Super hit update and awesome story
UPDATE 9
Neeli pahadi ke upar hawa aur bhi thandi ho gayi thi…
Hawa me wo old memories thi, aur hum teeno ke chehre pe wo halka sa sukoon.
Saloni didi: “Yaad hai Naina, college ke time yahan hum dono kaise chill karte the”
Naina (hasti hui): “Aur kaise! Aunty ki bhel aur wo pahadi ka view… bas duniya ka sabse best combo.”
Baate ho rahi thi ki tabhi .....
Road ke us paar ek black SUV rukti hai.
Car ke door se Akash utarta hai — aankhon me thoda nasha, aur dil me ek ajeeb sa ghussa.
Usne Naina ko call kiya
Akash car se niche utar kar andar aaya aur jaate hue Naina ko caal lagata hua Naina ko doondh raha thaa aur woh tabhi dekhata hai — Naina wahan bhel kha rahi hai… par uske saath Dev aur Saloni bhi hain.
Akash (andar hi andar): “Mujhe yahan bulaya gaya tha… aur madam kisi aur ke saath chill kar rahi hai"
Uske dost Rajiv aur Prakash car me hi baithe hue the.
Rajiv (window se jhaankte hue): “Lagta hai salaa kuch hone wala hai …”
Akash ne haath uthaya — “Ruko, main dekhta hoon.”
Woh dheere se stall ki taraf badha.
Aankhon me wo chubhan thi — possessiveness aur ego ka mixture
Naina ne pehle use nahi dekha, par jab uski nazar Akash pe padi, wo turant uth gayi.
“Akash! Tum aa gaye… main bas—”
Akash (uske paas aate hue, sarcastic tone me):
“Bas kya Naina? Mera wait kar rahi thi, ya Dev ke saath bhel ke masale me busy thi”
Saloni didi ne turant dekha — “Akash, yeh kya tone hai tumhari? Ye public jagah hai.”
Akash (thoda hansi ke saath, aankhon me nasha):“Public jagah hai, isiliye sabko dikh raha hai na… kaun kiske saath ‘publicly’ enjoy kar raha hai.”
Naina (thoda ghabra kar):“Akash please, aise mat bolo. Tumne hi toh bola tha yahan milne ko.”
Akash:“Haan bola tha milne ko, par yeh toh nahi kaha tha ke Dev aur uski didi ke saath date banao!”
Main tab tak chup tha, par ab bola :“Akash, tum galat samajh rahe ho. Hum bas purani yaade taaza kar rahe the, itna hi.”
Akash (aage badhkar, aankhon me seedha dekhte hue):“Tu har jagah kyu ghus jaata hai Dev? Har relation me, har jagah, har insaan ke beech… kya milta hai tujhe”
Naina (thoda zyada emotional tone me):
“Akash! Bas karo! Tum pehle jaise nahi rahe tumhara dimag kharab tumne abhi nsha kiya hai naa…”
Akash ne uski taraf dekha - aankhon me wo udaas si aag thi bola : Haan Naina, pehle jaise nahi raha… shayad ab akela ho gaya hoon.”
Ek pal ke liye sab chup ho gaye. Hawa bhi tham gayi.
Saloni didi ne softly bola : “Akash, jao ghar jao. Tumhe aaram ki zarurat hai.”
Akash ne halki hansi di, phir Naina ko dekha -“Aaram mujhe nahi, tum logon ko chahiye sab yaad rakhunga.”
Akash ne apne kadam peeche nahi liye.
Uske pair ke niche ki mitti halki si khisak gayi — jaise zameen bhi warning de rahi ho, par wo rukne wala nahi tha.
Main ne aankhon me dekha… wo insaan nahi, us waqt ek vulkan lag raha tha.
Akash (thoda jhatka maar kar haansta hua):
“Dev… tu samajhta kya hai apne aap ko haan?”
Main ne calmly bola:
“Main kuch nahi samajhta Akash… par tu galat samajh raha hai.”
Wo seedha mere paas aaya, collar pakad li meri —“Galat main nahi, tu hai! Har jagah hero banne ki koshish karta hai na?”
Saloni didi ne zor se chillaya:“Akash chhodo usse!”
Par Akash ne dhakka de diya mujhe.
Main peeche jaake ek bench se takra gaya, bhel ki plate zameen par gir gayi — chutney hawa me udti hui jaise khoon ka rang lag rahi thi.
Naina daud kar beech me aayi:“Akash bas karo! Tum pagal ho gaye ho kya?”
Akash (nasha me hansi ke saath):“Pagal? Haan… pagal hi toh bana diya mujhe isne sala meri ek behan meri side saale ne usko bhi apni side kar liya
Main utha, aankhon me seedha dekha uske —
“Main tujhe respect deta hoon Akash… par agar hadd paar karega, toh phir main bhi chup nahi rahunga.”
Akash (thoda close aake):
“Toh kar kya lega tu?”
Uske haath fir uthe — par iss baar maine pakad liya.
Uski grip strong thi, meri calm.
Main ne dheere se kaha:
“Jo khud pe control nahi rakh sakta… wo doosron pe kya ilzaam lagayega”
Akash ne zor se haath chhudaya, par balance lose kar gaya.
Uske dost niche se Rajiv aur Prakash car se nikal ke aage aage yaha bhagate hue
Rajiv:“Akash bhai, chhodo yaar, sab dekh rahe hain.”
Akash (gusse me):“Nahi Rajiv! Aaj nahi… aaj is Dev ko dikhata hoon asli aukaat!”
Naina phir chilla padi —“Akash, ruk jao!”
Par tab tak der ho chuki thi —
Akash ne ek bottle uthai stall ke table se aur zameen pe patak di — “Crash!”
Sab log dar ke peeche hatt gaye.
Main uske samne khada tha —
“Tu jitna chaahe chilla le Akash… Naina ke dil me darr nahi, sirf afsos bachega teri is harkat ke baad"
Sab kuch ek pal ke liye ruk gaya tha…
Bottle ke tukde zameen pe chamak rahe the, aur Akash ne ek sabse bada piece uthaya — uske haath se halka sa khoon tapak raha tha.
Naina ne aankhon me dar le kar dekha — “Akash… yeh kya kar rahe ho?”
Akash ne kuch nahi kaha.
Uski aankhein seedha Saloni didi pe tik gayi
aur agle hi second usne wo tutti hui bottle unki gardan ke paas rakh di.
Saloni didi ka saans ek pal ke liye ruk gaya.
Unke honth halki si kamp rahe the.
Main turant ek step aage badha — “Akash! Haath neeche kar de… main bol raha hoon haath neeche kar!”
Akash (thoda hansi ke saath, par awaaz me ek pagalpan):“Aaj dekhte hain Dev… tera calm nature kitni der tak bacha sakta hai.bata kaiss lag raha jab apni behan khatre me dikh rahe tujhe ”
Naina (ro kar):“Akash please, Saloni ko kuch mat karna tu jaanta bhi nahi woh mere liye kaya hai ”
Akash (beech me bolta hai):
“Main sab jaanta hoon! Mujhe bas yeh dekhna hai… agar main iski gardan pe yeh bottle aur thoda press kar du… toh tu kya karega Dev?”
Main uski aankhon me dekh raha tha, par andar se ghabra gaya tha —
wo nasha aur ego mila kar Akash ek ticking bomb ban gaya tha.
Main dheere tone me bola, har word me ek baar: “Tu… hadh… kar raha hai, Akash.”
Uske haath thoda aur tight hue bottle ki kanch par —
Saloni didi ne aankhen band kar li.
Main ne ek deep breath li, aur seedha bola
“Agar tujhe mujhse problem hai, toh mujhe mar. Par unhe chhod de, Akash.
Tu samajhta hai main chup rahunga agar unke khoon ki ek boond bhi zameen pe giri”
Akash ke haath ke muscles kas gaye —
uske chehre par gussa aur guilt dono ek saath the.
Rajiv (peeche se chillata hai):
“Akash bhai bas karo! Yeh galat ho raha hai!
Par Akash us pal kisi ki nahi sun raha tha.
Main dheere-dheere aage badha, uske ekdum samne tak.uska haath pakad kar
Bottle ka tukda mene apne garadan ke paas kar diyaa ek aur inch aur sab khatam.
Main ne halki si awaaz me kaha:
“Naina tujhe tab bhi chaahti thi jab tu akela tha…par lagta tu ab wo Akash nahi raha jisko wo pyaar karti thi meri nafrat apno par mat nikal sahi se jaan aakhir sach kaya hai .
Wo line seedha uske dil me lagi.
Uska haath thoda dheela pada… aur usi second maine woh dur phek di
Saloni didi peeche gir gayi, Naina unke paas daud gayi.
Akash ne ek kadam peeche liya, aankhon me guilt aur sharm dono.
“Main… main bas… prove karna chahta tha…”
Main ne uske paas aake bas itna kaha:
“Pyaar proof nahi hota Akash… feel hota hai.”
Akash ne aankhen jhuka di…
Thodi der tak chup raha, phir dheere se Naina ke paas aaya aur usse gale laga liya.
Uski awaaz halki si kaamp rahi thi —
“I’m sorry… Naina.”
Naina ne uske kandhe par haath rakha, aur usse kas ke hug kar liya.
“Koi baat nahi, Akash… bas khud ko sambhalo. Shaant rehna seekho.”
Wo dono ab bhi ek dusre ke paas the, tabhi piche se kisi ki aawaz aayi —
“Dev…”
Main palat kar dekhta hoon — Devika khadi thi. Chehre par chinta thi, aankhen idhar-udhar kuch dhoond rahi thi.
Main turant uske paas gaya.
“Devika, tum yahan? Sab thik hai na?”
Usne saans lete hue kaha —
“Rajiv bhaiya ka call aaya tha… unhone bola Akash bhaiya tumse ladne aaye hain. Main turant daud ke aa gayi… kuch hua toh nahi na?”
Main ne halka sa muskuraya.
“Nahi, sab theek hai. Tension mat lo.”
Tabhi Saloni didi mere paas aayi. Uske haath me rumaal tha, aur bina kuch kahe meri gardan par lagaa khoon saaf karne lagi.
Main thoda hairaan hokar bola —
“Didi, yeh kya—”
Uske bolne se pehle Devika ne dekh liya.
“Dev, yeh khoon… kaise nikla?”
Saloni didi ne turant muskaan ke saath baat kaat di —
“Arre, kuch nahi! Mera hi nakhoon lag gaya hoga. Zyada mat sochna.”
Main hansa, thoda mazaak me bola —
“Haan, lagta hai didi ke nakhoon talwar se tez hain.”
Sab ke chehre par halka sa smile aa gaya, lekin hawa ab bhi thodi bhaari thi akash bhi has pada .
Udhar Naina, Akash ko bench par bithati hui chup thi. Uski aankhen ab bhi Dev par tikki thi.
Uske man me sirf ek hi sawaal ghoom raha tha —
“Aaj se pehle maine kabhi Dev ko aise nahi dekha…
jab Akash bottle lekar hamla karne wala tha, tab Dev ke chehre par na gussa tha, na darr…
bas ek ajeeb sa sukoon, jaise usse apni zindagi se koi farq hi nahi padta.”
Naina ne dheere se aankhen band ki, aur uske dil me ek hi baat goonj gayi —
“Dev… tu asal me hai kaun?”
Akash (thoda serious hote hue Naina se):
“Naina… sab kehate rahe ki yeh Dev alag hai, par maine kabhi maana hi nahi. Main use marne jaa raha tha, lekin tab bhi mere dimaag me tum aur main hi chal rahe the. Kaisa insaan hai yeh…”
Saloni — “Main aur Didi (Devika) bhi ab unke paas aa gaye the, wahi baithte hue.”
Devika — (halke muskaan ke saath) “Main unhe batane lagi ki maa-papa kya keh rahe the, kaise Deepti aunty ki awaaz aayi thi, aur kaise uncle-aunty mujhe bahut maante hain.”
Saloni didi (thoda gusse aur mamta ke mix tone me):
“Par Akash, Naina… promise karo yeh baat aur kisi ko pata nahi chale.”
Naina (Saloni didi ka haath pakadte hue):
“Main jis ghar ki bahu banne wali hoon, us adhikaar se vaada karti hoon — yeh baat kabhi kisi ko nahi batayenge.”
Akash (khushi se):
“Bas! Ab meri wife ne keh diya toh yeh ho kar hi rahega!”
Main (uth kar thoda drama karte hue):
“Yeh hai Naina Raj! Inka vachan hi samrajya ka sasan hai! Jaiii Naina mati!”
(Sab hasne lagte hain. Par haste haste Devika mujhe ghoor rahi hoti hai, jaise keh rahi ho — “dekh lo, kahan jaoge ab?”)
Main (andar se sochta hua):
“Khair, maine toh aaj decide kar liya tha — ab meri wajah se kisi par koi dabav nahi hoga.”
Main (Naina didi se):
“Di, aap na meri Saloni di ka admission apne college me karwao masters ke liye. Aur Saloni di, aapko meri kasam — aap rokengi nahi. Mujhe chahiye ki aap dono aage badho. Log uska reason mujhe maane, bas.”
Saloni didi (thoda curious hote hue):
“Akash, aisa kya kiya tumne Dev ke saath? Batao.”
Akash (thoda ghabraya hua):
“Maine toh… kuch bhi nahi kiya.”
Saloni (muskurate hue):
“Aaj yeh Dev bilkul mere bade bhai ki tarah baatein kar raha hai.”
Main (halki si hasi ke saath):
“Nahi di, mere ghar me dekha hoga… aur Devika ke ghar me bhi… log mujhse ajeeb si nafrat karte hain. Samajh nahi aata kyu. Kya unke paas rehne wale log, chahe jaankar yaa anjaane me, unke prem se baat karna, unki madad karna, unhe khush rakhna… aur unse pyaar wapas paana galat hai kya? Agar yeh galti hai, toh log mujhse nafrat sahi hi karte hain.”
(Devika aur Akash dono ka chehra neeche jhuk jaata hai.)
Main (thoda thahar kar):
“Nahi Devika, Akash… yeh main tum dono se nahi keh raha. Tumhe laga hoga maine tumhara haq cheen liya… par kya aisa ho sakta hai ki kisi ke maa-baap ki jaan kisi aur ke bachche me bas jaaye? Jab bhi woh mujhse milte hain, pyaar barsa dete hain. Baaki din raat toh tumhare saath hi hain. Agar unka pyaar tum samajh nahi paaye, toh galti tumhari hai. Par main… main apni Didi ke saath yeh sab dobara nahi hone dunga.”
Saloni aur Devika dono mujhe pakad kar bithati hain:
“Shaant Dev, shaant…”
Main (saans theek karte hue):
“Thik hai, main thik hoon. Par di, aap meri baat maanogi na?”
Saloni (pyar bhare andaaz me):
“Haan baba, haan! Tu kahe main naa manun kya? Baad me mat kehna di kahan reh gayi.”
Main (hasi me):
“Aap kahin bhi raho, meri aankhen CID se kam nahi — dhoondh hi lunga aapko!”
Akash (thoda muskurate hue Devika se):
“Devika, mujhe maaf karna. Maine Dev ke baare me tujhe galat samjha. Mujhe laga tujhe shayad Dev pasand aa gaya.”
(Main ko tezz khaasi aa jaati hai. Sambhalte hue):
“Are nahi nahi yaar Akash bhai, main aur Devika? Aisa kuch nahi hai! Yeh toh mujhe jail le jaane wali thi pehle se. Hum dono ke beech pyaar? No chance!”
Devika (hans kar):
“Haan haan, aisa kuch nahi hai!”