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Mai soch raha ek update sai acha tin update honge toh wahi karunga bhai ek din kaa break aur agalae din 3 update jada sahi hota story jaldi aage badhati hai waise daily kaa update tayar hai par kal hi deta hu tin update ke saathBhai 10 to baj ge de do ab update![]()
Ok Bhai vaise bhi ab Neha ka beta dev ki bhi bjane wala h jaldi hiMai soch raha ek update sai acha tin update honge toh wahi karunga bhai ek din kaa break aur agalae din 3 update jada sahi hota story jaldi aage badhati hai waise daily kaa update tayar hai par kal hi deta hu tin update ke saath
Bhai ye to ek hi hua baat to 3 ki hui thi or ye to purana likha hua hai kuch b change nahi hai iss update meUPDATE 205
Mar mai hairan ho gaya tha mere yeh power uspar lagate hi uska
shareer green hua aur uss mai sai gir mere powers mai mix ho kar
mere taraf aa raha tha
Woh hawa mei ud gaya
Jivnaash - etna asaan nahi mujhe marana ha ha ha ha ha
Maine vapas sai haath ghusse mai dabaya aur meri aakhe red honne
lagi
Mera dusra suit aa gaya maine apna sahreer bada kiya aur par aag
sai hamala kiya
Par achanak hi woh aisa badala ki waha joh log chup kar dekh rahe
the woh sab dar ke bhaagnai lage
Barish kaa mausam ho gaya joh mere bijaliyoo ke karan hua tha
Uuffff aaahhhh mera gala mujhe kaya hoo raha aahh aahhh (khaastae
hue )
Mai chhota hua gaya aur kahasta hua ek builiding ki chat par gira
Mai haath sai ragadata hua aage gaya
Jaise hi maine niche ki taraf dekha mujhe aisa dikha
Mai shir uper kar ke - aahhhhhh uuuuhh uuhhh mujhe thand kyu lag
rahi uhh huuuhh (kahasate hue )
Mere muh sai khoon nikala aur woh bhi hara yeh kaya ho raha hai
Maine vapas dekha toh mujhe sab aisa dhikha
Kaya mujh par yeh jivnaash ke zehar kaa ashar hoo raha hai mera
dum ghut raha hai
Mere haath kaap rahe the
Man kar raha tha apni aag sai sabako jala duuhh
Maine apni aakhe noch kar bahar fhek di
Woh shidde jakar buliding sai niiche jakar jamin par jir gaye
Mere aakhe nikalani ke baad mere haatho par bhi khoon hi khoon nikal raha tha
Jivnaash mere pass akar khadda ho gya
Jivnaash - ha ha mai bhi kitana pagal tha mai soch raha tha ki yeh
naagin tere sai milegi aur mujhe marawa degi kyuki maine bichari
ke maa baap ko maar diya
Mai usski taraf dekhata hua
Jivanaash dar kar - yeh kaya hai yeh toh shaitaan hai
Mere shareer sai hari roshani nikal rahi thi
Jivnaash - tum aakhir ho kon aisa shaitaan maine phele kabhi nahi
dekha joh har sakati ko chus jaata hai
Mai apne haath ke baal ghista hua aage jaa raha tha
Jivnaash - esse abi maar deta huu kyuki yeh bilkul waisa hi jaisa
mere baap nai kaha tha
Woh mere shir ko pakadta hai aur usse ukhad kar phekh deta hai niche
Aur wha sai uadta hua nicche aa gaya
Jaha sabnam padi hui karah rahi thi apne pet mai ghussi hui sariya
ko pakad kar
Jivnaash - bata chalegi mere saath toh abhi bacha lunga
Sabanam apne muh sai kuch nikal nahi paa rahi thi
Udhar mere aakhe rengati hui mere shir tak pahuchi aur mere shir
mai ghuss gayi
Usske baad mere aakhe hari ho gayi aur mera shir diwal ke sahare
sai uper chadhata hua upeer jane laga
Uper chat par meri body uth kar khaadi ho gayi
Aur kuch hi der mei mera shir meri body mai aakar lag gayi
Meri body hawa mai uth gayi bijali mere upper girnai lagi
Meri aakhe meri body puri green ho chuki thi mujhe laga kahi mai
woh toh naa ban gaya suna hoga green lanten
Bijali ki awaaz sai jivnaash upper ki taraf dekhata hai
Jivnaash - yeh nahi ho sakata hai kaise ho skata hai
Mai - abe kon bachega tujhe bol
Jivnaash mere tarf fhir kuch fekata kaafi chamak rahi thi woh chiz
jaise bhaut sakhati saali ho maine apne pass aate hi usse haath
sai roak diya
Maine usse phele dekha aur phir usse apne muh sai andar le liya
Jivnaash - devvv.v.v.v..v..v
Woh chillata hua meri taraf aaya mere paass jaise hi aaya mai niche
ho gaya aur apne ghuse sai usse bahut dur phekh diya
Usse waha sai jaate hi mai niche pahucha sabnam ke pass
Aur usse apni goad mai utha kar uski sariya ko nikal ke phekh diya
Aur usske ghaaw mai phuk maari mere muh sai nilkalta green colour
kaa dhua usske jhkahamoo ko bharani laga par uski halat ek mare
hue asse insaan jaise ho gayi thi jiska khoon chus kar nikal diya
ho
Alok - tum kon ho shaitaan ho yaa bhagwan
Mai- socho toh bhaut kuch naa toh kuch bhi nahi aur rahi baat dusri
toh mai kudh bhagwan ki dua sai jinda hu toh unnki toh pairo ki dhul bhi nahi hu
Sabanam ke haath hilalnai shuru ho gaye
Mai usse lekar udd gaya wahi par jaha maine jivnaash ko pheka tha
Sabnam ki aakhe khuli aur mujhe dekhanai lagi
Mai - mujhe maff kar do tumhe waha asse nahi chodana cahaiye tha
mujhe nahi pata tha ki mujhe waha sai nikalani ke liye tumhari family
ka yeh haal hoga
Samnai jivnaash apna pet pakad kar jisat raha tha
Sabnam kuch bolani waali thi par maine usske hotho par haath rakh
kar usse chup rehani ko kaha
Mai - abb tum dekhoo ki tumsai tumhara pariwaar chinanai waale
ko mai kitana dard dunga tum yehi reh kar dekhoo apni enhi aakho
sai ( sabnam ko nicche baithate hue )
Aur mai chalata huuh jivnaash ki taraf
Jivnaash - shaitaan ke bacha hai tuh
Mai gardan chtakate hue - toh aaya hi kyu yaha
Jivnaash - aaahhh mera pet mai yaha nahi aana cahata tha mujhe
chhod de mai chala jaunga
Mai- abb tuh kahi nahi jayega abb tuh apni galatiyo kaa yaa paap
kaa fal paayega
Jivnaash - nahhiiiii
Maine usska ek haath pakad kar thod diya
Jivnaash - chhod do mujhe mai bhikh managata huu
Mai- abhi toh mujhe jehar dekar bahut has raha tha
Jivnaash - glati ho gayi hai mujhsai
Aahhhhhhhhh maaaaa
Ek laat usske pet mai maari
Mai - bahut jehar hai tere andar haa tabhi abhi tak zinda hai haa
Maine muh upper kiya aur haatho ki mutthi baand lii jivnaash ki
body mai sai sara jehar nikal kar meri body mai aane laga
Maine haatho ko khola aur mere nakuun aa gaye ki tabhi jivnaash nai jamin mai dusra haath ghusaya aur waha par
snakes kaa ek bhaut bada jhund aa gaya bhaut saare jungle ka
ilaaka jaise sankes sai bhar gaya hoo
Aur jivnaash apana haath utha kar apne sharrer mai laga leta aur khada hoakr - abb dekhata huu tuh kaya hai
Maine haatho ko failaya aur yeh karte hi mera face chang hoakr
bhediye ke face kaa ho gaya
Mai daant bahar nikal kar - haa haa abb kaise jhelega ess jeharile
bhediye ko re keede
Jivnaash - hamala
Woh sab saap(snakes ) icchadhaari the sab jivnaash jaase suit mai
aa gaye
Ek bhagata hua mere pass aaya
Maine usski garadan ko apne haatho sai pakad liya aur apne face
ke pass lakar - swagat hai meri duniya mai
Maine niche jabde ke daan uski aakho mai ghusaye aur upper ke
daant uski khopadi mai aur ukhaad kar phek diya
Yup Baaki dono bhi aaj hi aa jaayenge aur change nahi par kaafi kuch galt thaa woh read aur sahi kiya hai baaki bhi aaj hi aayega sabanam ki entry jaisi thi woh best thi toh change karne kaa kuch hisab sahi nahi thaBhai ye to ek hi hua baat to 3 ki hui thi or ye to purana likha hua hai kuch b change nahi hai iss update me