Fantasy Hayaan - Ek Insaan Ya Shaitaan

[Pintupaul]

Awesome story bro....
Bich me mt chor Dena pls

 

[Naina]

First of all for new story...

Fantasy prefix mein best stories mein se ek hain.... narrations aur language ki pakad kaafi majbut hain.. flow bhi achhi hain kahani ki...
Kahani ke characters ko bade mein bahot hi khubsurat tarike se explain karke darshaya gaye hain...
Let's see aage Kounsi mod aati hain kahani mein.....
Brilliant update with awesome writing skill.....

 

[Hayaan]

Awesome story bro....
Bich me mt chor Dena pls

Thanks Paul bhai !!
Abhi to start ki hai aise kaise beech mein chhod dunga,
dont worry complete milegi....

 

[Naina]

Aisa lag raha hai jaise kisi ko story Pasand nahi aa rahi...
gine chune likes aur comment bs aate,
Views bhi bahut ka hai.....


Hausla badhao to update bhi aur jaldi aaye...

Don't worry...... aap bas likhte jaiye....

 

[Hayaan]

First of all for new story...

Fantasy prefix mein best stories mein se ek hain.... narrations aur language ki pakad kaafi majbut hain.. flow bhi achhi hain kahani ki...
Kahani ke characters ko bade mein bahot hi khubsurat tarike se explain karke darshaya gaye hain...
Let's see aage Kounsi mod aati hain kahani mein.....
Brilliant update with awesome writing skill.....

Thanks Naina ji !!
Given your most Valuable review,
Next 5 update ke baad Kahani khulkar samne aayegi...
Keep waiting

 

[Hayaan]

Don't worry...... aap bas likhte jaiye....

Bas next update kuchh min mein
complete ho jaye update kar dunga...

 

[Hayaan]

Lo Friends Update aa gaya Maze karo

aur comment karo

 

[Hayaan]

Ab.tak...,,,
Shaitan Eblis jo Dhyan me baitha tha Achanak uski Aankhe khul gayi,
Eblis Krodh me Jorr se Daharra Geryonnnnnn !!!!!

Ab..Aage.....Update No. 8 ( uff Devil se mistake )

Ab Kabeer wapas Ganv jaane dete hai taaki wo Shadi ki taiyari kar sake tab tak Hum Eblis aur Geryon ka haal chal jaan lete hai...


Geryon ka Virya Jub Queen ke andar Pahuncha to Achanak Geryon ko tez jhatka laga aur bahut door Ja gira,
aur Behosh ho gaya.....

Jub Geryon ko Hosh aaya....To use Uske Pita Eblis ki tez daharr sunayi di....Jo Geryon ko hi bula rahe the....

Geryon jub apne pita ke samne upastith hua to...
Eblis ne Geryon ki Gardan pakad li....aur wahin Jameen mein Jorr se patak diya.....

Aaj pahli baar Geryon ne apne pita ka itna bhayanak Raudr roop dekha tha...
Aankhon se angaare nikal rahe the...krodh se,

Ab Geryon ko bhi Ahsas ho gaya tha ki Usse koi bahut badi galti ho gayi hai...jiske karan uska pita itna tam-tamaya hua hai...

Eblis - Are murakh itni shaktiyon ka malik hokar bhi Jara si bi Buddhi nahi hai tere mein...

Tere Andar Mera khoon daud raha hai...Shaitan ka Andhere ka betaj badshah ka,

Tujhe pata hai tere andar, Pisach, Jinn, Manshya sabki Shaktiyan Samahi...Sabki Chhod meri Shaktiyan Black Energy Samahit hai....fir tune kaise itni badi bhool kar di,

Pari Lok ki Maharani se sambhog kiya...Jiske paas kewal White Energy hai,
Jo aajtak tere Baap ne bhi nahi kiya aur karne se darrta tha, wo aaj tune karr dala,

Murkh tujhe iska Anjaam pata hai kya hoga...??
Tune Pure Shaitan Lok ka Bhavishy khatre mein Daal, khud mera bhi,

Kaha Gayi Wo Angel Queen Elizabeth...Ebils bola,

Geryon - Achanak uske body ko charo aoor Safed Roahni fail Gayi, mujhe tez Jhatka laga, mai bahut door ja gira,
jub wapas gaya to Wo wahan nahi thi.....

Eblis - Le gaye use Angel (Farishte) uthakar, aur tu pade tamasha dekhta raha,

Teri ek galti ki Saja Poori Shaitan Nagri uske manne walon ko Bhugatni padegi...

Hawash mein itna andha ho gaya tha ki meri Di Huyi Taqat aur Gyan ka tujhe koi Hosh na raha...

Ishwar ko to Meri Bas ek aur galti ki der thi,
Jiska unhe Na jaane kitne samay se Intezaar tha,

Wo to Chahte the ki humse koi bhool ho aur uski Hamein saza dein,

Wo tune aaj kar di Gerryonnnn, Eblis Fufkarte huye bola bade hi kathor lahze mein..

Ab Jakar Geryon ko bhi Andaaza ho gaya tha ki Devil ka future ab khatrein me hai,

Geryon - Darr se tharrate huye bola, Ab mai kya karu Pita ji..??

Wo sab karne se pahle puchha tha kya..mujhse jo ab poochh raha hai...?? Eblis dahadte huye bola..

Eblis - Mai Pahle White Energy ka dharak tha, aur baad mein Devil bana, mujhme Aaj bhi White energy baaki hai,

Lekin tu Geryon...Kewal Black Energy ka dharak hai, tu kewal Kaali shakti ka Malik hai,

Tujh par hi to Puri Shaitan prajati ka Bhavishya tika tha,

Tu jisse Bhi chahe tu waisa karwa sakta tha..Apni kaali Shakti ke dum par

Lekin mai White aur Black dono Energy ka Upasak hu, mai Sirf Praniyon ko bahka sakta hu bure karmo ke liye,
Badhya nahi kar sakta, wo us prani ka faisla hota hai ki wo kya chunega...?? Achha Ya Bura..??

Lekin Tu kisi ko b badhya kar sakta hai Bure karmon ke liye

Lekin teri iss bhool Sabkuchh Tahas- Nahas kar diya,

Kya sonchke maine tujhe banaya tha....aur tune kya se kya kar diya...??

Geryon - Lekin ab mai kya karu..??
kaise sudharu Apni bhool ko..??

Eblis - 3 din sirf 3 din ka waqt hai tere Paas,
Kisi bhi tarah karke use Khoj aur Use Bandi bana le Apni shaktiyon ke Chakravyuh mein Faanskar use Patal Lok ke Anant Gahri khayi mein Chhipa de,

Aur uske Upar Apni Sampoorn Shakti Ka kawach laga de Jisse ki uska Nam-o- Nissan tak baaki na rahe....

Geryon - thik hai pita ji, mai use jaroor khoj lunga aur kaisa bhi kar lunga.. Kintu..??

Eblis - Kya..??

Geryon - Aapne kaha Sampoorn Shakti ka suraksha kawach....??
isse to meri Shaktiyan Khatm ho Jayengi..Mai to Ek insan ban jaunga..jo sirf Shaitan Ki upasna karta hai,

Eblis - Itna asaan nahi hai use pakad paana, Sayad use ab Pakadne mein hi teri Sampoorn Shakti Nasht ho jaye...Kyuki ab tu use maar nahi sakta..??
warna tu bhi mar jayega...

Mera kaha gaya ek-ek kathan Saty hai aur aisa hoga...tu bhi dekhega iska anjaam

Eblis - Ab tere kintu ka jawab,
Shaktiyan ekbaar khatm ho gayi to unki punah Prapti ki Ja sakti hai,
Kintu maut hone par Dubara nahi Jivit kiya ja sakta hai....Yah ek katu satya..

Geyron - Maar kyun nahi sakta...aisa kyu..??

Eblis - Tu mera Ansh hai, itna Na-samajh kaise ho sakta hai...??


Aaj ke liye Bas itna hi,

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[Rahul]

wonderfull update bhaiya ji

 

[Naina]

Ya toh maharani ko pakde aur bandi bana le tin din ke andar ya phir aane wale aafato ka samna kare geryon sahit sabhi evils....
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update writer sahab... Great going