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Adultery Chor (A journey of a thief )

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Episode 21



Dhammmmmm...dhammmmmm...dhaammmm





Kayi bahut bade dhamake hue....aur pura godam aag ki lapto se ghir gaya....







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Un dono ke pass super powers thi...tabhi to moko bhi nahi lad paya...meri jaan bhi moko ne bachayi...jab moko wapas gaya to wo jaa chuke they..


ek gaurd hathiyaron ke godam par jo hua wo deshouza ko batate hue bola...




Desouza: 2 hajar corore ka nuqsan hua hai mujhe aur tu zinda wapas agaya..gusse me desouza ke gaal lal pad gaye bolte hue uske mooh se thuk nikalne laga..


Guard hath jodkar maafi mangne laga..



Desouza : tum dono ko maar sakte ho Moko...kuch sonch kar desouza ne moko se pucha..



Moko ; mai kisi ko marunga nahi bas yahan le aaunga aap maar dena unhe...



Desouza : jaao phir...




Apni jagah par baith jao moko...itne me sneha aa gayi...



Desouza : kyo rok rahi ho...




Sneha : rakshin anya saanvi wo teen hai super human ye akele unka mukabla nahi kar sakta...mai unhe ek chance aur dungi ye gangwar khatm karne ke liye..



Desouza : kya matlab...



Sneha : robert tum bhanu ke sath jao madam saanvi ke ghar white flag lekar unse kaho sneha unse milna chahati hai..


Robert aur bhanu ko senha ne ek latter likh kar diya jise lekar dono nikal gaye..



Desouza : chal kya Raha hai tumhare dimag me...



Sneha : madam saanvi apko saham ko markar mujhe rakshin ki wife banana chahti hai...


Desouza : mujhe ravi ko bulana hoga..



Sneha : nahi dad...mai madam saanvi se baat karne jaungi agar wo ye jung rok deti hai to ham apna nuksan bhul jayenge..aur kabhi uske raste me nahi ayenge..aur wo apni zidd par kayam rahi to phir ham ladte hue marenge nahi to wo hamare hatho maregi...Ravi uncle ki help se behtar saanvi ke hatho maut ko gale lagana hai...



Desouza : I'm proud of you my sweetheart...ham ladte hue mar jaynge lekin saanvi ke aage nahi jhukenge...












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Rakshin bro...utho mamma bula rahi hai...utho bhi...



Awajo se mai jaga...



Samne aarvi khadi thi...



Mai : kyo jagaya..sone deti na behna....aur mai uth kar baith gaya phir apni ankhe masalne laga..



Aarvi : mamma bula rahi hai dinner ke liye..at any cost...hehehe...


Mai : time kitna hua hai...


Aarvi : 9:30..


Mai : bahut der tak so liya...mai subah ka khaya hua tha bhuk mujhe bhi lag rahi thi...


Aarvi : ab jaldi utho mamma ne kaha hai tumhe lekar hi aaun...


Mai : tu jaa mujhe sona hai..


Aarvi : it's your little sister's order hurry up come for dinner..



Mai : abhi ham itne close bhi nahi hue jo order do tum mujhe...



Meri baat sunkar uske muskurate face par naapasandidgi aa gayi...


Aarvi: phir yahan kya kar rahe ho...mere ghar me...



Mai : bas kuch din then you'll never see me again...kehta hua mai utha aur room se nikla...


towel me hi sabke pass se hota hua mai main door se nikal bahar agaya...mamma ne hath se ishara kiya ane ka jis par maine bhi hatho se kapdo ka ishara kiya..


Ped par mere kapde rakhe they...jinhe maine pehna...phir towel me se apna saman nikala jo usme hi bandha tha...
Jeb me rakh mai chal diya...



Ghr se nikal Kayi hour paidal chalne ke baad mujhe ek dhaba dikha jahan maine 100 rupey ka khana khaya...phir utni hi der chalkar ghar aya...





Yahan aane ke liye auto nahi milte they...kehte they is area me koi ata jata nahi.




Mai ghar aya to samne mamma aur granny baithi thi sofe par...dono ki ankhe band thi...



Bina awaj kiye mai sofe par akar baith gaya...


Agaye tum...itne me meri ahat se granny ki ankhe khul gayi...



Mai : yup bas ghumne gaya tha...are yad aya apka towel mai bahar hi chhod aya tha....


Mai utha ki mamma mere aage khadi ho gayi....




Saanvi : kuch hua hai rocky...kisi ne kuch kaha hai tumhe..


Mai : nahi to koi kuch kyo kahega.. wait aya...



Bina mamma ko dekhe mai bahar aya ped par se towel li phir andar akar granny ke room me rakh di...



Mai : granny chalo aao apko apke room me chhod ata hon...raat ke 2 baj rahe hai...room se nikal mai phir hall me dono ke pass akar bola...




Granny : kyo aisa kar raha hai tu...kuch hua hai mere bache to bata...


Mai ; mai aisa hi hon kuch bhi nahi hua chalo aap apne room me..

Kehte hue maine granny ko utha liya..


Mai : aaah granny kitni bhari ho..


Granny : beta utar de mai chal lungi..

Mai : mazak kar raha hon aap to meri jaan ho zindagi bhar aise hi apko seene se lagaye rahunga...


Room me akar maine granny ko litaya..


Granny : good night sweetheart...



Good night bolkar mai phir hall me aya...



Saanvi : tumhara room rakshin ke barabar me hai..maine sab intejam kar diya hai tumhare use ki har chiz tumhe mil jayegi..


Maine unki ungli ka picha kiya...bilkul last me tha pehle aarvi phir anya phir rakshin aakhir me mai..




Mamma ko dikhane ke liye mai us taraf chal diya....




Aarvi ke room se gujarne laga mai ki itne me rakshin ke room se anya didi nikli..

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Wo ek sexy nighty me thi jisme se aadha sharir dikh raha tha baal bikhre hue....jism par mujhe katne ke nishan dikhe jo dekh mai ruk gaya...




Mai bolna chahta tha puchna chahta tha lekin mai aage ka sonchkar chup ho gaya...


Wo mujhe aise andekha karke nikal gayi jaise janti hi na ho...



Mai ghuma aur use jata dekhne laga lekin usne ghum kar bhi nahi dekha mujhe...


Maine hall me najar mari wahan ab mamma nahi thi...




Mai wapas hall me aya aur ac ke niche jameen par let gaya....



Nind nahi aa rahi thi jo dekh maine 4 gole kha liye...1 gola kafi hota hai Nashe ke liye 4 wo khate hai jo apni zindagi se thak gaye ho...








Khate hi mujhe nind aa gayi...








Aaaahhh...na jane kis pahar mai jaga...

Ouhh..ouhhh..main ghar se bahar jana chahata tha ki achanak se meri halat down ho gayi aur mai wahi farsh par vomitting karne laga....



Ouhh...ouhhhh...ouhhh...sara khana bahar agaya tha mooh se...


Aisa lag raha tha jaise meri jaan jaa rahi ho....ankhe meri upar ko chadh gayi....



Help ke liye maine sabke room ko dekha lekin kisi ko meri vommiting ki awaj sunayi nahi di....





Bahut sari vomiting se pura farsh ganda ho gaya tha....





20 minute tak mai jhuka baitha raha...


Kuch sambhla tab mai utha...




Kitchen me akar mai pocha dekhne laga...ek jagah mujhe kuch kapde dikhe...

MAi sonch raha tha apni shirt se saaf karu ki poche se...

JYada na sonchte hue maine utha liye..

Phir 1 ghante tak pani kapde se mai farsh saaf karta raha isi me din nikal aya...halka halka...



Thak kar mai wahi let gaya...nashe se itne chakkar aa rahe they ki lette hi aankh lag gayi....















Subah sab jab tayar hokar breakfast ke liye aye tab unhe rocky mila...vaise hi farsh par leta hua...



Saanvi gaur se use dekhne lagi...shalini thi nahi....




Ye itna bich saaf kyo hai...junior ne servants se pucha...


Servants: hame nahi pata..abhi safayi lagayenge breakfast ke baad...han hamare pocho par vomiting lagi thi...jo fek diye...




Junior pass akar rocky ko uthane wala hota hai ki use saanvi ki awaj aati hai..


Saanvi : ruk jao...


Junior : mai sofe par...saanvi hath se ishara kar deti hai...jis par junior piche ho jata hai...






Saanvi: now you're happy to seeing him in such condition...


Anya : utha kar bahar fikwa do..bloody poor fellow ..




Saanvi : ek aur shabd kaha to mujhse...samne dekh saanvi chup ho gayi....shalini behad gusse me khadi anya ko ghurr rahi thi...



Anya : ohh to ab mujhe sukun se khane bhi nahi dogi...



Shalini: hinkle sabhi partners ki meeting bulao ...shalini ke empire ko ab naya owner milne wala hai...saanvi se mai abhi sari jimmedariya chhinti hon...anya is ghar shalini empire ki har property bases par ban ki jati hai...use uske room se bahar nikalne ki permission nahi...abhi anya ko uske room me kaid kar do...suna nahi tumne...


Shalini ki garaj par hinkle aage badha..


Hinkle : ana..I'm sorry...


Hath pakad kar hinkle ana ko khane par se utha deta hai...


Are you mad granny ye kya kar rahi ho...kal ke aye lofer ke liye meri didi ko kaid karogi aap...itne me aarvi breakfast chair se uth garajte hue boli...


Shalini : aarvi ab se college even is ghar se bahar nahi jayegi...



Aarvi : you're totally mad..aapko pata hai isne kya kaha..after sometime you'll never see me again..ye yahan chori karne aya hai...raat hi ham sab discuss kar rahe they kaise mamma ka pass isne chori kiya...aur kaise hamari family me aag laga kar chain se so raha hai...



Shalini : itni nafrat tumhhare andar apne bhai ke liye...shalini gham se ndhal hokar gir gayi..



Granny.... junior se hath chhuda kar anya shalini ki taraf bhagi....




Granny aap thik hai...


Shalini : ssshh hath mat lagana mujhe...

Itne me saanvi aayi aur usne shalini ko utha kar andar bed par lita diya...



Saanvi : doctors ko bulao..








Arshu ne jaldi se doctor ko call laga di...




Kuch der baad doctor ghar par they...






Saanvi farsh par ek jagah tek laga kar baith gayi...



Doctor ilaj karke chale gaye lekin saanvi nahi uthi...



Junior: doctor ne kaha hai unhe khush rakhne ki kosish kare...



Mamma..aap kyo udas ho gayi hai...pass akar aarvi saanvi se chipak kar baithte hue boli...


Im sorry...anya bhi ek side par baithte hue sar saanvi ke kandho par rakh deti hai..



Saanvi koi jawab nahi deti ..



Anya: granny bas possessive ho rahi hai...let me see apki jagah kon leta hai .I'll fuck that bastard...






Aarvi : what happened mamma kya sonch rahi..



Saanvi : about my Upbringing...aaj tum dono ne jitna hurt mujhe kiya usse kahi jyada meri mom ko..




Aarvi : granny over react kar rahi thi...


Saanvi : stay away...I said stay away...
Saanvi ki gusse bhari awaj par aarvi saham kar alag ho gyi...




Aarvi : I'm sorry...aarvi rone lagi...



ANya : ye to hai hi dhakkan mamma janti hi nahi kab kya bolna hai...


Aarvi : please mamma maaf kar do...

Darte hue aarvi pass aayi aur saanvi ke kandho par phir sar rakh kar baith gayi...


Saanvi : apne bhai ko uthao use shower do uske new clothes uske room me hai..phir use breakfast ke liye lao..ye jimmedari tum dono ki hai...


Anya : mujhse nahi hoga...


Kehti hui ana uthi aur jane lagi...



Saanvi : phir tumhara faisla mom karengi...ohh wo to kar gayi hai...hinkle ise iske room me lock kar do...



Pass mat ana junior...gusse me ana ne energy hatho se nikali aur wo junior ko dekhne lagi...



Rakshin...saanvi ne awaj di ..aur agle hi pal rakshin ne ana ke dono hatho ko pakad liya...wo dhuye ki shakal me aya jab jahir hua tab ana ke dono hath bandhe hue they...



Saanvi : mere pass lao ise...



Rakshin khachedte hue ana ko saanvi ke samne lakar khada ho gaya...




Saanvi : tumne mujhe nirash kiya hai...ayinda kisi family member par apni power use mat karna...warna consequences honge...




Anya : chhoro mujhe ...kal ka aya ye aapke liye itna important ho gaya..aur apni beti aapko najar nahi aa rahi...


Saanvi : bakwas band karo apni..maine kya nahi kiya tumhare liye...mujhe majboor mat karo wo decesion lene ke liye jo mai lena nahi chahti...mom ke samne fake hi sahi lekin rocky se bolna...mom ko ahsas na ho tum sab uski dushman ban gayi ho...



Ana ne ankho se hami bhari...phir kuch kahe bina apne room ki taraf chal di..







Bro 11 baj rahe hai utho bhi...itne me aarvi akar rocky ko uthane lagi...

















Rocky hey bro...wake up..

Abe sone de na...maine nind me hi kaha...


Aarvi: mai pani daal dungi..last time keh rahi hon...


Aur mai uth kar baith gaya...



Baithe baithe ankhe masalte hue mai sense me aane ki kosish karne laga..



Mai : ooh...11 baj gaye...



Mai khada hua...aur main door se jane laga...


Rocky...kaha Jaa rahe ho....itne me mamma ne piche se awaj di ..



Mai : jharne me mooh dhone phir ghum ke aaunga bahar.




Saanvi : yahan aao...


Mai : kya musibat hai sone nahi deti ab faltu me bula rahi hai...


Maine dhime se kaha..




Chalta hua mai pass aya..


Saanvi : jab maine tumhara room ready Kara diya phir yahan kyo soye..




Aarvi : mamma class lo bro ki ..room jab ready hai phir wahan sone me koi problem hai...


Mai : han mujhe nahi sona us room me...mujhe third male par jo rooms hai unme se koi room de do...


Sab mera mooh hairat se dekhne lage...



Rakshin : wahan kyo sona hai bade bhai... sabke sath kyo nahi..



Aarvi : mamma everything is clear now lalala.



Saanvi : okay servants rocky ke liye third floor par sabse behatr jo room hai wo ready karo..aur tum mere sath aao mamma mera hath pakadte hue boli...


Saanvi : aarvi rocky ke room se uske liye sabse acchi dress lekar aao...jo tailor raat laya un clothes me se..


Chalte hue ham mamma ke room me aye.....



Saanvi: chalo Kapde utaro..mai tumhe nehlaungi..


Mai : bahar fawware par mooh dho leta hon na...


Saanvi : utaro ...sidhe wo mere hath utha kar meri shirt ke button kholne lagi...



Shirt utar jane ke baad unhone fek di...



Wo paint utarne lagi ki maine rok diya..


Mai : maine andar kuch nahi pehna wo underwear granny ke room me hai..apne se naha lunga...


Kehta hua mai washroom me ghus gaya...








Shower ke niche khada hokar mai nahane laga...







20 minute baad mamma ne awaj di...


Saanvi : rocky naha liye...


Mai : haan naha liya pant sukha raha hon sukh jane par pahan kar ajaunga..



Lo pahan kar bahar aao...kuch der baad door khula aur mamma ka hath andar aya...


Mamma hatho me wahi gown pehne hue thi jo ana ne mujhe pehnne ke liye diya tha...


Maine le liya phir bandh kar bahar aya...





Andar room me 4 girl servent aur aarvi mamma khadi thi...


Mai : tum sab kya kar rahi ho jao..


Saanvi : ye tumhe tayar karengi aur aarvi instructions degi .


Kehte hue mamma washroom me ghus gayi...



Aarvi : ajao bro tumhe hero bana du...







Phir wo mere makeup karne lagi....koi baal sanwar rahi thi koi hath ke nakhun kaat Rahi thi koi pair ke...koi face par cream laga rahi thi..






Chalo ab kapde pahan lo..itne me mamma washroom se towel bandhe nikalte hue boli...


Aarvi : mamma bro ke neils laga du aapki...


Saanvi : as you wish sweetheart...



Mai : mai nahi kar baunga ye..door hato..


Aarvi : maan jao bro...warna mai baat nahi karungi...bas ek hath me...


Thak kar maine use apna hath de diya..


Saanvi: bahar aao phir ham lunch karenge...wo tayar hokar chali bhi gayi lekin mai nahi hua tha...



Ready hokar mai bahar aya..



Saanvi : chalo aao...


Mai nahi khana chahta tha...lekin mai fas gaya tha..


Mai : ma.. mujhe bhuk nahi hai...


Saanvi : maine kaha na aao...


Rakshin : aa bhi jao bade bhai subah se bhuka hon ..

Unke force karne par mai baith gaya...




Rakshin : ab lag rahe ho son of lady saanvi...but ye nails..


Aarvi : maine ki bhai kaisi lag rahi...


Rakshin : you noughty I'll punish you..





Aaaaa...rakshin bhai fuck me hard faar do meri chut punish me..oh yes punish me hard...


Khacchh.


Mere hath me sishe ka glass Tut Gaya..aur mai hosh me aya..



Saanvi : jaldi se first aid laao...beta ye kya kiya tumne..



Dono ki baton se mujhe behad gandi feeling aa rahi don't know kyo...meri jealousy thi ki overthinking jo bhi tha dimagi taur par mujhe deep inside pain me daal diya tha...



Saanvi : kyo rocky...jaldi se khun roko..


Wo kabhi mujhse sawal karti kabhi servants ko instructions deti..jo mere hath me patti bandh rahi thi...



Mai ab bas gola kha kar sona chahta tha...in soncho se picha chudane ke liye...



Patti bandh jane par mamma mujhe apne hatho se khilane lagi...



Saanvi : kis chiz ne tumhe pareshan kiya hai...mujhe batao....



Mai : kuch nahi bas kaskar glass pakar liya tha...





Apni 100 percent bhuk ka 10 percent kha kar mai uth gaya...


Mai : bas mamma ab aur nahi...ye pani piyunga bas...mai glass lete hue bola...


Phir sofe par akar baith gaya...apne cort ki jeb me se maine andar hi andar gola nikala aur mooh me daal liya...

Pehle ek phir do...


Raat 4 ne meri halat kharab kar di thi...




Saanvi : rocky come...

Mamma ne mujhe awaj di aur mai ladkhadate hue chalne laga...





Mujhe lekar wo granny ke room me layi...


Saanvi : kaisa lag raha hai mom..wo piche se mere gale me bahein dalkar boli....



Granny : so beautiful..my sweet baby...


Mamma wait...itne me rakshin aya aur wo photos click karne laga..



Ummm..mamma galo par chumte hue poss dene lagi...


Kayi sari photo lekar wo hata...


Mai granny ke pass akar let gaya...





Mai : khana khaya apne...


Granny: han meri jaan...lekin tu mujhe bahut hurt karta hai...ye tera ghar hai jahan chahe so lekin niche aise nahi...


Maine hami bhari...mujhe ab Nasha ho raha tha..


Granny ke pet par hath rakh kar maine ankhe band kar li...















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Sham 5 baje....anya saanvi arshu hinkle garden me lagi chair par baithe the...




Kuch der baad kayi cars Gate se enter hui....

Raste me wo ruki..maine door ki taraf nahi gayi...


Itne me bahut sare guards hathiyar liye nikle...






Aakhir me ek guard ne door khola aur sneha bahar nikli....



Baby face liye chahere par tej khubsurat itni koi dekhe to deewana ho jaye....





Chalte hue wo sabke pass aayi...



Anya : hi my ex girl friend..mai teri death anniversary par every year bouquet leke jati but tu sali ek dam alive hai this is not fair mamma..



Sneha : tum aaj bhi nahi badli...


Saanvi : kyo milna chahti thi tum...


Sneha : aapne hamara 2 hajar crore ka nuksan kiya hai...mujhe chahiye tha apke har base par return attack karke revenge leti lekin mai ye jung badhana nahi chahati...dad se galti hui ana ko Buried
karke aapne bhi jung shuru ki meri factory tabah karke..agar aapko ye karke sukun mil gaya hai to ye band kare...ham aap par koi attack nahi karenge aap hamse door rahegi ..



Saanvi : apne baap se kaho mere pairo par nak ragde to mai use ana ki jaan lene ke liye maaf kar dungi aur...tumhe mere rakshin ki wife banna hoga....


Sneha: aisa to kabhi nahi hone wala..at any cost...


Saanvi : phir coffin tayar kar lo apne baap ke liye...


Sneha : madam saanvi you'll regret...


Anya : kya ho agar mai tumhare sabhi aadmio ko markar tumhe majboor karu naak ragarne par..



Sneha : madam saanvi apne bhi mujhe 4 saal mere dad se dur rakha kya kiya mere sath mai nahi janti..ye aap thi jisne mere dad ko majboor kiya aisa kadam uthane ke liye..agar aap jung chahati hai to aapko milegi..ab coffin aap apne liye kharide..and you maine kabhi dil se enmity nahi nibhayi tumse... lekin ab tum dekhogi sneha ki dushmani...





Anya : dafa ho jao isse pehle ham tumhe jane bhi na de.....


Sneha kuch nahi kehti khamoshi se jane ke liye apne kadam mod leti hai...
















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Aaahh....jab meri aankh khuli tab bhuk se mere pet me chuhe kud rahe they...





Mujhe aaj hi pass lekar wo file leni thi is nark me mai ek aur din raha to mera marna taye tha...





Sonchta hua mai room se nikla granny shayad uth gayi thi...



Bahar mujhe granny dikhi jinhe aarvi khana khila Rahi thi....






Chalte hue meri najar window par padi...aur mere kadam thaher gaye..mere dil ki dhakan badh gayi..jisme me kaato to khun nahi...



Aaditi....mai chikha...wo garden se nikal car me baith rahi thi...


Kuch pal ye sochne me lag gaye jo mai dekh raha hon ye sach hai....



Aditi....aur mai bhaga.....


Wo car me baith kar jaa rahi thi..



Aaditi...ruk jao...aditi...

Ghar se nikal mai uski car ke piche bhagne laga..



Kuch hi palo me uski car gate se nikal gayi...




Uske sath hi mai...use aage jata dekh maine speed badha di...




Bhagte hue mai Uski cars ke kafile ki last car tak agaya..



Dhammm...dhammm...maine us par ghuse mare....




Itne me us car ne speed badha li...


Mai is area me ghum chuka tha khana khane ke liye jata tha tab raste dekh chuka tha...


Ek gali aayi shortcut aage highway par car milti mujhe aaditi ki jo sonch mai shortcut ki gali me mud gaya...


Bhagte hue meri hanfi chal gayi...lekin mai ruk nahi sakta tha....


BHagte hue mai gali se nikla aur highway par aya...1 pal thaher kar maine piche dekha phir aage...aur mujhe aditi ki car aage jate dikhi..maine der kar di thi highway par ane me...



Cars dekh mai phir bhagne laga...




Mere pass se ek bus gujri jo bahut speed se jaa rahi thi...agle hi pal maine jump mari aur bus ke piche lagi siri pakar li...aur latak gaya...







Latke latke hanfte hue mai siri par chadhne laga....




Dhammmmmm.....



Jab bus akhiri car ke pass se gujri to mai aakhiri car par kud gaya..



Khacchhhhhh....

Sisha todte hue mai andar ghusa aur ek aadmi par gira..



Ghsssssss...ki awaz se break lage aur car ruk gayi...




Tu kon hai bhosdike...kyo kuda...itne me driving seat par baithe aadmi ne kaha..jis par mai gira tha us aadmi ke upar sisha gira tha jo apne aap ko sambhal raha tha...



Mai : larki tumhari car me aage wo meri aaditi hai.. sambhal kar maine pair nikale ...



Sale kon ladki...usi driver ne kaha..


Sale ne aankh me kanch daal diya dalo ise andar...dusre ne kaha..


Dusre guard nikle jabarjasti mujhe utha kar car me le aye...



Mai : chodo mujhe us car ko rukwao...




Maro ise...un gundo ne kaha aur laat ghuso se wo mujhe marne lage....


Unke hath hathode jaise padh rahe they mere jism par..


Maine unki bahut vinti ki lekin unhone nahi chhoda Pitte pitte na jane kab mai behosh ho gaya...






Ye to behosh ho gaya sala..ek gunde ne kaha..



Maar ke fek de...




Ruk madam ki secretary bhanu se puch kya karna hai ..ek dusre gunde ne kaha..

Jis par ek gunde ne call laga di...



Hello bhanu madam...


Kaha mar gaye tum ...car piche kyo nahi aa rahi hamare sath..udhar se bhanu ne kaha ..


Ek locha ho gaya hai madam ek sanki bus se hamare upar kud gaya aur madam ki car ko dekh aditi se milna hai keh raha tha..


Kon hai..bhanu ne pucha..


Behosh ho gaya hai kya karna hai iska..



Le aao desouza sir dekh lenge...



Bhanu ki baat sunkar gundo ne apni car aage badha di.....






Ek ghante baad wo desouza ke samne they...car se rocky ko nikal gunde khachedte hue desouza ke pass late hai park me jahan wo baitha siggar pi raha tha...



Pani maro is par..desouza ne kaha..



Ghdddddddddd...badlo ki ghadghadahat se tej hawa chalne lagi...bijli ki roshni padti aur pura park roshni se jagmaga uthta....


Guard pani lene gaya ki itne me aasman se ek boond giri rocky ke face par....


BAarish hone wali hai...desouza sir ke liye umbrella lekar aao..


Guard jaldi se bhaga...



Barish dhire dhire tej hone lagi...





Aaaaahhh.....pani se mai jaga....





Mai : bhai kyo mar rahe ho...maine kya bigada tumhara ...mujhe bas meri aditi se milne do...


Tu rocky hai na lavanya ka bhai...itne me ek black cort pehne old man ne kaha jiske sar par ek guard umbrella lagaye use barish se bacha raha tha..us aadmi ki beard white thi lekin uska sharir budha nahi hua tha...



Mai : ji sahab...meri aditi wo in logo ke sath jaa rahi thi...



Desouza : kab se janta hai aditi ko...aur kya janta hai uske bare me...phir Mila dunga tujhe usse..



Mai : 3 months hone wale hai...mai sardi se kaanp raha tha aur wo aayi meri life me..aur maine use sab bata diya..



Desouza : tune use chhua bhi tha..


Mai: wo ganga jamuna se bhi jyada pavitra hai ...wo devi hai...meri devi...



Desouza : janta hai mai kon hon... sneha ka baap...jise tu aditi keh raha hai... meri dushman ne uski yaddast cheen kar use mujhse door kar diya pure 4 saal ke liye...aur tu chahata hai mai tujhe usse Milne doon..uske atit ko phir uske samne lakar... nahi....aisa nahi hoga.....maar do ise...aur dafna do...



Dhammmmm....dhammmmm..dhammmmmmmm...
Sabhi 14 gunde laat ghuso se mujhe marne lage..



Mai : chhod do mujhe mujhe... maine kya bigada tumhara ..aaaaahhhh....maaaaa....... maaaaaa...


Hato re ..itne me ek gunda aya jiske hath me rod thi...jo dekh sare gunde hat gaye...




Khnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn......


Aahhhhh...

Rod rocky ke sar par padi itni tej ki uske sar se khun nikalne laga aur wo dard me chikh bhi nahi paya aur dhadam se jameen par jaa gira..


Kaiko time khoti karne ka..chalo gadda khod ke dafan karo ise...rod se marne wale gunde ne kaha...








Rocky ko vaise hi adhmara chhod wo sab gunde gadda khodne chale gaye...








Rocky ke upar baarish ki boonde gir rahi thi jisme uska khun mitti me beh raha tha...


Itna mara tha use ki baarish bhi use sense me nahi laa payi...









Desouza ghar ke andar aya to use sneha sofe par baithi mili...



Desouza : kya hua sweetheart tumhara chahera kyo utra hua hai...tum daro mat...mai saanvi...


Sneha: uski wajah se nahi dad...pata nahi kyo aaj dil udas hai...meri aankhe beh rahi hai aur pata bhi nahi kyo..sneha desouza ki baat katte hue boli...



Desouza : jao room me jakar aram karo bahar bahut tej aandhi toofan aya hua hai...barish ho rahi hai...



Sneha ne garden hilayi aur uthkar room ki taraf chal di...













Le aao re use aur daal do isme...gadda khud jane par ek bade guard ne kaha...jis par do guard aage piche chalne lage.....










Rocky ko utha kar dono guard sabke pass laye....




Dhammm...ek aur jagah un sab ne use fek diya...



Ae pani nikalo...sala bahar ajayega...


Sidha shoot kar dete hai na bahar ane ki nobat hi nahi aani..ek dusre guard ne kaha....


Jaa mar de ise..
Bade guard ki baat sun dusra gunda gun nikalta hua rocky ke pass jane laga..








Itne me ek saya rocky ke piche akar khada ho gaya....uski shadow se rocky dhak gaya...us saye ki lambai pedo se bhi jyada thi...




usne apna lamba hath badhaya...aur rocky ko pakad kar utha diya...






Kya mayela ye sala to itni maar ke baad bhi khada ho gaya.....





DHadddd....

Bijli kadki aur isi ke sath wo saya bejaan rocky ke jism ke ghus gaya....


Aur rocky ki aankhe khul gayi...



Gunde ne pass akar gun rocky ke sar par rakh di.......




Rocky ka hath chala aur us gunde ke seene par laga....






Aaaaaaaahhhhh....aaaaaahhhhhh...aaaaaahhhhhh....bhago...bhago...


Samne ka najara dekh Sab taraf gundo ki chikhe gunj uthi..



Jo rocky ko marne aya tha jaise hi rocky ne uske seene me hath dala vaise hi bahut speed se us gunde ka sharir jalkar girne laga...aur jab rocky ne hath nikala tab uske hatho me gunde ka skeleton tha....jise na chikhne ka moka mila na kuch kehna ka....jiska sharir rakh ban chuka tha....apne sathi ki halat dekh sab gunde saham kar chikhte hue bhagne lage...





Bhagte hue gundo ne piche dekha...rocky ko piche na dekh gundo ki jaan me jaan aayi...bhagne ke liye wo jaise hi mude ki rocky unke samne tha...


Dhammm..dhammm..do gundo ko rocky ne pakda aur.. jameen se de mara...wo dono gunde jameen me ghus gaye...



Dhaye dhaye...


Gundo ne kalpte hue rocky par firing ki rocky kud gaya...aur bullets uske pass se nikal gayi....




Aaaa aahhh...aaaahhhhh...



Rocky ne do gundo ke seeno me hath dala aur jab nikala tab uske hatho me gundo ke organ they....



Aaaaa...aaaaaa

Pass khada gunda sab dekh behosh ho gaya.




Dhammm..rocky ne laat maari aur wo jameen me dhas gaya.
Kayi gunde aage bhag rahe they ye dekh rocky ne gusse me pass laga ped pakda aur jad se ukhad kar unke mara..
Aaaahhhhhh...aaahhhh...
Aur phir bar bar wo ped utha kar unhe marne laga..




Kuch hi samay me sabhi gundo ka naamo nishan mit chuka tha....








Chalte hue usne desouza ke shandar mahal par najar daali...











Dhammmmmmmmmmmmmm...



Rocky ne apna pair jameeen par mara...aur jameen fatne lagi....


Desouza ki building me darar aa gayi...



Building ke andar baithe aur lete sab log kaalp gaye...


Unhe aisa laga jaise bhookanp aa gaya ho..sab dare sehme apne apne kamro se nikle...




Dhanmmmmmmmmm....




Rocky ke dekhte hi main door ka lohe ka darwaja aise tut kar alag hua jaise koi ret ka door ho...


Door udta hua andar deewar se jaa laga.....





Dhammmmmm.....


Wo saya rocky ke jism se nikla aur rocky phir senseless hokar gir gaya...













Kya hua hai bahar..room se aakar sneha ne pucha...


Desouza shayad bhookamp...



Dhammmm...itne me chhat ka ek roda niche gira...



Ye darar dad...saham ungli andar ki chhat deewar me aayi darar ki taraf karta hua bola....




Is samay ki live khabre ...andheri ,juhu chaupati me tej baarish ho rahi hai....

Desouza ne bhookamp ki news janne ke liye tv on kiya ..lekin bhookamp se related koi news nahi thi...


Sab sneha ke piche bhage jo ghar se bahar bhag rahi thi....








Sneha bahar aayi to use ghar ke bahar koi pada dikha....wahi use apne door ke pass ek gadda jisse uske ghar me ghusne wali stairs tuti padi thi..



Kon hai wo...sneha ne pucha..


Desouza : chalkar dekhte hai....



Desouza sneha saham aur desouza ki wife nokar sab chalte hue gadde se bachte hue aage aaye...itne me quater me so rahe guards bhi nikal aaye....




Dhadddd...

Bijli kadki aur uski roshni me sneha ki najar uske darwaze par pade Rocky par gayi....



Desouza : ye....ise to mar jana chahiye tha...guards...

Saham : ye to lavanya ka bhai hai...



Sneha : rocky...ye lavanya ka sautela aur anya ka saga bhai hai...



Desouza ; pata karo guards kaha hai...desouza dusre guards ko order dete hue bola...



Desouza : ye madam saanvi ka beta....



Saham : didi piche dekho...


Saham ke kehne par sabne piche dekha....aur darar unhe ghar ke bahar dikhi.....





SNeha kabhi rocky ko dekhti kabhi samne apne ghar ki building ko jisme darar padh gayi...aur ek gadda jo 40 kadam Tak ban gaya tha...aur wo shuru ho raha tha wahan se jahan rocky pada tha....



Desouza : ye nahi ho sakta saanvi ka beta to rakshin hai...




Sneha ne naa me sar hila diya...



Desouza : kya chhupaya tumne hamse....









Sir ye mila hai bas aur dusre guard nahi...ye buri tarah se kalp raha hai badi mushkil se hosh me aya hai..


Desouza : kaha gaye sare guard..


Mar gaye...




Desouza : what....bewakoof kisne mara unhe...ye yahan kaise aya...

Guard ne desouza ki ungli ka picha kiya....





Aaaaaaaaaaaa...aaaaaaaaaaaa....aaaaaaaaaa...yahi...isi ne...isi ne...


Dar se guard buri tarah chikhne laga...



Desouza: isne kya ...


Guard : ye...ye rakchhas hai...mai yahan...kaam nahi karunga..


Chikhta hua gaurd ghar se bahar ki taraf bhagane laga....



Saham : isne mara ye sab isne kiya..


Desouza : nahi earthquake se hua hoga...mai ise adhmara dekh kar aya tha...




Sneha: ye zinda hai sanse chal rahi hai...guards gadi nikalo...aur ise uthao....





2 guards jaldi se aaye aye...dusre garage ki taraf bhage...







Gadi me bitha kar senha rocky ko le gayi...


Desouza ne puchna chaha lekin sneha ne koi jawab nahi diya...





Hospital me lakar ward boy doctors ke sath rocky ko opretion theatre me le gaye....





Sneha saham desouza teeno bench par baith kar doctor ka wait karne lage...









3 hour baad doctor's rocky ke ward se bahar nikle....




Sneha : doctor use kya hua hai...aisi halat uski kaise hui...kya wo thik hai..ek hi sans me sneha ne kayi sawal kar liye...



Doctor : mareej ki condition serious hai..use bahut buri tarah se mara gaya hai uska sar fat gaya hai maybe uski memory loss bhi ho chuki ho...agar bach gaya..





Sneha : aahh..kya wo bach jayega..


Doctor: ham kosish kar rahe hai..


Saham : doctor kya abhi baarish me earthquake bhi aya tha...


Doctor: nahi to...aur doctor aage badh gaya...


Wahi desouza saham sneha teeno hi rocky ke ward ki taraf dekhne lage....






Desouza : chalo chalte hai...


Saham : mai rukunga ye lavanya ka bhai hai..


Desouza : idiot lavayan ko call karke yahan bula le aur tu chal...tujhe pata nahi ye saanvi ka beta hai...


Sneha : saham lavanya ko call karke bata do ham din me Milne ayenge...




Sneha ki baat sun saham uth jata hai aur piche chalte hue Lavanya ko call laga deta hai...







Teeno hospital bill dekar hospital se bahar aate hai phir car se ghar ke liye chal dete hai...



Sneha : aapne use kyo marwana chaha ye to inoncent tha..



Desouza : tumhe kaise pata ye saanvi ka beta hai..tumne pehle mujhe kyo nahi bataya is bare me..



Dono ne ek sath sawal kiya ek dusre se jo sahi samay ka wait kar rahe they...





Desouza : pehle tum...


Sneha apne mazhi me kho gayi....






Ab se tum anya se door rahogi sneha..


Sneha : kuch hua hai dad..



Desouza ; maine saanvi se apni partnership Tor li hai aur ab ham buisness competitor ban gaye hai...mujhe nuksan pahuchane ke liye wo tumhe hurt karne se nahi chukegi..aisa hua to mai bhi yahi karunga..


Apne dad ki baat sun sneha apne room me akar call karti hai...





Sneha : hey mere dad ne kaha hai tumse door rehne ke liye..tumhari mom ne bhi aisa kuch kaha hai..


Anya : nahi but....aur anya batane lagi..





Ana mai tumse bhi chhoti thi jab maine ye jimmedari sambhali thi ab ye mai tumhe deti hon apni partner bana kar ab shalini empire ke 3 nahi chaar partner hoge... mujhe nirash mat karna otherwise you'll face deadly consequences...



Sneha : uff atleast my dad doesn't said shit like this...


Anya : listen it's just half...


pyaar se nahi mane to unhe jine ka koi adhikar nahi...saanvi ki enmity se har koi kalpe apne aims ke bich kabhi bhi friend love ko nahi Lana unhe marna pade to maar dena...tumhare apne sirf tumhara bhai tumhari sister tumhari granny aur mai hon...


Anya : got it mamma...






Anya : but mai tumse kabhi dushmani nahi karungi coz you are my bestie..bas mere raste me mat ana...









Sneha ko aye hue London se month ho gaya tha wo apne dad ke sath rehkar uska buisness study karne ke sath help bhi kar rahi thi...sneha ki smartness se desouza kuch hi samay me itna prabhavit hua ki usne apne buisness ki sari kaman sneha ke hatho me de di..

Sneha jo faisla karti wo desouza ke buisness ko char chand laga raha tha...






Udhar anya saanvi ke sath buisness learn kar rahi thi...wo janti thi uski mamma ka buisness kya hai but usne kabhi pratical nahi kiya tha....




Mariana par sawar hokar samunder ke raste se anya dubai peninsula me ayi jahan usse Milne dubai ka ek shaek aya tha
Hi shaek sahab... mai sonch rahi hon gold ke sath oil buy karne ke liye phir use india me bechu..anya ne english me kaha..


Bhut accha sonchti tum baby...ham tumhare liye 70 per beller degi ..sabse kam..isse bhi kam ho jaye tum hame ik kissi de do...


Anya muskura di...


Ummmm...pass akar usne shaikh ko chum liya...




Deal puri karne ke baad anya wapas india aa gayi....



Anya : dekho junior koi buyer oil ke liye is week se oil ana shuru ho jayega..





Junior ne hami bhari...aur apne contact ka use karne laga...





Kuch dino baad anya ghar aayi...



Sab dinnig par baithe khana kha rahe they...

Saanvi : gayi thi qatar kya hua wahan deal ka..


Anya ; mai qatar nahi dubai se aa rahi hon..maine dubai ke shaek se deal final kar li hai...wo hame gold ke sath oil bhi denge saste damo me...



Saanvi : stop eating... What I said do you remember...maine kaha tha qatar se deal karni hai..dubai se sidhe qatar jana..



Anya : oil hi lena hai so what chahe wo qatar se aye ki dubai se..


Saanvi : mere apne usul hai those who kill inoncent mai unse buisness nahi karti...dubai gold african countries ke inoncent logo ko markar lata hai..gold mines dubai me nhi african countries me hai..wo deal cancel karo aur kal qatar jao..wahan ke log dayawan hai..cheat jaisa kuch face nahi hoga..


Anya : government to gold dubai se hi buy karti hai phir ham kyo nahi..



Saanvi: bahas ka time nahi hai mere pass..


Anya : thik hai subah chali jaungi..





Raat ko junior aya anya ke pass..



Junior : ek buisnessman hai mr.aashok usse bat ki hai deal ke liye...milna chahata hai but kal..


Anya : tum chale jao...mai kal jaa rahi hon na..




Junior agle din ashok se milne gaya..


Ashok : mujhe kal se delivery chahiye agar de sakte ho to batao..


Junior : is week ke last se..


Aashok : sorry mai already deal kar chuka hon..


Junior ; hame mana karna tumhe bahut mahanga padega..tumhe protection kon dega..




Junior ne gun taan di...


Ye mere client hai...itne me gun liye gurds ke sath sneha aa gayi...



Jo dekh Junior ko jana pada...





Ek hafte baad ...

Private roof top lounge par party chal rahi thi...bahut ameer aur namchin log shaher ke aaye hue they ..



Best oil seller award goes to miss sneha desouza...

Sneha mike par akar speech dene lagi...ki uski najar samne padi...


Anya hatho me jaam liye cold hasi haste hue sneha ko dekh rahi thi ...




Sneha speech dekar jaam liye chalte hue anya ke pass ati hai...


Sneha : kaisi ho tum...


Anya : is award par mera hak tha...


Sneha : ise maine kamaya hai..


Anya : jo chiz mujhe acchi lage mai cheen leti hon...aur phir anya cold hasi hasne lagi...


SNeha anya ko chhod dusre guest se milne lagti hai..




Agle din subah me news ati hai ashok pandit ko unke kisi dushman ne maar diya....








Raat ka sama tha Barish ho rahi thi itne me 2 limo alag alag disha se aati hai jinke piche bahut si cars thi aamne samne akar ruk jati hai...



Dono ke shishe niche hue...









Sneha : us jung ko shuru mat karo jo tum jeet na pao...


Anya : you're failed to protect your clients..hahahahaha...sneha ka majak banate hue anya hasne lagi...



Sneha : get ready yourself for the revenge...



Anya : bloody sweet revenge...




Dono ne ek dusre par gun taan di...




Dhaye dhaye....



Dono ne sath me golian chalayi...aur usse pehle dono hi apni bulletproof cars ki mirror ka button daba chuki thi jisse dono ki golian dono ki car ke sishe se lag kar niche gir gayi...



Sneha : fire...sneha ne kaha ki uske aadmi jo uske sath transleter par connect they wo cars se nikal kar andha dhund firing karne lage..


Wahi anya ke aadmi bhi jawabi firing karne lage...






Dhammmm..


Anya ne apni car se sneha ki car par takkar mari....


Back lete hue senha ne race di aur speed se aate hue sneha ki car se jaa lagi....





Dono hi apni apni cars ke damage hone par jhatko se behosh ho gayi thi...




Itne me desouza aur saanvi bahut se guards ke sath aaye...


Saanvi : stop firing...saanvi ki aawaz par uske guards ruke...jo sneha ke sabhi guards ko maar chuke they...





Bache kuch gundo ko desouza ne rok diya...



Saanvi : mai ise hamari jung nahi banana chahti..


Desouza : start anaya ne ki hamare clinets ko markar..



Saanvi : tum kyo protect nahi kar paye apne client ko..

Desouza ke pass koi jawab nahi hota..

Saanvi : ab niklo.....









Sneha apni soncho se nikli..






Sneha : us gangwar ke baad mai anya ko aisa hurt karna chahti thi ki wo phir kabhi hamare raste me na aaye...london me anya ne bataya tha uska saga bhai rakshin ye nahi koi aur hai...mere pass uski jyada details nahi thi so mai 15 days ke liye london chali gayi ..jab aapne kaha kahi ghum aao tab mai is bahane london rakshin se milne gayi...wo mujhe ek arse se pyar karta tha mai bhi use pasand karti thi jiska maine fayda uthaya....


Mai uski baahon me baithi thi...tab maine usse pucha..


Mai : rakshin tumhare dad ka naam kya hai aur kaha se they wo...


Wo sonch me padh gaya...jo dekh mai sure ho gayi ki anya sahi thi...


Kayi dino baad usne bataya..


Mere dad shimla se they unka naam saran tha..mamma ne mere bahut puchne par bataya...






Mai us rakshin ko hurt nahi karna chahti thi wo anya se jyada smart tha mere liye samne se usse larna impossible tha...



Ek din...




Aaaahhhh...yes rakshin fuck me hard ohh..yess....ohhh...your dick is so fucking big....


Rakshin : I'm going to destroy your pussy bitch...


Ek din wo mujhe mila kisi native larki ke sath..


Rakshin...

Mai chikh pari.



Rakshin : babe..I'm busy bas kuch der wait karo mai abhi aya...


Maine us par gun taan di ..


Mai : pyar mujhse karte ho aur sex iske sath...


Rakshin: so what ..

Use bilkul bhi paschtawa nahi tha apne kiye ka..



Rakshin : if you want to kill me you can.. but remember mai aisa hi hon..my mamma is queen and I'm her varis and become king...aur kings 1 se jyada wife rakhte hai..




Mai : you fucking playboy



Mai us din bhi use naa mar payi...




Mai wapas yahan aa gayi...maine sonch liya tha anya ko hurt karne ke liye uske sage bhai ko hurt karungi ye to vaise bhi uska saga bhai nahi tha...





Desouza: phir tumhe kaise pata chala rocky ke bare me..


Sneha : usi information se jo mujhe raksh ne di thi...

Maine apne spy shimla bheje aur 2 mahine shimla ki khak chhanne ke baad unhone mujhe call ki...



Mam yahan ke ek school me ek larka mila hai jiske baap naam saran hai...aur uska naam rakshin...kehte hai usne ab apna naam badal kar rocky rakh liya hai...


Mai : mai aa rahi hon..aur mai shimla ke liye nikal gayi....



Wo mujhe wahan ke ek restaurant me pizza boy ki job karta dikha..mamuli sa larka...saanvi ka asli beta...

Pahado par maine usse pizza order Kiya plan tha yahi se use kidnap kar ke mumbai le jaungi... but...saanvi madam jo meri khamoshi se wakif thi wo khud bhi shimla aa gayi...



Madam pizza...sabhi guards ko pizza dekar wo mere pass aya...


Thoda sa mirror niche kar maine usse pizza liya...aur phir usi ke sun glasses me mujhe apni or aati madam saanvi dikhi...


Mai : ise pay karke bhejo...


Wo madam saanvi ke pass se gujar gaya madam saanvi use pehchan bhi na payi...







Desouza : tum meri sonch se bhi jyada hosiyar thi meri bachi but ho to bachi hi ab jung mere aur saanvi ke bich hogi...tum isse door rahogi...



Sneha : topic change mat karo dad...ab aap batao wo wahan kaise pahucha...






Desouza : pata nahi...ek gehri sans lekar desouza ne kaha...

Car rukne par wo bahar nikal gaya..

Desouza sneha dono ghar agaye the apne...



Desouza ke kadam apne aap hi us taraf chal diye jahan pehle rocky ko mara gaya tha....



Dsouza: gardens ki light on karo..



Desouza ne kaha aur gurds powerhouse ki taraf bhage...



Sneha apne baap ke piche piche aayi aur apne baap ki najro ka picha karne lagi....



Sneha : ye blood kiska hai..sneha ko ghas par blood bikhra hua dikha..




Guards : jise abhi hospital chhod kar aye....




Sneha : kya chhupa rahe ho aap...

Desouza : guards pata karo neighbours me earthquake ke jhatke unhone bhi feel kiye kya..

Desouza ki baat sun guards bahar ko bhage...

Wahi desouza sneha ko phir taal deta hai...



Chalte hue wo us jagah aya jahan gurds ne gadda khoda tha....



Us jagah par apne guards ko dekh uske kadam jam gaye....



Gadda vaisa hi open tha jisme pani bhar gaya tha kuch der pehle hui baarish se...






Sneha : ye sab....kehte hue sneha ki najar apne ghar ki building par padi...


Desouza : nikalo inhe..



Sneha desouza apne aadmio ki lashe dekh rahe they itni buri tarah unhe mara gaya ki dono andar se hill gaye they...kisi ka skeleton pada tha koi jameen ke andar gada tha kai gurds jad samit ukhde ped ke niche pade they jaise kisi ne ped utha utha kar in par mare aur unke jism piss gaye they...kayi guards ke body parts body se alag pade they...





Desouza sir kisi bhi padosi ne bhookamp ko mehsus nahi kiya bas badalo ki garaj aur baarish...






Sneha : dad...aap batayenge..warna mai apko apne aap ko nahi bacha paungi..



Desouza ne dekha aur wo sonchne laga..


Desouza ; mai lavanya ko apne ghar ki bahu nahi bana sakta bas isiliye uske bhai ko marna chaha...pata nahi kaise wo ...mai use adhmara chhod gaya tha..





Sneha : aap ek inoncent ki jaan lena chahte they...wo to abhi mila hai saanvi ko aur saanvi jaanti bhi nahi rocky uska beta hai...





Desouza : shayad mujhse galti ho gayi...




Sneha : bahut badi galti...kehti hui sneha aage badh gayi....











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Subah 5 baje....
Nurse iski pulse nahi chal rahi hai Doctors ko inform karo..andar ek ward boy safayi karne ata hai tab dekhta hai...
Rocky ke jo machine lagi thi jisme uski heartbeat chalti show ho rahi thi wo ab straight lines show kar rahi thi...
Safayi karmi ki awaz par Nurse bhagte hue aayi ...
Press jaisi machine laga kar wo rocky ko jhatke dene lagi....
Itne me ek saya rocky ke room me agaya jisse nurses anjan thi...
Piltona centigrade jaldi...nurse dusri nurse se tej awaz me badbadate hue kaha..
Nurse 2: doctors 11 baje ayenge ye nahi bach payega... dusri nurse injection bhar rocky ko lagate hue boli..

Nurse : kosish to kar sakte hai na...one..two...three...
Aur nurse ne phir jhatka diya...
Rocky ka sharir uchla Lekin koi harkat nahi hui....
Wo saya rocky ke pass aya aur uske chahere par jhuk gaya...mathe ko chum kar wo jane ke liye mud gaya...
Nurse : last try...one..two...three...aur nurse ne machine rocky ke seene par press ki...
Dhammmmmm.
Aaaahhhh....
Rocky ne sans li...
Rocky ki awaj sun saya ruk gaya....
Nurse : finally..
Mooh par pulse wali machine laga kar nurse chali jati hai...
Saya chalte hue rocky ke pass aya...aur rocky ke sar par dawa lagane laga...
Itne me kayi saye room me dikhne lage jo pehle wale saye ki tarah rocky ke jakhmo par ajeeb se dawa lagane lage ..
Pehle wala saya hawa me leta ki dusre saye ne apne ek pipe nikala aur use pehle saye aur rocky se jod diya..jisse saye ka blood rocky me transfer hone laga...
2 baje din me doctor dekhne aye rocky ko....
UNbelievable ...samne Rocky ki halat dekh doctor chonk gaye...
Nurse : subah iski heartbeat itni slow ho gayi thi maine umeed chhod di thi ye Bach payega...lekin itni fast recovery how it's possible...



Doctor: iske sharir me hi koi raz chhupa hai...iska blood sample lekar check karo...









Doctor chalta hua bahar aya...



Doctor ab mera bhai kaisa hai...lavanya ne pucha jo subah aayi thi...



Doctor: hairat hai wo maut ke mooh se bach nikla...I mean raat uski halat aisi nahi thi ki wo Bach payega..bacha bhi to kam se kam 6 mahine bed rest karta ...lekin ab uske zakhm bahut teji se bhar rahe hai..wo so Raha hai hosh aane par mil Lena..



Lavanya : doctor aaj meri shadi hai...mujhe Jana hoga..kya aap uska khyal rakhenge..mai raat me aaungi...iske liye mai aapko jitna kahenge utna pay karungi...


Doctor: raat jo ise laye wo pay karke chale gaye aap jaye ham dekh lenge...



Lavanya : thank you doctor....aur lavanya jane ke liye uth khadi hui...









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Aarvi apne bhai ko lekar aao...saanvi sneha se milkar aayi to use rocky nahi dikha...sofe par baithte hue saanvi ne aarvi se kaha..





Aarvi : mamma wo to bhag gaya..




Saanvi: what...kaha bhag gaya...kuch le gaya hai apne sath...arshu..red file check..




Aarvi : so kar utha aur bhag gaya..uske hatho me koi beg nahi tha...aarvi apni mamma ki baat katte hue boli...





Saanvi : wo phir bahar khana khane gaya hai...





Shalini : kya hai jo use pareshan kar raha hai saavi...



Saanvi : dont know mamma..shayad ana ke na bolne se..lagta hai jaise use hamse pyaar hi nahi...



Shalini : ana ab narazgi chhor do...jo hua so hua wo tumhara bhai hai..



Anya : kya granny aap sara dosh mujh par daal deti ho..ana sofe se uthi aur jane lagi...



Shalini : ruko...wapas aao..


Ana ruki..phir gusse me mooh banati hui shalini ke samne aa khadi hui ..



Shalini: mai nahi janti mere pass kitna samay hai...kal tumhare bich rahi ki nahi...is family ko tutne mat dena...saanvi ke baad ye responsibility tumhari hai...rocky ki ankho me maine tumhare liye bepanah pyar dekha hai ye wo nahi jo tumse shadi karne ka tha ye wo hai jab use pata chala tum uski bahan ho...wo badi bahan jo uske bina school nahi jati thi ...wo badi bahan jisne kabhi adopted bhai ko bhai nahi mana sirf isliye ki uske sage bhai ka hak hai uske pyaar par...


Anya ; kitni mast speech di granny mai to santy ho gayi...aapko to politics me hona chahiye tha...hai na aarvi..



Aarvi ; ek dam faaru...



Saanvi : mom ye dono nahi samjhegi..





Shalini kuch nahi kehti uthkar apne room me chali jati hai...




Mam drinks..itne me ek servants drinks bana kar layi...ek usne saanvi ko di ek ana ko..aur dusre servants ne junior arshu ko...



Saanvi : mom sadme me chali jayegi agar tumne apna rawaiya thik nahi kiya..



Aarvi : bas karo mamma uski side lena..jab se wo aya hai is ghar me ghutan hone lagi...didi ka to samjh ata hai but mujhe kyo...sari care sara love sirf uske liye ham jaise kuch hai hi nahi...


Aarvi.. kab kya aur kitna bolna hai ye seekh lo....raksh jo sab khamoshi se sun raha tha usne kaha..


Aarvi : best aap ho like suparman power aapke pas hai...worrior aap ho..wo kon hota hai aapki jagah lene wala..granny is empire ka king ek joker ko banana chahti hai...




Anya ; mai bhi to hon supar woman maine bhi to fruit khaya hai..


Aarvi : han aapko bana de...aap bhi best ho...



Saanvi kuch kahe bina uth kar chali gayi...








Raat ke 11 baj gaye lekin abhi tak rocky nahi aya tha....saanvi 9 baje dinner kar leti thi lekin rocky ke intejar me use ye time ho gaya tha...shalini ko dawao ki wajah se saanvi ne khana khila kar Sula diya tha...khud wo bhuki thi...





Junior : madam kha lo aap wo ajayega..


Arshu : han mother aapko bhuka nahi rehna chahiye...



Saanvi : mera dil ghabra raha hai bahut ..use dhundo junior...


Junior ; shayad apne ghar gaya hoga...use jisne pala saran ki pehli wife wo yahi hai...shayad usse Milne gaya ho ..ab tak to wo so gaya hoga wait me lekar aya..



Saanvi : nahi rehne do...

Junior saanvi ki awaz par ruk gaya...



Arshu raksh ke force karne par saanvi ne thoda bahut kha liya...




Raat uski karbate badalte hue gujar gayi....







Subah hui to saanvi ne uthkar sabse pehle servants aur guards se rocky ke bare me pucha....




Mam nahi aye .. servant ne kaha..


Saanvi : jao junior ko lekar aao...



Servants junior ke room me aye...




Kuch der baad junior saanvi ke samne tha...



Saanvi : lekar aao use uske ghar se...



Junior ne hami bhri aur chal diya..

















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AAditi.....



Aur meri aankh khuli...


Maine apne aap ko dekha phir idhar udhar...


Mai zinda tha ..aur hospital me..mujhe yahan laya kon...



Nurse....nurse....maine nurse ko awaj di..


Ruko bhejta hon...ek hospital worker ne gujarte hue kaha..





Aaditi ka asli naam sneha hai wo gora aadmi uska baap..
Seth uska bhai hai matlab..kya ho raha hai mere sath....jitna sonchta utna ulajhta jaa raha tha mai....



Aur maine aankhe band ki...



Rock ji agar mai apko bhul gayi to aap kya karoge..


Tumhe yaad dilaunga jab tak mai tumhe yaad nahi aa jata...





4 Saal pehle aditi madam basti me ayi thi...kehte hai unka bahut ilaj chala..




Rishu please bata de aaditi kaha hai..


Mujhe bhi abhi pata chala hai usse hamara koi blood relation nahi... uski jimmedari hame elites ne di..



Wo meri beti hai mere dushmano ne uski memory mita di thi..uska naam aaditi nahi sneha hai...




Rishu...aur mere dimag ki ganthe khulne lagi...




Nurse nahi ayi thi abhi tak...

Maine apne sar ko chhua jahan rod lagi thi mere us hisse par parti thi lekin hath lagane par mujhe dard feel nahi hua...maine dabaya still nahi...maine dusri side ko chhua wo bhi same..




Hath pairo par nishan bhi gayab they ek urja apne andar mujhe mehsus ho rahi thi...


Maine syringe aur ventilator wala pile nikala...aur bed se uth gaya...




Hosh aa gaya tumhe...lete raho..tumne syringe kyo nikal di...itne me nurse aa gayi...



TUm thik kaise hue.. doctor mujhe dekhne laga...




Mai : mujhe mere kapde chahiye...abhi...


Doctor ne nurse ko ishara kiya...



Doctor: baith kar baat kare...


Mai bed par baitha to doctor chair lekar pass baith gaya..




Doctor: kuch din yahan ruko...tum almost dead they jab yahan aaye they sanse bhut slow chal rahi thi...sach kahon to aisa case life me first time dekh raha hon..





Mai : kya mai bimaar hon...maine patti sar ki khich li...




Doctor: ye hissa sar ka fat gaya tha maine khud surgery ki thi...ye kaise..


Maine hath laga kar dekha...kuch nahi tha...sar normal tha bas us jagah par baal nahi they...



Mai: ise bandh do jab tak baal nahi aa jate...

Doctor ne hami bhari aur bandhne laga...



Ye thode gile hai...jab tum in kapdo me aye they tab ye gande they loundery wali ne kuch der pehle hi dhoye..


Itne me nurse kapde lakar kehne lagi..

Mai : koi baat nahi ..mera phone paise..

Nurse : wo desk par.. polythene me..


Mai : mujhe kapde badalne hai..


Doctor ne hami bhari aur uth gaya...wo accha doctor tha...



Kapde badal kar mai room se bahar aya....



Phir hospital se......





Auto lekar mai chal diya...







1 ghante baad mai basti me tha...



Ped ke hi pass auto ruka tha...



CHakh kar dekhti hon ye kaisa bana..ummmm... perfect hai...uski gas off kar do...


Auto se utar jab mai idhar udhar dekhne laga..tab mujhe rishu ki awaz sunayi di...

Wo rasoi me gareebo ke liye khana banwa rahi thi...



Aunty rice dale masala ho gya
...mujhe dekh uske shabd mooh me hi reh gaye..



Sab kuch chhod wo bhagte hue mere pass aayi...


Pass akar nam aankho se wo mujhe dekhne lagi...



Mai : tum kabhi bhi meri aaditi sorry sneha...nahi ban sakti...


Wo gale lagne wali thi ki ruk gayi..mere shabd uske kisi kode ki tarah lage...uski aankhe chalak padi...



Rishu : hmm..mai bas....rocky ji aap kaha chale gaye they ye chot kaise...


Mai : sshhhh...tumne mujhse jhut bola...taki meri aaditi mujhse door ho jaye aur uski jagah tum le sako...kitni selfish ho tum...kya janti ho meri aditi ke bare me...batao mujhe...


Rishu : uska boyfriend hai wo roz boyfriend change...


Chatakkkkk...maine use thappad jad diya aur wo rone lagi...


Mai : mai bas usse ek baar milna chahata hon..bas dekhna chahta hon...kya wo mujhe bhul gayi...kya uska pyaar jhuta tha...agar wo apne boyfriend ke sath khush hai to mai chala jaunga uski life se.... please mujhe sach batao wo kon hai..agar nahi bataya to mai apni jaan de dunga rishu..



Usne koi jawab nahi diya...mujhe ghurte hue bas aansu Baha rahi thi...


Mai ; tum bahut pathar dil ho...tumhe kabhi kisi se pyar nahi ho sakta..achha jao... mere rooms ki key lekar aao..jaaao...mai chikha jis par wo chali gayi...


Mai chalta hua apne room par aya...


Kuch der baad wo key lekar aayi...


Maine keys li aur andar aya...phir door bhed kar mai bedsheet ko rassi ki tarah bana kar fan me fasa kar fanda banane laga...



Agar mai aapko bhul gayi to rock ji..


To mar jaunga...



Aa dilo ki raahon me..
Ham aisa kar jaye..

Ek duje se bichde to
sath jiye bin mar jaye..

Bhigti aankho se maine fanda gale me daal liya...




Wo don hai tumhe maar denge uske dad...


Rishu door khol ne andar akar kaha...


Phir bhagte hue bed par akar mujhse lipat gayi...


Mai : chhod do mujhe...mai aaditi ke bina nahi ji sakta...


Hmm..hmmm...wo na me sar hilane lagi...
Mai : mujhe batao wo kon hai..
Rishu : pehle isse apna sar nikalo..
Maine gale se fanda nikala phir bed par baith gaya...
Rishu : wo kisi parakash desouza ki beti hai...ye basti jinki hai unhone dad ko unke naam ki wajah se sneha ki jimmedari di sirf uski dekhbhal ki..mujhe use bahan dad ko use beti banane ka adhikar nahi tha lekin wo itni pyari thi hamara usse dil ka rishta jud gaya...
Rishu ne sans li phir phone me video laga kar screen mere aage kar di...
Agar tum ye video dekh rahe ho tou shayad meri yaaddasht wapas aa chuki hai Aur shayad main tumhe bhool chuki hoon Mujhe pata chala hai ke jab meri purani yaadein wapas aayengi tou tum meri zindagi se mita diye jaoge Jaise tum kabhi the hi nahi..lekin tum the Tum ho..
.Aur shayad mere dil me kahin hamesha rahoge ...Mujhe darr lag raha hai is baat se nahi ke main bhool jaungi is baat se ke main tumhe dobara pehchan nahi paungi.



Wo aditi thi..meri aditi...uske har lafz me mere liye bepanah pyaar tha...uska pyar dekh meri ankhe bhar aayi..



Rishu: hamne tumse kuch chhupaya nahi mai nahi chahti thi tum uske dad ke hatho mare jao...wo log khatarnak hai....


Maine rishu se mobile le liya...


Phir bina kuch kahe uth gaya...



Rishu : kya tumhe ek baar bhi mujhse pyaar nahi hua..


Maine naa me garden hila di...aur aage badh gaya...





Basti se nikal kar mai auto lekar ghar aya.....







Maa mere room ke bahar baithi thi.. aankho me aansu liye...







Maa...


Meri awaz par maa ne sar utha kar mujhe dekha phir wapas vaise hi baith gayi...


Mai : kya hua maa..kyo udas hai..pass baithte hue maine mooh maa ke ghutno par rakh liya...



Richa : tu kyo aya kon hai teri yahan..


Mai : maaf kar de maa ab nahi jaunga..


Richa : mai kitne dino se roj yahan baith kar darwaje ko takti ki tu ayega..



Mai : agaya hon maa..maaf kar de please...aur mai maa ke ghutno ko chumne laga...


Mai: maa tu kitni pyari hai tere aanchal se lag kar sare gham bhul jata hon..ek wo hai jisne mujhe paida kiya...uske kapdo me to aanchal hi nahi wo chhote chhote kapde pahanti hai...


Richa : chal ghar chalte hai....thaka diya hai is shaher ne...


Mai : maa teri hone wali bahu isi shaher me hai use liye bina kaise chala jaun... jis din wo tayar ho gayi us din sab chhor kar ham chalenge shimla..


Richa : wada kar..

Mai : wada maa....ye bata lavanya abhi tak nahi aayi college se raat ke 9 baj rahe hai..




Richa : jab se tu gaya hai tab se wo ek baar din me aayi 10 minute ke liye ye kehne tu apni sagi maa ke ghar par hai...tujhe kya mil gayi teri maa..


Mai : haan maa lekin sagi sirf tu hai...unki family me meri nani aur mamma ke siwa koi mujhe pasand nahi karta mai chhod aya unka ghar...



Maa : tu bhuka hoga kuch bana kar laun tere liye..


Mai : tune khana nahi banaya..


Richa : dopahar ka tha wahi kha li..


Mai : maa fresh khana khaya kar...


Maine apna phone on kiya bahar se khana mangwane ke liye lekin uski screen tuti hui thi...



Mai : maa tu ruk mai 10 minutes me mast sa khana laya...



Richa : tu ayega na..


Mai : aaunga maa...


Uthkar mai ghar se nikal gaya...



.pass se maine ek restaurant se accha khana pack karaya phir lekar ghar aya...


Maa nikal kar layi aur ham dono khane lage..


Mai : maa tu apna khyal rakha kar...jab tak teri Bahu ko ghar nahi le ata tab tak kabhi kabhi mai bahar hi rahunga..to tu meri fikr mat karna..


Richa : aaj ek ameer aadmi aya tujhe puchne...mere inkar par khamoshi se chala gaya...


Mai : mai kya keh raha hon..tu apna khyal rakhegi..mast hokar khayegi apne is ghar me rahegi...meri fikr nahi karegi na uski...wo ab mar chuki hai hamare liye...chal kar wada apna khyal rakhegi..


Maa ne hami bhari...



Kha kar ham dono let gaye..



Mai : maa garmi aa gayi hai ac lagwa don kal...han kal lagwa dunga...maine apne se hi jawab diya..


Aur maine ankhe band kar li...









Agle din mai utha naha dhokar maine nashta kiya...



Mai : maa teri bahu se milne jaa raha hon...naa aaun to fikr na karna..

Mujhe dar tha uska baap aaj phir na peete...mujhe janna bhi tha wo hospital kyo le gaya jab usne kaha mujhe maar dene ke liye...





Bahar akar maine ek taxi ko hath diya..aur wo ruk gayi...



Gate khol kar mai baithne laga ki mujhe awaz aayi..



Mujhe bhi chalna hai...


Mai : sorry ye booked...saras...

Wo khubsurat naujawan mujhe dekh muskura raha tha....



Saras : baith jao...


Mai baith gaya...mere sath wo bhi...




Driver : kaha Jana hai sahab..


Mai : chaupati ki taraf jahan bahut sare bunglow hai...



Saras : tum aise hi jina chahte ho..tumhare itne sare Dushman hai...jo tumhe marna chahte hai...


Mai : mai kya karu phir...aur kon dushman..




Saras : Sirisha ka demon wo tumhe kacha kha jata agar sahi samay par mai na ata...wo tumhari ungliya chaba raha tha..maine uska sar faad kar tumhari ungliya nikal li...



Mai : wo dead body jiske ghar mai chori karne gaya...wo demon kya wo aatma nahi thi...



Saras : nahi..


Mai : phir kon..


Saras : jab insan paida hota hai tab uske sath ek demon bhi paida hota hai..Sirisha ki atma apni jagah chali gayi...lekin jab tum uske ghar chori karne gaye tab us demon jo shirisha ki body me ghus gaya tha usse lag gaye they jisse uska khun tumse lag gaya aur wo tumse jud gaya...kisne mara pata karna sab bakwas tha wo asal me tumhe marna chahata tha Sirisha ko uske boyfriend ne mara shirisha ne apne boyfriend ke paise aur gold churaya tha....wo demon sab janta tha lekin usne tumhe uljaya sirf isliye ki wo tumhe maar sake...aur use moka mila samundari jahaz par
. samunder me demons sabse jyda powerful ho jate hai...mai bhi pahuch gaya..tumhe bachane aur maine use maar diya...


Mai : thank you..


Saras : tumne mujhe azad kiya...aage bhi mujhe tumhari help chahiye hogi..filahal to mai tumhare pass hon...


Mai: jab wo demon mar gaya phir dushman bhi nahi rahe..




Saras : tantrik ghanshyam pandit...Laxmi ka baap...wo is shaher me aya tha apni beti ki lash dekh usne police se pucha lekin police ne kuch nahi bataya...keh diya wo nahi jante..usne apna jadoo istemal kiya...tab maine tumhare upar raksha kavach bana diya..aisa jisse wo tumhe dhundne me asmarth ho gaya...


Mai : ye kab tak kaam karega...tum use maar nahi sakte...


Saras :abe uske pass afrit hai mujhe masal kar rakh denge chiti ki tarah...



Mai : phir kaise use pata chal gaya to wo mujhe maar dega...



Saras : wo banglore naami shaher me gaya hai apne chele vicky ke sath yaad hai jo tumhare sath hill house me aya tha...


Mai : haan wo uska chela ban gaya matlab tantrik...

Saras : han ghanshyam ek bahut purane kile me gaya hai jahan uska guru kali nath rehta hai..jo use siddhi prapat karne me uski shayera kar raha hai agar use siddhi prapat ho gayi to wo ban jayega khandola..tab wo is hisaar ko chutkio me Tod dega aur itna shaktishali ban jayega jo tumhe aur mujhe dono ko bhasm kar dega....


Mai : phir chale ussse ladne mere pass army hai meri mom ki 50k ke ass pass log...
Saras : unse door ho jao agar chahte ho unki zindagi...tumse badla lene ke liye wo unhe nuksan pahuchayega..
Uski baat sunkar mai use dekhne laga..mai abhi to unse mila tha...
Saras : use apni siddhi puri karne me 6 maah lagenge..tab tak mai koi rasta dekhta hon uski siddhi ko rokne ke liye...
Aur wo gayab ho gaya.....
Sir aage kaha Jana hai...
Driver ne car rok kar pucha..
Mai : dhire dhire aage le chalo...
Maine kaha aur shishe niche karke sadak se bahar bane gharo ko dekhne laga...
20 minute dhundne ke baad bhi mujhe ghar nahi mila tha...
Mai car se utra pay karke paidal hi chalne laga..
Mujhe vaise hi us tak pahuchna tha jaise us din pahucha tha.
Ek chaye ki tapri par mai ruka...
Mai : ye sneha kaha milegi aur uske don baap ka ghar kaha hai...
Meri baat sunkar chaye pi rahe khunkhar dikhne wale gundo ne mujhe gaur se dekha...
Are dost tum...kaha they ab tak..yaar tumhe kaha nahi dhunda...pehchana ise..
Han pehchan liya kaha they ab tak..
Kuch gunde uthe logo ko dikhate hue wo aisa pratit kar rahe they jaise mujhe jante ho..pass akar unhone mere gale me hath daal diya.aur charo taraf se unhone mujhe gher liya...wahi mujhe apni peeth me kuch nukila chubha..
Piche tere rampuri laga hai aede chikha chillaya to daal dunga andar....chup chap chalta reh..ek ne kaha..
Ek khali maidan me lakar wo mujhe khuni nigaho se dekhne lage..
Chal marne ke liye tayar ho ja...usi chaku wale ne kaha..
Kon hai tu aur desouza sahab ko kaise janta hai..kya kaam hai unse..
Kya kar rahe ho puch kar sale ko maro aur le chalo unke pass..teesre ne kaha..ye local gunde they..
Mai : maroge kaiko sidhe le chalo na..
Unhone ek dusre ko dekha.
Chikhega to nahi...
Mai ; kasam se nahi..
Vaise hi peeth me chaku lagaye wo gale me hath daal mujhe le jane lage..
Mai : gende bagle hata apni...sale nahata nahi kitni gandi badbu aa rahi hai..
Hahahaahaha...meri baat sunkar sabhi gunde hasne lage...
Kitni baar is bhangi se bola naha liya kar..
Kaat dalunga sale chup chaap chal..wahi mota mere chaku ki nuke ghusate hue garja..
Us area ke aakhiri bunglow ke samne wo ruke...
Itne bade bade gate....15 ft..ke kareeb..aur gate par 10 ke kareeb guard guns liye pehra de rahe they...aas pass cars khadi thi unme bhi guard baithe they..
Ye desouza sahab ko puch raha tha..


mujhe saath laye ek gunde ne kaha...
Tujhe to mai adhmara hospital me chhod kar aya tha..mujhe wo gaurd herat se dekta hua bola..
Mai : mujhe andar jana hai..
Ae khole re..usne kaha..aur gate khula..
Phir mere sar par gun lagaye wo andar le jane lage..
Andar bahut hi sundar building bani thi jis par kaam chal raha tha...
Wo mujhe dhakka dete hue ek park me laye jahan wahi aadmi baitha tha jiske aage breakfast rakha hua tha...
Itne me ek larka aya jise maine rishu ki dikhayi videos me dekha tha meri aditi bra panty me iske hi gale lag rahi thi...
Mere kadam jam gaye use dekh kar...
Ae chal na...usne mujhe dhakka diya...
Aaahhh...ladkhadte hue mai aage akar gira...
Kya ho raha hai wahan...itne me mujhe aditi ke sage dad ki awaz ayi jo khada ho gaya tha...
Ye aapse milne aya hai...mere sath aaye ek guard ne kaha..
Kon hai lekar ...
Itne me mai khada ho gaya...mujhe dekh aditi ke sage dad ke chahere par pasina ane laga...
Guard : chal jaa..usne phir meri peeth par hath mara ..
Aur mai chalte hue desouza ke pass aya..
Mai : ab agar mara to mai apni mamma se keh dunga..
Maine kaha lekin desouza vaise hi hairat se khade mujhe dekh raha tha..
Mai : tum bahut khushnaseeb ho dost jo tumhe aditi mili...uska khyal rakhna..mai usi larke ki peeth par hath rakhte hue bola...
.mai : dar kyo rahe ho uncle mai bas ek baar use dekhna chahata hon phir chala jaunga..
Kon aaditi...usi ladke ne pucha..
Mai :sneha tumhari gf wo pehle kabhi meri lover thi..aur phir wo chali gayi...soncha tha tum nahi miloge lekin sali meri kismat dekho tum uske sath ho aur mai...mai phir akela ho gaya hon...
Kya bakwas kar rahe ho sneha to meri bahan hai..meri badi bahan...usne kaha aur wo chair se uth gaya...
Mai ; kya...
Han meri gf lavanya hai tumhari bahan..mai tumhe janta hon tum rocky ho lekin tum itni jaldi thik kaise ho gaye..tumhara sar fata hua tha...

Mai : kya naam hai tumhara..
Saham..


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Mai ; meri sneha ka bhai...bilkul uski tarah..mai kaise nahi pehchan paya tumhe..aa gale lag jaa ...aur jabardasti mai uske gale lag gaya..
Saham : sale sahab kissi vissi na karo...
Mai : mere sale mujhe to meri aditi ke gali ke kutte se bhi pyaar hai..mai use bhi choom lon...tum to meri jaan ki jaan ho...
Saham :abe chhodo bhi...
Tum yahan kyo aye ho...i mean chale jao yahi hai sneha ka bf..
Mai : sasur ji...saham se alag hokar mai desouza ke pass aya...
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Mai : haye kitne gore ho...ek dam meri aditi ki tarah...lekin mai tumse naraz hon..sonch raha hon apki shikayat kar don sasur ji...kya kehte ho..

Aur maine mobile nikal video laga di aditi ki....jise dekh desouza ke chahere ke rang udne lage beta aya uske bhi...
Mai : jab wo ye video dekhegi to ek dam mere pyar me gir jayegi...aur apka ghar chhod kar mere sath ho legi..kaha hai meri aditi..batao jaldi...
Dhammm...desouza ne gusse me phone fek diya..jo ghas par gira..
Mai : mere pass ek aur copy hai...jo mai chupa kar aya hon...
Desouza : suno bete...
Mai : kya...zor se bolo sasur ji...
Desouza: suno bete rocky...
Mai : ab aye na line par sasur ji....sun raha hon...
Desouza ; tumhari aditi means meri sneha ne agar ye video dekh li to wo apne dimag par jor dalegi aur yaad karne ki kosish karegi...jab tumhari mom ne use release kiya tha ham hospital le gaye..hamne bahut kosish ki janne ki ..ki uske sath 4 saalo me kya hua kaha thi wo...uska ilaj chala aur doctor ne kaha agar sneha aise hi mind ko force karegi to wo koma me chali jayegi..iski yaddast wahi wapas laa sakti hai jisne ise bhulaya hai..tum chahte ho wo koma je jaye bete rocky..
Mai : aisa kya sasur ji...
Desouza : wo ane wali hai yahan breakfast karne... please uske samne is bare me koi baat nahi karna..
Mai : phir wo mujhe kaise pyaar karegi sasur ji...
Desouza : mai usse keh dunga koi baat phir agar use tum pasand aye to baat aage badhana .
Mai : agar na aya to sasur ji...
Desouza : to tum chale jana ..
Mai : no no sasur ji mai kahi nahi jaunga use chhor kar..
Desouza : are mere baap tu aur kya... chup wo aa rahi hai...tere piche...
Sasur ji ki baat sun kar mere dil ki dhadkane badh gayi....
Dad aap bhi na mere bina breakfast bhi nahi karte...chale aye.


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Wahi awaj wahi lehja wahi mithas...jaise mere kano me kisi ne ras ghol diya ho...
Sneha : kya hua itne chup kyo ho.. saham ...
Saham ; lav ka bhai...
Mai: hi janeman...
Sneha ; how dare you calling me janeman...gusse me wo mujhe ghurne lagi...
Ek bar aur tumhe mujhse pehle jaisa ishq karna hoga...mai tumhe majboor kar dunga ki tum phir mujhse pehle jaisa pyar karo...meri aditi...jo yadein tumhe hurt karengi wo mai kabhi yaad nahi ane dunga ..aur agar tumhe mujhse pyaar na hua to khamoshi se tumhari zindagi se chala jaunga..man me sonch mai muskurane laga..
Agar kal main tumhe dekhu aur meri aankhon me ajnabiyat ho..To please mujhe dosh mat dena Wo main nahi hoongi Wo meri wapas aayi hui duniya hogi ..Agar main tumse poochun ke tum kaun ho..To gussa mat hona Bas ek baar phir se mujhe waise hi dekhna jaise pehli baar dekha tha Ho sakta hai mera dimagh tumhe bhool jaye. Lekin mujhe yakeen hai mera dil itna kamzor nahi.. Agar kismet ne chaha Tou shayad main phir se tumse pyaar kar baithungi ..Dobara Naye siray se Bina yaadon ke Sirf ehsaas ke sahare Aur agar nahi To yaad rakhna Kisi waqt kisi lamhe me Main tumse beinteha pyaar karti thi Aur wo sach kabhi jhoot nahi banega I love you Aaj wali main Kal wali main ke liye..
Meri aankhe ro rahi thi aur mere hontho par muskurahat thi...



Desouza : kaise bol rahi ho beti mehman ko thodi respect do..warna tum janti ho na..


Saham : didi ye lavanya ka bhai hai ...use pata chala to chhor degi mujhe...


Sneha ; apne dekha na isne mujhe janeman kaha..ye yahan kyo aya hai.. hospital walo ne ise kya pilaya jo itni jaldi thik ho gaya...mai to ise inoncent samjh rahi thi ye to kamina nikla..




Desouza : ise tumse love at first sight ho gaya hai...us din ye tumhare hi piche aya tha pehli baar tumhe dekha aur pyaar kar baitha...isiliye maine ise marna chaha...




Sneha : kaam pura karo dad..


Desouza : ye janta hai saanvi madam iski mom hai...



Mai : tum kitni merciless ho pyaar nahi kar sakti mujhse..



Sneha : shakal dekhi hai ...


Mai : kyo kya kharabi hai tum me ek dam mast ho sar se paon tak..





Sneha : you...bloddy rascal ...mai ek maafiya ki beti hon ek don..tum kya ho saanvi madam ke bina kya auqat hai tumhari jo tumse pyaar karu...tum shimla ke ek mamuli pizza boy ho..iske siwa kya ho...




Mai : agar mai don ban gaya to tum mujhse shadi karogi...


Sneha : pehle ban kar dikhao apni mamma ke help ke bina...now get lost....



Mai : sasur ji apun phir ayega iske liye lal jora kharid lo...


Sneha : teri to...

Dhaye dhaye dhaye....



Gusse me wo mere pairo par firing karne lagi....aur mai bhag khada hua...




















































Nice update Rocky hamara ab don banega
 

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Episode 21

Dhammmmmm...dhammmmmm...dhaammmm

Kayi bahut bade dhamake hue....aur pura godam aag ki lapto se ghir gaya....

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1. Great update.

2. Rocky ka apni family ke prati vyavhaar dekh kar dukh hua. Aisa lagta hai ki weh apni saari flustration, uske saath huye hua durvyavhar, apne pita ke diye huye usulon ka khoon hota dekh kar ek rebellian ban gaya hai. Shalini ko to usme apna pota dikhta hai jisko ghar se beghar hone ka karan jo bhi ho, unki saantvana to usi ke saath hai.

3. Saanvi ek maa hai, usne Rocky ko bahut miss kiya hai, aur us par aadhya dwara diye gaye torcher ki puri video weh dekh chuki hai, uska dil rota hoga isliye weh Rocky ki sab kamiyon ko ignore kar rahi hai.

4. Jis tarah se Rocky ne Aadhya se baat ki thi, mujhe laga tha ki weh ab uske chungal se bahar nikal aaya hai aur Red File use nahi dega. Lekin padh kar ashcharya hua ki weh abhi bhi file ke peeche pada hai. Uska 3rd floor par rehne ki zidd karna aur Aarvi se kehna ki weh jaldi hi wahan se nikal jayega, is baat ko confirm karta hai.

5. Anya to meri nazar se ek dam se shikhar ki choti se ek khayi me gir gayi hai. Rocky ki koyi galti nahi hai, yeh use bhi pata hai, aur Shalini ke smajhane ke baad bhi ki maine Rocky ki aankhon me tumhare liye ek badi behan ka pyaar dekha hai, weh ek dam se andhi ho gayi hai. Aarvi ka to kuch samajh me aata hai, usko apne bachpan ki yaadein nahi hongi, use to keval jalan ho rahi hai ki ek naye ladke ko usase jyada importance di ja rahi hai. Ek baat aur, Shalini ab apni property Saanvi ke baad 4 hisson me baatna chahti hai, Anya, Aarvi, Rakshin aur ab Rocky. Kuch hint sa aaya tha ki weh Rocky ko Shalini ke empire ka asli vaaris banana chahti hai. Anya ka Rakshin ke saath physical hona, Rakshin ka playboy nature, Aarvi ka Africans ke peeche jana, chahon weh yeh excuse de ki weh to keval size confirm karna chahti hai, yeh family kafi strange lagi hai.

6. Ab to clear ho gaya hai ki main heroin to Aditi/Sneha hi hai. Rishu ko dekh kar dukh hua, khas kar jab usne poocha ki kya mere liye tumhari kabhi bhi koi feeling nahi aayi, dil ko chhoo gaya. One sided love.

7. Past bhi clear ho gaya ki akhir Anya aur Sneha kaise friendship se ek dusre ki dushman ban gayi hain. Accha laga ki Sneha ne apni taraf se gang-war ko rokne ki puri koshish ki. Yeh Desouza ka bhai Ravi Uncle kaun hain jinka Seham kai baar jikar kar chuka hai. Dons ke Syndicate me nahi hone ke baad bhi weh itna powerfuk kaise ho gaya. Yeh to saaf hai ki weh ek bahut hi gira hua aadmi hoga, isiliye Desouza usase madad nahi lena chahta tha aur jab uske liye tayyar hua, Sneha ne mana kar diya. Koi politician ya high official hoga.

8. Rocky ka Sneha ke peeche bhagna kafi emotional tha.

9. Ab apna hero bina Saanvi ki madad se kaise Don banta hai, dekhna hai.

10. Dusri taraf Saras ne Bhootni ka role karne wale ko maar diya. Ek baat samajh nahi aayi ki Desouza ke yahan aakar Saras ne tabaahi macha di, lekin jab jail me Rochy ko torcher kiya ja raha tha, tab kyon nahi aaya.

11. Ab Pandit ka role bhi saamne aa gaya hai. Rocky ke paas 6 mahine hain Pandit ki siddhi ko rokne ke liye. To Laxmi ke baap ka naam Ghanshyam aur uske guru ka Kalinath hai. Yeh Vicky to marne ke baad bhi peecha nahi chhod raha hai.

12. Ab Rocky ko theek karne wale kaun the, story ke anusar to Saras hi hona chahiye, lekin jis sneh se uske maathe par haath phera, mujhe shak hai ki yeh Saran ho sakta hai.

13. Ab dekhte hain ki Rocky Saanvi ki madad ke bina kaise don banta hai. Waise bhi Saras ne use apni family se dur rehne ke liye kaha hai.
 

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Bhai, Episode 21 toh sach mein dil ke taar chhedne wala, hila dene wala aur rom-com vibes ka ek perfect mixture tha. Ek taraf supernatural healing (Saye) ka darr aur dusri taraf Rocky ka Sneha (Aditi) ke liye junoon, dono ne milkar is update ko bohot special bana diya hai.



1. Rocky apni sagi maa (Saanvi) ke mahal mein ghutan mehsoos kar raha hai kyunki wahan pyaar se zyada control hai. Isliye wo sadak ke dhaba par khana khata hai aur zameen par sota hai taaki use azaadi aur sukoon mil sake.

2.Granny ka aadhi raat ko Rocky ka intezaar karna aur uska Rocky ko godd mein room tak chhodne aana unke pure, unconditional love ko dikhata hai.

3.Par jab Anya ne Rocky ko "poor fellow" bola, toh Granny ka poore Shalini Empire ko Saanvi se chheen lena aur Anya/Aarvi ko qaidi bana dena ek bada "Bhaukaal" tha. Yeh protectiveness aage chal kar Anya aur Aarvi ke dil mein Rocky ke liye nafrat aur badha degi.

4.Anya ka aadhi raat ko Nakli Rakshin ke room se bahar aana, wo bhi aisi halat meinโ€”bikhre hue baal, sexy nighty, aur jism par "katne ke nishan" (love bites/scratch marks)โ€”sidha-sidha is baat ki taraf ishara kar raha hai ki un dono ke beech bohot hi wild aur rough physical intimacy (sex) hui hai. Jo Anya nakli Rakshin se nafrat karti thi, wo achanak uske itne kareeb chali gayi.Yeh uske character ka poori tarah se 'Dark' ho jana dikhata hai.

5.Is episode mein flashback ke zariye Sneha aur Anya ki dushmani ka jo raaz khula, usne story ki politics ko bohot clear kar diya.Anya ka Dubai se oil lena aur Sneha ke clinets ko maarna. In dono ladkiyon ka attitude bilkul apne parents (Saanvi aur Desouza) jaisa cold aur calculating hai.Nakli Rakshin ka Playboy nature: Sneha ko jab Rakshin dhokha deta hai aur kehta hai "Kings 1 se zyada wife rakhte hain", ye saaf karta hai ki nakli Rakshin andar se kitna arrogant hai. Ye scene Sneha ke dukh ko justify karta hai.

6.Yeh scene poori series ke sabse "Dark aur Disturbing" scenes mein se ek hai. Jab Aarvi ne Nakli Rakshin ko itne explicit aur sexual tareeke se jawab diya ("fuck me hard... punish me"), toh Rocky ke dimaag mein ek blast hua. Usne glass kyun toda aur wo kya soch raha tha?
  • Usne khud accept kiya ki use "behad gandi feeling" aayi. Wo overthink kar raha tha ki kya is ghar mein sabhi bhai-behnon ke beech aise hi physical relations hain? (Jaise Anya aur Nakli Rakshin ke beech). Ye kuch samjhao bro?

7.episode ki sabse dark aur bad-ass shuruaat wahi thi jab Rocky lagbhag marr chuka tha aur wo "Saye" aakar usey bachate hain.Hosh mein aate hi Rocky ka guards ka seena cheer kar unke organ nikalna aur guards ka raakh ban jana! Ped ukhad kar maarna aur jameen par pair maarkar bhookamp laana. Bhai, ye pura sequence God-Tier Action tha. Rocky ab ek walking weapon ban chuka hai, jise uski limits ka khud bhi andaza nahi hai. Aur desouza to pura hil gaya hai ye dekh ke ๐Ÿ˜‚.

8.Ek Saye ka apna blood Rocky ko dena... ye scene saaf hint deta hai ki Rocky ab sirf insaan nahi raha. Sayon ka uske sar ko choomna dikhata hai ki wo Rocky ko kisi bade maqsad ke liye zinda rakh rahe hain. Ye saye kon the ya sarash ne bolya tha?

9.Jab Rocky ko pata chalta hai ki uski 'Aditi' hi 'Sneha' hai, toh uski halat pagal jaisi ho jati hai.Rishu ka Rocky ko bachane ke liye jhooth bolna aur Rocky ka gusse mein aakar fanda gale mein daal lena. Ye scene Rocky ki extreme emotional instability ko darshata hai. Wo Aditi ke bina marne ko taiyar tha.Par jab wo video play hota hai (Aditi ki aakhri recording), toh reader ka dil bhi bhar aata hai. Wo dialogues: "Agar main tumse poochun ke tum kaun ho.. To gussa mat hona Bas ek baar phir se mujhe waise hi dekhna..." Bhai, ye lines kisi classic romantic tragedy ki tarah thi. Isne Rocky ko ek naya maqsad de diya.

10.Rocky ka Desouza ke ghar entry maarna episode ka sabse entertaining aur "Whistle-Worthy" (seeti maar) scene tha.


  • "Sasur Ji" Jis Desouza ko sab mafia don maante hain, usko Rocky ka "Sasur ji" bolna aur dhamkana ki "Mai aapki shikayat kar doon" ekdum desi, massy hero wala feel de raha tha.
  • Saham ka Twist Aditi (Sneha) ka saga bhai hai tab rocky khus ho ke kiss karne lagta hai funny ๐Ÿคฃ tha aur sala bolna ๐Ÿ˜‚.
  • The Challenge Sneha ka gusse mein usko "Pizza Boy" bolna aur Rocky ka usey challenge karna: "Agar mai don ban gaya to tum mujhse shadi karogi..." Ye line declare karti hai ki ab Rocky ka agla goal Saanvi ki power par aish karna nahi, balki khud apna Empire khada karna hai!
11.Saras ne aate hi kahani ke purane raaz khol diye. Rocky ke paas us ship par jo jaanlewa attack hua tha. Saras ne bataya ki Sirisha ki body mein ghuse demon ka khoon Rocky se lag gaya tha. Saras ka us demon ko maarna.saras ye bhi bata hai ki Tantrik Ghanshyam Pandit (Laxmi ka baap) aur uska chela Vicky mumbai aa ke khoj rahe the Saras ne Rocky ko bacha rakha tha apne kavach se.
  • Saras ka ye batana ki Ghanshyam 6 mahine mein "Khandola" banne ki siddhi prapt kar raha hai, kahani mein ek 6-month Ticking Time Bomb fit kar deta hai. Agar wo siddhi puri hui, toh wo Saras aur Rocky dono ko bhasm kar dega. Yeh plot Rocky ke survival ko ek naye danger level par le jaata hai.
  • Saras ki sabse badi warningโ€”"Unse door ho jao agar chahte ho unki zindagi..."โ€”Rocky ke character arc ke liye ek bohot bada jhatka hai.
  • Ye warning Rocky ko majboor karti hai ki wo apni family (Saanvi, Anya, Aarvi, Granny) ko bachane ke liye unse door rahe. Wo chah kar bhi apni maa ka protection nahi le sakta. Uska akelapan uski kismat ban chuka hai.

12. Lavanya ka kehna ki "Doctor aaj meri shadi hai" ek bada cliffhanger hai. Iske ek hi matlab nikalte hain: wo apne sponsor/sugar daddy Shankar Khanna se paise aur power ke liye shaadi kar rahi hai. Agar saham ko mallum chalega to kya hoga us time maza aayega dekhna ๐Ÿคฃ.

13.Red File is story ka sabse bada tension point hai. Rocky ne soch liya tha ki "aaj hi pass lekar wo file leni thi, is nark me mai ek aur din raha to mera marna taye tha."
Par Aditi ko dekhte hi wo sab kuch (apni jaan, Red File, mission) chhod kar bhag gaya. Yeh saabit karta hai ki uske liye pyaar uski survival se bada hai. Saanvi ka Rocky ke jaate hi "Red File check" karne ko kehna us file ke dangerous raaz ki taraf ishara karta hai.

14.Saanvi aur Richa ke beech ka contrast rula dene wala hai. Saanvi ke paas mahal aur orders hain, par Richa ke paas sirf aanchal ka sukoon hai. Rocky ka Richa ke ghutnon par sar rakh kar rona aur kehna
Sagi sirf tu hai... uske kapdo me to aanchal hi nahi..." Yeh dialogue is series ke sabse powerful dialogues mein se ek hai. Ye dikhata hai ki maa kapdon ya ameeri se nahi, apne aanchal ke sukoon se banti hai. Agar maan lo bro rocky saanvi ke pass na jaye to jo dono ma me agar ladai ho apne pass rakhne ke liye ye sabse dangerous ladai ho gya kyuki 1 maa apne bacche ke liye kuch bhi kar sakti hai.

15.kuch question hai?

  1. Rocky ke andar jo khoon (blood) gaya hai sayon ka, kya usse wo bhi Mutant/Superhuman ban gaya hai?
  2. Sneha ko paane ke liye Rocky "Don" kaise banega, jabki Aadhya aur Ghanshyam Pandit jaisi aafatein uske peeche padi hain?
Overall Vibe: Ye episode ek "Rollercoaster of Reincarnation and Romance" tha. Rocky ka lagbhag marr ke wapas zinda hona, Desouza ka ghar todna aur fir agle hi din Sneha (Aditi) ko "Sasur ji" ke samne "Janeman" bolna... bhai, Rocky ka swag aur pagalpan alag hi level par chal raha hai!

Ab next update ka intezar hai ki aage aur kya twist aate hai.
 

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Yaar mujhe lag raha hai ye tantrik wahi Arya wale story ka tantrik hai
 

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Aur yeh saya Saran hai ๐Ÿค”
 
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