Black water
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Bas bhai...pics add karne aur editing karne mein waqt jyada laga gaya..Bhai......10.40...ho gya... update kb tk aayega.
Thanks Nky Bhai !!Congrats bhai
Thanks Nky Bhai !!Nice update bhai
Ab shayad hero or heroine ki entry ka time aa gya h
Thanks bhia mera invitation accept karne ke liye...Hello bro......
So finally I'm here.....for the reviews.....
First of all.....congratulationsfor your first story....
End now let's talk about story.....
Ye mera aapki story par first or last comment hai....kyoki iske baad me aapke thread par nahi aaunga....
Aapne mujhe apne thread par bulaya uske liye dil se thanks....OR meri dua hai aapki story bahut uchaai yo par jaaye....
And last please don't get this otherwise.....
My best wishes with you...
Thanks.....
Behtarin update bhai kaber par hamla huva he ab dekhna he ki kabir bachpata heya nahi or hayan or anaya ko jab pata chalega to kya tabahi machayenge waiting for next
update
Thanks Rider bhai !!Ya kya kabeer ko khatam kar diya that's not fair yar
Nice update bro superb story bechara Kya kabeer Bache ga agar nhi bachega toh uska Kya asar hoga hayaan par waiting for next update
Thanks Vickey bhai !!Mast update h Bhai
Maza aa gya
Thanks Amir Bro...Nice update bro