Nice update bhai
Ab shayad hero or heroine ki entry ka time aa gya h
Ab shayad hero or heroine ki entry ka time aa gya h
Fantasy Hayaan - Ek Insaan Ya Shaitaan
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Vikram singh rana
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Hello bro......
So finally I'm here.....for the reviews.....
First of all.....congratulations
for your first story....
End now let's talk about story.....
Ye mera aapki story par first or last comment hai....kyoki iske baad me aapke thread par nahi aaunga....
Aapne mujhe apne thread par bulaya uske liye dil se thanks....OR meri dua hai aapki story bahut uchaai yo par jaaye....
And last please don't get this otherwise.....
My best wishes with you...
Thanks.....
So finally I'm here.....for the reviews.....
First of all.....congratulations
for your first story....End now let's talk about story.....
Ye mera aapki story par first or last comment hai....kyoki iske baad me aapke thread par nahi aaunga....
Aapne mujhe apne thread par bulaya uske liye dil se thanks....OR meri dua hai aapki story bahut uchaai yo par jaaye....
And last please don't get this otherwise.....
My best wishes with you...
Thanks.....
Hellohoney
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Behtarin update bhai kaber par hamla huva he ab dekhna he ki kabir bachpata heya nahi or hayan or anaya ko jab pata chalega to kya tabahi machayenge waiting for next update
Ya kya kabeer ko khatam kar diya that's not fair yar
Nice update bro superb story bechara Kya kabeer Bache ga agar nhi bachega toh uska Kya asar hoga hayaan par waiting for next update
Awesome fantastic Mind-blowing update Bhai..
Anaya or Hayaan ka birthday sath Mai kiw hota hai ye PTA cl gya ...
Hayaan or Anaya ka birthday Mai dhamkedar entry Hui...mjaa aagay Bhai padh KR.
Ap ki sayri se PTA cl Gya Hayaan ke Dil Ma parents ki kiy jagh hai .
Hayaan or Anaya to party Mai indirctly SB ke samne ek dusre ko parpose KR diye. Kiy gjb ki sayri hai Bhai....padh KR hasi v aarhi thi or ek dusre ka pyar or emotion v sow ho RHA tha ...
Wahi dusri tarf kabeer ke sath Jo hua bahut bura hua ..but ek BT hajm krne wali nhi Hui is time kabeer ke personal scurity Kahn hai....
mujhe lgta hai kabeer ki bachaya ja skta hai.anaya ke pass healing power hai...
Kisi ne Sach hi kaha jindgi ka kiy bharosha. Aaj hu kiy PTA kl na rhu.
Samay de bada koi nhi hota ..ek time bahut sari khushiya de jati hai .dusre pal sbkuch chin leti hai .
Intzar rahega Bhai..agle update ka ...
Anaya or Hayaan ka birthday sath Mai kiw hota hai ye PTA cl gya ...
Hayaan or Anaya ka birthday Mai dhamkedar entry Hui...mjaa aagay Bhai padh KR.
Ap ki sayri se PTA cl Gya Hayaan ke Dil Ma parents ki kiy jagh hai .
Hayaan or Anaya to party Mai indirctly SB ke samne ek dusre ko parpose KR diye. Kiy gjb ki sayri hai Bhai....padh KR hasi v aarhi thi or ek dusre ka pyar or emotion v sow ho RHA tha ...
Wahi dusri tarf kabeer ke sath Jo hua bahut bura hua ..but ek BT hajm krne wali nhi Hui is time kabeer ke personal scurity Kahn hai....
mujhe lgta hai kabeer ki bachaya ja skta hai.anaya ke pass healing power hai...
Kisi ne Sach hi kaha jindgi ka kiy bharosha. Aaj hu kiy PTA kl na rhu.
Samay de bada koi nhi hota ..ek time bahut sari khushiya de jati hai .dusre pal sbkuch chin leti hai .
Intzar rahega Bhai..agle update ka ...
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Amir
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Bhai kiy BT ho gya ..Jo aap ka is thred pr last comment hai. .Hello bro......
So finally I'm here.....for the reviews.....
First of all.....congratulations
End now let's talk about story.....
Ye mera aapki story par first or last comment hai....kyoki iske baad me aapke thread par nahi aaunga....
Aapne mujhe apne thread par bulaya uske liye dil se thanks....OR meri dua hai aapki story bahut uchaai yo par jaaye....
And last please don't get this otherwise.....
My best wishes with you...
Thanks.....
Reza
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