Thriller Faraar (COMPLETED)

[Axba]

for new story chachu waise ye purani hai par shaandaar story hai mai fir se padhunga

 

[Casinar]

Update 1.​

Zor se kissi ki hanffne ki awaaz arahi thi. Bahot hi tezi se hanffte jaa raha tha koyi, aur awaaz door se dhire dhire nazdik ate sunaayi de rahi thi. Phir uss hanffte huwe awaaz ke piche kutton ke bhokne ki awaaz bhi sunaayi diya, aur jeise jeise uss hanffne ki awaaz ziada nazdik ati gayi to kutton ki bhonkne ki awaaz bhi karib sunaayi dene lagi. Jitne kareeb awaazein ane lagi utna hi saaf aur awaazein sunaayi dene lage; kadmon ke dawdne ki awaaz bhi sunaayi dene lage…..

Woh ek ghana jangal tha jiss ke beech koyi bahot hi tez raftaar ke saath dawde jaa raha tha aur kutte usske piche pade the. Aur unn kutton ke gale mein patte the aur chain bhi phir chains ke end mein ek ek dog police jinn ko kutte khinche jaa rahe the, kutte itna nervous the ke unn police walon se sambhaale nahin jaa rahe the, unn police walon mein se kayi police zameen par girr bhi pade kutte ko sambhaalte huwe, aur unn ke girrne par bhi kutte unn ko khinchte chale jaa rahe the tab drisht eisa lag raha tha ke police ek chorr hai aur kutta ussko pakar kar police station le jaa raha ho……

Uss bade jangal ke terhe merhe raaston se guzarte huwe oonch neech zameen ke faasle tey karte huwe, ek nawjawan bhaage jaa raha tha aur police kutton ke saath usska picha kar rahe the. Woh nawjawaan 25 saal ka ek ladka tha jisska kad koyi 6 feet 2 inches the aur usske lambe lambe tangein ussko dawne mein madad kar rahe the; woh baar baar peeche ke taraf mudh kar dekh raha tha ke kutte usske kitne kareeb aaye hein….. usska gala bilkool sookh gaya tha aur hanffte jaa raha tha…..

Kutton ke beech Dobermans, German shepherds aur Rotweiller’s bhi the, ek se badh kar ek khunkhaar aur khatarnaak tarah se trained kiye gaye the sab choron ko pakarne ke liye. Unn mein se ek Rottweiler’s tha jo ek baar kissi ko apne jabron mein pakar liya to bilkool hi nahin chorrte jab tak usska maalik aakar ussko chorrne ko naa kahe…woh sab se khatarnaak specie ka kutta tha aur ussko sambhaalna sab se mushkil tha. Rottweiler’s ek eisa kutta hai jo apne maalik ke ilawa kissi ko bhi nahin sunta. Agar ek ghar mein ek pati, patni aur do chaar log hote hein to unn mein se Rottweiler’s sirf ek hi ko apna maalik manta hai baaki kissi ko bhi nahin aur woh kissi par bhi tut padta hai. Dunya mein kayi jagahon par Rottweiler’s ne apne ghar ke sadasyon ko hi buri tarah se kaat kar ghaayal kiya hai…..

Jiss jangal ke chakkar kiya jaa raha tha woh koyi 200 acres ke zameen par tha, ab itne bade aur ghane jangal mein kitne der tak koyi dawd sakta hai bhala…..Phir kuch der baad ek helicopter ki awaaz sunaayi diya kuch doori par……jo nawjawaan dawd raha tha, pasina pasina to ho hi chukka tha, ussne apne sar upar ke taraf uthakar uss helicopter ki awaaz ke taraf nazar kiya, magar kuch nazar nahin aya phir bhi dhire dhire helicopter ki udhne ki awaaz kareeb ate sunaaayi de rahe the…. Nawjawaan kuch ghabra gaya aur khud se kaha, “lagta hai ab bachna mushkil hai!!” Ek oonchaayi se niche ke taraf dawd raha tha uss waqt jab helicopter achanak usske peeth se hokar tezi ke saath usske aaaguey gaya aur koyi aadhe mille tak jaakar helicopter phir muda usske taraf ate huwe….. woh nawjawaan ruk gaya aur aguey piche dekhne ke baad achanak ek chalaang laga diya apne aguey dekhte huwe…… usske saamne ek bahot hi bada nadi tha, aur ussne itni oochaayi se chalaang lagaayi jeise ke khudkhushi kar raha ho……. Tab helicopter ke pilote ne apne headset mein kaha, “He jumped in the river and its impossible for me to trace out, I can’t fly thereby, it’s dangerous.” Tab kutton ko handle karne wale police walon ke leader ne zor se awaaz diya, “kutton ko chorr diya jaye!!”

Woh nawjawaaan uss nadi ke gehre, khatarnaak tarike se behte paani mein girne se pehle ek peyr ke shaakhon par girra, unn shaakhon ko apne jism ke wazan aur oochaayi se girne ke kaaran todte huwe ek ke baad dusra phir teesra phir chawtha shaakh ko todke aur apne jism par anek ghaw lete huwe aakhir mein paani mein giraa aur itni gehraayi tak gaya ke upar se nazar ana mushkil hi nahin balke naamumkin tha.

Kutte - paagal kutton ki tarah dawtde dawdte usske jism ki khusbhoo ya badbhoo bhi keh sakte hein, usske pasine ke boondon ke mehek sungte huwe wahan tak ponhche jahan se woh paani mein kuda tha, aur unn kutton mein se German Shephered to ruk gaye wahin, aur ek do Dobermans paagal andhe ki tarah kud pade aur mawt ke ghaat utaare gaye sabhi Rottweiler’s ke saath….. ek bhi kutta nahin bacha German Shephered ke ilawa jo nadi ke taraf dekhte huwe bhonke jaa raha tha…… Aur jab police wale kutton tak ponhche to unn ko kuch nahin mila balke baaki kutton ko ganwa diye…… sab police wale laachaar ek dusre ko dekh kar unn kutton ke jeise hanff rahe the jeeb baaahar nikalkar……

Jiss ne paani mein chalaang mara woh Vikram tha, apnon ke liye Vicky. Mazbut, handsome, taakatwar, nek, imaandaar ladka. Magar huwa kia, police usske piche kyun pada tha aur woh bhi kutton ke saath aur helicopter bhi….kia kiya ussne eisa, kia jurm kiya uss ne? Agar nek aur imaandaar tha to case kia huwa? Aur kia woh chalaang maarne ke baad bach gaya? Ya doob kar mar gaya bechara? Agle update mein pata chalega. Aap log padhein aur apna comment post karein aur mujhe batein ke keisa laga aap ko iss kahani ka aramb?

 

[Axba]

Are itne kutte piche pade hai kismat me hoga to jaan bachegi vikram ki ye update tammam sawalon ko janam de raha achchi suruaat hai

 

[Rahul]

for new thread chachu

 

[Rahul]

is update me hame pata chala ki last me kewal ek kutta bacha jo smarty tha baki sare gussa ma andhe kudi maar duyi waise kaun hai ye vikram aur iske piche ladkiyon ki bajaye kutte kahe pade

 

[John Cena]

Nice start

 

[Ng_TheViper]

Nice starts ...

Seems like u r dog lover isliye dogs k bare m kafi likha ..

Well , starting m hi hero k piche kutte dauda diye but aisa kyu ye Janna h filahal


Let's see

 

[Rahul]

chachu agla update chapo

 

[Rahul]

waiting next update

 

[Casinar]

Are itne kutte piche pade hai kismat me hoga to jaan bachegi vikram ki ye update tammam sawalon ko janam de raha achchi suruaat hai

for new story chachu waise ye purani hai par shaandaar story hai mai fir se padhunga

shukriya dost, buss saath jude rehna yaara