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Fantasy Daira-e-Gunah - A family incest
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Bhadiya update, ya salman sana se baat kyn nae kerta.... sana aur ashar ka next scene ka wait ha bhai.D-City The Sibling’s Forbidden Talk
Ghar mein Laiba ki be chaini barhti ja rahi thi. Wo dekh rahi thi ke Sherni Sana ab bheeghi billi bani hui hai. Usne Salman ka number milaya taake apne dil ka bojh halka kar sake.
Salman: Oye Haddi! Kidar Gum ho.
Laibha: Bataya to tha bhai… sab log aaye hue thae... bohot masroofiyat thi.
Salman: Hunn... to phir khoob maze kiye hain weekend par? Sana se dobara ladayi to nahi hui?
Laiba: Ladayi? Arey bhai, ladayi to tab ho na jab doosri side se koi response aaye. Wo to bheeghi billi bani hui hai. Bilkul khamosh, jaise kisi ne uski zubaan kaat di ho.
Salman: Ye main nahi maan sakta... Sana aur bheeghi billi? Naa... wo waise hi tumhein avoid kar rahi hogi, uska koi naya drama hoga.
Laiba: (Baat badalte hue,) Acha sunein... aap ko wo cheekhon wali baat yaad hai? Nomi ne phupho ko bata di! Phupho ka face dekhne wala tha, unka rang urr gaya... unhein samajh nahi aa raha tha ke kahan chhupun. Mujhe to bohot hasi aa rahi thi.
Salman: (Zordar qahqaha lagate hue) Ye kya kya karte rehte ho tum sab? Bohot shararti ho gaye ho. Ashar phupha ne shayad isi wajah se Sana ko danta ho ke tum aisi ulti baatein kyun karti ho sab ke samne.
Laiba: Haan, ho sakta hai. Isi wajah se phupha us se naraz ho gaye hon aur usay danta ho… wisa Bhai, mazaq nahi seriously!…..(usne phir sab batia Ashar uncle ke sath us din dinner ke baad jab wapis aayi hai, tab se aisi hi khoi-khoi hai). Mujhe to lag raha tha us raat wo ro kar aayi thi...
Salman: (Hairat se) Ye mojza kaise ho gaya? Ashar uncle apni laadli ko kyun rulayenge?
Laiba: (Aahista awaz mein, jaise koi raaz bata rahi ho) Mujhe to lagta hai Sana ka koi affair ya BF tha... Uncle ko is baat ka pata chal gaya hoga aur unhon ne usay shadeed danta hai. Tabhi to us din se maine usay kisi se chat karte nahi dekha, warna pehle to har waqt phone par ungliyan chalti thin.
Salman: (Haste hue) Tum kya sochti rehti ho Laiba! Sana ka affair? Itni choti si to hai wo... na kabhi kahin bahar gayi hai, na uska koi friend hai..
Laiba: (Achanak jazbaati hokar) Aap maanein ya na maanein... lekin ab aap ki behan jawan ho chuki hai.
Salman ki hansi nikal gayi, magar saath hi wo thoda thithak gaya. Laiba ko bhi ehsas hua ke usne apne bhai se kya bol diya hai. Uska chehra sharm se surkh ho gaya.
Salman: (Shararat aur sanjeedgi ke melaap se) Oho... to meri Haddi ko lagta hai ke Sana ab jawan ho gayi hai... jawan to phir tum bhi ho gayi ho….. ya meri behan ko abhi tak ye lagta hai ke wo khud abhi tak pampers pehanti hai.
Laiba: Bhaaiii! Mera wo matlab nahi tha... mera matlab tha ke wo ab itni choti nahi rahi.
Salman: (Lehja narm magar shararati karte hue) uska tu mujha nae Pta...Per tum b ab badi ho gayi ho. Wo jo tum ne meri shirt pehni thi na, wo tumhare shoulders se slip kyun ho rahi thi? Kyunke tumhari body ab badal rahi hai. Tumhare curves ab Princess wale nahi rahe, Queen wale ho rahe hain.
Laiba: (Achanak dupatta sambhalti hui) Aap na... wahan ja kar bilkul bigar gaye hain. Main ammi ko bataungi ke aap kaisi baatein karte hain.
Salman: (aaj full mode mein tha, uski baat ignore karta hua) Waise Laiba, tumhein kya lagta hai... Sana ne sirf suni thi cheekhein, ya wo action dekhne ke chakkar mein dant per gayi.?
Laiba: BESHARAM BHAI! Jayein, mujhe aap se baat hi nahi karni. Aap har baat ko udharr hi le jate hain.
Salman: Wisa Yaar Laiba, itna sharma kyn rae ho? Hum bhai-behen hain aur dost bhi. tum ne abhi kaha na ke Sana jawan ho gayi hai. Jab tum doosron ki jawani notice kar sakti ho, to main apni behan ki tabdeeli kyun nahi dekh sakta?
Laiba: (Niche dekhte hue, dhiimi awaz mein) "Bhai... wo alag baat hai. Hum Sana ki baat kar rahe thae…… jab aap waisi baatein karte hain to mujhe bohot sharam aati hai.
Salman: Yeh to fair nahi hai… tum khud jo chaha bol leti ho, jab main bolun to naraz ho jati ho.
Laiba: Bhai! … Naraz kab hui hun… bola na bas sharam aati hai.
Salman: Acha baba, Maan liya ke sharam aati hai…. Waise ek baat batao... Sana ki cheekhon wali baat par tum itni obsessed kyun ho? Kahin tumhara dil bhi to nahi chahta ke tum bhi waisa hi koi muqabla live dekh sako?
Laiba: (Sharm se paani paani hote hue) BHAI! Aap Phir shuru ho gae. Main kyun dekhungi? Chii... mujhe to soch kar hi ajeeb lagta hai ke phupha aur phupho... uff!
Salman: Ajeeb kyun lagta hai? Ye to natural hai. Waise, Ashar phupha kafi acha player lagte hain, bechari Sofia phupho ka kya haal karte honge… tabhi to wo itni zor se chillayi hongi.
Laiba: Bas karein Salman bhai! Main call kaat dungi. Sharam karein, wo hamare bade hain.
Salman: Bade hain to kya hua? Insaan hi hain na! Aur suno...
Laiba(darmiyan hi baat kat di) Bhai bohat tang kar rahe hain aaj aap mujhe…
Salman: (Haste hue) Nahi, tang nahi kar raha tha... main to apni Princess ka laal hota hua chehra dekhna chahta tha, jise dekh kar mera din ban jata hai. Chalo ab so jao, aur khwab mein kisi Pahalwani ke bare mein mat sochna... warna subah tumhari halat bhi Sana jaisi Khoi-khoi hogi.
Laiba: Goodnight gande bhai!
Salman: Goodnight! Meri sharmili Princess... Love you.
Laiba phone apna seena per rakh kar bed par let gayi. Uska chehra abhi bhi thoda laal tha. Woh soch rahi thi Bhai kitna badtameez ho gaya hai…Sana ke baare mein soch kar usey fikar bhi ho rahi thi.
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Dosto ya tha aj ka update comments main apni suggestions deta rahin maine aapke feedback ki wajah se story main aga throi chnages b kia hai. -- umeed hai aapko maza aayega!
Aj phr writer sb bzy ho gye chalo koi nahi kal sahi lekhan itni achi stories main jab chuti ati hai tu tensn honey lagti hai
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Update - 29
Sana apne room mein akeli thi, chhat ko ghoor rahi thi.
Pichhle 2 din se ek tarah se usne apne aap ko room mein band kiya hua tha, khana bhi Laiba hi ne usey la kar diya tha. Sabhia kuch apne kaamon mein busy thi, isliye uska focus kahin aur tha.
Sana ko neend nahi aa rahi thi raaton ko, zehen mein sochon ka toofan tha, Har waqt us raat ka scene dimagh mein chal raha tha. Har baar jab wo aankhein band karti, Ashar ki ankhon ka wo khoofnaak gussa…Aur phir... wo Thappar! Kitni zor se uski naram si gaal par para tha ke Sana andar tak hil gayi thi,Uski cheekh dar se uske andar hi dumm torr gayi thi.
Magar dard se zyada shock tha... Ashar ka wo touch... pehle chehre par, phir honton ke qareeb... aur phir wo kiss. Ufff! Wo kiss nahi tha, wo to aik tufaan tha jisne Sana ke wajood ko bikhair kar rakh diya tha. use kiss mein gussa bhi tha, junoon bhi, Ashar ki garm zubaan jab uske munh mein zabardasti dakhil hui thi, to Sana ko laga tha jaise wo saans lena bhool gayi ho.
Ashar ka hath jab uske seene par slip hua, uska boobs par wo mardana skhat dabao... Sana apni insult bhool gayi thi. Sirf aik wild excitement thi, Per andar khuch aur b tha.
Sana ne mehsoos kiya Zohaib... ne b to chua tha per Ashar ka andaz alag tha. Zyada gehra. Zyada khatarnak. Zyada Possessive.
Aur phir... wo khwab. usay sharminda karne ke liye kafi thi. Jab wo Khwab mind main ata Uski penty geeli ho jati thi… Sana (Whisper mein): Uff... ye mujhe kya ho raha hai? Kya main waqayi gandi larki hoon? Kya Ashar uncle sahi kehte hain ke main awara hoon?....ya sab naia tha uska liya wo confuse dari hvi thi.
Sana ka dil do hisson mein bhatt chuka tha. Forbidden pleasure... jo cheez kuch lamhon ke liye maza thi, ab wo bojh ban chuki thi. Aik taraf Ashar ke liye wo uthate hve naia jazbaat thae. Usey Ashar ka har touch, uski har bite apni skin par ab bhi mehsoos hoti thi. Doosri taraf guilt tha... Gussa tha apni insult per…. darr tha... family ki izzat thi.
In sab ke darmiyan Sana itni ulajh chuki thi ke usay lagta tha is sab ki zimmedar sirf woh khud hai. Ashar ka qusoor kahin bhi usay nazar hi nahi aa raha tha.…… jaise saari ghalti uske hi wajood mein ho.
Woh in sochon ko pata nahi kitni baar, kitne angles se soch chuki thi. Aur ab bhi wohi sab chal raha tha ke achanak uske mobile par message aaya.
Sana ne phone uthaya, umeed thi ke Ashar hoga.
Magar screen dekh kar mayoosi ki aik lehar dourd gayi. Message us larke ka tha. Usne bina parhe mobile side par rakh diya.
Wo mujh se baat kyun nahi kar rahe?
Is khayal ke sath hi Sana ki ankhon se aansuon nikal aaya. Usne kitni baar Ashar ko message likha...
Ashar uncle… aap ne mujhe maara… phir kiss kiya… Lekin phir bhi… aapko miss kar rahi hoon……Nae nae delete.
Main kya likhun? Sorry? Aapko miss kar rahi hoon? Ya aap ne jo kiya… woh galat tha lekin main phir bhi aapke paas aana chahti hoon?
Magar har baar send karne se pehle delete kar diya.
Sana ko ehsas hua ke Ashar hi wo wahid insaan tha jo uski har bakwas sunta tha, jo usay danta tha magar uske sath Connected rehta tha. Ab aur koe b nae tha jiska sath wo ya sab share kar ska..ise laia ye khamoshi usay thappad se zyada dard de rahi thi.
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Sofia besabri se Vicky ke ghar aane ka wait kar rahi thi. Door bell baji.
Sofia ne jaise hi darwaza khola, saamne Vicky ko dekh kar uski ankhon mein woh chamak wapis aa gayi jo pechla khuch dino se ashar ka sath tension se gaib thi. Vicky ka lamba qadd, chaunde kandhe aur jawan chehra dekh kar Sofia aik pal ko thithak gayi woh bacha ab aik Jawan mard ban chuka tha.
Vicky: (Gale milte hue, uski pakar mein aik mardana mazbooti thi) Waise mujhe aap se milna to nahi chahiye tha... lekin ab aap saamne hoon, to khud ko rok nahi saka.
Sofia: (Usey alag karte hue, chehre par laali ke sath) Kyun? Aisi kya baat ho gayi?
Vicky: Kyunke aap airport nahi aayin.
Sofia: Arey... Ashar ne mana kar diya tha. Kehne lage office se hi pick kar lenge.
Vicky: Lagta hai aaj kal aapke Husband kuchh zyada hi kaam mein busy hain. Abhi mujhe bhi drop karke yahi bol kar chale gaye.
Sofia: Aaj kal kuchh aisa hi chal raha hai.
Chalo andar aao, ya darwaze par hi khade rehne ka irada hai?
Vicky: Agar aap andar aane dogi, tabhi to aaunga.
Yeh sun kar dono hans diye. Sofia side par ho gayi.
Vicky ne Living Area mein jata hva Sofia ke jism ke utaar chadao ko gehri nazron se scan kiya. Usay Sofia pehle se zyada pur kashish lag rahi thi.
dono living area mein aa kar baith gaye.
Sofia: Dekho zara, tum kitne baray ho gaye ho. Proper gabrū jawan.
Vicky: Phir to aapko burhi ho jana chahiye tha… lekin aap to abhi bhi waisi hi ho.
Sofia: (hahah) Tum Pehla Fresh ho kar ao. Main tumhare liye khana lagati hoon, phir araam se baatein karte hain.
Yeh bol kar woh kitchen ki taraf chali gayi.
Vicky bachpan se hi Sofia ke bohot qareeb tha. Sofia ki shaadi se pehle woh aksar uske sar par sawaar rehta, aur Sofia bhi use utni hi tawajjo deti thi.
Dinner table par Vicky ne pehla niwala lete hi kaha: Phupho… aap ke haath ke khane ki to baat hi kuchh aur hai. Kitne arsey baad kha raha hoon.
Sofia: Sab tumhari favourite dishes banayi hain.
Vicky: Aaj to waqai meri eid hai. Favourite phupho ke haath ka favourite khana iska maza hi aur hai.
Sofia (hanste hue): Hmmm… baatein banana bhi seekh gaye ho. I’m impressed.
Vicky: And I’m flattered…. Waise Ashar uncle kab tak aayenge? Unke saath hi dinner karte.
Jaise usay achanak yaad aa gaya ho.
Sofia: Haan, ab tumhein dinner ke baad hi unka khayal aaya hai?
Vicky: Mujhe tab bohot bhook lagi thi. Waise yeh yaad dilana aapka kaam hai.
Sofia: woh busy hain. Thoda late aayenge. Message par baat ho gayi thi meri.
Vicky: Mujhe pata tha aap bohot Farmabardar biwi ho.Uncle bohot lucky hain ke unhein aap jaisi biwi mili jo unke intezar mein palke bichaye rakhti hai.
Dono hans diye, magar Sofia ke dil mein aik ache uthi. Wo jaanti thi ke wo palke to bichaati hai, magar Ashar un palkon ko choomna bhool gaya hai.
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Dusri taraf Ashar gaadi mein bewajah road par ghum raha tha. Zindagi apni rawani mein chal rahi thi magar uske andar sab kuch ruka hua tha… us raat par.
Sana…Uska naam bhi sochna galat lag raha tha lekin is naam ke ilawa aur kuch bhi uske mind mein nahi tha. uski roti hui aankhein, geele honth, woh halki si siski jab usne usey kiss kiya tha, uski naram gaal par thappad ka laal nishaan. Uske jism ki paseene wali meethi smell jo usey paagal bana chuki thi.
Ashar ne kabhi bhi Sana ko is nazar se nahi dekha tha, Wo to uski bhatiji thi... masoom, chanchal. Magar wo aik lamha wo galat waqt aur wo galat jagah... jidar usna apna Control kho dia.
Ashar ka khoon khaul raha tha. Usey gussa Sana par nahi, apni us kamzori par tha jo aik pal mein us par haavi ho gayi thi.Phir Usey wo thappad yaad aaya... kitni zor se maara tha usne us naram gaal par.
Ashar (Dil mein): Wo seham gayi thi... uski ankhon mein wo khof aur ansoo... magar maine sirf thappad par bas nahi kiya. Maine apni hadd paar kar di… Usey wo touch yaad aaya jo gusse se shuru hua magar hawas par khatam hua.
Ashar ne khud ko tasalli dene ki koshish ki: Sana ne mujhe roka kyun nahi? Wo rokti nahi hai... is liye to koi bhi uska advantage utha sakta hai. Wo larka bhi usey exploit kar raha hai aur main... main...
(Hahaha woh ladka ya khud Ashar?)
Lekin andar se woh jaanta tha yeh sab uski apni kamzori thi, Sana ki masoomiyat nahi.
Mujhe usay protect karna hoga, us ne khud ko tasalli dene ki koshish ki, Main hi to usay sahi aur galat ka farq sikha sakta hoon. Magar kahin na kahin woh jaanta tha… yeh sirf aadha sach tha.
Sana uski zimmedari nahi balki shayad woh uski kamzori ban rahi thi.
Usne phone uthaya. Sana ka number screen par chamak raha tha. Uska angutha call button par hover karta raha... kuch seconds tak wo us kash-m-kash mein raha jahan aik taraf Sofia ki wafadari thi aur doosri taraf Sana ki wo nasheeli mehak.
Ashar: (Dheere se) Ye galat hai... main galat hoon. Us se door rehna hi behtar hai.
Usne phone wapis rakh diya, magar uske dimaag mein sawaalon ka ek tofaan tha. Sana is waqt kya kar rahi hogi? Kya uski ankhon mein bhi wahi uljhan hogi? Kya ab wo mujh se nafrat karti hai ya… main ne uske saath bohot galat kiya.
Woh pachtawe ki aag mein jal raha tha, jaise uski har saans us galti ko yaad dila rahi ho, uska dil bhari tha guilt se.
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Dosto ya tha aj ka update -- Apne feedback se batayein ke Ashar ka ye character arc aapko kaisa lag raha hai!
Sana apne room mein akeli thi, chhat ko ghoor rahi thi.
Pichhle 2 din se ek tarah se usne apne aap ko room mein band kiya hua tha, khana bhi Laiba hi ne usey la kar diya tha. Sabhia kuch apne kaamon mein busy thi, isliye uska focus kahin aur tha.
Sana ko neend nahi aa rahi thi raaton ko, zehen mein sochon ka toofan tha, Har waqt us raat ka scene dimagh mein chal raha tha. Har baar jab wo aankhein band karti, Ashar ki ankhon ka wo khoofnaak gussa…Aur phir... wo Thappar! Kitni zor se uski naram si gaal par para tha ke Sana andar tak hil gayi thi,Uski cheekh dar se uske andar hi dumm torr gayi thi.
Magar dard se zyada shock tha... Ashar ka wo touch... pehle chehre par, phir honton ke qareeb... aur phir wo kiss. Ufff! Wo kiss nahi tha, wo to aik tufaan tha jisne Sana ke wajood ko bikhair kar rakh diya tha. use kiss mein gussa bhi tha, junoon bhi, Ashar ki garm zubaan jab uske munh mein zabardasti dakhil hui thi, to Sana ko laga tha jaise wo saans lena bhool gayi ho.
Ashar ka hath jab uske seene par slip hua, uska boobs par wo mardana skhat dabao... Sana apni insult bhool gayi thi. Sirf aik wild excitement thi, Per andar khuch aur b tha.
Sana ne mehsoos kiya Zohaib... ne b to chua tha per Ashar ka andaz alag tha. Zyada gehra. Zyada khatarnak. Zyada Possessive.
Aur phir... wo khwab. usay sharminda karne ke liye kafi thi. Jab wo Khwab mind main ata Uski penty geeli ho jati thi… Sana (Whisper mein): Uff... ye mujhe kya ho raha hai? Kya main waqayi gandi larki hoon? Kya Ashar uncle sahi kehte hain ke main awara hoon?....ya sab naia tha uska liya wo confuse dari hvi thi.
Sana ka dil do hisson mein bhatt chuka tha. Forbidden pleasure... jo cheez kuch lamhon ke liye maza thi, ab wo bojh ban chuki thi. Aik taraf Ashar ke liye wo uthate hve naia jazbaat thae. Usey Ashar ka har touch, uski har bite apni skin par ab bhi mehsoos hoti thi. Doosri taraf guilt tha... Gussa tha apni insult per…. darr tha... family ki izzat thi.
In sab ke darmiyan Sana itni ulajh chuki thi ke usay lagta tha is sab ki zimmedar sirf woh khud hai. Ashar ka qusoor kahin bhi usay nazar hi nahi aa raha tha.…… jaise saari ghalti uske hi wajood mein ho.
Woh in sochon ko pata nahi kitni baar, kitne angles se soch chuki thi. Aur ab bhi wohi sab chal raha tha ke achanak uske mobile par message aaya.
Sana ne phone uthaya, umeed thi ke Ashar hoga.
Magar screen dekh kar mayoosi ki aik lehar dourd gayi. Message us larke ka tha. Usne bina parhe mobile side par rakh diya.
Wo mujh se baat kyun nahi kar rahe?
Is khayal ke sath hi Sana ki ankhon se aansuon nikal aaya. Usne kitni baar Ashar ko message likha...
Ashar uncle… aap ne mujhe maara… phir kiss kiya… Lekin phir bhi… aapko miss kar rahi hoon……Nae nae delete.
Main kya likhun? Sorry? Aapko miss kar rahi hoon? Ya aap ne jo kiya… woh galat tha lekin main phir bhi aapke paas aana chahti hoon?
Magar har baar send karne se pehle delete kar diya.
Sana ko ehsas hua ke Ashar hi wo wahid insaan tha jo uski har bakwas sunta tha, jo usay danta tha magar uske sath Connected rehta tha. Ab aur koe b nae tha jiska sath wo ya sab share kar ska..ise laia ye khamoshi usay thappad se zyada dard de rahi thi.
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Sofia besabri se Vicky ke ghar aane ka wait kar rahi thi. Door bell baji.
Sofia ne jaise hi darwaza khola, saamne Vicky ko dekh kar uski ankhon mein woh chamak wapis aa gayi jo pechla khuch dino se ashar ka sath tension se gaib thi. Vicky ka lamba qadd, chaunde kandhe aur jawan chehra dekh kar Sofia aik pal ko thithak gayi woh bacha ab aik Jawan mard ban chuka tha.
Vicky: (Gale milte hue, uski pakar mein aik mardana mazbooti thi) Waise mujhe aap se milna to nahi chahiye tha... lekin ab aap saamne hoon, to khud ko rok nahi saka.
Sofia: (Usey alag karte hue, chehre par laali ke sath) Kyun? Aisi kya baat ho gayi?
Vicky: Kyunke aap airport nahi aayin.
Sofia: Arey... Ashar ne mana kar diya tha. Kehne lage office se hi pick kar lenge.
Vicky: Lagta hai aaj kal aapke Husband kuchh zyada hi kaam mein busy hain. Abhi mujhe bhi drop karke yahi bol kar chale gaye.
Sofia: Aaj kal kuchh aisa hi chal raha hai.
Chalo andar aao, ya darwaze par hi khade rehne ka irada hai?
Vicky: Agar aap andar aane dogi, tabhi to aaunga.
Yeh sun kar dono hans diye. Sofia side par ho gayi.
Vicky ne Living Area mein jata hva Sofia ke jism ke utaar chadao ko gehri nazron se scan kiya. Usay Sofia pehle se zyada pur kashish lag rahi thi.
dono living area mein aa kar baith gaye.
Sofia: Dekho zara, tum kitne baray ho gaye ho. Proper gabrū jawan.
Vicky: Phir to aapko burhi ho jana chahiye tha… lekin aap to abhi bhi waisi hi ho.
Sofia: (hahah) Tum Pehla Fresh ho kar ao. Main tumhare liye khana lagati hoon, phir araam se baatein karte hain.
Yeh bol kar woh kitchen ki taraf chali gayi.
Vicky bachpan se hi Sofia ke bohot qareeb tha. Sofia ki shaadi se pehle woh aksar uske sar par sawaar rehta, aur Sofia bhi use utni hi tawajjo deti thi.
Dinner table par Vicky ne pehla niwala lete hi kaha: Phupho… aap ke haath ke khane ki to baat hi kuchh aur hai. Kitne arsey baad kha raha hoon.
Sofia: Sab tumhari favourite dishes banayi hain.
Vicky: Aaj to waqai meri eid hai. Favourite phupho ke haath ka favourite khana iska maza hi aur hai.
Sofia (hanste hue): Hmmm… baatein banana bhi seekh gaye ho. I’m impressed.
Vicky: And I’m flattered…. Waise Ashar uncle kab tak aayenge? Unke saath hi dinner karte.
Jaise usay achanak yaad aa gaya ho.
Sofia: Haan, ab tumhein dinner ke baad hi unka khayal aaya hai?
Vicky: Mujhe tab bohot bhook lagi thi. Waise yeh yaad dilana aapka kaam hai.
Sofia: woh busy hain. Thoda late aayenge. Message par baat ho gayi thi meri.
Vicky: Mujhe pata tha aap bohot Farmabardar biwi ho.Uncle bohot lucky hain ke unhein aap jaisi biwi mili jo unke intezar mein palke bichaye rakhti hai.
Dono hans diye, magar Sofia ke dil mein aik ache uthi. Wo jaanti thi ke wo palke to bichaati hai, magar Ashar un palkon ko choomna bhool gaya hai.
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Dusri taraf Ashar gaadi mein bewajah road par ghum raha tha. Zindagi apni rawani mein chal rahi thi magar uske andar sab kuch ruka hua tha… us raat par.
Sana…Uska naam bhi sochna galat lag raha tha lekin is naam ke ilawa aur kuch bhi uske mind mein nahi tha. uski roti hui aankhein, geele honth, woh halki si siski jab usne usey kiss kiya tha, uski naram gaal par thappad ka laal nishaan. Uske jism ki paseene wali meethi smell jo usey paagal bana chuki thi.
Ashar ne kabhi bhi Sana ko is nazar se nahi dekha tha, Wo to uski bhatiji thi... masoom, chanchal. Magar wo aik lamha wo galat waqt aur wo galat jagah... jidar usna apna Control kho dia.
Ashar ka khoon khaul raha tha. Usey gussa Sana par nahi, apni us kamzori par tha jo aik pal mein us par haavi ho gayi thi.Phir Usey wo thappad yaad aaya... kitni zor se maara tha usne us naram gaal par.
Ashar (Dil mein): Wo seham gayi thi... uski ankhon mein wo khof aur ansoo... magar maine sirf thappad par bas nahi kiya. Maine apni hadd paar kar di… Usey wo touch yaad aaya jo gusse se shuru hua magar hawas par khatam hua.
Ashar ne khud ko tasalli dene ki koshish ki: Sana ne mujhe roka kyun nahi? Wo rokti nahi hai... is liye to koi bhi uska advantage utha sakta hai. Wo larka bhi usey exploit kar raha hai aur main... main...
(Hahaha woh ladka ya khud Ashar?)
Lekin andar se woh jaanta tha yeh sab uski apni kamzori thi, Sana ki masoomiyat nahi.
Mujhe usay protect karna hoga, us ne khud ko tasalli dene ki koshish ki, Main hi to usay sahi aur galat ka farq sikha sakta hoon. Magar kahin na kahin woh jaanta tha… yeh sirf aadha sach tha.
Sana uski zimmedari nahi balki shayad woh uski kamzori ban rahi thi.
Usne phone uthaya. Sana ka number screen par chamak raha tha. Uska angutha call button par hover karta raha... kuch seconds tak wo us kash-m-kash mein raha jahan aik taraf Sofia ki wafadari thi aur doosri taraf Sana ki wo nasheeli mehak.
Ashar: (Dheere se) Ye galat hai... main galat hoon. Us se door rehna hi behtar hai.
Usne phone wapis rakh diya, magar uske dimaag mein sawaalon ka ek tofaan tha. Sana is waqt kya kar rahi hogi? Kya uski ankhon mein bhi wahi uljhan hogi? Kya ab wo mujh se nafrat karti hai ya… main ne uske saath bohot galat kiya.
Woh pachtawe ki aag mein jal raha tha, jaise uski har saans us galti ko yaad dila rahi ho, uska dil bhari tha guilt se.
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Update - 29
Sana apne room mein akeli thi, chhat ko ghoor rahi thi.
Pichhle 2 din se ek tarah se usne apne aap ko room mein band kiya hua tha, khana bhi Laiba hi ne usey la kar diya tha. Sabhia kuch apne kaamon mein busy thi, isliye uska focus kahin aur tha.
Sana ko neend nahi aa rahi thi raaton ko, zehen mein sochon ka toofan tha, Har waqt us raat ka scene dimagh mein chal raha tha. Har baar jab wo aankhein band karti, Ashar ki ankhon ka wo khoofnaak gussa…Aur phir... wo Thappar! Kitni zor se uski naram si gaal par para tha ke Sana andar tak hil gayi thi,Uski cheekh dar se uske andar hi dumm torr gayi thi.
Magar dard se zyada shock tha... Ashar ka wo touch... pehle chehre par, phir honton ke qareeb... aur phir wo kiss. Ufff! Wo kiss nahi tha, wo to aik tufaan tha jisne Sana ke wajood ko bikhair kar rakh diya tha. use kiss mein gussa bhi tha, junoon bhi, Ashar ki garm zubaan jab uske munh mein zabardasti dakhil hui thi, to Sana ko laga tha jaise wo saans lena bhool gayi ho.
Ashar ka hath jab uske seene par slip hua, uska boobs par wo mardana skhat dabao... Sana apni insult bhool gayi thi. Sirf aik wild excitement thi, Per andar khuch aur b tha.
Sana ne mehsoos kiya Zohaib... ne b to chua tha per Ashar ka andaz alag tha. Zyada gehra. Zyada khatarnak. Zyada Possessive.
Aur phir... wo khwab. usay sharminda karne ke liye kafi thi. Jab wo Khwab mind main ata Uski penty geeli ho jati thi… Sana (Whisper mein): Uff... ye mujhe kya ho raha hai? Kya main waqayi gandi larki hoon? Kya Ashar uncle sahi kehte hain ke main awara hoon?....ya sab naia tha uska liya wo confuse dari hvi thi.
Sana ka dil do hisson mein bhatt chuka tha. Forbidden pleasure... jo cheez kuch lamhon ke liye maza thi, ab wo bojh ban chuki thi. Aik taraf Ashar ke liye wo uthate hve naia jazbaat thae. Usey Ashar ka har touch, uski har bite apni skin par ab bhi mehsoos hoti thi. Doosri taraf guilt tha... Gussa tha apni insult per…. darr tha... family ki izzat thi.
In sab ke darmiyan Sana itni ulajh chuki thi ke usay lagta tha is sab ki zimmedar sirf woh khud hai. Ashar ka qusoor kahin bhi usay nazar hi nahi aa raha tha.…… jaise saari ghalti uske hi wajood mein ho.
Woh in sochon ko pata nahi kitni baar, kitne angles se soch chuki thi. Aur ab bhi wohi sab chal raha tha ke achanak uske mobile par message aaya.
Sana ne phone uthaya, umeed thi ke Ashar hoga.
Magar screen dekh kar mayoosi ki aik lehar dourd gayi. Message us larke ka tha. Usne bina parhe mobile side par rakh diya.
Wo mujh se baat kyun nahi kar rahe?
Is khayal ke sath hi Sana ki ankhon se aansuon nikal aaya. Usne kitni baar Ashar ko message likha...
Ashar uncle… aap ne mujhe maara… phir kiss kiya… Lekin phir bhi… aapko miss kar rahi hoon……Nae nae delete.
Main kya likhun? Sorry? Aapko miss kar rahi hoon? Ya aap ne jo kiya… woh galat tha lekin main phir bhi aapke paas aana chahti hoon?
Magar har baar send karne se pehle delete kar diya.
Sana ko ehsas hua ke Ashar hi wo wahid insaan tha jo uski har bakwas sunta tha, jo usay danta tha magar uske sath Connected rehta tha. Ab aur koe b nae tha jiska sath wo ya sab share kar ska..ise laia ye khamoshi usay thappad se zyada dard de rahi thi.
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Sofia besabri se Vicky ke ghar aane ka wait kar rahi thi. Door bell baji.
Sofia ne jaise hi darwaza khola, saamne Vicky ko dekh kar uski ankhon mein woh chamak wapis aa gayi jo pechla khuch dino se ashar ka sath tension se gaib thi. Vicky ka lamba qadd, chaunde kandhe aur jawan chehra dekh kar Sofia aik pal ko thithak gayi woh bacha ab aik Jawan mard ban chuka tha.
Vicky: (Gale milte hue, uski pakar mein aik mardana mazbooti thi) Waise mujhe aap se milna to nahi chahiye tha... lekin ab aap saamne hoon, to khud ko rok nahi saka.
Sofia: (Usey alag karte hue, chehre par laali ke sath) Kyun? Aisi kya baat ho gayi?
Vicky: Kyunke aap airport nahi aayin.
Sofia: Arey... Ashar ne mana kar diya tha. Kehne lage office se hi pick kar lenge.
Vicky: Lagta hai aaj kal aapke Husband kuchh zyada hi kaam mein busy hain. Abhi mujhe bhi drop karke yahi bol kar chale gaye.
Sofia: Aaj kal kuchh aisa hi chal raha hai.
Chalo andar aao, ya darwaze par hi khade rehne ka irada hai?
Vicky: Agar aap andar aane dogi, tabhi to aaunga.
Yeh sun kar dono hans diye. Sofia side par ho gayi.
Vicky ne Living Area mein jata hva Sofia ke jism ke utaar chadao ko gehri nazron se scan kiya. Usay Sofia pehle se zyada pur kashish lag rahi thi.
dono living area mein aa kar baith gaye.
Sofia: Dekho zara, tum kitne baray ho gaye ho. Proper gabrū jawan.
Vicky: Phir to aapko burhi ho jana chahiye tha… lekin aap to abhi bhi waisi hi ho.
Sofia: (hahah) Tum Pehla Fresh ho kar ao. Main tumhare liye khana lagati hoon, phir araam se baatein karte hain.
Yeh bol kar woh kitchen ki taraf chali gayi.
Vicky bachpan se hi Sofia ke bohot qareeb tha. Sofia ki shaadi se pehle woh aksar uske sar par sawaar rehta, aur Sofia bhi use utni hi tawajjo deti thi.
Dinner table par Vicky ne pehla niwala lete hi kaha: Phupho… aap ke haath ke khane ki to baat hi kuchh aur hai. Kitne arsey baad kha raha hoon.
Sofia: Sab tumhari favourite dishes banayi hain.
Vicky: Aaj to waqai meri eid hai. Favourite phupho ke haath ka favourite khana iska maza hi aur hai.
Sofia (hanste hue): Hmmm… baatein banana bhi seekh gaye ho. I’m impressed.
Vicky: And I’m flattered…. Waise Ashar uncle kab tak aayenge? Unke saath hi dinner karte.
Jaise usay achanak yaad aa gaya ho.
Sofia: Haan, ab tumhein dinner ke baad hi unka khayal aaya hai?
Vicky: Mujhe tab bohot bhook lagi thi. Waise yeh yaad dilana aapka kaam hai.
Sofia: woh busy hain. Thoda late aayenge. Message par baat ho gayi thi meri.
Vicky: Mujhe pata tha aap bohot Farmabardar biwi ho.Uncle bohot lucky hain ke unhein aap jaisi biwi mili jo unke intezar mein palke bichaye rakhti hai.
Dono hans diye, magar Sofia ke dil mein aik ache uthi. Wo jaanti thi ke wo palke to bichaati hai, magar Ashar un palkon ko choomna bhool gaya hai.
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Dusri taraf Ashar gaadi mein bewajah road par ghum raha tha. Zindagi apni rawani mein chal rahi thi magar uske andar sab kuch ruka hua tha… us raat par.
Sana…Uska naam bhi sochna galat lag raha tha lekin is naam ke ilawa aur kuch bhi uske mind mein nahi tha. uski roti hui aankhein, geele honth, woh halki si siski jab usne usey kiss kiya tha, uski naram gaal par thappad ka laal nishaan. Uske jism ki paseene wali meethi smell jo usey paagal bana chuki thi.
Ashar ne kabhi bhi Sana ko is nazar se nahi dekha tha, Wo to uski bhatiji thi... masoom, chanchal. Magar wo aik lamha wo galat waqt aur wo galat jagah... jidar usna apna Control kho dia.
Ashar ka khoon khaul raha tha. Usey gussa Sana par nahi, apni us kamzori par tha jo aik pal mein us par haavi ho gayi thi.Phir Usey wo thappad yaad aaya... kitni zor se maara tha usne us naram gaal par.
Ashar (Dil mein): Wo seham gayi thi... uski ankhon mein wo khof aur ansoo... magar maine sirf thappad par bas nahi kiya. Maine apni hadd paar kar di… Usey wo touch yaad aaya jo gusse se shuru hua magar hawas par khatam hua.
Ashar ne khud ko tasalli dene ki koshish ki: Sana ne mujhe roka kyun nahi? Wo rokti nahi hai... is liye to koi bhi uska advantage utha sakta hai. Wo larka bhi usey exploit kar raha hai aur main... main...
(Hahaha woh ladka ya khud Ashar?)
Lekin andar se woh jaanta tha yeh sab uski apni kamzori thi, Sana ki masoomiyat nahi.
Mujhe usay protect karna hoga, us ne khud ko tasalli dene ki koshish ki, Main hi to usay sahi aur galat ka farq sikha sakta hoon. Magar kahin na kahin woh jaanta tha… yeh sirf aadha sach tha.
Sana uski zimmedari nahi balki shayad woh uski kamzori ban rahi thi.
Usne phone uthaya. Sana ka number screen par chamak raha tha. Uska angutha call button par hover karta raha... kuch seconds tak wo us kash-m-kash mein raha jahan aik taraf Sofia ki wafadari thi aur doosri taraf Sana ki wo nasheeli mehak.
Ashar: (Dheere se) Ye galat hai... main galat hoon. Us se door rehna hi behtar hai.
Usne phone wapis rakh diya, magar uske dimaag mein sawaalon ka ek tofaan tha. Sana is waqt kya kar rahi hogi? Kya uski ankhon mein bhi wahi uljhan hogi? Kya ab wo mujh se nafrat karti hai ya… main ne uske saath bohot galat kiya.
Woh pachtawe ki aag mein jal raha tha, jaise uski har saans us galti ko yaad dila rahi ho, uska dil bhari tha guilt se.
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Dosta ya tha aj ka update -- Apne feedback se batayein ke Ashar ka ye character arc aapko kaisa lag raha hai!