Thriller Kahani

[Ng_TheViper]

Superb... really good start..

Shiva ka character pura mystery bana dia .. hai Kon shiva, uska sapna Sach h ya bs sapna waise jis tarah ki baatein ho rahi h aur khud Shiva jis tarah ka h issue to lag Raha h ki Shiva ka sapna Sach hi hoga.. but wo deen duniya s Durr pahadiyo k pass Kya Kar Raha h aur chothe kon h jiske liye Shiva jungle Jane ko tayyar hogaya .. kher ye to Janna padega ..

Waise commissioner dhund rahe h Shiva ko aur HM b Shiva k sath h bs underworld hi Dara hua h to Shiva police walahi hoga kyuki muljim to bs kanoon s darti h aur kisi s ni aur police b kisi killer ko aise ni dhudnegi ..


Well flashback m pata chalega Kya scene h Shiva ka..

 

[Raj142]

Superb update bhai
Waiting for next update
XP pe post kite hue sare update de do

 

[Shivay chauhan]

Superb... really good start..

Shiva ka character pura mystery bana dia .. hai Kon shiva, uska sapna Sach h ya bs sapna waise jis tarah ki baatein ho rahi h aur khud Shiva jis tarah ka h issue to lag Raha h ki Shiva ka sapna Sach hi hoga.. but wo deen duniya s Durr pahadiyo k pass Kya Kar Raha h aur chothe kon h jiske liye Shiva jungle Jane ko tayyar hogaya .. kher ye to Janna padega ..

Waise commissioner dhund rahe h Shiva ko aur HM b Shiva k sath h bs underworld hi Dara hua h to Shiva police walahi hoga kyuki muljim to bs kanoon s darti h aur kisi s ni aur police b kisi killer ko aise ni dhudnegi ..


Well flashback m pata chalega Kya scene h Shiva ka.

 

[Shivay chauhan]

Thanks vipre bro for analysing facts but there are many things which are still un close wait and watch

 

[Shivay chauhan]

Raj bro mere paas koi bhi update save nahi bas apni yad dasht ke sahare hi update de raha hu

 

[Shivay chauhan]

Next update Will be deliver soon

 

[Raj142]

Waiting

 

[Prince sarkash]

Great job bro

Keep going

Will wait for next update

 

[lover585]

waiting

 

[Shivay chauhan]

Update 6

Shiva sir baki sabhi log jungal ke beech o beech pahuch jate waha pahuchte pahuchte unhe sham ke 5 baj gye the magar nazara kafi khoobsurat tha charon hariyali hi hariyali thi pedon ke jhund ke beech o beech ek jagah sabhi logo ne rukne ka faisla kiya shiva ne apna bag rakha aur us me se ek wajandar kulhadi nikali dekhne se lag raha tha ki uska wajan kam se kam 8 kg toh hoga hi shiva use utha kar apne andhe pe rakh leta hai aur jungal me andar ki taraf chalne lagta hai kuch door jake wo bina mude hi kahta hai .

Shiva – chhote kisi ko kahi jane mat dena mai abhi ata hu .

Chhote – theek hai guru .

Shiva jungal me andar ki taraf chal deta hai tabhi nisha kahti .

Nisha – chhote shiva ne ye kyu kaha ki kisi kahi jane mat dena .

Chhote – are koi khas baat nahi hai bas kuch dino se is jungal me ek adamkhor bhediya aa gya hai isiliye guru ne kahi jane se mana kiya hai .

What Adamkhor bhediya

Sabhi ke muh se ek saath nikla toh chhote kahta hai .

Chhote – darne ki jarurat nahi wo is taraf nahi ata .

Sabhi log apne apne kaam me lage hue the rohan aur rahul tents laga rahe the aur nidhi aur nisha khana banane ki taiyari kar rahi thi sab kuch ready tha magar shiva ka abhi tak koi atapata nahi tha nisha ke chahre pe anjane me hi sahi magar chinta ke bhaw aa jate jise nidhi dekh leti hai wo kahti hai .

Nidhi – kya hua nisha tum pareshan kyu lag rahi ho .

Nisha – shiva abhi tak nahi mujhe uski fikar ho rahi hai .

Tabhi rohan waha aaj jata hai .

Rohan – kis ki fikar ho rahi hai .

Nidhi – shiva ki

Rohan – tumhe us machenic ki fikar kyu ho rahi bhai sala akdu kahi ka .

Tabhi unhe ek shaks apni taraf ata hua dikhai deta jab wo shaks thoda pas ata hai toh pata chalta hai ki wo aur koi nahi shiva hai aur uske baye kandhe pe ek lakdi ka bada sa gudda rakha hua aur daye haath me wo kulhadi hai gudda kafi bhari tha magar shiva use bade aram se utha ke la raha tha jaise ki koi tahni utha ke la raha ho uska shareer paseene me latpat tha uska kala rang aur bhi dilkash lag raha tha nisha toh use bas dekhti hi rah gai usne us bhari bharakam 6 feet lambe sir kareeb 1 ½ chaude gudde ko zameen pe rakh deta hai aur apni kulhadi se uske tukde karne me lag jata hai kareeb ek ghante me usne us gudde ke chhote chhote kafi tukde kar diye the jitni bar bhi wo kulhadi upar uthata uske baju phool jate chhote ko chhod kar baki sabhi log use hairani se dekh rahe the unhonne aaj tak itna fit aur taqatwar shaks haqeeqat me nahi dekha tha shiva ka shareer bhi kisi model ya wrestler se kam nahi tha agar uske uski tulna Arnold schewenzer ya Sylvester styallon se ki jaye toh galat nahi hoga lakdi ke gudde ke tukde karne ke baad wo sabse door ek kone me baith jata hai aur aur apne bag mese ek double bullet wishky ki botal nikal kar peena shuru kar deta hai nidhi aur nisha khana banane me lag jati wahi rohan aur rahul chhote ke saath masti karne lagte hai raat ke karee 8 baj rahe the nisha chhote se kahti hai .

Nisha – chhote darling jao aur shiva ko bula lao khana taiyar hai .

Chhote – mai tumhe kitni samjhao ki meri already ek girlfriend hai aur mai kyu bulau guru tum khud bula lo .

Nisha ko toh jaise bahana hi chahiye tha shiva se baat karne ka nisha turant shiva ke paas chali jati hai abhi tak shiva adhi botal khali kar chuka tha aur apna Cuban cigar pee raha tha aur lagatar chand ko ghoore ja raha tha nisha shiva ke paas jake khadi ho jati hai magar kuch bol nahi pati kuch der wo yu hi khadi aur shiva ko niharti rahti hai wo use kuch der aur dekhti agar shiva use rokta nahi toh .

Shiva – kya baat hai tum yaha kya kar rahi .

Nisha jaise neend se jagti hai aur hadbada ke kahti hai .

Nisha - wo wo mai wo mai.

Shiva – ye mai wo mai wo kya laga rakha hai saaf saaf batao baat kya hai .

Shiva ne apne chit parichit rookhe aur sakht laheje ke kaha agar shiva ki jagah koi aur hota toh shayad nisha usse lad jati magar shiva se use ladne ki koi tamanna nahi thi wo kahti .

Nisha – khana taiyar hai aa jaiye
Shiva – mujhe bhook nahi hai hai tum log kha lo .

Shuva ne fir se usi andaz me kaha nisha apna sa muh leke wapas aa gai use udas dekh kar rahul kahta hai.

Rahul – kya hua nisha tera chahra kyu utra hua hai .

Nisha kuch nahi bolti aur bechari bolti bhi kya use khud nahi maloom ki uske saath akhIr ho kya raha khair ye sab toh waqt aane par hi pata chalega philhal sabhi log kha pee kar sone ki taiyari karne lage the magar ab ek aur badi samsya thi air samsya ye thi ki tents sirf do hi the unhe kya maloom tha ki yaha unhe koi bhi mil jayega toh kafi soch vichar ke baad ye tay hua ki shiva ko rohan aur rahul ke tent ne adjust kar diya jaye toh yahi kahne ke nisha phir se shiva je paas pahuch jati hai wo kahte hai na agar koi accha lagne lagta hai toh uski har baat acchi lagne lagti hai jab nisha shiva ke pahuchti hai toh shiva chand ko ghoore ja raha tha jaise dono me koi jung ho ki kaun pahle apni nazre hatayega nisha shiva se kahti hai .

Nisha – ji wo hum log sone ja rahe hai .

Shiva – toh .

Nisha – aap rohan aur rahul ke saath unke tent me so jaiye .

Shiva – tum meri fikar mat karo mai yahi theek hu aur waise bHi mujhe raat me neend nahi aati .

Shiva ne chand ki taraf dekhte hue apne chit parichit rookhe aur sakht laheje me kaha.

Nisha – aap itne rude kyu ho .

Shiva – tumse matlb .

Nisha waha se pair patak pe chali aati hai apne tent me ghus jati hai chhote rohan aur rahul ke saath so jata hai raat ke kareeb 12 baje the nisha ki ankh khul jati hai na jane use kya soojhati hai aur wo apne tent se bahar nikal aati hai aur shiva ko dekhne lagti hai magar shiva waha nahi tha raat chandni thi toh dekhne koi dikkat nahi hoti nisha us taraf bhad chlti hai jaha shiva baitha hua tha kuch door jate hi uske pair thithak jate hai use ek awaz sunai deti hai jab wo awaz ki disha me dekhti hai toh uski sans upar ki upar aur neeche ki neeche hi rah jati aur ho bhi kyu na usse theek 10 feet ki doori pe ek surkh lal ankhon wala bhediya khada tha nisha jad si khadi rahti hai wo bhagna chahti thi magar uske pair uska nahi de rage the mano zameen se jam gye ho bhediya dheere dheer uske paas aane lagta kuch aane ke baad wo upse chhalang laga deta …


Kya hoga aage kya nisha bhediye ka shikar bab jayegi kya yahi nisha ka ant ya kuch aur kya koi nisha ko us Adamkhor bhediye se bacha payega aur bachayega toh kaun bachayega janne ke liye saath bane rahe