Bhai maaf karna aagye dyaan se likhugaBhai kahani to achhi hai par bahut spelling mistake hai aur shortcut me likhte ho to samajhne me dikkat hoti hai
Lag tha he story bohuth ache ho gi
Suruath excellent .congratulations
Koi baat ni bhai aage se dyan rakhugaBahut hi jyada spelling mistake h bhai ...
Aur bich bich me kai sare word gayab ho ja rahe h....
suruwat badhi hai aage dekhte hain
Khanani achi likhne ki puri kosis kruga bhaisuruwat badhi hai aage dekhte hain
Thanks bhaiWaiting for the next update