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Hero ko powerfull banana bhai uot of world ho to aur bhi maja aaega sex na ho to bhi chalega romance hoga to achcha hai sex jyada nahi hoga to badhiya rahega jinn angels ho to khatarnak hoga
Ayyo ! Is story me koi ek hero nahi hai....matlab aapko pta chalega jab story ka pehla chapter aayega...🙂...aur me zyada to kuchh nahi bta sakta story ke related (suspense rakhna hai na 🤫) par isme Romance bharpoor hai...jinn angels to 🤫..
 

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Volume 1

Chapter - 1

°°°°°

[Ghar Waapsi]

°°°°°

Disclaimer - Ye ek horror kahani hai..isliye kamzor Dil ke log kripya kar ke is story ko naa padhe...

--

"Hmmmmm...jeene ke hai chaar din..."

"Baaki ye bekar Dil"

Do sharabi insaan gaana gaate huye ek sunsan pagdandi (gaon ki kachhi road) par chal rhe the.....

"Mujhe peene ka shauk nahi....
Peeta hu gum bhulane ko ....."


Unme se ek sharabi kehta hai....

"Are....raamu Bhai...kya gum hai tumko...hain ??"

Sharabi no.2 kehta hai pehle sharabi se....

"Are kuchh nahi yaar kunnu....vo saali meri joru (patni/wife) ramka....Aaj mene use mere bhanje ke saath....
aye Haye !!....uss saali ne to saari man maryada hi tyaar di hai...behaya kahi ki...hmphh !"


Raamu yaani ki sharabi no.1 kehta hai...

"Toba toba....kya din aagye hai bhaiya ....kalyug hai ...ghor kalyug hai.."

Kunnu yaani ki sharabi no.2 kehta hai....

Vo dono bevde ese hi chalte jaate hai...tabhi ek ped ke paas un dono ko kuchh dikhta hai...ek kankaal ka sar....ped par bna hua tha ek bada sa kankaal ka sar jo unhe hi dekh rha tha...

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poplar-tree



[Pic Ended]


"Are ye saala Nasha bhi naa ...pta nahi kya kya dikha rha hai..btao ped ke upar
kankaal ..hahaha...kyu kunnuwa"


Raamu kunnu se kehta hai ...

"hahahah...sahi bole bhaiya ji"

Kunnu raamu se kehta hai aur dono hasne lgte hai...

*Tap*

*Tap*

*Tap*

*Tap*


Undono ko pta hi nahi chalta ki kab vo dono ek anjaan se raaste par chalne lgte hai....

Waha gaon ka ek board lga hota hai...us gaaon ka naam hota hai... Andherpur...


Chalte chalte ab vo dono bevde us gaon ke andar chale jaate hai...gaon ekdum veeran hota hai...ekdum sannata pasra hota hai waha par...

"Are yaar kunnu ! Eee hum log kaha par aagye be ?"

Raamu thoda chaunkte huye kunnu se kehta hai....

"Pta nahi bhaiya....ye koi gaon to hai par yaha shayd koi rehta nahi hai..."

Kunnu kehta hai....kunnu ko shayd ab sharab kuchh zyada hi chadhh gyit
hi... isliye vo wahi us zameen par beth jaata hai...

"Are koi hai ? Hai kya koi yaha par...haa ?"

Raamu chillata hai par use uski baat ka koi jawab nahi milta hai....

Raamu gaon me andar ki taraf jaane lgta hai...

"Are raamu bhaiya..."

Kunnu pichhe se raamu ko aawaz lgata hai...par raamu uski aawaz ko ansuna kar deta hai..fir kunnu wahi us zameen par let jaata hai....

Darasal kunnu abhi gaon ke bahar hi tha...aur raamu gaaon ke andar jaa chuka tha....

Kunnu zameen par lete-lete upar chand ko dekh rha tha...pta nahi kyu par aaj chaand use laal dikh rha tha....shayd use sharab zyada hi chadh gyi thi....

tabhi use ek sookhe / murjhaaye huye ped par 3 ullu dikhai dete hai...aur usme bhi ek ullu baaki 2 ullu ke size se double size me tha...

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Esa lag rha tha ki jese vo ullu kunnu ko hi dekh rha ho...kunnu ko ye thoda ajeeb to lagta hai par vo us baat par zyada dhyaan nahi deta hai....

Yahi doosri taraf raamu gaon ke andar ek ghar ke bahar wahi zameen par beth jata hai...

Raamu sharab ka ek ghoot aur maarta hai fir vo bhi chaand ki taraf dekhta hai...use apni apni ki yaad aajati hai......

"Shaali ramka....ee kaa kiya hmare saath tune...kahe ?...
kahe ?....hamka dhoka di be ?"


Raamu ki aankho me aansu bhar aaye the aur vo chaand ko dekhte huye kehta hai...

--

Yaha doosri taraf....achaanak se hi kunnu ko chaand ko dekh kar kya hi sujhi ?...vo Lori gaana shuru kar deta hai....

"Chanda mama door ke....pooye pakaye dhoodh ke... "

Kunnu gaata hai....

"Aaap khaye thaali me....kunnu ko de do pyaali me..."

Achanak se hi pta nahi kaha se par koi kunnu ke saath Lori gaata hai .....kunnu ye line sunkar ekdum shocked reh jaata hai....aur use bohot darr lagne lagta hai....

"K...k...kon hai ? Raamu bhaiya ? Dekhiye ye mazak hmaare sath nahi kijiye... hamka darr lgta hai in sab cheezo se...."

Par kunno ko apne sawal ka koi bhi jawab nahi milta hai....kunnu pichhe ki taraf bhaagne lgta hai...aur tabhi use dikhta hai us gaaon ka board....

[Pic Ahead]


Picsart-23-05-26-20-12-21-018



[Pic Ended]


Kunnu ki nazar jese hi us board par padti hai uski aankhe maano jese sockets se nikalkar bahar hi girne wali thi .... darr ke maare wo pant ke hi andar peshaab/toilet kar leta hai...

"A....aaaah...Aaaaaaa....And...
andddd....andhe....."


Kunnu itna Darr chuka tha ki uske muh se shabd hi nahi nikal rhe the....vo wahi par haklate-haklaate kuchh to bolne ki koshish kar rha tha...

"AndherPur"

Firse wahi fusfusaati hui aawaz aati hai jo ki kunnu ko pehle bhi aayi thi.....

"Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah !"

Kunnu ki ek bohot tez aawaz ke saath cheekh nikal jaati hai....

--

Yaha doosri taraf raamu abhi bhi chaand ko dekh kar apni biwi ko hi yaad kar rha tha....

"Ramka....Teri ma ki...Teri ma ki C...nahi Teri maa ki bhoot..chudel saali...bas ek baar mere saamne
aa... tohri Maiya ki ....."


Raamu kehta hai ....par achanak hi uske pichhe se.....

"Ji aapne mujhe bulaya ?"

Ek madhur si aawaz Naa jane kaha se raamu ke kaan me aati hai...

"K..kon hai ?"

Raamu kehta hai....

*Chhamm*

*Chhamm*


Paayalo ke bajne ki aawaz aati hai aur Tabhi raamu ke pichhe se ek Sundar aurat uske saamne chalkar aati hai ...


[Pic Ahead]


images-7



[Pic Ended]

Vo aurat chaand ki taraf dekh rhi hoti hai...uske maathe par ek kaali bindi hoti hai...kale rang ka blouse aur gehri Laal rang ki saree pehni hoti hai usne...

"Mera naam Ragini hai...me yahi isi gaon me ' barso ' se rehti hu"

Vo Sundar aurat man moh lene wali aawaz me raamu se kehti hai....

"Are par yaha to veerana
pasra hai ?..tum yaha kya kar rhi ho? "


Raamu ekdum logical sawal poochhta hai...

"Haa...vo kya hai na...yaha raat ko bhoot , pret aur chudail ghoomte hai.... isiliye yaha raat me koi bahar nikalta nahi hai...mujhe to bas neend nahi aa rhi thi isliye yaha par ghoom rhi thi...tabhi aapne mujhe bula liya..."

Raagini kehti hai....

"Achha ? Esa kya ? Mene kab bulaya ? Chal koi na !"

Raamu kehta hai...ab raamu ki nazar raagini par padti hai....bade vaksh....bade nitambh...gehre laal hoth....kamar tak aate baal.... sundar gori twacha...uff! Ekdum husn ki pari jesi lag rhi thi raagini....

Raagini ko dekh kar raamu ki hawas jaag jaati hai...

"Sharab piye gi kya ?"

Raamu raagini se poochhta hai...

"Haa bilkul...ye to meri manpasand cheez hai.."

Raagini bohot hi mohak tareeke se kehti hai...aur raamu ke haath se sharab lekar ek hi baar me poori gatak jaati hai....

Raamu ye dekh kar ekdum chaunk jaata hai...par fir bhi vo kuchh kehta nahi hai...

"Chalo ab...iske badle aapko bhi mujhe kuchh Dena hoga...hmmm..hmmm...hehehe"

Raamu aankho me hawas liye raagini se kehta hai...aur
mand-mand muskurane lgta hai...

"Kya chaahte hai aap mujhse ? "

Raagini poochhti hai ...raamu use dekhta hai aur jaake uske paas khada ho jata hai...raamu Raagini ke hotho ko dekhta hai ...vo un par choomne hi wala hota hai ki tabhi....

"Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!"

Raamu ko kunnu ki cheekh sunai deti hai....raamu foran ruk jaata hai...aur waha gaon ke pravesh sthaan par dekhne lgta hai ...jaha se vo andar aaya tha....

Ramu fir Bina kuchh kare hi us gaon ki border par pohuch jaate Hai...raagini bhi uske pichhe pichhe chali aayi thi...

--

Raamu ko kunnu dikhta hai...vo bohot Dara sehma sa lag rha tha...raamu ko ye dekhkar thodi ghabrahat hone lgti hai...

"Kya hua be ? Kaahe cheekh rhe ho ?"

Raamu kunnu se poochha hai....

Kunnu jese hi raamu ko dekhta hai vo darr ke maare pichhe hatne lgta hai...aap poochhoge kyu ?

Kyuki raamu ke peechhe kunnu ko bohot saari Sadi-gali aurat ke kankaal saadi pehne raamu ke pichhe dikh rhe tha...

"Bha...bhaiya ji....bhaiya ji....ye andhe..."

Kunnu kuchh kehna to chah rha tha par abhi uski haalat is hadd tak kharab ho gyi thi ki uske muh se ek bhi shabd nikal nahi paa rha tha....

"Ka andhe ? Kaa kehna chah rahe ho be?"

Raamu poochhta hai....tabhi kunnu ko raamu ke pichhe raagini dikhti hai....jo ki raamu ke paas aakar uske kandhe se kandha mila kar khadi thi....

"Aaaaaaaaa....Bha...bhaiya..
andheppu...aapke pichhhe....kankaal(skeleton) "


kunnu rote-rote kehta hai...

"Aye kunnu chillana band karo
be ....aur Kankal ? Abe sasure tohra dimaag theek hai ki naahi...hmaare pichhe to raagini ji khadi hai be....aur ye kya baat baat par andhe-andhe keh
rhe ho ?"


Raamu poochta hai...tabhi raamu ke kandhe par koi haath rakhh deta hai...

"Are raamu ji ...ye meri baat kar rha hai...aur ye andhe-andhe nahi ye to..."

Raagini kehti hai par raamu use beech me hi tok deta hai....vo abhi bhi kunnu ko gusse aur heraani se dekh rha tha...

"Are haa ....par ee kunnuwa kahe aapko kankaal keh rha hai...par ek minute...aapko hmara naam kese malum hai ?"

Raamu kehta hai....aur pichhe palat kar dekhta hai....


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Picsart-23-05-26-20-42-08-319



[Pic Ended]

Raagini joki thodi der pehle hi ek Sundar aurat thi ab uske chehre par se uska maans galne lga
tha ...aur zameen par gir rha tha....raamu ye dekhte hi foran pichhe hat jata hai...

Raagini raamu ko pakadne ke liye apna haath badhati hai ...aur gusse se kehti hai ....

"Kyuki me hu ek kankaal chudail....aur ye hai ANDHERPUR"

Raagini raamu ko dekhte huye ek gusse bhari fusfusaati huyi aawaz me bolti hai..

Raamu jese hi pichhe palta tha...vese hi use do sadme mile rhe..pehla raagini ko ek kankaal ke roop me dekh kar ...aur doosra uski baat sunkar...

"ARE MORI MAIYA ...CHUDEL... ANDHERPUR !"

Raamu kehta hai aur foran gaon ki boundary se nikal kar bhaagne lgta hai....

Kunnu joki abhi tak Naa jane kese hosh me tha vo bhi ladkhdaate huye bhaagne lgta hai .....

"CHUDAILLLLL !"

Chillate huye raamu aur kunnu waha se bhagne lgte hai...kuchh door tak bhaagne ke baad raamu pichhe dekhta hai...

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[Pic Ended]

Raagini ke saath aur bhi kayi dhundhali (blurry) darawani parchaai khadi dikhti hai...

"Are raamu ji...hame kya karna hai ye to btake jaaiye !.. hahahahah hahahah..."

Raagini ghungat ke andar apna chehra liye kehti hai....aur hasne lgti hai...

Raamu yeh dekh kar vahi par behosh ho jaata hai...aur zameen par gir jaata hai...

"Are...raaamu bhaiaaaaya !"

Kunnu cheekhta hai....



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"Congratulations babe"

Ek angrezi ladki ne Avanti ko kaha....

Avanti...20 saal ki ek Bhartiya ladki hai.... filhaal Avanti London University se apni graduation complete kar chuki hai....Avanti pichhe mudi...

Avanti ke baal halke se bhure/brown aur baaki poore pink the...badi hi cute aur naazuk hai Avanti...

[Pic Ahead]

Avanti's picture description:


images-2



[Pic Ended]



"Ahhh... Thank you Erika"

Avanti ne kaha....

Hmmm...to is angrezi ladki ka naam Erika hai....Erika Fernandez....age 21 Years... London ki niwasi ... Avanti ki friend...filhal vo vahi ek seat par leti thi yaa bethi thi pta nahi

[Pic Ahead]

Erika ' s Picture description:


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[Pic Ended]

Peele/yellow baal the Erika ke aur filhal to vo Avanti ko ek smile liye dekh rhi thi...


"So ??? Now that you've completed your graduation...What are you planning to do now ?"

Erika ne Avanti se poochha...kyuki ab Avanti aur Erika ne graduation khatm kar Li thi...

"Yaar mujhe ab mere gaon ki bohot yaad aa rhi hai...mene aur mere baaki ke gaaon se aaye dosto ne soch hai ki hum parso hi hmaare gaon ke liye rawana ho jaayenge...1- 2 mahine wahi par rukenge aur fir waapis aa jayenge..."

Avanti ne ek pyaari smile ke sath kaha...

"Oh ! Achha ! Yaar filhal I'm free to kya me bhi tum logo ke saath hi chalu"

Erika ne ek puppy face banate huye kaha...ji haa ... Erika ne bhi Avanti ki sangat me reh kar Hindi seekh Li thi...

Avanti Erika ka vo pyaara sa puppy face dekhti hai...aur Naa chahte huye bhi haa kar deti hai...

"Theek hai...par me pehle hi bta deti hu...mera gaon bohot hi pichhda hai...yani ki vaha ke log bohot hi puraane khayalaat ke
hai ...aur abhi bhi vo log bhoot pret me maante hai...."


Avanti Erika se kehti hai...jise sunte hi Erika hasne lgti hai...

"Whaaat ? Seriously babe ? Bwahahahahaha"

Erika Avanti se kehti hai...

*Tring*

*Tik*

*Tring*

*Tik*


Avanti ka phone bajta hai...Avanti apna phone uthati hai aur use speaker Pe daal deti hai...

"Avanti ! Are you ready for going home ?"

"Bilkul"

"Oh...theeke parso London airport par aajana shaam 6 baje ...sab saath me hi niklenge ok ?"

"Haa ok"

"Bye buddy"

"Bye"

*tak *

Avanti phone kaat deti hai....

Aur fir Avanti aur Erika ek doosre ko dekhte hai aur saath me hi kehte hai....

"Let's go baby !"


°°°°°

Chapter 2 Teaser :

"Me nahi maanta bhoot voot me"

"Abe bhoot ko to me pakad ke hi Tod dungaa"

"Are yaar ye apna dost hai kya ? Abhimanyu?"

Abhimanyu...gaaon ke purane purohit ka beta tha jiske pita ko.......



°°°°°

To ye tha is kahani ka chapter 1 ! Kesa lga aapko...aasha karta hu mene aapko niraash nahi kiya hoga....ise likhne me aur iske pics edit karne me mujhe bohot zyada mehnat karni padi hai ...4 din se likh rha hu ye chapter...ab jaake complete hua hai (⁠◍⁠•⁠ᴗ⁠•⁠◍⁠)

Kahani padhne ke liye dhanyawad....aapko ye kahani kesi lagi comment karke zaroor batana..itna to aap kar hi sakte ho hena ? (⁠ʘ⁠ᴗ⁠ʘ⁠✿⁠) ..aur please ise like karna na bhule..(⁠✿⁠^⁠‿⁠^⁠)

Namaste 🙏
 

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Plz iss kahani ko incomplete mat karna
Thank u
Thank You Very Much Shaantaar ...me story likhunga agar mujhe sahi support mila (⁠◕⁠ᴗ⁠◕⁠✿⁠)...agar Readers support hi nahi karenge to fir ise likhne ka faayda hi kya 🤷🏻...

Aur vese chapter 1 me kya achha lga aapko 😏hmmm😏......
 

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Ji bilkul...story padhna Mna nahi hai as long as koi vyakti SEX ki demand kare 😊...sex hoga par apne sahi time par 🥹....aap Sahi pakde ho...ye story supernatural based hai...thriller,horror, Mystery& Romance iske main genre hai.
Volume 1

Chapter - 1

°°°°°

[Ghar Waapsi]

°°°°°

Disclaimer - Ye ek horror kahani hai..isliye kamzor Dil ke log kripya kar ke is story ko naa padhe...

--


"Hmmmmm...jeene ke hai chaar din..."

"Baaki ye bekar Dil"


Do sharabi insaan gaana gaate huye ek sunsan pagdandi (gaon ki kachhi road) par chal rhe the.....

"Mujhe peene ka shauk nahi....
Peeta hu gum bhulane ko ....."


Unme se ek sharabi kehta hai....

"Are....raamu Bhai...kya gum hai tumko...hain ??"

Sharabi no.2 kehta hai pehle sharabi se....

"Are kuchh nahi yaar kunnu....vo saali meri joru (patni/wife) ramka....Aaj mene use mere bhanje ke saath....
aye Haye !!....uss saali ne to saari man maryada hi tyaar di hai...behaya kahi ki...hmphh !"


Raamu yaani ki sharabi no.1 kehta hai...

"Toba toba....kya din aagye hai bhaiya ....kalyug hai ...ghor kalyug hai.."

Kunnu yaani ki sharabi no.2 kehta hai....

Vo dono bevde ese hi chalte jaate hai...tabhi ek ped ke paas un dono ko kuchh dikhta hai...ek kankaal ka sar....ped par bna hua tha ek bada sa kankaal ka sar jo unhe hi dekh rha tha...

[Pic Ahead]



poplar-tree



[Pic Ended]

"Are ye saala Nasha bhi naa ...pta nahi kya kya dikha rha hai..btao ped ke upar
kankaal ..hahaha...kyu kunnuwa"


Raamu kunnu se kehta hai ...

"hahahah...sahi bole bhaiya ji"

Kunnu raamu se kehta hai aur dono hasne lgte hai...

*Tap*

*Tap*

*Tap*

*Tap*


Undono ko pta hi nahi chalta ki kab vo dono ek anjaan se raaste par chalne lgte hai....

Waha gaon ka ek board lga hota hai...us gaaon ka naam hota hai... Andherpur...


Chalte chalte ab vo dono bevde us gaon ke andar chale jaate hai...gaon ekdum veeran hota hai...ekdum sannata pasra hota hai waha par...


"Are yaar kunnu ! Eee hum log kaha par aagye be ?"

Raamu thoda chaunkte huye kunnu se kehta hai....

"Pta nahi bhaiya....ye koi gaon to hai par yaha shayd koi rehta nahi hai..."

Kunnu kehta hai....kunnu ko shayd ab sharab kuchh zyada hi chadhh gyit hi... isliye vo wahi us zameen par beth jaata hai...

"Are koi hai ? Hai kya koi yaha par...haa ?"

Raamu chillata hai par use uski baat ka koi jawab nahi milta hai....

Raamu gaon me andar ki taraf jaane lgta hai...


"Are raamu bhaiya..."

Kunnu pichhe se raamu ko aawaz lgata hai...par raamu uski aawaz ko ansuna kar deta hai..fir kunnu wahi us zameen par let jaata hai....

Darasal kunnu abhi gaon ke bahar hi tha...aur raamu gaaon ke andar jaa chuka tha....

Kunnu zameen par lete-lete upar chand ko dekh rha tha...pta nahi kyu par aaj chaand use laal dikh rha tha....shayd use sharab zyada hi chadh gyi thi....

tabhi use ek sookhe / murjhaaye huye ped par 3 ullu dikhai dete hai...aur usme bhi ek ullu baaki 2 ullu ke size se double size me tha...

[Pic Ahead]



Picsart-23-05-26-20-28-03-111-copy-3464x3464



[Pic Ended]

Esa lag rha tha ki jese vo ullu kunnu ko hi dekh rha ho...kunnu ko ye thoda ajeeb to lagta hai par vo us baat par zyada dhyaan nahi deta hai....

Yahi doosri taraf raamu gaon ke andar ek ghar ke bahar wahi zameen par beth jata hai...

Raamu sharab ka ek ghoot aur maarta hai fir vo bhi chaand ki taraf dekhta hai...use apni apni ki yaad aajati hai......


"Shaali ramka....ee kaa kiya hmare saath tune...kahe ?...
kahe ?....hamka dhoka di be ?"


Raamu ki aankho me aansu bhar aaye the aur vo chaand ko dekhte huye kehta hai...

--

Yaha doosri taraf....achaanak se hi kunnu ko chaand ko dekh kar kya hi sujhi ?...vo Lori gaana shuru kar deta hai....


"Chanda mama door ke....pooye pakaye dhoodh ke... "

Kunnu gaata hai....

"Aaap khaye thaali me....kunnu ko de do pyaali me..."

Achanak se hi pta nahi kaha se par koi kunnu ke saath Lori gaata hai .....kunnu ye line sunkar ekdum shocked reh jaata hai....aur use bohot darr lagne lagta hai....

"K...k...kon hai ? Raamu bhaiya ? Dekhiye ye mazak hmaare sath nahi kijiye... hamka darr lgta hai in sab cheezo se...."

Par kunno ko apne sawal ka koi bhi jawab nahi milta hai....kunnu pichhe ki taraf bhaagne lgta hai...aur tabhi use dikhta hai us gaaon ka board....

[Pic Ahead]



Picsart-23-05-26-20-12-21-018



[Pic Ended]


Kunnu ki nazar jese hi us board par padti hai uski aankhe maano jese sockets se nikalkar bahar hi girne wali thi .... darr ke maare wo pant ke hi andar peshaab/toilet kar leta hai...


"A....aaaah...Aaaaaaa....And...
andddd....andhe....."


Kunnu itna Darr chuka tha ki uske muh se shabd hi nahi nikal rhe the....vo wahi par haklate-haklaate kuchh to bolne ki koshish kar rha tha...

"AndherPur"

Firse wahi fusfusaati hui aawaz aati hai jo ki kunnu ko pehle bhi aayi thi.....

"Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah !"

Kunnu ki ek bohot tez aawaz ke saath cheekh nikal jaati hai....

--

Yaha doosri taraf raamu abhi bhi chaand ko dekh kar apni biwi ko hi yaad kar rha tha....


"Ramka....Teri ma ki...Teri ma ki C...nahi Teri maa ki bhoot..chudel saali...bas ek baar mere saamne
aa... tohri Maiya ki ....."

Raamu kehta hai ....par achanak hi uske pichhe se.....

"Ji aapne mujhe bulaya ?"

Ek madhur si aawaz Naa jane kaha se raamu ke kaan me aati hai...

"K..kon hai ?"

Raamu kehta hai....

*Chhamm*

*Chhamm*


Paayalo ke bajne ki aawaz aati hai aur Tabhi raamu ke pichhe se ek Sundar aurat uske saamne chalkar aati hai ...


[Pic Ahead]



images-7



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Vo aurat chaand ki taraf dekh rhi hoti hai...uske maathe par ek kaali bindi hoti hai...kale rang ka blouse aur gehri Laal rang ki saree pehni hoti hai usne...


"Mera naam Ragini hai...me yahi isi gaon me ' barso ' se rehti hu"

Vo Sundar aurat man moh lene wali aawaz me raamu se kehti hai....

"Are par yaha to veerana
pasra hai ?..tum yaha kya kar rhi ho? "

Raamu ekdum logical sawal poochhta hai...

"Haa...vo kya hai na...yaha raat ko bhoot , pret aur chudail ghoomte hai.... isiliye yaha raat me koi bahar nikalta nahi hai...mujhe to bas neend nahi aa rhi thi isliye yaha par ghoom rhi thi...tabhi aapne mujhe bula liya..."

Raagini kehti hai....

"Achha ? Esa kya ? Mene kab bulaya ? Chal koi na !"

Raamu kehta hai...ab raamu ki nazar raagini par padti hai....bade vaksh....bade nitambh...gehre laal hoth....kamar tak aate baal.... sundar gori twacha...uff! Ekdum husn ki pari jesi lag rhi thi raagini....

Raagini ko dekh kar raamu ki hawas jaag jaati hai...


"Sharab piye gi kya ?"

Raamu raagini se poochhta hai...

"Haa bilkul...ye to meri manpasand cheez hai.."

Raagini bohot hi mohak tareeke se kehti hai...aur raamu ke haath se sharab lekar ek hi baar me poori gatak jaati hai....

Raamu ye dekh kar ekdum chaunk jaata hai...par fir bhi vo kuchh kehta nahi hai...


"Chalo ab...iske badle aapko bhi mujhe kuchh Dena hoga...hmmm..hmmm...hehehe"

Raamu aankho me hawas liye raagini se kehta hai...aur
mand-mand muskurane lgta hai...


"Kya chaahte hai aap mujhse ? "

Raagini poochhti hai ...raamu use dekhta hai aur jaake uske paas khada ho jata hai...raamu Raagini ke hotho ko dekhta hai ...vo un par choomne hi wala hota hai ki tabhi....

"Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!"

Raamu ko kunnu ki cheekh sunai deti hai....raamu foran ruk jaata hai...aur waha gaon ke pravesh sthaan par dekhne lgta hai ...jaha se vo andar aaya tha....

Ramu fir Bina kuchh kare hi us gaon ki border par pohuch jaate Hai...raagini bhi uske pichhe pichhe chali aayi thi...

--

Raamu ko kunnu dikhta hai...vo bohot Dara sehma sa lag rha tha...raamu ko ye dekhkar thodi ghabrahat hone lgti hai...


"Kya hua be ? Kaahe cheekh rhe ho ?"

Raamu kunnu se poochha hai....

Kunnu jese hi raamu ko dekhta hai vo darr ke maare pichhe hatne lgta hai...aap poochhoge kyu ?

Kyuki raamu ke peechhe kunnu ko bohot saari Sadi-gali aurat ke kankaal saadi pehne raamu ke pichhe dikh rhe tha...


"Bha...bhaiya ji....bhaiya ji....ye andhe..."

Kunnu kuchh kehna to chah rha tha par abhi uski haalat is hadd tak kharab ho gyi thi ki uske muh se ek bhi shabd nikal nahi paa rha tha....

"Ka andhe ? Kaa kehna chah rahe ho be?"

Raamu poochhta hai....tabhi kunnu ko raamu ke pichhe raagini dikhti hai....jo ki raamu ke paas aakar uske kandhe se kandha mila kar khadi thi....

"Aaaaaaaaa....Bha...bhaiya..
andheppu...aapke pichhhe....kankaal(skeleton) "


kunnu rote-rote kehta hai...

"Aye kunnu chillana band karo
be ....aur Kankal ? Abe sasure tohra dimaag theek hai ki naahi...hmaare pichhe to raagini ji khadi hai be....aur ye kya baat baat par andhe-andhe keh
rhe ho ?"

Raamu poochta hai...tabhi raamu ke kandhe par koi haath rakhh deta hai...

"Are raamu ji ...ye meri baat kar rha hai...aur ye andhe-andhe nahi ye to..."

Raagini kehti hai par raamu use beech me hi tok deta hai....vo abhi bhi kunnu ko gusse aur heraani se dekh rha tha...

"Are haa ....par ee kunnuwa kahe aapko kankaal keh rha hai...par ek minute...aapko hmara naam kese malum hai ?"

Raamu kehta hai....aur pichhe palat kar dekhta hai....


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Raagini joki thodi der pehle hi ek Sundar aurat thi ab uske chehre par se uska maans galne lga
tha ...aur zameen par gir rha tha....raamu ye dekhte hi foran pichhe hat jata hai...

Raagini raamu ko pakadne ke liye apna haath badhati hai ...aur gusse se kehti hai ....


"Kyuki me hu ek kankaal chudail....aur ye hai ANDHERPUR"

Raagini raamu ko dekhte huye ek gusse bhari fusfusaati huyi aawaz me bolti hai..

Raamu jese hi pichhe palta tha...vese hi use do sadme mile rhe..pehla raagini ko ek kankaal ke roop me dekh kar ...aur doosra uski baat sunkar...


"ARE MORI MAIYA ...CHUDEL... ANDHERPUR !"

Raamu kehta hai aur foran gaon ki boundary se nikal kar bhaagne lgta hai....

Kunnu joki abhi tak Naa jane kese hosh me tha vo bhi ladkhdaate huye bhaagne lgta hai .....


"CHUDAILLLLL !"

Chillate huye raamu aur kunnu waha se bhagne lgte hai...kuchh door tak bhaagne ke baad raamu pichhe dekhta hai...

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Raagini ke saath aur bhi kayi dhundhali (blurry) darawani parchaai khadi dikhti hai...


"Are raamu ji...hame kya karna hai ye to btake jaaiye !.. hahahahah hahahah..."

Raagini ghungat ke andar apna chehra liye kehti hai....aur hasne lgti hai...

Raamu yeh dekh kar vahi par behosh ho jaata hai...aur zameen par gir jaata hai...


"Are...raaamu bhaiaaaaya !"

Kunnu cheekhta hai....



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"Congratulations babe"

Ek angrezi ladki ne Avanti ko kaha....

Avanti...20 saal ki ek Bhartiya ladki hai.... filhaal Avanti London University se apni graduation complete kar chuki hai....Avanti pichhe mudi...

Avanti ke baal halke se bhure/brown aur baaki poore pink the...badi hi cute aur naazuk hai Avanti...

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"Ahhh... Thank you Erika"

Avanti ne kaha....

Hmmm...to is angrezi ladki ka naam Erika hai....Erika Fernandez....age 21 Years... London ki niwasi ... Avanti ki friend...filhal vo vahi ek seat par leti thi yaa bethi thi pta nahi

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Peele/yellow baal the Erika ke aur filhal to vo Avanti ko ek smile liye dekh rhi thi...



"So ??? Now that you've completed your graduation...What are you planning to do now ?"

Erika ne Avanti se poochha...kyuki ab Avanti aur Erika ne graduation khatm kar Li thi...

"Yaar mujhe ab mere gaon ki bohot yaad aa rhi hai...mene aur mere baaki ke gaaon se aaye dosto ne soch hai ki hum parso hi hmaare gaon ke liye rawana ho jaayenge...1- 2 mahine wahi par rukenge aur fir waapis aa jayenge..."

Avanti ne ek pyaari smile ke sath kaha...

"Oh ! Achha ! Yaar filhal I'm free to kya me bhi tum logo ke saath hi chalu"

Erika ne ek puppy face banate huye kaha...ji haa ... Erika ne bhi Avanti ki sangat me reh kar Hindi seekh Li thi...

Avanti Erika ka vo pyaara sa puppy face dekhti hai...aur Naa chahte huye bhi haa kar deti hai...


"Theek hai...par me pehle hi bta deti hu...mera gaon bohot hi pichhda hai...yani ki vaha ke log bohot hi puraane khayalaat ke
hai ...aur abhi bhi vo log bhoot pret me maante hai...."


Avanti Erika se kehti hai...jise sunte hi Erika hasne lgti hai...

"Whaaat ? Seriously babe ? Bwahahahahaha"

Erika Avanti se kehti hai...

*Tring*

*Tik*

*Tring*

*Tik*


Avanti ka phone bajta hai...Avanti apna phone uthati hai aur use speaker Pe daal deti hai...

"Avanti ! Are you ready for going home ?"

"Bilkul"

"Oh...theeke parso London airport par aajana shaam 6 baje ...sab saath me hi niklenge ok ?"

"Haa ok"

"Bye buddy"

"Bye"

*tak *

Avanti phone kaat deti hai....

Aur fir Avanti aur Erika ek doosre ko dekhte hai aur saath me hi kehte hai....


"Let's go baby !"


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Chapter 2 Teaser :

"Me nahi maanta bhoot voot me"

"Abe bhoot ko to me pakad ke hi Tod dungaa"

"Are yaar ye apna dost hai kya ? Abhimanyu?"

Abhimanyu...gaaon ke purane purohit ka beta tha jiske pita ko.......



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To ye tha is kahani ka chapter 1 ! Kesa lga aapko...aasha karta hu mene aapko niraash nahi kiya hoga....ise likhne me aur iske pics edit karne me mujhe bohot zyada mehnat karni padi hai ...4 din se likh rha hu ye chapter...ab jaake complete hua hai (⁠◍⁠•⁠ᴗ⁠•⁠◍⁠)

Kahani padhne ke liye dhanyawad....aapko ye kahani kesi lagi comment karke zaroor batana..itna to aap kar hi sakte ho hena ? (⁠ʘ⁠ᴗ⁠ʘ⁠✿⁠) ..aur please ise like karna na bhule..(⁠✿⁠^⁠‿⁠^⁠)

Namaste 🙏
Nice update bro aag laga di hai
 
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Volume 1

Chapter - 1

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[Ghar Waapsi]

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Disclaimer - Ye ek horror kahani hai..isliye kamzor Dil ke log kripya kar ke is story ko naa padhe...

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"Hmmmmm...jeene ke hai chaar din..."

"Baaki ye bekar Dil"


Do sharabi insaan gaana gaate huye ek sunsan pagdandi (gaon ki kachhi road) par chal rhe the.....

"Mujhe peene ka shauk nahi....
Peeta hu gum bhulane ko ....."


Unme se ek sharabi kehta hai....

"Are....raamu Bhai...kya gum hai tumko...hain ??"

Sharabi no.2 kehta hai pehle sharabi se....

"Are kuchh nahi yaar kunnu....vo saali meri joru (patni/wife) ramka....Aaj mene use mere bhanje ke saath....
aye Haye !!....uss saali ne to saari man maryada hi tyaar di hai...behaya kahi ki...hmphh !"


Raamu yaani ki sharabi no.1 kehta hai...

"Toba toba....kya din aagye hai bhaiya ....kalyug hai ...ghor kalyug hai.."

Kunnu yaani ki sharabi no.2 kehta hai....

Vo dono bevde ese hi chalte jaate hai...tabhi ek ped ke paas un dono ko kuchh dikhta hai...ek kankaal ka sar....ped par bna hua tha ek bada sa kankaal ka sar jo unhe hi dekh rha tha...

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"Are ye saala Nasha bhi naa ...pta nahi kya kya dikha rha hai..btao ped ke upar
kankaal ..hahaha...kyu kunnuwa"


Raamu kunnu se kehta hai ...

"hahahah...sahi bole bhaiya ji"

Kunnu raamu se kehta hai aur dono hasne lgte hai...

*Tap*

*Tap*

*Tap*

*Tap*


Undono ko pta hi nahi chalta ki kab vo dono ek anjaan se raaste par chalne lgte hai....

Waha gaon ka ek board lga hota hai...us gaaon ka naam hota hai... Andherpur...


Chalte chalte ab vo dono bevde us gaon ke andar chale jaate hai...gaon ekdum veeran hota hai...ekdum sannata pasra hota hai waha par...


"Are yaar kunnu ! Eee hum log kaha par aagye be ?"

Raamu thoda chaunkte huye kunnu se kehta hai....

"Pta nahi bhaiya....ye koi gaon to hai par yaha shayd koi rehta nahi hai..."

Kunnu kehta hai....kunnu ko shayd ab sharab kuchh zyada hi chadhh gyit hi... isliye vo wahi us zameen par beth jaata hai...

"Are koi hai ? Hai kya koi yaha par...haa ?"

Raamu chillata hai par use uski baat ka koi jawab nahi milta hai....

Raamu gaon me andar ki taraf jaane lgta hai...


"Are raamu bhaiya..."

Kunnu pichhe se raamu ko aawaz lgata hai...par raamu uski aawaz ko ansuna kar deta hai..fir kunnu wahi us zameen par let jaata hai....

Darasal kunnu abhi gaon ke bahar hi tha...aur raamu gaaon ke andar jaa chuka tha....

Kunnu zameen par lete-lete upar chand ko dekh rha tha...pta nahi kyu par aaj chaand use laal dikh rha tha....shayd use sharab zyada hi chadh gyi thi....

tabhi use ek sookhe / murjhaaye huye ped par 3 ullu dikhai dete hai...aur usme bhi ek ullu baaki 2 ullu ke size se double size me tha...

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Esa lag rha tha ki jese vo ullu kunnu ko hi dekh rha ho...kunnu ko ye thoda ajeeb to lagta hai par vo us baat par zyada dhyaan nahi deta hai....

Yahi doosri taraf raamu gaon ke andar ek ghar ke bahar wahi zameen par beth jata hai...

Raamu sharab ka ek ghoot aur maarta hai fir vo bhi chaand ki taraf dekhta hai...use apni apni ki yaad aajati hai......


"Shaali ramka....ee kaa kiya hmare saath tune...kahe ?...
kahe ?....hamka dhoka di be ?"


Raamu ki aankho me aansu bhar aaye the aur vo chaand ko dekhte huye kehta hai...

--

Yaha doosri taraf....achaanak se hi kunnu ko chaand ko dekh kar kya hi sujhi ?...vo Lori gaana shuru kar deta hai....


"Chanda mama door ke....pooye pakaye dhoodh ke... "

Kunnu gaata hai....

"Aaap khaye thaali me....kunnu ko de do pyaali me..."

Achanak se hi pta nahi kaha se par koi kunnu ke saath Lori gaata hai .....kunnu ye line sunkar ekdum shocked reh jaata hai....aur use bohot darr lagne lagta hai....

"K...k...kon hai ? Raamu bhaiya ? Dekhiye ye mazak hmaare sath nahi kijiye... hamka darr lgta hai in sab cheezo se...."

Par kunno ko apne sawal ka koi bhi jawab nahi milta hai....kunnu pichhe ki taraf bhaagne lgta hai...aur tabhi use dikhta hai us gaaon ka board....

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Kunnu ki nazar jese hi us board par padti hai uski aankhe maano jese sockets se nikalkar bahar hi girne wali thi .... darr ke maare wo pant ke hi andar peshaab/toilet kar leta hai...


"A....aaaah...Aaaaaaa....And...
andddd....andhe....."


Kunnu itna Darr chuka tha ki uske muh se shabd hi nahi nikal rhe the....vo wahi par haklate-haklaate kuchh to bolne ki koshish kar rha tha...

"AndherPur"

Firse wahi fusfusaati hui aawaz aati hai jo ki kunnu ko pehle bhi aayi thi.....

"Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah !"

Kunnu ki ek bohot tez aawaz ke saath cheekh nikal jaati hai....

--

Yaha doosri taraf raamu abhi bhi chaand ko dekh kar apni biwi ko hi yaad kar rha tha....


"Ramka....Teri ma ki...Teri ma ki C...nahi Teri maa ki bhoot..chudel saali...bas ek baar mere saamne
aa... tohri Maiya ki ....."

Raamu kehta hai ....par achanak hi uske pichhe se.....

"Ji aapne mujhe bulaya ?"

Ek madhur si aawaz Naa jane kaha se raamu ke kaan me aati hai...

"K..kon hai ?"

Raamu kehta hai....

*Chhamm*

*Chhamm*


Paayalo ke bajne ki aawaz aati hai aur Tabhi raamu ke pichhe se ek Sundar aurat uske saamne chalkar aati hai ...


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Vo aurat chaand ki taraf dekh rhi hoti hai...uske maathe par ek kaali bindi hoti hai...kale rang ka blouse aur gehri Laal rang ki saree pehni hoti hai usne...


"Mera naam Ragini hai...me yahi isi gaon me ' barso ' se rehti hu"

Vo Sundar aurat man moh lene wali aawaz me raamu se kehti hai....

"Are par yaha to veerana
pasra hai ?..tum yaha kya kar rhi ho? "

Raamu ekdum logical sawal poochhta hai...

"Haa...vo kya hai na...yaha raat ko bhoot , pret aur chudail ghoomte hai.... isiliye yaha raat me koi bahar nikalta nahi hai...mujhe to bas neend nahi aa rhi thi isliye yaha par ghoom rhi thi...tabhi aapne mujhe bula liya..."

Raagini kehti hai....

"Achha ? Esa kya ? Mene kab bulaya ? Chal koi na !"

Raamu kehta hai...ab raamu ki nazar raagini par padti hai....bade vaksh....bade nitambh...gehre laal hoth....kamar tak aate baal.... sundar gori twacha...uff! Ekdum husn ki pari jesi lag rhi thi raagini....

Raagini ko dekh kar raamu ki hawas jaag jaati hai...


"Sharab piye gi kya ?"

Raamu raagini se poochhta hai...

"Haa bilkul...ye to meri manpasand cheez hai.."

Raagini bohot hi mohak tareeke se kehti hai...aur raamu ke haath se sharab lekar ek hi baar me poori gatak jaati hai....

Raamu ye dekh kar ekdum chaunk jaata hai...par fir bhi vo kuchh kehta nahi hai...


"Chalo ab...iske badle aapko bhi mujhe kuchh Dena hoga...hmmm..hmmm...hehehe"

Raamu aankho me hawas liye raagini se kehta hai...aur
mand-mand muskurane lgta hai...


"Kya chaahte hai aap mujhse ? "

Raagini poochhti hai ...raamu use dekhta hai aur jaake uske paas khada ho jata hai...raamu Raagini ke hotho ko dekhta hai ...vo un par choomne hi wala hota hai ki tabhi....

"Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!"

Raamu ko kunnu ki cheekh sunai deti hai....raamu foran ruk jaata hai...aur waha gaon ke pravesh sthaan par dekhne lgta hai ...jaha se vo andar aaya tha....

Ramu fir Bina kuchh kare hi us gaon ki border par pohuch jaate Hai...raagini bhi uske pichhe pichhe chali aayi thi...

--

Raamu ko kunnu dikhta hai...vo bohot Dara sehma sa lag rha tha...raamu ko ye dekhkar thodi ghabrahat hone lgti hai...


"Kya hua be ? Kaahe cheekh rhe ho ?"

Raamu kunnu se poochha hai....

Kunnu jese hi raamu ko dekhta hai vo darr ke maare pichhe hatne lgta hai...aap poochhoge kyu ?

Kyuki raamu ke peechhe kunnu ko bohot saari Sadi-gali aurat ke kankaal saadi pehne raamu ke pichhe dikh rhe tha...


"Bha...bhaiya ji....bhaiya ji....ye andhe..."

Kunnu kuchh kehna to chah rha tha par abhi uski haalat is hadd tak kharab ho gyi thi ki uske muh se ek bhi shabd nikal nahi paa rha tha....

"Ka andhe ? Kaa kehna chah rahe ho be?"

Raamu poochhta hai....tabhi kunnu ko raamu ke pichhe raagini dikhti hai....jo ki raamu ke paas aakar uske kandhe se kandha mila kar khadi thi....

"Aaaaaaaaa....Bha...bhaiya..
andheppu...aapke pichhhe....kankaal(skeleton) "


kunnu rote-rote kehta hai...

"Aye kunnu chillana band karo
be ....aur Kankal ? Abe sasure tohra dimaag theek hai ki naahi...hmaare pichhe to raagini ji khadi hai be....aur ye kya baat baat par andhe-andhe keh
rhe ho ?"

Raamu poochta hai...tabhi raamu ke kandhe par koi haath rakhh deta hai...

"Are raamu ji ...ye meri baat kar rha hai...aur ye andhe-andhe nahi ye to..."

Raagini kehti hai par raamu use beech me hi tok deta hai....vo abhi bhi kunnu ko gusse aur heraani se dekh rha tha...

"Are haa ....par ee kunnuwa kahe aapko kankaal keh rha hai...par ek minute...aapko hmara naam kese malum hai ?"

Raamu kehta hai....aur pichhe palat kar dekhta hai....


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Raagini joki thodi der pehle hi ek Sundar aurat thi ab uske chehre par se uska maans galne lga
tha ...aur zameen par gir rha tha....raamu ye dekhte hi foran pichhe hat jata hai...

Raagini raamu ko pakadne ke liye apna haath badhati hai ...aur gusse se kehti hai ....


"Kyuki me hu ek kankaal chudail....aur ye hai ANDHERPUR"

Raagini raamu ko dekhte huye ek gusse bhari fusfusaati huyi aawaz me bolti hai..

Raamu jese hi pichhe palta tha...vese hi use do sadme mile rhe..pehla raagini ko ek kankaal ke roop me dekh kar ...aur doosra uski baat sunkar...


"ARE MORI MAIYA ...CHUDEL... ANDHERPUR !"

Raamu kehta hai aur foran gaon ki boundary se nikal kar bhaagne lgta hai....

Kunnu joki abhi tak Naa jane kese hosh me tha vo bhi ladkhdaate huye bhaagne lgta hai .....


"CHUDAILLLLL !"

Chillate huye raamu aur kunnu waha se bhagne lgte hai...kuchh door tak bhaagne ke baad raamu pichhe dekhta hai...

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Raagini ke saath aur bhi kayi dhundhali (blurry) darawani parchaai khadi dikhti hai...


"Are raamu ji...hame kya karna hai ye to btake jaaiye !.. hahahahah hahahah..."

Raagini ghungat ke andar apna chehra liye kehti hai....aur hasne lgti hai...

Raamu yeh dekh kar vahi par behosh ho jaata hai...aur zameen par gir jaata hai...


"Are...raaamu bhaiaaaaya !"

Kunnu cheekhta hai....



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"Congratulations babe"

Ek angrezi ladki ne Avanti ko kaha....

Avanti...20 saal ki ek Bhartiya ladki hai.... filhaal Avanti London University se apni graduation complete kar chuki hai....Avanti pichhe mudi...

Avanti ke baal halke se bhure/brown aur baaki poore pink the...badi hi cute aur naazuk hai Avanti...

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Avanti's picture description:



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"Ahhh... Thank you Erika"

Avanti ne kaha....

Hmmm...to is angrezi ladki ka naam Erika hai....Erika Fernandez....age 21 Years... London ki niwasi ... Avanti ki friend...filhal vo vahi ek seat par leti thi yaa bethi thi pta nahi

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Erika ' s Picture description:



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Peele/yellow baal the Erika ke aur filhal to vo Avanti ko ek smile liye dekh rhi thi...



"So ??? Now that you've completed your graduation...What are you planning to do now ?"

Erika ne Avanti se poochha...kyuki ab Avanti aur Erika ne graduation khatm kar Li thi...

"Yaar mujhe ab mere gaon ki bohot yaad aa rhi hai...mene aur mere baaki ke gaaon se aaye dosto ne soch hai ki hum parso hi hmaare gaon ke liye rawana ho jaayenge...1- 2 mahine wahi par rukenge aur fir waapis aa jayenge..."

Avanti ne ek pyaari smile ke sath kaha...

"Oh ! Achha ! Yaar filhal I'm free to kya me bhi tum logo ke saath hi chalu"

Erika ne ek puppy face banate huye kaha...ji haa ... Erika ne bhi Avanti ki sangat me reh kar Hindi seekh Li thi...

Avanti Erika ka vo pyaara sa puppy face dekhti hai...aur Naa chahte huye bhi haa kar deti hai...


"Theek hai...par me pehle hi bta deti hu...mera gaon bohot hi pichhda hai...yani ki vaha ke log bohot hi puraane khayalaat ke
hai ...aur abhi bhi vo log bhoot pret me maante hai...."


Avanti Erika se kehti hai...jise sunte hi Erika hasne lgti hai...

"Whaaat ? Seriously babe ? Bwahahahahaha"

Erika Avanti se kehti hai...

*Tring*

*Tik*

*Tring*

*Tik*


Avanti ka phone bajta hai...Avanti apna phone uthati hai aur use speaker Pe daal deti hai...

"Avanti ! Are you ready for going home ?"

"Bilkul"

"Oh...theeke parso London airport par aajana shaam 6 baje ...sab saath me hi niklenge ok ?"

"Haa ok"

"Bye buddy"

"Bye"

*tak *

Avanti phone kaat deti hai....

Aur fir Avanti aur Erika ek doosre ko dekhte hai aur saath me hi kehte hai....


"Let's go baby !"


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Chapter 2 Teaser :

"Me nahi maanta bhoot voot me"

"Abe bhoot ko to me pakad ke hi Tod dungaa"

"Are yaar ye apna dost hai kya ? Abhimanyu?"

Abhimanyu...gaaon ke purane purohit ka beta tha jiske pita ko.......



°°°°°

To ye tha is kahani ka chapter 1 ! Kesa lga aapko...aasha karta hu mene aapko niraash nahi kiya hoga....ise likhne me aur iske pics edit karne me mujhe bohot zyada mehnat karni padi hai ...4 din se likh rha hu ye chapter...ab jaake complete hua hai (⁠◍⁠•⁠ᴗ⁠•⁠◍⁠)

Kahani padhne ke liye dhanyawad....aapko ye kahani kesi lagi comment karke zaroor batana..itna to aap kar hi sakte ho hena ? (⁠ʘ⁠ᴗ⁠ʘ⁠✿⁠) ..aur please ise like karna na bhule..(⁠✿⁠^⁠‿⁠^⁠)

Namaste 🙏
Wow amezing.
 
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Shetan long time no see (⁠ ⁠ꈍ⁠ᴗ⁠ꈍ⁠)....achha lga aapse fir milke... dhanyawad 🙏
Kafi achha topic pakda he. Amezing he. Par bhut ki kishm jarur dikhana. Ho sake to
 
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Kafi achha topic pakda he. Amezing he. Par bhut ki kishm jarur dikhana. Ho sake to
Thank you 🙂...bhoot ki kishm matlab ? As in uske type jese bhoot , pret , chudel ityaadi...? Agar aapka matlab unke types se hai to bilkul me sabhi type ke bhoot ko launga....abhi filhal to kankaal chudel ka introduction hua hai ✨🤗
 
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