Thriller Everyone has a story

[Malik-18]

bro congrats for a new story. ap ki is baat ne story mein aur interest paida kar diya hai k ruth daksh se bhar k madness dikhaye ga. ap ki stories ka one of my fav character hai daksh main zrur dekhna chahun ga k ruth kese daksh ko surpass karta hai. ap ka writing style bhi kuch change lag rha hai ya phir kafi time k bad ap ki story read kr rha hun isi liye lag rha ho.

ek jagah pe mention hua hai k ruth doc ko 21 ki umar mein mila tha lekin ruth ko jo sapna aya hai us se lag rha hai k wo doc se bachpan mein mila tha ye clear karo bro. aur ye rachel aur ruth itni jaldi close q ho rhe hain aur uper se apna sach bhi itna easily bta diya so diappointed kya dash ka mukabla kare ga re chlo aram aram se seekh jaye ga

pehli fight bhi ho gai lekin hero se kuch extraordinary feel nai hua bro cold-blooded feeling mangta apan jo daksh se ati hai balkey us se bhi bhar k chahiye qk daksh ek human being hai par ruth ek object hai jis pe experiments hue hain aur shyd is se bhi kuch powers mili hon gi isey to phir insane hona chahiye

main literally daksh aur ruth ko compare kar rha hun lols review kam aur comparison hi likh diya hai. anyways

keep writing and keep posting

waiting for the next update ​

 

[Tri2010]

UPDATE-05​

What?? What story?? Kahna kya chahte ho tum? Hadbadati rachel boli

Nothing. Agar nahi batana to koe baat nahi jiska muskurate hu ruthven ne jawab diya

“Do you have some spices rachel” tabhi kisi customer ki aawaz aaye aur rachel yes we have kahte hue counter ki taraf chali gaye

Sara samaan pack karke bill bana kar usne customer ko to bejh diya lekin ab uske dimag me vohi words chaye hue the “what is your story rachel”

How come he?? Usko kaise pata? Kya vo pehle se mujhe janta hai? Kya usko sab pata hai? Ya fir vo bluff kar raha hai? Usko dekh kar to nahi lagta ki bluff kar raha hoga. Aisa lag raha tha jaise mere ander tak jhaak liya ho usne. Ohh god ye ladka. Pata nahi kya chhij hai?

Aur kya vo sach bol raha tha apne bare me? Uski yaaddast ja chuki hai? Usko kuch yaad nahi hai? Fuck mera sar phaat jayega

“Rachel etna nahi sochte. Agar tum confortable nahi ho to its okay main dobara nahi puchunga” ruth bahut der se rachel ki harkate notice kar raha tha aur vo samjh gaya tha ki rachel pareshan hai aur bahut jada over think kar rahi hai esliye usne khud hi jake usko comfort karne ki kosis ki

Rachel- nahi. Vo bas main.

Ruthven- koe baat nahi. Vaise ek customer to aa gaya aaj to you should celebrate no??

Rachel muskura padi aur es baar usne apni muskaan ko nahi roka balki ruthven ki aankhon me dekhti hue muskurae

Rab hi janta hai kaise nikla hoga vo drashay ruthven ke dimag se

Rachel- hum shopping par jayenge aaj.

Ruthven- aaj main vapas ja raha hu

Rachel- nahi. Aaj tum vapas nahi ja rahe.

Ruthven- RACHEL

Rachel- RUTHVEN

ruthven- dont do this. You’re killing me

Rachel- hum shopping jayenge. Tumhre liye kuch kapde lenge ab tum rachel ke sath kaam kar rahe ho to you can’t be looking like a begger. Fir bahar hi dinner karenge aur uske baad hum ghar aa jayenge

Ruthven- you know na tum har dusre moment apni pehli statement ko contrast kar deti ho?

Rachel- i know. But tum aaj nahi ja rahe ye final hai.

Ruthven- may i know why?

Rachel- nahi. Hehehe ek baar fir vo has padi. Chalo bata hi deti hu. Tum ab tabhi jaoge tab kuch yaad aa jaye tumko taki future me tumhe pata ho ki kya ho sakta hai aurrrr today i am going to tell you what my story is.

Ruthven- you don’t have to. Its okay

Rachel- but i will. Saalo se kisi ko batana chahti thi. I glad you asked it. Sayad mera bhi thoda bhoj kam ho jaye

Ruthven- okay then you will not stop me to flirt. Okay??

Rachel- ye pucha nahi jata ruth. Okay??

Ruthven- as the lady commands. Ruthven muskuraya aur vaha se rachel muskuraye

Rachel- jaldi close kar denge aaj.

Ruthven- but mujhe to shop par hi sona tha na??

Rachel- nahi. I don’t care about the world. Hum sath hai to hum sath hai

Ruthven- hum sath hai?

Rachel- jee ha mr. ruth hum sath hai. Hehehe aur ek baar fir vo khilkila padi jaise ruthven ko tease kar rahi ho

Rachel- chalo lunch karte hai. Dekhte hai sirf baatein banana hi to nahi aata tumhe

Fir dono lunch karne lagte hai. Rachel ko lunch bahut pasand aaya tha lekin usne jada tareef ki nahi. Balki faltu ki ek do kamiya bhi nikal rahi thi. Jaise har ladki karti hai apne boyfriend ke sath bilkul vaisa hi behave rachel kar rahi thi

Lekin agar uske jaisi sundari tumse dil ko raat kahe to raat hi hai. Kyuki vo galat ho hi nahi sakti aisa hi ruthven kar raha tha. Jo rachel bol rahi thi bilkul vaisa maan raha tha bina kisi na nukar ke jo rachel ko behad pasand aa raha tha

Rachel jo kabhi aise kisi mard ke sath rahi nahi thi uske ander ki feelings bahut teji se grow kar rahi thi aur uske pata bhi nahi chala ki do din me hi vo ruth ke etna kareeb kaise aa gaye.

Unhone lunch kiya fir kuch customer handle kiye aur uske baad evening me shop close karke market ki taraf chal diye

Ruthven abhi bhi unhi kapdo ke tha jinme vo aaya tha bas rachel ka diya hua jacket extra add ho gaya tha sath me usne apne aapko saaf bhi nahi kiya tha theek se ki pata chale vo dikhta kaisa hai

Esliye sabse pehle to kapde kharede fir rachel me hair salon jane ka bola jisko ruthven ne ye kah kar mana kar diya ki aise use koe pahchan nahi payega aur abhi ke liye yehi look theek hai

Jiske jawab me rachel ne bhi kuch nahi kaha aur apne liye bhi kuch kapde le liye. Us town me rachel ka hi ek super market tha jiski vajah se paiso ki use koe problem nahi thi

Bahut sare kapde leke dono ne bahar hi khaya khaya aur fir ghar aa gaye.

Rachel- so pehle tum shower le lo aur sundar ban kar koe bhi ek dress pahan kar mujhe dikhao. Koe bhi pahan kar dikha sakte ho tumhri marji hai.

Ruthven- jaruri hai kya?

Rachel- ha. Agar kabhi future me tumse milna hua to pahchanugi kaise? Abhi to bheek mangane wale lag rahe ho

Ruthven- okay

Rachel- bathroom ka to tumhe pata hi hai. Half hour ke baad main coffee banane ko rakhungi tab tak aa jana saj savar ke. Hehehe

Ruthven- aaj kuch jada nahi has rahi aap?

Rachel- tumhe pasand hai na?

Ruthven- aa raha hu aadhe ghante me aur jis dress par hath gaya usi ko utha kar vo bathroom ki taraf chal diya

Rachel bhi muskurate hue apne room me chali gaye aur kapde change karne lagi fir hall me bone fire jala kar bath gaye

Rachel ne time dekha aur coffee chadha di aur theek usi waqt exact half an hour ke baad ruth bhi vapas aa gaya

Finally uska chehra, uski personality rachel ke samne aaye.

Extremely fair skin, long black combed hair, 6 foot height aur abs jo rachel ko dekhna baki tha.

Abhi ek t shirt aur jeans me khada tha. Sach me he is really really handsome guy rachel ne apne hi man me kaha aur fir coffee leke ruth ke pass pahuch gaye

Rachel- you look good btw
Aur rok nahi paye apne aapko ruth ki tarif karne se vo karna to nahi chahti thi lekin dil ne ek nahi suni uski

Ruthven- i know

Rachel- so ruth.. is it your real name?
Ruthven- i dont know

Rachel- you look indian. You know that?
Ruthven- kitne indians dekhe hai aapne?

Rachel- indian movies bahut chalti hai yaha. To bas vahi se laga mujhe
Ruthven- one day i am gonna find it

Rachel- i hope vo din jaldi aaye
Ruthven- jaldi nahi aayega.

Rachel- aise kyu bol rahe ho?

Ruthven- my body have countless scars and bullet wounds. I don’t think i am a normal human being. Ya to main underworld se linked hu ya fir mujh par koe research ki gaye hai

Rachel- dono me se kisi possibility jada lag rahi hai?

Ruthven- research ki

Rachel- kyu?
Ruthven- visions aate hai aise

Rachel- esliye tumko lag raha hai ki vo din jaldi nahi aayega? Because agar tum bahar gaye to unki najaro me aa jao. Ab jab koe aisa experiment kar raha hai to obviously uske pass bahut sare resources honge aur unhe es time tumhre family ke aas pass hone ke chances jada lag rahe hai

Ruthven- right

Rachel- to what you gonna do?

Ruthven- right now i want to listen a story….
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Rachel- tumhe kaise laga ki meri koe kahani hai?
Do minute ke silence ke baad vo boli

Ruthven- sabki hoti hai. Kisi ki achi to kisi ki sad. Hoti sabki hai. Just curious about yours

Rachel- aur agar main nahi batana chahu to?

Ruthven- then just kill me with a smile

Rachel(blush)- can you please stop it??

Ruthven- no seriously. Your smile can kill me in a second

Rachel- then i will never smile in my whole life again.

Ruthven- fuck sorry.

Rachel- main mera bhai aur mom dad. Bas yehi humari family this. Chhoti but happy. Yaha papa shop sambhalte the aur mumma hum bhai behan ko. Sab bahut acha chal raha tha. Har raat ko hum backyard me bone fire jala kar games khelte the.

John my little brother loved playing guitar. Vo guitar bajata tha aur hum masti majak me hindi songs gaate the. That was the best time of my life.

John mujhse bahut close tha. Tha to vo mujhse chhota lekin dunia ke samne mera bada bhai banke rahta tha. Meri behan ko koe gandi najar se nahi dekh sakta infact koe dekh hi nahi sakta, meri behan ek princess hai, uski aankhon me sirf khushi ke aashu aa sakte hai, vo dunia ki best sister hai. Bas main hi uski dunia thi aur vo ussi me khush rahta tha. Mom dad hum dono ka pyaar dekh kar proud feel karte the

Fir aaye vo raat jisne sab badal kar rakh diya. Mom dad se thodi behas ho gaye thi meri. Main friends ke sath night out karna chahti thi aur mummy papa ne ye bol kar mana kar diya ki mosam acha nahi hai bahar snow fall bhi bahut ho rahi hai so its not safe.

Lekin jaise hum jawani me hote hai hot blooded main unse naraj ho gaye aur apne aapko kamre me band kar liya. Kisi se bhi baat nahi ki maine. John ne bhi bahut kosis ki lekin main gate nahi khola

John- mom dad jab didi jana chahti thi to aapne mana kyu kiya? Mosam to humesha aisa hi rahta hai yaha. Aapne ye theek nahi kiya

Maa- beta snow fall me bahar jana safe nahi hai. Morning me chali jayegi. Dosto ke sath hi to jana hai masti to morning me bhi ho sakti hai.

Papa- aur agar raat ko kuch ho gaya to? Kisi ko kuch pata bhi nahi chalenga. Humne kabhi tum dono ko kisi chhij ke liye roka hai? Nahi na? Fir ek baar humari baat bhi maan lo

John- chalo shop par chalte hai. Cake leke aayenge aur didi ki favourite chocolates. Fir gana ga kar unhe manayenge

Maa- cake finish ho gaya

John- vo cake ka ek aur dukaan hai na town ke dusri side par? Vo humesha open rahti hai. Vaha se leke aa jate hai

Papa- main leke aata hu. Tum log ghar raho

John- aap aur mom cake lene jao. Main shop se chocolates le aata hu

Papa- hum hi le aayenge vapas aate time

John- nahi aapko time lag jayega. Aap aur mom sidhe ghar aa jana aur main chocolates lake didi ko mana lunga utne waqt me

Papa- shop se sidha ghar aur agar kuch bhi sahi nahi lage to dood ke vapas aana

John- apne town me sirf snow fall se hi khatra hai papa. Chalo jaldi jao aap dono

Fir john ke mummy papa cake lene nikalte hai aur john chocolates lekin

Lekin vapas teeno me se koe nahi aa pata. Raste me hi rachel ke mumma papa ki gadi ice break hone ki vajah se jamin me ja dhasi

Thand bahut thi to koe madad ke liye bhi nahi aa paya aur jab subah nikala gaya to sareer me koe jaan nahi thi

Vahi john kaha gayab hua us raat kisi ko pata hi nahi chala. Raato raato rachel anath ho gaye ek hasta khelta pariwar pura toot ke bikhar gaye

Rachel to gusse me rote rote so gaye thi use pata hi nahi chala ki uska pura parivaar khatam ho chuka hai

Subah jab aas padosh ke logo ne gate baja baja kar use jagaya to samne uske mata pita ki body rakhi thi

Rachel- aur john ka aaj tak kahi kuch pata nahi chala.
Humare yaha missing hona koe normal chhij nahi thi. Agar koe ghum bhi jata tha to bhi kuch dino ke kisi barf me dabba mil jata tha. Maine khud pure town ko dundna hai lekin john. Mera bhai pata nahi kaha hi chala gaya

Ek raat me apna sab kuch kho diya maine aur vo bhi bas es baat ki vajah se ki main mere parents se naraj thi ki unhone mujhe night out ke liye jane kyu nahi diya. Aaj main kahi bhi kabhi bhi ja sakti hu lekin jati nahi hu. Har roj har second bas ghoot ghoot ke jee rahi hu ek umeed me ki kya pata kisi din john mere samne aa jaye aur yehi ek chhij hai jo mujhe marne nahi de rahi.

So Mr. Ruthven shaw ye thi meri story. Aur kuch nahi hai mere pass batane ko

Ruthven after a minute pause- agar aapka bhai jinda hua to i promise main use ek din aapke pass lakar khada kar dunga. I PROMISE

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[sorbobhuk]

waiting bhai

 

[kas1709]

waiting for the next update....

 

[parkas]

Lone survivor bhai next update kab tak aayega?

 

[Lone survivor]

Nice and superb update....

Thank you

 

[Lone survivor]

nice update

Thank you

 

[Lone survivor]

Bahot bariya update tha bhai.

Thank you bhai

 

[Lone survivor]

Nice update

Thank you

 

[Lone survivor]

bahut badhiya update hai........
ruth or rachel ka no jhok achaa chal rahi hai.........
or udar doctor bhi ruth ko nhii bhul paarahe hai........

Jab jab vo bhulega tab tab ruth use apni yaad dilata rahega

kya rachel hi story ke heroin hai........

May be or may be not

..kya cheif dunia ka bhalai ke liye logo per experiment kar raha hai ya burai ke liye........

Ye to waqt bataega

waiting for next update

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