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Anjali aur Supriya apne apne kamre me baithe ek hi baat soch rhe the. Ki damaad ji apne as pas har ladki vo vaise kapdo me dekhna pasand karte hai aur hm unke saath hi rehne waale hai, kya vo hmse bhi aisi ummeed rakhte hai?
Anjali (apne man me) – Hme to aj tak yahi kaha gya hai, ki dhake hue kapde pehno, dekh ke jhuko, dupatte ka dhyan rakho, aanchal sambhaal ke rakho, kamar dhak ke rakho.. blouse aage se jyada deep na ho, blouse peeche se jyaada deep na ho. Mera kabhi kabhi dil bhi kiya vaise kapde pehenne ka to chhup chhup ke apne room me pehen ke dekh liya. Pehle mere papa, fir Prachi ke papa jo bolte gaye mai karti gayi ar wahi Prachi ko bhi sikhaya ar Prachi bhi wahi kr rhi hai jo uske husband use bol rhe hai.
Ap Anjali apne ap ko convince karne ki koshish kar rhi hai.
Kya mai bhi aise kapde pehnu, ya fir wait karu Sandeep ji ke demand karne ka. Shayad vo mujhe kabhi na kahe ar fir mere armaan dil me reh jaayenge. Supriya se baat karti hun.
Ar Supriya ke room ki taraf chali jaati hai.
Supriya bhi gehri soch me thi, Arre Di aao baitho.
Anjali – Kya soch rhi thi?
Supriya – Wahi sab jo ho rha hai.. Kya hmse bhi Sandeep yahi umeed karega?
Anjali – Vo chhod, tu ye bta ki tera kabhi man kiya aise rehne ka?
Supriya – Kiska man nahi karega, but as paas ke logon ke dar se sab kuch chhup ke kar liya.
Anjali – Hme mauka mil rha hai apne armaan pure karne ka, mai ise khona nahi chahti.
Supriya – Kya di, ap tyar ho ye sab ke liye.
Anjali – Haan, mujhe sirf dar ye hai ki damaad ji kabhi hmse kahe hi nahi ki hme vo us tarah se dekhna chahte hai ar teri dosti bhi unko aisa kehne se rok sakti hai
Supriya – Ye to hai, fir kya kare?
Anjali – Ek idea aa rha hai mere dimaag me. Jaise Prachi ko vo Dheere Dheere apne rang me dhaal rhe hai, hme shuruat khud se kar deni chahiye ar smart to vo hai hi. Uske baad hukum chalaane hi lagenge.
Supriya – Chalo theek hai, koshish karte hai..
In sab ke dimaag me aise baatein chalne ki teen wajah hai. Pehla - Prachi ko vaise dekh ke khud ke armaano ki yaad, Teesra – Mere ghar pe Komal ar Aarti ko vaise dekhna.
Doosri vajah sabko
Bahut hi badhiya update diya hai m.abstain bhai....Update 9
Anjali aur Supriya apne apne kamre me baithe ek hi baat soch rhe the. Ki damaad ji apne as pas har ladki vo vaise kapdo me dekhna pasand karte hai aur hm unke saath hi rehne waale hai, kya vo hmse bhi aisi ummeed rakhte hai?
Anjali (apne man me) – Hme to aj tak yahi kaha gya hai, ki dhake hue kapde pehno, dekh ke jhuko, dupatte ka dhyan rakho, aanchal sambhaal ke rakho, kamar dhak ke rakho.. blouse aage se jyada deep na ho, blouse peeche se jyaada deep na ho. Mera kabhi kabhi dil bhi kiya vaise kapde pehenne ka to chhup chhup ke apne room me pehen ke dekh liya. Pehle mere papa, fir Prachi ke papa jo bolte gaye mai karti gayi ar wahi Prachi ko bhi sikhaya ar Prachi bhi wahi kr rhi hai jo uske husband use bol rhe hai.
Ap Anjali apne ap ko convince karne ki koshish kar rhi hai.
Kya mai bhi aise kapde pehnu, ya fir wait karu Sandeep ji ke demand karne ka. Shayad vo mujhe kabhi na kahe ar fir mere armaan dil me reh jaayenge. Supriya se baat karti hun.
Ar Supriya ke room ki taraf chali jaati hai.
Supriya bhi gehri soch me thi, Arre Di aao baitho.
Anjali – Kya soch rhi thi?
Supriya – Wahi sab jo ho rha hai.. Kya hmse bhi Sandeep yahi umeed karega?
Anjali – Vo chhod, tu ye bta ki tera kabhi man kiya aise rehne ka?
Supriya – Kiska man nahi karega, but as paas ke logon ke dar se sab kuch chhup ke kar liya.
Anjali – Hme mauka mil rha hai apne armaan pure karne ka, mai ise khona nahi chahti.
Supriya – Kya di, ap tyar ho ye sab ke liye.
Anjali – Haan, mujhe sirf dar ye hai ki damaad ji kabhi hmse kahe hi nahi ki hme vo us tarah se dekhna chahte hai ar teri dosti bhi unko aisa kehne se rok sakti hai
Supriya – Ye to hai, fir kya kare?
Anjali – Ek idea aa rha hai mere dimaag me. Jaise Prachi ko vo Dheere Dheere apne rang me dhaal rhe hai, hme shuruat khud se kar deni chahiye ar smart to vo hai hi. Uske baad hukum chalaane hi lagenge.
Supriya – Chalo theek hai, koshish karte hai..
In sab ke dimaag me aise baatein chalne ki teen wajah hai. Pehla - Prachi ko vaise dekh ke khud ke armaano ki yaad, Teesra – Mere ghar pe Komal ar Aarti ko vaise dekhna.
Doosri vajah sabko thodi der me pta chalegi.
Very good start of the story. Bahut achha build up kar rahe ho.
Thanks so muchMast start hai. Kahani achhi tarah build up ho rahi hai.
Thanks so much.Bahut hi badhiya update diya hai m.abstain bhai....
Nice and lovely update....