Great update brother.Chapter 4
Waise toh gates humanity ke liye danger the, lekin unke saath hi woh ab humanity ki nayi lifeline ban chuke the. Unke andar milne wale Aether Stones, Monster Cores, rare aetheric minerals aur arcane flora yeh sab Earth ke fossil fuels ko replace kar chuke the.
Inki wajah se energy systems super-charged ho gaye the, medicines aur bhi advance ho chuki thi, aur agriculture poori tarah se change ho gaya tha.
Ab har ek major city mein ek Gate Nexus hota tha, jise local Hunter Association monitor karti thi, aur unke saath guilds patrolling karti rehti thi.
India apni special geography aur Aether veins ki wajah se ek global powerhouse ban chuka tha. Desh ke 9 S-Rank hunters national heroes the, aur unmein se kuch Defence Council ke advisors bhi the.
Wahin India ki economic capital, Mumbai, mein 2 S-Rank hunters station kiye gaye the taaki woh Arabian Sea ke volatile zone ko guard kar saken.
Green aur Blue Gates India ke aether export ke sabse bade sources mein se ek the. Akhand Energy aur Suryatek Defence jaise corporations in gates ke mining operations se kaafi profit kama rahi thi.
Private guilds aur government joint operations mein resources ko split karte the, aur iske saath hi hazaaron workers aur hunters ko employment bhi mil rahi thi.
Lekin is industrial miracle ke neeche ek dar hamesha chhupa hua tha pata nahi kab, kahin par ek Red Gate open ho jaaye.
Kya ho agar next time jab koi powerful gate open ho, toh woh kisi dungeon se connect hone ke bajaye kisi aise world se connect ho jaaye jo human minds ki understanding se hi bahar ho?
Kabhi-kabhi jo scholars in gates ki anomalies ko study karte the, woh yeh bhi kehte the ki yeh gates random nahi hain. Shayad yeh humare liye ek test hain aur real trial ka start hona abhi baaki hai.
Doosri taraf, Satara region ke forest area mein kuch movement ho rahi thi.
Aaj aasman bilkul clear tha, is wajah se moon aur stars forest par kaafi clearly shine kar rahe the. Hawa poore forest ke andar se jaise dance kar rahi thi, aur gire hue leaves us hawa ke saath udte hue ek calming sound create kar rahe the.
Tabhi, bina kisi warning ke, un woods ke beech ek shimmering portal open hua.
Lekin yeh portal un sab portals se bilkul alag tha jinke baare mein humanity jaanti thi.
Yeh ek golden portal tha jo chaos se nahi, balki cosmic will se form hua tha. Jaise hi woh portal bana, hawa ka flow dheere ho gaya, aur sab kuch jaise slow motion mein chala gaya ho.
Us portal ke andar se ek figure bahar nikli.
Uske steps unstable the, aur uski breathing abhi bhi normal nahi hui thi. Uski body par abhi bhi woh marks the jo use apni last battle mein mile the.
Woh koi aur nahi… Veer tha.
Suryadev ki us nothingness ke andar portal open karne ke baad, Veer usmein enter kar gaya tha aur ab woh is world mein aa chuka tha.
Is world mein aate hi Veer ne ek gehri saans li aur upar night sky ki taraf dekha. Aasman bilkul clear tha. Use aisa laga jaise moon aur stars uske aane par aur bhi zyada brightness ke saath shine kar rahe ho.
Apni saanson ko control mein lane ke baad, Veer ne apne aas-paas dekha.
Woh kisi forest ke beech mein tha. Ab use yahan se nikal kar kisi aise area tak jaana hoga jahan humans rehte ho, taaki woh jaan sake ki woh exactly kahan hai.
Usne ek pal ke liye apni body ko dekha.
Jahan pehle uski body par ek golden armor hota tha jo uske chest, stomach aur poori back ko cover karta tha ab wahan kuch bhi nahi tha.
Uske kaanon mein jo pehle sun-shaped earrings (kundal) hote the, woh bhi ab gayab the.
Dark Being ko completely destroy karne ke liye, Veer apne armor aur earrings dono ki powers use kar chuka tha.
Veer ne apni aankhen close ki aur apni saanson ko steady karne laga.
Jab Veer ne apni aankhen open ki, tab use apne aas-paas ek ajeeb si energy feel hui.
Yeh energy jaise poori hawa mein faili hui thi, lekin Veer is energy ke saath resonate nahi kar pa raha tha.
Veer ki aankhen shine hui, aur us shine ke saath woh hawa ke flow mein is ajeeb energy ko ek halki chamak ke saath dekh pa raha tha.
Sirf hawa mein hi nahi balki is world ki har cheez mein yeh energy maujood thi. Soil, trees, hawa har jagah Veer is energy ko dekh aur feel kar pa raha tha.
Saath hi, use yeh energy unstable bhi lag rahi thi. Jaise yeh is world ke liye bani hi na ho, lekin phir bhi is world mein iska presence tha.
Tabhi Veer ko kuch sense hua.
Usne palat kar ek direction ki taraf dekha.
Forest ke andar se koi bhaagta hua uski taraf aa raha tha.
Lekin jo bhi tha, woh ladkhada raha tha jaise kaafi injured ho aur kaafi der se bhaag raha ho. Usne apna ek haath apne chest par rakha hua tha.
Moon aur stars ki halki roshni mein Veer dekh pa raha tha ki us person ki back se kuch ghusa hua tha jo uske chest se bahar nikla hua tha.
Veer ne do-teen steps aage liye aur aane wali situation ko face karne ke liye ready ho gaya.
Tabhi woh person bhaagte-bhaagte aa kar Veer se crash ho gaya.
Woh bhaagte hue bhi peeche ki taraf dekh raha tha, is wajah se use pata hi nahi chala ki Veer uske saamne khada hai.
Us pal mein jaise time ruk sa gaya ho.
Veer aur us person ki aankhen ek-dusre se mili, aur dono ki saansein jaise ek pal ke liye tham si gayi.
Veer jaise ek moment ke liye saans lena bhool gaya. Uski heartbeat bhi jaise ruk si gayi thi.
Kyunki jo person abhi uske baahon mein tha…
woh koi aur nahi, balki bilkul usi jaisa dikhne wala Veer khud tha.
Uske baal, uski aankhen, uska face sab kuch same.
Jaise Veer khud ko ek mirror mein dekh raha ho.
“Kaun…?”
Shock mein Veer ne us person se poocha.
Lekin doosra Veer, jo apni last saanson ko gin raha tha, woh bhi apne jaise dikhne wale insaan ko dekh kar shock ho gaya tha.
Uski aankhen surprise aur confusion se badi ho gayi thi. Woh kuch kehna chahta tha, lekin awaaz uske gale mein hi atak gayi…
aur Veer ki baahon mein hi uski saansein ruk gayi.
Yeh dekh kar Veer aur bhi zyada shock ho gaya.
Usne doosre Veer ko neeche ground par lita diya aur uske paas jhuk kar baith gaya. Usne uska haath rub karte hue kaha,
“Na… nahi… please ruk ja. Apni aankhen band mat kar…”
Lekin ab Veer kuch bhi nahi kar sakta tha.
Doosra Veer uski baahon mein hi apni aakhri saans le chuka tha.
Veer bilkul samajh nahi pa raha tha ki ab kya kare.
Tabhi ek aur shock use laga.
Doosre Veer ki body halki si starlight ke saath shine karne lagi, aur dekhte hi dekhte woh shining stardust mein transform ho gayi.
Woh stardust hawa mein ghoomne lagi aur phir dheere-dheere Veer ki body par land karne lagi.
“Yeh sab kya ho raha hai…?!”
Veer apni baat poori bhi nahi kar paaya tha ki achanak uske mind mein extreme pain utha.
Woh stardust sirf uski body mein hi nahi, balki uski soul mein enter ho kar uske saath merge ho gayi.
Aur uske saath hi, doosre Veer ki memories bhi jo ab Veer ke mind ke saamne is world ke Veer ki poori life dikhane lagi.
Veer ke muh se ek zor ki cheekh nikli, jo poore forest mein ghoonj gayi.
Veer cheekhte hue apne ghutnon par gir gaya.
Usne apne dono haathon se apna sir pakad liya tha.
Yeh pain sirf physical nahi tha balki psychic aur spiritual bhi tha.
Is ek hi moment mein Veer is world ke Veer ki har ek memory ko experience kar raha tha.
Is single painful moment mein Veer sirf memories hi nahi dekh raha tha, balki yeh bhi samajh raha tha ki yeh world kaise work karta hai.
Jaise uske past world mein Veer ki ek family thi, waise hi is world ke Veer ki bhi family thi bas kuch changes ke saath.
Past world mein uske father ek civil servant the.
Is world mein uske father ek firefighter ke saath-saath hunter bhi the.
Lekin 10 saal pehle, woh ek Yellow Gate ke andar apni poori team ke saath gayab ho gaye the.
5 saal pehle, is world ke Veer ki maa ek coma-jaisi state mein chali gayi thi.
Yeh woh state hoti hai jahan kuch humans ki body zyada aether presence ko handle nahi kar paati, aur us wajah se alag tareeke se react karti hai.
Is world ke Veer ki maa ke saath bhi yehi hua tha.
Doctors aur scientists is state ke aage fail ho chuke the, kyunki kisi ko bhi yeh nahi pata tha ki kisi ko is condition se kaise bahar nikala jaaye.
Isi wajah se pichhle 5 saalon se is world ka Veer aisi field mein kaam kar raha tha jahan har roz uski death hone ke chances the.
Aur aaj… uski death Veer ki baahon mein ho gayi thi us Veer ki, jo doosre world se aaya tha.
Jaise past world mein Veer ki ek chhoti sister thi, waise hi is world ke Veer ki bhi ek chhoti sister thi.
Woh abhi high school mein thi aur apni studies par focus kar rahi thi.
Uska dream tha ki woh badi hokar doctor bane, aur apni maa ko is coma-jaisi state se bahar nikaale.
Iske saath-saath Veer woh sab bhi feel kar raha tha jo is world ke Veer ne ab tak experience kiya tha
har woh moment jahan uski death hote-hote reh gayi thi,
har woh insult jo use dusron se mili thi.
Veer ne apni fist tightly close ki itni tight ki uski mutthi se khoon nikalne laga.
Usne ek baar phir upar aasman ki taraf dekha aur zor se chillaya.
Yeh cheekh kisi physical pain ki nahi thi, balki is world ke Veer ke liye thi
jisne itna sab hone ke baad bhi hope nahi chhodi thi.
Usne apna har dard sabse chhupa kar rakha, taaki uski chhoti sister ko kabhi yeh pata na chale ki woh kis situation se guzar raha hai.
Veer ke liye, is world ke Veer ka pain us pain se bhi zyada painful tha jab usne apna past world chhod kar us nothingness mein entry li thi sirf Dark Being ko face karne ke liye.
Aur jab haarne ke baad Suryadev ne use bataya tha ki uska world apni life cycle complete kar chuka hai aur ab wahan kuch bhi baaki nahi bacha.
Veer ne poori force ke saath apne dono haath zameen par de maare.
BOOM!
Us area mein ek bada crater form ho gaya.
Paas ke trees jaise ground se ukhad kar gir gaye.
Dust ka ek cloud bana, aur uske centre mein Veer aankhen band kiye hue gehri saanse le raha tha.
Woh apni aur is world ke Veer ki memories ko dheere-dheere settle kar raha tha.
Veer ab thoda-thoda samajh pa raha tha ki kyun Suryadev ne use is world mein bheja hai.
Kaafi der tak wahan baithne ke baad, Veer khada hua.
Usne ek gehri saans li, upar aasman ki taraf dekha, aur phir us direction mein chal pada
jahan se is world ka Veer bhaagte hue uski taraf aaya tha.
Awesome updateChapter 4
Waise toh gates humanity ke liye danger the, lekin unke saath hi woh ab humanity ki nayi lifeline ban chuke the. Unke andar milne wale Aether Stones, Monster Cores, rare aetheric minerals aur arcane flora yeh sab Earth ke fossil fuels ko replace kar chuke the.
Inki wajah se energy systems super-charged ho gaye the, medicines aur bhi advance ho chuki thi, aur agriculture poori tarah se change ho gaya tha.
Ab har ek major city mein ek Gate Nexus hota tha, jise local Hunter Association monitor karti thi, aur unke saath guilds patrolling karti rehti thi.
India apni special geography aur Aether veins ki wajah se ek global powerhouse ban chuka tha. Desh ke 9 S-Rank hunters national heroes the, aur unmein se kuch Defence Council ke advisors bhi the.
Wahin India ki economic capital, Mumbai, mein 2 S-Rank hunters station kiye gaye the taaki woh Arabian Sea ke volatile zone ko guard kar saken.
Green aur Blue Gates India ke aether export ke sabse bade sources mein se ek the. Akhand Energy aur Suryatek Defence jaise corporations in gates ke mining operations se kaafi profit kama rahi thi.
Private guilds aur government joint operations mein resources ko split karte the, aur iske saath hi hazaaron workers aur hunters ko employment bhi mil rahi thi.
Lekin is industrial miracle ke neeche ek dar hamesha chhupa hua tha pata nahi kab, kahin par ek Red Gate open ho jaaye.
Kya ho agar next time jab koi powerful gate open ho, toh woh kisi dungeon se connect hone ke bajaye kisi aise world se connect ho jaaye jo human minds ki understanding se hi bahar ho?
Kabhi-kabhi jo scholars in gates ki anomalies ko study karte the, woh yeh bhi kehte the ki yeh gates random nahi hain. Shayad yeh humare liye ek test hain aur real trial ka start hona abhi baaki hai.
Doosri taraf, Satara region ke forest area mein kuch movement ho rahi thi.
Aaj aasman bilkul clear tha, is wajah se moon aur stars forest par kaafi clearly shine kar rahe the. Hawa poore forest ke andar se jaise dance kar rahi thi, aur gire hue leaves us hawa ke saath udte hue ek calming sound create kar rahe the.
Tabhi, bina kisi warning ke, un woods ke beech ek shimmering portal open hua.
Lekin yeh portal un sab portals se bilkul alag tha jinke baare mein humanity jaanti thi.
Yeh ek golden portal tha jo chaos se nahi, balki cosmic will se form hua tha. Jaise hi woh portal bana, hawa ka flow dheere ho gaya, aur sab kuch jaise slow motion mein chala gaya ho.
Us portal ke andar se ek figure bahar nikli.
Uske steps unstable the, aur uski breathing abhi bhi normal nahi hui thi. Uski body par abhi bhi woh marks the jo use apni last battle mein mile the.
Woh koi aur nahi… Veer tha.
Suryadev ki us nothingness ke andar portal open karne ke baad, Veer usmein enter kar gaya tha aur ab woh is world mein aa chuka tha.
Is world mein aate hi Veer ne ek gehri saans li aur upar night sky ki taraf dekha. Aasman bilkul clear tha. Use aisa laga jaise moon aur stars uske aane par aur bhi zyada brightness ke saath shine kar rahe ho.
Apni saanson ko control mein lane ke baad, Veer ne apne aas-paas dekha.
Woh kisi forest ke beech mein tha. Ab use yahan se nikal kar kisi aise area tak jaana hoga jahan humans rehte ho, taaki woh jaan sake ki woh exactly kahan hai.
Usne ek pal ke liye apni body ko dekha.
Jahan pehle uski body par ek golden armor hota tha jo uske chest, stomach aur poori back ko cover karta tha ab wahan kuch bhi nahi tha.
Uske kaanon mein jo pehle sun-shaped earrings (kundal) hote the, woh bhi ab gayab the.
Dark Being ko completely destroy karne ke liye, Veer apne armor aur earrings dono ki powers use kar chuka tha.
Veer ne apni aankhen close ki aur apni saanson ko steady karne laga.
Jab Veer ne apni aankhen open ki, tab use apne aas-paas ek ajeeb si energy feel hui.
Yeh energy jaise poori hawa mein faili hui thi, lekin Veer is energy ke saath resonate nahi kar pa raha tha.
Veer ki aankhen shine hui, aur us shine ke saath woh hawa ke flow mein is ajeeb energy ko ek halki chamak ke saath dekh pa raha tha.
Sirf hawa mein hi nahi balki is world ki har cheez mein yeh energy maujood thi. Soil, trees, hawa har jagah Veer is energy ko dekh aur feel kar pa raha tha.
Saath hi, use yeh energy unstable bhi lag rahi thi. Jaise yeh is world ke liye bani hi na ho, lekin phir bhi is world mein iska presence tha.
Tabhi Veer ko kuch sense hua.
Usne palat kar ek direction ki taraf dekha.
Forest ke andar se koi bhaagta hua uski taraf aa raha tha.
Lekin jo bhi tha, woh ladkhada raha tha jaise kaafi injured ho aur kaafi der se bhaag raha ho. Usne apna ek haath apne chest par rakha hua tha.
Moon aur stars ki halki roshni mein Veer dekh pa raha tha ki us person ki back se kuch ghusa hua tha jo uske chest se bahar nikla hua tha.
Veer ne do-teen steps aage liye aur aane wali situation ko face karne ke liye ready ho gaya.
Tabhi woh person bhaagte-bhaagte aa kar Veer se crash ho gaya.
Woh bhaagte hue bhi peeche ki taraf dekh raha tha, is wajah se use pata hi nahi chala ki Veer uske saamne khada hai.
Us pal mein jaise time ruk sa gaya ho.
Veer aur us person ki aankhen ek-dusre se mili, aur dono ki saansein jaise ek pal ke liye tham si gayi.
Veer jaise ek moment ke liye saans lena bhool gaya. Uski heartbeat bhi jaise ruk si gayi thi.
Kyunki jo person abhi uske baahon mein tha…
woh koi aur nahi, balki bilkul usi jaisa dikhne wala Veer khud tha.
Uske baal, uski aankhen, uska face sab kuch same.
Jaise Veer khud ko ek mirror mein dekh raha ho.
“Kaun…?”
Shock mein Veer ne us person se poocha.
Lekin doosra Veer, jo apni last saanson ko gin raha tha, woh bhi apne jaise dikhne wale insaan ko dekh kar shock ho gaya tha.
Uski aankhen surprise aur confusion se badi ho gayi thi. Woh kuch kehna chahta tha, lekin awaaz uske gale mein hi atak gayi…
aur Veer ki baahon mein hi uski saansein ruk gayi.
Yeh dekh kar Veer aur bhi zyada shock ho gaya.
Usne doosre Veer ko neeche ground par lita diya aur uske paas jhuk kar baith gaya. Usne uska haath rub karte hue kaha,
“Na… nahi… please ruk ja. Apni aankhen band mat kar…”
Lekin ab Veer kuch bhi nahi kar sakta tha.
Doosra Veer uski baahon mein hi apni aakhri saans le chuka tha.
Veer bilkul samajh nahi pa raha tha ki ab kya kare.
Tabhi ek aur shock use laga.
Doosre Veer ki body halki si starlight ke saath shine karne lagi, aur dekhte hi dekhte woh shining stardust mein transform ho gayi.
Woh stardust hawa mein ghoomne lagi aur phir dheere-dheere Veer ki body par land karne lagi.
“Yeh sab kya ho raha hai…?!”
Veer apni baat poori bhi nahi kar paaya tha ki achanak uske mind mein extreme pain utha.
Woh stardust sirf uski body mein hi nahi, balki uski soul mein enter ho kar uske saath merge ho gayi.
Aur uske saath hi, doosre Veer ki memories bhi jo ab Veer ke mind ke saamne is world ke Veer ki poori life dikhane lagi.
Veer ke muh se ek zor ki cheekh nikli, jo poore forest mein ghoonj gayi.
Veer cheekhte hue apne ghutnon par gir gaya.
Usne apne dono haathon se apna sir pakad liya tha.
Yeh pain sirf physical nahi tha balki psychic aur spiritual bhi tha.
Is ek hi moment mein Veer is world ke Veer ki har ek memory ko experience kar raha tha.
Is single painful moment mein Veer sirf memories hi nahi dekh raha tha, balki yeh bhi samajh raha tha ki yeh world kaise work karta hai.
Jaise uske past world mein Veer ki ek family thi, waise hi is world ke Veer ki bhi family thi bas kuch changes ke saath.
Past world mein uske father ek civil servant the.
Is world mein uske father ek firefighter ke saath-saath hunter bhi the.
Lekin 10 saal pehle, woh ek Yellow Gate ke andar apni poori team ke saath gayab ho gaye the.
5 saal pehle, is world ke Veer ki maa ek coma-jaisi state mein chali gayi thi.
Yeh woh state hoti hai jahan kuch humans ki body zyada aether presence ko handle nahi kar paati, aur us wajah se alag tareeke se react karti hai.
Is world ke Veer ki maa ke saath bhi yehi hua tha.
Doctors aur scientists is state ke aage fail ho chuke the, kyunki kisi ko bhi yeh nahi pata tha ki kisi ko is condition se kaise bahar nikala jaaye.
Isi wajah se pichhle 5 saalon se is world ka Veer aisi field mein kaam kar raha tha jahan har roz uski death hone ke chances the.
Aur aaj… uski death Veer ki baahon mein ho gayi thi us Veer ki, jo doosre world se aaya tha.
Jaise past world mein Veer ki ek chhoti sister thi, waise hi is world ke Veer ki bhi ek chhoti sister thi.
Woh abhi high school mein thi aur apni studies par focus kar rahi thi.
Uska dream tha ki woh badi hokar doctor bane, aur apni maa ko is coma-jaisi state se bahar nikaale.
Iske saath-saath Veer woh sab bhi feel kar raha tha jo is world ke Veer ne ab tak experience kiya tha
har woh moment jahan uski death hote-hote reh gayi thi,
har woh insult jo use dusron se mili thi.
Veer ne apni fist tightly close ki itni tight ki uski mutthi se khoon nikalne laga.
Usne ek baar phir upar aasman ki taraf dekha aur zor se chillaya.
Yeh cheekh kisi physical pain ki nahi thi, balki is world ke Veer ke liye thi
jisne itna sab hone ke baad bhi hope nahi chhodi thi.
Usne apna har dard sabse chhupa kar rakha, taaki uski chhoti sister ko kabhi yeh pata na chale ki woh kis situation se guzar raha hai.
Veer ke liye, is world ke Veer ka pain us pain se bhi zyada painful tha jab usne apna past world chhod kar us nothingness mein entry li thi sirf Dark Being ko face karne ke liye.
Aur jab haarne ke baad Suryadev ne use bataya tha ki uska world apni life cycle complete kar chuka hai aur ab wahan kuch bhi baaki nahi bacha.
Veer ne poori force ke saath apne dono haath zameen par de maare.
BOOM!
Us area mein ek bada crater form ho gaya.
Paas ke trees jaise ground se ukhad kar gir gaye.
Dust ka ek cloud bana, aur uske centre mein Veer aankhen band kiye hue gehri saanse le raha tha.
Woh apni aur is world ke Veer ki memories ko dheere-dheere settle kar raha tha.
Veer ab thoda-thoda samajh pa raha tha ki kyun Suryadev ne use is world mein bheja hai.
Kaafi der tak wahan baithne ke baad, Veer khada hua.
Usne ek gehri saans li, upar aasman ki taraf dekha, aur phir us direction mein chal pada
jahan se is world ka Veer bhaagte hue uski taraf aaya tha.
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Nice update bro
Great update brother.
waise main yahi soch raha tha ki hamara yaha par veer reincarnate hoga but hats of to you . ki aapne kuch hat ke socha.
ab bas mujhe ye dekhna ki aap kaise veer ki maa ka cure ki medicine dikhate ho kyu ki jaise ki hum sabhi solo leveling me dekh chuke hai ki system ke throug jinwoo ko uski maa ki bimari ka cure pata chalta hai .
but mujhe nahi lagta ki aap yaha par SYSTEM jaise kuch dikhane wale ho.
dekhte ki aapki imagination se hume kon kon se Treasurus Update milte hai.
Fate Apocryphabrother aapne kis anime ka dp lagaya hai?
Shandar narration hai bhai ...bariki se detail diya ho
Awesome update
Update 5
Thank You Guys.Nice update