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Incest Chawla Family Ki Kahani - Adultery, Romance,Eroticism, Incest. EXCLUSIVELY FOR XFORUM (COMPLETED)

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Update 74 Saanvi goes mad​

To Saanvi unnke paas jaakar baithi aur ussi komalta se kaha, “kyun bahot naraazgi hai ji? Main ne eisa kia kar diya ke aap mujhse itna naraz ho hmm?” aur phir apni awaaz ko aur dheemi karke sanvi ne zara phusphussate hue unnke kaan mein kaha, aaj raat ko nighty mein aaun aap ke paas to wapas baat karoge mujhse pehle ki tarah hmm boliye aawun apni nighty mein aap ke paas? Aaj Vivaan raat ko 1.30 ko aega full time hai boliye nah ji! Lagta hai aap ne mujhko barson se galle nahin lagaya ek hug dijiye nah mujhe!” aur apne baahon ko Saanvi ne chawla sahab ke kaandhe par dala…….

Ab aguey……

Chawla sahab samajh gaye ke Saanvi ussko seduce kar rahi hai aur socha - “achcha to ab yeh mujhko rijha rahi hai aur samajhti hai ke ab nighty mein aegi mere saamne to main pighal jaunga, jab main wo sab karna chahta tha, itne minnatein kiye the ussko apni nighty mein dekhne ke liye tab badi sati Savitri ban rahi thi ab thoda sa baat karna kia bandh kar diya to apna roop dikhaane lagi, chal main tujhe sabak sikhata hoon re aurat!!”

Aur bina koyi jawaab diye chawla sahab bed se uthe aur apna whishky ka glass haath mein liye lounge mein chale gaye Saanvi ko wahin bed par chorr kar!

Sanvi ne bilkool, bilkool bhi nahin socha tha ke wo weisa karega, ussne to socha tha ke itni komaltaa se baat karne se aur apni kapde utaarne wale baat se chawla sahab ussko baahon mein bhar lega, magar sab ulta hua…. Saanvi ne apne aap ko niche girrte hue feel kiya. Khud ko nicha mehsoos kiya jiss waqt chawla sahab bina ussko dekhe, saare baton ko sunne par bhi wahan se nikal gaye. Saanvi ko gehra thess pahuncha aur wo wahan se Deepti ko uthakar upar apne kamre mein chali gayi aur bed par baith kar khub royi. Baar baar soch rahi thi ke kitne pyar se unn ke kaanon mein baat kiye the Saanvi ne, eise private batein to kissi apnon se hi karte hein, ek aurat hokar eise baatein kissi apne se bade se karne ke bawajud chawla sahab ne usske baton ko ansuna kiya aur wahan se nikal gaye yeh Saanvi hazam nahin kar paa rahi thi.

Ussko ghussa ane laga aur turant ussi waqt ussne apni nighty pehni, bra ke bina aur apne baalon ko khola aur niche utri stair se chawla sahab ke taraf badhte hue aur unnke saamne lounge mein TV ke saamne khade hokar ghusse mein kaha, “kyun? Ab nahin dekhna mujhko eise, meri nangi badan dekhna chahte the nah aap? Mujhko pakarte the, mere jism par apna haath ferrte rehte the aur aaj mujhko eise thukraya ke jeise main ek bigri hui furniture hoon? Ab main chahti hoon ke aap mujhko nangi dekhe, dekhiye nighty utaar rahi hoon aap ke saamne, yeh lijiye mujhko nangi dekhiye, yeh hein mere boobs, panty bi utaarun ya aap utaaroge?”

Saanvi ne apni nighty utaar diye aur sirf apni panty mein khadi thi lounge mein chawla sahab ke saamne….. bahot ghusse mein thi, hanff rahi thi aur chawla sahab ke chehre mein dekh rahi thi ek bhooki sherni ki tarah….

Chawla sahab bilkool cool, normal ussko dekhta raha, Saanvi ke donon boobs nange unnke enkhon ke saamne the, Saanvi ke haanffne se boobs upar niche ho rahe the, Saanvi ka chehra laal tha, enkhen bhi kuch laal ho gaye the ghusse se….. aur Saanvi soch rahi thi ke ab to chawla sahab ussko apni baahon mein bharne zaroor aayega aur sorry kahega Saanvi ko…

Magar eisa kuch nah hua, jitna gambhirta thodi der pehle chawla sahab ne dikhaya tha ulta ab utna hi cool the aur araam se khade hue apne whisky sip karte hue apne kamre mein jaane lage to Saanvi ne chilla kar kaha, “AGAR AAP APNE KAMRE KE ANDAR GAYE TO MAIN YAHIN BAITHI RAHUNGI EISE HI NANGI VIVAAN KE WAAPAS ANE TAK!!SUNA AAP NE?”

Chawla sahab ne ek baar mudhkar ussko dekha, aur apne kamre ka darwaza zor se bandh kiya aur andar se lock laga diya!”

Saanvi aag babula ho rahi thi…. Ussne bahot saare saaman ko tod phor kiya lounge mein kayi whisky ki botalon ko kuchal dala farsh par, plates bhi tod daale …. Andar chawla sahab sab sun rahe the ke Saanvi pagla gayi hai aur sab kuch tod rahi hai, phir bhi wo kamre se nahin nikle….. Saanvi unnke darwaaze tak gaye zor zor se ghunsse maare unnke darwaze par aur chillate hue kaha “darwaza kholiye, koliye darwaza varna main kuch kar baithungi… suna aap ne…..” chawla sahab darwaza nahin khol rahe the to Sanvi ghusse se rone lagi aur rote hue weise hi chilaati jaa rahi thi aur zor se kaha, “ SANJANA KE SATH KIA KARTE HO AAP PATA HAI MUJHE.. JAB SE WO AAYI AAP KE ZINDAGI MEIN MUJHKO DOOR KIYA AAP NE, AAP KE CHHATI PAR USSKI KI HUI NISHAAN DEKHI HAI MAIN NE JAB AAP NASHE MEIN SOYE HUE THE.. KIA HAI USS MEIN JO MUJH MEIN NAHIN HAI??.... AGAR AAP NE DARWAZA NAHIN KHOLA TO MAIN GHAR KO AAG LAGA DUNGI, MAIN SACH KEH RAHI HOON MAIN GHAR KO AAG LAGA DUNGI SUNNA AAP NE?!! KHOLIYE DARWAZA!!”

Chawla sahab phir bhi nahin hille…… aur weise hi bina nighty ke sirf apni panty mein Saanvi upar gayi apne kamre mein, Deepti neendh mein thi, Saanvi ne unn sabhi kapdon ko nikala, jo pichle 5 saalon mein chawla sahab ne usske liye kharide the, bahot mehnge kapde, salwar, jeans, tops, sariyan sab ekatha kiya Saanvi ne aur kuch gehne bhi, sab lekar Saanvi niche aayi aur sabko chawla sahab ke darwaze ke paas rakha, aur phir se chilla kar kaha, aap nahin nikloge nah? Nahin sun rahe ho aap to apne naak ko kholkar sunghna kia smell arahi hai…..

Saanvi ne ek whisky ka naya botal khola aur saare whisky ko unn kapdon par dala, sab ko bheego diya whisky se aur lighter se unn mein aag bhadka diya, sab mein aag lag gaye aur jalne lage…… aur wahan se Saanvi chal kar gayi lounge se apni nighty liya aur pehna, aur ahiste ahiste rote hue stairs chadhne lagi apne kamre ke taraf jaate hue……

Chawla sahab ke kamre mein kuch dhuen daakhil hue aur jalne ki bhuh aayi to chawla sahab jhapat ke darwaze ko khole to dekha ke usske kamre se baahar nikalna mushkil tha, Saanvi seedhiyon par khadi dekh rahi thi aur zor se hanssne lagi jab dekha ke chawla sahab baahar nahin nikal paa rahe hein, chawla sahab wahan se seedhiyon par Saanvi ko dekh paa rahe the aur zor se chillaate hue kaha, “paagal ho gayi ho tum? Yeh kia kiya tumne? Saare ghar mein aag feyl jaega, jaldi se paani lao, Saanvi paani lao aur aag bujhao jaldi! Main nahin nikal paunga bahot aag hai!!!”


To be continued…………….
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Va va va kia likha hai bidu. Phaad ke rakh diya aap ne to bidu. Ab main kia likhun bidu samajh mein nahin arela hai
Kia role de diya saavi ko bidu? Pugli jeisa bana diya ussko, usski maansikta nahin sambhaal pa rahi hai ghusse mein
Saanvi ko kab se sab pata tha ke chawla aur samjana k sambandh hai to bhut frustrate rehti thi... jo vo chahti thi vo sanjana ko mili to vo pagla gayi bhut hi jabardast aur jhakaaas likha he aap ne bidu
Ekdum fadu update hai
Ekdum hatke aur alag. Jaan lewa update kahunga isse apun...
Sali aag laga diya pugli ne to
Hats off to chawla vo bilkool nahin tuta saanvi nangi ho gayi usske saamne fir bhi chawla majbut rahe hats off. Aap ne chawla ko winner bana diya iss update se magar abhi ek or update baki hai to dekhta hun kia hota hai
Thanks bidu iss dilchasp majedar update k liye
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Update 75 The Fire…..​

Saanvi ab rone lagi thi magar jeise chipak gayi thi stairs par bilkool nahin hill rahi thi, phir baith gayi wahin seedhiyon par zor se chillakar rote hue. Chawla sahab ne dekha ke wo nahin hillne wali wahan se to apne kamre se ek kursi se unn kapdon ko push kiya aur dawdte hue kitchen se balti mein paani bhar kar aag ko bujhaane gaye…. Teen chaar baar weisa karne se aaj bujhi…..

Saanvi wahin stairs par baithi sab dekh rahe the. Chawla sahab usske paas gaye usske baahon ko thaam kar ussko khada kiya aur zor se do thapad mara usske donon gaalon par jiss se Saanvi ke gaalon par nishaan ho gaye aur wo phut phut kar rone lagi chawla sahab ko apne baahon mein bharke. Chawla sahab bahot ghusse mein the ab, aur Saanvi ka ghussa shant ho gaya sab manzar dekhne ke baad, wo buss roti jaa rahi thi. Chawla sahab ne ussko gale se nahin lagaya sirf Saanvi ne chawla sahab ko thama tha apne baahon mein aur ro rahi thi… pure ghar mein jalne ki badbhu feyl gaye the, ghuttan si hone lagi thi saans lena mushkil ho raha tha, to chawla sahab ne Saanvi ko zor se jhigjhorra aur ussko apne kamre mein jaane ko kaha aur darwaza bilkool band rakhne ko kaha, aur sabhi darwaze aur uss taraf ke khidkiyon ko kholne ko kaha… aur khud chawla sahab ne main darwaza khola aur sabhi khirkhiyon ko bhi…. Jaate jaate sanvi ne rote hue kaha, “sab kapde jo aap ne mujhe diye the wohi the, unn mein gehne bhi hein sab jal gaye nah? Achcha hua aap ki di hui chiz ab nahin chahiye mujhe sab le li jiye wapas; nahin chahiye aap ki chizein mujhe, nahin chahiye, nahin chahiye……”

Chwla sahab ne sab jale hue chizon ko uthaya, ac on kiya, pankhon ko bhi on kiya chaaron taraf magar badbhu weise hi the halaan ke sab dhuwan ghayab ho gaye the…. Chawla sahab ke darwaze ke paas wala upar chat ke taraf sab kala ho gaya tha, usske darwaze aluminium ke the to wo salaamat the ussko kuch nahin hua tha sirf kala ho gaya tha jissko saaf karne ke baad thik ho jaega…. Magar ghar mein chaaron taraf udhe hue raakh aur jale hue kapde pade hue the…..

Chawla sahab ab sochne laga ke vivaan aya to ab kia kaha jaega ussko…. Yeh badbhu chhupana to namumkin tha, ussne socha ke pata nahin Saanvi kia bataegi vivaan ko ab, ek accident kehkar Vivaan ko bolna chahiye, sanvi ko bhi wohi baat vivaan ko kehna chahiye….. to chawla sahab ko Saanvi se wapas baat karna padega unnhon ne socha….

To wo gaye upar Saanvi ke darwaze ke paas aur khatkhataya usske kamre ka darwaza…. Saanvi weise hi ussi nighty mein bed par baithi hui thi aur andar se kaha, “khula hai aap andar aa sakte ho mera darwaza kabhi lock nahin hota kia yeh bhi nahin pata aap ko?”

Chawla sahab ne darwaze ko kholkar gambhirta se kaha, “chilla kyun rahi ho? Bachi soyi hui hai nah? Baahar aao kaam hai niche! Aur kapde pehen kar ao iss nighty mein nahin, jaldi karo!”

Yeh kehkar wo niche chale gaye aur saare jale hue kapdon ke tukde uthakar ek bada sa plastic wala dumping bag mein daal rahe the. Kuch der baad Saanvi niche aayi kapde pehen kar aur khade hokar sabhi jale hue kapdon ko dekh kar rote hue kaha, “kitna pyar tha mujhe inn sab kapdon se, kitne pyar se sambhaal rakhi thi main sabko kyunke aap ka diya hua tha, sab jal gaye, sab ke sab jal gaye ek bhi nahin hai jo thik hai?” aur Chawla sahab se bag chin kar ussmein dekhne lagi ke kahin koyi bacha hua sahi kapda to nahin unn mein… to chawla sahab ne kaha, “ab kyun pachta rahi ho? Jab aag lagaya tab nahin socha tha? Jaldi sab saaf karo main inn sabko bag mein bhar kar baahar door pheinkne jaa raha hoon, vivaan ko nahin pata chalna chahiye ke aag tumne lagaayi thi, kehna hoga ke accidentally aag lag gayi, kapdon ka zikr bilkool bhi mat karna….”

Saanvi niche zameen par baith kar rone lagi aur pucha, “to kia kahenge Vivaan ko ke aag keise laga? Kahan laga? Yeh dekhiye aap ke darwaze ke paas kitna kala ho gaya hai, pura ghar badbhu se bhara hua hai, kia kehna hoga vivaan ko? Batayiye ek hi baat bolna hoga donon ko!!”

Chawla sahab ne kaha, “ussko abi aane mein waqt hai, main yeh sab feink ka rata hoon tab sochenge ke kia batana hai ussko, tab tak tum paani se yeh sab saaf karo jaldi, jahan jahan raakh feyle hein sab saaf karo main abhi aaya!!”

Chawla sahab ne sabhi jale hue kapdon ko bag mein achci tarah se bandh karke apne car mein dala aur chale gaye kahin door feinke ko. Idhar Saanvi lag gayi sab saaf karne mein. Sabhi khirkiyan khule hue the aur shukar hai ke baahar kaafi tez hawa tha jiss se badbhu baahar nikal rahe the…

Chawla sahab koyi 15 minat mein wapas aaye. Aate hi kaha ke pura ghar jala hua mehek raha hai, vivaan ko sab pata chal jaega… thehro main store se paint lata hoon, by chance paint wale dibbe white paint bache hein aur ghar ka colour white hai to main sabse pehle mere kamre ke darwaze ke paas paint karta hoon tum wahan ek bheege hue kapde se saaf karo pehle main wahan paint karunga, taake vivaan ko pata nah chale ke aag waha lagi thi, kahenge ke aag kitchen mein lagi thi, kitchen yahan se bilkool Karib hi hai…..” to Saanvi ne pucha, “mere gehne kidhar hein? Wo to nahin jalte nah aag mein?”

Chawla sahab ne ghusse mein kaha, “kyun? Tumko to mere di hui chiz nahin chahiye nah? To ab kyun gehne chahiye?”

Saanvi ne ensoo bhare enkhon se, kusurwaar nazron se kaha, “batayiye nah? Kia aap ne sambhal ke rakha nah? Wapas dijiye mujhe, bahot pyare the sab mujhe!!” to chawla sahab ne apne kamre se unn gehnon ko laakar ussko de diya. Sab kale ho gaye the. Chawla sahab ne tab kaha, “nahin wapas do tum issko apne paas abhi nahin rakh sakte, tumhare kamre mein isski badbhu abhi nahin jana chahiye, tumhare kamre mein bilkool dhuan aur badbhu nahin pahunche hein, isse mere hi paas rehne do filhaal kal saaf karke wapas le lena.”

Aur raat ke 1 baje tak sab kuch donon ne milkar saaf kiya aur chawla sahab ne apne kamre ke paas sab paint kiya aur bilkool nahin dikh raha tha ke wahan aag lagi hui thi, paint ki khushbhu bhi ane lage the dhuen ke saath mix….

Aur sab saaf hone ke baad Saanvi ko chawla sahab ne samjhaya ke Vivaan ko yeh batana hai ke oven ke paas jo kapde garam bartanon ko pakarne ke liye hote hein wo pade hue the aur unn mein aag lagne se charon taraf aag feyl gaye kitchen mein hi jiss ko humne saaf kiya aur kayi jagah par paint kiya main ne….. aur jale hue kapde aur kagazon ko main ne feink diya….

Saanvi ne chawla sahab ko phir se baahon mein zor se jakarte hue unnke gaalon par kiss kiya aur maafi maangi apne uss pagalpan ke liye. Chawla sahab ne ussko nahin thaama, wo tab bhi ghusse mein the, tab Saanvi ne rote hue kaha, “mujhko ek hug to kijiye nah kab se tadap rahi hoon aap ke ek hug ke liye, please mujhko apne baahon mein bharye nah ji?” kyun itna tarpa rahe ho mujhe ji? Iss chhati par mera haq tha aap ne Sanjana ko de diya yeh haq mujhse pehle ji? Mera kia kusoosr hai ji? Mat rulao mujhe eise? Chalo main haar gayi, main tut chuki hoon mujhse aur bardaasht nahin hota mujhe eise mat tadpao aap, main paagal ho jaungi sach mein… mujhko apne baahon mein zor se jakar lo nah pleaaaaaaasssssseeeeee!”

Wo itni zor se bilat bilat kar ek choti bachi ki tarah rone lagi unnko baahon mein jakre hue ke chawla sahab se dekha nah gaya aur ussne Saanvi ko zor se apne baahon mein bhar liya. Aur Saanvi aur ziada zor se rote hue unn ka shuriya ada kiya aur apne sar ko unnke chaati par dabaate hue wahan unnko chumne lagi. Aur chawla sahab ne bhi Saanvi ke maathe ko chumma aur phir usske gaal ko chumma phir halke se usske honthon se honthon ko lagaya aur Saanvi ne apne munh ko khol diya aur apne jeeb nikal kar chawla sahab ke honth par ferra to chawla sahab ne bhi munh khola aur Saanvi ne apne jeeb ko unnke munh mein dala aur chawla sahab ne ziada zor se Saanvi ko apne baahon mein bharte hue ussko kiss karne laga…… paanch salon mein ye unn donon ka pehla kikss tha.

To be continued……. (2580 wors from both updates)
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Lo kallo baat ab ye update to pehle wala se aur bhi jiada fadu aur majbut hai .
Kia kar rahe ho bidu? Faadte chale ja rahe ho
Itna mast aur majedar, lajawab, jhakaas updates de rela hai l apun k khopri me samajh nahin arela he k apun kia bolen ab
Kia likha hai bidu, kia mast fadu update likha he re
Tabiyat khuss kar diya tumne bidu
Tumko to prize milna chahie eise likhne k vaste.
Ab update k bare me bolta apun
To saanvi ne aag laga dala. Maar dala mar dala re
Chawla nahin hota to vo aur deepti jalke khak ho chuke hote upar rehti he to aag upar hi jiada hata aur saanvi aur bachi ki jali laash baramat hote.
Shukar he chawla keise bhi karke nikla aur pani se aaf bujhaya
Magae baaki jo hua saaf aur pain karna secondary ho gaya aur sab se jiada important hua saanvi ka rona aur chawa ka taras Khanna aur aakhir mein saanvi ko bahon mein bharna aur pehli baar kiss karna
Bidu jiss tarike se tumne shuru se ant rak sabhi vakiye ko likha hai na vo kaabile taarif hai
Hats off, salute he tere ko bidu.
Keep rocking bidu.
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Casinar said:
Update 74 Saanvi goes mad​

To Saanvi unnke paas jaakar baithi aur ussi komalta se kaha, “kyun bahot naraazgi hai ji? Main ne eisa kia kar diya ke aap mujhse itna naraz ho hmm?” aur phir apni awaaz ko aur dheemi karke sanvi ne zara phusphussate hue unnke kaan mein kaha, aaj raat ko nighty mein aaun aap ke paas to wapas baat karoge mujhse pehle ki tarah hmm boliye aawun apni nighty mein aap ke paas? Aaj Vivaan raat ko 1.30 ko aega full time hai boliye nah ji! Lagta hai aap ne mujhko barson se galle nahin lagaya ek hug dijiye nah mujhe!” aur apne baahon ko Saanvi ne chawla sahab ke kaandhe par dala…….

Ab aguey……

Chawla sahab samajh gaye ke Saanvi ussko seduce kar rahi hai aur socha - “achcha to ab yeh mujhko rijha rahi hai aur samajhti hai ke ab nighty mein aegi mere saamne to main pighal jaunga, jab main wo sab karna chahta tha, itne minnatein kiye the ussko apni nighty mein dekhne ke liye tab badi sati Savitri ban rahi thi ab thoda sa baat karna kia bandh kar diya to apna roop dikhaane lagi, chal main tujhe sabak sikhata hoon re aurat!!”

Aur bina koyi jawaab diye chawla sahab bed se uthe aur apna whishky ka glass haath mein liye lounge mein chale gaye Saanvi ko wahin bed par chorr kar!

Sanvi ne bilkool, bilkool bhi nahin socha tha ke wo weisa karega, ussne to socha tha ke itni komaltaa se baat karne se aur apni kapde utaarne wale baat se chawla sahab ussko baahon mein bhar lega, magar sab ulta hua…. Saanvi ne apne aap ko niche girrte hue feel kiya. Khud ko nicha mehsoos kiya jiss waqt chawla sahab bina ussko dekhe, saare baton ko sunne par bhi wahan se nikal gaye. Saanvi ko gehra thess pahuncha aur wo wahan se Deepti ko uthakar upar apne kamre mein chali gayi aur bed par baith kar khub royi. Baar baar soch rahi thi ke kitne pyar se unn ke kaanon mein baat kiye the Saanvi ne, eise private batein to kissi apnon se hi karte hein, ek aurat hokar eise baatein kissi apne se bade se karne ke bawajud chawla sahab ne usske baton ko ansuna kiya aur wahan se nikal gaye yeh Saanvi hazam nahin kar paa rahi thi.

Ussko ghussa ane laga aur turant ussi waqt ussne apni nighty pehni, bra ke bina aur apne baalon ko khola aur niche utri stair se chawla sahab ke taraf badhte hue aur unnke saamne lounge mein TV ke saamne khade hokar ghusse mein kaha, “kyun? Ab nahin dekhna mujhko eise, meri nangi badan dekhna chahte the nah aap? Mujhko pakarte the, mere jism par apna haath ferrte rehte the aur aaj mujhko eise thukraya ke jeise main ek bigri hui furniture hoon? Ab main chahti hoon ke aap mujhko nangi dekhe, dekhiye nighty utaar rahi hoon aap ke saamne, yeh lijiye mujhko nangi dekhiye, yeh hein mere boobs, panty bi utaarun ya aap utaaroge?”

Saanvi ne apni nighty utaar diye aur sirf apni panty mein khadi thi lounge mein chawla sahab ke saamne….. bahot ghusse mein thi, hanff rahi thi aur chawla sahab ke chehre mein dekh rahi thi ek bhooki sherni ki tarah….

Chawla sahab bilkool cool, normal ussko dekhta raha, Saanvi ke donon boobs nange unnke enkhon ke saamne the, Saanvi ke haanffne se boobs upar niche ho rahe the, Saanvi ka chehra laal tha, enkhen bhi kuch laal ho gaye the ghusse se….. aur Saanvi soch rahi thi ke ab to chawla sahab ussko apni baahon mein bharne zaroor aayega aur sorry kahega Saanvi ko…

Magar eisa kuch nah hua, jitna gambhirta thodi der pehle chawla sahab ne dikhaya tha ulta ab utna hi cool the aur araam se khade hue apne whisky sip karte hue apne kamre mein jaane lage to Saanvi ne chilla kar kaha, “AGAR AAP APNE KAMRE KE ANDAR GAYE TO MAIN YAHIN BAITHI RAHUNGI EISE HI NANGI VIVAAN KE WAAPAS ANE TAK!!SUNA AAP NE?”

Chawla sahab ne ek baar mudhkar ussko dekha, aur apne kamre ka darwaza zor se bandh kiya aur andar se lock laga diya!”

Saanvi aag babula ho rahi thi…. Ussne bahot saare saaman ko tod phor kiya lounge mein kayi whisky ki botalon ko kuchal dala farsh par, plates bhi tod daale …. Andar chawla sahab sab sun rahe the ke Saanvi pagla gayi hai aur sab kuch tod rahi hai, phir bhi wo kamre se nahin nikle….. Saanvi unnke darwaaze tak gaye zor zor se ghunsse maare unnke darwaze par aur chillate hue kaha “darwaza kholiye, koliye darwaza varna main kuch kar baithungi… suna aap ne…..” chawla sahab darwaza nahin khol rahe the to Sanvi ghusse se rone lagi aur rote hue weise hi chilaati jaa rahi thi aur zor se kaha, “ SANJANA KE SATH KIA KARTE HO AAP PATA HAI MUJHE.. JAB SE WO AAYI AAP KE ZINDAGI MEIN MUJHKO DOOR KIYA AAP NE, AAP KE CHHATI PAR USSKI KI HUI NISHAAN DEKHI HAI MAIN NE JAB AAP NASHE MEIN SOYE HUE THE.. KIA HAI USS MEIN JO MUJH MEIN NAHIN HAI??.... AGAR AAP NE DARWAZA NAHIN KHOLA TO MAIN GHAR KO AAG LAGA DUNGI, MAIN SACH KEH RAHI HOON MAIN GHAR KO AAG LAGA DUNGI SUNNA AAP NE?!! KHOLIYE DARWAZA!!”

Chawla sahab phir bhi nahin hille…… aur weise hi bina nighty ke sirf apni panty mein Saanvi upar gayi apne kamre mein, Deepti neendh mein thi, Saanvi ne unn sabhi kapdon ko nikala, jo pichle 5 saalon mein chawla sahab ne usske liye kharide the, bahot mehnge kapde, salwar, jeans, tops, sariyan sab ekatha kiya Saanvi ne aur kuch gehne bhi, sab lekar Saanvi niche aayi aur sabko chawla sahab ke darwaze ke paas rakha, aur phir se chilla kar kaha, aap nahin nikloge nah? Nahin sun rahe ho aap to apne naak ko kholkar sunghna kia smell arahi hai…..

Saanvi ne ek whisky ka naya botal khola aur saare whisky ko unn kapdon par dala, sab ko bheego diya whisky se aur lighter se unn mein aag bhadka diya, sab mein aag lag gaye aur jalne lage…… aur wahan se Saanvi chal kar gayi lounge se apni nighty liya aur pehna, aur ahiste ahiste rote hue stairs chadhne lagi apne kamre ke taraf jaate hue……

Chawla sahab ke kamre mein kuch dhuen daakhil hue aur jalne ki bhuh aayi to chawla sahab jhapat ke darwaze ko khole to dekha ke usske kamre se baahar nikalna mushkil tha, Saanvi seedhiyon par khadi dekh rahi thi aur zor se hanssne lagi jab dekha ke chawla sahab baahar nahin nikal paa rahe hein, chawla sahab wahan se seedhiyon par Saanvi ko dekh paa rahe the aur zor se chillaate hue kaha, “paagal ho gayi ho tum? Yeh kia kiya tumne? Saare ghar mein aag feyl jaega, jaldi se paani lao, Saanvi paani lao aur aag bujhao jaldi! Main nahin nikal paunga bahot aag hai!!!”


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Casi bhai bhut mast, SHAANDAAR, LAJAWAB update hai bhai
Main kia kahun keise kahun mere paas alfaz nahin, samajh mein nahin araha k keise kia kahun.
Ye thread, ye kahani mujhe behad passand hai to har baar update padhne k baad main socha karta hun k age kia ho sakta hai. Kabhi kabhi sahi sochata hoon wohi hota hai jo main ne pehle socha tha... to kal raat k update padhne k baad main ne kuch anuman lagaya tha k kia hoga aaj k update mein...
Magar jab padha (donon updates padh liya hoon) padne k baad ab samajh mein aya k ek writer writer hota hai. Main aap ki tarah soch hi nahin sakta...
Kia dimaagh paya hai aap ne bhai vah vah
Kamaal k update likhe ho bhai... hosh ydh gaye yaar jo bhi main ne socha tha 1 pratishak bhi nahin hua.... yeh aap ne kitne oonche level ka likha hai main khud ko chota mehsus karta hoon.
To update par ate hein
Bhai saanvi bechari ne sab jatan kiye magar chawla bada kathod dil nikla aur bechari saanvi haar gayi iss ladaayi mein iss ke liye mujhe saanvi k liye bhut afsos hua.... aap ne role chawla ko de diya aur saanvi ko usske saamne jhuka diya yaar
Magar saanvi phir bhi chaayi hui thi pure update mein bahut dhamaal kiya, tod phod kiya yahan tak k aag bhi laga diya :lol:
Magar kitna royi bechari.... tadap kar reh gayi, nighty mein bhi gayi unnke saamne magar koyi assar nah hua chawla hinshiyaar nikla.... saanvi nangi bhi ho gayi usske saamne phir bhi chawla satte rahe aur saanvi paagal ho gayi.... BECHAARI...
Haan ye shak tha mujhe k saanvi ne chawla ke chaati par sanjana ki nishaan dekha hoga jo ussne rote hue chilla kar kaha chawla saab ko...
Bhai JABARDAST UPDATE BHAI JABARDAST.
 
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Update 75 The Fire…..​

Saanvi ab rone lagi thi magar jeise chipak gayi thi stairs par bilkool nahin hill rahi thi, phir baith gayi wahin seedhiyon par zor se chillakar rote hue. Chawla sahab ne dekha ke wo nahin hillne wali wahan se to apne kamre se ek kursi se unn kapdon ko push kiya aur dawdte hue kitchen se balti mein paani bhar kar aag ko bujhaane gaye…. Teen chaar baar weisa karne se aaj bujhi…..

Saanvi wahin stairs par baithi sab dekh rahe the. Chawla sahab usske paas gaye usske baahon ko thaam kar ussko khada kiya aur zor se do thapad mara usske donon gaalon par jiss se Saanvi ke gaalon par nishaan ho gaye aur wo phut phut kar rone lagi chawla sahab ko apne baahon mein bharke. Chawla sahab bahot ghusse mein the ab, aur Saanvi ka ghussa shant ho gaya sab manzar dekhne ke baad, wo buss roti jaa rahi thi. Chawla sahab ne ussko gale se nahin lagaya sirf Saanvi ne chawla sahab ko thama tha apne baahon mein aur ro rahi thi… pure ghar mein jalne ki badbhu feyl gaye the, ghuttan si hone lagi thi saans lena mushkil ho raha tha, to chawla sahab ne Saanvi ko zor se jhigjhorra aur ussko apne kamre mein jaane ko kaha aur darwaza bilkool band rakhne ko kaha, aur sabhi darwaze aur uss taraf ke khidkiyon ko kholne ko kaha… aur khud chawla sahab ne main darwaza khola aur sabhi khirkhiyon ko bhi…. Jaate jaate sanvi ne rote hue kaha, “sab kapde jo aap ne mujhe diye the wohi the, unn mein gehne bhi hein sab jal gaye nah? Achcha hua aap ki di hui chiz ab nahin chahiye mujhe sab le li jiye wapas; nahin chahiye aap ki chizein mujhe, nahin chahiye, nahin chahiye……”

Chwla sahab ne sab jale hue chizon ko uthaya, ac on kiya, pankhon ko bhi on kiya chaaron taraf magar badbhu weise hi the halaan ke sab dhuwan ghayab ho gaye the…. Chawla sahab ke darwaze ke paas wala upar chat ke taraf sab kala ho gaya tha, usske darwaze aluminium ke the to wo salaamat the ussko kuch nahin hua tha sirf kala ho gaya tha jissko saaf karne ke baad thik ho jaega…. Magar ghar mein chaaron taraf udhe hue raakh aur jale hue kapde pade hue the…..

Chawla sahab ab sochne laga ke vivaan aya to ab kia kaha jaega ussko…. Yeh badbhu chhupana to namumkin tha, ussne socha ke pata nahin Saanvi kia bataegi vivaan ko ab, ek accident kehkar Vivaan ko bolna chahiye, sanvi ko bhi wohi baat vivaan ko kehna chahiye….. to chawla sahab ko Saanvi se wapas baat karna padega unnhon ne socha….

To wo gaye upar Saanvi ke darwaze ke paas aur khatkhataya usske kamre ka darwaza…. Saanvi weise hi ussi nighty mein bed par baithi hui thi aur andar se kaha, “khula hai aap andar aa sakte ho mera darwaza kabhi lock nahin hota kia yeh bhi nahin pata aap ko?”

Chawla sahab ne darwaze ko kholkar gambhirta se kaha, “chilla kyun rahi ho? Bachi soyi hui hai nah? Baahar aao kaam hai niche! Aur kapde pehen kar ao iss nighty mein nahin, jaldi karo!”

Yeh kehkar wo niche chale gaye aur saare jale hue kapdon ke tukde uthakar ek bada sa plastic wala dumping bag mein daal rahe the. Kuch der baad Saanvi niche aayi kapde pehen kar aur khade hokar sabhi jale hue kapdon ko dekh kar rote hue kaha, “kitna pyar tha mujhe inn sab kapdon se, kitne pyar se sambhaal rakhi thi main sabko kyunke aap ka diya hua tha, sab jal gaye, sab ke sab jal gaye ek bhi nahin hai jo thik hai?” aur Chawla sahab se bag chin kar ussmein dekhne lagi ke kahin koyi bacha hua sahi kapda to nahin unn mein… to chawla sahab ne kaha, “ab kyun pachta rahi ho? Jab aag lagaya tab nahin socha tha? Jaldi sab saaf karo main inn sabko bag mein bhar kar baahar door pheinkne jaa raha hoon, vivaan ko nahin pata chalna chahiye ke aag tumne lagaayi thi, kehna hoga ke accidentally aag lag gayi, kapdon ka zikr bilkool bhi mat karna….”

Saanvi niche zameen par baith kar rone lagi aur pucha, “to kia kahenge Vivaan ko ke aag keise laga? Kahan laga? Yeh dekhiye aap ke darwaze ke paas kitna kala ho gaya hai, pura ghar badbhu se bhara hua hai, kia kehna hoga vivaan ko? Batayiye ek hi baat bolna hoga donon ko!!”

Chawla sahab ne kaha, “ussko abi aane mein waqt hai, main yeh sab feink ka rata hoon tab sochenge ke kia batana hai ussko, tab tak tum paani se yeh sab saaf karo jaldi, jahan jahan raakh feyle hein sab saaf karo main abhi aaya!!”

Chawla sahab ne sabhi jale hue kapdon ko bag mein achci tarah se bandh karke apne car mein dala aur chale gaye kahin door feinke ko. Idhar Saanvi lag gayi sab saaf karne mein. Sabhi khirkiyan khule hue the aur shukar hai ke baahar kaafi tez hawa tha jiss se badbhu baahar nikal rahe the…

Chawla sahab koyi 15 minat mein wapas aaye. Aate hi kaha ke pura ghar jala hua mehek raha hai, vivaan ko sab pata chal jaega… thehro main store se paint lata hoon, by chance paint wale dibbe white paint bache hein aur ghar ka colour white hai to main sabse pehle mere kamre ke darwaze ke paas paint karta hoon tum wahan ek bheege hue kapde se saaf karo pehle main wahan paint karunga, taake vivaan ko pata nah chale ke aag waha lagi thi, kahenge ke aag kitchen mein lagi thi, kitchen yahan se bilkool Karib hi hai…..” to Saanvi ne pucha, “mere gehne kidhar hein? Wo to nahin jalte nah aag mein?”

Chawla sahab ne ghusse mein kaha, “kyun? Tumko to mere di hui chiz nahin chahiye nah? To ab kyun gehne chahiye?”

Saanvi ne ensoo bhare enkhon se, kusurwaar nazron se kaha, “batayiye nah? Kia aap ne sambhal ke rakha nah? Wapas dijiye mujhe, bahot pyare the sab mujhe!!” to chawla sahab ne apne kamre se unn gehnon ko laakar ussko de diya. Sab kale ho gaye the. Chawla sahab ne tab kaha, “nahin wapas do tum issko apne paas abhi nahin rakh sakte, tumhare kamre mein isski badbhu abhi nahin jana chahiye, tumhare kamre mein bilkool dhuan aur badbhu nahin pahunche hein, isse mere hi paas rehne do filhaal kal saaf karke wapas le lena.”

Aur raat ke 1 baje tak sab kuch donon ne milkar saaf kiya aur chawla sahab ne apne kamre ke paas sab paint kiya aur bilkool nahin dikh raha tha ke wahan aag lagi hui thi, paint ki khushbhu bhi ane lage the dhuen ke saath mix….

Aur sab saaf hone ke baad Saanvi ko chawla sahab ne samjhaya ke Vivaan ko yeh batana hai ke oven ke paas jo kapde garam bartanon ko pakarne ke liye hote hein wo pade hue the aur unn mein aag lagne se charon taraf aag feyl gaye kitchen mein hi jiss ko humne saaf kiya aur kayi jagah par paint kiya main ne….. aur jale hue kapde aur kagazon ko main ne feink diya….

Saanvi ne chawla sahab ko phir se baahon mein zor se jakarte hue unnke gaalon par kiss kiya aur maafi maangi apne uss pagalpan ke liye. Chawla sahab ne ussko nahin thaama, wo tab bhi ghusse mein the, tab Saanvi ne rote hue kaha, “mujhko ek hug to kijiye nah kab se tadap rahi hoon aap ke ek hug ke liye, please mujhko apne baahon mein bharye nah ji?” kyun itna tarpa rahe ho mujhe ji? Iss chhati par mera haq tha aap ne Sanjana ko de diya yeh haq mujhse pehle ji? Mera kia kusoosr hai ji? Mat rulao mujhe eise? Chalo main haar gayi, main tut chuki hoon mujhse aur bardaasht nahin hota mujhe eise mat tadpao aap, main paagal ho jaungi sach mein… mujhko apne baahon mein zor se jakar lo nah pleaaaaaaasssssseeeeee!”

Wo itni zor se bilat bilat kar ek choti bachi ki tarah rone lagi unnko baahon mein jakre hue ke chawla sahab se dekha nah gaya aur ussne Saanvi ko zor se apne baahon mein bhar liya. Aur Saanvi aur ziada zor se rote hue unn ka shuriya ada kiya aur apne sar ko unnke chaati par dabaate hue wahan unnko chumne lagi. Aur chawla sahab ne bhi Saanvi ke maathe ko chumma aur phir usske gaal ko chumma phir halke se usske honthon se honthon ko lagaya aur Saanvi ne apne munh ko khol diya aur apne jeeb nikal kar chawla sahab ke honth par ferra to chawla sahab ne bhi munh khola aur Saanvi ne apne jeeb ko unnke munh mein dala aur chawla sahab ne ziada zor se Saanvi ko apne baahon mein bharte hue ussko kiss karne laga…… paanch salon mein ye unn donon ka pehla kikss tha.

To be continued……. (2580 wors from both updates)
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Iss update mein bhi humgama jaari raha kAfi der tak
Magar aakhir mein jo likha na bhai wo dil ko chhuh gaya.
Saanvi ka wo bilat ke rona unnke gale lag ke
Jiss tarah se aap ne ussko bayaan kiya hai bhai wo bada emotional hai bhai.
Chawla ko saanvi ko aakhir gale lagana hi pada ussko jakarna hi pada
Aur 5 saalon mein pehli baar chalo kiss se to shuru hua donon ka....
Vah bhai vah
Lajawaab majedaar shaandaar update bhai maja agaya bhai. Bahut bahut hi passand aya donon update bhai
Bilkul bhi nahin socha tha itna kuch ho jaega.
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Update 74 Saanvi goes mad​

To Saanvi unnke paas jaakar baithi aur ussi komalta se kaha, “kyun bahot naraazgi hai ji? Main ne eisa kia kar diya ke aap mujhse itna naraz ho hmm?” aur phir apni awaaz ko aur dheemi karke sanvi ne zara phusphussate hue unnke kaan mein kaha, aaj raat ko nighty mein aaun aap ke paas to wapas baat karoge mujhse pehle ki tarah hmm boliye aawun apni nighty mein aap ke paas? Aaj Vivaan raat ko 1.30 ko aega full time hai boliye nah ji! Lagta hai aap ne mujhko barson se galle nahin lagaya ek hug dijiye nah mujhe!” aur apne baahon ko Saanvi ne chawla sahab ke kaandhe par dala…….

Ab aguey……

Chawla sahab samajh gaye ke Saanvi ussko seduce kar rahi hai aur socha - “achcha to ab yeh mujhko rijha rahi hai aur samajhti hai ke ab nighty mein aegi mere saamne to main pighal jaunga, jab main wo sab karna chahta tha, itne minnatein kiye the ussko apni nighty mein dekhne ke liye tab badi sati Savitri ban rahi thi ab thoda sa baat karna kia bandh kar diya to apna roop dikhaane lagi, chal main tujhe sabak sikhata hoon re aurat!!”

Aur bina koyi jawaab diye chawla sahab bed se uthe aur apna whishky ka glass haath mein liye lounge mein chale gaye Saanvi ko wahin bed par chorr kar!

Sanvi ne bilkool, bilkool bhi nahin socha tha ke wo weisa karega, ussne to socha tha ke itni komaltaa se baat karne se aur apni kapde utaarne wale baat se chawla sahab ussko baahon mein bhar lega, magar sab ulta hua…. Saanvi ne apne aap ko niche girrte hue feel kiya. Khud ko nicha mehsoos kiya jiss waqt chawla sahab bina ussko dekhe, saare baton ko sunne par bhi wahan se nikal gaye. Saanvi ko gehra thess pahuncha aur wo wahan se Deepti ko uthakar upar apne kamre mein chali gayi aur bed par baith kar khub royi. Baar baar soch rahi thi ke kitne pyar se unn ke kaanon mein baat kiye the Saanvi ne, eise private batein to kissi apnon se hi karte hein, ek aurat hokar eise baatein kissi apne se bade se karne ke bawajud chawla sahab ne usske baton ko ansuna kiya aur wahan se nikal gaye yeh Saanvi hazam nahin kar paa rahi thi.

Ussko ghussa ane laga aur turant ussi waqt ussne apni nighty pehni, bra ke bina aur apne baalon ko khola aur niche utri stair se chawla sahab ke taraf badhte hue aur unnke saamne lounge mein TV ke saamne khade hokar ghusse mein kaha, “kyun? Ab nahin dekhna mujhko eise, meri nangi badan dekhna chahte the nah aap? Mujhko pakarte the, mere jism par apna haath ferrte rehte the aur aaj mujhko eise thukraya ke jeise main ek bigri hui furniture hoon? Ab main chahti hoon ke aap mujhko nangi dekhe, dekhiye nighty utaar rahi hoon aap ke saamne, yeh lijiye mujhko nangi dekhiye, yeh hein mere boobs, panty bi utaarun ya aap utaaroge?”

Saanvi ne apni nighty utaar diye aur sirf apni panty mein khadi thi lounge mein chawla sahab ke saamne….. bahot ghusse mein thi, hanff rahi thi aur chawla sahab ke chehre mein dekh rahi thi ek bhooki sherni ki tarah….

Chawla sahab bilkool cool, normal ussko dekhta raha, Saanvi ke donon boobs nange unnke enkhon ke saamne the, Saanvi ke haanffne se boobs upar niche ho rahe the, Saanvi ka chehra laal tha, enkhen bhi kuch laal ho gaye the ghusse se….. aur Saanvi soch rahi thi ke ab to chawla sahab ussko apni baahon mein bharne zaroor aayega aur sorry kahega Saanvi ko…

Magar eisa kuch nah hua, jitna gambhirta thodi der pehle chawla sahab ne dikhaya tha ulta ab utna hi cool the aur araam se khade hue apne whisky sip karte hue apne kamre mein jaane lage to Saanvi ne chilla kar kaha, “AGAR AAP APNE KAMRE KE ANDAR GAYE TO MAIN YAHIN BAITHI RAHUNGI EISE HI NANGI VIVAAN KE WAAPAS ANE TAK!!SUNA AAP NE?”

Chawla sahab ne ek baar mudhkar ussko dekha, aur apne kamre ka darwaza zor se bandh kiya aur andar se lock laga diya!”

Saanvi aag babula ho rahi thi…. Ussne bahot saare saaman ko tod phor kiya lounge mein kayi whisky ki botalon ko kuchal dala farsh par, plates bhi tod daale …. Andar chawla sahab sab sun rahe the ke Saanvi pagla gayi hai aur sab kuch tod rahi hai, phir bhi wo kamre se nahin nikle….. Saanvi unnke darwaaze tak gaye zor zor se ghunsse maare unnke darwaze par aur chillate hue kaha “darwaza kholiye, koliye darwaza varna main kuch kar baithungi… suna aap ne…..” chawla sahab darwaza nahin khol rahe the to Sanvi ghusse se rone lagi aur rote hue weise hi chilaati jaa rahi thi aur zor se kaha, “ SANJANA KE SATH KIA KARTE HO AAP PATA HAI MUJHE.. JAB SE WO AAYI AAP KE ZINDAGI MEIN MUJHKO DOOR KIYA AAP NE, AAP KE CHHATI PAR USSKI KI HUI NISHAAN DEKHI HAI MAIN NE JAB AAP NASHE MEIN SOYE HUE THE.. KIA HAI USS MEIN JO MUJH MEIN NAHIN HAI??.... AGAR AAP NE DARWAZA NAHIN KHOLA TO MAIN GHAR KO AAG LAGA DUNGI, MAIN SACH KEH RAHI HOON MAIN GHAR KO AAG LAGA DUNGI SUNNA AAP NE?!! KHOLIYE DARWAZA!!”

Chawla sahab phir bhi nahin hille…… aur weise hi bina nighty ke sirf apni panty mein Saanvi upar gayi apne kamre mein, Deepti neendh mein thi, Saanvi ne unn sabhi kapdon ko nikala, jo pichle 5 saalon mein chawla sahab ne usske liye kharide the, bahot mehnge kapde, salwar, jeans, tops, sariyan sab ekatha kiya Saanvi ne aur kuch gehne bhi, sab lekar Saanvi niche aayi aur sabko chawla sahab ke darwaze ke paas rakha, aur phir se chilla kar kaha, aap nahin nikloge nah? Nahin sun rahe ho aap to apne naak ko kholkar sunghna kia smell arahi hai…..

Saanvi ne ek whisky ka naya botal khola aur saare whisky ko unn kapdon par dala, sab ko bheego diya whisky se aur lighter se unn mein aag bhadka diya, sab mein aag lag gaye aur jalne lage…… aur wahan se Saanvi chal kar gayi lounge se apni nighty liya aur pehna, aur ahiste ahiste rote hue stairs chadhne lagi apne kamre ke taraf jaate hue……

Chawla sahab ke kamre mein kuch dhuen daakhil hue aur jalne ki bhuh aayi to chawla sahab jhapat ke darwaze ko khole to dekha ke usske kamre se baahar nikalna mushkil tha, Saanvi seedhiyon par khadi dekh rahi thi aur zor se hanssne lagi jab dekha ke chawla sahab baahar nahin nikal paa rahe hein, chawla sahab wahan se seedhiyon par Saanvi ko dekh paa rahe the aur zor se chillaate hue kaha, “paagal ho gayi ho tum? Yeh kia kiya tumne? Saare ghar mein aag feyl jaega, jaldi se paani lao, Saanvi paani lao aur aag bujhao jaldi! Main nahin nikal paunga bahot aag hai!!!”


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Awesome update casi bhai behad hi shandaar aur lajawab update hai bhai,
saanvi se unki berukhi sahi nhi jaa rahi hai aur isliye vo bagair kapde ke chawla sahab ke samne aa gayi, lekin phir bhi unhone uss ki taraf nhi dekha to saanvi gusse se pagal ho gayi aur usne chawla Sahab ke dwara diye gaye saare kapado aur gahano me aag laga diya hai
 
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Casinar said:
Update 75 The Fire…..​

Saanvi ab rone lagi thi magar jeise chipak gayi thi stairs par bilkool nahin hill rahi thi, phir baith gayi wahin seedhiyon par zor se chillakar rote hue. Chawla sahab ne dekha ke wo nahin hillne wali wahan se to apne kamre se ek kursi se unn kapdon ko push kiya aur dawdte hue kitchen se balti mein paani bhar kar aag ko bujhaane gaye…. Teen chaar baar weisa karne se aaj bujhi…..

Saanvi wahin stairs par baithi sab dekh rahe the. Chawla sahab usske paas gaye usske baahon ko thaam kar ussko khada kiya aur zor se do thapad mara usske donon gaalon par jiss se Saanvi ke gaalon par nishaan ho gaye aur wo phut phut kar rone lagi chawla sahab ko apne baahon mein bharke. Chawla sahab bahot ghusse mein the ab, aur Saanvi ka ghussa shant ho gaya sab manzar dekhne ke baad, wo buss roti jaa rahi thi. Chawla sahab ne ussko gale se nahin lagaya sirf Saanvi ne chawla sahab ko thama tha apne baahon mein aur ro rahi thi… pure ghar mein jalne ki badbhu feyl gaye the, ghuttan si hone lagi thi saans lena mushkil ho raha tha, to chawla sahab ne Saanvi ko zor se jhigjhorra aur ussko apne kamre mein jaane ko kaha aur darwaza bilkool band rakhne ko kaha, aur sabhi darwaze aur uss taraf ke khidkiyon ko kholne ko kaha… aur khud chawla sahab ne main darwaza khola aur sabhi khirkhiyon ko bhi…. Jaate jaate sanvi ne rote hue kaha, “sab kapde jo aap ne mujhe diye the wohi the, unn mein gehne bhi hein sab jal gaye nah? Achcha hua aap ki di hui chiz ab nahin chahiye mujhe sab le li jiye wapas; nahin chahiye aap ki chizein mujhe, nahin chahiye, nahin chahiye……”

Chwla sahab ne sab jale hue chizon ko uthaya, ac on kiya, pankhon ko bhi on kiya chaaron taraf magar badbhu weise hi the halaan ke sab dhuwan ghayab ho gaye the…. Chawla sahab ke darwaze ke paas wala upar chat ke taraf sab kala ho gaya tha, usske darwaze aluminium ke the to wo salaamat the ussko kuch nahin hua tha sirf kala ho gaya tha jissko saaf karne ke baad thik ho jaega…. Magar ghar mein chaaron taraf udhe hue raakh aur jale hue kapde pade hue the…..

Chawla sahab ab sochne laga ke vivaan aya to ab kia kaha jaega ussko…. Yeh badbhu chhupana to namumkin tha, ussne socha ke pata nahin Saanvi kia bataegi vivaan ko ab, ek accident kehkar Vivaan ko bolna chahiye, sanvi ko bhi wohi baat vivaan ko kehna chahiye….. to chawla sahab ko Saanvi se wapas baat karna padega unnhon ne socha….

To wo gaye upar Saanvi ke darwaze ke paas aur khatkhataya usske kamre ka darwaza…. Saanvi weise hi ussi nighty mein bed par baithi hui thi aur andar se kaha, “khula hai aap andar aa sakte ho mera darwaza kabhi lock nahin hota kia yeh bhi nahin pata aap ko?”

Chawla sahab ne darwaze ko kholkar gambhirta se kaha, “chilla kyun rahi ho? Bachi soyi hui hai nah? Baahar aao kaam hai niche! Aur kapde pehen kar ao iss nighty mein nahin, jaldi karo!”

Yeh kehkar wo niche chale gaye aur saare jale hue kapdon ke tukde uthakar ek bada sa plastic wala dumping bag mein daal rahe the. Kuch der baad Saanvi niche aayi kapde pehen kar aur khade hokar sabhi jale hue kapdon ko dekh kar rote hue kaha, “kitna pyar tha mujhe inn sab kapdon se, kitne pyar se sambhaal rakhi thi main sabko kyunke aap ka diya hua tha, sab jal gaye, sab ke sab jal gaye ek bhi nahin hai jo thik hai?” aur Chawla sahab se bag chin kar ussmein dekhne lagi ke kahin koyi bacha hua sahi kapda to nahin unn mein… to chawla sahab ne kaha, “ab kyun pachta rahi ho? Jab aag lagaya tab nahin socha tha? Jaldi sab saaf karo main inn sabko bag mein bhar kar baahar door pheinkne jaa raha hoon, vivaan ko nahin pata chalna chahiye ke aag tumne lagaayi thi, kehna hoga ke accidentally aag lag gayi, kapdon ka zikr bilkool bhi mat karna….”

Saanvi niche zameen par baith kar rone lagi aur pucha, “to kia kahenge Vivaan ko ke aag keise laga? Kahan laga? Yeh dekhiye aap ke darwaze ke paas kitna kala ho gaya hai, pura ghar badbhu se bhara hua hai, kia kehna hoga vivaan ko? Batayiye ek hi baat bolna hoga donon ko!!”

Chawla sahab ne kaha, “ussko abi aane mein waqt hai, main yeh sab feink ka rata hoon tab sochenge ke kia batana hai ussko, tab tak tum paani se yeh sab saaf karo jaldi, jahan jahan raakh feyle hein sab saaf karo main abhi aaya!!”

Chawla sahab ne sabhi jale hue kapdon ko bag mein achci tarah se bandh karke apne car mein dala aur chale gaye kahin door feinke ko. Idhar Saanvi lag gayi sab saaf karne mein. Sabhi khirkiyan khule hue the aur shukar hai ke baahar kaafi tez hawa tha jiss se badbhu baahar nikal rahe the…

Chawla sahab koyi 15 minat mein wapas aaye. Aate hi kaha ke pura ghar jala hua mehek raha hai, vivaan ko sab pata chal jaega… thehro main store se paint lata hoon, by chance paint wale dibbe white paint bache hein aur ghar ka colour white hai to main sabse pehle mere kamre ke darwaze ke paas paint karta hoon tum wahan ek bheege hue kapde se saaf karo pehle main wahan paint karunga, taake vivaan ko pata nah chale ke aag waha lagi thi, kahenge ke aag kitchen mein lagi thi, kitchen yahan se bilkool Karib hi hai…..” to Saanvi ne pucha, “mere gehne kidhar hein? Wo to nahin jalte nah aag mein?”

Chawla sahab ne ghusse mein kaha, “kyun? Tumko to mere di hui chiz nahin chahiye nah? To ab kyun gehne chahiye?”

Saanvi ne ensoo bhare enkhon se, kusurwaar nazron se kaha, “batayiye nah? Kia aap ne sambhal ke rakha nah? Wapas dijiye mujhe, bahot pyare the sab mujhe!!” to chawla sahab ne apne kamre se unn gehnon ko laakar ussko de diya. Sab kale ho gaye the. Chawla sahab ne tab kaha, “nahin wapas do tum issko apne paas abhi nahin rakh sakte, tumhare kamre mein isski badbhu abhi nahin jana chahiye, tumhare kamre mein bilkool dhuan aur badbhu nahin pahunche hein, isse mere hi paas rehne do filhaal kal saaf karke wapas le lena.”

Aur raat ke 1 baje tak sab kuch donon ne milkar saaf kiya aur chawla sahab ne apne kamre ke paas sab paint kiya aur bilkool nahin dikh raha tha ke wahan aag lagi hui thi, paint ki khushbhu bhi ane lage the dhuen ke saath mix….

Aur sab saaf hone ke baad Saanvi ko chawla sahab ne samjhaya ke Vivaan ko yeh batana hai ke oven ke paas jo kapde garam bartanon ko pakarne ke liye hote hein wo pade hue the aur unn mein aag lagne se charon taraf aag feyl gaye kitchen mein hi jiss ko humne saaf kiya aur kayi jagah par paint kiya main ne….. aur jale hue kapde aur kagazon ko main ne feink diya….

Saanvi ne chawla sahab ko phir se baahon mein zor se jakarte hue unnke gaalon par kiss kiya aur maafi maangi apne uss pagalpan ke liye. Chawla sahab ne ussko nahin thaama, wo tab bhi ghusse mein the, tab Saanvi ne rote hue kaha, “mujhko ek hug to kijiye nah kab se tadap rahi hoon aap ke ek hug ke liye, please mujhko apne baahon mein bharye nah ji?” kyun itna tarpa rahe ho mujhe ji? Iss chhati par mera haq tha aap ne Sanjana ko de diya yeh haq mujhse pehle ji? Mera kia kusoosr hai ji? Mat rulao mujhe eise? Chalo main haar gayi, main tut chuki hoon mujhse aur bardaasht nahin hota mujhe eise mat tadpao aap, main paagal ho jaungi sach mein… mujhko apne baahon mein zor se jakar lo nah pleaaaaaaasssssseeeeee!”

Wo itni zor se bilat bilat kar ek choti bachi ki tarah rone lagi unnko baahon mein jakre hue ke chawla sahab se dekha nah gaya aur ussne Saanvi ko zor se apne baahon mein bhar liya. Aur Saanvi aur ziada zor se rote hue unn ka shuriya ada kiya aur apne sar ko unnke chaati par dabaate hue wahan unnko chumne lagi. Aur chawla sahab ne bhi Saanvi ke maathe ko chumma aur phir usske gaal ko chumma phir halke se usske honthon se honthon ko lagaya aur Saanvi ne apne munh ko khol diya aur apne jeeb nikal kar chawla sahab ke honth par ferra to chawla sahab ne bhi munh khola aur Saanvi ne apne jeeb ko unnke munh mein dala aur chawla sahab ne ziada zor se Saanvi ko apne baahon mein bharte hue ussko kiss karne laga…… paanch salon mein ye unn donon ka pehla kikss tha.

To be continued……. (2580 wors from both updates)
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Awesome update casi bhai,
ye update padhane ke baad to dil garden garden ho gaya,
chawla sahab aur saanvi ne milkar saare ghar ko saaf kar diya hai, chawla sahab ne badi muskil se aag par kaabu kiya hai,
aur gusse me unhone saanvi ko thappar bhi jad diya hai,
aakhir kar saanvi ke haar manane aur uske itna rone ke baad chawla sahab ka gussa bhi thanda ho hi gaya hai, aur unhone saanvi ko maaf kar diya hai,
saanvi ke saath unka first kiss itna lajawab tha, ki aisa lag raha hai jaise aapne poori bhavnao ko iss ek kiss me udel kar rakh diya hai,
dekhte hai ab aage kya hota hai
Waiting for next update bhai
 
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idhar ki aaj ki update ka intejar rahega bidu :yay:

January 16th ko shuru kiya aur 2 mahinon mein 75 updates likh diye bidu :
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Jitu kumar said:
Awesome update casi bhai,
behad hi shandaar, lajawab aur amazing update,
anand to itna subah subah phir se sanjana ke sath suru ho gaya,
Aur ab chawla sahab ghar ja rahe hai,
aur ye bhi soch rahe hai ki sanvi abhi kya kar rahi hogi
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thanks very much jitu bhai :love:
 
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