Incest Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery

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[Looserr]

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[parkas]

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Intezaar rahega Werewolf bhai....

 

[Charles William]

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Update - 110 ~ A Threat
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Ab tak...

Jab Suhana ne usse dikhaane ke liye bola toh Sonia ne message khol ke screen Suhaana ke saamne kar dii.

Aur usme bas kuch hi shabd likhe hue the.

'I couldn't save you. It was my fault! Sorry! Jab aap ye padh rahi houngi, mein waha se jaa chuka hounga. I wish you recover soon. Once again, I'm sorry. Till then... Goodbye!'

Usse padhte hi Suhana ki aankho se apne aap aasu nikal aaye. Usne apne aankhein band kar lii aur zehen me ek hi baat goonji,

'You did save me...! Idiot...!'

Ab aage...

Mumbai ~
Morning ~

Ek nayi niraali subah. Ragini ke ghar me roz ki hi tarah sab apne apne kaamo me vyast the. Veer ke jaane ke baad se unki dincharya me kaafi antar aa chuka tha.

Khaaskar Ragini, Suman aur Shweta ki zindagiyo me. Ragini kese khud ko control me rakhi hui thi ye toh sirf wahi jaanti thi.

Toh wahi Suman ka haal bhi behaal tha. Itne dino se apne maalik se dur reh ke usse bhi Veer ki yaad sata rahi thi.

Lekin Shweta...!

Usse toh kuch aur hi chinta khaaye jaa rahi thi. Apne bete ki tarah dekhne lagi thi woh Veer ko uss din se hi jis din se Veer ne usse bachaaya tha. Bechaini, tanaav, Veer ko dobaara dekhne ki talab.

Ye kehna galat nahi tha ki agar koi sabse zyaada Veer ko dekhne ke liye tadap rahi thi toh woh aur koi nahi, Shweta hi thi.

Aur jese uski ye muraad poori bhi hone jaa rahi thi. Kyuki ghar ke darwaaze ke thik baahar hi Veer khada hua tha. Haatho me apna traveling bag liye woh darwaaza khol hi raha tha jab upar terrace par se ek aurat neeche aane ke liye hui toh dono ki nigaahein ek dusre se jaa takraayi.

"Hmm?" Woh aurat haatho me se baalti rakh hairat me Veer ko dekhi aur agle hi pal uske chehre par pyaar bhari muskaan sajj gayi.

"M-Maalik!!!"

Uske thar-tharaate hue hontho se shabd nikle. Ye Suman hi thi. Subah subah kapde dhulne ke baad unhe terrace par felaane ka kaam uska hi rehta tha. Usse bilkul bhi umeed nahi thi ki woh apne maalik ko achanak se aise aate hue dekhegi.

Ye ek surprise tha.

Kyuki Veer ne koi khabar nahi dii thi ki woh ghar laut raha hai. Abhi woh daud ke apne maalik ke paas jaane hi waali thi ki Veer ne apne hontho par ungli rakh usse shaant rehne ka ishara kar diya.

Baat ko samajhte hue usne dheere se haami bhari. Dhadkane tezz thi. Apne maalik se itne din dur rehne ke baad uska jism harr raat usse pareshan karta tha. Aur usse ungli se hi apna kaam chalana padta tha. Par ab...!

Ab aur nahi. Uske maalik aa chuke the. Woh abhi se unki baaho me koodne ke liye macchli ki tarah machal rahi thi. Lekin unke ishaare par usne khud ko control kiya.

Veer ne ahista se darwaaza khola aur woh dabe paav andar aaya. Main hall ke gate ke paas aake usne darwaaze ko dhakka deke khola toh usse andar ka nazaara nazar aaya.

Bhumika ghar par nahi thi. Shayad hotel ke liye nikal chuki thi. Aur Sonali bhi food truck ke kaam par nikal gayi thi shayad.

Shweta andar kitchen me thi kyuki bartano ki awaaz Veer ko saaf sunaayi de rahi thi. Toh wahi hall me Aabha bas virajmaan thi.

Uski peeth Veer ki taraf thi jis kaaran se usse ye pata na chala ki Veer theek uske peeche waale darwaaze ke paas khada hua tha.

Aur tabhi, kitchen me se Ragini baahar aayi. Perro me bandhi woh paayal ki chhanak, aur uske badan se kass ke lipti ek bhoore rang ki saree. Uski adaa ab bhi wesi hi thi. Ya shayad aur bhi qaatilana ho chuka tha uska jism.

"Aabha! Zara chakh ke batana toh. Kesi bani hai ye?"

Woh ek katori Aabha ke haatho me thamaate hue uss se boli.

Aabha ne jab katori lii toh dekha usme kayi saari namkeen saloni thi. Shayad Ragini inhe bana rahi thi. Tyohaar nazdeek aa rahe the. Aur aise me ghar ke pakwaano ki taiyaariya aksar hi kuch hafte pehle se hi shuru ho jaaya karti thi. Harr baar jaha Ragini readymade pakwaan mangwa liya karti thi, siwae khud ke haatho se banaane ke. Toh iss baar Suman ki baatein uske zehen me baith gayi thi.

"Tyohaaro me hume hamesha apne haatho se pakwaan banaane chahiye Ragini jii. Tabhi ghar ka swaad aata hai. Aur hamaare chaahne waalo ke saath hume isse baatna chahiye. Ghar ke pakwaan ki baat hi alag hoti hai."

Suman ki ye baat uske mann me baith chuki thi. Aur isliye woh abhi se inn kaamo me lag chuki thi. Kyuki uska chaahne waala toh ek hi tha.

Veer!

Kya bolega woh jab woh uske haatho se bani inn namkeen saloni ko chakhega? Kya usse pasand aaegi? Inhi sab sawaalo me woh andar se joojh rahi thi. Aur ye ek maadhyam bhi tha Veer ko jakadne ki talab ko control karne ka.

Idhar jab Aabha ne namkeen saloni khaa ke chakhi toh usse behad pasand aayi.

Aabhi : Boht acchi bani hai. Namak ekdum sahi maatra me hai bhabhi.

Ragini (smiles) : S-Sach me? Kuch gadbad toh nahi hui na? Acchi toh lagegi na sabko?

Aabha : Koi gadbad nahi hui hai bhabhi! Ye boht acchi bani hai. Aur sabko boht acchi lagengi.

Ragini (smiles) : Thank god! Sab sahi se bann gaya. Mujhe darr tha ki usse bilkul pasand nahi aaegi.

Abhi usne itna bola hi tha ki peeche se ek awaaz aayi,

"Kisse pasand nahi aaegi?"

Awaaz Veer ke muh se nikli hi thi ki idhar Ragini ka jism kaanp utha.

Kya ye wahi awaaz thi? Of course ye wahi awaaz thi. Koi doubt hi nahi tha.

Woh ek jhatke me mudi aur peeche jese hi usne dekha, hairat ke maare uski aankhein fel gayi.

Veer uske saamne tha.

Iske pehle ki uska dimaag saari baato ko process karta. Uske perro ne uski ek na suni. Woh jhatpat daud lagayi. Veer idhar Ragini ko apne qareeb iss qadar aate dekh chaunk gaya. Usse maalum tha ye hoega par aise...!?

Iss baat ka usse bilkul bhi andaaza nahi tha.

Ragini sarpat bhaagte hue aayi aur...!

*Slaaaaaammmmmm*

Woh zorr se Veer ke seene se jaa bhidi. Aisa laga jese ek train aake bhid gayi ho seene se. Uski naram naram chuchhiya Veer ke saane me dhass gayi. Aur uske haath Veer ki peeth par kass ke bandh gaye. Woh kuch nahi boli. Bas zorr se lipti rahi.

Wahi peeche khadi Aabha aankhein phaade sab kuch dekh rahi thi. Veer ko achanak yaha paa ke woh stabdh toh thi hi par uss se bhi zyaada bhauchakki woh iss baat se thi ki ye Ragini bhabhi bhala kis tarah se lipti hui thi uske maalik se? Pehle bhi Ragini Veer ko apne gale se lagaati thi jo ki aam baat thi par aaj jis tarah se woh amar bel ki tarah lipti hui thi. Aur woh bhi bhaag ke...!? Ye sab, kuch sawaal khade kar rahe the.

Iss tarah ka mel milaap toh pehle usne kabhi nahi dekha tha unn dono ke beech. Akhir ye chal kya raha tha?

'B-Bhabhi iss tarah? Maalik se...!? K-Kya mein hi kuch zyaada soch rahi hu?'

Apne andar uth rahi faaltu ki baat ko Aabha ne apne mann se nikaala aur woh apni jagah se uth ke aage darwaaze ke paas aayi.

Veer ke dono haath Ragini ki nagn peeth aur kamar par the. Isme koi shaq nahi tha ki Veer ko iss samaay maza nahi aa raha tha.

Ragini jesi aurat ko koi kese bhala baaho me nahi bharna chaahega? Veer toh apne bade bhai Vivek ke haal ke baare me soch kar hi daya jata raha tha.

Aisi garam aurat, ye khubsoorti ki bala usne apne haatho se gawa baithi. Aur yahi jawaan aurat ab Veer ki khud ke seene se lipti hui thi.

'You reap what you sow!' Veer ne mann me khud se kaha.

Aur uske haath Ragini ki kamar par aur kass ke jakad gaye. Pata nahi kyu, par Ragini ko iss tarah se apni baaho me lena, usse ekdum sahi laga.

SHE BELONGS TO YOU~

Ek ajeeb sii possession ki laalach uske mann me aayi. Aur usse ye baat tabhi samajh aa gayi jab achanak se,

*Ding*

[Alpha Male instincts have grown stronger.]

[Sigma male instincts are now unlocked.]

[Sigma Male instincts have been activated.]

[Alpha Male and Sigma male instincts will now be in action.
Note : They won't always be in action. They will trigger during emotional, stress, love, insult, embarrassing, pride, sex, and thrill based conditions.]

[Ohhhh! Master!! Damn~]

Pari khush thi. Par Veer tension me tha. Ye ajeeb si bhaavna kyu aa rahi thi uske mann me? Uska haath Ragini ke blouse par peeche jaa ke tham gaya. Mann kar raha tha abhi blouse ke andar haath daal ke woh Ragini ko apne se chipkaaye aur uske gulaabi rass bhare hontho ko muh me bhar le. Yahi sabke saamne.

'Th-This...!! Shit!!!! Ye sab kya ho raha hai Pari?'

[It will get difficult for you now Master. Materialistic cheezo tak toh theek hai. Par...! Ab aapki possessiveness boht zyaada badh gayi hai. You will get jealous easily. Khaas kar jab baat Ragini jesi khubsoorat aurat ki ho toh.]

'Don't tell me...!'

[Yes master! Aapne khud padha abhi. Alpha male instincts strong ho chuke hai. Now you want to possess things. Be it an object or a person. I mean females. Samay ke saath aapki ye icchaaye badhti jaengi. System is growing. It wants more. And you'll want more too. Aapko aisi urges aaengi ki kisi khubsoorat ladki ko dekha nahi aur usse apna banaane ki sochoge aap.]

'What the--!?'

[Kyuki Alpha instincts stronger hai Master! But thanks to Sigma instincts. Sigmas are different than Alphas. Although they both are equally strong. Dono hi ek dusre ke level ke hote hai. Sigmas apna path khud banaate hai. Ye materialistic cheezo se utna affect nahi hote. Kyuki unhe pata hai woh kaha stand karte hai. Toh bhale hi aapki urges strong hai. Sigma instincts will balance them out. Par dhyaan rahe master. Alpha is still stronger right now!! Aapko apni sigma side par focus karna hoga. To make it stronger. So that you can neutralize the effect. You getting na?]

'Yeah!! Samajh gaya mein! Damn this feeling-!'

Veer ne khud ko shaant kar Ragini ke kaano ki orr muh kiya aur ahista se bola,

"Peeche Aabha khadi hai bhabhi."

Aur ye sunte hi Ragini jo abhi aankhein band kar deen duniya se pare Veer ki baaho me khoyi hui thi, uski aankhein ek jhatke me khul gayi. Aur khulte hi tabhi usse baahar upar se Suman neeche aati hui nazar aayi. Uske hontho par ek ajeeb sii muskaan thi.

'Ahhh~!'

Suman ne bhi dekh liya. Aabha ne bhi dekh liya. Kya soch rahi hongi dono Maa aur bahu uske baare me!?

Ye dhyaan me aate hi Ragini turant hi Veer se alag hui aur apne gaalo ki laali chhipaaye uski nazre sharm ke maare jhuk gayi.

Suman : Aap aa gaye?? Veer jii!?

Veer : Hmm!

Aabha : H-Hum- Hum sab ne aapko boht yaad kiya.

Veer (smiles) : Ohh! Sach me?

Aabha (blushes) : Jii!

Suman ne apne haath me lii hui baalti neeche rakhi aur woh Veer ke aage aayi. Tabhi usne woh kiya jisse dekh ke Aabha toh nahi par Ragini zaroor stabdh reh gayi.

Suman kass ke Veer ko apni baaho me bhar lii. Uski vishaal chuchhiya aise chipki hui thi dono ke shareer ke beech ki maano lag raha tha do bade bade gubbaare do kaagaz ke beech me rakh diye ho.

Suman kabhi bhi iss tarah se Veer ke gale nahi lagti thi sabke saamne. Kyuki sab jaante the ki Suman ek behad bhari hui aurat thi. Sex appeal ki mallika thi woh. Kaam rass usse dekh ke hi baahar footne lagta tha. Aur uska sabse khatarnak hathiyaar...!

Uske behad bhaari vishaal mamme!

Jo doodh ki thailiyaa Suman apne seene par lekar ghoomti thi uss tarah ke doodh Veer ne toh kya, waha maujood kisi bhi aurat ne filhaal asal zindagi me kahi nahi dekhe the.

They were too big!

Aur yahi dekh Ragini chinta me aa gayi. Suman iss tarah Veer se kyu gale lagi hui thi? Aise me toh Suman ke stan Veer ko mehsoos ho hi jaenge. Kya Veer ke mann me fir kuch aaega? Kya woh Suman ke stano ki tulna uske stano se karega? Kahi woh Suman pe toh dhyaan nahi dene lagega na?

Pal bhar me hi Ragini ke andar aisi insecurity utpann ho chuki thi. Ragini ko apne husn par poora confidence tha. Woh jaanti thi ki woh khusboorat hai. Par...!

Agar baat ki jaaye Suman se tulna ki toh...! Ek department me woh hamesha hi maat khaane waali thi. Aur woh tha doodh dairy department.

'They...! Why are they so big? Y-Ye itne bade kese ho gaye akhir-!? V-Veer!'

Apne nichle honth ko zorr se daato tale dabaaye woh pareshaan ho gayi. Par uski jaan me jaan aayi jab Suman ne aage kuch na kiya. Woh Veer ko chorr peeche ho gayi.

'Th-That's good! Shayad Veer ko Suman jitni umr ki aurato me interest nahi. Haaashh! It's a good news! Warna ladke Suman ko dekh ke hi...!'

Sochte hue Ragini ne ek raahat ki saas lii. Par usse kya pata tha... Ki yahi Veer Suman ke dono chhedo ki khudaayi jamke karta hai.

Wahi idhar Aabha bhi aage aake halke se gale lagi Veer ke. Par iss baar Ragini ko koi dikkat nahi hui. Woh jaanti thi Aabha se uski koi takkar hi nahi hai. Aur wese bhi, Veer ne kabhi bhi Aabha ki taraf interest nahi dikhaaya hai. Uska raasta saaf tha.

'She's just a kid...! Veer ko usme koi interest nahi hai. That's again good!'

Inka bharat milaap ho hi raha tha ki tabhi kitchen se ghar me maujood akhiri shaks baahar aaya,

"Ragini!? Ye lo! Ye meethi waali dekhna toh kesi bani--!!?"

Uske kadam wahi theher gaye jese hi uski nigaahein darwaaze par jaake tiki toh.

Idhar baaki sab bhi usse hi ghoor rahe the. Veer bhi. Andar se baahar aayi koi aur nahi uski sauteli Maa Shweta hi thi.

Shweta ne dekha ki kese Aabha Veer ke gale lagne ke baad dur ho rahi thi. Toh ye sabhi gale mil chuke the yaani!?

Uske honth kuch kehne ke liye khule par apne aap band ho gaye. Aur woh wahi murti ki tarah jamm ke khadi ho gayi.

Haath me meethi saloni ki katori liye woh sarr jhuka ke khadi rahi. Itne dino se paagal thi woh Veer ko dekhne ke liye aur ab jab woh saamne tha toh!? Toh Shweta ki awaaz nikaalne ki himmat tak nahi hui.

Kahi Veer ne usse dhutkaar diya toh? Kahi usse kuch keh diya toh? Kahi uss se aur rooth gaya toh!? Tamaam sawaalo ne usse chuppi saadhne par majboor kar diya.

Usse ab bas unki baate hi sunaayi de rahi thi. Kyuki nazre toh uski neeche thi.

Veer : Mera room saaf hai kya?

Suman (smiles) : Poora! Mein roz safaayi karti hu uski.

Veer (smiles) : Thank you~

Suman : Dhanyavaad dene ki koi zaroorat nahi Veer jii! Ye toh mera kaam hai.

Ragini : Mmm~ Veer! Suman jii ne tumhare kamre ko boht acche se rakha hai itne din. Tum jao! Fresh ho lo! Mene aur Tai jii ne milke tumhare liye namkeen aur meethi saloni banaayi hai. Tyohaar aa rahe hai na, isliye.

Veer : Dono aap ne banaayi hai?

Ragini : N-Nahi! Mene ye namkeen waali banaayi hai. Aur Tai jii ne meethi waali.

Ragini fatafat table par se katori uthaate hue laayi aur usme se ek saloni utha ke apne haatho se Veer ke muh ki taraf kari.

Veer Ragini ki aankho me hi dekh raha tha. Aur usse dekhte dekhte hi Veer ne apna muh khola. Saloni ko muh me bhara par iss se pehle ki Ragini apni ungliya hata paati Veer ne apna muh band kar liya.

"Ngh~" Ragini ke badan me ek sihran fel gayi aur usne jhatke se apna haath peeche kheech liya. Uske gaal laal the. Ungliyo par Veer ka thook saaf laga hua tha.

Veer mann hi mann muskuraaya,

Veer : Hmm~ Boht acchi bani hai!

Uske muh se apni tareef sunte hi Ragini ki khushi ka thikaana na raha. Poori mehnat uski safal ho chuki thi.

Veer : Chaliye! Mein change kar lu!

Woh apne bag utha ke aage badha toh Ragini bhaagte hue uske bagal se aayi,

Ragini : Arre! Ye- Ye meethi waali bhi toh chakho. Tai jii ne boht pyaar se banaayi hai tumhaare liye.

Uski baat sunn Veer ne jab saamne khadi Shweta ko dekha toh Shweta ko abhaas ho gaya ki Veer usse hi ghoor raha tha. Aur bechaari ka chehra aur jhuk gaya.

Veer ne aage aate hue uss katori me se ek meethi saloni nikaal ke chakhi. Idhar Shweta ke dil ki dhadkane train ki raftaar se bhi tezz ho chuki thi. Kya usse pasand aaegi ya nahi?

Par Veer ke jawaab ne jese usse poora tod ke rakh diya,

Ragini : Kesi hai?

Veer ne Shweta ko dekha jo abhi bhi sarr jhukaaye thi aur ahista se bola,
"Inme....!! Mithaas nahi hai!"

Aur bas!

Itna bol woh hawa ke jhoke ki tarah Shweta ke bagal se nikal gaya. Shweta ka poora jism thitur utha. Uski aankhein hairat ke maare feli hui thi. Mithaas nahi hai?

Veer ke jaate hi Suman ek hamdardi bhari nazar se Shweta ko dekh apne maalik ke peech peeche chal dii. Toh wahi Aabha kitchen me jaa ke ghus gayi.

Ragini aashcharya me aage aayi aur usne khud ek saloni khaa ke chakhi.

Ragini : Y-Ye...! Ye toh boht acchi bani hui hai. Mithaas toh ekdum perfect hai fir Veer ne--!?

Kehte kehte woh khud chup reh gayi jab usse samajh me aaya ki, Veer aur Shweta ke beech ka rishta kesa tha. Aur agle hi pal woh khud khamosh pad gayi. Uske chehre par bhi hamdardi ke bhaav aa gaye.

Ragini : T-Tai jii-

Pal bhar ke liye toh Shweta ko sach me laga tha ki kahi woh shakkar daalna bhul toh nahi gayi? Par Ragini ki baato ne sab kuch batla diya. Aur uski aankho se apne aap aasu nikal pade jab usse baat samajh aayi.

Saloni me toh mithaas thi. Par Veer ka matlab kuch aur tha. Mithaas usme nahi thi. Shweta me!! Uske haatho me woh meetha prem nahi tha.

Aur ye baat poori tarah se tod ke rakh dii usse.

*Kllllaaaaaaaannnggggg*

Uske haatho se katori giri aur woh tezz kadmo ke saath baahar nikal aasu chhalkaate hue upar terrace ki orr bhaag gayi.

"Tai jii!!!!!" Ragini chillaayi.

Par Shweta tab tak jaa chuki thi.

Neeche jhuk usne gire hue pakwaan batorne shuru kiye aur uska mann udaas ho utha. Ye achanak se kya ho gaya? Sab kuch theek se ho raha tha fir achanak se ye-!?

Iske pehle bhi toh Veer ne Shweta ke haatho se bana khaana khaaya tha kitni baar. Aur usne tareef bhi kii thi. Fir aaj ekdum se ye badla hua ravaiyya kyu? Aaj usse aisa kya ho gaya tha? Ragini ki kuch samajh me nahi aa raha tha. Kaafi sawaal bache hue the jo woh Veer se puchne waali thi.

Par bechaari ko kya pata tha ki isme galti Veer ki bhi nahi thi. Ye sab toh nateeja tha~

[Alpha male instincts have become stronger.]

Sab kuch iska kiya dhara tha. Ek Alpha male apni strength ko sabke saamne show off bhi karta hai aur prove bhi karta hai ki woh sabse strong hai. Jo uska hai woh uska hai. Kisi ki bhi itni aukaat nahi jo uske haatho se uska samaan chheen sake aur usse beizzat kar sake. Woh toh accha hua Sigma instincts bhi activated the. Jis kaaran se Veer cool headed bhi rahega. Warna anjaam aur bura ho sakta tha.

Jab Veer ne Shweta ko dekha tha toh pal bhar me hi usse Shweta ki kartoote yaad aa gayi thi aur woh khud ko unn teekhe bol bolne se rok na paaya. Yaad toh usse Ragini ki bhi kartoote aayi thi par Ragini ko woh apne poore dil se maaf kar chuka tha. Saath hi uske andar ab Ragini ko paane ki icchaaye jaag rahi thi. Usse apna banaane ki, usse baaho me dabochne ki, aur usse...!

***

Idhar upar Shweta sisak sisak ke ro rahi thi. Saree ke chhorr ko woh muh me bheenche fufkaar lagaati rahi. Ye peeda asahneeya thi.

Woh jitna Veer ke paas aane ki koshish kar rahi thi. Veer utna hi uss se dur jaa raha tha. Kyu? Kya galti ho rahi thi uss se ab? Kisi ko manaane ke liye hum unki pasand ka khaana banaate hai. Unhe khush karne ki koshish karte hai. Fir kyu??

Veer kyu uss se bhaag raha tha? Akhir woh kar toh sab kuch rahi thi. Harr woh prayaas kar rahi thi jisme usse ek aas dikhaayi deti Veer ko khush karne ki. Lekin fir bhi...!?

Veer kyu uske paas nahi aa raha tha? Shweta ko kitna intezaar tha usse dekhne ka. Aur woh aaya bhi. Achanak se. Parantu..!? Ye sab kya ho gaya?

***

Haal kuch kuch veer ka bhi aisa hi tha.

'Damnnn ittt!!! Y-Ye kya kiya mene?'

[It's your emotions. They're stronger now. Alphas apne emotions ko boht strongly express karte hai Master. Basically, agar aapke dil me kisi ko apni jagah banaani hai toh ab unhe ek aur layer paar karni hogi. It has become tougher now.]

'Par... Shayad mujhe woh nahi kehna chahiye tha Pari. I mean... Mein abhi aaya aur ghar ka mahaul...!'

[Mat sochiye iss baare me. Dheere dheere aapko iski aadat pad jaegi Master! Aur logo ko bhi. Actually this is good. You won't get swayed easily. Aap apne decision par atal rahenge. Aur apne usoolo par bhi. Sigma aur alphas contrasting personality hai mere according. Alphas jaha dikha dikha ke ye bataate hai ki woh strong hai. Toh wahi sigmas shaant rehte hai aur jab unhe zaroorat padti hai tabhi woh bataate hai ki woh sabse strong hai. It's complicated.]

'Toh iska result...!?'

[Hamare case me Alpha abhi stronger hai. So you will act rash. But Sigma usse kuch hadd tak balance kar dega. Toh overall dekha jaaye toh itni pareshaaniya nahi aani chahiye as long as you focus on enhancing your sigma side.]

'Hmm~ I get it!'

[Yes! Don't worry! Everything will be fine!]

Haami bharte hue Veer apne kamre ke andar aaya toh Suman bhi andar aayi aur usne darwaza lock kar diya.

Veer ne abhi bag rakha hi tha ki Suman uske peeche se aake kass ke uss se lipat gayi.

"Maaallliiikkkk~"

Apne hontho ko uski gardan par chalaate hue Suman poori tarah madhosh ho uthi.

Veer ne uski nangi kamar pakad aage kiya aur usse seedha khada kiya. Uske baad apne dono haath le jaake uska pallu giraaya aur uski aankho me dekhte hue uske blouse ke hooks kholne laga.

Suman lambi lambi saasein liye apne maalik ko dekh rahi thi. Harr hook khulte hi uske tarbooj jese doodh ka ubhaar badhta jaa raha tha.

*Tuck*

Aur akhiri hook khulte hi, do bade bade than hawa me ucchal ke jhool gaye. Suman ne bra nahi pehni thi.

Veer : No bra?

Suman : Aapne mana kiya tha na?

Veer : Ohh Did I? Aur yaha ka kya--?

Veer ne Suman ki saree utha ke haath andar kiya aur uski taango ke beech le gaya.

*Squelch*

Choot nangi bhi thi aur geeli bhi.

Veer : Huh? Panty bhi nahi? Mujhe nahi lagta mene tumhe panty na pehen'ne ke liye kaha tha.

Suman (lambi saase lete hue) : Asaani ke liye.

Veer : Asaani?

Suman : Hmm!

Kehte hue woh peeche gayi aur bed par lait ke apni dono taange cheer ke usne apni choot aur gaand ke darshan diye.

Suman : Taaki aap jab chaahe inka istemaal kar sake.

Apni choot par haath ferrte hue woh boli. Aur beshaq, ye nazara dekh Veer ke lund ne ek jhatka maar diya.

Suman pyaasi thi.

Suman : Maalik!! Mmm~ Aa bhi jaiye na!! Aaiye aur apne inn chhedo ka... Istemaal kariye!

Veer (smiles) : Tum jaanti ho na sab maujood hai ghar me.

Suman : Aabha se hume koi darr nahi. Shweta jii toh yaha abhi aaengi hi nahi. Aur Ragini jii shayad unhe chup karaane jaaye. Aise me...! Sirf aap aur mein.

Veer : Bhabhi yaha aa sakti hai Suman. Mujhe samjhane ke liye. Par jo hoga dekha jaega.

Veer agle hi shan aage badha aur apne jeans, underwear ko nikaal woh Suman ke dono doodh par baith gaya.

Veer (smiles) : Sabse acchi jagah baithne ki...!

Suman muskuraayi aur lund lene ke liye muh kholi,

Veer : Na na na! Jab tak mein na kahu tab tak muh nahi kholna hai.

Veer apna lund Suman ke chehre par ragadne laga. Uske andkosh Suman ke hontho par fir rahe the aur vishal lund Suman ke poore chehre par, jo usse madhosh kare jaa raha tha.

Suman : Nnnghhh~ Kyu tadpaate ho maalik? Daal dijiye na muh me. Mujhe choosna hai...! Haah!!!

Bechaari se ab raha nahi jaa raha tha. Lund ki madhosh kar dene waali mehak usse aur uttejit kar rahi thi. Woh jhatt se usse muh me bhar lena chaahti thi.

Veer : Tumhe pata hai mein abhi safar se aaya hu. Nahaya bhi nahi hu abhi.

Suman : Isliye toh keh rahi hu...! Muh me daaliye. Aur mein... Mein saaf kar dungi!

Uska bas itna kehna tha ki Veer se bhi ab aur raha nahi gaya. Ek jhatke me usne Suman ke muh me apna lund daala aur uska sarr pakad woh dhakke maarne laga.

Suman ka muh jese ek sharpner ki tarah thi. Jisme Veer pencil daal usse saaf kar raha tha. Likhaayi nahi, Chudaayi ke liye ready kar raha tha.

Acchi tarah se dherr saare dhakke muh me lagaane ke baad usne uske muh se lund nikaala aur utar ke uski dono taange pakad ke cheer ke dekha. Suman ki choot paani baha rahi thi. Par gaand sookhi thi.

Apne lund ko Suman ki gaand par adjust kar Veer ne kuch hi dhakko me usse andar daal diya.

"Nnnnnnnnn~"

Suman : M-Maaalikkkk!!!

Veer : Raat me samay nahi milega. Aaj mein akele hi sounga. Isliye...! Tumhara dose abhi deta hu.

*Phaaaaattttt* *phaaattttttt*

Aur bas, Suman ki gaand ki thukaayi shuru ho gayi.

Veer uske kulho par chapet maar maar ke unhe laal kar raha tha aur aage jhuk woh unn thano ko nichod raha tha. Suman bas siskiya le le ke apni choot ke daane ko tatoone me lagi hui thi.

Thodi derr issi tarah dhakke maarne ke baad, Veer ka veerya Suman ki gaand me hi nikal gaya.

*Plop*

Jab Veer ne apna lund gaand se nikaala toh bina koi samay gavaaye hi Suman ne usse muh me bhar liya. Harr baar uski ye harqate Veer ko hairaan karne me majboor kar deti thi.

Raat hui, aur Sonali, Bhumika bhi dinner ke waqt Veer se mili. Sonali toh muh fulaaye hue thi.

Poore food truck ka kaam usse sambhaalna pad raha tha.

Veer jaanta tha ki Sonali ko khush karne ke liye usse kya karna hai.

Apne kamre me waapas aake woh laita toh khayaalo me kho gaya.

Harr jagah tension hi tension. Harr mod pe khatra tha. Kabhi woh raahat ki saas le bhi payega ya nahi?

Sochte hue uska haath apne honth par chala gaya. Suhana!!!

Usne jo kiya tha uske liye. Woh veer kabhi bhi nahi bhul sakta tha. Veer waha Suhana ke hosh aane tak rukna chaahta tha. Par woh jaanta tha woh samay ki barbaadi thi.

Upar se Suhana se turant nazre nahi milana chaahta tha woh.

Par ek baat saaf ho chuki thi ab. Ki chaahe kuch bhi ho jaaye... Veer hamesha Suhana ko protect karne waala tha.

Woh gehri neend me jald hi chala gaya aur abhi raat ke 1:15 hi baj rahe the ki Suman apne kamre se baahar nikli. Apne maalik ke sang nagn hoke sone ka aanand hi kuch aur tha.

Halaki veer ne usse mana kiya tha. Fir bhi woh khud ko rok na paayi.

Abhi woh badhi hi thi, ki usse kisi ki upar aane ki aahat sunaayi dii.

*Chhamm* *Chhamm*

Paayal ki khanak sunte hi Suman ke kaan khade ho gaye aur woh turant hi apne kamre ke darwaze ke peeche chhup gayi.

'Itni raat me-!? Bhala kaun ho sakta hai? Ragini jii!?'

Par woh galat thi. Veer ke kamre ke baahar khadi hui thi...

'Shweta Jii!?'

Shweta idhar udhar dekh ek gehri saans lii aur Veer ke kamre ke andar ghus gayi. Harr baar ki tarah, iss baar bhi Veer ke kamre ka darwaza khula hua tha.

Lekin Shweta ne andar ghuste hi usse band kar diya. Suman kuch derr tak khadi rahi uske baad ajeeb sii muskaan liye wo apne kamre ke andar ho gayi.

Yaha Veer ko sota paa ke Shweta ahista ahista uske qareeb aayi.

Veer ke bagal se baith woh usse nihaar rahi thi.

'Kitna pyaara lagta hai mera baccha sote hue!'

Sochte hue usne Veer ke maathe par bade hi pyaar se haath ferra. Ek aasu ki boond apne aap aankho se nikal aayi.

"Nahi hui mein naraaz. Sunn raha hai na tu? Nahi hui mein naraaz. Dhutkaar le mujhe jitna dhutkarna hai. M-Mein jaanti hu...! Mein jaanti hu tere dil me bhi mere liye kuch na kuch bhavnaaye hai. Hai na? Mera dil kehta hai...! Aur mujhe poora visvaash hai ki mein sahi hu."

Woh Veer ke sang laitate hue usse apni orr kheechi.

"Mein haar nahi maanungi. Kaan khol ke sunn le... *sniff* Tera dil kitna hi kathor kyu na ho jaaye. M-Mein usme apni jagah bana ke rahungi. *sniff* Haan!"

Aur woh ro padi.

Veer ke chehre ko thaam, usse jagah jagah choom ke apne seene se laga lii. Puchkaar puchkaar ke woh usse apne seene ke andar samaane ki koshish kar rahi thi.

"Mera baccha...!"

*Puch* *puch*

"Kaash... Kaash tu meri kokh se paida hua hota. N-Nahi! Ye mein firse kyu ateet leke baith gayi? Meri apni kokh se nahi hua toh kya-!? Mein tujhe asli maa se bhi badh ke pyaar dungi mere bacche! Tu dekhna... "

*Muaaah*

"Aaj nahi toh kal... Tere muh se maa kehlwa ke hi rahungi..."

Woh Veer ke chehre ko apne thano ke beech chipkaayi usse nihaar rahi thi jab Veer ka muh apne aap khul ke uske ek thann ke nipple ko apne andar bhar liya.

"Aaaahhhnnn~"

Hairaan hue woh neeche dekhi. Veer gehri neend me tha. Uski bauhe kassi hui thi. Kya ek bura sapna?

Shweta ek baar fir galat samajh baithi.

"Mein ye kese bhul gayi... Tumhe toh ek maa ke doodh ka sahi ehsaas bhi na mila mere bacche. Na jaane kese tumne woh saal guzaare honge... Sumitra ne tumhe apna doodh pilaaya tha kya? Kaash... Kaash mein hoti tab waha. Kaash inme doodh hota... Mere bacche ki pyaas ko tript karne ke liye...!"

Aur aasu chhalkaate hue woh iss baar peeche nahi hati.

"Agar tumhe mere inn vyarth urojo se hi santushti milti hai... Toh wahi sahi mere laal. Le!!! Le aur khud ko santusht kar le mere bacche! Pee le inhe~"

Sharmaate hue usne apne blouse ke saare hooks baari baari khole aur uske kharbooje jese thann hawa me azaad ho gaye.

Apne ek doodh ko haath se pakad usne nipple ko Veer ke muh ki taraf kiya aur jese hi uske hontho se lagaaya,

Ek jhatke me Veer ne uske nipple ko apne muh me bhar zorr se choosna shuru kar diya.

"Aaaahhhnnnn~"

Shweta ka ang ang hil ke reh gaya. Ye anubhav!

Aur uski aankho se aasuo ki dharaaye behne lagi.

"Mein sahi thi... Mein sahi thi... Mere bete ko maa ke doodh ki talash thi... M-Mein sahi thi!! Ohhh mere bacche ~ *muaaah* pee le betu~ pee le... Jee bhar ke pee!! Mera baccha! Ahh maa!!! Mein dhanya ho gayi aaj mere laal!!! *sniff* "

Woh khud se baate kar usse apne than chuswaane me lagi rahi. Usse poore samay woh chumti rahi, baalo par haath ferrti rahi. Usse yakeen ho chuka tha ki woh sahi thi. Veer ek maa ke doodh ke liye tadap raha tha. Aur mann me ek sankalp liye woh Veer se hi chipak ke usse apna doodh chuswaati rahi.

Par woh ye nahi jaanti thi...

Ki Veer ki pareshani kuch aur hi thi.

Woh toh neend me usse Suman samajh ke uske doosh choos raha tha. Jo chinta thi... Woh toh kuch aur hi thi.

Aur wo thi...

Uss aadmi ka unknown text.

Wahi aadmi jisne Veer ke raungte khade kar diye the.

Text simple tha. Par rooh hila dene waala tha.

"Ek antim message tumhare liye Veer. Don't try to track this number. Tumhe kuch haasil nahi hoga. Samay ki barbadi hogi. Enjoy your remaining days with your family. Do whatever you want...! I just want to tell you one thing and that's...!

I will kill you at the Crimson's Festival"
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys.
Naya arc shuru hua hai. Ye update 5.5k words ka tha. Ek do updates ke baad Village arc apni speed pakad lega. Abhi bas ek brief tha ki kya kuch haal hai ghar ke. Naya adventure incoming hi hai. Toh likes thokne ka aur revos rakhne ka guys!
Dhanyavaad!

 

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[Werewolf]

Ye bhi shi hai waise hamare pehle villan ki chori ho ske hai kyuki jb veer ne usko tapkaya tha to wha ek lakdi bhi tho sorry sorry ladki to wo bhi to sakat hai ya phir veer ka bhai ya uska baap koi bhi ho skta hai lets read and watch till that but jha tk werewolf bhai ki story ke according villan koi apna ho skta hai wo bhi dangerous......

Mind blowing update . It was Suhana special Update . We have seen Blast from the past from suhana's perspective . Veer Back To mumbai .

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Awesome update bro

Nice update

Amazing update

प्रणाम भाई

प्रणाम भाई सहाब

यादो का गलियारा जो कि बड़े अद्भुत तरीके से आप ने प्रस्तुति किया,
हक्क है आप को जो अपने हर अनुच्छेद में समय लेते है और बारीकियों पर ध्यान भी देते हैं, कहते हैं ना देर आए पर दुरुस्त आए,
सुहाना की यादों को आप ने जिस तरह प्रस्तुत किया इस से बहुत सारे पाठकगण का विचार बदला होगा
मेरे नजरिये से देखा जाए तो सुहाना वीर के उन चुनिंदा लोगों मैं से है जिससे वीर ऊंचाईयों की बुलंदियों पर पहुंचेगा
क्युकी किसी भी सफलता मैं हर किरदार का एक अलग रोल होता है और सुहाना उन्हीं मैं से एक हैं और दूसरा कारण है कि वो शादीशुदा हैं, क्युकी मुझे शादीशुदा ज्यादा पसंद हैं
मृत्युलोक के दरवाज़े से वापस लाकर आप ने मेरे विचारो को सही साबित किया

अब तो सुहाना के सभी एहसान खत्म हो गए हैं मतलब जो किस दुर्घटनावश हुई थी वीर और सुहाना के बीच अब बिस्तर तक रोमांचक और गरम संभोग तक जाएगी

ये राज भी खुला की सुहाना ने किस का खून किया था, पर भाई साहब दिव्या और सुहाना के सात गलत हुआ,
एक बार फिर दिखा की कैसे एक स्वार्थी पुरुष अपनी मनोकामना पूरी करने के लिए स्त्री पर जोर लगाता हैं क्यु नहीं समझाता की स्त्री खेलने की वास्तु नहीं है, उसकी भी इच्छा है

अब शब्दों को विराम दूँगा सायद ज्यादा बोल दिया होतो क्षमा चाहूँगा

बहुत ही प्यारा और उतना ही संवेदनशील अनुच्छेद
अगले रोमांचक अनुच्छेद के लिए मेरी शुभकामनाएँ

Jabardast update bhai maza aa gaya.

Fantastic update bhai keep posting

Jabardast update bhai

Samgha karo Ashish bru.....Aap kya chahte ho ki ye story bhi close ho jaye ! Writer phir se forum chor de !
Writer ke thread par jab log baatein karte hain to writer ko khushi hoti hai.... energy milti hai... motivate hota hai aur kuch badhiya likhne ke liye.
Pata nahi kis ne ye niyam bana diya ki writer ke thread par chatting nhi ho sakti.... Story aur thoda bahut entertainment se sambandhit baatein hoti hai to kya bura hai.
Agar koi bada post es forum par pana hai to Mr XF ka election lado aur es sawal ko apna hathiyar bana lo.

Nice update......

Awesome Fabolous update

Fantastic update bhai

Finally H. O. K. ends isi k saath Saath Divi or shuii ka past bhi pta chal gaya

Wohi Mai souch Raha tha ye Divi or shuii aisy chutiyaa k HAATH lagi kaisy ? Both are beauty goddess.

TU ya tha shuii or Divi ka past I didn't expect that mujhy Laga Divi NY Sono KY chakar Mai Kisi ko mara hoga .

Just like SLOGAN,ATISH Jin KY Saath unki dushmani thi but yaha TU Tanta hi Ulta nikla .

But wo scene awesome tha Pushkar KY Saath fighting ka Maja agya .

Wahi shuii ki split personality ka bhi pta chal gaya .

Waisy shuii NY Divi KY muqably Ziyada struggle ki hai life Mai wo akeli rah gaii thi almost. Bhut hard Raha hoga but she survive with guraw , goro Jo bhi wo LANGOOR hai han Nik bhi Saath Saath hai chutiyaa.

TU shuii Bach gai finally . Or wo veer ka last msg us Mai ye likha hai k wo chala gaya . Kiya wo vages Sy waqai chala gaya coz ak TU aapny kaha tha veer update 110 KY baad vages jaiy ga chalo chala bhi gaya TU wo naya Banda.

Jo system holder hai uska Kiya bnna I don't think k veer India wap's jaa kar apni family ko is khatry Mai Daly ga coz agar veer aisy hi vages Sy chala gaya TU wo koi aam Banda TU hai ni k veer ko dhond paaiy ga wo India jaa kar veer ko face to face dega jis Sy obviously veer ko problem hogi or I don't think k veer us Sy nimpty bagair chala jaiy gaa.

Chalo wo TU dekha jaiy ga veer Kiya krta hai or BLACK SHEEP pakda gaya ab question ye hai k Kiya wo koi normal cop hai ya koi important Banda just like CHUTIYAA (NIK). Let's see agy Kiya hota.

Over all update was hard. Maja agya .

Lagta hai Mera paragraph kaam kar gaya last wala jis Sy mega update mil gaya haha~ I know.

Or ab aaty hai ending line's par .aapny kaha WEEK'S Kiya Ziyada hafty lagny waly ak sy Ziyada? Ya fir ak week ? Ye clear kar dain..

Smash

1:30am

Update shuru hote hi mai samajh gaya tha ... ki Sonia Suhana aur Veer ka 3some is back on track ... balle balle ... kya mast 3some hoga ... aur ab to Gaurav ko dhoka dene ka bhi koi gam nahi ... harami hai sala ... uske sar par cuckold ke seengh hi shobha denge ...

This writer is a practicle person.
None of the story have all realistic things

Fantastic superb update bhai..

Apun bola tha na next update mega ho ga dekh Liya writer babo ka heartwaa apny haath Mai hai ab thanks na Bolna.

Marvelous jabardast Shandar awesome update bro

Fantastic update bhai

Nyc update bhai

Bahut hi shaandar update diya hai Werewolf bhai....
Nice and beautiful update.....

Nice update bro

I Told you Nik is something fishy... poor divya n Suhana

Mind blowing update bhai

Sorry ki koi jarurat nahi bhai again we love your story and we appreciate your efforts towards it

awesome update bro

Werewolf bro
Main sirf itna kahna chahunga aj tak ke sabhi updates mai mera favourite update tha....
Reason jo emotional touch main dekhna chahta tha stories mai apne bakhubi dikhaya h ...agar pic na hoti toh main pura sure hu ki agar reader ne jald bazi mai update nahi padha h toh har reader update padhte waqt ek aise trance mai tha janha usne suhana ki sari pic uske moment sad feelings happy moments khud imagination kiye honge .....waakayi apne bahut he behtrin tarike se suhana ke jeevan ko dikhaya h aur uske charecter ko itna build kar diya h ki log jo usko veer ke sath sex dekhna chahte the unka najariya he change ho gaya hoga suhana ke liye ........shandar ...... marvelous.....fantastic..............beautifull......and......heart touching.....update .....bro......

Nice update bro

Oh Its a beautiful update werewolf bhai

Bro must update tha

To ye tha suhana ka past bada hi emotional tha ye or gaurav or nik sale bhosdi wale kamine kutte madarchod ki aoulade bhadve bhen chod chutiye kamine harami kahi ke do ladkiyo ko majbur kiya main to bolta hu 4ro ka divorce karvado chutiyo ko bhi pata chale ki dusro ki majburi ka fayda jyada nahi teek ta

Or ab samaj aaya ki pusker ka kya Scene tha but bro pusker kin halato ke chalte aisa ban gaya ye nahi bataya wo sab kiss arc main pata chalega bro

Or ghar ka saap bhi kafi samay se nahi dekha pranjal dala kaha gaand marwa raha hoga

Or ab village arc ki bari hai finally we read the bhavnas secret

Outstanding update yara

Emotional update...

To aaj Suhaana ki story bhi pata chali aur ab uska attitude, split personality aur Veer ke saath uska behaviour sab justified lag raha hai.

Waakai bahut kuch jhela hai usne aur bahut kuch sacrifice kiya hai usne Sonu ke liye parivaar ke liye aur dost ke liye. Magar na kabhi kisi ko pata lagne diya aur naa kisi par ahsaan dikhaya Haan magar in sab ki wajah se uska attitude different ho gaya ki jo bhi madad karta hai wo apne faayede ke liye karta hai kyonki uske saath aisa hi hua tha aur isi wajah se usne Veer ko misjudge kiya. Lekin Veer ne hi usko samjha bhi sambhala bhi aur ab to shaayad Suhaana bhi usko chahne lagi hai. Bahut hi sundar update.

Fabulous update

Fantastic Update

Nice update and finally suhana bach gayi...in this story all the girls character are very...awesome....

Super update hai Bhai

Marvelous update Werewolf bhai....

nice1

Awesome update brother waiting for your next update
Ye veer Kahan chala gya ab?
Let's see

Aapki story ke update bahut acche lagte h

घोर आश्चर्यजनक भाग....

Waiting

This was such a lovely story..the threads.were.superbly interwoven. This was one story I used to wait impatiently for the next part. Unfortunately, The last few parts have made the storyline lose its tautness.The.episodes seem more disjointed and far more loosely connected than before.
I admire the writer's creative thinking and his writing skills very much. It is his prerogative and imagination which takes centre stage which is.undisputed. I accept that. Just a wee.bit.disappointed.at the loss of continuity in the story.
Waiting for the next part. Compliments for the excellent control over language and effort put right since the beginning. Best wishes.

Such me ek emotional upadte aisa hi hona cahiye. Aapne really me is Update par bahut hi jyada aur acha work kiya hai Werewolf bhai maja aa gaya.
Kaise koi jab marta hai to almost sbke aakho ke samne unki puri life gujarne lagti hai kisi short flashback ki tarah aur yaha suhana ke sath bhi bilkul wahi ho raha tha.
Uski life bachpan me to achi hi thi. Jo ki hmane saaf dekha. Aur divya aur wo dono kab se FRND'S hai aur kitni gehri dosti hai ye bhi pata chli hme. Iske sath hme tino little girl's ka bhi thoda sa childhood dekhne ko mila jo ki dekhna bahut hi sukhad tha.
lakin yaha ye saaf dikhaya gaya soniya ke past ki tarah ki kaise Kayera ke uske life se dur ho jane ke baad wo kaise usase impress karne ke liye bhale hi tod mehnat kar rahi thi. Lakin anjane me hi kahi na kahi usne isase apne big sis ko chot pahunchayi. Lakin Suhana ko is baat ka bikul bhi bura nahi laga jo ki uske true aur pure charecter ko dikhata hai. Lakin yaha galti uske mammy aur papa ki bhi hai. Jo unhen aisa nahi hone dena cahiye tha. Khir ab kya hi kahe is bare me.
Ek SECRET se ye bhi raaj khul gaya ki puskar ka aakhir hua kya tha. Wo kaise mara tha. Aur ye jaan kar mujhe thodi nirasa hui ki jaisa maine kaha tha Suhana ne use nahi mara tha. Lakin hua uske hi samne tha chlo kafi had tak baad meri sahi hi thi.
lakin ye Nick aur Gaurav dono sale itne bade wale kamine niklenge pata nahi tha. Chlo Nick ki to lutiya ab kabhi na kabhi dubegi hi aisa mujhe confirm lagta hai Quki divya mere khyal se ab bahut hi jld use apni life se laat marke nikal degi. Quki wo ab itni to capable ho hi chuki hai ki past ka sub sambhal sakti hai. Bhale Nick use darana cahe us baat se.
lakin Suhana bhi jarur Gaurav ko apni life se nikalegi lakin isme abhi time hai. Aur sath me ye baat bhi ab confirm hai ki veer hi uske sare problems ki medicyhai. Aur is baar wo kud veer ke paas jayegi thik hone ke baad.

lakin mujhe ye bhi janana hai ki kya hoga jab tino little girl ko pata chlega ki Pushkar ke sath kya hua tha ?
aur kya kabhi unko pata chlega bhi ? Sayad nahi !
khir veer abhi India wapas nahi aaya hoga jaha tak mujhe ummid hai wo jarur kud se sb smjhne ki kosis me laga hoga pari ki help se ab is matter ko kaise niptaye. Bahut hi jayad maja aane wala hai aage ab lagta hai HOK arc ne jaha hme rollar coster ke pick par pahucha diya hai. To ab HOV arc hme ab us pick se full speed me niche le kar aayega so Everyone apne apne aap ko tightly pakd ke baith jao.
nd once again excellent Update bhai.

Behatareen.

Suhana ki Puri jindagi ek update me samet di superb.

Bahut shukriya Suhana ko bachane ke liye
Ab ek kyu do hfte ki chutti jao

Chalo shuhana bach gyi

ab veer kha gya
Or vo dusra system ka kya hoga

Superb update

Maza agaya agla update is se b shandar hoga

Full Load of feelings

उम्दा लेखनी lअगले अपडेट की प्रतीक्षा में l

What an update it was from you writer mind blowing superb

"system sirf tumhary pass hi nahi ha"
This line caused shivers in my spine...
a chapter of new suspense has begun...
Hats off to writer...

Waiting for now update

Uttam Lekhni ka Prayog Werewolf bhai...Waiting for Next Update Eagerly...

Bohat hi romanchak update
Bass ek swaal
Jo divya ne suhana pe ehsaan kiye the
Wo kya the jiske chalte wo veer ke saath yaha aayi?
Or itni khaas dost hai to ehsaan kis baat kaa kiya?

Zabardast update

Bahut emotional update tha.
Suhana ki story bhi apni ek alag dukh bayan krti hai. Divya aur Suhana dono hi samay aur paristhiti ke shikar hai. Aur unke dukh ko door krne ki jimmedari kahi na kahi Veer ne apne kandho pe le li hai. Dekhna hoga kaise Veer aur suhana ka rishta aage badhta hai. Chuki jaan bachane wale se toh lagao badh hi jata hai aur Veer ne beete kuch dino me kitno ke jaan kitne hi bar bachaye hai, Suhana aur Divya bhi inme shamil hai. Humne Divya aur Veer ka apasi lagao ka udahran toh dekh hi liya hai aur kuch had tak Suhana aur Veer ke bhi najdikiyon ko dekha aur mahsus kiya hai ab ye najdikiyan kitni badhti hai ye dekhna hoga.

Ab aate hai Veer par toh kahani ke iss mod pe Veer ki talkif ab kai guna badh chuki hai. Uske sath ab aisa kuch ho chuka tha jiski usne kalpana bhi nhi ko thi. Aur ab khatra use khud ke upar toh badh hi gya tha magar sath me uske chahne walo par bhi khatra kahi na kahi badh hi gya tha. Jiska example abhi Suhana ke room me Veer dekh bhi chuka tha. Is naye khatre se nipatne se pehle Veer ko iss khatre ke bare me samajhna bhi hoga.
Ab dekhte hai Veer apne aap ko aur apne chahne walo ko kaise iss khatre se bachata hai.

Waiting for next update.

Super update bro

awesome bhai

lovely update .veer ne hospital pahucha diya suhana ko .aur jab wo behosh thi to shayad usko apna past yaad aa raha tha .
kaise uski sirf ek hi dost thi divya aur sonia ke bahut se dost the .
pushkar ke baare me bhi pata chala ki wo kitna pyara aur natkhat tha par uske saath aisa kya hua jo wo drugs bechne ke dhande me aa gaya . uske pariwar ne usko ghar se kyu nikala.

bachpan ki yaade jisme sab sonia ki waah waah karte rehte the uski hoshiyari ki wajah se .par suhana ki koi jyada value nahi karta tha .

divya ka suhana ko vegas bulana aur pushkar ke baare me batana aur yahi se shuru hua suhana ke bura waqt.
pushkar maara gaya divya ke haatho aur divya ko bachane me chakkar me suhana ne us dusre bande ki jaan le li .

yaha sabse ghatiya character sirf aur sirf nik ka hi hai jisne apne faayde ke liye divya se shadi ki ,agar wo chahta to dusre bande ķe katl ka iljaam bhi apne upar leke matter sambhal sakta tha .. kya ek detective 2 logo ki jaan nahi le sakta self defence me .
par shayad nik mila hua ho gaurav se ya divya ka bhi koi role ho .
majburi me shadi karni padi suhana ko par uske baad uske character me changes aane lage jo ek bimari ka roop le liya .
kya yaha pe nik aur gaurav ek ghatiya insan ke roop me najar nahi aa rahe . jinhone kisi ki majburi ka faayda uthaya hai .

suhana ka pura pariwar uske saath hai par veer nahi jisne usko sahi samay pe hospital pahuchaya .

ye sabse achchi baat hai ki suhana sahi salamat hai .

Superb fantastic fabulous lajawab update

Suhana ke atit ke bare mai jaan kar yeh to pata chala ki gourav ke sath koi payar nahi sirf ek mazburi ka rishta hai.suhana sab ke sath hote hue bi kitni akeli hai.or apne veer ne uske dil mai halchal to macha hi di hai
Superb update

Nice update

Ek sawaal tha. Pushkar sach mein mar gaya hai na, I mean foonk diya tha na use?

वाकई में क्या लाजवाब अपडेट दिया हैं भाई
सुहाना की पुरी लाइफ कैसे बीतीं हैं
उसे सबसे ज्यादा सोनिया की फ़िक्र थीं हर मामले में
जब सबका ध्यान सोनिया की तरफ हों गया सुहाना अकेली रह गई फिर उसके मन में जलन पैदा नहीं हूई
बल्कि उसे प्रोटेक्ट करने का ख्याल आया मन में

उसकी स्प्लिट प्रशनालिटी का कारण वो नटखट लडका पुष्कर हैं
जिसके बारे में जानकर सोनिया पर क्या गूजरेगी ओर उसकी मौत के बारे में जानकर क्या गुजरेगी
यहीं विचार और गौरव के साथ उसकी मजबूरी में शादी होना और शादी के बाद प्यार का ना मिलना हीं उसकी स्प्लिट प्रशनालिटी का मुख्य कारण हैं
क्यूंकि उसने अपनी भावनाओं को दबा दिया लेकिन वो दिव्या के जितनी स्ट्रोंग नहीं थीं

लेकिन वीर का उसके जीवन में आना और उसकी स्प्लिट प्रशनालिटी को कंट्रोल करना
वीर के प्रति उसके आकर्षण प्रकट कर रहा है
अब वो भी वीर की दिवानी हो गई हैं भाई

सुहाना को बचाने के लिए बहुत बहुत धन्यवाद वेअर वोल्फ भाई
अपडेट कमाल था भावनाओं का बवाल था
कुछ समझ नहीं आ रहा हैं क्या लिखूं

बहुत ही शानदार लाजवाब अपडेट वेअर वोल्फ भाई

Superb update

Bai such me Dil khus kar diya.....
On superb

Awesome flash back

Just superb marbouls update
Superb description of a dying person what they thought

Jabardast update bhai maza aa gaya to suhana or Divya ki shaadi bus ek tarah ka samzota hai. Or chalo ye accha hua ki suhana ko hose aa gaya or veer kaha gaya wapus india ya other system wale unknown person k peeche to nahi gaya .

Mind-blowing update
Extraordinary writing

Awesome update bro

प्रभु मैंने आगे चल कर भी लिखा है मतलब भविष्य मैं

Super fantastic update bro

Boht zabardast update

Apratim apratim apratim magically delicious, mere pass sabd nhi hai is bhavna ko vyakt karne ke liye bhi mind blowing bhavnatmak update beautifully described very well written...

Suhana ke Fatichar husband par ki yeh particular attack mein uska bhi kuch yogdaan hai

Great or lovely update bro

Great update Werewolf bhai.
Suhana ki ab tak ka jiwan samne aa gaya. Andaja to tha ki suhana ke past me jarur kuch hua he par ab samne aa gaya sab.
Kaera, Ava, Sonia ke sath do school jati aur dosti kari apni senior divya se. Well school me ese 1-2 bachhe to hote hi he. Matlab suhana ka apni humummar me koi close friend nahi tha. Kaera ka life ke bare me alag hi ek perspective raha he ab tak kahani me. Aur uper se usse jyada kuch nahi pata jiwan ke bare me. Aur yahi wo Veer se sikhegi. Pushkar bhi dikha jaha wo bachpan me ek hasmukh bachha tha masti majak karne wala. Aur uski life me fir baad me pareshani aayi hogi tabhi wo galat rashte nikal pada.
Pushkar hi wo link tha jiski wajah se suhana US gayi. Divya Udhar Nik ke sath reh rahi thi aur kaam sikh rahi thi apna. Socha to yahi hoga ki pushkar ko samjha ke wapis le jayenge ya surrender karwa denge aur US me witness protection milta hi he to pushkar ki life waha bhi set ho sakti thi, par pushkar jese apne jiwan se hi tang aa chuka tha. Uske mann me sab ke liye gussa tha, narazgi thi kyuki usko uske kharab samay me kisi ne help nahi kari. Na hi kisi ne pucha hoga uske bare me.
Ese hi pushkar ko pakad ne ke chakkar me divya suhana se goli chal gayi. Aur ye ghatna unke jiwan ko hi badal di puri tarah se. Nik aur gaurav bhi bahut bade chutiye he jinhone undono ke circumstances ka fayda uthaya.
Case closed ho gaya par dono ko bhari kimat bhi chukani padi uske liye. Nik aur gaurav dono hi unko apna chahta the aur mouke ka fayda utha liya dono ne.
Sonia apni behan ke halat puri tarah se samjh na saki jab uski shadi ho rahi thi. Wahi shadi ke baad suhana ko mental illness ho gayi. Ab itna sab hua tha uske sath to ye to hona hi tha. Par uske samne bhi suhana ladi par apni ek split personality bana li. Iss point tak to suhana ke jiwan me kuch bhi achha nahi hua jisse wo lagaav rakh sake. Par tabhi uski life me veer aaya aur uske aate hi suhana me bhi changes aaye. Veer ko ek equal friend ki tarah treat kiya, uski chinta bhi kari ye sab pehle wali suhana na kar pati agar koi aur hota to.
Apna jiwan pura hota hi dikh raha tha usko. Par ese kese wo chali jati. Sonia, uske mom dad sab suhana ko hosh me dekh khush he par uski aankhe veer ko hi khoj rahi he. Aur yahi pe ek khaas baat he, jab koi ese hosh me aata he to wo usko dekhna chahta he jisse wo sabse jyada juda hua hota he, close ho ya kuch apne pyaar karne wali/wale ko dekhna chahte he. Aur yaha suhana veer ko dekhna chahti he. Aur yahi pe gaurav haar gaya. Bhale hi usne suhana se shadi kar li par wo uske dil me apni jagah nahi bana paya aur ab koi chance bhi nahi ki wo kar payega vesa kuch.
Abhi to sab khush he ki suhana bach gayi par baad me sawal jawab bhi honge. Aur ye gaurav wala sach bhi sabke samne aana chahiye. Shailendra aur namrita dekh nahi sakte kya ki unki beti ke jiwan me kya ho raha he, wo kin pareshani me he ?? Shadi karake bhul jayenge kya suhana ko ??
Sonia ne veer ka naam liya he to agle update me uske bare me jarur puchenge uske mom dad. Suhana ke liye message bhi chhod ke gaya he wo. Ab usse nahi pata ki usne hi suhana ko bachaya he ekakipan se. Aur ab suhana bhi veer se close rehna chahegi.
Vese wo black sheep sala ye Nik hota to achha rehta.
Sath hi me department me Mike hi ek achha banda laga pure house ok killers arc me. Shuru se wo kind, helpful raha he.
Suhana aur Divya ke bare me jaan ke bura lagta he kyuki unke paas choice hi nahi thi. Ladki ke jiwan me uski shadi hona sabse important time hota he. Aur ye koi esa faisla nahi ki aap 1 din me lo. Galat nirnay se aapka jiwan barbaad ho sakta he aur sahi nirnay se jiwan khushaal banta he. Par yaha to suhana aur Divya ke paas rashta hi kya tha ? Kuch nahi. Dono ne usko apna fate maan ke accept Karna pada aur aage move on kar gaye. Par suhana ke liye aasan nahi raha sab. DID, apne jiwan me koi pyaar karne wala nahi, na koi close friend (only Divya, wo bhi hajaro mil dur rehti he) yahi sab baato se wo toot gayi. Aur materialistic vastu se khud ko ek tarah se shant karti gayi. Aur iss wajah se hi ghamand aa gaya uske andar. Tabhi to veer ko wo ring dikha ke khud ko uper dikhana chahti thi wo. Par ussi veer ne usko change kiya.
Usko apni sonu se bahut lagav he. Wo yahi chahti he ki jo uske sath hua wo sonu ke sath na ho. Bahut care karti he wo uski bachpan se hi.
Suhana se parallel dekhe to ek bhavna hi lagti he jiske paas bhi choice nahi hogi jab usne Veer ko uss ghar me chhod diya. Aur jaha choice nahi hogi waha reason hota hi he. Bas wahi reason ab samne aayega. Bhavna ka ateet. Ya kahe ki bhavna se geeta tak ka safar.
Aur ha chocolate leke jana he Veer ko bhulna nahi.
Aur Nat suhana ko dekhne nahi aayi kya ?? Nik, gaurav ka hisab bhi hona he.
Waiting for next update (arc).

Vese personal assistant ka kuch kaha tha na veer ne Emma se.

Superb Fantastic amazing mind blowing Awesome update bhai...

It's called mega update kya update tha bhai maza aa gaya ese update ko mega update khaha jata h log to chota sa update likh k bhi mega update kheh dete h...

Suhana or Divya ka past bohot acha nahi tha or specially undone ki shaadi jis hisab se dono k husband n unke situation ka fayda uthaya h Nik k bhale kitni bhi phehchan kyu na ho ajj jo wo life ji raha h usme sabse bada haath Divya ka h chahe wo house ho car ho or etc jitni success Divya ne hasil ki h utni Nik Hasil karne m bohot time nikal jata tab jake wo Divya ki barabari kar pata Divya isi liye jab suhana usko gaalo deti thi to jada kuch nahi bolti thi usko bhi pata tha Nik kesa h Suhana ne bhi apni man mar k shaadi ki thi Gaurav se kyu ki agar wo Gaurav ki help nahi leti to uski life or uska future kharab ho jata or Gaurav ne us moke ka fayda uthaya or suhana se shaddi karli per apni Suhana ka to us incidents k bad DID hogaya tha or usme suhana ka wo gusse wala roop or apni husband ki harkato se wo uspe bohot gussa karti thi or child jati thi...

But last m Suhana jinda h ye bohot Badi baat h akhir veer ne use bacha hi liya per wo usse mile bina h India return aa gaya ye samaj nahi aya mujhe jis insaan ne appki jaan bachane k liye app ko marne wali bullet khud bich m aake khud ko harm kiya appko bachane k liye app uske hosh m ane k phele h waha se chale jayo bhale appne uski family ko inform kiya ho or uski family bhi hospital m aa gaye ho per appka tab tak rukna banta h jab tak usko hosh na aa jaye ya ye conform na ho jaye ki wo abb fine h ab ye kyu kiya veer ne ye to next update m hi pata chalega...

Bahut badhiya update hai bhai..... Akir kar the house of the killer arc khatam hua.... Or kya sachhhi veer ke peyar padh geyi.....or divya or suhana ka shadi wakai me bahut gehra aaghat kiya dono pe....dekhte hai aage kya suhana gourav ke sath erehna chahti hai ya nhi.....or mujhe lagta haisuhana ko uske maan pachand ladka mil geya sathe divya ko.. Bhi
Or wakai sab ki jeevan bhi ek titli kk tarah hi to hota hai...kab koun mar jaye kisko pata chalta hai yaar...
Waiting for next update... Very soon

Suhana to bahut tadpi hai or Divya v same isliye bo ese ban gayi bahut si bat v Pata chali ...
Btw fantastic mind blowing update​

bhai aaj update aana hai na......

Nice mast update bro and awesome update

Nice update

दुआओं में काफी ताकत होती है । सैकड़ों लोगों की दुआएं सुहाना के लिए संजीवनी बूटी का काम कर गई । वेयरवोल्भ भाई ने कोई कसर बाकी नहीं रखी थी सुहाना को शमशान पहुंचाने में लेकिन वो भुल गए कि रीडर्स की संवेदना और सहानुभूति सुहाना के साथ थी । इमोशनल अटैचमेंट हो गया था सुहाना के साथ हम रीडर्स का ।
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कुछ और भी रीडर्स की फरियाद काम कर गई जो या तो साइलेंट रहकर पढ़ते हैं या जो बिना सदस्यता लिए हुए ।

हमने देखा है जब अमिताभ बच्चन साहब को प्रशंसकों की दुआओं ने उन्हें मौत के दरवाजे से कैसे वापस खींच लिया था ।


यह कथन मेरा नहीं , गुरू नानक जी का है - " नानक दुखिया सब संसार " ।‌‌ इस संसार में सभी इंसान दुखी हैं ।
गरीब - अमीर , स्वस्थ्य -बीमार , राजा -रंक सभी किसी न किसी वजह से दुखी हैं ।
सुहाना और दिव्या की कहानी भी कोई जुदा नहीं थी । एक ऐसे लड़के के लिए ये अपनी जीवन तबाह कर दी जो सोनिया का मात्र दोस्त भर ही था । जो ड्रग्स का कारोबार कर रहा था । जिससे उसके परिवार वाले भी दुखी थे ।
सुहाना का पुष्कर के बारे में सुनकर तुरंत अमेरिका पहुंच जाना निहायत ही बचपना से भरा हुआ फैसला था । उसके लिए अच्छा होता कि वो सारी जानकारी सोनिया को देती । आखिर वो सोनिया का कभी बेस्ट फ्रेंड हुआ करता था ।
एक गलत फैसला और उसके सपनों का धाराशाई होना ।

सुहाना की जान है उसकी छोटी बहन सोनिया । बड़ी बहन होने का हमेशा ही फर्ज निभाया ।
बचपन के दिनों में एक तितली को देखकर काइरा की कही बातों को उसने काफी गंभीरता से ले लिया । तितली की उम्र बहुत कम होती है लेकिन जितना भी होती है इंसान को एक सीख देकर जाती है ।
हमेशा तितली की तरह उड़ान भरते रहो । उसके रंग बिरंगी पंखों के समान दुनिया में खुशियों के रंग फैलाते रहो । सभी जीवों में सबसे अधिक पाॅजीटिव जीव होती है तितली ।
सुहाना को तितली की उम्र नहीं बल्कि उसके सीख से प्रेरित होना चाहिए ।

गौरव के साथ सुहाना का विवाह एक विवशता थी । जैसे कि निकोलस के साथ दिव्या की ।
शायद यही कारण था जिससे वो डिसोसिएटिव आइडेंटिटी डिसआर्डर जैसी बिमारी का शिकार हो गई । अगर वो मानसिक रूप से प्रसन्न और संतुष्ट रहती है तो यह बिमारी कोई खास नुकसान नहीं कर सकती । जरूरत है उसे वीर की । जरूरत है उसे वीर के प्यार की ओर जरूरत है उसे वीर के संरक्षण की ।

दोनों लड़कियों की शादी उनकी मजबूरी थी जहां प्रेम का एक तिनका भी नहीं था । एक तरह से इसे ब्लैकमेल ही कहा जायेगा । निकोलस और गौरव ने प्लानिंग के साथ यह गोरखधंधा खेला था । शायद इस के बारे में बाद में और कुछ जानकारी मिले !

मुझे समझ नहीं आया कि दिव्या को सुहाना के मोबाइल से सिर्फ गौरव का ही नाम क्यों दिखाई दिया ! दिव्या सारी खबर उसके माता पिता को भी तो दे सकती थी । ऐसे नाज़ुक क्षण में माता पिता से बढ़कर और कौन हो सकता है !

अपडेट खतम और अमेरिका प्रवास भी खतम लेकिन उस व्यक्ति के बारे में हमें कुछ पता ही नहीं चला जिसने खुद को सिस्टम से लैस बताया था ।
उन लोगों के बारे में भी जानकारी नहीं मिली जिन्होंने ये हमला किया था ।

अपडेट हमेशा की तरह खुबसूरत और वाह वाह था ।
काफी लम्बा अपडेट था यह । काफी टाइम जाया हुआ होगा । इस कठोर परिश्रम के लिए आपको बहुत बहुत आभार भाई ।

जगमग जगमग अपडेट ।

She beautiful bro!

Update - 30 ~ The Best Gift

Veer ka birthday toh tha hi par saath hi saath aaj kisi aur ka bhi b'day tha. Wo shaks aur koi nahi balki Suhana aur Sonia ki Maa thi ~ Jyoti!

.....suhana aur sonia ka maa ka naam Namrita hi hai aur Death king ne sahi bataya tha......

Jabardast update hai guru
Dil balle balle ho gaya

Superbbb Updatee.

Toh suhana bachh gayii. Aur saath hu humhe Suhana ka exact past bhi pata chal gaya. Dekhte hai ab iss dusre system ka kyaa raaz hai.

देखिये जी,
लेखक का काम होता है "लिखणा",
ओर लोगोका काम होता है "पडणा" ओर "सर्हना".

लेखक अपना काम बखुभि निभा रहा है,
तो हमे उसकी प्रशंसा करणी चाहिए!

मेरे ख्याल से ये अब तक की बेस्ट कहाणी मे से एक है!

बाकि का मुझे पता नहीं!

आप लिखते रहो, हम आप के साथ है!!!

ओर ओ दिन दूर नहीं होगा जब इस कहाणी के पेज १०००० पार हो जायेंगे!!!

Badhiya update bhai....

Ye kya tha???? Kya tha ye???
Goodbye title kaun rakhta h??? Title padh k hi meri himmat nhi ho rahi thi update padhne ki...
mujhe laga aapne hamari Suhana ko tata bye bye kar dia... who does that? Uske baad little suhana dikha di... Pakke se laga tha mujhe Suhana will be no more... But thankfully.... Finally you saved her... Thank you!!! Usse kahani se na hatana k liye... Warna meri gun taiyaar thi aap k liye...

This update!!! Ohh god!!! This update...! It had everything I wanted... Sab kuch jo main dekhna chahti thi Suhana k baare me isme wo sab dikha dia aapne... And how beautifully you showed it...

Aur sabse khaas baat kya thi pata h? That butterfly.... Omg!!! You came out of your comfort zone and tried to implement something new. Aisa pehle kisi update me dekhne ko nhi mila hume...

Shuruaat me aapne butterfly ko dikhaya. Par wo aise hi nhi tha... Har ek scenes me butterfly ka reference beech beech me baar baar aata raha... You compared her life with that butterfly... See! This is what impresses me most. The little details....

Aap baar baar uss butterfly word ko beech me laate rahe suhana ki situations se compare karne k liye... This is a technique... Jidhar aap upar ek particular chiz mention karte ho aur update k khatam hote hote aap uss chiz ka use karte ho mainly for the comparison or to express it to the readers more. H na??? Kya main sahi hu?? Werewolf Sir???

Little Kaera sonia and Ava... So cutee...
yaha pe aapne kitni cleverly wo scene dikhaya. Readers ne ye notice ni kia ki aap ne na sirf butterfly ko baar baar use kia balki... Teeno friends k beech ki personal life bhi dikhaayi h...
sonia ka reaction butterfly dekhne k baad... Uske baad Kaera ka reaction... It shows that how matured she was at that time. Aur kyu thi woh? Because Kishor's influence was already at the beginning stage in her life... Uss fake baba ki teachings follow kar Kishor ne already Kaera ko dheere dheere ek machine banana shuru kar dia tha...

Even ava was so innocent then... She asked 'Will it die too?' Awww my heart...
Lekin Kaera ko dekho... Usse pata bhi ni tha ki wo kya ban ne jaa rahi h... My heart aches for her so much... This scene had so many information which readers might have missed. Aur yahi aapki khaas baat h...

Meri baat se shayad most of the audience agree karegi ki flashbacks are the most irritating and borings part of the story... Right? Ab maano na maano yaar... But we all know it bores us. Par iss story k saath kabhi aisi koi dikkat aai hi nhi mere saath.... Pata nhi aisa kya h... Are hum toh Villains k past dekhe baithe h.. aur wo bhi itne sad the ki unke liye tak ro diye... There's one thing out of numerous many things that you know how to do it well Sir is how to show flashbacks...

Literally suhana ki pokri history dikha daali aapni iss ek update me... Pushkar ka bhi poora scene aa gya .. uski family issues ka nhi tha but I don't think it matters anyway... Suhana ko DID hua... Like you went into everything... Even shaadi bhi dikhayi aapne... Scene shifting ka toh kuch pucho hi mat... Mujhe pta hi nhi chalta ki scene shift kab ho gya .. itna smooth rehta h...

Udhar aapne divya ki shadi ki baat ki aur fir next line me mumbai me shehnaiya dikhaate hue vegas se mumbai aa gaye aap. The switch here... aap back and forth do places me itni smoothly switch karte ho ki mujhe pata hi nhi chalta... Woh toh accha h ki aap **** laga dete ho... Warna pata hi na lage aur...

ab thoda update k baare me bhi keh du...
Suhii ka past bohut kharab tha... Sach me... Siblings k saath comparison itna relatable tha mere liye... Suhi k liye jitna appreciate karu utna kam h... Sab kuch pta hone k baad bhi wo sonu ko support karti rahi aur literally usne 1% bhi jealousy nhi dikhai .. like 1% bhi nhi... Ittu sii bhi nhi ... Main hoti to main sonu k upar kood jaati sach me... Respect to Suhiii for loving her sisoo soo much... She's the best sis you can have... Upar se itne time tak wo usse protect karti rhi... Sonu ko jis din pata chalega to kya reaction hoga uska?

Ek aisa update jisme main character ki presence tak nhi thi... Poora update ek side character ki story pe tha... And look at the people... And responses... Aise develop kiya jaata h ek side character... Main 99% sure hu agar same chiz kisi dusri kahani me hui hoti... Log bhaag gaye hote ... It's a fact.... I'm reading stories here for 2 years... And I can say I've noticed such things... People don't like to be on flashbacks that much. But here... Ahem ahem....

we got to see Suhi's grandfather... Kitne pyaare insan the wo... Shayad ab wo present me nhi h Suhi k liye... His teaching... 'samay ghav ko thik nhi karta. Wo sirf hume unke sang jeena sikhata h.' Wowww!!!

These line are actually very very deep. Time doesn't heal wounds. It only teaches us how to live with them.

we got to know that Kaera doens't likes butterflies... Although she loves flowers. We saw it in her past... But my question is that... Does she still loves them? Kya Veer Kaera ko flowers gift karega to wo usse accept karegi?

I also want to point out two more things... Again the detailing... Aap aisa har baar kyu karte ho?

bullet description again... Bullet andar jaati toh shrapnels me break ho jaati h... Suhana lucky thi jo uski arteries aur bone me bullet hit nhi ki... Who does that? Aap ye bhi likhte ki suhana bas bach gayi. Are baba toh bhi koi kuch nhi bolta .. but you went all that far to bring out the logic too... Wo bachi to kyu bachi... The in-depth detailing we have here...

Pushkar scenes. The fight .. it was very simple yet so engaging... Kuch khaas action nhi tha uss scene me... Lekin khaas kya tha? The atmosphere!!! Suhii ka pushkar ko confront karna... Literally main soch rahi thi ab kya hoga... Ab kya hoga... Kya suhi ne hi maara h pushkar ko... Wo ek secret iss poore scene ko kheechta gaya ... Action ki zaroorat hi nhi thi...

and then their trafic fate... Black sheep tha Department me... I knew it .. i just knew it... Koi na koi hoga hi yaha pe... Aur main guess kar rhi hu veer ne hi iska khulasa kia hoga jaane se pehle...

pictures were as always... Too accurate... Ye aap kon se keywords daal k dhundhte ho pictures?? Haaaa??? Bata bhi do... Aapne apni jaadu tona wali baat to batai nhi... Yahi bata dijiye...

Aur ye kya? Break le liye? aise time pe kon story leave karta h... what will happen to us? Next update k liye main kitna wait me hu... But aap to... Nikal liye...

leave it... Thank you for Saving suhii... I'm happy for this at least... waiting for update 110. Veer's return to home. Please show kaera and arohi more now. Bbye.... Care... And... Love your work...

Waiting for next update

Ding werewolf bhai sabse pahle mein yeh update padna hi nahi chahta tha because of last favours.Aur aag mein ghee dala goodbye padhkar
Update aya I was online but as I read the theme of update I don't dare to read it aaj two quarters marke update read kiya socha jo hoga dekha jayega outstanding update to keep readers on benches completely promessing of keeping suspense thriller readers should keep gesing wats next sabkuchh iss update mein mix kar diya out of box out of imagination just take your break and keep posting

Bhai veer ki jaranay kab finesh ho ga
Or mumbai ruten aya ga

I'm Expected A Villain With System But This Early Means The Super Villain Is Going To Be A Very Tough One.

#BoycottThisStory

Fuckingly amezing nd interesting n full of emotions n much more things jin ko mention krna Werewolf bhai ki toheen krna hogi such a beautiful n adorable story update keep it up buddy nd also keep rocks like this nd also in future

Nice update Bhai

अगर किसी के पास जेसे ये कहानी है इसी के जैसी कोई दूसरी कहानी है तो प्लीज़ सेजेस्ट करे

Solo leveling

Next update kab aayega

Update kab ayenga

Update......bro

Update update update...

Koi nhi jab ready ho jaye...to bata dijiyega bro...tab tak hum log intezar kr rahe hn..

Bhai mujhe laga update aagya...

Zaberdast update bhai
Dono saheliyon poora bachpan dikha dia jo woh do o nahi chahti thi mazbooran wahi huwa unke saath
Baherhal suhana bacha gayi qismat achchi thi
Department ek banda mila huwa tha
Dekht h ab Village arc m kia padhne ko milta h
Bahot khoob shaandaar update bhai

Ok bro

Werewolf मित्र आपकी कहानी को पूरा 109 अध्याय को पढ़ा, थोड़ी मुश्किल हुई क्युकी हिन्दी को इंग्लिश फ़ॉन्ट मे पढ़ने मे कई बार गलतियां हो जाती है व समय भी लगता है ...
अब इस बेह्तरीन रचना के बारे में शब्द भी नहीं मिल रहे हैं प्रतिक्रिया व्यक्त करने के लिए..
जो काल्पनिक लोक सिस्टम की रचना की गई है वह अद्भुत है अविश्वसनीय पराभूत है..
वीर की यात्राओं से परिपूर्ण कई संस्करणों को तो जिया जा सकता है.. हर पात्र ने अपना जीवन जिया है उसे चरितार्थता से अपने प्रस्तुत किया है..
रहस्य रोमांच श्रंगार प्रेम फंतासी वीर हास्य सभी भावनायें से परिपूर्ण है आपकी कृति... 2100 से ज्यादा पृष्ठ ये अद्भुत है अद्वितीय है
आपकी कहानी मे लाइव जिया जा सकता है..
सभी आर्क पर्व अद्भुत है और पूरी तरह से मनोरंजक व विस्तृत चित्रण के साथ है
आपको पूर्ण रूप से साधुवाद
ऐसे ही सभी पाठकों को अपने अद्भुत लेखन से आनंदित करते रहे
अगले आर्क पर्व के इंतजार में

Koi baat nahi itni dhasu story ke liya itnaa to chalta hai....

ये कहानी कहा से ली गई है किसी को मालूम है क्या अगर किसी को मालूम है तो प्लीज़ लिंक forward kro

Werewolf Brother, I have read all the updates of this story of yours. Mere Paas Kehne Ko Jayada Kuch Nahi Hai. Or Mene Kabhi Kisi Forum Par Koi Review Nhi Diya, Isiliye Koi Baat Galat Lage To Mind Mat Karna.
Tumhari Ye Story Waqai Kabile Tareef Hai.
Jis Tarah Se Tumne VEER Jaisa EK Sadharan Ladka Jo Bachpan se Hi Har Kisi Se Dutkaara Jata Raha, JisKe Apne Usko Ek Useless Person Samjhte HAI. Use Apne Raste Ka Kaata Samjhte Hai. Uske Jariye Sari Jameen Jaydaad Hadapna Chahte Hai. Or Ye Sab Paane Ke Liye Bo Kisi Bhi Had Tak Jaane Ko Taiyar Hai.

To Wahi..

Veer Jo Ek Sharirik Or Mansik Roop Se Abhi Bhaut Durbal Hai Ki, Bo Agar Kuch KrnA Bhi Chahe To Kuch Kar Nhi Sakta. Usko Ye Bhi Nhi Pata Ki Kyu Uske Ghar KE Log Hi Usse Itni Nafrat Karte Hai Ki Use Apni Aankho Ke Saamne Tak Nhi Dekhna Chahte. Humesha Uske Sath Geroon Ki Tarah Vyavahar Karte Hai ,Uski Apni Sagi Maa Jo Bachpan Me Hi Use Akela Chhod Kar Chali Gayi Or Kabhi Usko Dekhne Tak Na Aayi. Uska Pita Jisne Kabhi Usko Samay Nahi Diya Bas Apni Jhooti Shaan Ko Badhane Me Laga Raha. Uske Ghar Me Keval Kavya, Or Uske Dada Jaise Ek Do Log Hi Hai Jo Usse Humdardi Rakhte Hai. Baaki Ragini, Aarohi, Uski Sauteli Maa Shweta OR Behen Bhumika Jinhe Koi Fark Nhi Padta Bo Mare Ya Jiye.

Uske Dono Chachere Bhai Uske LIYE Har Baar Naya Shadyantra Rachte Rahte Hai. Use Kisi Bhi Tareeke Se Ghar Or Jayadad Se Bedakhal Karna Chahte Hai. Or Usme Bo Bahut Had Tak Kamayab Bhi Ho Jaate Hai..

Lekin Ye Sab Ye Nahi Jante The Ki 'VEER' Ki Kismat Ko Kuch OR Hi Manjoor Tha. Yaha Entry Hoti Hai Ek Ese Character Ki Jo Anjane Me Uski Poori Life Ko Badal Kar Rakh Deti Hai. Wo Ladki Sonia, Jiski Gaadi Se Veer Ka Accident Hota Hai. Yahi Veer Ko LIFE Naya Mod Milta Hai, Jab Bo Gaadi Ke Sath Sath Ek System "Pari' Se Bhi Takra Jata Hai. Or Yahan Se Aage Uski Zindagi Me Nidhi Ek Inocent Lady Jo Veer Ko Us Waqt Sahara Deti Hai Jab Uske Sage Akela Chhod Dete Hai. Yahan Se Aage Ka Safar Jisme. Veer Ki Zindagi Me Shreya,Juhi, Kaira, Suhana, Sonia, Divya, Natalia, Aarohi, Kavya, Tejal, Bhawana, Aatish,Slogan Nik, Mike, Aadi... Characters Aate Hai Jo Is Story' Ko Romanchak Bana Dete Hai. IS Kahani Ka Har Update Or Character Apne Aap Me Kaafi Dilchasp Hai. Aapne Jis Tarah Se Is Story Me Jeevan Ke Har Pehlu Ko Dikhane Ki Kosis Ki Hai , Isko Padkar Kabhi Lagta Hi Nhi Ki Hum Koi Kahani Pad Rahe Ho Balki, Aisa Lagta Hai Jaise Ye Humare Saamne Ho Rahi Ghatna Ho. Kahani Ke Har Character Aisa Hai Ki , Jane Se Pehle Apni Ek Chhap Chhod Jata Hai.

Aisaa Bahut Kam Hota Hai Ki Kisi Kahani Ko Padne Ke Baad Usse Ek Judav Mahsus Ho. Kayi Baar Hum Story Pad Kar Do Chaar Din Yaad Rakhte Hai Or Phir Bhool Jate Hai.

Abhi Tak Maine Jitni Bhi Kahaniya Padi Hai. Is Forum Par Tumhari Ye Kahani Un Khas Kahaniyo Me Se Ek Hai. Jise Padne 'Me Is Forum Par Aata Hu. Is Forum SE Pehle Me Xossip Par Stories Read Karta Tha. Wahan Bhi Kuch Hi Story Or Writers The. Jo Apni Kahani Ko Aise Likhte The Ki Apko Kahani Kam Kisi Ki Beeti Hui Zindgi Zyada Lage , Unme Se Kuch Hi Naam Or Kahani Ese Hai Jinhe Me Abhi Tak Bhool Nhi Paya Hu. Jaise "SGP. 2009 "The Incomplete Intention' ,. Agni Das , Or Is Forum Par Anandsngh12 Ki Saajan , Saand Or Tumhari Ye Story "Baadshah - The Tales Of Debauchery. Jo Baaki Sab SE Alag Hai. Dusri Stories Me Jahan Writer Ek Dusre Ki Kahaniyon Ko Copy Ki Kosis Karte Hai. Wahi Aapne Is Story Me System "Pari' Jaisi Ek Taakat Ko Darsaya Hai Jo Apki Is Kahani Ko Baakiyon Se Alag Banati Hai. Shuruaat Me Jab Mene He Story Padi Thi To Aisaa Hi Laga THA Jaise Ye Bhi Baakiyon Ki Tarah Hu Hogi. Jisme Hero Manhoos Banke Paida Hota Hai Or Uske Maa Baap Uske Bhai Behen Use Kutte Ki Tarah Marte Peethte Rehte Hai. Or Phir Writers Story Ko Chhod Kar Bhaag Jata Hai. Or Kahani Khatam.

Lekin Isme Aisa KUCH nhi Hua. Ye Kahani Apni Raftaar Se Aage Bhadti Ja Rahi Hai. Jo Ki Ye Darshata Hai Ki Aap Ke Liye Ye Story Kitna Maayne Rakhti Hai.
Story Ke Kuch Last Wale Update Kafi Emotional The Khaskar Suhana Wala Update Jisme Uski Jaan Jaate Jaate Bachi Hai. Is Update Me Hume Pata Chala Ki Uski Beeti Hui Zindagi Apne Andar Bahut Dard Samete Hue Hai. Jo Veer Ke Aaane Se Bahut Had Tak Kam Ho Chuka Hai. Veer Uske Liye Uski Life Me Ek Naya Savera Bankar Aya Hai.

Me Apni Vaani Ko Yahi Viram Deta Hu.
Intzar Rahega Naye Updates Ka Jisme Village Arc. Ke Sath Sath Ye Bhi Pata Chalega Ki Naya System Wala Vyakti Kon Hai???

Update kab tak

Zabardast fantastic update

Werewolf bhai apse ek request hai, please ap jaldi jaldi update diya kro, janta hu request ke naam par kuch jada hi bol raha hu but kya kru bhai apke story ki aadat lag gai hai, jab kabhi apka new update aane me deri hoti hai to mai us waqt purane updates phad leta hu from the beginning, lekin aasa kar k bhi dil ko tasalli nahi milti bhai, humesha dimag me yehi chalte raheta hai ab aage kya hoga, next update kaisa hoga, kahi koi twist to nai hoga usme, ya koi raaz khulega usme...!!
Kabhi kabhi lagata hai bhai ki apke story k chakkar me kisi reader ki jaan na chali jaye is suspense k chalte, lekin kuch bhi bolo bhai apki story hai bhot jabardast aur story ka concept bhi bhot lajawab hai, bas ap aase hi updates dete rahiye aur hum sabhi readers ka manoranjan karte rahiye...

Agar kio baat buri lagi ho ya maine kuch galat bol diya ho to mafi cahata hu bhai.. ☺

Intjaar....

W8ing

Koi muje bataega conteste kha pe hota h khidr ja kar deknge

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chalo ek baat toh achhi hui jim pakda gya jbki jim shatranz ka ek kamzor piyada hi lag rha.... Jisne police or department ke naak me dam kr rkha tha... Veer ko bhi Beowulf's ka help lena padaa usko handle krne ke liye... Halanki veer ko points or fame points reward ke roop me mila jo veer Ke liyr acha hai.. Sath me divya ke favourability bhi 50 pr fix Ho gya jiska level sirf uper hi jayega niche nahi askta... Divya ne Daniel or Connor dono ka puzzle solve kr liya hai jisme dono ne ek hi baat kaha hai house of killer se related jisme ek Se jyada logo ke hone ke chances hai... OR koi psycho type ring master hoga jo sbko order deta hoga.... Dark web se mujhe Lgta hai isme task dete honge jo jeeta woh jiyega shayad Zinda bachne pr sath me dollars bhi dete honge or isme zinda rhne ke liye sbko marna hi hota hoga jeetna zrruri hoga Or jitoge tabhi Jab jiyoge... ye shayad Hollywood movie hai ek yaad nahi arha Kuch -2 wesa hi concept lag rha hai ya fir Hollywood movie death Race jesa kuch concept hoga baki agey pta chal hi jayega... Divya buri trh darr gai shayad video me nightwalker toh nahi dekh liya... nolan ne saaf kr diya hai ke uske department ke 2log maare gye ab house of killer me divya or nik ko apne admi bhejna hoga jo mere hisaab se divya or nik veer ko hi bhejenge.. Nik ke entry pr hi mujhe woh thik nahi lga tha shayad ane wale time me woh veer ke liye khatra ban skta hai... Veer toh divya ke liye bhi challenge ban gya hai divya ka charm veer pr beasar hota dikh rha hai.... Karan ne bhi news suna diya ke jahan usne paise investe Kiya usme profit hua hai obviously uske 'stock market' Skill ka kamaal hai... Jo karan ko nahi pta... Nidhi ki smile or uska shrmana ye dikha rha hai ilu ilu ke lakshan dikhne lga hai.. Juhi toh kamaal ki hai my sweet bachaa hahaha wohi veer or nidhi ko kareeb layegi uska jariya bnegi..... Niharika itna jldi nahi baaz ane wali akhir uske bachpan ke dimag pr ek mard ki chhavi aisi chhapi hui hai ki veer ko bhot papad belne pdenge... Akhir bache ka dimag hota hi kitna majboot hai ek baar koi baat baith gai toh baith gai dekhte hai veer Kya krta hai niharika ko sudharne ke liye.... Ragini se ab raha nhi ja rha qki iss baar jo smooching wagaireh hua hai uski latt si lag gai hai... Veer ki toh khairr nahi jab woh ayega usko kaccha khane wali hai.... Suman sab smjh rhi hai uski kutil muskaan bta rha hai ki Usko sab khabar hai veer or ragini ka rishta kidhar ja rha hai shayad usko sweta ke bare me bhi pta hai.... Bhawna maa or tej ab jee tod mehnat krenge veer ka pta lgane ke vaaste dekhte hai aise me usko Brijesh and family milta hai ya nahi nidhi milti hai ya nahi bhawna maa ko sbse pehle college jana chahiye pta krne ke liye qki abhi veer ki umr student wali hai to woh college me toh pdhta hi hoga... Shayad iss chakkar me nidhi mil jaye uske baad ragini ke ghar ka pta jahan veer rhta hai.....

Update 99

Veer mission impossible ke liye nikal chuka Hai Mike ko sath me lekr hai... Mike badaa hi nek dil pratit Ho rha hai jisne veer ko akele bhejna thik na lga or sbse lad jhagad ke veer sang Ho liya... Veer ne bhi uski dariyadili ko dekhte hue usko safe rkhne ki soch rkha hai.... Veer or Mike Island pr puhunch gye jahan nightwalker ka mansion hai... Jab divya nightwalker se itna darr gai toh jab or villains ayenge to Kya hoga mujhe nahi lgta nightwalker akhiri hoga uske upr bhi koi hoga.... Mujhe lga hi tha veer ko hi bhejenge iss mission pr, halanki suhana ne virodh kiya sath me divya ne bhi, suhana ke thoughts badal rha hai veer ke liye ek attachment sa dikh rha hai... Divya bhi shayad veer ke Prati kuch soft wala mehsoos krne lgi hai shayad... House of killer ko ek game house me badal diya gya hai... OR task ye hai ki gold bars dhundhna hai... 3 rounds me jo 30 -30 minutes ke honge.... Uske baad nightwalker ka kehar barsega... Ek sawaal bade Bhai agr un participates me koi morning tak zinda Bach gya bina koi gold bars liye to usko safely jane diya jayega ya dobara game khelna hoga ya maar diya jayega?... Zoey jo ldki hai woh kuch jyada hi veer me interest le rhi hai.. Ldkiyon ki fitrat hai apne bachaaw ke liye shayad veer ka istemaal krna chahti Ho? OR shayad aisa hoga bhi agr zoey pr koi musibat hoga to veer zrur usko bachane jayega.... Mujhe toh bss ye dekhna hai veer zinda vapas jayega toh Sath me gold bars bhi lekr jayega ya khali hath or jab zinda Jayega to nik ka reaction hoga? Suhana Kya feel kregi?... Khas kr divya qki uske pati ke wajah se veer musibat me fansa tha... OR ek baat mansion me jo gate hai kyaa? Wahi gold bar hai... Agr hai to veer ne check kyo nahi kiyaa? OR woh chikhne ki awaaz kiski thi? Lgta hai koi tapak gya... Kya emma? Nhi woh darpok ldki room dubki hogi time up hone ke baad risk nhi legi... ya fir woh Chester jo kuch jyada hi udd rha tha.. That's it?? This is so easy krke dekhte hai.. Kon gya?

Werewolf (bade Bhai) maaf krna Maine iss Story se thoda rest liya tha.. Main concentrate nahi kr paa rha tha.. Main mantelly disturbed Ho gya that.... Ap jante Honge main kis baare me baat kr rha hu... ab se regular present rhunga pakka wala vada sorry

Mujhe lgta h k ab thoda India ka scene b waps se suru hona chahiye...#veer_back_to_india

Fantastic update
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Waiting for next update bhai

JABARDUST MIND BLOWING FANTASTIC EXCELLENT AND INTERESTING UPDATE BHAI

So nice story

Update

Kab Tak Update Aane Ki Sambhavna Hai......

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Awesome, fantastic, fabulous beautiful❤❤❤❤❤❤❤

Fantastic

Werewolf Bhaiji, sorry to disturb you on your break pr laalchi man maanta hi nhi... To kbhi mauka mile to ek pari aur apne veer ka ek return journey ke dauraan hua samvad hi suna dena kbhi jisme wo usse anya system ke baare mein puche bhale hi kuch pata na chale pr pari ke saath ek mini update...
Bahut time se pari aur veer ka conversation nhi hua waisa thoda masti mazak thoda mood upliftment... Only if it suits you
Seedhe seedhe na bhi bol doge to apan bura nahi maanenge bs dimag mein aaya to bol diya... Baaki intzaar krne ke liye to hum taiyar baithe hi hain

Mind blowing, fantastic update bro

Nice update

Contest kab se suru he or kese vote dena he thoda data dena yr

Lagta hai village arc me incest ki bharmar hogi?

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Intjaar....

Can anyone tell me how to vote ?

Writer mahoday apka one week hogya h update kb ayega btane ki kripa kre

bahut shandaar story hai, please update ki raftar badha dijiye.

लम्बे tour पे निकला था तो review ना दे सका.
Sorry for that...

अब देता हूँ-

House of killers arc में कम से कम 2-3 levels और होने चाहिए थे!
अधूरा सा लगा।
Boss fight jaisa तो कुछ लगा ही नहीं..

स्लिपरी जिम तो टुच्चा गली का गुंडे से ज़्यादा कुछ नहीं था वीर के लिए!
इसलिए उसकी तो बात ही नहीं करूँगा!

नाइट वॉकर के मैन्शन से कहीं ज़्यादा अच्छा तो आतिश का जलसा था!!
पर तब सोचा कि नाइट वॉकर तो छोटी मछली है...
आगे इससे बेहतर antagonist आएगा...

पिचर सचमें लाजवाब था...
पुराने जमाने में विश्कन्या ऐसे ही मारती थीं अपने शिकार को!!!!

जो technique उसने यूज़ करी उसी से सांप के ज़हर का antidote भी बनता है। घोड़े को बहुत कम मात्रा में सांप के venum का injection लगते हैं, बार बार।
उससे घोड़े के खून में ऐंटीबॉडीज़ बन जाती हैं। ब्लड में से red blood cells अलग कर के जो plasma बचता है, वही होता है ज़हर का प्रतिरोधक या antidote.
और ये हर ज़हर का अलग होता है... एक का दूसरे में काम नहीं करेगा !!!!

पर पिचर भी एक प्यादे के बराबर ही था!

ओर उसके आगे...
कुछ भी नहीं..!

आतिश और स्लोगन के आगे तो ये कुछ भी नहीं थे..!
इससे कहीं ज़्यादा ऐक्शन तो जब वीर क़ाएरा को बचाने गया तब था!!

और वीर ने पुलिस हेड्क्वॉर्टर में कितनी overacting करी नाइट वॉकर के secrets बताने में!!

पर दिव्या वाला सीन तो कमाल का था...
उसे पढ़ कर तुम्हें पुच्ची करने का मन कर गया!!!
क्या ज़बरदस्त erotica लिखते हो मज़ा आ गया!!
स्टोरी में तरावट से आ गयी

दिव्या और सुहाना दोनो ही abusive marriage में हैं और दोनो ही मजबूरी में शादी के लिए राज़ी हुई, ये दिखा कर उनका character ग़लत नहीं है ये बता दिया...

House of killers में सस्पेन्स तो था पर ऐक्शन कम था..
my honest opinion...
पर मज़ा तो आया...!

इंडिया के characters को मिस किया काफ़ी!
अब देखते हैं इंडिया जा कर वीर क्या करता है...

hats off to your writing bhai

Update kab Mila ga werewolf

Bhai konse nashe karke aap ye comment karte ho Please do tell, mai jaanane ke liye excited hu

Tata salt hoga

भाई लड़की देखने तो नहीं जा रहे?

Bro we are waiting

Bhai kitne din baad daloge story ko ye bta do

Waiting for next one

Ye Pawan Kaun hai

Zabardast update Bhai............................



likhna chahta hooo


please updatwa de do

Ab or wait nhi hota bhai jaldi se update do https://media.tenor.com/NCp49Vx5_P0AAAAM/spanky-waiting.gif

Waiting for new update bro

Update 110 has been posted.