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Kya haal hai Bhai sabhi thik thak, bahut dinon baad darshan de rahe ho, ab aa gaye ho toh Jana nahin, yaar idhar mann nahin lagta hai akele akele.Thanks Bhai Jaroor Karenge sabse mile bhaut din ho gaye
Thanks Bhai,Welcome back bro,
Kya haal hai Bhai sabhi thik thak, bahut dinon baad darshan de rahe ho, ab aa gaye ho toh Jana nahin, yaar idhar mann nahin lagta hai akele akele.
Well jo bhi ho ummid karta hu sab kushal mangl honge.
Story kab start kar rahe ho aap?
ye sahi bichar hai bhaiproblem toh nahi keh sakata busy rahunga toh me late aa jaaunga thoda par story likhane aaya hu story likhunga forum ki unn cheezo me nahi lagunga jinme lag ke mera man story likhanee se hat gaya thaa
Nice StartUPDATE 1
Mausam mai thodi si nami thi saayad kal raat halki si barish padi thi par abb Time tha sooraj (sun) ka Ki woh apni roshani sai bata sake Ki aakhir subah ho chuki hai
Hazaro building ke piche ek aalishan saa ghar tha
Ess ghar mai naa kamro ki kami thi naa naa gaadi yoo Ki aur logo Ki puchiye mat kyuki yaha ek bhaut bada pariwar rehata hai
Essi ghar ke room mai jaha kuch ansuna andekha saa hoo raha tha
Aurat - are beta abb uth ja dekh 7 bej gaye hai tuh late ho jayega
Ladka angdayi leta hua - kaya hai kyu pareshan kar rahi ho apna kam karo
Aurat- school nahi jana kaya
Ladka -tujhe jada fikar karne ki jarurat nahi hai chali jaa yaha sai
Uss aurat ke akho mai aashu aa jate hai yeh sun kar
Use nai phir sai uss ladake ko hilaya toh use nai haath jatak diya
Aurat [rotte hu vaha sai chhali jaati hai ]
Kuch der baad Ladaka utth kar beth jata ha aur (man mai) yaar ye subah subah kaya
bakwaas laga rakha hai chal beta utth ja ab to nicche bhi mari jayegi phir vo uth kar fresh hota hai aur niche breakfast ke liye ja rha tha tabhi
Chhaaataak ek karara tappad usse pada
Ladaka picche mud kar teri ma ki ..... aur baaki ke sab muh mai hi rah jate hai
Ladki - tune mom ko kaya kha hai jaldi bata
Ladka - yar tum log picha ku nahi chhodate har time mere naak mai dum kar ke rakahte ho
Ladki -kaya kaha tunne hum sab tere dushman todi hai
Ladka - tum sab ek hi jese ho aur tum to kuch jada hi apne aap ko maharani samajhti ho ab jao yaha sai mera mood na kharab karo
Ladki. ---(ye bhi roote hue yaha sai nikal jati hai )
Phir woh ladaka jakar breakfast table par beth jata hai Sab (Family) dining table par ussi ko ghur rahe the
Ladaka- yaha koi mela laga hai kaya jo sab ke sab joker dekhnai bethe ho kahana khalo
Par koi kuch nahi bola
Woh ladaka uthata hua - chhodo mai hi chala jaata hu kahte raho aram sai
Woh apna bag leta hai aur waha sai apne school nikal jata hai ( Yeh koi aur
nhi hamre hero hai Dev Rajput hai ) Par sayad aaj eska ek aur kaharab din tha school ke gate par kuch ladke kadhe hai
Ladka1st - Dhekho be aa gaya fatu
Ladaka 2nd - abe ye fatu nahi darpok bhi hai
Tabhi ek ladki aati hai aur jor ka tapad use mar deti are dev ko nahi Ladaka 2nd ko
Esska naam hai komal
abb yeh kyu yaha hai aur kaya hai yeh khudh hi bata degi
Komal - tumhari himmat kaise hu ase baat karnne ki
Ladka 1st yaar chhod na komal kyu ess ke liye hume kyu pareshan kar rahi hai
Komal - aap jaante ho phir bhi tum chaloo dev Par dev komal ko andhekha kar ke
Muh niche kar ke waha sai sidha class mai chala Jata hai
Ladaka 1st - Sam
Ladaka 2nd - Rajeev
Sam - dekh dekh abhi bhi tujh sai bina bole chala gaya
Komal sam ko roak ke - bus bhaiya jaane bhi do
In class room
Dev - Are akash kaya haal hai
Akash - sab mast tu bata yaar
Dev - bus apna to tuh janata hi hai na
Aur dev ka shir nicche ho jata hai
Akash - yaar tu uss ke baare mai jada na socha kar
Dev - tuh thik kehata hai yaar ab teri baat maan kar to maine ghar par bhi drama shuru kar diya hai par yaar mujhe bahut bura lagata hai ase sab ko irritate ignore beizzat karna aur mom ko esse bolna to khuch jada hi bura lagata hai bhai
Akash- yaar ab kar bhi kaya sakate hai bus too yaar ghar sai nikal jaa
Dev - yaar ye too kaya kah rha hai bhai
Akash - sahi yaar agar unn logo ko ye pata chal gay to vo log to jite ji mar hia Jayenge
Dono ke aakho sai aashu nikal jate hai par madam ko aate dekh kar dono apna face rumal sai saaf karte hai
Madam - good morning baccho mera naam Meera hai aur mai aap ki english and class teacher bhi hoo too agar koi bhi help ki jarurat ho to mujhe bata dena only study related any doubt
Class - No mam
Meera - that's good to ye aap logo ka pahela din hai 10th standard mai too aap sab ko pata hi hoga ki ess saal aap logo ko board dena hai too bahut hardwork karna hoga
Class - yes mam
Meera - to thik hai apnni books nikalo ......ase hi 3 classes ke baad interval ho gaya
Sab Canteen mai janne lage
Akash - yaar aaj kaya order karu
Dev - yaar kuch spicy order kar bhai
Akash - ok
Sam- abe chutiye tu kab sai spicy kaah nai laga
Akash - Jab sai teri bhen Ess ke piche padi hai
Sam - jada mat bol nhi too
Dev - Sorry sam akash yaar tu jaa lekar aa
Sam - Abb ki na kaam ki baat aur tuh ab chup chhap ess fattu ke sath beth ja samajha
Akash - teri to.....
Dev usse pakad kar agge bad jata hai
Komal - Bhai app uss sai assa ku bolte ho..
Sam - isne tujhe naa kaha kaise jab tumhare sath ghumata tha tab to bada accha lagata tha ab kaya ho gaya
Komal - bhai app ko kuch doubt nhi ho rha jo ladka aap ke jaan dene to tyaar rahata tha aaj 1 mahine mai kya badal gya
Sam ke dimag kharab ho jata hai
Sam - Komal gusse ke vajah sai maine to ye socha hi nhi par kaya karu woh hamesha gussa dila ke chala jata hai
Komal - Bhai kuch to pata karna padega
Sam - Tum sahi kehati ho oye rajeev jara yaha aa
Rajeev (rv)- ji bhai
Sam - yaar tu jaa kar pata laga ye sale dono kaya khichadi paka rahe hai
Rv - kaya didi ki shaadi ho gayi aur hume bulaya bhi nahi ye to galat hai party to banati hai
Sam ( ghuse mai ) - abe yaar tujhe har time bakchodi sai fursat nhi hai yaar mai yaha serious baat kar rha hu aur
Rajiv - sorry bhai sorry sis
Komal - koi baat nahi bhai par jo bhai keh rahe hai uss kam ko kar doo please
Rajiv- bhai bhi bolti ho aur please bhi
Komal- sorry bhai aage sai essa nahi hoga
Rajiv- par tum dono uss mai etana interest kyu le rahe ho jab usse apani dosti ki kimat hi pata nahi hai