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Lone survivor

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काफी दुख भरी कहानी है रिचेल की, लगता तो ऐसा ही है कि जॉन शायद जानबूझ कर गायब हुआ है। बाकी राइटर साहब ही बताएंगे की रूथ वेन अपने प्रोमिस पर कितना खरा उतरता है।

बढ़िया अपडेट।
jaanbuj kar kyu gayab hoga bhai vo? vo mar gaya hai aur uski body recover nahi ho paye
 
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Lone survivor

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क्या ही दर्द भरी दास्तान थी ' रचेल ' की । एक छोटा सा हंसता - खेलता परिवार और एक झटके मे सबकुछ बिखर गया ।
शायद यही नियति थी । शायद यही रचेल की प्रारब्ध थी । लेकिन रचेल की मै तारीफ करना चाहूंगा कि इतने दर्दनाक हादसे के बाद भी उसने खुद को सम्भाला । चेहरे पर मुस्कान लाने की हरसंभव कोशिश की । जीने की कोशिश की ।
कोई जान ही नही सकता कि उसके मुस्कान मे कितना दर्द छिपा हुआ है ।
agar dard dunia ko dikhane lag jaye to mazak ban jayenge sabke samne es se acha ek muskan ke piche sab chhupa lo
और सबसे महत्वपूर्ण कि आपने रचेल की इस दर्द भरे कथा को बहुत ही सहज , स्वभाविक और रियलिस्टिक रूप मे पेश किया । अत्यंत ही इमोशनल अपडेट था यह।
bahut bahut sukriya bhai
रचेल की मां-बाप की मृत्यु निसंदेह एक हादसा थी लेकिन उसके भाई जाॅन की गुमशुदगी हादसा नही है । शायद यह लड़का भी उन क्रूर साइंटिस्ट और डाॅक्टर के चंगुल मे फंस गया हो जहां रूठवेन फंस चुका था ।
रूठवेन की इस बात से न सिर्फ रचेल को आत्मिक संतुष्टी प्राप्त हुई होगी बल्कि हम सब रीडर्स को भी कि - रूठवेन जाॅन की तलाश अवश्य करेगा ।
es se pehle ruthven ko khud ki talaash karni padegi aur uske liye rachel ki khubsurati se bahar aakar khojna padega khud ko
रचेल और रूठवेन के दरम्यान जो कुछ कन्वर्सेशन हो रहा है , जो कुछ भावनाए पनप रही है , वह सब भी रीडर्स के दिल तक आसानी से पहुंच रहा है । और यह सब एक बेहतरीन राइटर की अद्भुत राइटिंग स्किल से ही सम्भव हो
thank you so much bhai. es se jada ek writer ko kya hi pasand aayega ki uska lekhan readers tak sahi tarike se pahuch raha ho.keep supporting
 

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Rachel or Ruthven ki badi achchi bondin banti jaa Rahi h jo dono ke liye achche hii baat h Rachel ka bhi koyi nahi h or filhal Ruthven ka bhi yahi bol sakte h
lekin rachel ke liye khatra bhi to hai ruthven. hai na bhai?
Rachel ki tow bahot hi dukh bhari Kahani h Rachel n tow kabhi sapne m bhi nahi socha hoga ki ek hi Raat m sab kuch badal Jayega ek hasta khela pariwar ke teen sadas 2 ki maut or ek ka kuch pata nahi
Kahi aisa tow nahi John bhi yeh research team walo ke chungle m fas gaya ho
johm mar gaya hai mere hissab se to
Baherhal Ruthven bhai sahab n wada ker lia h wapas Lana ka john ko dekhte h kaise poora hota h
Bahot behtareen shaandar lajawab update bhai
thank you so much bhai. keep supporting
 

Lone survivor

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Rachel or Ruthven ki badi achchi bondin banti jaa Rahi h jo dono ke liye achche hii baat h Rachel ka bhi koyi nahi h or filhal Ruthven ka bhi yahi bol sakte h
lekin rachel ke liye khatra bhi to hai ruthven. hai na bhai?
Rachel ki tow bahot hi dukh bhari Kahani h Rachel n tow kabhi sapne m bhi nahi socha hoga ki ek hi Raat m sab kuch badal Jayega ek hasta khela pariwar ke teen sadas 2 ki maut or ek ka kuch pata nahi
Kahi aisa tow nahi John bhi yeh research team walo ke chungle m fas gaya ho
johm mar gaya hai mere hissab se to
Baherhal Ruthven bhai sahab n wada ker lia h wapas Lana ka john ko dekhte h kaise poora hota h
Bahot behtareen shaandar lajawab update bhai
thank you so much bhai. keep supporting
 

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UPDATE-06
Raat ko kafi lambi rahi thi dono ki conversation esliye sone me late ho gaye the tabhi to rachel abhi tak apne bistar par chain ki nind so rahi thi

Use achi nind aane ka karan ye bhi tha ki saalo baad apne dil ka bhoj kisi ko suna kar thoda halka kar liya tha usne. Baad me ruthven ne halki fulki flirting ke sath uska man bhi theek kar diya tha

Knock knock

Jab kafi time ho gaya to ruthven gate bajane lag gaya kyuki vo to waqt se pehle hi uth gaya tha sapno ki vajah se

Bechare ko nind bhi naseeb nahi ho rahi thi. Kaisi life jee raha tha vo. Bahut der tak bahar batha batha sochta raha apne bare me aur fir jab sar dukhne laga to coffee bana kar rachel ke room ko knock kar diya

Vaise to room khula hi tha lekin aise kisi ladki ki room me jana use theek nahi laga

Baar baar knock ki aawaz se rachel ki bhi khubsurat neend toot gaye.

Rachel- kaun hai?
Nind me bhi aisa bewakufo wala sawal kiya. Ab jab ghar me uske aur ruth ke aur koe hai nahi to gate par kya bhoot aayega?

Ruthven- yamraaj. Tumhra waqt pura ho gaya kanya.
Ruth bahar se apni aawaz bhaari karte hue bola jise sun kar rachel ke chehre par ek pyaari smile aa gaye

Rachel- khula hai aa jao yamraaj aur le jao mujhe
Vo bhi muskurate hue boli

Ruthven- aajau main?

Rachel- ha.

To ruthven ghus gaya ander hath me coffee liye

Ruthven- pehle aap coffee pee lijiye fir aapko le jane ke program ke bare me sochenge

Rachel- etni achi nind aa rahi thi yuhi kharab kar di

Ruthven- aapki to achi thi lekin meri ka kya?

Rachel- tumhe kya hua? Sab theek hai?

Ruthven- ab jab tak aapki muskaan na dekh lu chain kaha milta hai mujhe

Rachel- acha ji? Vaise ek baat to hai tum flirt ache kar lete ho. Kitni ladkiyo ko fasaya hai abhi tak?

Ruthven- yaad nahi. Kabhi yaad aayega tab bataunga
Rachel- sorry
Use jab yaad aaya to turant hi sorry bol diya

Ruthven- vaise kya main kamyaab ho raha hu?

Rachel- kosis karte rahna chahiye.

Ruthven- aapki jankari ke liye bata du ki 10 baj gaye hai. Aapko shop bhi kholni hai

Rachel- aise mosam me kaun hi aata hai? Ek do jo aayenge vo yaha aajayenge agar kuch jada hi jaruri hua to

Ruthven- vaise aapne abhi tak meri salary ke bare me kuch nahi bataya hai. Decide karlo jaldi se nahi to main kahi aur kaam dund lunga vaise bhi meri boss bahut lazy hoti ja rahi hai

Rachel- tumne mujhe apne kaam se impress hi nahi kiya hai abhi tak to main kya sochu? Pura din to faltu ki baatein karte rahte ho

Ruthven- to mujhe salary nahi milegi?

Rachel- abhi to nahi.

Ruthven- okay. Main bahar wait kar raha hu aap ready hokar aajao
Aur vo bahar chala gaya aur rachel ko laga sayad usko salary ke bare me bura lag gaya esliye chala gaya. Kuch soch kar vo bed se uthi coffee khatam ho gaye to washroom me ghus gaye aur aadhe gante ke baad tayar hokar hall me aa gaye jaha ruthven newspaper padh raha tha

Rachel- koe ladki pasand aa gaye kya jo etna dhayan se dekh rahe ho? Samjh to kuch aa nahi raha hoga tumhe

Ruthven- aisa hi kuch maan lo

Rachel- main breakfast bana leti hu fir dekhte hai aaj kya karna hai

Ruthven- maine bana diya hai lunch bhi

Rachel- ohh thanks
Aur muskuraye lekin ruthven newspaper me hi busy raha to rachel ko fir vahi khayal aaya ki esko salary ki baat buri lag gaye hai

Rachel- ruth…
Ruthven- hmm

Rachel- vo salary ki baat maine mazak me boli thi. Tumhe jitne paiso ki jarurat hogi main de dungi. Vaise bhi yaha mera kya hi kharcha hai kya karungi main paiso ka aur agar tumhe salary bhi chahiye to bhi main de dungi salary
Ek anjaan ladka jo kuch hi dino pehle use mila tha uske liye etna sab kuch? Jise na vo janti na pahchanti in fact vo ladka khud ko hi nahi janta to fir rachel uske liye etna sab kuch kyu kar rahi hai?

Ruthven- kya?

Rachel- ha main mazak kar rahi thi. Sorry agar tumhe bura laga ho to.

Ruthven- what the hell???? Aapne mujh jaise anjaan ke liye etna kuch kar diya vo kya kam hai? Rahne ko ghar de rahi ho, khane ko khana de rahi ho, pahane ko kapde de rahi ho?? Ab bhi paiso ki baat beech me aaegi kya?
Aisa to maine kuch kiya bhi nahi aapke liye jo etna sab mere liye karo. Aur rahi baat paiso ki to chahe main khud ko janta nahi pahchanta nahi lekin etna to main sure hu ki main ek din me main bahut sara paisa ikkatha kar sakta hu

Rachel- nahi vo tum aise hi bahar aa gaye aur ab bhi tumne theek se jawab nahi diya to mujhe laga tumhe bura lag gaya ho

Ruthven- hayyyee mere bura lagne par etna feel ho raha hai aapko???? Ha ha bolo?

Rachel- shut up
Aur rachel blush karte hue kitchen ki taraf bhag li

Fir kuch der baad normal hokar breakfast leke aa gaye. Dono ne shanti se khana khaya aur fir shop par chale gaye

Decide ye hua ki kuch der shop kholenge aur uske baad rachel ruth ko uska town dikhayegi.


Vahi dusri aur

Chief- kya program hai doctor??

Doctor- es baar ke subjects ache aaye hai. Bahut positive results mil rahe hai

Chief- aur milne bhi chahiye nahi to aapka pata hi hai

Doctor- i know. Subject 001 ka kuch pata chala?

Chief- vo mar chuka hai doctor. Ab uske bare me sochna bekar hai. Acha hoga ki hum usko bhul kar aage badhe

Doctor- vo pehla tha esliye thoda kareeb ho gaya tha. Socha tha bahut kaam aayega vo humare aur mera naam bahut bada karega lekin sab kharab ho gaya.

Chief- pani ne hi usko humse milvaya aur pani ne hi usko humse door kar diya.

Doctor- vaise vo bach bhi sakta hai. Bahut strong will power thi uski

Chief- abhi tak to uski haddiya bhi nahi bachi hogi. Uske bare me chhodo doctor aur achi news sunao mujh par bahut pressure hai

Doctor- maine suna…

Chief- mat suno kuch bhi. Bas apne kaam kar dhayan lagaye rakho aur kucu mat suno. Next time progress aur jada honi chahiye

Aur chief vaha se nikal jata hai

Bahar aakar apni ghadi me batha hi tha ki uska phone bajne lagta hai

Chief- hello

“Sir sanganiya(place) me underworld don black cobra dikhaye diya hai” samne se aawaz aaye

Chief- inform our local assets out there. Main 20 minutes me pahuch raha hu aur mujhe har second ki update chahiye. Es baar vo bach kar nikalna nahi chahiye

“Yes sir” aur phone cut jata hai

Chief- headquarter now and fast
Apne driver se bolta hai aur ghadi apni raftaar me daudne lagti hai

20 minutes matlab 20 minutes me hi vo vaha pahuch jata hai

Headquarter pahuch kar

Chief- whats the status?

Anderson- sir we lost the target

Chief- what?? How??

Anderson- vo tower me ghusa fir vaha se kaha gayab ho gaya pata hi nahi chala. Humare assets ne pura tower chhan mara lekin kahi kuch hath nahi mila

Chief- to kya building kha gaye usko? Useless fellow
Dundo usko nahi to yahi se bahar fek dunga sabko
Aur gusse me gate jor se band karte hue vaha se chala gaya


Rachel- jada kuch to hai nahi yaha. Ice skating kar sakte ho

Ruthven- aap ke hote hue jada ki khawaish bhi nahi hai

Rachel- hayehaye romeo thahar jao.

Ruthven- ice skating nahi karni. Bas jagah dikha do. Kaha kya hai

Rachel- sirf bahar se hi dekhna hai kya?

Ruthven- ander se aap dikha kaha rahi hai?

Rachel- maine kab mana…… ruthhhh i am gonna kill you agar fir aisa bola to. Vo blush kar rahi thi aur juthe gusse se ruthven ko boli

Ruthven- mare hue ko aur kya marogi aap?

Rachel- please stop. Please

Ruthven- aap sach me chahti ho main na bolu?

Rachel- ha

Ruthven- meri taraf meri aankhon me dekh kar bolo to manu

Rachel- tumhre jada pankh nahi nikal gaye hai?
Rachel ko to acha aur lag raha tha vo kyu use mana karegi?

Ruthven- theek hai fir maan liya maine ki aapko acha lag raha hai

Rachel- maine aisa kab bola?

Ruthven- kuch chhije boli nahi jati rachel mahsus ki jati hai. Bahut dhere se bilkul rachel ke kaan ke pass akar bola. Jiski vajah se ek kampan fail gaya uske pure sareer me

Rachel- hmm hu hm. Chalo chalte hai
Bas etna hi bol paye vo

Ruthven- thand jada ho gaye hai na? Dekho pasine bhi aa gaye aapke. Uske mathe se ek pasine ki bund ko apni ungli se saaf karte hue ruthven bola

Rachel- lets go please

Ruthven- ghar?

Rachel- aur kaha jayenge? Etna hi hai yaha dekhne ko

Ruthven- okay aur vo aage ki taraf chalne laga aur rachel uske piche use dekhti hue apni bhawano ko kabu me karne ki kosis karne lagi

Aise hi vo kha pee kar ghar pahuch gaye aur thand sach me bahut tej ho chuki thi. Esliye aate hi rachel ne heater on kiya aur fir jo bone fire ki jagah hoti hai vaha bone fire bhi jala di

Rachel- bhukh lage to bata dena main kuch bana dungi

Ruthven- na. I am good
Aur firse vohi newspaper utha liya jo subah padh raha tha

Rachel- aisa kya hai newspaper me ki subah se do baar padh chuke ho

Ruthven- i know this guy. Ek photo par ungli karke rachel ko dikhata hua bola.....
 
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