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[Lone survivor]

Bahut hi shaandar update diya hai Lone survivor bhai.....
Nice and lovely update....

Thank you bhai

 

[Lone survivor]

अभी तक की अपडेट से इतना तो क्लियर हुआ कि चीफ जो भी है, वो अंडरवर्ल्ड से जुड़ा नही है, बल्कि किसी एजेंसी से है। हालांकि वो एजेंसी भी लीगली इलीगल काम कर रही है।

Aisa hi hai bhai

रूथवेन को किसी जान पहचान वाले का चेहरा दिखा, देखते हैं कौन है वो।

Abhi pata chal jayega ye to

लेकिन इधर जो रिचेल के मन में उसके लिए अनुराग उत्पन्न हों रहा है उसका क्या हश्र होगा, क्योंकि रूथवेन को यहां से एक न एक दिन तो जाना ही है, और वापस आने की संभावना भी कम ही लगती है।

be ready for heartbreaks

 

[Lone survivor]

Nice update.....

Thank you

 

[Lone survivor]

Nice update.....

Thank you

 

[Lone survivor]

Bahot badhiya shaandar update bhai
Ruthven or Rachel ki bonding din badin badhti jaa Rahi h Rachel ki tow chalo maan lete h ki uske saath yeh sab pehle kabhi huwa nahi or aaj ho raha tow apne AAP ko rok nahi pata Rahi lekin yeh Ruth bhai sahab ko Thoda kab flirt kerni chahiye pehle apne AAP ko dhoondho fir flirt kerna

Vo kyu aisa kar raha hai eske piche bhi ek kahani hai pata chalega waqt aane par

Doctor ke hisab se is Baar ke subject those kaam ke h
Kahi aisa tow nahi doctor jhoot bol dia ho filhal ke liye abhi Bach jao aage dekha Jayega

Agar juth bol raha hoga to kab tak chhupega?

Ruthven ne kiski picture dekh paper m jise yaad kerne ki koshisk ker raha h

Es update me pata chal jayega

Baherhal dekhte h aage kia hota h
Badhiya shaandar lajawab update

Thank you so much bhai
Keep supporting

 

[Lone survivor]

bro congrats for a new story.​

Heyooo welcome back bhai

ap ki is baat ne story mein aur interest paida kar diya hai k ruth daksh se bhar k madness dikhaye ga. ap ki stories ka one of my fav character hai daksh main zrur dekhna chahun ga k ruth kese daksh ko surpass karta hai. ​

Daksh aur ruth me bahut difference hai bhai. Daksh ke liye sahi galat kuch nahi tha. Jo use karna hai vo use karna hai but ruth will protect truth. Aur uske chakkar me khoon etna bahega ki aap bhi bologe ab ruk jao bhai

ap ka writing style bhi kuch change lag rha hai ya phir kafi time k bad ap ki story read kr rha hun isi liye lag rha ho.
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Aap hi arso baad aaye ho bhai

ek jagah pe mention hua hai k ruth doc ko 21 ki umar mein mila tha lekin ruth ko jo sapna aya hai us se lag rha hai k wo doc se bachpan mein mila tha ye clear karo bro. ​

Ruth ki current age 21 hai. Jab vo scientist ko mila tha tab kafi chhota tha

aur ye rachel aur ruth itni jaldi close q ho rhe hain aur uper se apna sach bhi itna easily bta diya so diappointed kya dash ka mukabla kare ga re chlo aram aram se seekh jaye ga
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Rachel was alone for a while aur ab jab usko koe mila hai to feelings to aayegi hi sath me vo ruth ke sath relate kar pa rahi hai. Rahi baat daksh ke sath compare karne ki daksh kamina tha ruth nahi hai. In brutality ruth will surpass daksh and that too in a big fucking way

pehli fight bhi ho gai lekin hero se kuch extraordinary feel nai hua bro cold-blooded feeling mangta apan jo daksh se ati hai balkey us se bhi bhar k chahiye qk daksh ek human being hai par ruth ek object hai jis pe experiments hue hain aur shyd is se bhi kuch powers mili hon gi isey to phir insane hona chahiye
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Bhai first thi esliye light rakhi hai. Thoda bas thoda sa sabar karo cold blooded feeling se nahla dunga main aapko and koe super power nahi hai ruth ke pass.

main literally daksh aur ruth ko compare kar rha hun lols review kam aur comparison hi likh diya hai. anyways
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Haha kara to yehi hai aapne but this shows how much you loved that character and it will be difficult for me to change your perspective but sath bane raho bahut kuch aane wala hai

keep writing and keep posting

waiting for the next update ​

Thank you so much bhai. Last story to sayad puri hi skip kar di thi aapne. Hope es baar sath last tak bana rahe

 

[Lone survivor]

Jabardast update

Thank you

 

[Lone survivor]

UPDATE-07​

Ruthven- i know him. Newspaper me ek photo chhipi hue thi jise dekh kar ruthven rachel se bola

Rachel- dikhao. Rachel bilkul sat kar khadi ho gaye ruth se aur newspaper me dekhne lagi

Rachel- he looks like a big fish. Umm daniel o brown. Opposition leader of US.

Ruthven- ye to main bhi padh sakta hu??

Rachel- wait what? Tum bhi padh sakte ho? This is not in your language??

Ruthven- ohh love you don’t know me

Rachel- and do you know yourself?… i am sorry
Jaise hi use realize hua sorry bolne se bhi vo piche nahi hati

Rachel- look. Jab uski party power me thi to he used to handle security department of the country

Ruthven- now its making sense. Eske sath wali sundari kaun hai? Ek ladki bhi thi uske sath photo me jise dekh kar ruth bola to rachel apni aankh dikha kar use ghurne lagi

Ruthven- just asking for a friend

Rachel- his assistant meera

Ruthven- indian hai?

Rachel- lag to yehi raha hai

Ruthven- niceeee

Rachel- ab agar esko ghurna ho gaya ho to bakas do ladki ko. Apna chehra teda meda banate hue rachel boli

Ruthven- koe to jal raha hai are ha ladkiya ohh sorry lakdiya. Tum hi to jal rahi ho ohh sorry tumne hi to jalaye hai

Rachel- shut up. Aur vo muskurae

Ruthven- can we find a little bit more about this guy??

Rachel- we can but abhi network aayega nahi because of the snow. Agar mosam saaf hua to we can

Ruthven- will wait.

Rachel- aur kya yaad hai tumhe?

Ruthven- aapka chehra aur aapki muskaan mujhe hosh me rahne de to kuch yaad karu.

Rachel- ruth i am serious. Bahut muskilo se apna blush rokne ki kosis karte hue rachel boli

Ruthven- I don’t know yaar. Bas aisa dhundla dhundla dikhta hai ki koe scientist hai jo mujh par experiment kar raha hai aur main ghar jane ki bol raha hu. Vo mujhe ghar jane ki promise bhi karta hai lekin es sart par ki pehle jo vo kar raha hai main usko support karu. Jaisa vo bole vaisa hi karu. Thats it. Es se jada kuch nahi

Rachel- hmm. Aise cases pehle soviet union ke time par bhi bahut dekhe gaye hai. Vo bhi human experiment karte the sayad ab US bhi esme kud gaya hai

Ruthven- lag to aisa hi raha hai

Rachel- pariwar ke bare me kuch yaad hai?

Ruthven- nahi. But mujhe mahsus hota hai ki vo mujhe aaj bhi yaad kar rahe hai.

Rachel- hum DNA technique se pata lagane ki kosis kar sakte hai. At least etna to maloom chal sakta hai na ki tum ho kaha se aur kya pata record me kisi se tumhra match bhi ho jaye? Ha percentage bahut kam hai but aisa ho sakta hai

Ruthven- kar to sakte hai lekin main abhi bahar nahi aana chah raha. You know ki jab aap etna bada experiment kar rahe ho to its obvious ki aapke pass resources bahut jada honge aur agar kisi ko mere bare pata chal gaya to its very dangerous

Rachel- lekin kuch to karna hi padega na? Kab tak aise hi bathe rahoge?

Ruthven- mujhe yaha se bejhne ki soch rahi ho? Sidha bol sakti ho main chala jaunga and believe me i will not judge you

Rachel- fuck you ruth. Maine aisa bilkul bhi nahi socha. Tumhre yaha hone se mujhe balki acha aur lag raha hai. Parivaar ke khatam ho jane ke baad se main akeli thi lekin ab tum ho. Tumhe sayad andaja nahi hai ki tum kitna mahtav rakhne lag gaye ho meri life me

Ruthven- so finally ladki ke ander feelings ne janam le liya hai?? Nice. Ab mujhe bhi akele nahi sona padega

Rachel- shut up. Kuch bhi bolte ho aur fir blush karne lag gaye

Ruthven apne chair par piche ki taraf chehra lita kar aankhen band kar leta hai. Rachel use dekhti hai lekin bolti kuch nahi

Ruthven- you know main ye sab nahi bolna chahta bas mere muh se nikal jata hai apne aap. Its like an inner force jo mujhe ye sab bolne ko push karti hai
Abhi bhi vo piche sar litaye batha hua tha aur aankhen band thi

Rachel- jis din tum khud se bologe apne dil se us din main tumhe surprise dungi

Ruthven- you will kiss me. I know that

Rachel- whattt??? How???
Use yakeen hi nahi hua ki ruthven ne ye kaise jaan liya kyuki vo bhi to yehi soch rahi thi. Use ruth ab pasand aane lag gaya tha, feelings ne apna kamaal dikhana suru kar diya tha aur vo ab aage badhna chahti thi

Ruthven- aapke chehre par likha hai sab

Rachel apni jagah se uth kar ruthven ke pass aane lagi aur uski chaal abhi ruth ko thodi ajeeb lag rahi thi. Ajeeb in the sense aisa lag raha tha vo jaan bujh kar seductive way me chal kar ruth ke pass aa rahi ho

Jo ruthven abhi tak piche sar kiye batha tha vo seconds me sidha ho gaya aur rachel ki harkatein dekhne laga

Rachel- kya ye bhi mere chehre par likha hai ruth?
Aur vo ruth ke bilkul pass aa gaye. Etni pass ki un dono ki saase aapas me takrane lag gaye thi

Thoda ajeeb feel hua ruthven ko lekin fir vo thoda rachel ki taraf khisak gaya jiski vajah se unki duriya aur bhi kam ho gaye

Rachel- ab main kya karna chah rahi hu? Jara batana mera chehra padh kar?
Koe to jaag raha tha nind se aur rachel ko es baat ka andaja bilkul nahi tha

Ruthven- teasing
Ghuti hue aawaz me vo bola

Rachel- hehehehehe
Bahut jor se muskurate hue rachel piche hat gaye

Rachel- chehra dekho apna pura laal pad gaya hai. Hahahahhahaha

Ruthven- garmi badh gaye hai sayad esliye

Rachel- yeah right. Garmi badh gaye hai. Hehehe

Ruthven aage kuch nahi bola

Rachel- main sone ja rahi hu. Bahut time ho gaya hai

Ruthven- aa raha hu main bhi do minutes me

Rachel- hahaha. Jaan liya, samjh liya sab maine. Esliye try something different next time aur vo muskurate hue apne kamre ki taraf chal di


Rachel ke jate hi vo khud bhi apne kamre me chala jata hai aur sare kapde nikal kar apne sareer ko dekhne lagta hai

Bahut sare scars the uske sareer par jinhe mahsus karke vo kuch yaad karne ki kosis karne lagta hai lekin safalta milti nahi hai usko

Nanga khada jab uski najar apne hi pairo ke beech me jati hai to uska lund abhi tak khada tha. Rachel ki harkato ne use jada hi uteejit kar diya tha sayad

Halka muskuraya ruth aur fir vapas kapde pahan kar apne bed par let gaya

Najre chhat ko ghur rahi thi aur dimag me hajaro khayal ghum rahe the

Ghanto ki mahnat ke baad finally usko thodi nind naseeb hue lekin fir ek sapne ne nind ko puri hone se pehle hi tood di

Vo uth kar bahar aa gaya aur fir kuch soch kar gate se bhi bahar chala gaya

Ghar ke bahar temperature minus me tha aur snow fall ke sath sath halki halki hawa bhi chal rahi thi

Bahar etni thand me use thodi rahat mili aur vo kafi der tak vahi khada raha ki

“What the hell you’re doing here? Pagal ho gaye ho kya? Jaldi ander aao nahi to vahi jam jaoge”
Rachel ki hi aawaz thi ye jo sayad pani peene hue thi aur ghar ka gate khula dekh kar bahar aa gaye

Ruth ki baju pakad kar use andar kheechte hue vo use datne lagi

Rachel-- tumhe akal nahi hai thodi bhi? Dikh nahi raha bahar thand maut ka tandaav kar rahi hai? Marna hai kya tumhe? Dundna nahi hai khud ko? Deni nahi hai saja unko jinhone anayay kiya hai tumhre sath? Jana nahi hai apne parivaar ke pass vapas?
Ek ke baad ek sawal daag diye rachel ne aur es waqt vo sach me bahut gusse me lag rahi thi. Vaise uski galti bhi nahi thi bahaar sach me maut ka tandaav hi chal raha tha

Ruthven- sorry. Vo mujhe suffocation ho rahi thi ander

Rachel- to hall me aajate mere room me aa jate lekin nahi tumhe to bahar baraf ke gole ke sath khelna hai

Ruthven- RACHEL MAIN SO NAHI PA RAHA HU.
Bas ek sentence kafi tha rachel ka sara gussa gayab karne ke liye.

Rachel- come lets go inside
Behad naram aawaz me boli aur ruth ki baju ko pakad kar apne kamre ki taraf chal di

Ruth bhi bina bole uske sath chal pada

Rachel- sit
Bed ke kinare par aakar rachel boli to ruth agayakari bacha bana bath gaya

Rachel- aa rahi hu do minute me
Aur rachel bahar chali gaye aur vapas aaye do bade mug me coffee liye

Rachel- now talk. Batao mujhe kya hua?
Coffee ruth ko dete hue boli

Ruthven-

That training was ruthless. He ruined my childhood, my life my every fucking thing. Jab bhi aankh band karta hu khud ko sirf rote, chhilate hi pata hu. Kuch samjh me nahi aa raha kya karu, kaha jau kisko maar du. I am going mad.

Rachel- hmm aur

Ruthven- i dont know yaar. Abhi to aisa lag raha hai jaise mujhe bahar nikalna chahiye and thats why main vaha khada tha. Kamre me ghar me mujhe ghutan hone lagti hai. Jab tak main un sab chhijo ko face nahi kar leta unhe khatam nahi kar deta mujhe chain nahi aayega main kabhi theek se so nahi paunga

Rachel- next week chale jana yaha se. Ek week aur ruk jao, aur samjh lo. Jab tum us dunia ko face karoge jiske bare me tumhe kuch yaad hi nahi hai to tumhra mentally prepare hona bahut jaruri hai. I know its tough and i also know ki tum kar loge. One more week can you handle yourself for one more week??

Ruthven- one more week….

 

[krish1152]

nice update

 

[111ramjain]

Nice update