Adultery Chor (A journey of a thief )

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[tera hero]

Hunting of lone physco

Nahi mil raha hai kab likhe the agar link hai to de do bro

 

[Creepy story]

Nahi mil raha hai kab likhe the agar link hai to de do bro

Adultery - Hunting of the lone psycho( fantasy horror adventure incest )

 BeFore reading story read this.. Episode start on page 11 Ye story ab fir se shuru ho Rahi hai matlab restart.. isliye pehle wali episode delete kar di hai. 1. Story ab bachpan se start hogi. 2.is story me all tyoe sax hoga sath me khun kharaba bhi... interfaith ko chhodkar...all type x...

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Page 10 se start hai

 

[Sahil97]

Vro tum jab logic samjhe nahi to writer ko dosh dene lage..meri aadhi kahani reality world me chalti hai jaise hi story me fantasy aati hai story se readers ki ruchi khatm ho jati hai..
Ek gareeb teenager jisne khane ke liye inke unke pass kaam kiya ho gaaliyan khayi ho ussse tum kya aspect karte ho ki wo 100 logo ke ek sath mare reality world me aise log police ke naam se bhi kaalp jate hai dare sheme rehte hai.
Ab aate hai main point par pehli baat ye torture wala scane maine reality world se lita hai mai jyada explain nahi karunga..
Main point ye hai ki psychologically mentaly physically rocky ko todne ke piche aadhya ke pass reason tha jis kaam ko karne ke liye uska pura department se lekar bade bade departments ke log din raat mehnat kar rahe they wo kaam jab use pata chala rocky ke asan hai to wo lag gayi iske piche...

Aur ye ki rocky ko jisne torture kiya rocky uske liye kyo spying karne ke liye tayar ho gaya..pehli baat use maar maar kar toda gaya hai itni maar khud soncho ki 6 dino me 20 saal ke ladke ke baal safed ho gaye...gham humiliation se..dusri wajah aadhya ne use azad karne ka wada kiya..wo kitni sach hai ye to aage hi pata chalega..

Vro agar story deeply dhyan se padh rahe hote to ye sab kehne ki jarurat na padti...

Rocky ka torture ko sex scane dekh kar na pade wo koi sex scane nahi torture tha ..aisa bahut se inoncent logo ke sath ho raha hai

To bro normal so called 20 year ka ladke ki itni Mari gayi hai matlab sukha danda tak to fir bhi hajam kar le par dande par wire lapet kar gaa*nd me diya gaya hai, uske baad rape Kiya gaya pahle se teen ungli uski kati hui thi vo abhi abhi icu me se aya tha uske alawa uske andon me electric shook diya gaya ab is baat par hasi na aye to kya kare vo jinda kese bacha normal 20 saal ka ladka tha matlab itne sare points hai or aap logic ki baat kar rahe ho
Or real world me police aisa karti hai torture par bro ye aapko same lag raha hai kyoki vo koi atankvadi nahi hai or uske piche bhi bade logo ka hath hai ko pm tak ko girane ka dam rakhte hai to unke samne ek mamuli police vali itna sab karegi itni asani se jabki usko pata hai or rahi baat ke adhya ko bhi bade logo ka support hai phir bhi itni asani se ye sab or is tarah se karna matlab Baal bhi safed ho gaye or tum logic bol rah ho logic ke hisab se to vo mar jana chahiye tha or bhai bura kyo Maan rahe ho ye sach hai ke aapko story me action to hota par reaction nahi hota uska kuch or agar hota bhi hai to kuch ulat pulat hi hota hai aap story ko bina matlab kheenchte ho.... Jab ek hadh tak hi khinchav acha lagta hai thik hai build up banana bhi sahi hai par itna oot patang kar dete ho sab fir gussa karte ho

 

[Yash5678]

To bro normal so called 20 year ka ladke ki itni Mari gayi hai matlab sukha danda tak to fir bhi hajam kar le par dande par wire lapet kar gaa*nd me diya gaya hai, uske baad rape Kiya gaya pahle se teen ungli uski kati hui thi vo abhi abhi icu me se aya tha uske alawa uske andon me electric shook diya gaya ab is baat par hasi na aye to kya kare vo jinda kese bacha normal 20 saal ka ladka tha matlab itne sare points hai or aap logic ki baat kar rahe ho
Or real world me police aisa karti hai torture par bro ye aapko same lag raha hai kyoki vo koi atankvadi nahi hai or uske piche bhi bade logo ka hath hai ko pm tak ko girane ka dam rakhte hai to unke samne ek mamuli police vali itna sab karegi itni asani se jabki usko pata hai or rahi baat ke adhya ko bhi bade logo ka support hai phir bhi itni asani se ye sab or is tarah se karna matlab Baal bhi safed ho gaye or tum logic bol rah ho logic ke hisab se to vo mar jana chahiye tha or bhai bura kyo Maan rahe ho ye sach hai ke aapko story me action to hota par reaction nahi hota uska kuch or agar hota bhi hai to kuch ulat pulat hi hota hai aap story ko bina matlab kheenchte ho.... Jab ek hadh tak hi khinchav acha lagta hai thik hai build up banana bhi sahi hai par itna oot patang kar dete ho sab fir gussa karte ho

Let's see aagey kya hota hai, Raat ko update aayega usmein sab pata chalega

 

[despicable]

Negative positive reviews is your job jiske logical reply mai deta hi hon bas kuch reader us gehrayi ko nahi pahuch pate agar is episode me bahut kuch tha lekin kisi ne us par gaur nahi kiya...
Abhi bas character buildop ho rahe hai aage chalkar moko ki story jahan se ruki thi wo yahi se start hogi isi thread me..if you guys want...nahi chahte to suggetion de dena..

Meri har story dusri se different hoti hai..arya aur is story me kya match hua ab tak mujhe to kuch bhi matching nahi dikhi arya ki story ka horror bhi isse bilkul different tha..aur kahani bhi..

Salil wali story cheater wife par based thi..usme hero ameer nahi tha..

Zyan aur sam ki story bhi different thi..



AGar mai nahi samjha to samjhao guys otherwise bina samjhe mat kaho kuch bhi...

Han sab story ke heroine cheater hui hai wajah hai har story me heroine hero ke sath loyal hoti hai reality ke bilkul vipreet..lekin meri story me jaisi ladki real life me hai vaisi hi story me hai..

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Bhai apne hisab se hi likhe aur aage badhe aapne khud kaha sabka apna najriya hota hai

 

[Yash5678]

To bro normal so called 20 year ka ladke ki itni Mari gayi hai matlab sukha danda tak to fir bhi hajam kar le par dande par wire lapet kar gaa*nd me diya gaya hai, uske baad rape Kiya gaya pahle se teen ungli uski kati hui thi vo abhi abhi icu me se aya tha uske alawa uske andon me electric shook diya gaya ab is baat par hasi na aye to kya kare vo jinda kese bacha normal 20 saal ka ladka tha matlab itne sare points hai or aap logic ki baat kar rahe ho
Or real world me police aisa karti hai torture par bro ye aapko same lag raha hai kyoki vo koi atankvadi nahi hai or uske piche bhi bade logo ka hath hai ko pm tak ko girane ka dam rakhte hai to unke samne ek mamuli police vali itna sab karegi itni asani se jabki usko pata hai or rahi baat ke adhya ko bhi bade logo ka support hai phir bhi itni asani se ye sab or is tarah se karna matlab Baal bhi safed ho gaye or tum logic bol rah ho logic ke hisab se to vo mar jana chahiye tha or bhai bura kyo Maan rahe ho ye sach hai ke aapko story me action to hota par reaction nahi hota uska kuch or agar hota bhi hai to kuch ulat pulat hi hota hai aap story ko bina matlab kheenchte ho.... Jab ek hadh tak hi khinchav acha lagta hai thik hai build up banana bhi sahi hai par itna oot patang kar dete ho sab fir gussa karte ho

Bhai yeh ek fantasy novel hai, black magic and supernatural powers, telekinesis yeh sab fictional novel ke elements hai infact bollywood and hollywood mein bhi bohot scene illogical and exaggerated hote hai for example landmine par touch hone se woh mostly blast ho jate hai par even Hollywood mein bhi bohot movie mein landmine par khade hone par bhi blast nahi hota, hero waterfall,hill se girkar bhi Bach jata hai toh creepy bhai thoda scene exaggerated kar diye toh kya jata hai aise scene ka mostly aim extreme emotion dikhana hota hai aur creepy bhai ki story aajkal ke youtube shorts ads par aane wale bakwas drama novel se 100 times jyada achha hai even maine kuku fm ki bhi bohot novel padhi hai aur honestly bol raha hu unsab novel ke comparatively creepy bro ki story jyada logical hai

 

[Yash5678]

Bro update de do

 

[Creepy story]

To bro normal so called 20 year ka ladke ki itni Mari gayi hai matlab sukha danda tak to fir bhi hajam kar le

Vro tum gand se shuru karte ho wahi par khatm kar dete ho..

Dhyan se padhte to aisa kehne ki jarurat na hoti
Aadhya taro wala danda dalne wali thi ki police walo ne rok liya...andar nahi dala..

par dande par wire lapet kar gaa*nd me diya gaya hai, uske baad rape Kiya gaya

Rape hua lekin wire wala danda dala ye lines mention karo episode se don't worry edit nahi karunga episode

pahle se teen ungli uski kati hui thi vo abhi abhi icu me se aya tha uske alawa uske andon me electric shook diya gaya

Icu me nahi uski unglio ki surgery hui thi na ki dil gurde pet ki...
Vro atleast logic thik do..uski jab unglia ship par kati tab bhi wo chal phir raha tha...
Ando me electric shock tumhe logical nahi lagta matlab story samjhi hi nahi...aur tumhe vro knowledge bhi kam hai mera ek janne wala jail gaya aur uske sath yahi hua...wo shock koi direct nahi hota kam power ka hota hai.
To vro apni knowledge badhao

ab is baat par hasi na aye to kya kare vo jinda kese bacha normal 20 saal ka ladka tha matlab itne sare points hai or aap logic ki baat kar rahe ho

Vro tumhre sabhi point baseless hai jankari ki kami se bhare

Or real world me police aisa karti hai torture par bro ye aapko same lag raha hai kyoki vo koi atankvadi nahi hai

Phir wahi baat vro police apne maksad ko pura karne ke liye kisi bhi had tak jaa sakti hai..aur use chahiye thi file...

or uske piche bhi bade logo ka hath hai ko pm tak ko girane ka dam rakhte hai to unke samne ek mamuli police vali itna sab karegi itni asani se

Kon bade log rocky ke piche koi nahi hai..koi hai to batao saanvi ne use laxmi ko marne ki wajah se bachaya phir junior ke jariye dhamki dilwayi shaher chhodne ki..

jabki usko pata hai or rahi baat ke adhya ko bhi bade logo ka support hai phir bhi itni asani se

Asani kaha rocky ki galti thi usne apne bare me bataya nurse ko

ye sab or is tarah se karna matlab Baal bhi safed ho gaye

Vro jab koi sadme me ho to baal safed ho jate hai aur story ne ye nahi ki sab safed hue kuch hue wahi baat aa gayi tumhari knowledge kam hai

or tum logic bol rah ho logic ke hisab se to vo mar jana chahiye tha

Logic ye hai torture ke baad uska ilaj hota..
Aur phir ek hafte rocky hospital me bhi raha..

or bhai bura kyo Maan rahe ho ye sach hai ke aapko story me action to hota par reaction nahi hota uska kuch or agar hota bhi hai to kuch ulat pulat hi hota hai aap story ko bina matlab kheenchte ho.... Jab ek hadh tak hi khinchav acha lagta hai thik hai build up banana bhi sahi hai par itna oot patang kar dete ho sab fir gussa karte ho

Vro bura manne wali baat nahi hai bas mai kya kaho tumhare points baseless hai tumne story thik se nahi padi aur knowledge bhi hai nahi itni jabki ek writer reserch karne ke baad story likhta hai...sadme se baal safed hone wali baat google kar lo kayi case mil jayenge..

To vro ab agar criticize karna hi to point baseless mat use karna..phle acche se padhna phir smjhna aakhir me galtian nikalna

 

[thefoxy]

Next update dedo ..

 

[DEVIL MAXIMUM]

Vro tum gand se shuru karte ho wahi par khatm kar dete ho..

Dhyan se padhte to aisa kehne ki jarurat na hoti
Aadhya taro wala danda dalne wali thi ki police walo ne rok liya...andar nahi dala..

Rape hua lekin wire wala danda dala ye lines mention karo episode se don't worry edit nahi karunga episode


Icu me nahi uski unglio ki surgery hui thi na ki dil gurde pet ki...
Vro atleast logic thik do..uski jab unglia ship par kati tab bhi wo chal phir raha tha...
Ando me electric shock tumhe logical nahi lagta matlab story samjhi hi nahi...aur tumhe vro knowledge bhi kam hai mera ek janne wala jail gaya aur uske sath yahi hua...wo shock koi direct nahi hota kam power ka hota hai.
To vro apni knowledge badhao

Vro tumhre sabhi point baseless hai jankari ki kami se bhare

Phir wahi baat vro police apne maksad ko pura karne ke liye kisi bhi had tak jaa sakti hai..aur use chahiye thi file...


Kon bade log rocky ke piche koi nahi hai..koi hai to batao saanvi ne use laxmi ko marne ki wajah se bachaya phir junior ke jariye dhamki dilwayi shaher chhodne ki..

Asani kaha rocky ki galti thi usne apne bare me bataya nurse ko


Vro jab koi sadme me ho to baal safed ho jate hai aur story ne ye nahi ki sab safed hue kuch hue wahi baat aa gayi tumhari knowledge kam hai

Logic ye hai torture ke baad uska ilaj hota..
Aur phir ek hafte rocky hospital me bhi raha..

Vro bura manne wali baat nahi hai bas mai kya kaho tumhare points baseless hai tumne story thik se nahi padi aur knowledge bhi hai nahi itni jabki ek writer reserch karne ke baad story likhta hai...sadme se baal safed hone wali baat google kar lo kayi case mil jayenge..

To vro ab agar criticize karna hi to point baseless mat use karna..phle acche se padhna phir smjhna aakhir me galtian nikalna

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