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Thriller DIL,DOSTI AND REVENGE (action,thrill, suspense and romance)(Completed)

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Thodi der vo Meri bahon me chipki rahi fir boli. Bhai Aapko Kya lagta hai ye sab kon Kar Raha hoga. Main pata nhi sweety lekin ye Jo bhi hai use me patal se bhi dhoond nikalu ga or fir use usi ke area me jinda gaad dunga. Bhai aap ko Jo bhi karna hai Karo lekin bus ye yaaad rakhna ki hum sab aapke sath hai or hum aapse bahut pyar karte hai or aapke bina hum Sayed ji nhi payenge. Uski ye baat sunke Mujhe ye biswas ho gaya ki isko kitni fikar hai Meri or kahi na kahi ye dar bhi hai ki me isko kahi chhod ke na Chala jao. Mene usko titly hug kiya or kaha ki chahe Jo ho Jay Meri jaan me tumko kabhi nahi chhodunga hamesha tumhare pass rahunga. Fir us din kuch khas nhi hua or vo din bhi aise hi nikal gaya.next day me utha or fresh ho ke mene Radha ko uthaya usko kiss karke suddenly uske mobile me alarm Baja mene usko band kiya to Meri Nazar date per gayi me chook gaya kyuki aaj 14 tarikh thi or 15 se hamare clg start hone the. To mene Radha se kaha ki jaldi jao or or ACADMY se aane ke baad hame shopping per chalna hai to vo bolne lagi ki kis khusi me. To mene kha ki daffer Kal se hamare clg start hone hai Kal hamare clg ka first day hai or tumhe pata bhi nhi hai. Ye sunke usne apna mobile check kiya or fir boli ha Bhai me to bhool hi gyi thi achha hua aapne yaad dila diya werna to hamara first day miss ho jata. Maine kaha ki bhool to me bhi gaya tha lekin abhi date dekh Kar Mujhe bhi yaad aa gaya isiliye to keh Raha hu ki jaldi jao fir hame shopping per chalna hai. Fir usko utha Kar Maine bathroom me tab me patak diya or usko bahi chhod Kar me apna workout karne Chala gaya (underground me fufa se keh ke mene apne liye gym banwaya tha jaha per kabhi kabhi fufa or Radha bhi aate the.)

Workout karne ke baad me nahane Chala gaya or bapis aake me dining table per baith gaya. Bua ne Mujhe nasta diya or tabhi Radha bhi apni ACADMY se bapis aa gyi. Me nasta karke free hua or bua se bola ki Kal se hamare clg start ho rahe hai to hum aaj shopping per jayenge bua ne bhi ok bol diya. Fir Maine Vijay ko call karke yahi info di to usne bhi ok bol diya.fir hum dopehar ko shopping KE liye nikle hum sab Meri car me hi the or ja rahe the mall Tak pahuchne me hame takri an 1 ghanta lag gaya traffic ki bajah se hum sab baha per gye or apne liye kapde shoes bagera select karne lage. hamre to jaldi hi ho gayi lekin as usual ladki ko kitna time lagta hai ye batane ki jarurat nhi hai. To Radha Mujhe apne sath le gyi ki uski shopping me madad karu Maine usko bahut sari modern dresses dilayi or fir kuch Maine apne Indian style salwaar suit bhi dilaye. (Kyuki Mera maanna tha ki Indian ladkiya sabse jyada khobsurat ya to Sadi me ya fir salwaar suit me lagti hai)

Isiliye Maine usko apni pasand ke salwaar suit bhi dilaye Jo usko bhi kafi pasand aaye. Fir hamne jak lunch kiya to suddenly Vijay ki Nazar multiplex per padi jaha film "mission mangal" lagi hui thi. Or Maine is film ke bare me kafi achha suna tha or Vijay or Mujhe ye film kafi time se dekhni bhi thi to Vijay ne kaha ki chale to humne bhi sehmati de di or uske baad hum log talkies me Gaye tickets lekar film dekhne ke liye. Film ke beech me Radha ne mujhse kaha ki bagal wala ladka usko touch Kar Raha hai baar baar. To Maine usko dekha sakal se hi kamina pan jhalak Raha tha Maine usko warning di ki pareshan mat Karo or Radha ko mere or Vijay ke beech me bithaliya. Thodi der baad vo uthkar Chala gaya lekin baitha bilkul Radha ki sheets ki peechhe wali sheet per (choki kafi time ho gaya tha film ko isiliye talkies me gine chune log hi the baki sheet bilkul khali thi ) or fir baha se bo Radha ko pareshan karne laga to Radha ne mujhse fir kaha to Maine usko kaha ki tum martial arts seekh rahi ho or mujhse madad maang rahi ho jao or usko apni bhasa me samjha do. Mera itna kehte hi Radha khadi hui or ik jhannatedaar thappad jad diya usko jisse vo bhi Radha ko gusse se ghoorne laga or fir usko Radha ne kaha ki jyada udo mat nahi to aisi haalat Kar dungi ki kisi kaam ke nhi rahoge. To usne lekin Radha ki baat nahi maani or Radha per hath uthane laga to Radha ab kafi trained ho gyi thi to usne uska hath beech me hi rok Kar uska hath mod diya jisse bo chhatpatane laga. To Radha ne uska hath chhod Kar uske pichhwade me ek laat di jisse vo thodi dur gira or khada Hoke bhagne laga. Or bhagte bhagte kehne laga ki dekh lunga. To Radha ne kaha ki abhi dekh le to vo bina kuch bole hi Chala gaya. Or me or Vijay is pore ghatna kram ke douran keval film hi dekh rahe the jisme hame kafi maza aa Raha tha. Aftar film hum log bahar aaye or apni gadi ki taraf Jane lage to hamari gadi KE pass hi kuch log hath me rod leke aa Gaye or unme vo ladka bhi tha Jo kuch der pehle Tak andar Radha se pit Raha tha. Vo aage aakar ek ladke se kehne laga ki Bhai yahi hai vo do ladke jisne Mujhe bebajah mara me to chupchap film dekh Raha tha tabhi ye log Mujhe maarne lage. Ye sunke hum teeno ki najre us per hi jam gayi ki ye Kya keh Raha hai. Tabhi Radha aage aayi or kehne lagi ki kyu re jhoot kyu bol Raha hai ki in dono ne tujhe mara hai Sach bol ki mene tujhe mara hai. Tab bo thoda sakpakaya or fir bola ki kisi ladki me itni himmat nhi ki Mujhe hath bhi lga sake Mujhe to indono ne mara hai. Fir uske sath Jo ladke aaye the unme se ek aage aaya or kehne laga ki kyu mara tum dono ne isko. To fir me aage aaya or usse kaha ki. Dekho dost mene ya us ladke ne usko hath bhi nhi lagaya hai lekin Meri bahen ne jarrur isko mara hai kyuki ye usko galat tarike se touch Kar Raha tha mene usko ek baar samjhaya bhi lekin ye nhi Mana isiliye iska faisla tum Karo ki aise galat ladke ka tumhe sath Dena chahiye ya nhi Jo apne dosto se ye Tak Sach nhi Bolta ki usko mara kisne hai baki tumhari Marzi. Ham her situation KE liye ready hai tum chaho to humse lad bhi sakte ho ya fir iska sath na dekar yaha se ja bhi sakte ho. Itna sunne ke baad usne thodi der kuch Socha or fir us ladke ki taraf dekh Kar usko ek thappad diya or kaha ki sale hame galat tarike se bulaya tu ne. Hum Tera is galat baat me sath nhi denge samjha. Sale ladki ko chhedta hai or usse pit Kar aata hai or hum se kehta hai ki tujhe ladko me mara hai buri tarah. Itna kehkar usne hamari taraf dekha or Radha se iske liye Mafi maangi or fir sab logo ko leke vo Chala gaya or vo ladka unko jate hue dekhne laga. Fir Radha aage aayi or usse kaha ki aage se kabhi mere samne mat aana nhi to achha nhi hoga samjha.itna kehkar vo car me baith gyi or fir humdono bhi car me baith Gaye or Ghar ki or nikal pade. Ghar pahuch Kar hamne apne bag apne kamre me rakhe fresh hua or fir change karke neeche aa gaya or thodi der me Radha bhi neeche aa gyi. To mene bua se coffee lane ko kaha to thodi der me coffee bhi aa gyi or me fir usko peene laga or Radha bhi peene lagi. Fir vo din bhi nikal gaya sham ko dinner Karne baad hum sab so Gaye or Radha mere hi kamre me so gyi.subah utha to dekha Radha abhi so rahi thi uske chehre per is waqt dunia bhar ki masumiyat thi fir Maine usko ek halka sa kiss kiya or usko uthaya. Vo uthkar Mujhe morning wish kiya or Maine bhi usko wish kiya fir Maine usko kaha ki jaldi ready Hoke jao fir hame aaj clg bhi Jana hai. To bo uth Kar chali gayi or me bhi fresh Hoke apna workout karne Chala gaya. Karib 8 baje me naha dho kar bilkul ready Hoke neeche aaya to bua to Mujhe dekh Kar kaha ki Gaye kitna handsome lag Raha hai kisi ki Nazar na lage or Mujhe ek kala teeka laga diya thodi der baad Radha bhi ready Hoke neeche aayi or usko to me dekhta hi reh gaya aaj usne Meri pasand ka salwarr suit pehna tha khule Karli hair. Halka si lipstick. Bilkul kayamat dha rahi thi. Me to usko dekh Kar bilkul kho hi gaya tha tabhi kisi ne mere samne chutki bajayi to me hosh me aaya. Or dekha to bo bua hi thi. Bua Meri taang khechne lagi to mene bua se kaha ki bua ab to Mujhe koi dekhega hi nhi sab isko hi dekhenge. Aapke kaala Teka ki isko jyada jarurat hai. Pata nhi aaj kitno ki najar lagegi isko. Meri is baat se Radha bilkul Sharma gyi or Mujhe chupke se ek tehni maar di mere pet me. Fir bua ne usko bhi kala teeka lagaya or pochhne lagi ke ye dress jarur Meri hi pasand ki hogi to Radha ne ha me mundi hila di or kaha ki Mujhe pata hi tha ki tumko to modern kapde hi jyada pasand aate hai. Fir humne nasta kiya. Tabhi fufa as gye or kaha ki ready for your first day of clg. To humne kaha ki yes we are ready. To unhone kaha ki good fir unhone Mujhe ek key di or kaha ki tum dono ke liye Meri taraf SE ek gift mene kaha ki iski Kya jarurat thi to unhone kaha ki pehle gift to dekhlo fir kehna. To mene kaha ki dekhna Kya hai car ki chabi hai ye to pata hai. To fufa bole ki car konsi hai ye to dekhlo barkhurdaar. To mene kaha ki thik hai dekh lete hai. To unhone kaha ki aise nhi fir unhone Meri aankho per Patti baandi or Mujhe pakad Kar Bahar le aaye or fir bole ki ready to mene kaha ki Eveready. Fir unhone Meri Patti nikal di to thodi der baad Meri aankhen jab normal hui to me dekh Kar hi reh gaya ki ya car fufa ne gift ki hai. Mujhe laga ki main jarur sapna dekh Raha hu to Maine apne aap ko ek chikoti kaat li lekin car bahi ke bahi thi mene fufa ki taraf dekha to bo khusi se Meri taraf dekh rahe the mene unko thanks bola or unke gale lag gaya………..


To be continued…..
 

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Hmm mujhe lagta ha ab is detective raj ki mout pakki ha
Thanks for your support Bhai....

Baki ye Raj ka Jo hoga vo to aag hi pata chalega....

Next update de diya hai......
 
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UPDATE 8





Fir Maine unse kaha ki ye sab aapne kab kiya or aapko kaise pata Chala ki Mujhe yahi car chahiye. To unhone kaha ki Mera beta kisi cheez ki khwahis rakhe or me use poori na karu ye to ho nhi sakta or Mujhe iska kaise pata Chala ye sawaal tum Vijay se pooch Lena usi ne Mujhe ye car suggest ki thi ki yahi tumko Leni hai to me le aaya. Tumhe iska naam to pata hi hai na ki main batao. Nahi fufa off course Mujhe pata hai it's a "DODGE CHALLENGER 2019" it is a muscle car which is inspired by " "Dodge Heritage" the beast has a 808 HP engine with fuel capacity of 3.7 L. It's known for his amazing powerfull V8 engine.and also a voice command system and mobile connectivity. Fir Maine fufa ko fir se thank you kaha or car ka color bhi Meri pasand ka tha black and red light. Fir Maine turant hi car ko unLock karke usme baith gaya or Radha bhi baith gayi or pehla gaana hi mene bajaya guru randhava ka "Lahore". Or fir hum log car se Vijay ke Ghar ki taraf nikal Gaye thodi der me Vijay jab Bahar aaya to car ko dekh Kar hi shok ho gaya. Or bola ki Sach me fufa ne tujhe ye car dedi wah yaar ab to apna alag hi batt padega clg me maza aa gaya. Fir mujhse car chalane ki jid karne laga lekin mene usko baad me drive karne bol diya fir bo car me baitha or hum log apne clg ki taraf nikal pade. Me apni car ko achhi speed me Chala Raha tha. Jaha se bhi gujarta sab dekhte hi reh jate. Karib aadhe ghante me hum log clg pahuch Gaye or jab campus me entry hui to student to bus car ko dekh Kar hi reh gaye. Humne car ko park kiya or jab hum apni car se nikle to ladke Radha ko dekh Kar ye sochne lage ki car jyada hot hai ya ye ladki Jo car me se utri hai. Or same haal ladkiyo tha vo bhi Mujhe or Vijay ko dekh Kar aahen bharne lagi. Hum sab ko Jala Kar aage badte chale Gaye or fir humne check kiya ki hamari class kon si hai or kitne baje se start hai. Abhi class me aadha ghanta tha to hum log bahi canteen me chale Gaye or ek desk per baith Gaye. Or batein Karne lege. Thodi der baad Maine Vijay ki taraf dekha to vo ek tarf dekhe ja Raha tha. Mene uski nazro ka peechha kiya to paya ki bo ek ladki ko dekhe ja Raha tha vo ladki bakai me kafi khubsurat thi. Mene Vijay ko thoda hilaya to vo jaise hosh me aaya ho or mujhse kehne laga ki yaar Mujhe to love at first sight ho gaya hai me apni sari jindgi usi ke sath gujarunga. To mene kaha ki to Jake usko bol yahi sab bol de

To bo bolne laga ki yaar impression kharab padega pehle usse DOSTI karni padegi fir apni feeling use bataoga. Tomene kaha ki DOSTI KE liye hi aage bad ja or usse DOSTI KE liye pochh. Abhi hum baat Kar hi rahe the ki hame thode chillane ki aawaj aayi humne us taraf dekha to uske pass do ladke khade the or usko pareshan Kar rahe the lekin thodi hi der me un ladko ko ek ek thappad pada to bo gussa ho gye or usko balo se pakad Kar le Jane lage. Abhi me kuch karta usse pehle hi Vijay utha or unko ek ek laat jama di jisse bo thode door Jake gire.or usne uss ladki ko sahara dekar uthaya. Fir bo ladke baha se uthe or kehne lage ki kon hai tu or Teri himmat kaise hui Mujhe maarne ki sale jaanta bhi hai ki main kon hu. To Vijay ne kaha ki Mujhe Tere ko janne me koi interest nhi hai samjha or agar apni salamati chahta hai to yaha se chup chap nikal le warna Tera vo haal karunga ki seedha agle samester me Nazar aayega samjha chal nikal yaha se. To usko gussa aa gya or usne Vijay per hamla Kar diya lekin Vijay bhi martial arts seekh Raha tha to usne un dono ki khatiya khadi Kar di. Usne jaise hi Vijay per mukka bana Kar prahar kiya Vijay ne uska hath pakad Kar usko rok liya or uska hath bahi se mod diya vo dard se chillane laga to Vijay ne usko chhod diya or kaha ki nikalle yaha se warna aabki baar tujhe nahi chhodunga me samjha. Usko bhi Sayed samjh me aa gya hoga ki do log uska kuch nhi bigaad sakte is liye bo baha se bina kuch kahe Chala gaya or canteen me jitne bhi student the vo sab taliya bajane lage jinme me bhi shamil tha. Thodi der baad Vijay mere pass aa Kar baith gaya fir hamari class ka time bhi ho gaya tha to hum log class me nikal Gaye. Aaj choki pehla din tha to sabhi teacher aate Gaye or sabka intro lete rahe. Fir lunch time ki Bell bajne se hum log fir canteen me aa Gaye CHUKI badi bhook lagi thi to hamne aate hi samosa order Kar diya abhi hum log kha hi rahe the ki kisine pechhe se excuse me kaha to humne peechhe dekha to subah wali ladki hi khadi thi usne aakar Vijay ko sabse pehle thank you bola. To Vijay ne bhi bol diya ki ye to Mera FARZ tha.usne fir apna naam bataya. Ji my self "Diya Raajpoot" fir Vijay ne bhi apna intro diya or hamara bhi intro karwaya usse hamne hii hello ki fir Vijay ne usko hame join karne ko kaha to vo bahi baith gyi or usne bhi order Kar diya fir jab Tak uska order nahi aaya hum logo ne usse bate Karne lage ki kiss department me hai vo to usne bataya ki bo aarts department me hai itne me uska bhi order aa gaya. To humne fir se Khana suru hi kiya ki fir kisi ne Diya ko aawaj di to humne us taraf dekha to ek ladka aa Raha tha Jo Sayed hamari hi class ka tha kyuki mene usko class me dekha tha. Itne me bo hamare pass aa gaya or Diya se pochhne laga ki subah kuch hua tha Kya to Diya ne usko subah ki ghatna Bata di jisse bo thoda gusse me aa gya or pochhne laga ki kon hai vo to Diya ne kaha ki bo log fir nhi dikhe hai usko. To bo thoda shant hua or hamari tarf dekhne laga. To Diya ne fir hamara intro usko diya to usne kaha ki ye log Meri hi class me hai aaj hi dekha tha inko class me. fir Diya ne us ladke ka intro karwaya ki ye Mera judwa Bhai hai or uska naam "SHEKHAR RAAJPOOT" HAI. to humne usse hi hello ki fir usne Vijay ko thank you bhi kaha ki uski sister ki help karne ke liye. Fir humne usko bhi apne sath baithne ko kaha to vo bhi baith gaya or usne bhi order Kar diya. Thodi der baad uska order bhi aa gaya. Fir Maine Socha ki isse pehle fir koi aaye mene Khana start Kar diya or Meri tarf dekh Kar Radha hasne lagi to mene usko ignoor mara or apne khane per hi consentrat Karne laga thodi der baad hum sabka pet bilkul bhar gaya to main uthkar sabka bill pay kiya or bapis aake usi table per baith gaya abhi lunch over hone me time tha to hum log aapas me hi batein karne lage itne me ek or ladki ne Diya ko bulaya to fir bahi humne us taraf dekha to ek kafi khubsurat si ladki hamari tarf chali aa rahi thi usne pass aakar Diya se gale mili or jab uski Nazar SHEKHAR per padi to usko bhi usne gale laga liya or jis tarah se bo log gale mile me or Vijay ek dusre ko dekhne lage ki ye sab ho Kya Raha hai. Fir Diya ne usse pochha ki vo US se kab aayi to usne bataya ki ab bo yahi rehne wali hai or isi CLG me usne admission liya hai ye sunke Diya bahut khus hui or usne kaha ki tune bataya kyu nhi ki tu bhi isi CLG me hai to usne kaha ki yahi to surprise tha bhool gyi mene kaha tha ki aaj tujhe kuch surprise doongi. To Diya ne kaha ki ha me to bhool hi gyi thi Mujhe laga tu aaj Sayed bapis aa rahi hogi kuch dino KE liye lekin ye nahi pata tha ki tu yahi rehne or padne KE liye aayi hai. Bakai me tune Mujhe bahut hi achha surprise Diya hai thank you. Fir Diya ne hamari tarf dekha to use yaad aaya ki hum bhi baithe hai to usne hum sabka intro karwaya or fir uska intro diya ki bo Diya or SHEKHAR ki bachpan ki friend hai Jo kuch salo pehle US chali gyi thi lekin ab bapis aa gyi hai or uska naam hai "Amrita Singh" to ham sav ne usko hii kaha usne same reply Diya or fir hum sab me DOSTI ho gyi. Jo utni pakki to nhi thi lekin thode samaye me ho jayegi.


To be continued…….
 
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