Incest Chawla Family Ki Kahani - Adultery, Romance,Eroticism, Incest. EXCLUSIVELY FOR XFORUM (COMPLETED)

[Casinar]

Superb

thanx loads james

 

[Casinar]

Fantastic

thanks james bro

 

[Casinar]

Bro this is really wonderful an update
loved it very much. the eroticism between chawla and saanvi is very very hot and dick raising
too good my dear, you have done a very good job by adding such intense mement these two characters whcih really enhances the story's quality.
the funnu part where the boss says he is a sad man is well thought of
and the scenes in the bedroom are really very erotic
hats off bro and thank you for giving us such lovely updates

thanks loads rowdy bro

 

[Casinar]

Brother,I think it will be more exciting and erotic if Chawla Sahab seduces Saanvi when her husband is in the house. In one hand she will fear to be caught by her husband on the other hand she will also feel extreme sexual pleasure by thinking this taboo acts.

it has already happened several morning when Vivaan is still sleeping chawla is trying saanvi in her nighty....recently also this happened in the early morning bro

 

[Casinar]

Have read a lot of your stories at times I today feel that I know what you will write not the way I think but somewhere mine and your thoughts will amalgamate because flow pattern will be different but the basic crux which matters most might end up same. You will keep on changing after my post and I would keep on guessing your line of thoughts . As of today despite of so many updates there is hardly a thoughtline that could be visible for a reader or even if a so called writer and that is the beauty of your writing. keep it up as you said its a long story that means reaching the finale is a long route which obviously has to be to make a story interesting and making readers guess n fail ( the target of a writer) . To me after your last response the story is at a juvenile stage and lot of options are possible. Ultimately Saanvi will copulate with her father in law but under what conditions and how. That's the only beauty of your story giving limelight to Sanjana but the target is Saanvi

thanks loads

 

[Casinar]

from now onwards what I think will send you pm of that so that thread line does not get interfered and your thought process too because stating a thing publicaly might force you to deviate. It happened with me and I want that reader to reach you and make you face his music.

as u wish

 

[Rahul]

waiting next update

 

[Casinar]

wo, fantastic my friend.
casi bro this is just marvelous, you know i read this update three times
honestly, you always amaze me with your writing my friend
This update has such a thrilling content that we forget eroticism and go with emotions then back to erotics and again to eroticism, wow casi bro u r just awesome my dear
what do i say about the update itself?!
the bonding of these two characters is very intense and their relationship for the past 5 years that you have described in two updates last time regarding these two only is enough to feel how they are attached to each other. there is respect, there is love, there is feeling for each other but regarding sex it was nil past 5 years.
the entry of sanjana made Mister chawla feel that if he is getting a young, charming girl like sanjana on his bed so why not saanvi. this is what made him try saanvi also, am i right? you mentioned this in few updates when chawla himsefl said this. And only and only Sanjana brought that feeling in mister chawla that took him towards sanvi in that direction
Now saanvi is confused either she should go with the flow or keep herself away of this.... and she keeps repeating that she is not sanjana and she has strong doubt that chawla is having such relationship with sanjana but she does not know for sure
phewwww where will this lead to i can hardly say but your writing is awesome, its a delight to read from you and i will and cannot stop eagerly waiting for your next updates whatever be the content.
Chawla now goes towards sanjana and saanvi is very reluctant then i am wondering what you will write when Chawla will return from sanjana's place in the evening!!
i feel something is being cooked
and i seriously feel for the moment sanjana is shadowed by saanvi, sanvi has stolen the show for the moment, all readers according to comments seems to be favouring saanvi, even me, but sanjana remains my favourite though.
thnks for this wonderful story again bro, i keep on saying, and thanks for this beautiful update where there is a touch of emotion too.... i never thought saanvi will be in tears talkig to him in the garage, i did not even think that she will run after him up the garage, i thought the update will stop as soon as chawla left, but you went ahead and ended this update on an unexpected point..
will eagerly wait for the next updates casi bro...
you really rock.#

wow such a beautiful review wow Rowdy bro, now your comments impress me a lot
thanks very very much for such appreciation my friend.
I have no more to say, you have said it all

 

[Obsessed]

Fantastic update!! I am really very very excited as every update of this story is appeared with a new sensation.

 

[luv4sale696969]

Haye haye..... Maar daala rrreeee!!!!
Casi Bro, this last part of the last update was electrifying.... Ab yaar iss age mein (I am 52 now) mere hathon se aise side kaam karwa rahe ho... Hope you understand what I mean....