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Update - 50 ~ New Year's Blast
Ab tak...
*Ding*
[System has reached Level 5.]
*Ding*
[In-built feature ~ Translator has been unlocked.]
*Ding*
[In-built feature ~ Slot has been unlocked.]
*Ding*
[Quest hunt is now accessible.]
'Huh!??!'
Ab aage...
1st January...
New Year's Morning...
Aaj naye saal ka pehla din tha. Jaha Veer ke ghar me, yaani ki Ragini ke ghar me iss waqt sabhi ground floor par hassi mazaak kar aaj naashte me kuch special banaane ki soch rahe the, wahi iss waqt Veer apne kamre me apne bistar par baithe sawaalo ke chakravyuh me ghira hua tha.
Wese hi Veer uss Slogan waale mission ko lekar uljhan me tha pehle se hi ki bhala aisa mission system ne usse kyu saupa tha, jiska koi sense hi nahi bann raha tha!?
Upar se ab Veer ko kuch aur baatein sata rahi thi. Aur wo thi...
[Oye Itna shaant kyu ho tum!? Huh!? Kuch bolo bhi!?]
Pari ka ye firsa badla hua ravaiyya.
Zaahir sii baat thi, ki kal raat jab Veer ne Nidhi ko hug kiya aur wo mission complete kiya, uske baad hi Pari Level 5 par pohuch chuki thi. Aur naye features bhi unlock ho chuke the. Parantu uske baad se hi Pari ka ravaiyya ek baar fir badla badla sa nazar aa raha tha jisse lekar Veer uljhan me fassa hua tha.
Bhala kya hai ye system!? Pari baar baar yu apna ravaiyya kyu badalti rahi hai? Kabhi aisa lagta hai sab sahi hai par kabhi achanak se Pari ajeeb dhang se apna behaviour poora change kar leti hai.
Aur iss baar bhi wahi hua tha. Akhir kya raaz chhupa tha iske peeche!?
'Halla mat karo... I'm thinking!'
[Thinking what!? I can listen to your thoughts you know.]
'Just shut up!'
[Ugh!!! Hmph...!]
Ek gehri saas lete hue Veer ne kal ki vardaato par ek baar firse prakaash daala aur sab kuch yaad kia.
Kal Nidhi ko hug karne ke baad usse 50 points mile the. Uske paas pehle hi 190 points the. 10 points wo Appearance me jo daal chuka tha. Toh ab total 240 points uske paas maujood the.
Par ab sawaal aata hai naye features ka...
Jo ki the~
In-built feature ~ Translator
In-built feature ~ Slot
Aur wo Quest Hunt.
'Pari! Kal toh tum sleep mode me thi. Ab mujhe vistaar se sab kuch batao inke baare me.'
[Yeah! Right! So... Basically, Translator ek In-built feature hai. Just like Check and all. Aur jesa ki iska naam hai wesa hi iska kaam hai.]
'Hmm!? Don't tell me...!?'
[Yes! Tumne sahi samjha. It's a Translator. Chaahe koi bhi vyakti koi bhi bhaasha kyu na bole, tumhe unke bole gaye shabd translate hoke screen par dikh jaenge. Aur ye automatically hoega. So, you don't have to worry at all.]
'I see! Par ye 'tum' kehke kab se bulaane lagi mujhe tum? Hmm?'
[Wh-What!? Don't tell me ki tumhe 'aap' hi sunn'na pasand hai.]
'No! Bas! Tumhara behaviour achanak se badal gaya isliye puch raha hu.'
[W-What!? N-No! It's not like that. Mein toh tumhaari wahi Pari hu. Right!?]
Veer ne kuch kaha toh nahi aur wo apne dimaag me bhi kuch sochna nahi chaahta tha. Warna Pari uske thoughts padh leti. Isliye usne shaant rehna hi theek samjha.
'Tell me about Slot! Ye kya hai!?'
[Yesss!
Yahi toh hai asli cheez. Slot ka matlab toh jaante hi ho tum right?]'Hmm! Yaani ki ek prakaar ki khaali jagah jaha pe kuch rakha jaa sake.'
[Exactly!]
'Aur ye Slot kya kaam aane wala hai mere!?'
[Right! Yahi pe Quest hunt kaam aata hai. Ab tum Quest Hunt ko access kar sakte ho.]
'Explain!'
[Hmm~ Simple bhaasha me... Quest open karo aur card paao.]
'Card!?'
[Yes! Various cards! But ek dikkat hai.]
'Kesi dikkat!?'
[Quest me se do hi kism ke cards nikalte hai. Ek Legendary Tier Card aur ek Trash Card.]
'Hmm... Toh!?'
[Legendary Tier Cards nikalne ke chances 15% hai. And Trash card nikalne ke chances 85%]
'Hmm! I'm getting it now.'
[Yes! In simple terms, Quest Hunt me jaa kar Quest kholo, usme se cards pao aur uss card ko Slot par lagao.]
'Hmm! Aur Legendary Cards kis type ke honge?'
[Good Question! Legendary Cards jesa ki naam hi bataata hai. They will be Legendary. Par harr Legendary card apne aap me alag hota hai aur unki apni khoobi hoti hai. For Example~ Yadi tum Quest open karte ho aur usme se Legendary card nikla toh wo kayi saare Legendary cards me se ek ho sakta hai. Tumko aisa card mil sakta hai jis se kaho tumko 50% kam neend aaegi. Jaldi nahi thakoge. Wagarah wagarah. Par ye kaam tab hi karega jab iss card ko Slot me equip karoge.]
'This...!?'
Pari ki harr ek baat Veer ko jese naye naye jhatke de rahi thi.
[Kyu na isse live try kare!?
]'!??'
[Tumhare paas 240 points hai.]
'Quest kholne ka price kitna hai!?'
[200 points!]
'Wtf!???'
[Of course! Tumhe kya laga? 10-12 points me sab ho jaega?]
'Fuckkkkk! 200 points!? Wese hi badi mushqil se missions ke through points ikhatte ho paate hai. Aur upar se...'
[Bhulo mat ki isme Legendary Card nikalne ke 15% chances hai. Yadi ek bhi Legendary Card haath lag gaya na. Toh tumhe pata bhi nahi hai ki wo kya kar sakta hai.]
'Aur Trash card haath laga toh? Aakhir uske chances toh 85% hai?'
[Toh kuch nahi, gaye points...
]'Wtf!???'
[Y-Yeah! Ab kuch paane ke liye risk toh lena padega na!?]
'Shiitttttttt!! So it's a gamble...!'
[Exactly!]
Veer samajh gaya tha ki ye poore juye ke khel ki tarah tha, jisme uske jeetne ke chances 15% the aur haarne ke 85%.
Dusre shabdo me, 200 points invest kar usse quest kholne milega. Yadi usse Legendary Card milta hai, tab toh sab kuch sahi hai. Par yadi Trash card milta hai, jiske chances itne zyaada hai toh Veer ke 200 points gaye samjho. Poori tarah se barbaad ekdum.
'Aur meri kismat jaanti hi ho tum right!?'
[Yeah! It's trash...
]'!???'
[What!? I'm saying the truth!]
'Ahem! Right!'
[So? Live try karna hai?
Ho sakta hai tumhe Legendary Card mil jaaye!?]'Fine! Do it!'
[What!? Really?]
'Yeah! Do it! Gaye toh gaye. Par yadi Legendary card mila... Then... mein bhi toh dekhu kya kar sakta hai wo card!?'
[Wow! Mujhe nahi laga tha tum risk loge.]
'I said do it!'
[Ugh!!! Fine! Fine! Just say Quest Hunt!]
'Quest Hunt!'
*Ding*
Veer ke kehte hi uske mann me ek imaginary screen khuli jisme ek treasure chest jesa kuch dikh raha tha usse.
Aur neeche open karne ka option tha.
Par...
Open ke hi just neeche, waha likha tha~
Cost : 200 Points.
Bechaara Veer ye dekhte hi apne decision ke baare me dobaara sochne laga.
[Bas click karo mann me hi uss option pe. Aur bas. Quest khulega aur kuch na kuch milega. Hehe~]
'Fine!'
Dil pe haath rakh, Veer ne ek lambi saas lete hue open par click kar hi diya aur tabhi...
Usne dekha ki wo quest dheere dheere khula aur andar se chamakti hui roshni aa rahi thi.
Aur uske khulte hi ek card baahar aake nikla.
[This... This...!? No waayyyyyyyyy!
]Pari ka shock hona bhi swabhaavik tha.
Akhir Veer ko aisi cheez jo mil gayi thi.
Uski screen par, ye card maujood tha~
'Wait! Let me read. Increases Bone's Rigidity by 70%, Recovery Rate by 60%... Wait whaaaaaatttt!??? What the fucccckkkkkkk!?????'
[This... Just how lucky you are?]
'Almost Unbreakable Rib... Ribcage guaranteed!????'
[Yes! Dekha ab. Mene kaha tha na!? Ki ek hi card sab kuch badal sakta hai. Now look at that baby hahaha~ Bone Reaper. Saral bhaasha me, aapki jo bones ki hardness hai. Yaani ki unka thospann. Wo 70% badh jaega. Aur bone ki recovery 60% badh gayi hai. And look at that... Almost Unbreakable Ribcage guaranteed. Matlab aapka ribcage... Almost Unbreakable bann chuka hai. Tootne waala nahi ab. Damnnnnn!]
'This...!?'
Veer ko shocked hona laazmi tha. Akhir cheez hi aisi haath lagi thi.
[Now equip it!]
Pari ke nirdesh anusaar Veer ne forun hi uss card ko apne slot me equip kar liya.
[Dhyaan rahe. Kisi bhi card ko equip kar lene ke baad aap usse 24 ghante ke pehle nahi hata sakte. Kam se kam 24 ghanto ke baad hi aap unequip kar paoge.]
'Gotcha... Let's go~'
***
Veer ka new year filhaal toh sahi jaa raha tha. Filhaal ke liye. Par yahi baat shayad anya jagah par nahi kahi jaa sakti thi.
Jese ki iss waqt...
Yaha apne gaav me aaye kuldevi ke darshan ke liye Manorath aur baaki sabhi ko aaj din me ghar ki orr wapas Mumbai ko lautna tha.
Kal unhone darshan kiye the aur aaj unki hi taraf se Bhandaare ka aayojan bhi tha.
Bas khaana almost ready tha aur bas logo ko baatna baaki tha.
Arohi iss waqt ek jagah baithi hui thi aur saare khaana banaane waalo ko dekh rahi thi wahi dur se hi.
Ye sab uske liye naya tha. Wo pooja paath me shuru se hi utna samarpit nahi thi. Aur yaha aake bhandaara karwaana, ye sab uske liye ekdum naya tha. Iss kaarya me wo pehli baar sammalit ho rahi thi.
Abhi wo baithi hi thi ki tabhi usne Kavya ko aate hue dekha. Kavya kisi se muskuraate hue phone par baat kar rahi thi.
'Kavya...!? Bhala kis se baat kar rahi hai!?'
Usne mann me socha.
Kavya jab nazdeek aayi toh usne khud hi puch lia.
Arohi : Kavya!? Kiska call hai!?
Kavya : Hmm? Ohh! Veer bhaiya ka... Lo na... Aap bhi unhe New Year wish kar do...
Kehte hue usne Arohi ko apna phone thama diya. Aur Arohi bechaari ab iss soch me pad gayi thi ki baat ko kese start kare.
Veer : Hello!?
Arohi : H-Hello!?
Veer : Arohi... dii...
Arohi : Umm... H-Happy... Happy new year Veer!
Veer : Happy new year to you too!
Arohi : Th-Thank you!
Veer : ....
Arohi : Wo... Hum... Hum sabhi kuldevi ke mandir aaye hai...
Veer : I know that...
Arohi : R-Right! Wo... Dada jii ne tumhe laane ka socha tha. B-But...
Veer : I know that too...
Arohi : O-Ohhh!! Okay! W-Wo...
Veer : !??
Arohi : N-Nothing...
Veer : Ohhh!
Bechaari Arohi, na toh samajh paa rahi thi ki kese conversation ko chaalu kare aur yadi kar bhi de toh kese uss conversation ko banaaye rakhe!? Aaj bhala itna kyu darr rahi thi wo Veer se baat karne me!?
Wese ye darr nahi tha kuch aur hi tha. Jisse wo khud bhi nahi jaan paa rahi thi.
Usne Kavya ko phone waapas se thamaya aur khud uth ke chali gayi.
Kuch derr me hi bhandaare ki saari prakriya poorn ho chuki thi aur sabhi ne fir baatna bhi shuru kar diya.
Gaav ke log bhaari maatra me aaye aur sabhi ne acche se bhandaare ka lutf uthaaya.
Kavya jaha kheer baatne me lagi hui thi toh wahi Arohi sabzi baat rahi thi.
Bhumika aur Shweta puri baatne me lage hue the.
Aur Manorath chup chaap sabhi ko muskuraate hue dekh rahe the.
Wese toh wo chalne me ekdum swasth the par fir bhi unhe zyaada thakaan na ho isliye unke liye ek wheelchair leke rakhi thi Brijesh ne.
Taaki jab wo thak jaaye toh koi bhi wheelchair ke zariye unhe unki jagah le jaa sake.
Aur iss waqt bhi, subah subah mana kiye jaane lar bhi aaj wo taiyaariyo me apna haath bataaye jiske chalte kaafi thakaan bhar aayi thi ab unme.
Wheelchair par hi baithe hue wo araam farma rahe the aur apne parivaar ko mil jul ke gaav ke logo ke beech unn sab ko bhandaare ka prashaad dete hue wo bade hi chaav se dekh rahe the sab kuch.
Tabhi unhone dekha ki Pranjal waha se unki taraf aaya. Aaj Pranjal ne itna kaam kiya tha ki Manorath khushi se fule nahi sama paa rahe the.
Pranjal (haafte hue) : Dada jii! Bas kuch derr ka aur hai... Fir hum sab bhi baith jaenge khaane.
Manorath : Beech beech me araam bhi kar liya kar 5-10 minute beta. Aaj toh tumne boht kaam kiya hai.
Pranjal : Kya Dada jii!? Devi ke mandir me... Ye sab kaam thodi maana jaata. Yahi toh pooja hai. Aur pooja jitni bhi karo, kam hi lagti hai.
Manorath toh jese harr ek pal guzarte khushiyo ke naye starr par pohuchte jaa rahe the.
Pranjal : Aapne aaj darshan kiye!?
Manorath : Abhi nahi beta.
Pranjal : Ye kya baat hui Dada jii!? Kherr! Jab sabhi khaana khaa lenge uske baad mein aapko leke chalunga. Upar mandir me...
Manorath : Bilkul beta. Ab tum araam karo. Subah se lage ho. Warna perr boht dukhenge. Thoda sa rukk jaaya karo.
Pranjal : Abhi nahi Dada jii! Meri behne mere rehte hue akele kese kaam kar sakti hai? Bhaiya aur mein dekh lenge sab. Aap araam karo.
Aur itna bol, wo chal diya waapas unhi gaav waalo ke beech unhe prashaad baatne.
Sab kuch ekdum sahi jaa raha tha.
Ye pal, Manorath ke liye sabse zyaada khush-haal tha. Kyuki aaj wo apne parivaar ko ek saath gaav waalo ke liye seva karte dekh rahe the.
Yahi hoti hai uparwaale ki mahima, ki wo na jaane kab ek saath sab ko le aaye aur ekjut kar de.
'Kaash mera Veer bhi yahi hota...!'
Sochte hue Manorath apne khayalaato me kho gaye.
Kuch samay beet jaane ke baad sab kuch kushal mangal se sampann ho chuka tha aur ab bas gharwaalo aur mandir ke trust logo ka hi khaana bacha hua tha.
Jab gaav waale log dheere dheere jaane lage toh Manorath ne sabhi ko khaane ke liye hidaayat dii.
Aur bas, neeche dari biccha ke sabhi parivaar ke sadasya pattal me khaana paros shuru ho chuke the.
Pranjal : Kaash... Mera bhai Veer bhi yahi hota... Aur Ragini Bhabhi bhi!
Pranjal ne shaatirta se halki awaaz me kaha. Uske bagal se Arohi aur Kavya baithi hui thi. Aur ye vaakya sunte hi dono ki hi bauhe sikudne lagi.
Wo jaanti thi ki Pranjal toh ulta unhe Veer se dur rehne ko kehta tha toh bhala aaj wo yaha uske baare me kese soch sakta hai?
Ye zaroor dhong tha. Mann me ye nirdhaarit kar, dono hi behno ne usse ignore hi karna sahi samjha.
Wahi dusri aur Shweta aur Bhumika apni baato me lagi hui thi.
Shweta : Kya hua? Baat ho gayi na?
Bhumika : Haan! Sab kuch sahi hai hotel me mom.
Shweta : Mene kaha tha na. Tu khamakha tension le rahi thi.
Bhumika : Hmm! Wese... Aapne fir uske baare me kya socha? Matlab? Kesa kya chal raha hai?
Shweta : Beta! Bas... Jald hi Papa jii decision lenge zameen ka. Aur fir dekhna, humaare paas hamaara hissa hoga. Fir usse hum jese chaahe use kare.
Bhumika : Ohhhh! Par... Aapko kese pata Dada jii jald hi decision lene waale hai!?
Shweta (khuspusaate hue) : Vivek ne toh yahi kaha tha.
Bhumika : Hmm? Kya kaha!? Kuch sunaayi nahi diya mom!
Shweta : Ahh!? Arre nahi beta. Mene kaha ki mera mann kehta hai ki jald hi Papa jii decision lene waale hai. Tum dekhna.
Bhumika : Ohhh! P-Par... Unhone toh kaha tha na ki... V-Veer yadi ghar me nahi hoga toh tab tak koi bhi charcha zameen ke baare me nahi kii jaegi?
Shweta : Hmm! Kaha tha unhone. Par tum dekhna meri bacchi, jald hi denge wo apna faisla.
Bhumika : Hmm~
Shweta apni beti Bhumika se bhi baatein chhupaayi hui thi. Wo baatein ki wo Vivek ke saath mili hui hai aur Veer ko baahar nikalwaane ke plan me Vivek ka hi haayh tha. Bachaari Bhumika ye soch ke chal rahi thi ki uski Mom hi sab kuch kar rahi hai.
Idhar Shweta aas lagaaye baithi thi ki jald hi wo mauka aaye jab Manorath apni jayzaat aur zameen ka batwaara kare aur wo apna hissa lene me safal ho jaaye. Fir toh Shweta ko kisi cheez se matlab nahi hone waala tha. Bas apni hotel, apni zameen, aur apni bacchi. Bas!
Par usse kya pata tha. Ki jis khaayi se usne Veer ko feka tha ussi khaayi se fekne ke liye Vivek uske peeche khada hua tha.
Wo ye nahi jaanti thi ki Vivek ka iraada usse sui ke baraabar tak ki zameen dene ka nahi hai. Kya hoga jab Shweta apne karmo ke fal ka parinaam dekhegi? Jab usse pata chalega ki jis zameen ke liye usne itne paapad bele the, wo toh uske haath aani hi nahi thi.
Jab sabhi khaana khaa ke fursat hue toh bas ab nikalne ka samay ho chuka tha. Lagbhag shaam hone ko aa gayi thi.
4 baj rahe the...
Wese toh wo sabhi din me nikalne waale the par sab kuch thoda late hua ya yu kahe ki sab kuch hone me samay zyaada lag gaya. Aur issi kaaran vash aaj wo thoda late the.
Pranjal Manorath ke paas aaya aur unse bola,
"Dada jii! Darshan nahi hue na aapke abhi bhi?"
Manorath : Haa beta! Darshan karna baaki hai. Ek akhiri baar jaane se pehle.
Pranjal : Chaliye! Mein karwaaye deta hu Dada jii!
Manorath : Haa chalo beta.
Kehte hue jab Manorath uthne lage toh pranjal ne unhe pakad ke waapas se wheelchair par baitha diya.
Pranjal : Arre arre!? Ye kya!? Subah se thak gaye ho aap. Aap isme hi baitho raho mein leke chalta hu na?
Manorath : Beta isme!? Arre waha seedhiya hai beta. Seedhiyo me kese le jaoge upar tak?
Pranjal : Arre Dada jii side me rasta bhi hai. Upar jaane ka. Udhar se chalenge na hum.
Manorath : Beta fir bhi chadhaayi toh hai na. Thak gaye hoge tum bhi. Rehne do...
Pranjal : Na matlab na... Mene kaha na. Aap tension mat lo. Mein nahi thaka hu. Bas aap chaliye.
Manorath : Accha! Accha beta theek hai.
Aur apne pote ki baat maante hue Manorath akhir kaar baith hi gaye. Pranjal pyaar se muskuraaya aur theek unke peeche chala gaya aur wheelchair ko pakad wo upar side me bane mandir ki orr le jaane laga.
Par iss waqt uski wo muskaan... Pyaar bhari muskaan se tabdeel hoke ek haivaani kutil muskaan bann chuki thi.
Aur uski nigaahe Vivek ko dekh rahi thi. Wahi Vivek ki nigaahe bhi chup ke se Pranjal ki aankho se takraayi maano jese mann hi mann kuch baatein kahi jaa rahi thi.
Upar side ke raaste se le jaate hue Pranjal dheere dheere Manorath ko mandir ke dwaar par le gaya.
Aur fir mandir ke andar bhi...
Andar aate hi Manorath ne devi ke darshan kiye aur prashaad bhi liya.
Jab lautne ki baari aayi toh Pranjal ne Manorath ko seedhiyo ke paas laake roka aur bola,
Pranjal : Arre! Mene prashaad toh liya hi nahi Dada jii!
Manorath : Jao beta le aao. Fir chalte hai.
Pranjal : Abhi aaya Dada jii...
Aur itna bol wo chal diya Mandir ke pujaari ki orr waapas peeche.
Pranjal prashaad le hi raha tha ki pata nahi kya hua ki Manorath ko wheelchair aage badhi.
Manorath ne jab aahat paate hi peeche dekha toh usse koi dikhaayi nahi diya. Pranjal dur khada prashaad le raha tha. Par tab tak boht derr ho chuki thi.
Jab tak Manorath ki kuch samajh me aata, wheelchair ka ek pahiya seedhi ke neeche jaa chuka tha.
Aur fir...
*Craaaaashhhhhhhh*
"Aaaaaaaaaaa...."
Upar se ludakte hue Manorath seedhiyo par girte chale gaye.
"Dadaaaaaaa jiiiiiiii!!????"
Pranjal ne jab peeche mud ke dekha toh shocked hote zorr se chillaaya aur tezz kadmo ke saath seedhe Dada jii ki orr bhaaga.
Manorath seedhiyo par girte padte neeche jaate jaa rahe the.
Seedhiya itni bhi nahi thi par kam bhi nahi thi.
Kuch seedhiyo se lagtaar girne ke baad ek jagah aakar wo ruke aur behosh ho chuke the.
Pranjal ghabraaya hua unke paas aaya aur dekha toh uske Dada jii ka maatha aur perr khoon se sana hua tha.
"Dadaaaaaaa jiiiiiiii!!!!"
Wo zorr se cheenkha aur uski ye cheenkh ne aas paas ke sabhi logo ko chaukanna kar diya.
Aur sabhi uss orr bhaage...
***
1st January...
New Year's Eve...
Mumbai...
Ek badi sii hotel ke corridor me ek aadmi tezz kadmo ke saath chalta hua jaa raha tha.
Uske peeche kayi saare hatte katte aadmi chal rahe the.
Kuch ki jebo me toh guns bhi thi. Aur sabhi dekhne me itne bhayaanak ki maano abhi pakad ke zinda maar denge.
Par iss waqt wo sabhi apne Boss ko follow kar rahe the jo iss waqt tezz kadmo ke saath hotel ki lift ki orr jaa raha tha.
Aur ye aur koi nahi Slogan hi tha.
"Kaam hua!?"
Usne tezz awaaz me pucha.
Steve : Sab ready hai. Bas uske aane ki derr hai.
Slogan : Good! Sab kuch fatafat hona chahiye. Mujhe Mumbai chorre saalo ho chuke hai aur Aatish ab nahi hai toh police gaandupana zaroor dikhaegi. Saari gaadi ready rakhna aur CCTVs saare band karwa diye hai na?
Steve : Aas paas ke sabhi band hai.
Slogan (smiles) : Good! Aaj naye saal me naya dhamaaka hoga...
Steve : Bas uske aane ki derri hai. Aur bas fir...
Slogan : Hmmm~ hume jald nikalna hoga. Aatish ke resources aur man power ko kal hideout par jama karwao. Police ko busy rakhne me kaam aaenge wo.
Itna bada mauka haath se aaj chooth nahi sakta mere...
Steve : Jii Dada!
Aur Slogan Steve ke saath neeche utar apni gaadi me jaa chuka tha.
Na jaane kiska wait kar rahe the ye sabhi. Par itna toh tay tha ki jiska bhi intezaar ho raha tha. Wo inn sabhi ke liye boht zaroori tha.
***
Mumbai ke hi iss sheher me ek alag anya hotel me iss waqt new year ki party chal rahi thi.
Aur party toh abhi sahi se shuru ho rahi thi. 8 baj chuke the... Par...
Uss hotel se hi ek behad hi khubsoorat sii ladki ek black dress me baahar aayi aur apni gaadi ki orr jaane lagi.
Par abhi wo gaadi se kuch hi doori par thi jab...
*Kabooooooooooommmmm*
Ek itni tezz blast hua...
Uski hi car me... Jo waha khadi uska intezaar kar rahi thi.
Andar maujood driver ke chithde udd chuke the aur car toh poori aag ki lapto me qaid thi. Chaaro aur dhuaa hi dhuaa...
Aur aas paas afra tafri...
Log cheenkhte hue waha se dur bhaagne lage.
Toh wahi wo ladki jo car ki taraf jaa rahi thi wo blast ke blow se thoda sa dur jaa giri aur behosh ho gayi.
Ye sab kuch itni jaldi hua ki waha ke logo ko samajh me hi nahi aaya ki hua kya achanak se.
***
Kuch derr pehle...
Veer iss waqt ussi chhetra me maujood tha. Ragini ne usse kuch samaan laane bheja hua tha. Aaj new year special dinner bann'ne waala tha.
Par...
Wo abhi dukaan ke andar jaane hi wala tha jab achanak se usse ye sunaayi diya.
*Kabooooooooooommmm*
Aur agle hi pal uske raungte khade ho gaye.
'What the...!? What was that!? Kahi aas paas se hi aayi hai awaaz.'
[We must check that out.]
Aur wo gaadi me baithne hi waala tha jab uska phone baj utha.
'Huh!? Kavya?'
Veer : Hello??
Dusri side se Kavya ki zorr zorr se rone ki awaaz aa rahi thi.
Veer : H-Hello? Kavya kya hua? Bol na kuch!? Ro kyu rahi hai?
Kavya ki sisakne ki awaaz Veer ko aur bhi ghabraahat me daalte jaa rahi thi.
Kavya (rote hue) : Bh-Bhaiyaaaaaaaa.... *sniff*
Veer : Kavya darra mat bol jaldi... Kya hua?
Kavya : Dada jiii... Seedhiyo se gir gaye. Hum sabhi hospital me hai. *sniff* Aap jaldi se aa jao...
Aur maano ye khabar sunn Veer ko saanp soongh gaya.
Kavya : Hum sabhi thoda dur hai. Kyuki ye mandir me hi hua.... *sniff* Toh jo hospital accha nazdeek mila wahi aa gaye hum. Aap jaldi aa jao bhaiya... *sniff*
Veer : M-Mein abhi aa raha hu Kavya. Don't worry!
Usne call kaata aur key ko wo lagaaya hi tha gaadi me jab...
*Ding*
[Mission : Rescue Kaera from the hideout.
Rewards : ??? Points.
Mission Failure Penalty : 5000 Points.
Time Limit : 2 Days.]
Aur ye padhte hi uski aankhein felti chali gayi....
'Shiiiitttttt!!!'
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
Like ki button par thok ke jaane ka. Aur comment karne ka.
Dhanyavaad!
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Awesome update bro
So,last day of the year ... Umeed thi pichhle update ke baad ke Pranjal aur Vivek kuldevi ke mandir ki yaatra ke dauraan hi kaand karenge par filhaal ke liye inhone naye saal tak plan postpone kar diya hai... Par Manorath ko Vivek/Pranjal ne bataya ke Veer kahin aur party mein jaane waala hai joki of course Nidhi ke yahaan thi, par unhe iss baare mein kaise pata chala... Ya fir bas Manorath ko taalne ke vaaste hi??
Khair, Brijesh ek hi dialogue bola par ussi mein laga ke ye kameena abhi nahi sudhra hai... Saale kaise log hain ye, mujhe to lagta hai ke inke parivaar mein sabse bada jaahil ye Brijesh hi hai... Waise bhi sansaar mein bhaanti bhaanti ke kameene hote hain aur Brijesh hai unka Sardaar... Wahin Kavya as usual apne Veer Bhaiya ko miss kar rahi hai par ek do updates pehle Kavya ne Veer se baahar jaane ka vaada nahi liya tha?? Wo kis din hone waala hai... You know I love the cuteness of Kavya & of course Juhi... Juhi ko to main apni real life se connect bhi kar paata hoon... A similar kid in my life also... Waiting for that episode jab Kavya aur Juhi ek saath aayenge... Bole to Cuteness ka Sailaab...
Ragini, inhe bhi bulaya gaya tha family trip ke liye aur uska mann nahi tha ke Mata ke Darshan ko naa bole par uss shakhs ke satah kaise chali jaaye jisne uske pyaar ki tauhin ki thi... Khair, Ragini ko ek support ki zaroorat hai joki of course wo Veer mein hi dhoondhegi... Yahaan tak ki uske anusaar yadi Vivek ke saath divorce bhi ho jaaye tab bhi Veer aur Suman & Party wahin reh sakte hain... Uski badhti favourability (60) bhi issi cheez ko dikhati hai ke jald hi ek turn dekhne mil sakta hai uske aur Veer ke relationship mein...
Favourabilities ka ambaar dekhne mila iss update mein... Veer jin jin se connected hai sabki favourability saamne aayi... Aur Ye kya tha Suhana ki Sonia se zada, wo bhi 9 points. I mean Wtf!! Suman ki to 84 bilkul reasonable thi aakhir “Loyal Slave” jo hai wo, wahin Juhi yaani best – friend of Veer was right at the top with 85, aur Kavya yaani cuteness ki bhi 80 thi. Aarohi ki bhi 55 tak pahunch gayi jo abhi increase karegi hi... Par jisne mujhe surprise kiya wo thi Maa beti ki jodi... Bhumika ki last time se zyada thi matlab ek increase aur Shweta ki negative mein nahi thi, I still can't believe...
So, Shreya jiska number 64 tha, wo kaafi surprise huyi Veer ko dekhkar kyonki usne 10 points apni Appearance mein daal liye the...
Khair, Baat karen Nidhi ki to uske saath relationship har mulaakat ke baad aur adhik complicate hota jaa raha hai jisme poora poora help ho raha hai System naamak praani ki taraf se... Hug Nidhi... Abe halwa hai kya? Par chalo itne samay se itni ladkiyon ke saath rehne ke baad Veer ab seedha to nahi raha, kameene ko maza to poora aaya mission mein... Aur to aur hug ke baad isse muft ki kiss bhi chahiye... Achha hua Nidhi ne isse dhakka de diya par thoda zor se dena tha na saala ride se neeche hi gir jaata... Sun le Veer, Nidhi ke saath iss prakaar ki harkat bardaasht nahi ki jaayegibecause Nidhi is...
Par chalo Mission poora hua, aur System level up bhi kar gaya... Ab shayad Kaera aur Slogan Dada ko Check kar paayega ye lounda... I want to see Kaera's status so badly... Ab Veer ke paas bache hain 240 points jinka wo kya use karta hai, dekhna rochak rahega!! Aur Veer ne Ragini se request bhi ki thi ke wo Suman ko Modern bana de, kya reason hoga iska ye bhi ek sawaal hai...
So, kaafi badhiya update, adhiktar statistical info thi ismein, jiski iss waqt kahani ko zaroorat bhi thi, arthat lekhak mahodaya situation ko bhali bhaanti samajhte hain aur ussi hisaab se update dete hain... Nidhi ke saath huyi ghatna ne ek baar fir dil ko chhoo liya... Jiss prakaar wo Veer ki care karti hai uske liye tensed hoti hai uss kaaran Nidhi ki taraf jhukaav badhta jaata hai... Bas ab intezaar hai Vivek aur Pranjal yaani Harami Brothers ke plan execution ka aur Slogan Dada ke qehar ka...
Outstanding Update Bhai & Waiting For Next...
Awesome update
Fabulous update bhai
Super awsm update to gud finally some romantic moments with nidhi.
Eagerly waiting for next update plz do cont asap
Ye 2 din ka wait bhi ni hota ab to
Takecare
Just fabulous
Lagta hai veer ko jackpot mil gyi
Outstanding update
Loaded with mix feelings and undoubtedly awesome as ever…
Fantastic update
Waiting for next update
For completed 1.6M views on your story thread....
★ Fabulous Mind Blowing Updated...
★ Shukar hai iss baar thappad nhi pda..?
shyd pyar ho rha hai dheere 2..
★ Veer Ko New Year par itna sab de dega system ye to veer ne bhi nhi socha hoga..
★ Ab level 5 par aa gaya Iska mtlb ab Kaera Aur Slogan ka bhi Status check kar skta hai Veer..
★ ab Ye 3no Kon se skill hai kya isse veer ko fyda hoga ya kuch complications hoge..
★ Dekhte hai aage kya likha hai samaye ke garabh me..
★ Waiting for next update...
Awesome
Update.....bro
Ache hone me ek he burayi hai...Insaan har galat ke liye khud ko kasoorwar samajhne lagta hai....Veer ne apni puri koshis ko golu ko bacahane ki lekin nakam raha iss me veer ki galti nahi hai hope ke wo khud ko sambhal le ga
Yahan achai ka zamana he nahi hai.....Pari ne itni samjhdari se situation ko sambhala aur sab readers usi per shaq ker rahe hai Chee Chee Chee.....
(Note: Kripya agar kal ko pari buri nikle to ye post edit ho jaye gi....iss liye tab meri jaan ke dushman mat banna..... Shukriya)
Mera ek question hai....ye Doctor ki baate kavya ke palle bhi pari hai kia ya phir jaise hum teacher ko jhoot ne ahhh keh ker yaqeen dilwate the ke samajh aa gayi hai waisa scene hai kia
Jo gadha dusro ke liye khodo gye us me khud bhi zaroor giro gye....Veer ki sauteli Maa jahan Veer ko dhoka de rahi thi wohi dhoka use khud bhi mil raha tha ye hota hai jaise ko taisa
JU translate ker diye
Iss ko translate na kiye
Yahan atish ka bhi koi baap hai.....intresting
Dushman ko chorna hamesha he galti hoti hai....saanp ke phan ko waqt per kaat dena chahiye warna das leta hai......Kou kahavat nahi mili to bhakchodi ker raha hu
Nice update Werewolf bhai.
Yaha ye achha kiya aapne veer ke sabhi janne walo ka ek overview de diya. Veer ki life me Vese bahut se log aane wale he. Par Nidhi, kavya, ragini, suman inn sab ki jagah koi na le sakta. Yaha sab new year ki taiyari me lage isme hi veer he jiska new year ab baki year se alag hoga.
Manorath ji veer ko bhi Lana chahte the par hua nahi esa. Kavya to puchegi hi apne bhai ka. Wahi bhumika aur shweta apne business me ruchi he. Pakka ye shweta ne ghar me na bataya hoga ki veer uski hotel me aaya tha 2 baar. Brijesh ke sath bhi samjhote wali shadi ki he usne. Aur ye pranjal ab kya karne wala he. Property ke liye sab kar raha he. Ab shweta ko milega thenga. Akal aayegi. Dekhte he kya hota he.
Ragini aur veer sath he. Ragini ko bhi ek emotional support de raha he. Ragini bhi lagta he ab move on karegi aur wapis uss ghar me na jayegi. Fir veer to he hi uska devar. Ab ye veer ko kya idea mil gaya ye sale ka hangama dekh ke. Suman ko bhi mila liya usme. Baad me pata chalega iska. Ye suman ki beti sonali ko admission dila o bhai veer ke hatho. Thodi favourability badh jayegi
. Pahele hi gussa me rehti he apni maa aur veer ka sab jaan ke.
Yaha shreya juhi aur Nidhi sab ready he. Aur veer bhi. Ab handsome ho gaya apna launda
New features
New missions
New skills
Aur wahi apna veer.
First aim of new year will be [ chocolate factory]
Waiting for next update.
Bhai ho sake to aaj thoda jald updat dena 11 12 mat kar dena...
Sir g bhi enigma bhai ke kuch lagte haa 9 ya 10 to dekhe nahi kabhi bhai ne ku sahi kaha naa bhai
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Awesome updateUpdate - 50 ~ New Year's BlastAb tak...
*Ding*
[System has reached Level 5.]
*Ding*
[In-built feature ~ Translator has been unlocked.]
*Ding*
[In-built feature ~ Slot has been unlocked.]
*Ding*
[Quest hunt is now accessible.]
'Huh!??!'
Ab aage...
1st January...
New Year's Morning...
Aaj naye saal ka pehla din tha. Jaha Veer ke ghar me, yaani ki Ragini ke ghar me iss waqt sabhi ground floor par hassi mazaak kar aaj naashte me kuch special banaane ki soch rahe the, wahi iss waqt Veer apne kamre me apne bistar par baithe sawaalo ke chakravyuh me ghira hua tha.
Wese hi Veer uss Slogan waale mission ko lekar uljhan me tha pehle se hi ki bhala aisa mission system ne usse kyu saupa tha, jiska koi sense hi nahi bann raha tha!?
Upar se ab Veer ko kuch aur baatein sata rahi thi. Aur wo thi...
[Oye Itna shaant kyu ho tum!? Huh!? Kuch bolo bhi!?]
Pari ka ye firsa badla hua ravaiyya.
Zaahir sii baat thi, ki kal raat jab Veer ne Nidhi ko hug kiya aur wo mission complete kiya, uske baad hi Pari Level 5 par pohuch chuki thi. Aur naye features bhi unlock ho chuke the. Parantu uske baad se hi Pari ka ravaiyya ek baar fir badla badla sa nazar aa raha tha jisse lekar Veer uljhan me fassa hua tha.
Bhala kya hai ye system!? Pari baar baar yu apna ravaiyya kyu badalti rahi hai? Kabhi aisa lagta hai sab sahi hai par kabhi achanak se Pari ajeeb dhang se apna behaviour poora change kar leti hai.
Aur iss baar bhi wahi hua tha. Akhir kya raaz chhupa tha iske peeche!?
'Halla mat karo... I'm thinking!'
[Thinking what!? I can listen to your thoughts you know.]
'Just shut up!'
[Ugh!!! Hmph...!]
Ek gehri saas lete hue Veer ne kal ki vardaato par ek baar firse prakaash daala aur sab kuch yaad kia.
Kal Nidhi ko hug karne ke baad usse 50 points mile the. Uske paas pehle hi 190 points the. 10 points wo Appearance me jo daal chuka tha. Toh ab total 240 points uske paas maujood the.
Par ab sawaal aata hai naye features ka...
Jo ki the~
In-built feature ~ Translator
In-built feature ~ Slot
Aur wo Quest Hunt.
'Pari! Kal toh tum sleep mode me thi. Ab mujhe vistaar se sab kuch batao inke baare me.'
[Yeah! Right! So... Basically, Translator ek In-built feature hai. Just like Check and all. Aur jesa ki iska naam hai wesa hi iska kaam hai.]
'Hmm!? Don't tell me...!?'
[Yes! Tumne sahi samjha. It's a Translator. Chaahe koi bhi vyakti koi bhi bhaasha kyu na bole, tumhe unke bole gaye shabd translate hoke screen par dikh jaenge. Aur ye automatically hoega. So, you don't have to worry at all.]
'I see! Par ye 'tum' kehke kab se bulaane lagi mujhe tum? Hmm?'
[Wh-What!? Don't tell me ki tumhe 'aap' hi sunn'na pasand hai.]
'No! Bas! Tumhara behaviour achanak se badal gaya isliye puch raha hu.'
[W-What!? N-No! It's not like that. Mein toh tumhaari wahi Pari hu. Right!?]
Veer ne kuch kaha toh nahi aur wo apne dimaag me bhi kuch sochna nahi chaahta tha. Warna Pari uske thoughts padh leti. Isliye usne shaant rehna hi theek samjha.
'Tell me about Slot! Ye kya hai!?'
[Yesss!
'Hmm! Yaani ki ek prakaar ki khaali jagah jaha pe kuch rakha jaa sake.'
[Exactly!]
'Aur ye Slot kya kaam aane wala hai mere!?'
[Right! Yahi pe Quest hunt kaam aata hai. Ab tum Quest Hunt ko access kar sakte ho.]
'Explain!'
[Hmm~ Simple bhaasha me... Quest open karo aur card paao.]
'Card!?'
[Yes! Various cards! But ek dikkat hai.]
'Kesi dikkat!?'
[Quest me se do hi kism ke cards nikalte hai. Ek Legendary Tier Card aur ek Trash Card.]
'Hmm... Toh!?'
[Legendary Tier Cards nikalne ke chances 15% hai. And Trash card nikalne ke chances 85%]
'Hmm! I'm getting it now.'
[Yes! In simple terms, Quest Hunt me jaa kar Quest kholo, usme se cards pao aur uss card ko Slot par lagao.]
'Hmm! Aur Legendary Cards kis type ke honge?'
[Good Question! Legendary Cards jesa ki naam hi bataata hai. They will be Legendary. Par harr Legendary card apne aap me alag hota hai aur unki apni khoobi hoti hai. For Example~ Yadi tum Quest open karte ho aur usme se Legendary card nikla toh wo kayi saare Legendary cards me se ek ho sakta hai. Tumko aisa card mil sakta hai jis se kaho tumko 50% kam neend aaegi. Jaldi nahi thakoge. Wagarah wagarah. Par ye kaam tab hi karega jab iss card ko Slot me equip karoge.]
'This...!?'
Pari ki harr ek baat Veer ko jese naye naye jhatke de rahi thi.
[Kyu na isse live try kare!?
'!??'
[Tumhare paas 240 points hai.]
'Quest kholne ka price kitna hai!?'
[200 points!]
'Wtf!???'
[Of course! Tumhe kya laga? 10-12 points me sab ho jaega?]
'Fuckkkkk! 200 points!? Wese hi badi mushqil se missions ke through points ikhatte ho paate hai. Aur upar se...'
[Bhulo mat ki isme Legendary Card nikalne ke 15% chances hai. Yadi ek bhi Legendary Card haath lag gaya na. Toh tumhe pata bhi nahi hai ki wo kya kar sakta hai.]
'Aur Trash card haath laga toh? Aakhir uske chances toh 85% hai?'
[Toh kuch nahi, gaye points...
'Wtf!???'
[Y-Yeah! Ab kuch paane ke liye risk toh lena padega na!?]
'Shiitttttttt!! So it's a gamble...!'
[Exactly!]
Veer samajh gaya tha ki ye poore juye ke khel ki tarah tha, jisme uske jeetne ke chances 15% the aur haarne ke 85%.
Dusre shabdo me, 200 points invest kar usse quest kholne milega. Yadi usse Legendary Card milta hai, tab toh sab kuch sahi hai. Par yadi Trash card milta hai, jiske chances itne zyaada hai toh Veer ke 200 points gaye samjho. Poori tarah se barbaad ekdum.
'Aur meri kismat jaanti hi ho tum right!?'
[Yeah! It's trash...
'!???'
[What!? I'm saying the truth!]
'Ahem! Right!'
[So? Live try karna hai?
'Fine! Do it!'
[What!? Really?]
'Yeah! Do it! Gaye toh gaye. Par yadi Legendary card mila... Then... mein bhi toh dekhu kya kar sakta hai wo card!?'
[Wow! Mujhe nahi laga tha tum risk loge.]
'I said do it!'
[Ugh!!! Fine! Fine! Just say Quest Hunt!]
'Quest Hunt!'
*Ding*
Veer ke kehte hi uske mann me ek imaginary screen khuli jisme ek treasure chest jesa kuch dikh raha tha usse.
Aur neeche open karne ka option tha.
Par...
Open ke hi just neeche, waha likha tha~
Cost : 200 Points.
Bechaara Veer ye dekhte hi apne decision ke baare me dobaara sochne laga.
[Bas click karo mann me hi uss option pe. Aur bas. Quest khulega aur kuch na kuch milega. Hehe~]
'Fine!'
Dil pe haath rakh, Veer ne ek lambi saas lete hue open par click kar hi diya aur tabhi...
Usne dekha ki wo quest dheere dheere khula aur andar se chamakti hui roshni aa rahi thi.
Aur uske khulte hi ek card baahar aake nikla.
[This... This...!? No waayyyyyyyyy!
Pari ka shock hona bhi swabhaavik tha.
Akhir Veer ko aisi cheez jo mil gayi thi.
Uski screen par, ye card maujood tha~
'Wait! Let me read. Increases Bone's Rigidity by 70%, Recovery Rate by 60%... Wait whaaaaaatttt!??? What the fucccckkkkkkk!?????'
[This... Just how lucky you are?]
'Almost Unbreakable Rib... Ribcage guaranteed!????'
[Yes! Dekha ab. Mene kaha tha na!? Ki ek hi card sab kuch badal sakta hai. Now look at that baby hahaha~ Bone Reaper. Saral bhaasha me, aapki jo bones ki hardness hai. Yaani ki unka thospann. Wo 70% badh jaega. Aur bone ki recovery 60% badh gayi hai. And look at that... Almost Unbreakable Ribcage guaranteed. Matlab aapka ribcage... Almost Unbreakable bann chuka hai. Tootne waala nahi ab. Damnnnnn!]
'This...!?'
Veer ko shocked hona laazmi tha. Akhir cheez hi aisi haath lagi thi.
[Now equip it!]
Pari ke nirdesh anusaar Veer ne forun hi uss card ko apne slot me equip kar liya.
[Dhyaan rahe. Kisi bhi card ko equip kar lene ke baad aap usse 24 ghante ke pehle nahi hata sakte. Kam se kam 24 ghanto ke baad hi aap unequip kar paoge.]
'Gotcha... Let's go~'
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Veer ka new year filhaal toh sahi jaa raha tha. Filhaal ke liye. Par yahi baat shayad anya jagah par nahi kahi jaa sakti thi.
Jese ki iss waqt...
Yaha apne gaav me aaye kuldevi ke darshan ke liye Manorath aur baaki sabhi ko aaj din me ghar ki orr wapas Mumbai ko lautna tha.
Kal unhone darshan kiye the aur aaj unki hi taraf se Bhandaare ka aayojan bhi tha.
Bas khaana almost ready tha aur bas logo ko baatna baaki tha.
Arohi iss waqt ek jagah baithi hui thi aur saare khaana banaane waalo ko dekh rahi thi wahi dur se hi.
Ye sab uske liye naya tha. Wo pooja paath me shuru se hi utna samarpit nahi thi. Aur yaha aake bhandaara karwaana, ye sab uske liye ekdum naya tha. Iss kaarya me wo pehli baar sammalit ho rahi thi.
Abhi wo baithi hi thi ki tabhi usne Kavya ko aate hue dekha. Kavya kisi se muskuraate hue phone par baat kar rahi thi.
'Kavya...!? Bhala kis se baat kar rahi hai!?'
Usne mann me socha.
Kavya jab nazdeek aayi toh usne khud hi puch lia.
Arohi : Kavya!? Kiska call hai!?
Kavya : Hmm? Ohh! Veer bhaiya ka... Lo na... Aap bhi unhe New Year wish kar do...
Kehte hue usne Arohi ko apna phone thama diya. Aur Arohi bechaari ab iss soch me pad gayi thi ki baat ko kese start kare.
Veer : Hello!?
Arohi : H-Hello!?
Veer : Arohi... dii...
Arohi : Umm... H-Happy... Happy new year Veer!
Veer : Happy new year to you too!
Arohi : Th-Thank you!
Veer : ....
Arohi : Wo... Hum... Hum sabhi kuldevi ke mandir aaye hai...
Veer : I know that...
Arohi : R-Right! Wo... Dada jii ne tumhe laane ka socha tha. B-But...
Veer : I know that too...
Arohi : O-Ohhh!! Okay! W-Wo...
Veer : !??
Arohi : N-Nothing...
Veer : Ohhh!
Bechaari Arohi, na toh samajh paa rahi thi ki kese conversation ko chaalu kare aur yadi kar bhi de toh kese uss conversation ko banaaye rakhe!? Aaj bhala itna kyu darr rahi thi wo Veer se baat karne me!?
Wese ye darr nahi tha kuch aur hi tha. Jisse wo khud bhi nahi jaan paa rahi thi.
Usne Kavya ko phone waapas se thamaya aur khud uth ke chali gayi.
Kuch derr me hi bhandaare ki saari prakriya poorn ho chuki thi aur sabhi ne fir baatna bhi shuru kar diya.
Gaav ke log bhaari maatra me aaye aur sabhi ne acche se bhandaare ka lutf uthaaya.
Kavya jaha kheer baatne me lagi hui thi toh wahi Arohi sabzi baat rahi thi.
Bhumika aur Shweta puri baatne me lage hue the.
Aur Manorath chup chaap sabhi ko muskuraate hue dekh rahe the.
Wese toh wo chalne me ekdum swasth the par fir bhi unhe zyaada thakaan na ho isliye unke liye ek wheelchair leke rakhi thi Brijesh ne.
Taaki jab wo thak jaaye toh koi bhi wheelchair ke zariye unhe unki jagah le jaa sake.
Aur iss waqt bhi, subah subah mana kiye jaane lar bhi aaj wo taiyaariyo me apna haath bataaye jiske chalte kaafi thakaan bhar aayi thi ab unme.
Wheelchair par hi baithe hue wo araam farma rahe the aur apne parivaar ko mil jul ke gaav ke logo ke beech unn sab ko bhandaare ka prashaad dete hue wo bade hi chaav se dekh rahe the sab kuch.
Tabhi unhone dekha ki Pranjal waha se unki taraf aaya. Aaj Pranjal ne itna kaam kiya tha ki Manorath khushi se fule nahi sama paa rahe the.
Pranjal (haafte hue) : Dada jii! Bas kuch derr ka aur hai... Fir hum sab bhi baith jaenge khaane.
Manorath : Beech beech me araam bhi kar liya kar 5-10 minute beta. Aaj toh tumne boht kaam kiya hai.
Pranjal : Kya Dada jii!? Devi ke mandir me... Ye sab kaam thodi maana jaata. Yahi toh pooja hai. Aur pooja jitni bhi karo, kam hi lagti hai.
Manorath toh jese harr ek pal guzarte khushiyo ke naye starr par pohuchte jaa rahe the.
Pranjal : Aapne aaj darshan kiye!?
Manorath : Abhi nahi beta.
Pranjal : Ye kya baat hui Dada jii!? Kherr! Jab sabhi khaana khaa lenge uske baad mein aapko leke chalunga. Upar mandir me...
Manorath : Bilkul beta. Ab tum araam karo. Subah se lage ho. Warna perr boht dukhenge. Thoda sa rukk jaaya karo.
Pranjal : Abhi nahi Dada jii! Meri behne mere rehte hue akele kese kaam kar sakti hai? Bhaiya aur mein dekh lenge sab. Aap araam karo.
Aur itna bol, wo chal diya waapas unhi gaav waalo ke beech unhe prashaad baatne.
Sab kuch ekdum sahi jaa raha tha.
Ye pal, Manorath ke liye sabse zyaada khush-haal tha. Kyuki aaj wo apne parivaar ko ek saath gaav waalo ke liye seva karte dekh rahe the.
Yahi hoti hai uparwaale ki mahima, ki wo na jaane kab ek saath sab ko le aaye aur ekjut kar de.
'Kaash mera Veer bhi yahi hota...!'
Sochte hue Manorath apne khayalaato me kho gaye.
Kuch samay beet jaane ke baad sab kuch kushal mangal se sampann ho chuka tha aur ab bas gharwaalo aur mandir ke trust logo ka hi khaana bacha hua tha.
Jab gaav waale log dheere dheere jaane lage toh Manorath ne sabhi ko khaane ke liye hidaayat dii.
Aur bas, neeche dari biccha ke sabhi parivaar ke sadasya pattal me khaana paros shuru ho chuke the.
Pranjal : Kaash... Mera bhai Veer bhi yahi hota... Aur Ragini Bhabhi bhi!
Pranjal ne shaatirta se halki awaaz me kaha. Uske bagal se Arohi aur Kavya baithi hui thi. Aur ye vaakya sunte hi dono ki hi bauhe sikudne lagi.
Wo jaanti thi ki Pranjal toh ulta unhe Veer se dur rehne ko kehta tha toh bhala aaj wo yaha uske baare me kese soch sakta hai?
Ye zaroor dhong tha. Mann me ye nirdhaarit kar, dono hi behno ne usse ignore hi karna sahi samjha.
Wahi dusri aur Shweta aur Bhumika apni baato me lagi hui thi.
Shweta : Kya hua? Baat ho gayi na?
Bhumika : Haan! Sab kuch sahi hai hotel me mom.
Shweta : Mene kaha tha na. Tu khamakha tension le rahi thi.
Bhumika : Hmm! Wese... Aapne fir uske baare me kya socha? Matlab? Kesa kya chal raha hai?
Shweta : Beta! Bas... Jald hi Papa jii decision lenge zameen ka. Aur fir dekhna, humaare paas hamaara hissa hoga. Fir usse hum jese chaahe use kare.
Bhumika : Ohhhh! Par... Aapko kese pata Dada jii jald hi decision lene waale hai!?
Shweta (khuspusaate hue) : Vivek ne toh yahi kaha tha.
Bhumika : Hmm? Kya kaha!? Kuch sunaayi nahi diya mom!
Shweta : Ahh!? Arre nahi beta. Mene kaha ki mera mann kehta hai ki jald hi Papa jii decision lene waale hai. Tum dekhna.
Bhumika : Ohhh! P-Par... Unhone toh kaha tha na ki... V-Veer yadi ghar me nahi hoga toh tab tak koi bhi charcha zameen ke baare me nahi kii jaegi?
Shweta : Hmm! Kaha tha unhone. Par tum dekhna meri bacchi, jald hi denge wo apna faisla.
Bhumika : Hmm~
Shweta apni beti Bhumika se bhi baatein chhupaayi hui thi. Wo baatein ki wo Vivek ke saath mili hui hai aur Veer ko baahar nikalwaane ke plan me Vivek ka hi haayh tha. Bachaari Bhumika ye soch ke chal rahi thi ki uski Mom hi sab kuch kar rahi hai.
Idhar Shweta aas lagaaye baithi thi ki jald hi wo mauka aaye jab Manorath apni jayzaat aur zameen ka batwaara kare aur wo apna hissa lene me safal ho jaaye. Fir toh Shweta ko kisi cheez se matlab nahi hone waala tha. Bas apni hotel, apni zameen, aur apni bacchi. Bas!
Par usse kya pata tha. Ki jis khaayi se usne Veer ko feka tha ussi khaayi se fekne ke liye Vivek uske peeche khada hua tha.
Wo ye nahi jaanti thi ki Vivek ka iraada usse sui ke baraabar tak ki zameen dene ka nahi hai. Kya hoga jab Shweta apne karmo ke fal ka parinaam dekhegi? Jab usse pata chalega ki jis zameen ke liye usne itne paapad bele the, wo toh uske haath aani hi nahi thi.
Jab sabhi khaana khaa ke fursat hue toh bas ab nikalne ka samay ho chuka tha. Lagbhag shaam hone ko aa gayi thi.
4 baj rahe the...
Wese toh wo sabhi din me nikalne waale the par sab kuch thoda late hua ya yu kahe ki sab kuch hone me samay zyaada lag gaya. Aur issi kaaran vash aaj wo thoda late the.
Pranjal Manorath ke paas aaya aur unse bola,
"Dada jii! Darshan nahi hue na aapke abhi bhi?"
Manorath : Haa beta! Darshan karna baaki hai. Ek akhiri baar jaane se pehle.
Pranjal : Chaliye! Mein karwaaye deta hu Dada jii!
Manorath : Haa chalo beta.
Kehte hue jab Manorath uthne lage toh pranjal ne unhe pakad ke waapas se wheelchair par baitha diya.
Pranjal : Arre arre!? Ye kya!? Subah se thak gaye ho aap. Aap isme hi baitho raho mein leke chalta hu na?
Manorath : Beta isme!? Arre waha seedhiya hai beta. Seedhiyo me kese le jaoge upar tak?
Pranjal : Arre Dada jii side me rasta bhi hai. Upar jaane ka. Udhar se chalenge na hum.
Manorath : Beta fir bhi chadhaayi toh hai na. Thak gaye hoge tum bhi. Rehne do...
Pranjal : Na matlab na... Mene kaha na. Aap tension mat lo. Mein nahi thaka hu. Bas aap chaliye.
Manorath : Accha! Accha beta theek hai.
Aur apne pote ki baat maante hue Manorath akhir kaar baith hi gaye. Pranjal pyaar se muskuraaya aur theek unke peeche chala gaya aur wheelchair ko pakad wo upar side me bane mandir ki orr le jaane laga.
Par iss waqt uski wo muskaan... Pyaar bhari muskaan se tabdeel hoke ek haivaani kutil muskaan bann chuki thi.
Aur uski nigaahe Vivek ko dekh rahi thi. Wahi Vivek ki nigaahe bhi chup ke se Pranjal ki aankho se takraayi maano jese mann hi mann kuch baatein kahi jaa rahi thi.
Upar side ke raaste se le jaate hue Pranjal dheere dheere Manorath ko mandir ke dwaar par le gaya.
Aur fir mandir ke andar bhi...
Andar aate hi Manorath ne devi ke darshan kiye aur prashaad bhi liya.
Jab lautne ki baari aayi toh Pranjal ne Manorath ko seedhiyo ke paas laake roka aur bola,
Pranjal : Arre! Mene prashaad toh liya hi nahi Dada jii!
Manorath : Jao beta le aao. Fir chalte hai.
Pranjal : Abhi aaya Dada jii...
Aur itna bol wo chal diya Mandir ke pujaari ki orr waapas peeche.
Pranjal prashaad le hi raha tha ki pata nahi kya hua ki Manorath ko wheelchair aage badhi.
Manorath ne jab aahat paate hi peeche dekha toh usse koi dikhaayi nahi diya. Pranjal dur khada prashaad le raha tha. Par tab tak boht derr ho chuki thi.
Jab tak Manorath ki kuch samajh me aata, wheelchair ka ek pahiya seedhi ke neeche jaa chuka tha.
Aur fir...
*Craaaaashhhhhhhh*
"Aaaaaaaaaaa...."
Upar se ludakte hue Manorath seedhiyo par girte chale gaye.
"Dadaaaaaaa jiiiiiiii!!????"
Pranjal ne jab peeche mud ke dekha toh shocked hote zorr se chillaaya aur tezz kadmo ke saath seedhe Dada jii ki orr bhaaga.
Manorath seedhiyo par girte padte neeche jaate jaa rahe the.
Seedhiya itni bhi nahi thi par kam bhi nahi thi.
Kuch seedhiyo se lagtaar girne ke baad ek jagah aakar wo ruke aur behosh ho chuke the.
Pranjal ghabraaya hua unke paas aaya aur dekha toh uske Dada jii ka maatha aur perr khoon se sana hua tha.
"Dadaaaaaaa jiiiiiiii!!!!"
Wo zorr se cheenkha aur uski ye cheenkh ne aas paas ke sabhi logo ko chaukanna kar diya.
Aur sabhi uss orr bhaage...
***
1st January...
New Year's Eve...
Mumbai...
Ek badi sii hotel ke corridor me ek aadmi tezz kadmo ke saath chalta hua jaa raha tha.
Uske peeche kayi saare hatte katte aadmi chal rahe the.
Kuch ki jebo me toh guns bhi thi. Aur sabhi dekhne me itne bhayaanak ki maano abhi pakad ke zinda maar denge.
Par iss waqt wo sabhi apne Boss ko follow kar rahe the jo iss waqt tezz kadmo ke saath hotel ki lift ki orr jaa raha tha.
Aur ye aur koi nahi Slogan hi tha.
"Kaam hua!?"
Usne tezz awaaz me pucha.
Steve : Sab ready hai. Bas uske aane ki derr hai.
Slogan : Good! Sab kuch fatafat hona chahiye. Mujhe Mumbai chorre saalo ho chuke hai aur Aatish ab nahi hai toh police gaandupana zaroor dikhaegi. Saari gaadi ready rakhna aur CCTVs saare band karwa diye hai na?
Steve : Aas paas ke sabhi band hai.
Slogan (smiles) : Good! Aaj naye saal me naya dhamaaka hoga...
Steve : Bas uske aane ki derri hai. Aur bas fir...
Slogan : Hmmm~ hume jald nikalna hoga. Aatish ke resources aur man power ko kal hideout par jama karwao. Police ko busy rakhne me kaam aaenge wo.
Itna bada mauka haath se aaj chooth nahi sakta mere...
Steve : Jii Dada!
Aur Slogan Steve ke saath neeche utar apni gaadi me jaa chuka tha.
Na jaane kiska wait kar rahe the ye sabhi. Par itna toh tay tha ki jiska bhi intezaar ho raha tha. Wo inn sabhi ke liye boht zaroori tha.
***
Mumbai ke hi iss sheher me ek alag anya hotel me iss waqt new year ki party chal rahi thi.
Aur party toh abhi sahi se shuru ho rahi thi. 8 baj chuke the... Par...
Uss hotel se hi ek behad hi khubsoorat sii ladki ek black dress me baahar aayi aur apni gaadi ki orr jaane lagi.
Par abhi wo gaadi se kuch hi doori par thi jab...
*Kabooooooooooommmmm*
Ek itni tezz blast hua...
Uski hi car me... Jo waha khadi uska intezaar kar rahi thi.
Andar maujood driver ke chithde udd chuke the aur car toh poori aag ki lapto me qaid thi. Chaaro aur dhuaa hi dhuaa...
Aur aas paas afra tafri...
Log cheenkhte hue waha se dur bhaagne lage.
Toh wahi wo ladki jo car ki taraf jaa rahi thi wo blast ke blow se thoda sa dur jaa giri aur behosh ho gayi.
Ye sab kuch itni jaldi hua ki waha ke logo ko samajh me hi nahi aaya ki hua kya achanak se.
***
Kuch derr pehle...
Veer iss waqt ussi chhetra me maujood tha. Ragini ne usse kuch samaan laane bheja hua tha. Aaj new year special dinner bann'ne waala tha.
Par...
Wo abhi dukaan ke andar jaane hi wala tha jab achanak se usse ye sunaayi diya.
*Kabooooooooooommmm*
Aur agle hi pal uske raungte khade ho gaye.
'What the...!? What was that!? Kahi aas paas se hi aayi hai awaaz.'
[We must check that out.]
Aur wo gaadi me baithne hi waala tha jab uska phone baj utha.
'Huh!? Kavya?'
Veer : Hello??
Dusri side se Kavya ki zorr zorr se rone ki awaaz aa rahi thi.
Veer : H-Hello? Kavya kya hua? Bol na kuch!? Ro kyu rahi hai?
Kavya ki sisakne ki awaaz Veer ko aur bhi ghabraahat me daalte jaa rahi thi.
Kavya (rote hue) : Bh-Bhaiyaaaaaaaa.... *sniff*
Veer : Kavya darra mat bol jaldi... Kya hua?
Kavya : Dada jiii... Seedhiyo se gir gaye. Hum sabhi hospital me hai. *sniff* Aap jaldi se aa jao...
Aur maano ye khabar sunn Veer ko saanp soongh gaya.
Kavya : Hum sabhi thoda dur hai. Kyuki ye mandir me hi hua.... *sniff* Toh jo hospital accha nazdeek mila wahi aa gaye hum. Aap jaldi aa jao bhaiya... *sniff*
Veer : M-Mein abhi aa raha hu Kavya. Don't worry!
Usne call kaata aur key ko wo lagaaya hi tha gaadi me jab...
*Ding*
[Mission : Rescue Kaera from the hideout.
Rewards : ??? Points.
Mission Failure Penalty : 5000 Points.
Time Limit : 2 Days.]
Aur ye padhte hi uski aankhein felti chali gayi....
'Shiiiitttttt!!!'
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