Fantasy Hero Of The Hunter World

[Naik]

Chapter 1

Void jo endless hai ek aisi cold aur infinite expanse jahan na time ka koi meaning hai aur na hi matter ka. Na koi stars, na koi planets, aur na hi koi sound. Is vast nothingness mein sirf silence hai aur kuch bhi nahi.

Lekin is jagah par, jo saari realities ke bahar exist karti hai, ek bhayankar battle chal rahi thi. Kitne yug beet chuke the, lekin in do forces ke beech ki yeh ladai rukne ka naam hi nahi le rahi thi. Yeh battle sirf physical nahi thi, balki cosmic level par ho rahi thi. Jab bhi yeh dono beings ek-dusre se clash karte, uska impact poori nothingness mein fail jaata. Is impact ki wajah se ab do realities ke beech jo barriers hote hain, unmein bhi cracks aane lage the.

In do beings mein se ek bahut hi tall tha lagbhag 10 feet lamba. Uski skin poori tarah lifeless thi, jaise uske andar cold aur darkness ke alawa kuch bhi na bacha ho. Uska form dekhne mein human jaisa tha, lekin poora ka poora dark aura se cover tha. Uski aankhon ki jagah sirf pure darkness hi thi.

Dusri taraf ek aisa figure tha jo poori tarah light aur flaming aura se ghira hua tha. Usne ek armor pehna hua tha, jo itni lambi battle ki wajah se crack ho chuka tha, lekin uske andar se abhi bhi divine energy pulse ho rahi thi. Us figure ke kaanon mein sun-shape ke earrings the, jinmein bhi intense battle ki wajah se cracks aa chuke the. Yeh armor aur earrings kisi aur ke nahi, balki Karna ke divya kavach aur kundal the.

Jisne yeh sab pehna hua tha, woh tha Veer Suryavanshi Karna ka vanshaj. Mahabharat ke yuddh ke samay Karna ka sabse chhota beta yuddh mein bhaag nahi le paaya tha, aur Veer usi ka vanshaj tha.

Itni lambi battle ki wajah se Veer ki saansein out of control ho chuki thi. Woh kaafi injured bhi ho gaya tha. Lekin is waqt woh in sab baaton ke baare mein soch nahi sakta tha, kyunki uske saamne woh dark being abhi bhi khada tha. Use poori tarah haraaye bina Veer ruk nahi sakta tha. Uske kavach aur kundal dono mei cracks aa chuke the, phir bhi woh aise shine kar rahe the jaise swayam Suryadev unke andar virajmaan ho.

Itni lambi battle ke baad bhi Veer apne world, apne log aur apni family ko bhoola nahi tha. Jab pehli baar yeh dark being Veer ke world mein aaya tha, tab usne us world ko destroy karna shuru kar diya tha. Use rokne ke liye kai logon ne apna sacrifice diya tha. Shuru mein Veer bhi us being se fight kar raha tha, lekin sirf itna kaafi nahi tha. Tab Veer ek aisi journey par nikla, jiske sach hone ke chances bahut kam the.

Kai saare obstacles aur tests ke baad Veer ko Karna ke kavach aur kundal mile. Unhe pehnne ke baad Veer pehle se bhi zyada powerful ho gaya. Is nayi power ke saath woh dobara us dark being se battle karne chala gaya. Veer ne us dark being ko itni force se push kiya ki woh use sirf apne universe se hi nahi, balki apni timeline se bhi bahar, is nothingness mein le aaya. Yahan aane ke baad un dono ke beech ek endless battle shuru ho gayi.

Uske baad kai yug beet gaye, lekin Veer waise hi fight karta raha jaise pehle karta aa raha tha. Use achhi tarah pata tha ki agar woh ek pal ke liye bhi ruk gaya, toh yeh dark being kisi aur world mein jaakar use destroy kar dega. Is battle mein uske kavach aur kundal tak crack hone lage the, phir bhi Veer ladta raha.

Boom!

Veer aur woh dark being ek baar phir ek-dusre se clash karte hain.

Veer, jo poori tarah injured tha aur apni saanson ko control karne ki koshish kar raha tha, us dark being ko dekhta hai.

Veer ki is condition ko dekh kar us being ke chehre par ek smile aa jaati hai, aur woh Veer se kehta hai,

“Tum aur kab tak, aur kitna prayas karoge, manushya? Mujhe mitaane mein tum ab tak kitni baar fail ho chuke ho?”

Yeh sunkar Veer kuch nahi kehta. Woh abhi bhi apni saanson ko control kar raha hota hai. Phir woh ek gehri saans leta hai aur apne kaanpte hue haath upar uthata hai. Jaise hi woh aisa karta hai, uske haathon ke upar ek halka sa spark create hota hai. Dheere-dheere woh spark ek bade flaming ball mein badal jaata hai, aur phir itna bada ho jaata hai jaise koi sun ho.

Veer ne apne is final attack mein apne kavach aur kundal ki shakti tak ko use kar liya tha. Ab Veer ke body par na koi kavach bacha tha, na hi uske kaanon mein kundal.

Usne phir us dark being ko dekha aur kaha,

“Aaj is pal ke saath tumhare aatank ka ant hone wala hai!”

Yeh kehkar Veer ne poori force ke saath us sun ko dark being ki taraf throw kar diya.

Yeh dekhte hi dark being ne apne dono haath aage ki taraf kiye aur pure darkness se kai saare barriers create kar liye. Lekin Veer ne is sun mein apni poori energy laga di thi. Woh sun sabhi barriers ko todta hua dark being ki taraf badhta gaya. Apni aakhri koshish mein dark being ne apne haath aage badha kar sun ko rokne ki koshish ki, lekin jaise hi uske haath sun ke contact mein aaye, woh jalne lage.

Ek dard bhari cheekh poori nothingness mein fail gayi.

Boom!

Woh sun itni force se blast hua ki poori nothingness ek pal ke liye apni roshni se jagmaga uthi.

Kitne yugon ke baad aaj Veer ne us dark being ko poori tarah destroy kar diya tha. Ek baar phir se nothingness mein wahi silence chha gaya jo un dono ki battle se pehle hua karta tha.

Ab is poore void mein apni injured body ke saath sirf Veer hi bacha tha. Uska aura aisa lag raha tha jaise poori nothingness mein sirf wahi ek akela star ho.

Ab aage kya kare, yeh Veer ko nahi pata tha. Woh apne world aur apni timeline ko peeche chhod chuka tha. Ek aisi jagah par jahan kuch bhi exist nahi karta, aur woh bilkul akela tha.

Suddenly, poori nothingness jaise hil si gayi.

Ek bright light ke saath, aur shlokon ki awaazon ke beech jo srishti ke satya ko prakat kar rahe the, Bhagwan Surya Veer ke saamne prakat hue. Unka prakash aur unki jwala poori nothingness ko roshni aur urja se bhar rahe the.

Suryadev ko saamne dekhte hi Veer ne apne kaanpte hue haath jod kar unhe pranam kiya.

Yeh dekh kar Suryadev halki si muskurahat ke saath bole,

“Putra Veer, tumne apne kartavya ka sahi tarah se nirvah kiya hai.”

Yeh sunkar Veer ne poocha,

“Toh kya ab main apne ghar ja sakta hoon?”

Veer ke is sawal par Suryadev ne apna sir na mein hilaate hue kaha,

“Putra Veer, jab tum apni srishti aur apni samay-dhara se nikal kar is anant shoonyata mein aaye, tab tum apni srishti ke sabhi niyamon se pare aa chuke the. Tumhari srishti ab shesh nahi rahi. Woh apni samay-rekha ke saath apna kalp poora karke samapt ho chuki hai.”

Yeh sunkar Veer poori tarah se toot gaya. Uski family, uske friends, uske saathi sab ja chuke the. Uski aankhon mein aansu aa gaye.

Usne poocha,

“Toh kya mere is tyaag ka koi mahatva nahi raha, Bhagwan?”

Suryadev aage badhe aur Veer ke kandhe par haath rakh kar bole,

“Putra Veer, tum mere putra Karna ke vanshaj ho. Jaise usne Mahabharat ke yuddh mein apna sab kuch daan kar diya tha, waise hi tumne apni srishti ko surakshit aur santulit rakhne ke liye andhkaar ke dhaarak ko is anant shoonyata mein laa kar yugon tak yuddh kiya aur use parajit kiya. Dharma ki raksha ke liye tumhara tyaag aur balidaan itna mahan hai ki uske saamne niyati ko bhi jhukna padega.”

Yeh kehte hi ek portal open hua. Uski taraf ishara karte hue Suryadev bole,

“Main tumhe tumhari apni srishti mein nahi bhej sakta, lekin usi ke saman ek aur srishti mein zaroor bhej sakta hoon, jahan tum apne sabhi parijanon ke saath apna jeevan dobara shuru kar sakte ho.”

Yeh sunkar Veer shock ho gaya. Uski aankhon mein aansu aa gaye aur usne phir se pranam karte hue kaha,

“Dhanyavaad, Bhagwan Suryadev. Aap mere pitamah ke pita hain, aur aapke is upkaar ko main kabhi nahi bhool paunga.”

Is par Suryadev muskurate hue bole,

“Putra Veer, yeh tumhare parakram, tumhare tyaag aur balidaan ka phal hai, jo tumhe milna hi chahiye. Ise swayam niyati bhi nahi rok sakti. Jao, is nayi srishti mein tumhare parijan tumhari raah dekh rahe hain.”

Veer ne portal ki taraf dekha, phir Suryadev ko dekh kar aakhri baar haath jodte hue kaha,

“Bhagwan Surya, ab mujhe agya dijiye. Is naye sansaar mein bhi mujh par apni karunamayi drishti banaye rakhiyega.”

Yeh kehte hi Veer portal mein enter kar gaya, aur uske peeche woh band ho gaya.

Yeh dekhte hue Suryadev bole,

“Is nayi srishti ko tum jaise nayak ki atyant avashyakta hai, Veer. Meri yahi kaamna hai ki is srishti mein tum satya ke us deepak ka kaam karoge, jo sabko sahi maarg dikhaye.”

Itna keh kar Suryadev bhi gaayab ho gaye, aur nothingness ek baar phir shaant ho gayi jaise yahan pehle kuch hua hi na ho.

Bahot khoob badhia shaandar
Shuruwat
Dekhte h ab Veer ko yaha kon se challenge ka samna karna padta h

 

[Naik]

Chapter 2

Yeh sab kuch bina kisi warning ke start hua.

Ek din, jaise poori Earth ek pal ke liye hil si gayi. Lekin yeh na kisi fault line ki wajah se tha aur na hi tectonic plates ke movement ki wajah se. Iske peeche koi aur hi reason tha kuch aisa jo bahut ancient tha aur poori tarah alien bhi.

Ek aisa ripple jo khuli aankhon se dekha nahi ja sakta tha, lekin itna strong zaroor tha ki is reality ki foundation tak ko hila de. Aur isi ke saath yeh ripple har taraf fail gaya. Ek unknown energy, ek aisa presence jo humans ki samajh se poori tarah bahar tha. Us waqt ke scientists ke paas is energy ke liye koi proper naam tak nahi tha. Yeh energy unhe confuse bhi kar rahi thi aur ek tarah se dara bhi rahi thi. Kaafi discussions ke baad is unknown energy ko ek naam diya gaya Aether.

Aether ke emergence ke saath hi Earth ki old civilizations ka era end ho gaya, aur uske saath ek naya era start ho gaya. Yeh na kisi explosion ki wajah se hua tha, na invasion ki wajah se, aur na hi kisi experiment ke galat direction mein jaane se. Yeh ek simple emergence tha. Jaise dimensions ke beech ka barrier toot gaya ho, aur uske saath ek primal energy is dimension mein enter kar gayi ho.

Aether ne kisi ke saath bhi bhedbhaav nahi kiya. Woh sabhi continents, sabhi cities aur forests, sabhi oceans aur deserts mein fail gayi. Earth par jitne bhi living beings the humans, plants aur animals sab ne iske influence ko feel kiya. Iske saath hi dheere-dheere changes aane lage, aur shuru mein yeh kaafi beautiful bhi lag rahe the. Jaise har living being ke andar nayi jaan aa gayi ho. Ek unknown power ka ehsaas.

Lekin yeh beauty zyada der tak nahi rahi, aur jaldi hi sabke liye kaafi dangerous ban gayi.

Animals mutate hone lage. Unke instincts par aggression ka control badhne laga. Jo creatures pehle kaafi shaant samjhe jaate the, woh ab nightmares banne lage. Wolves jo cars ke size ke ho gaye the. Birds jo ab metal tak ko kaat sakte the. Serpents jinki bodies par glowing scales aa gaye the, jo alag-alag colors mein shine kar rahe the.

Oceans, jo pehle wild hone ke bawajood familiar lagte the, ab poori tarah change ho chuke the. Bade-bade beasts ocean se nikal kar fleets aur submarines ko destroy karne lage. Is wajah se jitni bhi coastal cities thi, woh danger zones ban gayi. Oceans ab aisi territory ban gaye the jise hardly koi explore karna chahta tha.

Lekin humanity jaise hamesha karti aayi thi, is baar bhi wahi karne lagi. Governments ne in dangers ko control karne ke liye apni militaries ko free hand de diya. Scientists Aether ko samajhne mein lag gaye. Kuch log prarthana karne lage, aur kuch sirf is hope mein jeene lage ki ek din sab theek ho jaayega. Time beetta gaya, aur humanity ne is change ko bhi adapt karna shuru kar diya.
Lekin tabhi ek aur chaos unke doorstep par aa gaya.

Yeh sab Northern Europe ke ek city se start hua. Bina kisi warning ke, wahan ke aasman mein ek portal open hua. Ek aisa portal jo aise colors mein shine kar raha tha jo natural world mein kabhi dekhe hi nahi ja sakte. Us portal ke andar se creatures nikalne lage aise creatures jo is world se belong nahi karte the. Yeh woh creatures the jo log kahaniyon, legends ya nightmares mein dekha karte the.


Claws wale goblins, ogres jo apni strength se bones crush kar sakte the, orcs jo jaise sirf war ke liye hi bane ho. Wings wale beasts, jo sirf imagination mein hi possible lagte the.
Lekin in sab mein sabse terrifying woh monsters the jo soch aur samajh rakhte the jaise Dark Elves.

Isi ke saath ek naya chaos start hua, jo poore planet par failne laga. Ek ke baad ek Asia, Africa, North aur South America har jagah portals open hone lage. Tab poori duniya ko yeh samajh aa gaya ki yeh rifts asal mein gates hain, aur har gate ek dungeon ki taraf lead karta hai.

Har gate ke andar laws of physics sahi tarah se kaam nahi karte the, aur wahan ka environment bhi bahut dangerous hota tha. Har dungeon ek-dusre se bilkul alag aur unique tha burning deserts, frozen catacombs, forest of flesh, endless stone mazes. Inke andar monsters parasites ki tarah aate-jaate rehte the. Aur jab yeh monsters overflow ho jaate, toh gate tod kar bahar aa jaate the.

Lekin Aether ke aane se sirf chaos hi nahi aaya tha.

Dheere-dheere humanity ne isse bhi adapt karna seekh liya.

Aether ne sirf nature ko hi change nahi kiya tha, balki humans ke andar chhupi latent potential ko bhi awaken kar diya tha. Ek aisi dormant power jo bahut lambi samay se so rahi thi. Jo humans Aether ke zyada close the, woh impossible abilities dikhane lage.

Abilities jaise superhuman strength, lightning-fast speed aur reflexes, fire, ice, wind aur even shadows jaise elements par control. Kuch log sirf ek touch se doosron ko heal kar sakte the. Kuch beasts se baat kar sakte the. Aur kuch sirf apne thoughts se objects ko move kar sakte the.

In logon ko Awakeners kaha jaane laga.

Aur jo log monsters se fight karne lage, gates ke andar jaakar unhe investigate karne lage, aur bachi hui humanity ko protect karne lage unhe Hunters kaha gaya.

Waise toh lagbhag har koi Aether ke contact mein aa chuka tha, lekin har koi abilities awaken nahi kar sakta tha. Sirf kuch log hi is power ko awaken kar paate the, aur unmein se bhi sirf kuch hi apne first dungeon se safely bahar nikal paate the.


Is sab ko dekhte hue Hunters ke liye ek ranking system create kiya gaya, jo power aur potential par based tha.

Most Hunters, jinki powers recently awaken hui thi, apni journey Rank E se start karte the. Yeh normal human soldiers ya athletes se thode upar hote the. Uske baad monsters hunt karke, unke monster cores collect karke, aur dungeon ke andar milne wale Aether minerals absorb karke woh khud ko stronger bana sakte the. Isi tarah ranks level up hoti thi D, C, B aur A.

Lekin yahan bhi ek limit thi. Aadhe se zyada Hunters sirf B Rank tak hi pahunch paate the. Yeh ek aisi wall thi jise har koi cross nahi kar sakta tha. Kyunki uske baad aata tha Realm of Legend.

A Rank Hunters kisi war machine se kam nahi hote the. Har ek apne single strike mein buildings tak ko destroy kar sakta tha, akela monsters ki army ko hold kar sakta tha, aur kabhi-kabhi toh high-level dungeon ke andar akela survive bhi kar leta tha. Zyada tar countries apne A Rank Hunters ko apne paas rakhne ke liye kuch bhi karne ko tayaar hoti thi. Woh soldiers nahi, balki assets the icons aur guardians.

Unke baad aate the S Rank Hunters.

S Rank Hunters power ki sabse highest limit hote the. Agar luck achha ho, toh shayad koi B Rank Hunter training aur hunting ke through A Rank tak pahunch sakta tha. Lekin S Rank na training se mil sakta tha, na luck se. Kyunki S Rank Hunters usi rank par awaken hote the. Woh apne ek single attack se mountains tak ko destroy kar sakte the, ya phir poori cities ko incinerate kar sakte the. Kabhi-kabhi sirf apni roar se hi aasman tak ko hila dete the.
9 billion ki human population mein sirf kuch hi S Rank Hunters maujood the.

Currently, India ke paas 9 S Rank Hunters the, jabki India ki population billions mein hai.
Unmein se 2 S Rank Hunters Mumbai jaise city mein hi station kiye gaye the, taaki Arabian Ocean aur wahan ke volatile zones ko control mein rakha ja sake. Uske baad Delhi, Kolkata, Bangalore aur aisi hi aur cities mein bhi S Rank Hunters post kiye gaye the.

America ke paas 10 S Rank Hunters the. Unmein se 3 West Coast ke military areas aur Pacific Ocean region ko guard karne ke liye deployed the.

Russia ke paas 8 S Rank Hunters the, jo Siberian gates ko observe kar rahe the.

China ke paas 6 S Rank Hunters the, lekin unki identities China ne secret rakhi hui thi.

Japan aur Europe ke paas 5-5 S Rank Hunters the.

Yeh humans sirf warriors nahi the inhe living Gods of War ki tarah treat kiya jaata tha. Inki presence ki wajah se hi filhaal world mein balance bana hua tha. Lekin yeh kab tak chalega, koi nahi jaanta tha.

Kyunki gates ka formation bilkul bhi slow nahi hua tha.

Yeh kehna galat nahi hoga ki woh pehle se bhi zyada badh gaye the.

Pehle se bhi zyada bade, zyada dangerous, aur ek tarah se zyada smart.
Kuch monsters ab gates ke andar hi evolve hone lage the, aur kuch gates khud Hunters ko observe karke unke against adapt kar rahe the. Rumors failne lage the ki kuch monsters ab entry level par baat bhi kar sakte the, argue kar sakte the, aur Hunters ke khilaaf strategies tak bana sakte the.
Saath hi kuch aise gates bhi appear hone lage the jinhe close hi nahi kiya ja sakta tha.

Un gates ke andar ke boss monsters ab khud ko Dungeon Lords kehne lage the.

Isi ke saath Age of Aether officially start ho chuka tha.

Aur is wajah se world ab pehle jaisa bilkul bhi nahi raha tha.

Bahot khoob
Shaandar update

 

[Naik]

Chapter 2

Yeh sab kuch bina kisi warning ke start hua.

Ek din, jaise poori Earth ek pal ke liye hil si gayi. Lekin yeh na kisi fault line ki wajah se tha aur na hi tectonic plates ke movement ki wajah se. Iske peeche koi aur hi reason tha kuch aisa jo bahut ancient tha aur poori tarah alien bhi.

Ek aisa ripple jo khuli aankhon se dekha nahi ja sakta tha, lekin itna strong zaroor tha ki is reality ki foundation tak ko hila de. Aur isi ke saath yeh ripple har taraf fail gaya. Ek unknown energy, ek aisa presence jo humans ki samajh se poori tarah bahar tha. Us waqt ke scientists ke paas is energy ke liye koi proper naam tak nahi tha. Yeh energy unhe confuse bhi kar rahi thi aur ek tarah se dara bhi rahi thi. Kaafi discussions ke baad is unknown energy ko ek naam diya gaya Aether.

Aether ke emergence ke saath hi Earth ki old civilizations ka era end ho gaya, aur uske saath ek naya era start ho gaya. Yeh na kisi explosion ki wajah se hua tha, na invasion ki wajah se, aur na hi kisi experiment ke galat direction mein jaane se. Yeh ek simple emergence tha. Jaise dimensions ke beech ka barrier toot gaya ho, aur uske saath ek primal energy is dimension mein enter kar gayi ho.

Aether ne kisi ke saath bhi bhedbhaav nahi kiya. Woh sabhi continents, sabhi cities aur forests, sabhi oceans aur deserts mein fail gayi. Earth par jitne bhi living beings the humans, plants aur animals sab ne iske influence ko feel kiya. Iske saath hi dheere-dheere changes aane lage, aur shuru mein yeh kaafi beautiful bhi lag rahe the. Jaise har living being ke andar nayi jaan aa gayi ho. Ek unknown power ka ehsaas.

Lekin yeh beauty zyada der tak nahi rahi, aur jaldi hi sabke liye kaafi dangerous ban gayi.

Animals mutate hone lage. Unke instincts par aggression ka control badhne laga. Jo creatures pehle kaafi shaant samjhe jaate the, woh ab nightmares banne lage. Wolves jo cars ke size ke ho gaye the. Birds jo ab metal tak ko kaat sakte the. Serpents jinki bodies par glowing scales aa gaye the, jo alag-alag colors mein shine kar rahe the.

Oceans, jo pehle wild hone ke bawajood familiar lagte the, ab poori tarah change ho chuke the. Bade-bade beasts ocean se nikal kar fleets aur submarines ko destroy karne lage. Is wajah se jitni bhi coastal cities thi, woh danger zones ban gayi. Oceans ab aisi territory ban gaye the jise hardly koi explore karna chahta tha.

Lekin humanity jaise hamesha karti aayi thi, is baar bhi wahi karne lagi. Governments ne in dangers ko control karne ke liye apni militaries ko free hand de diya. Scientists Aether ko samajhne mein lag gaye. Kuch log prarthana karne lage, aur kuch sirf is hope mein jeene lage ki ek din sab theek ho jaayega. Time beetta gaya, aur humanity ne is change ko bhi adapt karna shuru kar diya.
Lekin tabhi ek aur chaos unke doorstep par aa gaya.

Yeh sab Northern Europe ke ek city se start hua. Bina kisi warning ke, wahan ke aasman mein ek portal open hua. Ek aisa portal jo aise colors mein shine kar raha tha jo natural world mein kabhi dekhe hi nahi ja sakte. Us portal ke andar se creatures nikalne lage aise creatures jo is world se belong nahi karte the. Yeh woh creatures the jo log kahaniyon, legends ya nightmares mein dekha karte the.


Claws wale goblins, ogres jo apni strength se bones crush kar sakte the, orcs jo jaise sirf war ke liye hi bane ho. Wings wale beasts, jo sirf imagination mein hi possible lagte the.
Lekin in sab mein sabse terrifying woh monsters the jo soch aur samajh rakhte the jaise Dark Elves.

Isi ke saath ek naya chaos start hua, jo poore planet par failne laga. Ek ke baad ek Asia, Africa, North aur South America har jagah portals open hone lage. Tab poori duniya ko yeh samajh aa gaya ki yeh rifts asal mein gates hain, aur har gate ek dungeon ki taraf lead karta hai.

Har gate ke andar laws of physics sahi tarah se kaam nahi karte the, aur wahan ka environment bhi bahut dangerous hota tha. Har dungeon ek-dusre se bilkul alag aur unique tha burning deserts, frozen catacombs, forest of flesh, endless stone mazes. Inke andar monsters parasites ki tarah aate-jaate rehte the. Aur jab yeh monsters overflow ho jaate, toh gate tod kar bahar aa jaate the.

Lekin Aether ke aane se sirf chaos hi nahi aaya tha.

Dheere-dheere humanity ne isse bhi adapt karna seekh liya.

Aether ne sirf nature ko hi change nahi kiya tha, balki humans ke andar chhupi latent potential ko bhi awaken kar diya tha. Ek aisi dormant power jo bahut lambi samay se so rahi thi. Jo humans Aether ke zyada close the, woh impossible abilities dikhane lage.

Abilities jaise superhuman strength, lightning-fast speed aur reflexes, fire, ice, wind aur even shadows jaise elements par control. Kuch log sirf ek touch se doosron ko heal kar sakte the. Kuch beasts se baat kar sakte the. Aur kuch sirf apne thoughts se objects ko move kar sakte the.

In logon ko Awakeners kaha jaane laga.

Aur jo log monsters se fight karne lage, gates ke andar jaakar unhe investigate karne lage, aur bachi hui humanity ko protect karne lage unhe Hunters kaha gaya.

Waise toh lagbhag har koi Aether ke contact mein aa chuka tha, lekin har koi abilities awaken nahi kar sakta tha. Sirf kuch log hi is power ko awaken kar paate the, aur unmein se bhi sirf kuch hi apne first dungeon se safely bahar nikal paate the.


Is sab ko dekhte hue Hunters ke liye ek ranking system create kiya gaya, jo power aur potential par based tha.

Most Hunters, jinki powers recently awaken hui thi, apni journey Rank E se start karte the. Yeh normal human soldiers ya athletes se thode upar hote the. Uske baad monsters hunt karke, unke monster cores collect karke, aur dungeon ke andar milne wale Aether minerals absorb karke woh khud ko stronger bana sakte the. Isi tarah ranks level up hoti thi D, C, B aur A.

Lekin yahan bhi ek limit thi. Aadhe se zyada Hunters sirf B Rank tak hi pahunch paate the. Yeh ek aisi wall thi jise har koi cross nahi kar sakta tha. Kyunki uske baad aata tha Realm of Legend.

A Rank Hunters kisi war machine se kam nahi hote the. Har ek apne single strike mein buildings tak ko destroy kar sakta tha, akela monsters ki army ko hold kar sakta tha, aur kabhi-kabhi toh high-level dungeon ke andar akela survive bhi kar leta tha. Zyada tar countries apne A Rank Hunters ko apne paas rakhne ke liye kuch bhi karne ko tayaar hoti thi. Woh soldiers nahi, balki assets the icons aur guardians.

Unke baad aate the S Rank Hunters.

S Rank Hunters power ki sabse highest limit hote the. Agar luck achha ho, toh shayad koi B Rank Hunter training aur hunting ke through A Rank tak pahunch sakta tha. Lekin S Rank na training se mil sakta tha, na luck se. Kyunki S Rank Hunters usi rank par awaken hote the. Woh apne ek single attack se mountains tak ko destroy kar sakte the, ya phir poori cities ko incinerate kar sakte the. Kabhi-kabhi sirf apni roar se hi aasman tak ko hila dete the.
9 billion ki human population mein sirf kuch hi S Rank Hunters maujood the.

Currently, India ke paas 9 S Rank Hunters the, jabki India ki population billions mein hai.
Unmein se 2 S Rank Hunters Mumbai jaise city mein hi station kiye gaye the, taaki Arabian Ocean aur wahan ke volatile zones ko control mein rakha ja sake. Uske baad Delhi, Kolkata, Bangalore aur aisi hi aur cities mein bhi S Rank Hunters post kiye gaye the.

America ke paas 10 S Rank Hunters the. Unmein se 3 West Coast ke military areas aur Pacific Ocean region ko guard karne ke liye deployed the.

Russia ke paas 8 S Rank Hunters the, jo Siberian gates ko observe kar rahe the.

China ke paas 6 S Rank Hunters the, lekin unki identities China ne secret rakhi hui thi.

Japan aur Europe ke paas 5-5 S Rank Hunters the.

Yeh humans sirf warriors nahi the inhe living Gods of War ki tarah treat kiya jaata tha. Inki presence ki wajah se hi filhaal world mein balance bana hua tha. Lekin yeh kab tak chalega, koi nahi jaanta tha.

Kyunki gates ka formation bilkul bhi slow nahi hua tha.

Yeh kehna galat nahi hoga ki woh pehle se bhi zyada badh gaye the.

Pehle se bhi zyada bade, zyada dangerous, aur ek tarah se zyada smart.
Kuch monsters ab gates ke andar hi evolve hone lage the, aur kuch gates khud Hunters ko observe karke unke against adapt kar rahe the. Rumors failne lage the ki kuch monsters ab entry level par baat bhi kar sakte the, argue kar sakte the, aur Hunters ke khilaaf strategies tak bana sakte the.
Saath hi kuch aise gates bhi appear hone lage the jinhe close hi nahi kiya ja sakta tha.

Un gates ke andar ke boss monsters ab khud ko Dungeon Lords kehne lage the.

Isi ke saath Age of Aether officially start ho chuka tha.

Aur is wajah se world ab pehle jaisa bilkul bhi nahi raha tha.

Bahot khoob
Shaandar update

 

[krish1152]

nice update

 

[I AM JD]

Chapter 2

Yeh sab kuch bina kisi warning ke start hua.

Ek din, jaise poori Earth ek pal ke liye hil si gayi. Lekin yeh na kisi fault line ki wajah se tha aur na hi tectonic plates ke movement ki wajah se. Iske peeche koi aur hi reason tha kuch aisa jo bahut ancient tha aur poori tarah alien bhi.

Ek aisa ripple jo khuli aankhon se dekha nahi ja sakta tha, lekin itna strong zaroor tha ki is reality ki foundation tak ko hila de. Aur isi ke saath yeh ripple har taraf fail gaya. Ek unknown energy, ek aisa presence jo humans ki samajh se poori tarah bahar tha. Us waqt ke scientists ke paas is energy ke liye koi proper naam tak nahi tha. Yeh energy unhe confuse bhi kar rahi thi aur ek tarah se dara bhi rahi thi. Kaafi discussions ke baad is unknown energy ko ek naam diya gaya Aether.

Aether ke emergence ke saath hi Earth ki old civilizations ka era end ho gaya, aur uske saath ek naya era start ho gaya. Yeh na kisi explosion ki wajah se hua tha, na invasion ki wajah se, aur na hi kisi experiment ke galat direction mein jaane se. Yeh ek simple emergence tha. Jaise dimensions ke beech ka barrier toot gaya ho, aur uske saath ek primal energy is dimension mein enter kar gayi ho.

Aether ne kisi ke saath bhi bhedbhaav nahi kiya. Woh sabhi continents, sabhi cities aur forests, sabhi oceans aur deserts mein fail gayi. Earth par jitne bhi living beings the humans, plants aur animals sab ne iske influence ko feel kiya. Iske saath hi dheere-dheere changes aane lage, aur shuru mein yeh kaafi beautiful bhi lag rahe the. Jaise har living being ke andar nayi jaan aa gayi ho. Ek unknown power ka ehsaas.

Lekin yeh beauty zyada der tak nahi rahi, aur jaldi hi sabke liye kaafi dangerous ban gayi.

Animals mutate hone lage. Unke instincts par aggression ka control badhne laga. Jo creatures pehle kaafi shaant samjhe jaate the, woh ab nightmares banne lage. Wolves jo cars ke size ke ho gaye the. Birds jo ab metal tak ko kaat sakte the. Serpents jinki bodies par glowing scales aa gaye the, jo alag-alag colors mein shine kar rahe the.

Oceans, jo pehle wild hone ke bawajood familiar lagte the, ab poori tarah change ho chuke the. Bade-bade beasts ocean se nikal kar fleets aur submarines ko destroy karne lage. Is wajah se jitni bhi coastal cities thi, woh danger zones ban gayi. Oceans ab aisi territory ban gaye the jise hardly koi explore karna chahta tha.

Lekin humanity jaise hamesha karti aayi thi, is baar bhi wahi karne lagi. Governments ne in dangers ko control karne ke liye apni militaries ko free hand de diya. Scientists Aether ko samajhne mein lag gaye. Kuch log prarthana karne lage, aur kuch sirf is hope mein jeene lage ki ek din sab theek ho jaayega. Time beetta gaya, aur humanity ne is change ko bhi adapt karna shuru kar diya.
Lekin tabhi ek aur chaos unke doorstep par aa gaya.

Yeh sab Northern Europe ke ek city se start hua. Bina kisi warning ke, wahan ke aasman mein ek portal open hua. Ek aisa portal jo aise colors mein shine kar raha tha jo natural world mein kabhi dekhe hi nahi ja sakte. Us portal ke andar se creatures nikalne lage aise creatures jo is world se belong nahi karte the. Yeh woh creatures the jo log kahaniyon, legends ya nightmares mein dekha karte the.


Claws wale goblins, ogres jo apni strength se bones crush kar sakte the, orcs jo jaise sirf war ke liye hi bane ho. Wings wale beasts, jo sirf imagination mein hi possible lagte the.
Lekin in sab mein sabse terrifying woh monsters the jo soch aur samajh rakhte the jaise Dark Elves.

Isi ke saath ek naya chaos start hua, jo poore planet par failne laga. Ek ke baad ek Asia, Africa, North aur South America har jagah portals open hone lage. Tab poori duniya ko yeh samajh aa gaya ki yeh rifts asal mein gates hain, aur har gate ek dungeon ki taraf lead karta hai.

Har gate ke andar laws of physics sahi tarah se kaam nahi karte the, aur wahan ka environment bhi bahut dangerous hota tha. Har dungeon ek-dusre se bilkul alag aur unique tha burning deserts, frozen catacombs, forest of flesh, endless stone mazes. Inke andar monsters parasites ki tarah aate-jaate rehte the. Aur jab yeh monsters overflow ho jaate, toh gate tod kar bahar aa jaate the.

Lekin Aether ke aane se sirf chaos hi nahi aaya tha.

Dheere-dheere humanity ne isse bhi adapt karna seekh liya.

Aether ne sirf nature ko hi change nahi kiya tha, balki humans ke andar chhupi latent potential ko bhi awaken kar diya tha. Ek aisi dormant power jo bahut lambi samay se so rahi thi. Jo humans Aether ke zyada close the, woh impossible abilities dikhane lage.

Abilities jaise superhuman strength, lightning-fast speed aur reflexes, fire, ice, wind aur even shadows jaise elements par control. Kuch log sirf ek touch se doosron ko heal kar sakte the. Kuch beasts se baat kar sakte the. Aur kuch sirf apne thoughts se objects ko move kar sakte the.

In logon ko Awakeners kaha jaane laga.

Aur jo log monsters se fight karne lage, gates ke andar jaakar unhe investigate karne lage, aur bachi hui humanity ko protect karne lage unhe Hunters kaha gaya.

Waise toh lagbhag har koi Aether ke contact mein aa chuka tha, lekin har koi abilities awaken nahi kar sakta tha. Sirf kuch log hi is power ko awaken kar paate the, aur unmein se bhi sirf kuch hi apne first dungeon se safely bahar nikal paate the.


Is sab ko dekhte hue Hunters ke liye ek ranking system create kiya gaya, jo power aur potential par based tha.

Most Hunters, jinki powers recently awaken hui thi, apni journey Rank E se start karte the. Yeh normal human soldiers ya athletes se thode upar hote the. Uske baad monsters hunt karke, unke monster cores collect karke, aur dungeon ke andar milne wale Aether minerals absorb karke woh khud ko stronger bana sakte the. Isi tarah ranks level up hoti thi D, C, B aur A.

Lekin yahan bhi ek limit thi. Aadhe se zyada Hunters sirf B Rank tak hi pahunch paate the. Yeh ek aisi wall thi jise har koi cross nahi kar sakta tha. Kyunki uske baad aata tha Realm of Legend.

A Rank Hunters kisi war machine se kam nahi hote the. Har ek apne single strike mein buildings tak ko destroy kar sakta tha, akela monsters ki army ko hold kar sakta tha, aur kabhi-kabhi toh high-level dungeon ke andar akela survive bhi kar leta tha. Zyada tar countries apne A Rank Hunters ko apne paas rakhne ke liye kuch bhi karne ko tayaar hoti thi. Woh soldiers nahi, balki assets the icons aur guardians.

Unke baad aate the S Rank Hunters.

S Rank Hunters power ki sabse highest limit hote the. Agar luck achha ho, toh shayad koi B Rank Hunter training aur hunting ke through A Rank tak pahunch sakta tha. Lekin S Rank na training se mil sakta tha, na luck se. Kyunki S Rank Hunters usi rank par awaken hote the. Woh apne ek single attack se mountains tak ko destroy kar sakte the, ya phir poori cities ko incinerate kar sakte the. Kabhi-kabhi sirf apni roar se hi aasman tak ko hila dete the.
9 billion ki human population mein sirf kuch hi S Rank Hunters maujood the.

Currently, India ke paas 9 S Rank Hunters the, jabki India ki population billions mein hai.
Unmein se 2 S Rank Hunters Mumbai jaise city mein hi station kiye gaye the, taaki Arabian Ocean aur wahan ke volatile zones ko control mein rakha ja sake. Uske baad Delhi, Kolkata, Bangalore aur aisi hi aur cities mein bhi S Rank Hunters post kiye gaye the.

America ke paas 10 S Rank Hunters the. Unmein se 3 West Coast ke military areas aur Pacific Ocean region ko guard karne ke liye deployed the.

Russia ke paas 8 S Rank Hunters the, jo Siberian gates ko observe kar rahe the.

China ke paas 6 S Rank Hunters the, lekin unki identities China ne secret rakhi hui thi.

Japan aur Europe ke paas 5-5 S Rank Hunters the.

Yeh humans sirf warriors nahi the inhe living Gods of War ki tarah treat kiya jaata tha. Inki presence ki wajah se hi filhaal world mein balance bana hua tha. Lekin yeh kab tak chalega, koi nahi jaanta tha.

Kyunki gates ka formation bilkul bhi slow nahi hua tha.

Yeh kehna galat nahi hoga ki woh pehle se bhi zyada badh gaye the.

Pehle se bhi zyada bade, zyada dangerous, aur ek tarah se zyada smart.
Kuch monsters ab gates ke andar hi evolve hone lage the, aur kuch gates khud Hunters ko observe karke unke against adapt kar rahe the. Rumors failne lage the ki kuch monsters ab entry level par baat bhi kar sakte the, argue kar sakte the, aur Hunters ke khilaaf strategies tak bana sakte the.
Saath hi kuch aise gates bhi appear hone lage the jinhe close hi nahi kiya ja sakta tha.

Un gates ke andar ke boss monsters ab khud ko Dungeon Lords kehne lage the.

Isi ke saath Age of Aether officially start ho chuka tha.

Aur is wajah se world ab pehle jaisa bilkul bhi nahi raha tha.

Chapter 3

Age of Aether sirf is baat se define nahi hota ki ek mysterious energy is world mein aayi aur uske baad sab evolve ho gaye. Balki is poore system mein gates ka bhi bahut bada role tha.
Ordinary logon ke liye gates dimensional rifts the jo ek saath beautiful bhi the aur terrifying bhi. Unke andar se release hone wale etheric currents aise the jo saari scientific explanations ko break kar dete the.
Wahi hunters ke liye gates unki life the yahin se unhe wealth milti thi, kuch ko yahin apni death milti thi, aur kuch ko apne dream treasures.

Pichhle 3 decades mein gates ko ab ek common storm ki tarah dekha jaane laga tha. Yeh kisi bhi random jagah par open ho sakte the, bina kisi warning ke. Aur yeh sirf tabhi close hote the jab ya toh unhe clear kiya jaaye, ya phir jab unke andar monsters overflow hokar dungeon break karke is world mein aa jaate the.

Lekin itna sab hone ke baad bhi, saare gates same nahi the.

Gates ko properly manage karne ke liye humans ne unhe classify karna start kar diya. Ether density aur unke andar paaye jaane wale monsters ke type ko observe karke gates ko rank kiya jaane laga. Time ke saath, 5 major classifications saamne aaye, jo gates ke threat level par decide hote the.

---

Green Gates​

Sabse pehle aate the Green Gates, jinhe entry points bhi kaha jaata tha.

Green Gates sabse common form ke gates the. Yeh ek soft glow emit karte the, jise dekhkar aisa lagta tha jaise atmosphere mein halka sa disturbance ho gaya ho. Inke andar hawa bhi halki green light ke saath glow karti thi. Inke dungeons zyada tar Earth jaise feel dete the jaise glowing moss wale forests, barren wastelands jahan weak beasts hote the, ya phir cave systems jahan wild animals jaise dikhne wale creatures rehte the.

Mostly Green Gates ke andar weak beast-type monsters milte the jaise Aether se mutate hue small beasts, reptiles, ya crawlers. Ordinary logon ke liye yeh dangerous the, lekin ek organized military unit ya trained D-rank hunter ke liye yeh kuch bhi nahi the.

Inhe modified firearms se bhi hunt kiya ja sakta tha jaise silver-core ya tungsten rounds ke saath. Isi wajah se Green Gates entry-level hunters aur major guilds ke new recruits ke liye training grounds ban gaye the. Lekin sabse important baat yeh thi ki yeh global economy ki foundation ban chuke the.

Inke andar Aether crystals aur low-grade monster cores sabse zyada milte the. Yeh advanced technology ya high-level gear ko power dene ke liye kaafi strong nahi hote the, lekin Aether-charged batteries ke liye bahut important the. Saath hi inki help se agriculture enhance ki jaati thi. Kuch basic healing potions banane mein bhi inka light use hota tha.

Kaafi governments Green Gate raids ko encourage karti thi, aur badi corporations inmein investment karti thi. Kuch private hunting corporations, jo hunter associations se connected bhi nahi the, sirf Green Gates farm karke hi huge profits kama rahe the.

---

Blue Gates​

Green Gates ke baad aate the Blue Gates. World ke zyada tar active gates isi category mein aate the. Yeh Green Gates se zyada stable hote the, jiska matlab tha ki yeh usually break nahi hote the.

Inke andar ether ka flow strong hota tha, aur kaafi volatile bhi, jiski wajah se ether pockets form ho jaate the jahan ether sabse zyada dense hota tha. Inke dungeons bhi Earth jaise hi hote the, lekin yahan weather kaafi strange hota tha twisted gravity, abnormal climates, aur zyada aggressive monsters.

Goblin tribes, dire wolves aur beast-men yahan common monsters the. In monsters mein basic intelligence hoti thi jaise packs mein kaam karna, ya simple weapons use karna, bilkul Stone Age humans ki tarah. Stone clubs, stone-point spears, aur kuch toh basic shelters bhi bana lete the.

In monsters ko hunt karne ke liye hunters ko ether-imbued weapons ya dungeon minerals se bane gear use karna padta tha. Normal guns in par kaam nahi karti thi. Inke internal cores ko damage karne ke liye ether-mineral bullets chahiye hoti thi.

Risky hone ke bawajood, Blue Gates hunter guilds ki backbone the. Inke monsters se mid-tier cores milte the, aur yahan ke ether stones aur minerals high-level hote the jo advanced civilian technology aur military gear mein use hote the. Blue Gates ko guilds ke beech auction bhi kiya jaata tha, aur contracts diye jaate the unhe sabse fast aur efficient tareeke se clear karne ke liye.

Mostly, ek B-rank hunter ke liye Blue Gates gold mines jaise the jahan woh survive bhi kar sakta tha aur heavy rewards ke saath wapas bhi aa sakta tha.

---

Yellow Gates​

Blue Gates ke baad aate the Yellow Gates.

Yellow Gates kaafi different hote the. Inka form hona hi ek warning maana jaata tha. Yeh abnormal ether storms create kar sakte the, short-term electronic blackouts, aur seismic vibrations bhi.

Yeh nature mein kaafi unstable hote the. Jahan bhi koi Yellow Gate appear hota tha, wahan ki hunter association regional alert ke saath poora area evacuate karwa deti thi.

Iska reason yeh tha ki agar in gates ke monsters dungeon break karke bahar aa jaate, toh poore towns tak destroy ho sakte the.

Ogres, orcs aur large monsterkin Yellow Gates ke andar milte the. Yeh ordinary monsters nahi hote the, balki ek tarah ke soldiers hote the dangerous, powerful, aur basic magic use karne mein capable. Kuch ether ko manipulate kar sakte the, kuch basic armor pehne hote the, aur kuch apni small monster armies lead karte the.

Yellow Gates ko Repeating Dungeons bhi kaha jaata tha, kyunki clear hone ke kuch din baad hi inke andar monsters phir se form ho jaate the. Inhe scheduled operations ke saath ek strong strike team se clear karna padta tha.

Yahi woh jagah thi jahan kai hunters, jo A-rank ka sapna dekhte the, apni jaan gawa dete the. Ya phir woh hunters jo apni strength ko overestimate kar lete the aur apne enemy ki intelligence ko underestimate kar dete the.

Jahan bhi Yellow Gates form hote the, wahan governments special military guilds deploy karti thi. Armed tanks, ether-weapon-trained units station ki jaati thi. Yellow Gates unke liye battlefields hote the.

---

Red Gates​

Yellow Gates ke baad aate the Red Gates.

Yeh sirf gates nahi the yeh doosre worlds ke raaste the. Green, Blue aur Yellow Gates Earth-like dungeons banate the, lekin Red Gates dimensional fissures the jo alien worlds ko Earth se connect karte the.

Inke andar ke worlds fixed nahi hote the. Kabhi koi Red Gate aise wasteland se connect hota tha jahan burning sand aur liquid glass flow karta tha. Wahan Red Goblins aur Black Ogres rule karte the, aur wahan ka sun blood-red hota tha.

Kuch Red Gates frozen kingdoms se connect hote the jahan heavy snowfall aur powerful wind currents hote the. Yahan Dark Elves rule karte the dikhne mein beautiful, lekin ice element par poora control rakhte the. Yeh ambush tactics use karke human hunters ka shikaar karte the.

Kabhi-kabhi kuch Red Gates aise worlds se bhi connect ho jaate the jo paradise islands jaise dikhte the. Lush forests, clear water aur blue skies sab kuch perfect lagta tha.
Lekin is beauty ke peeche chhupe hote the Tree Humans monsters jinka shape humans jaisa hota tha, lekin skin tree ki tarah hoti thi. Fingers ki jagah claws, pairon ki jagah roots, aur aankhon ki jagah glowing green orbs. Aisa lagta tha jaise Aether ne humans aur trees ko merge karke ek terrifying creature bana diya ho.

In sab reasons ki wajah se A-rank se neeche ke hunters Red Gates ke paas bhi nahi ja sakte the. Sirf A-rank ya S-rank hunters hi inke andar survive kar sakte the.

Lekin inhe clear karna…

woh ek bilkul hi alag kahani thi.

Aye yo, Shut the front door.

Jay Sutar my guy these 2 chapters are 101 world building chapters.

Every aspect you had mentioned here is top notch. It didn't feel like we are going read a story which will revolve around only Main character. This would make world alive more than what Solo Levelling had. Specially the way Gate Economics and how Hunter specifications are added are cherry on the top. Beside you gave hunters rising chance from their awakening ranks. This was missiong in Solo Levelling where as hunter stuck at their awaken rank. Your added touch will make this story more engaging.

Adios...

 

[Naik]

Chapter 3

Age of Aether sirf is baat se define nahi hota ki ek mysterious energy is world mein aayi aur uske baad sab evolve ho gaye. Balki is poore system mein gates ka bhi bahut bada role tha.
Ordinary logon ke liye gates dimensional rifts the jo ek saath beautiful bhi the aur terrifying bhi. Unke andar se release hone wale etheric currents aise the jo saari scientific explanations ko break kar dete the.
Wahi hunters ke liye gates unki life the yahin se unhe wealth milti thi, kuch ko yahin apni death milti thi, aur kuch ko apne dream treasures.

Pichhle 3 decades mein gates ko ab ek common storm ki tarah dekha jaane laga tha. Yeh kisi bhi random jagah par open ho sakte the, bina kisi warning ke. Aur yeh sirf tabhi close hote the jab ya toh unhe clear kiya jaaye, ya phir jab unke andar monsters overflow hokar dungeon break karke is world mein aa jaate the.

Lekin itna sab hone ke baad bhi, saare gates same nahi the.

Gates ko properly manage karne ke liye humans ne unhe classify karna start kar diya. Ether density aur unke andar paaye jaane wale monsters ke type ko observe karke gates ko rank kiya jaane laga. Time ke saath, 5 major classifications saamne aaye, jo gates ke threat level par decide hote the.

---

Green Gates​

Sabse pehle aate the Green Gates, jinhe entry points bhi kaha jaata tha.

Green Gates sabse common form ke gates the. Yeh ek soft glow emit karte the, jise dekhkar aisa lagta tha jaise atmosphere mein halka sa disturbance ho gaya ho. Inke andar hawa bhi halki green light ke saath glow karti thi. Inke dungeons zyada tar Earth jaise feel dete the jaise glowing moss wale forests, barren wastelands jahan weak beasts hote the, ya phir cave systems jahan wild animals jaise dikhne wale creatures rehte the.

Mostly Green Gates ke andar weak beast-type monsters milte the jaise Aether se mutate hue small beasts, reptiles, ya crawlers. Ordinary logon ke liye yeh dangerous the, lekin ek organized military unit ya trained D-rank hunter ke liye yeh kuch bhi nahi the.

Inhe modified firearms se bhi hunt kiya ja sakta tha jaise silver-core ya tungsten rounds ke saath. Isi wajah se Green Gates entry-level hunters aur major guilds ke new recruits ke liye training grounds ban gaye the. Lekin sabse important baat yeh thi ki yeh global economy ki foundation ban chuke the.

Inke andar Aether crystals aur low-grade monster cores sabse zyada milte the. Yeh advanced technology ya high-level gear ko power dene ke liye kaafi strong nahi hote the, lekin Aether-charged batteries ke liye bahut important the. Saath hi inki help se agriculture enhance ki jaati thi. Kuch basic healing potions banane mein bhi inka light use hota tha.

Kaafi governments Green Gate raids ko encourage karti thi, aur badi corporations inmein investment karti thi. Kuch private hunting corporations, jo hunter associations se connected bhi nahi the, sirf Green Gates farm karke hi huge profits kama rahe the.

---

Blue Gates​

Green Gates ke baad aate the Blue Gates. World ke zyada tar active gates isi category mein aate the. Yeh Green Gates se zyada stable hote the, jiska matlab tha ki yeh usually break nahi hote the.

Inke andar ether ka flow strong hota tha, aur kaafi volatile bhi, jiski wajah se ether pockets form ho jaate the jahan ether sabse zyada dense hota tha. Inke dungeons bhi Earth jaise hi hote the, lekin yahan weather kaafi strange hota tha twisted gravity, abnormal climates, aur zyada aggressive monsters.

Goblin tribes, dire wolves aur beast-men yahan common monsters the. In monsters mein basic intelligence hoti thi jaise packs mein kaam karna, ya simple weapons use karna, bilkul Stone Age humans ki tarah. Stone clubs, stone-point spears, aur kuch toh basic shelters bhi bana lete the.

In monsters ko hunt karne ke liye hunters ko ether-imbued weapons ya dungeon minerals se bane gear use karna padta tha. Normal guns in par kaam nahi karti thi. Inke internal cores ko damage karne ke liye ether-mineral bullets chahiye hoti thi.

Risky hone ke bawajood, Blue Gates hunter guilds ki backbone the. Inke monsters se mid-tier cores milte the, aur yahan ke ether stones aur minerals high-level hote the jo advanced civilian technology aur military gear mein use hote the. Blue Gates ko guilds ke beech auction bhi kiya jaata tha, aur contracts diye jaate the unhe sabse fast aur efficient tareeke se clear karne ke liye.

Mostly, ek B-rank hunter ke liye Blue Gates gold mines jaise the jahan woh survive bhi kar sakta tha aur heavy rewards ke saath wapas bhi aa sakta tha.

---

Yellow Gates​

Blue Gates ke baad aate the Yellow Gates.

Yellow Gates kaafi different hote the. Inka form hona hi ek warning maana jaata tha. Yeh abnormal ether storms create kar sakte the, short-term electronic blackouts, aur seismic vibrations bhi.

Yeh nature mein kaafi unstable hote the. Jahan bhi koi Yellow Gate appear hota tha, wahan ki hunter association regional alert ke saath poora area evacuate karwa deti thi.

Iska reason yeh tha ki agar in gates ke monsters dungeon break karke bahar aa jaate, toh poore towns tak destroy ho sakte the.

Ogres, orcs aur large monsterkin Yellow Gates ke andar milte the. Yeh ordinary monsters nahi hote the, balki ek tarah ke soldiers hote the dangerous, powerful, aur basic magic use karne mein capable. Kuch ether ko manipulate kar sakte the, kuch basic armor pehne hote the, aur kuch apni small monster armies lead karte the.

Yellow Gates ko Repeating Dungeons bhi kaha jaata tha, kyunki clear hone ke kuch din baad hi inke andar monsters phir se form ho jaate the. Inhe scheduled operations ke saath ek strong strike team se clear karna padta tha.

Yahi woh jagah thi jahan kai hunters, jo A-rank ka sapna dekhte the, apni jaan gawa dete the. Ya phir woh hunters jo apni strength ko overestimate kar lete the aur apne enemy ki intelligence ko underestimate kar dete the.

Jahan bhi Yellow Gates form hote the, wahan governments special military guilds deploy karti thi. Armed tanks, ether-weapon-trained units station ki jaati thi. Yellow Gates unke liye battlefields hote the.

---

Red Gates​

Yellow Gates ke baad aate the Red Gates.

Yeh sirf gates nahi the yeh doosre worlds ke raaste the. Green, Blue aur Yellow Gates Earth-like dungeons banate the, lekin Red Gates dimensional fissures the jo alien worlds ko Earth se connect karte the.

Inke andar ke worlds fixed nahi hote the. Kabhi koi Red Gate aise wasteland se connect hota tha jahan burning sand aur liquid glass flow karta tha. Wahan Red Goblins aur Black Ogres rule karte the, aur wahan ka sun blood-red hota tha.

Kuch Red Gates frozen kingdoms se connect hote the jahan heavy snowfall aur powerful wind currents hote the. Yahan Dark Elves rule karte the dikhne mein beautiful, lekin ice element par poora control rakhte the. Yeh ambush tactics use karke human hunters ka shikaar karte the.

Kabhi-kabhi kuch Red Gates aise worlds se bhi connect ho jaate the jo paradise islands jaise dikhte the. Lush forests, clear water aur blue skies sab kuch perfect lagta tha.
Lekin is beauty ke peeche chhupe hote the Tree Humans monsters jinka shape humans jaisa hota tha, lekin skin tree ki tarah hoti thi. Fingers ki jagah claws, pairon ki jagah roots, aur aankhon ki jagah glowing green orbs. Aisa lagta tha jaise Aether ne humans aur trees ko merge karke ek terrifying creature bana diya ho.

In sab reasons ki wajah se A-rank se neeche ke hunters Red Gates ke paas bhi nahi ja sakte the. Sirf A-rank ya S-rank hunters hi inke andar survive kar sakte the.

Lekin inhe clear karna…

woh ek bilkul hi alag kahani thi.

Bahot badhiya shaandar update
Bahot badhiya tareeke gates ke baare me samjhaya
Ab dekhte h aage kia hota h

 

[parkas]

Chapter 3

Age of Aether sirf is baat se define nahi hota ki ek mysterious energy is world mein aayi aur uske baad sab evolve ho gaye. Balki is poore system mein gates ka bhi bahut bada role tha.
Ordinary logon ke liye gates dimensional rifts the jo ek saath beautiful bhi the aur terrifying bhi. Unke andar se release hone wale etheric currents aise the jo saari scientific explanations ko break kar dete the.
Wahi hunters ke liye gates unki life the yahin se unhe wealth milti thi, kuch ko yahin apni death milti thi, aur kuch ko apne dream treasures.

Pichhle 3 decades mein gates ko ab ek common storm ki tarah dekha jaane laga tha. Yeh kisi bhi random jagah par open ho sakte the, bina kisi warning ke. Aur yeh sirf tabhi close hote the jab ya toh unhe clear kiya jaaye, ya phir jab unke andar monsters overflow hokar dungeon break karke is world mein aa jaate the.

Lekin itna sab hone ke baad bhi, saare gates same nahi the.

Gates ko properly manage karne ke liye humans ne unhe classify karna start kar diya. Ether density aur unke andar paaye jaane wale monsters ke type ko observe karke gates ko rank kiya jaane laga. Time ke saath, 5 major classifications saamne aaye, jo gates ke threat level par decide hote the.

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Green Gates​

Sabse pehle aate the Green Gates, jinhe entry points bhi kaha jaata tha.

Green Gates sabse common form ke gates the. Yeh ek soft glow emit karte the, jise dekhkar aisa lagta tha jaise atmosphere mein halka sa disturbance ho gaya ho. Inke andar hawa bhi halki green light ke saath glow karti thi. Inke dungeons zyada tar Earth jaise feel dete the jaise glowing moss wale forests, barren wastelands jahan weak beasts hote the, ya phir cave systems jahan wild animals jaise dikhne wale creatures rehte the.

Mostly Green Gates ke andar weak beast-type monsters milte the jaise Aether se mutate hue small beasts, reptiles, ya crawlers. Ordinary logon ke liye yeh dangerous the, lekin ek organized military unit ya trained D-rank hunter ke liye yeh kuch bhi nahi the.

Inhe modified firearms se bhi hunt kiya ja sakta tha jaise silver-core ya tungsten rounds ke saath. Isi wajah se Green Gates entry-level hunters aur major guilds ke new recruits ke liye training grounds ban gaye the. Lekin sabse important baat yeh thi ki yeh global economy ki foundation ban chuke the.

Inke andar Aether crystals aur low-grade monster cores sabse zyada milte the. Yeh advanced technology ya high-level gear ko power dene ke liye kaafi strong nahi hote the, lekin Aether-charged batteries ke liye bahut important the. Saath hi inki help se agriculture enhance ki jaati thi. Kuch basic healing potions banane mein bhi inka light use hota tha.

Kaafi governments Green Gate raids ko encourage karti thi, aur badi corporations inmein investment karti thi. Kuch private hunting corporations, jo hunter associations se connected bhi nahi the, sirf Green Gates farm karke hi huge profits kama rahe the.

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Blue Gates​

Green Gates ke baad aate the Blue Gates. World ke zyada tar active gates isi category mein aate the. Yeh Green Gates se zyada stable hote the, jiska matlab tha ki yeh usually break nahi hote the.

Inke andar ether ka flow strong hota tha, aur kaafi volatile bhi, jiski wajah se ether pockets form ho jaate the jahan ether sabse zyada dense hota tha. Inke dungeons bhi Earth jaise hi hote the, lekin yahan weather kaafi strange hota tha twisted gravity, abnormal climates, aur zyada aggressive monsters.

Goblin tribes, dire wolves aur beast-men yahan common monsters the. In monsters mein basic intelligence hoti thi jaise packs mein kaam karna, ya simple weapons use karna, bilkul Stone Age humans ki tarah. Stone clubs, stone-point spears, aur kuch toh basic shelters bhi bana lete the.

In monsters ko hunt karne ke liye hunters ko ether-imbued weapons ya dungeon minerals se bane gear use karna padta tha. Normal guns in par kaam nahi karti thi. Inke internal cores ko damage karne ke liye ether-mineral bullets chahiye hoti thi.

Risky hone ke bawajood, Blue Gates hunter guilds ki backbone the. Inke monsters se mid-tier cores milte the, aur yahan ke ether stones aur minerals high-level hote the jo advanced civilian technology aur military gear mein use hote the. Blue Gates ko guilds ke beech auction bhi kiya jaata tha, aur contracts diye jaate the unhe sabse fast aur efficient tareeke se clear karne ke liye.

Mostly, ek B-rank hunter ke liye Blue Gates gold mines jaise the jahan woh survive bhi kar sakta tha aur heavy rewards ke saath wapas bhi aa sakta tha.

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Yellow Gates​

Blue Gates ke baad aate the Yellow Gates.

Yellow Gates kaafi different hote the. Inka form hona hi ek warning maana jaata tha. Yeh abnormal ether storms create kar sakte the, short-term electronic blackouts, aur seismic vibrations bhi.

Yeh nature mein kaafi unstable hote the. Jahan bhi koi Yellow Gate appear hota tha, wahan ki hunter association regional alert ke saath poora area evacuate karwa deti thi.

Iska reason yeh tha ki agar in gates ke monsters dungeon break karke bahar aa jaate, toh poore towns tak destroy ho sakte the.

Ogres, orcs aur large monsterkin Yellow Gates ke andar milte the. Yeh ordinary monsters nahi hote the, balki ek tarah ke soldiers hote the dangerous, powerful, aur basic magic use karne mein capable. Kuch ether ko manipulate kar sakte the, kuch basic armor pehne hote the, aur kuch apni small monster armies lead karte the.

Yellow Gates ko Repeating Dungeons bhi kaha jaata tha, kyunki clear hone ke kuch din baad hi inke andar monsters phir se form ho jaate the. Inhe scheduled operations ke saath ek strong strike team se clear karna padta tha.

Yahi woh jagah thi jahan kai hunters, jo A-rank ka sapna dekhte the, apni jaan gawa dete the. Ya phir woh hunters jo apni strength ko overestimate kar lete the aur apne enemy ki intelligence ko underestimate kar dete the.

Jahan bhi Yellow Gates form hote the, wahan governments special military guilds deploy karti thi. Armed tanks, ether-weapon-trained units station ki jaati thi. Yellow Gates unke liye battlefields hote the.

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Red Gates​

Yellow Gates ke baad aate the Red Gates.

Yeh sirf gates nahi the yeh doosre worlds ke raaste the. Green, Blue aur Yellow Gates Earth-like dungeons banate the, lekin Red Gates dimensional fissures the jo alien worlds ko Earth se connect karte the.

Inke andar ke worlds fixed nahi hote the. Kabhi koi Red Gate aise wasteland se connect hota tha jahan burning sand aur liquid glass flow karta tha. Wahan Red Goblins aur Black Ogres rule karte the, aur wahan ka sun blood-red hota tha.

Kuch Red Gates frozen kingdoms se connect hote the jahan heavy snowfall aur powerful wind currents hote the. Yahan Dark Elves rule karte the dikhne mein beautiful, lekin ice element par poora control rakhte the. Yeh ambush tactics use karke human hunters ka shikaar karte the.

Kabhi-kabhi kuch Red Gates aise worlds se bhi connect ho jaate the jo paradise islands jaise dikhte the. Lush forests, clear water aur blue skies sab kuch perfect lagta tha.
Lekin is beauty ke peeche chhupe hote the Tree Humans monsters jinka shape humans jaisa hota tha, lekin skin tree ki tarah hoti thi. Fingers ki jagah claws, pairon ki jagah roots, aur aankhon ki jagah glowing green orbs. Aisa lagta tha jaise Aether ne humans aur trees ko merge karke ek terrifying creature bana diya ho.

In sab reasons ki wajah se A-rank se neeche ke hunters Red Gates ke paas bhi nahi ja sakte the. Sirf A-rank ya S-rank hunters hi inke andar survive kar sakte the.

Lekin inhe clear karna…

woh ek bilkul hi alag kahani thi.

Bahut hi badhiya update diya hai hay Suthar bhai....
Nice and beautiful update....

 

[Smith_15]

 

[Jay Sutar]

Nice update
And explanation about gates

Bahot khoob badhia shaandar
Shuruwat
Dekhte h ab Veer ko yaha kon se challenge ka samna karna padta h

Bahot khoob
Shaandar update

Bahot khoob
Shaandar update

nice update

Aye yo, Shut the front door.

Jay Sutar my guy these 2 chapters are 101 world building chapters.

Every aspect you had mentioned here is top notch. It didn't feel like we are going read a story which will revolve around only Main character. This would make world alive more than what Solo Levelling had. Specially the way Gate Economics and how Hunter specifications are added are cherry on the top. Beside you gave hunters rising chance from their awakening ranks. This was missiong in Solo Levelling where as hunter stuck at their awaken rank. Your added touch will make this story more engaging.

Adios...

Bahot badhiya shaandar update
Bahot badhiya tareeke gates ke baare me samjhaya
Ab dekhte h aage kia hota h

Bahut hi badhiya update diya hai hay Suthar bhai....
Nice and beautiful update....

Thank You Guys.

 

[Jay Sutar]

Chapter 4

Waise toh gates humanity ke liye danger the, lekin unke saath hi woh ab humanity ki nayi lifeline ban chuke the. Unke andar milne wale Aether Stones, Monster Cores, rare aetheric minerals aur arcane flora yeh sab Earth ke fossil fuels ko replace kar chuke the.

Inki wajah se energy systems super-charged ho gaye the, medicines aur bhi advance ho chuki thi, aur agriculture poori tarah se change ho gaya tha.

Ab har ek major city mein ek Gate Nexus hota tha, jise local Hunter Association monitor karti thi, aur unke saath guilds patrolling karti rehti thi.

India apni special geography aur Aether veins ki wajah se ek global powerhouse ban chuka tha. Desh ke 9 S-Rank hunters national heroes the, aur unmein se kuch Defence Council ke advisors bhi the.

Wahin India ki economic capital, Mumbai, mein 2 S-Rank hunters station kiye gaye the taaki woh Arabian Sea ke volatile zone ko guard kar saken.

Green aur Blue Gates India ke aether export ke sabse bade sources mein se ek the. Akhand Energy aur Suryatek Defence jaise corporations in gates ke mining operations se kaafi profit kama rahi thi.

Private guilds aur government joint operations mein resources ko split karte the, aur iske saath hi hazaaron workers aur hunters ko employment bhi mil rahi thi.

Lekin is industrial miracle ke neeche ek dar hamesha chhupa hua tha pata nahi kab, kahin par ek Red Gate open ho jaaye.

Kya ho agar next time jab koi powerful gate open ho, toh woh kisi dungeon se connect hone ke bajaye kisi aise world se connect ho jaaye jo human minds ki understanding se hi bahar ho?

Kabhi-kabhi jo scholars in gates ki anomalies ko study karte the, woh yeh bhi kehte the ki yeh gates random nahi hain. Shayad yeh humare liye ek test hain aur real trial ka start hona abhi baaki hai.

Doosri taraf, Satara region ke forest area mein kuch movement ho rahi thi.

Aaj aasman bilkul clear tha, is wajah se moon aur stars forest par kaafi clearly shine kar rahe the. Hawa poore forest ke andar se jaise dance kar rahi thi, aur gire hue leaves us hawa ke saath udte hue ek calming sound create kar rahe the.

Tabhi, bina kisi warning ke, un woods ke beech ek shimmering portal open hua.

Lekin yeh portal un sab portals se bilkul alag tha jinke baare mein humanity jaanti thi.

Yeh ek golden portal tha jo chaos se nahi, balki cosmic will se form hua tha. Jaise hi woh portal bana, hawa ka flow dheere ho gaya, aur sab kuch jaise slow motion mein chala gaya ho.

Us portal ke andar se ek figure bahar nikli.

Uske steps unstable the, aur uski breathing abhi bhi normal nahi hui thi. Uski body par abhi bhi woh marks the jo use apni last battle mein mile the.

Woh koi aur nahi… Veer tha.

Suryadev ki us nothingness ke andar portal open karne ke baad, Veer usmein enter kar gaya tha aur ab woh is world mein aa chuka tha.

Is world mein aate hi Veer ne ek gehri saans li aur upar night sky ki taraf dekha. Aasman bilkul clear tha. Use aisa laga jaise moon aur stars uske aane par aur bhi zyada brightness ke saath shine kar rahe ho.

Apni saanson ko control mein lane ke baad, Veer ne apne aas-paas dekha.

Woh kisi forest ke beech mein tha. Ab use yahan se nikal kar kisi aise area tak jaana hoga jahan humans rehte ho, taaki woh jaan sake ki woh exactly kahan hai.

Usne ek pal ke liye apni body ko dekha.

Jahan pehle uski body par ek golden armor hota tha jo uske chest, stomach aur poori back ko cover karta tha ab wahan kuch bhi nahi tha.

Uske kaanon mein jo pehle sun-shaped earrings (kundal) hote the, woh bhi ab gayab the.

Dark Being ko completely destroy karne ke liye, Veer apne armor aur earrings dono ki powers use kar chuka tha.

Veer ne apni aankhen close ki aur apni saanson ko steady karne laga.

Jab Veer ne apni aankhen open ki, tab use apne aas-paas ek ajeeb si energy feel hui.

Yeh energy jaise poori hawa mein faili hui thi, lekin Veer is energy ke saath resonate nahi kar pa raha tha.

Veer ki aankhen shine hui, aur us shine ke saath woh hawa ke flow mein is ajeeb energy ko ek halki chamak ke saath dekh pa raha tha.

Sirf hawa mein hi nahi balki is world ki har cheez mein yeh energy maujood thi. Soil, trees, hawa har jagah Veer is energy ko dekh aur feel kar pa raha tha.

Saath hi, use yeh energy unstable bhi lag rahi thi. Jaise yeh is world ke liye bani hi na ho, lekin phir bhi is world mein iska presence tha.

Tabhi Veer ko kuch sense hua.

Usne palat kar ek direction ki taraf dekha.

Forest ke andar se koi bhaagta hua uski taraf aa raha tha.

Lekin jo bhi tha, woh ladkhada raha tha jaise kaafi injured ho aur kaafi der se bhaag raha ho. Usne apna ek haath apne chest par rakha hua tha.

Moon aur stars ki halki roshni mein Veer dekh pa raha tha ki us person ki back se kuch ghusa hua tha jo uske chest se bahar nikla hua tha.

Veer ne do-teen steps aage liye aur aane wali situation ko face karne ke liye ready ho gaya.

Tabhi woh person bhaagte-bhaagte aa kar Veer se crash ho gaya.

Woh bhaagte hue bhi peeche ki taraf dekh raha tha, is wajah se use pata hi nahi chala ki Veer uske saamne khada hai.

Us pal mein jaise time ruk sa gaya ho.

Veer aur us person ki aankhen ek-dusre se mili, aur dono ki saansein jaise ek pal ke liye tham si gayi.

Veer jaise ek moment ke liye saans lena bhool gaya. Uski heartbeat bhi jaise ruk si gayi thi.

Kyunki jo person abhi uske baahon mein tha…

woh koi aur nahi, balki bilkul usi jaisa dikhne wala Veer khud tha.

Uske baal, uski aankhen, uska face sab kuch same.

Jaise Veer khud ko ek mirror mein dekh raha ho.

“Kaun…?”

Shock mein Veer ne us person se poocha.

Lekin doosra Veer, jo apni last saanson ko gin raha tha, woh bhi apne jaise dikhne wale insaan ko dekh kar shock ho gaya tha.

Uski aankhen surprise aur confusion se badi ho gayi thi. Woh kuch kehna chahta tha, lekin awaaz uske gale mein hi atak gayi…

aur Veer ki baahon mein hi uski saansein ruk gayi.

Yeh dekh kar Veer aur bhi zyada shock ho gaya.

Usne doosre Veer ko neeche ground par lita diya aur uske paas jhuk kar baith gaya. Usne uska haath rub karte hue kaha,

“Na… nahi… please ruk ja. Apni aankhen band mat kar…”

Lekin ab Veer kuch bhi nahi kar sakta tha.

Doosra Veer uski baahon mein hi apni aakhri saans le chuka tha.

Veer bilkul samajh nahi pa raha tha ki ab kya kare.

Tabhi ek aur shock use laga.

Doosre Veer ki body halki si starlight ke saath shine karne lagi, aur dekhte hi dekhte woh shining stardust mein transform ho gayi.

Woh stardust hawa mein ghoomne lagi aur phir dheere-dheere Veer ki body par land karne lagi.

“Yeh sab kya ho raha hai…?!”

Veer apni baat poori bhi nahi kar paaya tha ki achanak uske mind mein extreme pain utha.

Woh stardust sirf uski body mein hi nahi, balki uski soul mein enter ho kar uske saath merge ho gayi.

Aur uske saath hi, doosre Veer ki memories bhi jo ab Veer ke mind ke saamne is world ke Veer ki poori life dikhane lagi.

Veer ke muh se ek zor ki cheekh nikli, jo poore forest mein ghoonj gayi.

Veer cheekhte hue apne ghutnon par gir gaya.

Usne apne dono haathon se apna sir pakad liya tha.

Yeh pain sirf physical nahi tha balki psychic aur spiritual bhi tha.

Is ek hi moment mein Veer is world ke Veer ki har ek memory ko experience kar raha tha.

Is single painful moment mein Veer sirf memories hi nahi dekh raha tha, balki yeh bhi samajh raha tha ki yeh world kaise work karta hai.

Jaise uske past world mein Veer ki ek family thi, waise hi is world ke Veer ki bhi family thi bas kuch changes ke saath.

Past world mein uske father ek civil servant the.

Is world mein uske father ek firefighter ke saath-saath hunter bhi the.

Lekin 10 saal pehle, woh ek Yellow Gate ke andar apni poori team ke saath gayab ho gaye the.

5 saal pehle, is world ke Veer ki maa ek coma-jaisi state mein chali gayi thi.

Yeh woh state hoti hai jahan kuch humans ki body zyada aether presence ko handle nahi kar paati, aur us wajah se alag tareeke se react karti hai.

Is world ke Veer ki maa ke saath bhi yehi hua tha.

Doctors aur scientists is state ke aage fail ho chuke the, kyunki kisi ko bhi yeh nahi pata tha ki kisi ko is condition se kaise bahar nikala jaaye.

Isi wajah se pichhle 5 saalon se is world ka Veer aisi field mein kaam kar raha tha jahan har roz uski death hone ke chances the.

Aur aaj… uski death Veer ki baahon mein ho gayi thi us Veer ki, jo doosre world se aaya tha.

Jaise past world mein Veer ki ek chhoti sister thi, waise hi is world ke Veer ki bhi ek chhoti sister thi.

Woh abhi high school mein thi aur apni studies par focus kar rahi thi.

Uska dream tha ki woh badi hokar doctor bane, aur apni maa ko is coma-jaisi state se bahar nikaale.

Iske saath-saath Veer woh sab bhi feel kar raha tha jo is world ke Veer ne ab tak experience kiya tha
har woh moment jahan uski death hote-hote reh gayi thi,

har woh insult jo use dusron se mili thi.

Veer ne apni fist tightly close ki itni tight ki uski mutthi se khoon nikalne laga.

Usne ek baar phir upar aasman ki taraf dekha aur zor se chillaya.

Yeh cheekh kisi physical pain ki nahi thi, balki is world ke Veer ke liye thi
jisne itna sab hone ke baad bhi hope nahi chhodi thi.

Usne apna har dard sabse chhupa kar rakha, taaki uski chhoti sister ko kabhi yeh pata na chale ki woh kis situation se guzar raha hai.

Veer ke liye, is world ke Veer ka pain us pain se bhi zyada painful tha jab usne apna past world chhod kar us nothingness mein entry li thi sirf Dark Being ko face karne ke liye.

Aur jab haarne ke baad Suryadev ne use bataya tha ki uska world apni life cycle complete kar chuka hai aur ab wahan kuch bhi baaki nahi bacha.

Veer ne poori force ke saath apne dono haath zameen par de maare.

BOOM!

Us area mein ek bada crater form ho gaya.

Paas ke trees jaise ground se ukhad kar gir gaye.

Dust ka ek cloud bana, aur uske centre mein Veer aankhen band kiye hue gehri saanse le raha tha.

Woh apni aur is world ke Veer ki memories ko dheere-dheere settle kar raha tha.

Veer ab thoda-thoda samajh pa raha tha ki kyun Suryadev ne use is world mein bheja hai.

Kaafi der tak wahan baithne ke baad, Veer khada hua.

Usne ek gehri saans li, upar aasman ki taraf dekha, aur phir us direction mein chal pada
jahan se is world ka Veer bhaagte hue uski taraf aaya tha.