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Incest Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery

Kya Veer apni life behtar kar paega ya sab kuch kho baithega?

  • Veer Baadshah banega

    Votes: 1,213 83.2%
  • Sab kuch kho baithega

    Votes: 24 1.6%
  • Kuch paega toh kuch khoega

    Votes: 188 12.9%
  • Kuch nahi bann paega

    Votes: 33 2.3%

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Suhana has killed someone in the past ~ A speculation that started long ago, because of Veer... Veer ne jab Suhana ke baare mein itne bade rahasya ko khola tha, tab sabse pehla naam Pushkar ka hi aaya tha zehan mein... And If I remember correctly, ek review mein maine is baare mein vistar poorvak apni baat bhi rakhi thi, i.e., Suhana might've killed Pushkar but while talking about him with Sonia, her antics were really normal, means, shayad usne Pushkar ko nahi maara tha... Aur shayad isi baat par is update mein mohar bhi lag gayi... Suhana indeed killed someone, Pushkar was in the scene too, but the bullet with which he died, was fired from Divya's gun, and not Suhana's... Instead,Suhana killed an ally of Pushkar, involved with him in the drugs syndicate... But she did it to save Divya! :declare:
Yes! It justifies her previous reactions to everything. Whether it be Veer's claim, Sonia's mention of Pushkar or anything else. However, she didn't want to kill anyone. It happened on a whim. And her goal was to save her friend.
Firstly, jab maine Update – 109 ki pehli line padhi tab, sabse pehle back karne ka mann hua... We are well aware about the flashbacks in this story, wo kis situation mein aate hain aur kyon aate hain... Sabse pehle Slogan aur Aatish ka hi naam aaya tha dimaag mein, Update ka pehla paragraph read karne ke baad... I really thought that Suhana is no more, but thankfully she's alive & safe... I remember ki starting mein bohot gaali di hai maine bhi Suhana ko apne reviews ke zariye, but currently in my opinion, Suhana is one of the most loveable characters in the story! (Ispar ek poll bhi rakh sakte ho aap, about the best female character in the story)... :think:
Poll rakhne ko toh mein rakh du but votes newly assign kam hi hoenge. Jo already voted people hai woh hi apne votes change karenge. So, I won't do that for now. :D
Suhana ko jo cheez baakiyon se alag karti hai wo hai ki jo kuchh usne jhela hai aur bardasht kiya hai, wo shayad sabse alag hai... And it's not like ki ek samay tak wo sab bardasht karne ke baad, ab wo unn problems se baahar aa gayi ho, jab tak wo Gaurav sang shaadi ke is rishte mein rahegi, cheezein poorntah theek ho hi nahi sakti... Maybe Veer will be the carrier of some hope & light in her life... Par kya Gaurav ke rehte, Suhana kabhi ek khush-hal zindagi bita paayegi, ye ek mukhya sawaal hai! Suhana ka character ek egoistic aur rich aurat ke roop mein dikhayi diya tha shuruaat mein, jo logon ko daba kar rakhne mein aur unhe beizzat karne mein, aanand mehsoos karti thi... Parantu, ab sab saaf ho chuka hai ki wo sab bhi uske liye ek raasta tha, un pareshaniyon se door hone ka, jo uske jeevan mein saalon se chal rahi hain... :dazed:
Suhana ne ek tragic end jhela hai. Woh kisi se kuch bhi saajha nahi kar sakti. Veer hi hai ab ek jiske saamne woh thoda boht khul sakti hai. :declare:
Suhana's past was not different from the past of other characters of the story! Kaera, Sonia, Shweta, Slogan, Aatish, Nidhi in sabka ateet hum jaan hi chuke hain ki kis prakar ka raha tha... Bhavana, Ava & maybe Pranjal too, I don't see them having a beautiful past either... We aren't even talking about Veer's past right bow! Aise mein Suhana ka ateet khushnuma hota, ye shayad baakiyon ke saath thodi naa-insaafi hi honi thi... As far as Suhana is concerned, uska past abhi tak uske saath – saath chal raha hai... What surprises me is the way, she has been able to hide all her problems from almost everyone throughout these years... Firstly, the kind of marriage she's in, then Pushkar's truth, truth of his death, DID, the effects of DID and obviously her broken heart...:sad:
That's what makes her more likeable. She fooled us all. Hume laga tha woh ek rich bigdi hui baap ki aulaad hai. Par woh kya kuch chhipaaye thi ye hume ab pata laga hai. Toh zaahir hai Suhana ne sabhi ke dil me ek special jagah bana lii hai.
Nik ne jo kritya kiya, uski saza to shayad use mil hi gayi hai, aur aage bhi milti rahegi, basharte, Veer aur Divya ko thode – thode antaral ke baad, saath mein samay mil sake... Dekhna hoga ki Suhana ke saath itna anyaya karne waale Gaurav ko uske karmon ki saza kab milegi... Abhi ke liye Veer khud ko guilty maan raha hai, Suhana ki us situation ke liye, arthat goli lagne ke liye, aur mere khayal se yahi guilt us saza ka raasta aasan karegi, jo Gaurav ko milne waali hai... Dekhte hain ki Suhana kab apne desh waapis lautegi, aur kab uski aur Veer ki punah ek baar, mulakat hogi... Kisi ekaant sthaan par ho inki mulakat to zyada behtar hai... Overall, kaafi kuchh saamne aa gaya is update mein, Suhana aur Divya ke ateet ke regarding, I guess, ek update aur aayega future mein Pushkar ke regarding, uske ateet ke regarding, hai ki nahi bhai? :hmm2:
Dekhte hai aage kya hota hai. For now I haven't planned anything related to Pushkar further. Depend karega ki Sonia aur Suhana ka relation kese badhta hai aage. Agar Pushkar ki need samajh aayi toh woh definitely picture me punaah aa sakta hai. But for now, I don't think ki kuch prepared hai usko lekar. :think:
Usne sabse naa kewal ye baatein chhipayi balki apni image ek carefree aur arrogant aurat ki bhi bana li... Taaki sabka opinion uske baare mein kuchh alag hi bana rahe... Veer discovered everything about her on his own, though the teddy incident was just a coincidence... Uske alawa Divya ko chhod den, to na hi Suhana ke Mata – Pita aur naa hi Sonia, jaante hain Suhana ki asliyat ke baare mein... That's the exact point which separates her from the rest! Her love for Sonia is eternal, that's what makes her more loveable than the others... Khair, Sonia se behad pyaar karti hai Suhana, ye koyi secret to tha nahi, par unn ateet ke pannon ke beech us party ka scene, satya mein dil ko jhakjhor dene waala tha... Zyada umra thi nahi us waqt Suhana ki, aur apni behen se kisi bhi prakar ki jalan ki jagah uske liye dil mein itna pyaar..! :love3:
Indeed! Ye scene kuch hadd tak Akhir kyu ke ek scene jaisa hi tha. Where in Neha's birthday she's celebrating everything happily, and Rahul saunters back slowly disappearing into the darkness as spotlight falls on Neha. Yaha Suhana bhi kuch hadd tak neglect kar dii gayi. The feeling of loneliness was Mutual. She wasn't jealous. She loves her sis. Toh jalan kesi? She knows Sonu is better than her in academics. Toh isme jalan ki baat hi nahi. But uska yahi behaviour readers ka dil jeet liya. :smile:
Sonia ke bheetar jin changes ka zikra kiya gaya Suhana ke ateet mein, jiske chalte wo Suhana se bhi kheenchi – kheenchi rehne lagi thi, mere hisaab se ya to wo Ava aur Kaera se doori ke kaaran the, ya jo Sonia ke past mein humne dekha tha ~ “No One Cares About You Being Second”! Beharhal, sawaal ye bhi hai ki kya Sonia kabhi jaan paayegi Pushkar ki asliyat, yadi haan, to beshak aur bhi kathin samay hai Suhana ke liye aage future mein... Aur Sonia ki narazgi athva berukhi, jo Pushkar ki sacchayi se janm legi, wo Suhana ki bardasht se baahar bhi ho sakti hai... But I hope ki, kuchh raaz sadaiv raaz hi bane rahe to achha hai, ye kahavat yahaan satya siddh ho jaaye! :pray:
Dekhna hoga ki Sonia ko kuch pata chalta hai ya nahi!? :D
Ab yadi kuchh charcha ki jaaye Gaurav aur Nik naamak do praaniyon ke baare mein... To, is sansaar mein vibhinn prakaar ke pashu – pakshi aur jeev – jantu paaye jaate hain, jahaan kuchh insaano se friendly hote hain wahin kuchh swabhav se friendly nahi bhi hote :approve:... Parantu, in sab prajatiyon ke beech ek prajati aisi bhi hai jise koyi bhi jaanwar, pakshi athva jeev, munh nahi lagaata... Isi prajati ke honourable members hain Gaurav aur Nik :declare: ... Gandi naali ke keede hone ke naate in dono ka kaam hi hai, gandagi failana, parantu apne gutter world se nikalkar, ye dono galti se insaani basti mein aa gaye, lekin inki gandagi failane ki aadat nahi gayi :noo:... Hadh to ye hai ki ye dono us prajati mein bhi alag hi sthaan rakhte hain, ye dono us vishesh naali ke keede hain, jismein koyi bhi jeev athva pashu, mal – mootra aadi tyaag karne se bhi parhez karta hai... Khair, in dono ke baare mein likhne ke beech mere mobile ke keyboard ko bhi vomit honi shuru ho gayi hai, isliye hum doosre mudde par chalte hain... :yuck:
:laughing: Koi bhi Nik aur Gaurav ko jaane nahi deta. Sab maarte hai bechaaro ki. Aise hi nahi dono apne apne department me naam bana ke baithe hai. They know how to strike when the iron is hot.
Divya aur Suhana jis pareshani mein fansi thi, wahaan se baahar nikalne ka shayad ek hi raasta tha inke paas, unn dono suaron ki baat maan na... Hadh to ye thi ki mauka milte hi lapakne ke baad bhi, Divya dwara shaadi ke liye razamandi diye jaane ke baad bhi, Nik naamak keede ne, Suhana ko bachane se saaf inkaar kar diya... Aur yahaan se apna mauka bhunaya, Nik ke hi ek door ke rishtedar, Gaurav ne... Gaurav shayad kaafi samay se Suhana ke pichhe tha aur maybe uske connections bhi kaafi strong the, isiliye Divya ne use call kiya hoga... Khair, Suhana aur Divya, dono hi kewal apni jaan bachane ke liye kiye gaye kaarya ke chalte ek aise bhanvar mein fans gayi, jahaan sukoon se rehna shayad sambhav hi nahi... :sad:
Gaurav was after Suhana since her college days. He was her senior. Lekin Suhana ne saaf mana kar diya tha. She never knew ki ek din yahi Gaurav ke aage usse haath jod ke khade rehna hoga. Gaurav being influential and having many connections, was easily able to grab the opportunity which presented him. He wanted Suhana. No matter what was the procedure. Aur usse woh mil bhi gayi. Suhana's family is super rich too. Aise me Gaurav ki khud ki repo bhi uthi hai. But suhana is now trapped inside like a bird in a cage. Veer hi hai jo usse shayad iss pinjre se baahar nikaal paaye. Let's see!
Khair, Suhana to jab lautegi tab lautegi parantu hamare Veer babu laut chuke hain apni priye bhabhi ke ghar mein... Ragini.. jab aakhiri baar ek saath the Veer aur Ragini, tab dono ke beech ek intense kissing scene dekhne ko mila tha, jismein Ragini ne khud ko topless tak kar diya tha... So, we know what's coming up in the next 3-4 updates, maine Veer ke Vegas jaane se pehle hi kaha tha, ki jab wo lautega to Ragini aandhi ki tarah uspar toot padegi, aur wahi hua, Aabha saamne baithi thi, par uski kise parvah thi? Ragini ne khud ko poori tarah se Veer ke oopar jhonk diya! Ab dekhna ye hai ki Ragini aage kya karegi? Shweta ne Veer aur Ragini mein jo nazdeeki mehsoos ki thi House Of Killers Arc se pehle, kya uski maujoodgi mein raah aasan hogi Ragini ki? Yadi haan, to beshak, is rishte ke after – effects bohot zyada gehre hone waale hain... Ragini par, Veer par, aur shayad Shweta par bhi!:declare:
Ragini ke liye mushqil rahega. :approve:
Because Shweta bhi ghar me maujood hai. Bhale hi Ragini ne Vivek ko talaak de diya hai. Par woh hai toh ek bhabhi jesi hi Veer ke liye abhi bhi sabki nazro me. Koi bhi usse ek ladki ki tarah nahi dekh raha hai jo Veer ki saathi bann'ne yogya ho. Aur yahi uske liye kathin hone wala hai. Because the moment she'll approach Veer openly, fingers will be raised at her. :sigh2: Suman aabha aur Sonali fir bhi kuch na kahe par Shweta? Woh toh definitely ye sab bardaasht nahi karegi aur kuch bhi keh sakti hai.
Idhar Shweta ko apne Alpha Trait ke strong hone ke kaaran, Veer ne chand shabd suna diye... Halaanki, Shweta ko Veer ki berukhi ki umeed to thi hi parantu Veer ke shabdon ne kuchh adhik hi chot pahuncha di use, joki understood bhi hai... Shweta ko Veer ke kamre mein jaate dekh kar Suman ka muskurana, aur puraane updates mein Ragini aur Veer ki closeness par bhi uska smile karna, at least in do aurton ke baare mein to achhi tarah se samajh gayi hai Suman! Shweta ke liye aage ki raah behad kathin hai, pehle Veer ki Alpha Trait aade aayegi, waise bhi shayad Shweta ko maaf karna Veer ke liye utna aasan nahi, parantu sabse bada sawaal hai ki Bhavana ke Veer se milan ke paschat, Shweta ki kya jagah hai is kahani mein aur Veer ki zindagi mein? I'm sure ki jab Bhavana aayegi scene mein, tab Shweta use aade haathon bhi legi, I mean, tumne apne bete ko akela chhod diya, tum maa nahi ho sakti & all of that... Ye ek aur kaaran ban sakta hai jiske chalte Veer aur Shweta ke beech ki khaayi gehra jaaye... Spasht hai ki Shweta ki raah sachmein kathin hai! :approve:
Ye scenes behad interesting hone waale hai. Imagine a face off between Bhavna and Shweta. Jab Bhavna ko pata chalega ki Shweta ne uske bete ke sang aisa vyavhaar kiya. Toh wahi jab Shweta ko pata chalega ki yahi woh Maa thi jo veer ko yu akela chorr ke chali gayi. Dono hi aurto ke paas ek dusre par fekne ke liye kayi aarop maujood hai. Aur dono ke hi paas Veer ko apne prati kheechne ke liye kayi strong points bhi. Veer inn dono ke hi beech me buri tarah fassega. Dekhna ye hai ki woh kiski orr zyaada dolta hai. Kyuki dono hi aurte apni poori jee jaan laga dengi Veer ko apne orr karne me. Shweta toh aur bhi zyada desperate hai. Dekhte hai kya hota hai. It will be very interesting...! :D
Suman ke saath bhi ek sex session laga hi liya Veer ne... Favourability kitni huyi hai iski? 130 ke kareeban thi last time shayad, next update mein Veer ka full status dikha dena man, agar possible ho sake to! Khair, Sonali khafa hi thi Veer se, joki laazmi bhi tha, ab dekhna ye hai ki Veer ne Sonali ko lekar kya socha hai... Coming to Bhumika, I really expect ki is Village Arc mein do characters kuchh hadh tak develop honge – Sonia & Bhumika... Sonia ka jis prakar ka kirdar hai, she's one of Kaera & Ava, jo aura un dono ka dikha hai, especially kyonki Ava ne kuchh hi samay mein khud ka star bohot oopar dikhaya hai, Sonia ka character development aur build-up behad strong hona, zaroori ho gaya hai :budhau: ... Wahin Bhumika kya hai, abhi tak yahi saaf nahi ho paaya hai:dazed:... Apni Maa ki chhaya mein chalne ke kaaran, uska apna astitv spasht roop se saamne aaya hi nahi, so yeah, in do characters par kaafi kaam hona baaki hai, mere vichaar se! :declare:
Mujhe kaafi updates peeche jaa ke calculate karne honge points. Taaki full status ko fir se update kar saku. And trust me... :sigh2: It's a very boring job and frustrating as well.

About Bhumika and Sonia. That is true. Dono ke upar hi utna prakash nahi daala gaya hai. Kyuki, unka samay alag hai spotlight me aane ka. Sonia abhi nazar nahi aaegi. It's obvious I mean. Suhana is recuperating. She's still recovering. Toh Sonia ka poora dhyaan abhi wahi rahega. Aur saath me business. Toh village arc me woh nahi rahegi. We'll see a few scenes with her here and there alongside Suhana.

Bhumika! Hmm! Bhumika ko lekar kuch socha gaya hai. Dheere dheere sab clear ho jaega hume uske saath kya hona hai. :D
Beharhal, ek important point Update – 109 ka tha, Alpha Trait aur Sigma Trait... Alpha Trait bohot pehle hi activate ho gayi thi Veer ke andar, shayad uske Rajasthan se lautne ke baad hi, arthat bohot samay ho chuka hai use Veer ke andar unlock huye... Wahin Sigma, abhi unlock huyi hai, aise mein kaunsi trait ka upper hand hoga, ye samajhna mushkil nahi... Jo description Pari ne diya, aur jo description Veer ke behaviour ne diya, uske anusar bohot zaroori hai ki Veer ki Sigma Trait jaldi grow kare, kyonki Alpha ka upper hand, Veer ke liye problem create kar sakta hai... Btw. the moment these two will be completely balanced, Veer will turn into a complete different being!:ecs:
Aisa karne ke liye usse khud par control rakhna hoga.

Indeed! Jese hi sigma instincts strong hue. It will balance out the agressive and rash nature of an Alpha male. In other words, he will be a beast. Or let me rephrase it more correctly. He'll be a "calculative beast."
Khair, ab jaisa ki aap spasht kar hi chuke hain ki is arc mein complete focus Veer ki family, business aur relationships par hoga, to us anya insaan ke baare mein baat katna vyarth hai jo Veer ka ab tak ka sabse bada opponent saabit hone waala hai... Crimson Festival ke din maarna chahta hai wo Veer ko, to shayad isi kirdar ko dedicated hogi Crimson Arc... Idhar, ab Veer ke saamne khadi hai Ragini, joki machal rahi hai Veer ki baahon mein pighalne ke liye! Shweta.. joki tadap rahi hai Veer ki maafi ke liye, aur idhar Bhavana aur Tejal jo dhoond rahi hain, apne bete tatha bhai ko! Pranjal aur Rajat alongside Karunesh, inki planning bhi isi arc mein saamne aayegi shayad... :hmm:
Yes! Kaafi kuch hona hai issi arc me. But Veer isn't the same Veer. Pranjal aur Rajat jese ab uske liye jhaat barabar bhi nahi hai. After surviving in Vegas, Veer is much more experienced. Uska poora tension abhi uss naye khatre par hai. Woh anjaan aadmi. After all, usne seedha seedha text me likh ke de diya hai ki woh iss din usse maarega. Imagine an unknown guy texting you that he'll kill you at this date. :cold:
Both the Updates were outstanding bhai! I don't think ki Suhana ke ateet arthat Update – 108 se zyada touching koyi Update tha abhi tak, at least mere liye to nahi... The way you present those flashbacks makes you a special writer! I personally don't like reading flashbacks and past – scenes a lot, but Aatish's past, Slogan's past, Shweta's past and obviously this one of Suhana, in sabki ek – ek smriti abhi bhi zehan mein taaza hai, that's enough to summarise that maybe you're one of the finest, finest, writers if we talk about presenting flashbacks... Absolutely stunning one man!! :bow:
Arre man itti tareef...! :shy:
Thanks a lot man for such a detailed and long ass revo. Suhana aur Divya ko lekar kaafi kuch baatein ju ne saamne rakhi jo ki zaroori bhi tha. Akhir HOK me kahani inn dono par kaafi focused rahi hai. Zikr toh banta hi hai inka acche se.

In this story, I have focused a lot on the interconnectivity and the development of each character. (Mainline characters). Sonia ko lekar mein sabhi ki baato se sehmat hu. Even after being a mainstream heroine, she's still not getting any limelight. Uske liye actually mene kuch soch rakha hai. :monkahmm:

Chaahta toh mein tha ki usse pehle darshaya jaaye Aatish arc ke dauraan hi par tab usko lekar development utna clear nahi tha. Aur mene risk nahi liya waha. Flow ke saath nahi gaya. I wanted to pen down her development. Isliye ye itna khich gaya. Kyuki achanak hi Slogan arc aa gaya, aur fir HOK aur ab village jisme inn teeno me hi uska koi significant role nahi tha. :nana: aur bechari sonia side hote chali gayi. But soon, you'll come to know why she's the most lovely person around to be with. :D
Outstanding Updates Bhai & Waiting For Next...
Thanks once again man! Keep supporting as usual. :hug: :five:
 
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Shayad kal. (SHAYAD) :D
शायद पलके झपकी होगी, मेरी जब "शायद" तुम बोले

आँख पसारे हैं तैयार हम, पर लो हो " शायद " तुम बोले

धैर्य भी है संग इंतज़ार के , किन्तु हो " शायद " तुम बोले

बैठे हैं हम, पीके बोतल ......चखना, गुटका, पैकेट चार्म्स ...


कैसे न करूँ इंतज़ार मै, हाँ भी न भी है उसमे_ जिसमे हो " शायद" तुम बोले
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शायद पलके झपकी होगी, मेरी जब "शायद" तुम बोले

आँख पसारे हैं तैयार हम, पर लो हो " शायद " तुम बोले

धैर्य भी है संग इंतज़ार के , किन्तु हो " शायद " तुम बोले

बैठे हैं हम, पीके बोतल ......चखना, गुटका, पैकेट चार्म्स ...


कैसे न करूँ इंतज़ार मै, हाँ भी न भी है उसमे_ जिसमे हो " शायद" तुम बोले
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Update kal hi aaega man! So jao aaj. :shy:
 

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Update 110.....
ab ispe kya kahu main... 🤔
ye update mild tha honestly...
mild isliye kyuki isme zyada kuch nhi tha.

3 points were important in this update. First to ye ki wo unknown dude. That guy is giving me creeps since the moment he has appeared in the story. 🥶 Seriously what is wrong with him? Are baba itni kya padi h hamare Veer ko maarne ki? Aur ye ekdum se kaha se aa gaya? Where was he for the past few months?

veer k paas system aaye more than an year ho gaya h... H na? Werewolf Sir?? 🤔🤔


to tab kaha tha ye stupid?? :mad: Ab jab Veer finally apni mom and sisoo se milne k liye ready h to ye aur peeche pada h... :mad1:
I can feel why Veer is annoyed over this.

second point tha Alpha and Sigma traits. Hmm... Very interesting sir... Very interesting... I must say... Aapne kuch firse hatke laaya h... You can create different situations here based on these traits. :claps:

third point tha Shweta ki regret nd closeness. I don't know why... But I felt very bad... :angrysad: I don't know kyu... I mean Shweta ne obviously Veer ke sath bohut bura kia... Ye hum sab jante h...
Par jab uske hath se katori giri aur wo saloni meethi jagah jagah fel gayi floor par... Aur uska ro k bhagna... I don't know why... I just felt it. I felt very bad for her. Mujhe wo scene bohut dil pe laga. I almost shed a tear. :sad:

shayad apki phrasing ka kamal tha ye.. maybe it was because of the way you wrote that made me feel sad. Actually... I really do want Veer to to call shweta mum... :shy:

pata nhj kyu... Shayad main hi hu jo shweta ko asani se maaf kar dii... I really want her to be happy... She's giving her best... :heart:

update mild tha because i think mild update ki requirement thi. Las vegas k itne mind boggling scenes k baad ek mild update required tha to ease out the things.

But ab aapke liye challenges h Werewolf Sir... :what1: Las vegas me aapne itne din ghuma dia... You have not registered yourself with the characters who were absent in las vegas.

Hum readers bhi kaera, sonia, nidhi, shreya, arohi, kavya etc jese characters ki familiarity se thoda dur ho gaye h... Ab ye aapke upar h ki aap kitne behatreen way me unhe dobara se hamare samne present karte h... To make them feel more alive... Aise na lage hume ki woh itne din tak kahani se gayab the... Zara sii bhi woh feeling hamare andar nahj aani chahiye ki iss character ka impact kam ho gaya h ab... Absence affect na kare kuch bhi...

aur ye sab handle karna ab aapke upar h... 😁
Too many challenges for you... 😁
Kaera itne din baad aayegi... Her presence should be as strong as it was earlier...

waiting for further updates Sir... Ab aaj to nhi aane wala... 😬 Hope kal definitely aa jaeyga new update. Keep writing Sir... :blush1:
as always... Love you work... :love: ❤️
 

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