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Incest Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery

Kya Veer apni life behtar kar paega ya sab kuch kho baithega?

  • Veer Baadshah banega

    Votes: 1,213 83.2%
  • Sab kuch kho baithega

    Votes: 24 1.6%
  • Kuch paega toh kuch khoega

    Votes: 188 12.9%
  • Kuch nahi bann paega

    Votes: 33 2.3%

  • Total voters
    1,458

Werewolf

ʏᴏᴜ ᴍᴀʏ ᴄᴏᴍᴇ ᴛᴏ ʀᴇɢʀᴇᴛ ᴛʀʏɪɴɢ ᴛᴏ ᴍᴀɴɪᴘᴜʟᴀᴛᴇ ᴍᴇ
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Ashwathama

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Wah wah

Wah wah

Ek aur

Kam se kam ek aur
इसके लिए मुझे फ़िर से पीना पड़ेगा ।
क्योंकी...

मुझे लिखना नही आता ये बदनाम नगमे,
मेरे अंदर जब मदिरा जाती है,
तब, वोही ऐसे बिन ताल के शब्दों को गुनगुनाती है...
मदिरा के बिना, मेरे होंठो पे...
शब्द भी बस चंद है,
और भाई, हम ठहरे बिहारी, और आपको भी ज्ञात होगा की बिहार मे शराब अब बंद है....

बहुत महंगा पड़ता है ये शायरी हमे 😅
 
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Ashwathama

अहङ्कारं बलं दर्पं कामं क्रोधं च संश्रिताः 🕸
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Werewolf I'm Pisces by the way... :blush1:
Just letting you know... :blush1: 🙈🙊
कुंडली भी भेज देते देवी । मै वर पक्ष (वोल्फ़ी) के कुंडली से मिलान करा कर शुभ मुहरुत निकालने का प्रयास करता । आखिर कब तक थ्रेड मे सुखा रहेगा, हम रीडर्स को भी बारात जाने का मौका मिलेगा ।
 

NupurSharma@1994

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कसम है उस यम की, मेरा मन इतना वाक्य पढ़ कर कहीँ और ही आसमाँ मे भर्मा गया था, किन्तु...

शुक्र है, आगे के वाक्य मुझे वापस धरती पे ले आये
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वैसे, मुझे अंग्रेजी नही भाती, इसलिए ही मै हिंदी मे लिखना सुविधाजनक समझता हूँ ।
It doesn't matter in which Language you write ✍️✍️

What matters is whether you are able to express your thoughts in the polite and nice manner ☺️ 😊
 

NupurSharma@1994

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कसम है उस यम की, मेरा मन इतना वाक्य पढ़ कर कहीँ और ही आसमाँ मे भर्मा गया था, किन्तु...

शुक्र है, आगे के वाक्य मुझे वापस धरती पे ले आये
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वैसे, मुझे अंग्रेजी नही भाती, इसलिए ही मै हिंदी मे लिखना सुविधाजनक समझता हूँ ।
I deeply appreciate your writing ❤️ skill 💖💖.
Please keep articulating your thoughts in hindi language as you have written so far ✍️😊
 

Werewolf

ʏᴏᴜ ᴍᴀʏ ᴄᴏᴍᴇ ᴛᴏ ʀᴇɢʀᴇᴛ ᴛʀʏɪɴɢ ᴛᴏ ᴍᴀɴɪᴘᴜʟᴀᴛᴇ ᴍᴇ
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Update 110.....
ab ispe kya kahu main... 🤔
ye update mild tha honestly...
mild isliye kyuki isme zyada kuch nhi tha.

3 points were important in this update. First to ye ki wo unknown dude. That guy is giving me creeps since the moment he has appeared in the story. 🥶 Seriously what is wrong with him? Are baba itni kya padi h hamare Veer ko maarne ki? Aur ye ekdum se kaha se aa gaya? Where was he for the past few months?

veer k paas system aaye more than an year ho gaya h... H na? Werewolf Sir?? 🤔🤔


to tab kaha tha ye stupid?? :mad: Ab jab Veer finally apni mom and sisoo se milne k liye ready h to ye aur peeche pada h... :mad1:
I can feel why Veer is annoyed over this.

second point tha Alpha and Sigma traits. Hmm... Very interesting sir... Very interesting... I must say... Aapne kuch firse hatke laaya h... You can create different situations here based on these traits. :claps:

third point tha Shweta ki regret nd closeness. I don't know why... But I felt very bad... :angrysad: I don't know kyu... I mean Shweta ne obviously Veer ke sath bohut bura kia... Ye hum sab jante h...
Par jab uske hath se katori giri aur wo saloni meethi jagah jagah fel gayi floor par... Aur uska ro k bhagna... I don't know why... I just felt it. I felt very bad for her. Mujhe wo scene bohut dil pe laga. I almost shed a tear. :sad:

shayad apki phrasing ka kamal tha ye.. maybe it was because of the way you wrote that made me feel sad. Actually... I really do want Veer to to call shweta mum... :shy:

pata nhj kyu... Shayad main hi hu jo shweta ko asani se maaf kar dii... I really want her to be happy... She's giving her best... :heart:

update mild tha because i think mild update ki requirement thi. Las vegas k itne mind boggling scenes k baad ek mild update required tha to ease out the things.

But ab aapke liye challenges h Werewolf Sir... :what1: Las vegas me aapne itne din ghuma dia... You have not registered yourself with the characters who were absent in las vegas.

Hum readers bhi kaera, sonia, nidhi, shreya, arohi, kavya etc jese characters ki familiarity se thoda dur ho gaye h... Ab ye aapke upar h ki aap kitne behatreen way me unhe dobara se hamare samne present karte h... To make them feel more alive... Aise na lage hume ki woh itne din tak kahani se gayab the... Zara sii bhi woh feeling hamare andar nahj aani chahiye ki iss character ka impact kam ho gaya h ab... Absence affect na kare kuch bhi...

aur ye sab handle karna ab aapke upar h... 😁
Too many challenges for you... 😁
Kaera itne din baad aayegi... Her presence should be as strong as it was earlier...

waiting for further updates Sir... Ab aaj to nhi aane wala... 😬 Hope kal definitely aa jaeyga new update. Keep writing Sir... :blush1:
as always... Love you work... :love: ❤️
Thanks a lot dear. ✨
I agree. Ye update mild tha aur ju ne sahi kaha ki iski requirement bhi thi. Ek thrilling arc ke baad ek halka fulka update zaroori tha. Taaki naye arc ke liye ek base banaya jaa sake.
Update 110 ko padh ke samajh aa hi gaya hoga ki ye arc kis tarah se jaane waala hai. At least ek idea toh lag hi gaya hoga.

I absolutely agree with you. Puraane characters ko waapas se ussi tarah dikhaane me kathnaiyaa aane waali hai. Zara bhi mehsoos nahi hona chahiye ki unka significance kam hua hai. That'll be a tough job for me. Mujhe deeper jaana hoga characters ki personality me to bring out something more.

But mene kaafi kuch socha hai iss baare me. Dekhte hai kese wo sab ubhar ke aata hai. Thanks a lot once again. Keep supporting! ✨
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Werewolf I'm Pisces by the way... :blush1:
Just letting you know... :blush1: 🙈🙊
Aao toh fir chalo ab... :bff:
 
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