se hain…


Koredor:- Kya baat kar rahe ho... Prithvi niwasi hume dekh rahe hai... Kya main inhe apne mehmnanvaji ke liye nimantran de sakta hun... Meri badi jigyasa tha...


Nandni, hairani se dekhti isharon me hi... "Abe ye mujhe kyon invite kar raha hai"…


Nischal:- Koredor abhi nahi, abhi to pahle usse line par bulao jo khud ko sharv'shresth kahta hai... Astak, sale ganda khun, kahan muh chhipaye baitha hai... HuYu jarra hack to karo iss Astak ke planet ko... Aur Astak ka visuals dikhao jarra..


Nischal ka itna bolna tha ki samne se wo ghinauna chehra wapas se dikhne laga... Wahi bada sa singhasan aur uss par baitha Astak...


Jaise hi samne screen par Astak najar aaya, thik ussi waqt poore middle Universe ke sabhi planet ki sabhi countries ke shasak, ek sath online aa gaye...


Nandni, jor se hansti hui.… "Ye joker kaun hai jo villan ke getup me itne bade singhasan par baitha hai...


Nischal, ungli ko point karte…. "Issi ghonchu ka naam Astak hai... Jo apne yahan ke mahilaon ke garv me 10-12 tarah ke bij ko dal'kar bacche paida karwata hai, aur fir kahta hai ki wo mera vansaj hai... Kyon be chutiye bolta kyon nahi"..


Astak apne aakhon se hi sole barsate.… "2400 se 2500 carore vansaj sena ki tukdi tumhe bahut badi lag rahi hogi, lekin ye humare fauj ka 10va hissa bhi nahi... Aur na hi wo kisi sena ki command me hain... Ye man mauji fauji hai... Inhe dekh'kar tu Astak ka andaza laga raha"…


Nandni:- Abe O pakau bus kar... Wo dekh harami teri fauj.man mauji fauj… chutiye, kya sikhaya re inhe. Kitna bhi command na ho to kya hua, ek jahaj to maar nahi sakte aur khud ko Universe ka dada bulata hai.… (Fir samne se thukti hui)… Ja'kar kahin dub mar, gandi nali ke me rengne wale badbudar kide.…


Nandni ki baat sun'kar Astak bilkul pagal sa ho gaya tabhi Nischal….. "Yaar Nandu, kahin wo tere baton se mar gaya... Fir main ghasit, ghasit'kar marunga kise"…


Astak:- Aaj tumhara waqt hai... Bol lo... Jis din tumhara samna mujhse hoga...


Nandni:- Uss din tu joker ke sath-sath bander bhi ban jayega. Idhar se udhar uchhal kud karte Nischal se jaan bachata firega… aur yahi hoga likh le...

Nandni ki baat sun'kar Nischal aur Ansh dono jod jod se hasne lage... Fir to jaise uska poora mazak, poora Middle Universe hi uddane laga... Ek ore jahajon ke bede dhwast ho rahe the, wahin dusri ore Astak ka wo kauff hawa hota najar aa raha tha... Upar se Nischal aur Nandni ki jodi... Aur bechara Astak... Nandni bolti to Nischal baat ko aage pakad'kar khinch deta, aur Nischal jab apni baat kah'kar shant hota tab Nandni shuru ho jati...


Astak mano tabla bana hua tha, jispar Nischal aur Nandni bari-bari se hath saaf kar rahe the, aur bich-bich me doctor sahab bhi taal thok dete...


Nandni:- Kyon be jokar, kuchh kahega bhi ya muh se fu, fu bus karta rahega... Nischal jitna ye aur iske najayaj gande khun, khud ko Astak vansaj bulate hai... Unhe update ho'kar aaj se Joker ke vansaj kahte najar aane chahiye...


Issi bich Astak chillate huye..... "Itni dur se kutte bhi sher ko dekh'kar bhaukne lagte hain"…


Nandni:- Haan lekin tu sust kutta hai..… Thik se bhaunk bhi nahi paya... Tu ek kaam kar pahle kutte ke sath rah'kar traning poori kar le...


Astak:- Aukaad me rah'kar baat karo…


Nischal:- Yaar tu chillate huye kafi funny lag raha hai...


Nandni:- Haan aisa lag raha hai jaise joker gussa dikha raha hai... Waise suna hai ek joker ki jodi (Surpmarich) ko tu apne saran me rakha hai...


Astak:- Tumhari technology shandar hai isliye itna uchhal rahe ho... Koi baat nahi aaj se pahle Universe me aisa khatra hoga humne uss par gaur nahi kiya... Koi baat nahi humari jald hi mulakat hogi... Tab tum napunsak kidon-makodon par humre fauj ki chhoti si tukdi hi hawi hogi... Ye jitni tadat se mere vansaj gaye hain... Uska chhota sa hissa bhi kafi hota yadi wo tumhare jamin...


Nischal:- Ruk be chomu... Ye bata tere hisab se yahan ke liye kitni fauj kafi hogi...


Astak:- Javo ki 10 hazar ki tukdi hi tumhe tumhari aukaad dikha degi...


Nandni:- "Na be joker ye attitude aata kahan hai tum me... Nischal abhi 5 lakh se upar ki fauj ko yahan utarne ka rasta batayega... Aur hum teeno yahan baith'kar commentry karenge aur tere jokergiri ke kayi namuno ko marte dekhenge"...

"Sale yadi tu haar gaya to jaisa ki mere doston ne wada kiya tha ki wo teri jamin par honge aur un 40 hazar ki lash wahin girayenge, jo yaham ke masoom ko chaba'kar gaye the... Bus harna to un 40 hazar ke sath apni sena bhejna... Wo kya hai na malal na rahe ki wahan gaye aur faltu me sabo chid-faad diya Nischal ne, aur jise maarna tha usse maar na paye...


Astak:- Haaa haaa haaa haa..


Nischal:- Abe chutiye hasna baad me, haan ya na bol jaldi... Warna meri bahan tere Javo ko wahin Universe me vilin kar degi aur humare sath jude Middle Universe ke baki log tere joker'giri ke aur namune dekh nahi payenge…


Nischal ki baat par Astak ne shart manjoor kar liya... Nischal ne turant Astak ke sare viman ke ander ki visuals lena shuru kiya... Kuchh hi der me Astak ke confirmation ke baad Nischal, Javo se sampark karte...


"Sun be chutiye… Najayaj paidaish ko naam dene wale tere baap Astak ne mujhe challnge kiya hai ki tere 10 hazar ki fauj kafi hai humare liye..... Rasta main batata hun... Jaldi karega to tere 5 se 10 lakh log mere jamin par honge... Hawai humle me fisadi sabit huye, jamin par kuchh takkar dena tum napunsak 12-15 bij ke natijon...


Javo, pure aawesh me.… "Hum jab wahan honge".…


Dr Ansh:- Chup me kutte... Abhi yahan aa hi raha hai na to kar'ke bata na kya krega.… Muh se kaahe hag raha hai...


Nischal aur Nandni dono hairani se ghurte.… "O Teri doctor sahab"…."Ansh baby.. tum to surprise machine ho gaye... Kabhi-kabhi lambe jhatke de jate ho"…


Ansh:- Areee bus bhi karo aur pahle mujhe ye batao ki yahan se jab tum dono live commentary karoge, to kya wahan Jivisha akeli ladegi.…


Nischal aur Nandni dono ek sath...… "Ab bol diya so bol diya... Jo hoga dekha jayega"….

Astak ko toh bina paani ke bhigo bhigo ke maara nischal ansh v nandni ne
Bahut patli haalat kar ke majbur kar diya joyo ki firki lene v yamlok ki sair karane ko jivi ke hatho
Bahad utam gunvatta ki hanshi ki goli sang laaye hai bandhu zaansheen update

 

[11 ster fan]

nahi yaar woh baat nahi hai..maine usko phele bhi samjhaya tha ki mujhe koi interest nahi hai relation rakhne mein bhale wo mujhse kitna bhi pyaar kare.. And u know what? usne apni cousin ke naam se mujhe msg bheje.. Tujhe to pata hi hai.. aur sabse zyaada hairaan to main is baat pe hu k log kitne dhyan se msg pad rahe hai jaise mera koi personal msg galti se send ho gya ho.. happy april fool day in advance zada dimaag matt lagao!!!

 

[SANJU ( V. R. )]

aaj wo dukh aur dard ki ghadi aa hi gayi... dil tadap uthe jab jamayi aur saas sasur ke bich hi jung chhid jaaye
Kya kabhi ambar se, Surya bichhadta hai
Kya kabhi bin baati, Deepak jalta hai..
Kaisi hai ye anhoni, Har aankh huyi nam
Chhid gayi ye ladayi kirdaar apno ke hi bich...
Kaise bardast kare hum ,

Hella ab Tuhi kinara, tuhi sahara
Tu jag sara, tuhi ek matra taara.. plz kuch to karo
....
Nischal & Hella nirbal chaabal hai
Hella hone wali ardhangini hai nischal ki..
agar hella aur nischal ek ho jaaye to
Kan-kan mein hai khush'haali
Jhoome hai daali daali
Hum readers pe bhi jo rim-jhim barse
Hai baadal se
Tum dono hi woh amrit ki dhaara.
......................
Btw heavy action ki suruwat ho chuki hai.... aur jis tarike se scenes create ki hai aapne wo sachme adbhut aur vismayakari hai.... jo apne apme aasadhaaran aur kabile tarif hai
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills naniu ji

सही में ! दुःख दर्द की घड़ी तो आ ही गई ।

 

[SANJU ( V. R. )]

Samajik kartyavya ko nibhate huye... Sadak par ek toote pare ko hospital pahunch'kar aaya tha... Holi ki sham mujhe laga eklauta wahi abhaga hai jo bhang kha'kar ang bhang karwa chuka....

Bilkul sunsan sadak par baap baap kar raha tha tab main aur mohalle ke kuchh ladkon ne usse admit karwaya tha... Issi vajah se jana para tha...

वाह ! बहुत बढ़िया नैन भाई ।