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Fantasy SURYA (chapter 3) [THE DARK WORLD][Completed]

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Hello guys aap sabhi ne kaafi intjar kiya hai is story ke liye. Or me ummid karunga ki aapke intjaar ka bahut hi badiya fal aapko mile.

To pesh hai aap sabhi ki bhari demand per surya ki kahani ka 3rd chapter. Ummid karunga ki me aapko nirash na karu or aapko ye story bhi pasand aaye..

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:toohappy: aa gaya maal aa gaya...
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bahut wait kiya tha iska :cry2:
ab jab aaya hai to rona aa raha hai....
jaldi se update do 🥺
 

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Hello guys aap sabhi ne kaafi intjar kiya hai is story ke liye. Or me ummid karunga ki aapke intjaar ka bahut hi badiya fal aapko mile.

To pesh hai aap sabhi ki bhari demand per surya ki kahani ka 3rd chapter. Ummid karunga ki me aapko nirash na karu or aapko ye story bhi pasand aaye..

Thanks.
Congratulation for new thread

waiting for first Mega update
 
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Guys jaisa ki aap sabhi ko title se pata chal hi gya hoga ki ye kahani thodi alag hone wali hai. Isme surya ka saamna thode jyada khatarnak logo se hoga. Ye kahani SCI-FI KAM OR FANTASY THODI JYADA HOGI JISME THODA BAHUT HORROR KA TADKA BHI LAGANE KI KOSIS KARUNGA. OR HAMESHA KI TARAH THRILL TO HOGA HI. BAS AAP SABHI APNA SATH BANAYE RAKHE. JALD HI PEHLA UPDATE POST KARUNGA...



INTRODUCTION



JAY PRATAP SINGH -
ye ghar ke bade hai or hamare hero ke dad hai. Ye ek genetic scientist hai. Or itne kabil ki inse kuch bhi banwa lo inhe jyada der nahi lagti. Inki age to kaafi ho chuki hai. Lekin inke liye ye bas ek no. Hai or kuch nhi.

Baaki story me hero ki mom bua or fufa or bhabhiya bhi hai. Lekin unka role jyada nahi hai. Bas kahi kahi beech beech me unki jarurat padegi to us jagah per keval unke role se hi unhe bulaunga.



Veer pratap singh - ye jay ke bade bete hai or hamare hero ke bade bhai. Pichhali story me aapne pada hoga ki jay ne inke andar bhi formula inject kiya tha jis bajah se inke pass bhi ab super strength hai. Sharp to ye pehle se hi the kyuki inhone kai saal secrate service me kaam kiya hai. Baaki apni family se bahut pyar karte hai or unke liye kuch bhi kar sakte hai.



Yash pratap singh- ye jay ke chhote bhai Samar ke bete hai lekin vo ab is dunia me nahi hai isliye jay inhe apna beta hi manate hai or ghar ke sabhi inhe bahut pyar or samman dete hai. Inke baare me ik baat khaas hai. Inka para agar chad jaye to fir saamne wale ki shamat aai samjho. Or ye baat ghar ke sabhi log jaante hai. Inke pass bhi super strength hai jisse ye unbeatable ho gye hai. Ye pehle hi kai logo per akele hi bhari pad jaate the or ab usme or ijafa ho gya hai. Or bahar ki dunia ke logo ke liye inka code name hai RONY sabhi inhe adhiktar isi naam se bulate hai.



Surya pratap singh - ye hai hamari kahani ke hero. Inke ware me kya bolu kuch samajh me hi nahi aaraha hai. Jitna bolu utna kam hai. Fir bhi bata deta hu. Ye ghar me sabke chahete hai or sabhi inko or ye sabhi ko bahut pyar karte hai. Inke liye family pehle hai baaki sab baad me. Or koi inki family ko baad me nuksan na pahucha paaye isiliye ye apne dushmano ko jyada mouke dete nahi hai. Aage ki sochkar unka kaam pehle hi tamam kar dete hai. Baaki inka mind bhi kaafi sharp hai. Dushman ki agli chal kya ho sakti hai ye pehle se hi anumaan laga lete hai or 100% inki predictions sach hoti hai. Baaki baate story me jaaniyega.




Radha- ye surya ki wife hai or surya ke bua ki ladki bhi. Ye apne pariwar apne pati se bahut pyar karti hai. Or ye apne pati ko kabhi kisi cheez ke liye mana nahi karti. Baaki thodi bahut super strength to inke pass bhi hai.




Amar- ye veer ke bete hai ikloute hai. Or bacho me sabse bade hai. Bahut hi suljhe hue or samajhdaar. Apne teeno bhai bahen ko sath leke chalte hai or musibat me unke aage khade rehte hai.



Samar- ye Rony ke bete hai. Inka naam rony ne apne pita ke naam per rakha hai. Baaki inka swabhav bhi thoda thoda apne pita jaisa hi hai. Gussa thoda jaldi aata hai inko or us gusse me saamne wale ka kya hasr hoga ye bhagwan hi jaane. Apne bhai bahen se bahut pyar karte hai. Or unke liye kuch bhi kar sakte hai.



Aviraj- ye surya ke bete hai chuki surya ke pass shadi ke pehle se hi super strength thi jiska asar isper bhi hua hai iska mind pata nahi kis mitti ka bana hai. Isse jo chahe vo banwa lo. Is baat ka andaja isi baat se laga sakte hai ki inke ghar me jo arc reactor laga hua hai use isi ne banaya tha vo bhi sirf 10 saal ki age me. Baaki aap sabhi samajh hi gye honge ki ye kya cheez hai. Baaki inka jyadatar samay to inke base me gujarat hai ye apne khilono me hi dube rehte hai.



ASHQ- ye avi ki judwa bahen hai. Thodi gusse wali hai. Lekin apne gusse ka sahi istemaal karna jaanti hai. Apne dad se bahut pyar karti hai. Baise wala nahi. Normal baap beti wala. Baaki kuch powers to iske andar bhi hai. Lekin filhaal unki koi detail nahi hai. Baaki aage story me pata chal hi jayega sabhi ko.




Sunny- ye veer ke under secrate service me kaam karta tha. Veer ise apna chhota bhai hi maanta hai. Or yahi baaki sabhi ka bhi manna hai ise ghar ka sadasya hi samjhte hai sabhi or ye bhi sabhi ko apne pariwar ka hissa hi samajhta hai. Baaki kabiliyat to isme bhi bahut hai. Lekin koi super strength nhi hai.



Rishi- iski bhi kahani same sunny jaisi hi hai.



Aarav- ye banda surya ka favourite hai. Iska dimaag computer me kamal ka chalta hai. Harry isi ki den hai jise isne kuch hi dino ki mehnat me bana dala tha. Baaki iski kahani bhi sunny or rishi jaisi hi hai.




aadil- ye banda bhi isi pariwar ka hissa hai. Iski back story bhi kuch baisi hi hai lekin is baar ye veer ke sath nahi baki rony ke sath kaam karta tha. Iske pita ne hi muskil samay me rony ko sahara diya tha jis bajah se in dono me sage bhaiyon jaisa pyar hai. Or surya or veer or ghar ke baaki sadasya bhi ise apna hi samjhte hai inme koi bhi aapsi matbhed nahi hai. Sabhi apni life me mast rehte hai. Ye bhi computer expert hai Aarav se kam bhi nahi hai or jyada bhi nahi hai.




Chouhan- ye banda veer ka guru hai. Or ye secrate service ke head bhi reh chuke hai. Chuki ab retire ho chuke hai lekin story me inka bhi role bahut eham hai. Ye bhi surya veer or baaki sabhi ki bahut izzat karte hai or surya or veer ko to ye apna beta hi maante hai. Or ye sabhi bhi inko vaisi hi respect karte hai. Baaki deadly to ye bhi hai is age me bhi.




so bhai log ye ek chhota sa intro hai sabhi main characters ka. Kahani me or bhi kirdaar aayenge jinka usi samay intro de diya jayega.
 
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Guys jaisa ki aap sabhi ko title se pata chal hi gya hoga ki ye kahani thodi alag hone wali hai. Isme surya ka saamna thode jyada khatarnak logo se hoga. Ye kahani SCI-FI KAM OR FANTASY THODI JYADA HOGI JISME THODA BAHUT HORROR KA TADKA BHI LAGANE KI KOSIS KARUNGA. OR HAMESHA KI TARAH THRILL TO HOGA HI. BAS AAP SABHI APNA SATH BANAYE RAKHE. JALD HI PEHLA UPDATE POST KARUNGA...
:cool: horror ko thda erotic banane ka 🥺
 

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Congratulations bhai😍😍😍
waiting for update ❤️
 
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