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Incest Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery
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Update - 36 ~ Despair and Love
[This update contains some gore scenes. Beware!]
Ab tak...[This update contains some gore scenes. Beware!]
Ladkhadaate hue Veer bina kuch kahe aage badha aur button dabaayi toh darwaaza khul gaya.
Par...
Andar aate hi usse ek behad hi bhaiyankar darr ki anubhooti hui. Jese maano uski maut aane waali ho. Usse nahi pata tha ki agla padaav uske liye kya kuch laane waala tha. Kya wo waqai Golu ko bacha paega!?
Ab aage...
"Haaah haaah haaaahhhhh..."
[Master! Calm down! Saas araam araam se lijiye. Aap jitna zorr zorr se saas lenge, utna hi panic karenge aur fir behosh ho sakte ho aap.]
Lift se nikalne ke baad Veer ki haalat sahi toh kahi se bhi nahi thi. Fluothane ka concentration bhale hi kam tha. Par shareer ke andar jaate hi uske kuch na kuch side effects toh hone hi the.
Pari ki baat maan jab usne apni aniyantrit saaso ko control kiya toh kuch pal baad usse thoda sahi mehsoos hua.
Wo already ek naye kamre me aa chuka tha. Ye kamra andar se harr jagah safed rang se puta hua tha. Kamra kehna galat hoga. Balki ek behad bada hall type ka tha. Par...
Par ek hi baat thi jo boht hi zyaada ajeeb sii lag rahi thi iss waqt. Yaha tak ki Veer khud confusion me khada hua tha.
Wo ye ki...
Upar ceiling se dherr saari rassiyaa latak rahi thi. Matlab itni zyaada tadaad thi unki ki aisa lag raha tha maano rassiya nahi balki jangal me ped se latak rahi bel ho.
Aur harr ek rassi, dusri rassi se baraabar ke gap me lagi hui thi. Saath hi saath upar ceiling me chaukor khand bane hue the jinke beecho beech ek ek rassiya lagi hui thi.
'Ye sab... kya hai!?'
[Dusri paheli master! Shayad inni rassiyo se aapko kuch karna hai!?]
Aur Pari ke bol jese sahi saabit ho gaye.
Kyuki uske baad hi Aatish ki awaaz intercom se ek baar fir aayi aur Veer ke kaano me padi,
"Ab tum soch rahe hoge ki bhala ye sab kya hai? Kya bala hai ye!? Toh bataata hu... Ye saari jo rassiya dekh rahe ho, inme se kuch aisi hai jinhe kheechne se kuch nahi hoga. Par inhi me se kuch aisi hai, jinhe kheechne par kuch na kuch hoga. Ab tumhe inhi saari rassiyo me se ek rassi aisi dhundni hai jisse kheechne se wo waha diwaar me laga case khul jaaye."
Aatish ki baat sunn Veer ki nazar bagal me gayi jaha deewaar par ek kaale colour ka case laga hua tha.
"Uske khulte hi tumhe firse ek badi sii wahi gol laal button milegi, jisse daba kar tumhara iss kamre ka lock khul jaega. Simple hai. Hai na!? Toh fir shuru ho jaayo."
Aatish iss waqt jidhar bhi baitha hua tha, wo cameras se Veer ko dekh paa raha tha. Aur iss waqt uski awaaz sunn ke hi ye pata lagaaya jaa sakta tha ki wo kitna khush tha.
[Master!]
'Hmm?'
[Mujhe kuch gadbad lag rahi hai. Lift me gas leakage tha. Par yaha toh sab kuch normal lag raha hai. Aur mein nahi maanti ki ye itna simple hai.]
'Tumne thik kaha Pari... Par mujhe pata hai mujhe kya karna hai.'
[Hmm?]
'Check!!!!'
Veer ne ek ek kar ke ceiling par lagi unn chaukor khando ke beech, harr ek rassi ko check kiya. Aur ye karne ke baad jo results usse mile, usse jaankar hi uska dimaag hil gaya.
Kuch khando ke upar aisi aisi cheeze dali hui thi ki unke baare me sawaal uthna swabhaavik tha.
Kuch khando ke upar badi badi dherr saari eete dali hui thi. Kuch ke upar lohe ki rods. Toh wahi kuch me tezaab dala hua tha.
Jese hi Veer ko inn cheezo ke baare me pata chala uska badan sihar utha, ye soch ke ki yadi uske paas aaj ye Check function na hota aur yadi usne inme se kisi bhi ek rassi ko kheencha hota toh uska kya hota?
Maut!
Yahi jawaab tha bas.
Rassi kheechte hi upar ka chaukor khand palatne ke liye banaaya gaya tha. Zaahir sii baat thi, ki jese hi chaukor palatata, upar rakha jo bhi samaan hota wo seedha aake neeche maujood vyakti par girta.
Aaj Veer teen cheezo se bach gaya tha. Eete, rods aur savse khatarnak cheez ~ Tezaab.
Soch ke hi Veer ke raungte khade ho gaye the...
Tezaab jesi cheez ban hoti hai aur aam aadmi ke paas toh bilkul hi nahi rehti. Na jaane Aatish ne kaha se mangwaaya hoga. Par ye bhi baat thi...
Ki Aatish bhi koi aam aadmi thodi tha.
Aatish bhale hi khush tha abhi. Par iss round me baazi Veer ne maar lii thi.
Apne Check function ke kaaran usne sab kuch pehle hi pata laga liya tha.
Ab keval Veer ko acting karni thi.
Usne aage badh pehli rassi kheechi, aur ceiling ka wo chaukor hissa palat gaya.
Par...
Andar se kuch na nikla.
Aise hi usne kuch rassiya kheenchi jinme se kuch khaali thi toh kuch me eete neeche giri par unke girne se pehle hi Veer peeche hatt gaya. Kyuki usse pehle hi pata tha ki unn sab me kya tha.
Tezaab waali ek bhi rassi Veer ne nahi kheechi. Ye boht risky tha aur Veer risk nahi lena chaahta tha.
Veer ne inn rassiyo ko isliye kheecha tha taaki Aatish ko koi shaq na ho. Yadi wo pehli hi baar me sahi rassi chun leta toh ye suspicious maamla bann jaata. Bas Isliye usne dhong kiya aur aise hi kuch ek do rassiya kheechne laga.
Ant me usne wahi rassi kheechi jiske chalte wo kala case side me khula aur andar ek laal button usse nazar aayi.
Button dabaate hi darwaaza khul gaya aur room se baahar nikal usse dusri lift bhi nazar aa gayi.
Jiske zariye wo second floor par pohuch gaya.
'That was too easy... Golu... Chinta mat karna... Mein aa raha hu... Bas thodi derr aur...'
Veer iss samay thoda asmanjas me bhi tha. Kyuki kuch derr pehle jo Aatish itna zorr zorr se thahaake le raha tha, wo ekdum se shaant sa pad gaya tha.
'Shayad usse nahi laga tha ki mein uska dusra round clear kar paunga itni easily.'
[Haha~ Usse kya pata ki aap akele nahi ho. Ye Pari bhi aapke saath hai.]
***
Jab Veer second floor par pohucha. Toh intercom se firse Aatish ki awaaz aayi,
"Maan'na padega Veer. Waqai! Tumhari kismat ke kya kehne. Par pata hai!?... Mein tumhaari issi kismat ko sabak sikhaunga abhi. Bas dekhte jao. Uss Ragini ko jese mene toda tha... Wese hi tumhe todunga Veeeeerrr.... Tumhara jab wo darra hua chehra dekhunga naaaa... Jisme ek pal bhi jaan na bachi hooo.... Jisne jeene ki iccha chorr dii hooo... Wahi... Bas wahi dekhna chaahta hu mein... Aaahhh! Tabhi... Tabhi mujhe chenn milega..."
Uski awaaz achanak hi itni badh gayi ki intercom se sound frequency zyaada hone ke kaaran Veer ko apne kaano me haath lagaana pad gaya.
Next room me enter karte hi...
Usse apne perr pe ek ajeeb sa sensation hua.
Par iske pehle ki wo nazre neeche kar dekh paata...
Achaanak hi wo itni speed me khichta chala gaya ki uski kuch samajh me hi nahi aaya. Uska perr, rassi ke ek phande me phass chuka tha. Aur wo rassi jese kisi pulling machine se bandhi hui thi. Ki Veer ka perr jese hi usme aaya aur machine ne usse kheenchna shuru kar diya.
Iss waqt Veer hawa me ulta latka hua tha. Uska ek perr rassi me bandha hua tha aur wo daaye baaye jhul raha tha. Aur uske neeche...
Paani ka boht bada tank rakha hua tha.
"Daaaaaamnnnn ittttt!!!"
Aatish : Veeeeeerrrr!! Ab tumhe pata chalega ki kya hota hai mujhse ulajhna.
Next second hi...
Achanak hi wo rassi neeche aayi aur...
*Splaaaaaashhhhh*
Veer ko poora ka poora uss paani se bhare tank me dubo dii.
"Blurrrrghhhhhh...grrrhhhh" Paani ke bulbule Veer ke muh se chooth rahe the aur wo kisi machli ki tarah chhatpata raha tha, jab wo paani ke baahar aa jaati hai.
[Master!!!? Hold your breath. Paani andar mat lijiye.]
Kamar tak Veer andar hi tha aur fir rassi upar hui aur Veer paani ke baahar nikal aaya. Wo tezz tezz haaf raha tha, khaas raha tha, theek se saas lene ki koshish kar raha tha.
Uska poora shareer kamar se le kar sarr tak paani se geela ho chuka tha.
Aatish : Veer! Mein chaahta toh tumhe kab ka khatam kar sakta tha. Par bhala... Usme maza hi kaha? Jo maza torture karne me hai. Wo maza kisi cheez me nahi. Hahahaha~
Na jaane kitni hi baar Veer ko yu paani me duboya gaya hoga. Par Veer...
Kuch nahi bola...
Uski aankho me bas krodh ke bhaav the. Ekdum laal aankhein jo badla lene ke liye tadap rahi thi.
Wo taiyaar tha. Chaahe jitna bhi torture kyu na kar liya jaaye usse. Ek na ek din wo iss Aatish ko apne khud ke haatho se saza dega. Usne ye nirnay kar liya tha.
Par achanak hi jis baat ki Veer ko bilkul bhi umeeed nahi thi wo hua uske saath.
Achanak hi usse neeche kiya gaya.
Ab wo aisi position par tha ki wo apna ek haath neeche container par tika sakta tha.
Aur issi ka istemaal kar usne apne jeb se knife nikaali aur khud ko upar kar jitne cuts rassi me maar sakta tha utne maare...
Nateeja...
Wo kuch palo me hi free tha.
"Jao... Tum mere test pass hue Veer. Jao... Intezaar kiska hai? Wo laal button dabao aur darwaaza khol lift me jao. Third floor pe hi tumhara dost hai Veer. Jao..."
Bhale hi Aatish ke shabd positive the. Par the toh Aatish ke muh se nikle shabd...
Itni asaani se kese vishwaash kar leta Veer!?
Usne savdhaani barat'te hue wo button dabaayi, jiske chalte darwaaza khul gaya.
Aur Lift ka istemaal kar wo third floor pe bhi pohuch gaya. Koi bhi takleef ya koi bhi trap nahi mila usse.
Sab kuch ekdum shaant tha. Kahi koi gadbad nazar nahi usse.
Ab bas iss darwaaze ke khulte hi usse Golu nazar aa jaega.
Ek aas liye... Veer apne mann me hi khush hone laga. Bhale hi uski jaan inn traps me jaate jaate bachi thi. Par...
Par aaj wo unn traps ko paar kar Golu ke paas pohuch chuka tha.
Aur Golu ko jald se jald churraane ke liye jese hi Veer ne gate khol ke saamne ka nazaara dekha...
Toh...
Wo apne aap apne ghutno par aa gira...
Saamne ka nazaara dekh uski rooh kaanp gayi.
"N-No...!"
Usne apne kaanpte hue hontho se budbudaaya...
Akhir aisa kya tha jo usse nazar aa gaya tha! Raaste me toh usse koi gadbadi mehsoos nahi hui thi. Fir aisa kya tha...!?
Par saamne ka nazaara hi aisa tha ki Veer ne apni zindagi me iss se zyaada khaufnaak drishya nahi dekha tha.
Uski nazre ek hi jagah par tiki hui thi. Wo jese apni palke jhapakna bhul gaya tha. Bhaiyankar khaufnaak, darrawna aur rooh hila dene waala manzar maujood tha uske saamne.
Kyuki...
Saamne...
Ek sheeshe ka bada sa aquarium tha. Aur andar usme ek magar terr raha tha.
Par... Baat sirf yahi nahi thi.
Jis paani me wo terr raha tha...
Wo...
Ekdum laal hota jaa raha tha. Aur...
Veer ne dekha ki...
Magar ke hi paas me...
Kuch paani me terr raha tha.
Aur wo dekh Veer ki nazre darr ke maare felti chali gayi.
Kyuki...
Wo kuch aur nahi... Balki... Ek insaan ka haath tha.
Jiski twacha ke chithde udd paani me hi terr rahe the aur bhayanak laal rang paani me ghulta jaa raha tha. Wo kya tha... Iss baat ka andaaza lagaana bilkul bhi mushqil nahi tha.
Khoon!
Insaan ka khoon...
"Noooo... Nooooo...."
Uska badan boht tezz kampan maar raha tha.
Harr ek ang darr ke maare hil raha tha. Aur uske badan me harr jagah roye khade ho chuke the. Aisa khaufnaak nazaara pehle kabhi nahi dekha tha Veer ne apni life me.
Aur jese ek awaaz ne uska darr saatve aasmaan par pohucha diya...
*Ding*
['Mission : Get to Golu as fast as possible and save him.' has been failed.]
[Mission Fail Penalty : 100 points Deduction.]
[90 points have been deducted. 10 remaining.]
Ye jhatka jese kam tha tha jab agle hi pal Aatish ki baat sunn Veer ka darr yakeen me badal gaya,
"Hahahahaha~ Sahi soch rahe ho Veeeeeerrrr... Ekdum sahi... Yahi hai tumhara Golu... Arre yahi hai... Jo ab nahi raha hahahaha~ Dekh rahe ho? Laal rang ... Aaahh! Adhbhut! Apni shaqal dekho Veer... Yahi... Yahi toh mein dekhna chaahta tha.."
Veer ki aankho se aasu apne aap nikal rahe the. Wo jese kisi sadme me jaa chuka tha par sabse bada sadma jese usse abhi lagna baaki tha.
"Veeeeeerrrrr!!! Hahahahaha~ Tumhe pata hai? Tumne hi usse maara hai Veer... Tumne... Mene nahi... Tumne apne hi dost ka qatl kar diya Veeeerrr... Haan tumne hi..."
Veer : !!?
Aatish : Mene kaha tha na Veer... Mein tumhari kismat ko bhi sabak sikhaunga... Aur tumhe bhi andar se todunga ... Tumhe pata hai Veer...!? Wo dekho... Tank me tumhe teen gate dikh rahe hai!?
Aatish ki excited sii awaaz sunn Veer ki lifeless sii nazre apne aap hi tank ke uss hisse par chali gayi...
Aur waqai...
Waha usse teen bade gates nazar aaye jo tank ke hi andar maujood the.
Aatish : Wo saare gates band the Veer... Wo saare band the. Aur tumhara dost ek taraf tha aur gates ke uss taraf mera paaltu Magarmacch 'Clutch'.
Veer : ???
Aatish : Tumne apne dost ki jaan leli Veer. Jab jab tum uss Laal button ko daba rahe the... Tab tab yaha tank me maujood andar ke ye gates khul rahe the. Tumhe laga tha... Ki tum apne dost ko bacha rahe ho... Par Veeeeeerrrr... Tum unhi haatho se apne dost ko maut ke muh me dhakel rahe the. Tum apni khud ki jaan bachaane ke liye, uss laal button ko jab jab daba ke aage badh rahe the. Tab tab tumhe nahi pata tha... Ki tum apne dost ko maarte jaa rahe the Veeeeerrrrr... Hahahahaha~ Haan! Yahiiii.... Yahiii chehra mujhe dekhna tha Veeeerrrr....
Maano jese ek bomb sa foota Veer ke sarr aur uski saari sochne samajhne ki shakti gaayab ho gayi ye sunn ne ke baad...
Veer : ....
Aatish : Dekhoooo.... Dekhooo Veeeerrrr! Kese... Kese tumhare dost ke shareer ke tukde paani me terr rahe hai. Kese chithde udaa ke rakh diya mere paaltu magar ne... Khooon hi khooon hai Veerrrr... Aur ye sab... Tumne apne haatho se kiya Veeer... Tumne... Hahahaha~ Tumne hi apne dost ko maar diya... Mene toh kuch na kiya Veer. Tumne hi uski jaan leli...
Veer ka dimaag jese kaam karna band kar chuka tha. Uska haal iss waqt shabdo me bataane laayak nahi tha. Uska chehra safed pad gaya tha. Aankhein aisi jese maano unme jaan hi nahi thi. Ab na toh usse kuch sunaayi de raha tha aur na hi kuch feel ho raha tha.
Jis Golu ne uski do baar jaan bachaayi thi. Aaj ussi Golu ki jaan Veer ne apne haatho se leli. Bhala kese nikal paata wo iss glaani se? Inn feelings ke liye glaani bhi ek chota shabd tha.
Veer yaha ye soch raha tha ki... Wo apne pehle mitr, Golu ko bacha raha tha. Wo ye soch raha tha ki harr pal wo usse bachaane me kaamyaab ho raha hai. Par... Par aisa bilkul bhi na tha.
Wo toh ulta apne ussi dost ko maar raha tha. Aisi dardnaak maut insaan kabhi kisi ko na de. Jo manzar Veer ne dekha tha. Wo bataane me bhi kaho uske raungte khade ho jaaye. Fir wo toh khud experience kar raha tha. Na jaane wo iss waqt kinn bhaavo se guzar raha tha. Ye shock itna bada tha ki bechari Pari bhi ekdum shaant pad chuki thi. Usse bilkul bhi aisi umeed nahi thi.
Toh wo sab neeche gubbaare!? Kisi ke maut ke jashn ke liye the!? Veer ne buttons check nahi kii thi. Kyuki unn buttons ko dabaane se darwaaza khul jaa raha tha. Par usse kya pata tha...
Ki jin buttons ko wo daba raha tha wo saath hi saath tank me maujood gates se bhi connected thi. Akhir sahi hi toh kaha tha Aatish ne. Ek prakaar se Veer hi toh Golu ka hatyaara tha?
Aatish : Ab hamaare mehmaan ki bhi khaatir daari kari jaaye...
Veer ghutno ke bal baithe saamne abhi tak tank me ho rahi halchal ko dekh raha tha. Wo insaan ki taang jiske maans ke na jaane kitne tukde paani me idhar se udhar ho rahe the, wo haath...
Ye wahi haath tha... Jo Golu ne usse dosti ke liye aage badhaaya tha!?
Kuch bhaag aise the... Jo pehchaan me tak nahi aa rahe the.
Poora tank... Lahu luhaan ho chuka tha ekdum.
Aur ye sab dekh... Achanak hi Veer ko ubkaayi sii aayi... Aur uske muh se ulti behna shuru ho gayi.
Par jese Aatish ko ye manzoor nahi tha. Kyuki agle hi pal, Veer ke ird gird 8 se 10 log ikhatta ho gaye aur fir...
Usse itna maara gaya ki adhmari haalat me chorr diya.
Veer toh pehle hi sadme me jaa chuka tha. Usne ek baar bhi apne aap ko defend karne ki koshish na kii. Saare hamle wo tab tak sehta gaya jab tak ki wo behosh na ho gaya.
Ek dost mila tha usse...
Aur Veer ne apne hi haatho se uski hi jaan leli.
Aadmi 1 : Bhau! Ye behosh ho gaya hai. Kya karna hai? Isse maar de?
Aatish : Na Na Na Na! Maar denge toh maza hi kya? Wese ab mera kaam iss se nahi hai. Wo toh bas kuch dino se Jalsa me koi manoranjan nahi hua tha. Aur Veer ki badkismati thi ki wo mere plan ke beech me aa gaya. Nateeja... Saamne hai. Maut se acchi saza hoti hai logo ko tadpa ke unhe zinda rakhna.
Aadmi 1 : Bhau fir?
Aatish : Aksar hum bas yahi dhaarna leke chalte hai ki... Kuch log bure hote hai kuch log acche... Kyu hai na?
Aadmi 2 : J-Jii bhau!
Aatish : Veer ki nazro me mein bura tha kyuki mein uske raaste me aaya. Par yahi baat mein bhi toh keh sakta hu? Meri nazar me Veer bura tha kyuki wo merer raaste me aaya!? Insaan bura ya accha nahi hota kabhi bhi samjhe?
Aadmi 1 : Samjhe Bhau!
Aatish : Harr aadmi apni paristhiti ke hisaab se act karta hai. Ab harr aadmi ke apne apne tareeqe ho sakte hai. Veer ki kismat kharaab thi, jo wo mere raaste ke beech aaya. Ab na keval mene uski kismat ka sach usse bata diya balki usse andar se poora tod diya hai. Zindagi bhar ab wo glaani ki Zindagi jiyega... Hamesha uske mann me yahi rahega ki wahi apne dost ka hatyaara hai. Jao ab... Isse iske ghar ke baahar hi fek aao... Ab ye kisi laayak nahi raha. Aur ab hamaara raasta saaf hai.
Itna bol Aatish camera control room se baahar nikal gaya...
Par... Uska chehre par bade hi gusse ke bhaav the. Aur asantushti ke bhi.
***
Poora ek din guzar chuka tha iss ghatna ke baad.
Shaam ka waqt tha aur mand mand hawaaein chal rahi thi.
Nidhi ke ghar iss waqt Nidhi Juhi ke sang baith usse padhaane me lagi hui thi.
Toh wahi Shreya aaj shaam ka evening snack bana rahi thi.
"Ye meri cooking itni buri kyu hai? Aarghh! Kya likha hai?? Vegetables ko kaat ke saute karo?? Hmm! Lo bhai daal diye vegetables..."
Aaj usne josh josh me Juhi ko bol diya tha ki wo aaj noodles banaegi... Aur bas... Shaam hote hi Juhi uske peeche pad gayi. Ab bola hai toh karna toh tha hi kaam...
Isliye mohatarma lagi hui thi, sabhi ke liye Noodles banaane me.
Aur baahar baithi Nidhi Juhi ko pyaar se samjhaate hue padha rahi thi.
Tabhi Achanak hi uska phone baj utha...
Jab Nidhi ne caller name dekha toh wo wahi sthir sii pad gayi aur screen pe naam dekh wo bas wahi dekhti reh gayi.
'Veer!?'
Veer ka call aa raha tha.
'Iss waqt!? Aakhir ab kese usse meri yaad aa gayi? Uss din mandir me toh... Yu naraaz hoke chala gaya tha? Kabhi mujhse baat nahi karta... Fir kyu? Halaki Diwali par usne hi mujhe message kiya tha... Fir bhi...'
Ant me wo call utha leti hai.
Nidhi : Ab kese yaad aa gayi tumhe Veer apni iss madam kii?
Par dusri taraf se koi awaaz na aayi...
Nidhi : ???
Voice : Umm... Wo... Actually... Mein Veer bhaiya ki choti behan bol rahi Ma'am. I'm Kavya.
Nidhi : Aahhh!?
Kavya : J-Jii!
Nidhi (blushes) : Ohh no no! K-Kavya? Haan! Veer ne mujhe bataya tha beta aapke baare me. K-Kaho na? Kya baat ho gayi?
Kavya : Baat boht hi serious hai Ma'am.
Nidhi (frowns) : Kya hua?
Kavya : Mujhe aapse kuch puchna hai? Kya aap aur Veer bhaiya ke beech accha relationship hai?
Nidhi (blushes) : Ehhhhh?? W-Whaat??
Kavya : Hmm! I mean... Ek accha relationship hai na aap dono ke beech?
Nidhi : Y-Ye!? Tum kya puch rahi ho...!?
Tabhi Kavya ki ruwaasi sii awaaz Nidhi ke kaano me padi,
Kavya : Darasal... Kal bhaiya kahi gaye the raat me... Aur... Kal raat me wo... Itni buri haalat me ghar ke baahar mile the. Harr jagah *sniff* chot hi chot thi... Yaha sabhi *sniff* itna pareshan hai... Doctor ko bhi dikhaaya... Wo toh medicine deke chale gaye. Par... Par bhaiya kisi se baat hi nahi kar rahe hai. *sniff* Na jaane kya ho gaya hai unhe. Bas apne room me sarr jhukaaye baithe huye hai. Na khaana khaa rahe aur na kuch... *sniff*
Nidhi : H-Huh???
Kavya : Mene aapko isliye phone kiya hai, kyuki Veer bhaiya ko jab ghar se nikaala gaya tha tab wo aapke hi saath ruke huye the. Toh mujhe laga aapke aur unke beech aachhi khaasi understanding hogi. Shayad aapki baat maan jaaye wo? *sniff* Isliye mene aapko call kiya hai. K-Kya aap yaha aa sakti hai? Please? I-I beg you...
Jab poori baat ka Nidhi ko pata chala toh na jaane kyu par usse ekdum se bechaini sii hone lagi.
Ghabraahat bhi.
Nidhi : M-Mein abhi aati hu.
Aur usne bina koi samay waste kiye, seedha Veer ke ghar ki orr prasthaan kiya.
Juhi ko wo Shreya ki hi nigraani me chorr aayi.
Aur jese hi Veer ke ghar pohuch wo Veer ke kamre me daakhil hui.
Veer ki haalat dekh uski rooh kaanp gayi. Darwaaze ki dehleez pe hi uske kadam tham gaye. Aur ek atyant hi peeda aur ajeeb sa dard uske dil me hua Veer ko uss haalat me dekh.
Nidhi : V-Veeeer!??
Veer : ??
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
Dhanyavaad!
Pasand aaye toh like kar diyo re.
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Mind blowing
Shandar update bhai...
Dipawali celebration update jabardast update hai action v bahot badhiya hai but pari ayse kyo behave kar ri hai ye sochne wali baat hai jo v hai ane wale updates mein pata chal hi jaega tab tak ka intazar rahega
jisne bhi veer ke bare me atish bhau ko kuchh poka ho uske kaan pakad kar hmari (masoom reader) leader Naina ji ke pass laya jaye uska faisla unhi ki chhatra chhaya me hoga...
Golu ke to laude lag gaye.
Mera personal experience me btau na to jab jab sab kuch sahi jaata hain kuch to gadbad hoti hain jo dikhayi nahi deti.
Mujhe veer aur golu ki dosti me bhi aisa hi lag raha hain. Aise kaise bahanchod dost ban gaye ye log. Har baar mil veer ko bachane hi aaya. Ek baar usko check karna chahiye.
Kavya ka veer ke liye pyaar mujhe kuch kuch apki pichli story nisha ka apne bhai ke pyar jaisa lagta hain. Dono ladkiya same hain.
Mistake to huyi hai.... Jaise us alien pari ki wajah se veer is diwali mana na saka apni family ke sath
Amazing update bhai
All Time Fabulous All Update....
* Chalo Ye To Accha hua ki aarohi ke mnn me jo bhi mel tha Veer ke liye Ab Wo Saff Ho chuka hai.
Aur Dheere 2 Wo Bhi Ab Veer Ke Pyar Me Pdhne Lagegi.
* Veer Ne Apna Pyar Bhi Dikha Diya Ki Wo Kitna Pyar Krta hai Kavya aur Aarohi Se Qki Wo Bhale hi Saga Bhai Nhi tha But Sage Bhaiyo se badh kar tha Kavya ke liye khaskar.
* Kya Veer Golu Ko Apna Ek khas mitr banyega Qki uski life me aisa koi dost nhi jo uske sukh dukh me sath deta Aur Golu ne to Do Bar Uski Ek tarah se Jaan bachai hai.
* Kya Golu Bhi Veer Ke Sath Mil Jyega Uski Life me chal rhe yodh me uski madad krega yha uska sath yhi tak ka tha...?
* Kya Bhau Golu Ko Mar Dega Veer Se badla lene ke liye Qki kavya aur aarohi to uske haath lagi nhi..?
* Kya Veer Golu Ko Bacha Paye ga..?
* Phela Padav to Veer ne paar kar liya aage ke padav paar kar payega veer..?
* Darwaje ke khulte hi usne aisa kya dekha jisse Usko apni Mot Dikh gyi.
* Kya Veer Veer Sare padav paar kr payega...?
dekhte Hai Samaye ke gharb me aage kya likha hai....
Waiting For Next Super Update.....
romanchak update ..veer ki dosti ho gayi golu se jisse veer khush ho gaya par jyada derr tak nahi ,
aatish ka kaam hai ye sab jo veer ko jalsa me lakar tadpana chahta hai .
veer ne shayad galat decision le liya hai apne stats ko naa badhakar..
jab wo 6 logo ko nahi sambhal paya to jalsa me kitne log honge keh nahi sakte .
veer ke saamne sab clear ho gaya hai aatish ke baare me ki usne hi sab kiya hai ragini ,wo club wali ladki aur ring churane ka kaam .
pehle padaw par pahuch gaya hai veer aur abhi tak 2 baaki hai dekhte hai kaise bachata hai golu ko .
ab hero hai kahani ka, ushe to jeetna hi hai saare step paar karke .. baaki golu uska first friend hai... ushe bhi kuch nahi hoga...
Baaki us pari ka koi bharosa nahi...
Ab To Muje Bhi "Pari" Par Dout Ho Raha Hai..
aage jaa kr kuch na kuch kand kregi ye Pari...
In today's society such bad people are found in every street due to which girls are not able to feel safe, Well because of Veer this happened to sisters here but sometimes it happens unnecessarily.
I have heard that a person should understand completely and then decide on that Now here Aarohi has left a wrong impression in her mind without thinking properly and that too at the behest of others so now she is feeling like this, Every coin has two sides and it is wrong to judge what we see.
Golu seems like a good boy, slowly will understand, They left Veer and took GoluThe atmosphere of Jalsa has become very serious and intense and what will happen next and I also had a lot of fun, Although it looks like a SAW movie but the real fun will come only in the hand-to-hand fight.
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.
Thank You...
Awesomeupdate
Mujhe to ye soch ke maza aa jata hai ki kisi din veer ki body se kuchh tentacles niklenge or veer ko usme band krke pari (ek ladki) ki tarah bna denge like butterflies
Vo kya situation hogi Jo veer Sabki bjata aa rha hai fir vhi veer ki sab bjayenge
just awesome update bro you just killed it with each and every update can't wait for your super actioner update .veer rocks bhau shocksplease give early update this time...
in advance for 500 pages!
500 pages k liye advance me
Super update .....
Dekhne layak hoga ki kaise iss chakravyuh se niklata hai humara hero....
Romanchk lekin adhoora laga....
Itna romanch jancha nahi mujhe....
Congratulationsfor completing 500 pages bhai....
Congratulations for completing 500 pages
Aaj ayega update
Congratulations! Bro 500 pages
Update 36 has been posted.
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Awesome UpdateeUpdate - 36 ~ Despair and LoveAb tak...
Ladkhadaate hue Veer bina kuch kahe aage badha aur button dabaayi toh darwaaza khul gaya.
Par...
Andar aate hi usse ek behad hi bhaiyankar darr ki anubhooti hui. Jese maano uski maut aane waali ho. Usse nahi pata tha ki agla padaav uske liye kya kuch laane waala tha. Kya wo waqai Golu ko bacha paega!?
Ab aage...
"Haaah haaah haaaahhhhh..."
[Master! Calm down! Saas araam araam se lijiye. Aap jitna zorr zorr se saas lenge, utna hi panic karenge aur fir behosh ho sakte ho aap.]
Lift se nikalne ke baad Veer ki haalat sahi toh kahi se bhi nahi thi. Fluothane ka concentration bhale hi kam tha. Par shareer ke andar jaate hi uske kuch na kuch side effects toh hone hi the.
Pari ki baat maan jab usne apni aniyantrit saaso ko control kiya toh kuch pal baad usse thoda sahi mehsoos hua.
Wo already ek naye kamre me aa chuka tha. Ye kamra andar se harr jagah safed rang se puta hua tha. Kamra kehna galat hoga. Balki ek behad bada hall type ka tha. Par...
Par ek hi baat thi jo boht hi zyaada ajeeb sii lag rahi thi iss waqt. Yaha tak ki Veer khud confusion me khada hua tha.
Wo ye ki...
Upar ceiling se dherr saari rassiyaa latak rahi thi. Matlab itni zyaada tadaad thi unki ki aisa lag raha tha maano rassiya nahi balki jangal me ped se latak rahi bel ho.
Aur harr ek rassi, dusri rassi se baraabar ke gap me lagi hui thi. Saath hi saath upar ceiling me chaukor khand bane hue the jinke beecho beech ek ek rassiya lagi hui thi.
'Ye sab... kya hai!?'
[Dusri paheli master! Shayad inni rassiyo se aapko kuch karna hai!?]
Aur Pari ke bol jese sahi saabit ho gaye.
Kyuki uske baad hi Aatish ki awaaz intercom se ek baar fir aayi aur Veer ke kaano me padi,
"Ab tum soch rahe hoge ki bhala ye sab kya hai? Kya bala hai ye!? Toh bataata hu... Ye saari jo rassiya dekh rahe ho, inme se kuch aisi hai jinhe kheechne se kuch nahi hoga. Par inhi me se kuch aisi hai, jinhe kheechne par kuch na kuch hoga. Ab tumhe inhi saari rassiyo me se ek rassi aisi dhundni hai jisse kheechne se wo waha diwaar me laga case khul jaaye."
Aatish ki baat sunn Veer ki nazar bagal me gayi jaha deewaar par ek kaale colour ka case laga hua tha.
"Uske khulte hi tumhe firse ek badi sii wahi gol laal button milegi, jisse daba kar tumhara iss kamre ka lock khul jaega. Simple hai. Hai na!? Toh fir shuru ho jaayo."
Aatish iss waqt jidhar bhi baitha hua tha, wo cameras se Veer ko dekh paa raha tha. Aur iss waqt uski awaaz sunn ke hi ye pata lagaaya jaa sakta tha ki wo kitna khush tha.
[Master!]
'Hmm?'
[Mujhe kuch gadbad lag rahi hai. Lift me gas leakage tha. Par yaha toh sab kuch normal lag raha hai. Aur mein nahi maanti ki ye itna simple hai.]
'Tumne thik kaha Pari... Par mujhe pata hai mujhe kya karna hai.'
[Hmm?]
'Check!!!!'
Veer ne ek ek kar ke ceiling par lagi unn chaukor khando ke beech, harr ek rassi ko check kiya. Aur ye karne ke baad jo results usse mile, usse jaankar hi uska dimaag hil gaya.
Kuch khando ke upar aisi aisi cheeze dali hui thi ki unke baare me sawaal uthna swabhaavik tha.
Kuch khando ke upar badi badi dherr saari eete dali hui thi. Kuch ke upar lohe ki rods. Toh wahi kuch me tezaab dala hua tha.
Jese hi Veer ko inn cheezo ke baare me pata chala uska badan sihar utha, ye soch ke ki yadi uske paas aaj ye Check function na hota aur yadi usne inme se kisi bhi ek rassi ko kheencha hota toh uska kya hota?
Maut!
Yahi jawaab tha bas.
Rassi kheechte hi upar ka chaukor khand palatne ke liye banaaya gaya tha. Zaahir sii baat thi, ki jese hi chaukor palatata, upar rakha jo bhi samaan hota wo seedha aake neeche maujood vyakti par girta.
Aaj Veer teen cheezo se bach gaya tha. Eete, rods aur savse khatarnak cheez ~ Tezaab.
Soch ke hi Veer ke raungte khade ho gaye the...
Tezaab jesi cheez ban hoti hai aur aam aadmi ke paas toh bilkul hi nahi rehti. Na jaane Aatish ne kaha se mangwaaya hoga. Par ye bhi baat thi...
Ki Aatish bhi koi aam aadmi thodi tha.
Aatish bhale hi khush tha abhi. Par iss round me baazi Veer ne maar lii thi.
Apne Check function ke kaaran usne sab kuch pehle hi pata laga liya tha.
Ab keval Veer ko acting karni thi.
Usne aage badh pehli rassi kheechi, aur ceiling ka wo chaukor hissa palat gaya.
Par...
Andar se kuch na nikla.
Aise hi usne kuch rassiya kheenchi jinme se kuch khaali thi toh kuch me eete neeche giri par unke girne se pehle hi Veer peeche hatt gaya. Kyuki usse pehle hi pata tha ki unn sab me kya tha.
Tezaab waali ek bhi rassi Veer ne nahi kheechi. Ye boht risky tha aur Veer risk nahi lena chaahta tha.
Veer ne inn rassiyo ko isliye kheecha tha taaki Aatish ko koi shaq na ho. Yadi wo pehli hi baar me sahi rassi chun leta toh ye suspicious maamla bann jaata. Bas Isliye usne dhong kiya aur aise hi kuch ek do rassiya kheechne laga.
Ant me usne wahi rassi kheechi jiske chalte wo kala case side me khula aur andar ek laal button usse nazar aayi.
Button dabaate hi darwaaza khul gaya aur room se baahar nikal usse dusri lift bhi nazar aa gayi.
Jiske zariye wo second floor par pohuch gaya.
'That was too easy... Golu... Chinta mat karna... Mein aa raha hu... Bas thodi derr aur...'
Veer iss samay thoda asmanjas me bhi tha. Kyuki kuch derr pehle jo Aatish itna zorr zorr se thahaake le raha tha, wo ekdum se shaant sa pad gaya tha.
'Shayad usse nahi laga tha ki mein uska dusra round clear kar paunga itni easily.'
[Haha~ Usse kya pata ki aap akele nahi ho. Ye Pari bhi aapke saath hai.]
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Jab Veer second floor par pohucha. Toh intercom se firse Aatish ki awaaz aayi,
"Maan'na padega Veer. Waqai! Tumhari kismat ke kya kehne. Par pata hai!?... Mein tumhaari issi kismat ko sabak sikhaunga abhi. Bas dekhte jao. Uss Ragini ko jese mene toda tha... Wese hi tumhe todunga Veeeeerrr.... Tumhara jab wo darra hua chehra dekhunga naaaa... Jisme ek pal bhi jaan na bachi hooo.... Jisne jeene ki iccha chorr dii hooo... Wahi... Bas wahi dekhna chaahta hu mein... Aaahhh! Tabhi... Tabhi mujhe chenn milega..."
Uski awaaz achanak hi itni badh gayi ki intercom se sound frequency zyaada hone ke kaaran Veer ko apne kaano me haath lagaana pad gaya.
Next room me enter karte hi...
Usse apne perr pe ek ajeeb sa sensation hua.
Par iske pehle ki wo nazre neeche kar dekh paata...
Achaanak hi wo itni speed me khichta chala gaya ki uski kuch samajh me hi nahi aaya. Uska perr, rassi ke ek phande me phass chuka tha. Aur wo rassi jese kisi pulling machine se bandhi hui thi. Ki Veer ka perr jese hi usme aaya aur machine ne usse kheenchna shuru kar diya.
Iss waqt Veer hawa me ulta latka hua tha. Uska ek perr rassi me bandha hua tha aur wo daaye baaye jhul raha tha. Aur uske neeche...
Paani ka boht bada tank rakha hua tha.
"Daaaaaamnnnn ittttt!!!"
Aatish : Veeeeeerrrr!! Ab tumhe pata chalega ki kya hota hai mujhse ulajhna.
Next second hi...
Achanak hi wo rassi neeche aayi aur...
*Splaaaaaashhhhh*
Veer ko poora ka poora uss paani se bhare tank me dubo dii.
"Blurrrrghhhhhh...grrrhhhh" Paani ke bulbule Veer ke muh se chooth rahe the aur wo kisi machli ki tarah chhatpata raha tha, jab wo paani ke baahar aa jaati hai.
[Master!!!? Hold your breath. Paani andar mat lijiye.]
Kamar tak Veer andar hi tha aur fir rassi upar hui aur Veer paani ke baahar nikal aaya. Wo tezz tezz haaf raha tha, khaas raha tha, theek se saas lene ki koshish kar raha tha.
Uska poora shareer kamar se le kar sarr tak paani se geela ho chuka tha.
Aatish : Veer! Mein chaahta toh tumhe kab ka khatam kar sakta tha. Par bhala... Usme maza hi kaha? Jo maza torture karne me hai. Wo maza kisi cheez me nahi. Hahahaha~
Na jaane kitni hi baar Veer ko yu paani me duboya gaya hoga. Par Veer...
Kuch nahi bola...
Uski aankho me bas krodh ke bhaav the. Ekdum laal aankhein jo badla lene ke liye tadap rahi thi.
Wo taiyaar tha. Chaahe jitna bhi torture kyu na kar liya jaaye usse. Ek na ek din wo iss Aatish ko apne khud ke haatho se saza dega. Usne ye nirnay kar liya tha.
Par achanak hi jis baat ki Veer ko bilkul bhi umeeed nahi thi wo hua uske saath.
Achanak hi usse neeche kiya gaya.
Ab wo aisi position par tha ki wo apna ek haath neeche container par tika sakta tha.
Aur issi ka istemaal kar usne apne jeb se knife nikaali aur khud ko upar kar jitne cuts rassi me maar sakta tha utne maare...
Nateeja...
Wo kuch palo me hi free tha.
"Jao... Tum mere test pass hue Veer. Jao... Intezaar kiska hai? Wo laal button dabao aur darwaaza khol lift me jao. Third floor pe hi tumhara dost hai Veer. Jao..."
Bhale hi Aatish ke shabd positive the. Par the toh Aatish ke muh se nikle shabd...
Itni asaani se kese vishwaash kar leta Veer!?
Usne savdhaani barat'te hue wo button dabaayi, jiske chalte darwaaza khul gaya.
Aur Lift ka istemaal kar wo third floor pe bhi pohuch gaya. Koi bhi takleef ya koi bhi trap nahi mila usse.
Sab kuch ekdum shaant tha. Kahi koi gadbad nazar nahi usse.
Ab bas iss darwaaze ke khulte hi usse Golu nazar aa jaega.
Ek aas liye... Veer apne mann me hi khush hone laga. Bhale hi uski jaan inn traps me jaate jaate bachi thi. Par...
Par aaj wo unn traps ko paar kar Golu ke paas pohuch chuka tha.
Aur Golu ko jald se jald churraane ke liye jese hi Veer ne gate khol ke saamne ka nazaara dekha...
Toh...
Wo apne aap apne ghutno par aa gira...
Saamne ka nazaara dekh uski rooh kaanp gayi.
"N-No...!"
Usne apne kaanpte hue hontho se budbudaaya...
Akhir aisa kya tha jo usse nazar aa gaya tha! Raaste me toh usse koi gadbadi mehsoos nahi hui thi. Fir aisa kya tha...!?
Par saamne ka nazaara hi aisa tha ki Veer ne apni zindagi me iss se zyaada khaufnaak drishya nahi dekha tha.
Uski nazre ek hi jagah par tiki hui thi. Wo jese apni palke jhapakna bhul gaya tha. Bhaiyankar khaufnaak, darrawna aur rooh hila dene waala manzar maujood tha uske saamne.
Kyuki...
Saamne...
Ek sheeshe ka bada sa aquarium tha. Aur andar usme ek magar terr raha tha.
Par... Baat sirf yahi nahi thi.
Jis paani me wo terr raha tha...
Wo...
Ekdum laal hota jaa raha tha. Aur...
Veer ne dekha ki...
Magar ke hi paas me...
Kuch paani me terr raha tha.
Aur wo dekh Veer ki nazre darr ke maare felti chali gayi.
Kyuki...
Wo kuch aur nahi... Balki... Ek insaan ka haath tha.
Jiski twacha ke chithde udd paani me hi terr rahe the aur bhayanak laal rang paani me ghulta jaa raha tha. Wo kya tha... Iss baat ka andaaza lagaana bilkul bhi mushqil nahi tha.
Khoon!
Insaan ka khoon...
"Noooo... Nooooo...."
Uska badan boht tezz kampan maar raha tha.
Harr ek ang darr ke maare hil raha tha. Aur uske badan me harr jagah roye khade ho chuke the. Aisa khaufnaak nazaara pehle kabhi nahi dekha tha Veer ne apni life me.
Aur jese ek awaaz ne uska darr saatve aasmaan par pohucha diya...
*Ding*
['Mission : Get to Golu as fast as possible and save him.' has been failed.]
[Mission Fail Penalty : 100 points Deduction.]
[90 points have been deducted. 10 remaining.]
Ye jhatka jese kam tha tha jab agle hi pal Aatish ki baat sunn Veer ka darr yakeen me badal gaya,
"Hahahahaha~ Sahi soch rahe ho Veeeeeerrrr... Ekdum sahi... Yahi hai tumhara Golu... Arre yahi hai... Jo ab nahi raha hahahaha~ Dekh rahe ho? Laal rang ... Aaahh! Adhbhut! Apni shaqal dekho Veer... Yahi... Yahi toh mein dekhna chaahta tha.."
Veer ki aankho se aasu apne aap nikal rahe the. Wo jese kisi sadme me jaa chuka tha par sabse bada sadma jese usse abhi lagna baaki tha.
"Veeeeeerrrrr!!! Hahahahaha~ Tumhe pata hai? Tumne hi usse maara hai Veer... Tumne... Mene nahi... Tumne apne hi dost ka qatl kar diya Veeeerrr... Haan tumne hi..."
Veer : !!?
Aatish : Mene kaha tha na Veer... Mein tumhari kismat ko bhi sabak sikhaunga... Aur tumhe bhi andar se todunga ... Tumhe pata hai Veer...!? Wo dekho... Tank me tumhe teen gate dikh rahe hai!?
Aatish ki excited sii awaaz sunn Veer ki lifeless sii nazre apne aap hi tank ke uss hisse par chali gayi...
Aur waqai...
Waha usse teen bade gates nazar aaye jo tank ke hi andar maujood the.
Aatish : Wo saare gates band the Veer... Wo saare band the. Aur tumhara dost ek taraf tha aur gates ke uss taraf mera paaltu Magarmacch 'Clutch'.
Veer : ???
Aatish : Tumne apne dost ki jaan leli Veer. Jab jab tum uss Laal button ko daba rahe the... Tab tab yaha tank me maujood andar ke ye gates khul rahe the. Tumhe laga tha... Ki tum apne dost ko bacha rahe ho... Par Veeeeeerrrr... Tum unhi haatho se apne dost ko maut ke muh me dhakel rahe the. Tum apni khud ki jaan bachaane ke liye, uss laal button ko jab jab daba ke aage badh rahe the. Tab tab tumhe nahi pata tha... Ki tum apne dost ko maarte jaa rahe the Veeeeerrrrr... Hahahahaha~ Haan! Yahiiii.... Yahiii chehra mujhe dekhna tha Veeeerrrr....
Maano jese ek bomb sa foota Veer ke sarr aur uski saari sochne samajhne ki shakti gaayab ho gayi ye sunn ne ke baad...
Veer : ....
Aatish : Dekhoooo.... Dekhooo Veeeerrrr! Kese... Kese tumhare dost ke shareer ke tukde paani me terr rahe hai. Kese chithde udaa ke rakh diya mere paaltu magar ne... Khooon hi khooon hai Veerrrr... Aur ye sab... Tumne apne haatho se kiya Veeer... Tumne... Hahahaha~ Tumne hi apne dost ko maar diya... Mene toh kuch na kiya Veer. Tumne hi uski jaan leli...
Veer ka dimaag jese kaam karna band kar chuka tha. Uska haal iss waqt shabdo me bataane laayak nahi tha. Uska chehra safed pad gaya tha. Aankhein aisi jese maano unme jaan hi nahi thi. Ab na toh usse kuch sunaayi de raha tha aur na hi kuch feel ho raha tha.
Jis Golu ne uski do baar jaan bachaayi thi. Aaj ussi Golu ki jaan Veer ne apne haatho se leli. Bhala kese nikal paata wo iss glaani se? Inn feelings ke liye glaani bhi ek chota shabd tha.
Veer yaha ye soch raha tha ki... Wo apne pehle mitr, Golu ko bacha raha tha. Wo ye soch raha tha ki harr pal wo usse bachaane me kaamyaab ho raha hai. Par... Par aisa bilkul bhi na tha.
Wo toh ulta apne ussi dost ko maar raha tha. Aisi dardnaak maut insaan kabhi kisi ko na de. Jo manzar Veer ne dekha tha. Wo bataane me bhi kaho uske raungte khade ho jaaye. Fir wo toh khud experience kar raha tha. Na jaane wo iss waqt kinn bhaavo se guzar raha tha. Ye shock itna bada tha ki bechari Pari bhi ekdum shaant pad chuki thi. Usse bilkul bhi aisi umeed nahi thi.
Toh wo sab neeche gubbaare!? Kisi ke maut ke jashn ke liye the!? Veer ne buttons check nahi kii thi. Kyuki unn buttons ko dabaane se darwaaza khul jaa raha tha. Par usse kya pata tha...
Ki jin buttons ko wo daba raha tha wo saath hi saath tank me maujood gates se bhi connected thi. Akhir sahi hi toh kaha tha Aatish ne. Ek prakaar se Veer hi toh Golu ka hatyaara tha?
Aatish : Ab hamaare mehmaan ki bhi khaatir daari kari jaaye...
Veer ghutno ke bal baithe saamne abhi tak tank me ho rahi halchal ko dekh raha tha. Wo insaan ki taang jiske maans ke na jaane kitne tukde paani me idhar se udhar ho rahe the, wo haath...
Ye wahi haath tha... Jo Golu ne usse dosti ke liye aage badhaaya tha!?
Kuch bhaag aise the... Jo pehchaan me tak nahi aa rahe the.
Poora tank... Lahu luhaan ho chuka tha ekdum.
Aur ye sab dekh... Achanak hi Veer ko ubkaayi sii aayi... Aur uske muh se ulti behna shuru ho gayi.
Par jese Aatish ko ye manzoor nahi tha. Kyuki agle hi pal, Veer ke ird gird 8 se 10 log ikhatta ho gaye aur fir...
Usse itna maara gaya ki adhmari haalat me chorr diya.
Veer toh pehle hi sadme me jaa chuka tha. Usne ek baar bhi apne aap ko defend karne ki koshish na kii. Saare hamle wo tab tak sehta gaya jab tak ki wo behosh na ho gaya.
Ek dost mila tha usse...
Aur Veer ne apne hi haatho se uski hi jaan leli.
Aadmi 1 : Bhau! Ye behosh ho gaya hai. Kya karna hai? Isse maar de?
Aatish : Na Na Na Na! Maar denge toh maza hi kya? Wese ab mera kaam iss se nahi hai. Wo toh bas kuch dino se Jalsa me koi manoranjan nahi hua tha. Aur Veer ki badkismati thi ki wo mere plan ke beech me aa gaya. Nateeja... Saamne hai. Maut se acchi saza hoti hai logo ko tadpa ke unhe zinda rakhna.
Aadmi 1 : Bhau fir?
Aatish : Aksar hum bas yahi dhaarna leke chalte hai ki... Kuch log bure hote hai kuch log acche... Kyu hai na?
Aadmi 2 : J-Jii bhau!
Aatish : Veer ki nazro me mein bura tha kyuki mein uske raaste me aaya. Par yahi baat mein bhi toh keh sakta hu? Meri nazar me Veer bura tha kyuki wo merer raaste me aaya!? Insaan bura ya accha nahi hota kabhi bhi samjhe?
Aadmi 1 : Samjhe Bhau!
Aatish : Harr aadmi apni paristhiti ke hisaab se act karta hai. Ab harr aadmi ke apne apne tareeqe ho sakte hai. Veer ki kismat kharaab thi, jo wo mere raaste ke beech aaya. Ab na keval mene uski kismat ka sach usse bata diya balki usse andar se poora tod diya hai. Zindagi bhar ab wo glaani ki Zindagi jiyega... Hamesha uske mann me yahi rahega ki wahi apne dost ka hatyaara hai. Jao ab... Isse iske ghar ke baahar hi fek aao... Ab ye kisi laayak nahi raha. Aur ab hamaara raasta saaf hai.
Itna bol Aatish camera control room se baahar nikal gaya...
Par... Uska chehre par bade hi gusse ke bhaav the. Aur asantushti ke bhi.
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Poora ek din guzar chuka tha iss ghatna ke baad.
Shaam ka waqt tha aur mand mand hawaaein chal rahi thi.
Nidhi ke ghar iss waqt Nidhi Juhi ke sang baith usse padhaane me lagi hui thi.
Toh wahi Shreya aaj shaam ka evening snack bana rahi thi.
"Ye meri cooking itni buri kyu hai? Aarghh! Kya likha hai?? Vegetables ko kaat ke saute karo?? Hmm! Lo bhai daal diye vegetables..."
Aaj usne josh josh me Juhi ko bol diya tha ki wo aaj noodles banaegi... Aur bas... Shaam hote hi Juhi uske peeche pad gayi. Ab bola hai toh karna toh tha hi kaam...
Isliye mohatarma lagi hui thi, sabhi ke liye Noodles banaane me.
Aur baahar baithi Nidhi Juhi ko pyaar se samjhaate hue padha rahi thi.
Tabhi Achanak hi uska phone baj utha...
Jab Nidhi ne caller name dekha toh wo wahi sthir sii pad gayi aur screen pe naam dekh wo bas wahi dekhti reh gayi.
'Veer!?'
Veer ka call aa raha tha.
'Iss waqt!? Aakhir ab kese usse meri yaad aa gayi? Uss din mandir me toh... Yu naraaz hoke chala gaya tha? Kabhi mujhse baat nahi karta... Fir kyu? Halaki Diwali par usne hi mujhe message kiya tha... Fir bhi...'
Ant me wo call utha leti hai.
Nidhi : Ab kese yaad aa gayi tumhe Veer apni iss madam kii?
Par dusri taraf se koi awaaz na aayi...
Nidhi : ???
Voice : Umm... Wo... Actually... Mein Veer bhaiya ki choti behan bol rahi Ma'am. I'm Kavya.
Nidhi : Aahhh!?
Kavya : J-Jii!
Nidhi (blushes) : Ohh no no! K-Kavya? Haan! Veer ne mujhe bataya tha beta aapke baare me. K-Kaho na? Kya baat ho gayi?
Kavya : Baat boht hi serious hai Ma'am.
Nidhi (frowns) : Kya hua?
Kavya : Mujhe aapse kuch puchna hai? Kya aap aur Veer bhaiya ke beech accha relationship hai?
Nidhi (blushes) : Ehhhhh?? W-Whaat??
Kavya : Hmm! I mean... Ek accha relationship hai na aap dono ke beech?
Nidhi : Y-Ye!? Tum kya puch rahi ho...!?
Tabhi Kavya ki ruwaasi sii awaaz Nidhi ke kaano me padi,
Kavya : Darasal... Kal bhaiya kahi gaye the raat me... Aur... Kal raat me wo... Itni buri haalat me ghar ke baahar mile the. Harr jagah *sniff* chot hi chot thi... Yaha sabhi *sniff* itna pareshan hai... Doctor ko bhi dikhaaya... Wo toh medicine deke chale gaye. Par... Par bhaiya kisi se baat hi nahi kar rahe hai. *sniff* Na jaane kya ho gaya hai unhe. Bas apne room me sarr jhukaaye baithe huye hai. Na khaana khaa rahe aur na kuch... *sniff*
Nidhi : H-Huh???
Kavya : Mene aapko isliye phone kiya hai, kyuki Veer bhaiya ko jab ghar se nikaala gaya tha tab wo aapke hi saath ruke huye the. Toh mujhe laga aapke aur unke beech aachhi khaasi understanding hogi. Shayad aapki baat maan jaaye wo? *sniff* Isliye mene aapko call kiya hai. K-Kya aap yaha aa sakti hai? Please? I-I beg you...
Jab poori baat ka Nidhi ko pata chala toh na jaane kyu par usse ekdum se bechaini sii hone lagi.
Ghabraahat bhi.
Nidhi : M-Mein abhi aati hu.
Aur usne bina koi samay waste kiye, seedha Veer ke ghar ki orr prasthaan kiya.
Juhi ko wo Shreya ki hi nigraani me chorr aayi.
Aur jese hi Veer ke ghar pohuch wo Veer ke kamre me daakhil hui.
Veer ki haalat dekh uski rooh kaanp gayi. Darwaaze ki dehleez pe hi uske kadam tham gaye. Aur ek atyant hi peeda aur ajeeb sa dard uske dil me hua Veer ko uss haalat me dekh.
Nidhi : V-Veeeer!??
Veer : ??
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
Dhanyavaad!
Pasand aaye toh like kar diyo re.
Toh bechare Golu ki jaan chali gayi. Aur uski jaan Aatish ne chalaki se Veer ke haatho hi li. Veer iss haadse se pata nhi kaise ubhrega. Aatish ne bahot gehra jhatka diya hai Veer ko.
Golu ko bachhane mein naa kamyaab Veer ko 100 points ka chunaa bhi lag gaya jisme 90 kat gaye hai aur 10 baaki hai.
Aatish ne yeh karke Veer ko apna sabse bada dushman bana liya hai. Ab dekhna hai yeh Veer Golu ki maut ka badla kaise leta hai.
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Awesome updateUpdate - 36 ~ Despair and LoveAb tak...
Ladkhadaate hue Veer bina kuch kahe aage badha aur button dabaayi toh darwaaza khul gaya.
Par...
Andar aate hi usse ek behad hi bhaiyankar darr ki anubhooti hui. Jese maano uski maut aane waali ho. Usse nahi pata tha ki agla padaav uske liye kya kuch laane waala tha. Kya wo waqai Golu ko bacha paega!?
Ab aage...
"Haaah haaah haaaahhhhh..."
[Master! Calm down! Saas araam araam se lijiye. Aap jitna zorr zorr se saas lenge, utna hi panic karenge aur fir behosh ho sakte ho aap.]
Lift se nikalne ke baad Veer ki haalat sahi toh kahi se bhi nahi thi. Fluothane ka concentration bhale hi kam tha. Par shareer ke andar jaate hi uske kuch na kuch side effects toh hone hi the.
Pari ki baat maan jab usne apni aniyantrit saaso ko control kiya toh kuch pal baad usse thoda sahi mehsoos hua.
Wo already ek naye kamre me aa chuka tha. Ye kamra andar se harr jagah safed rang se puta hua tha. Kamra kehna galat hoga. Balki ek behad bada hall type ka tha. Par...
Par ek hi baat thi jo boht hi zyaada ajeeb sii lag rahi thi iss waqt. Yaha tak ki Veer khud confusion me khada hua tha.
Wo ye ki...
Upar ceiling se dherr saari rassiyaa latak rahi thi. Matlab itni zyaada tadaad thi unki ki aisa lag raha tha maano rassiya nahi balki jangal me ped se latak rahi bel ho.
Aur harr ek rassi, dusri rassi se baraabar ke gap me lagi hui thi. Saath hi saath upar ceiling me chaukor khand bane hue the jinke beecho beech ek ek rassiya lagi hui thi.
'Ye sab... kya hai!?'
[Dusri paheli master! Shayad inni rassiyo se aapko kuch karna hai!?]
Aur Pari ke bol jese sahi saabit ho gaye.
Kyuki uske baad hi Aatish ki awaaz intercom se ek baar fir aayi aur Veer ke kaano me padi,
"Ab tum soch rahe hoge ki bhala ye sab kya hai? Kya bala hai ye!? Toh bataata hu... Ye saari jo rassiya dekh rahe ho, inme se kuch aisi hai jinhe kheechne se kuch nahi hoga. Par inhi me se kuch aisi hai, jinhe kheechne par kuch na kuch hoga. Ab tumhe inhi saari rassiyo me se ek rassi aisi dhundni hai jisse kheechne se wo waha diwaar me laga case khul jaaye."
Aatish ki baat sunn Veer ki nazar bagal me gayi jaha deewaar par ek kaale colour ka case laga hua tha.
"Uske khulte hi tumhe firse ek badi sii wahi gol laal button milegi, jisse daba kar tumhara iss kamre ka lock khul jaega. Simple hai. Hai na!? Toh fir shuru ho jaayo."
Aatish iss waqt jidhar bhi baitha hua tha, wo cameras se Veer ko dekh paa raha tha. Aur iss waqt uski awaaz sunn ke hi ye pata lagaaya jaa sakta tha ki wo kitna khush tha.
[Master!]
'Hmm?'
[Mujhe kuch gadbad lag rahi hai. Lift me gas leakage tha. Par yaha toh sab kuch normal lag raha hai. Aur mein nahi maanti ki ye itna simple hai.]
'Tumne thik kaha Pari... Par mujhe pata hai mujhe kya karna hai.'
[Hmm?]
'Check!!!!'
Veer ne ek ek kar ke ceiling par lagi unn chaukor khando ke beech, harr ek rassi ko check kiya. Aur ye karne ke baad jo results usse mile, usse jaankar hi uska dimaag hil gaya.
Kuch khando ke upar aisi aisi cheeze dali hui thi ki unke baare me sawaal uthna swabhaavik tha.
Kuch khando ke upar badi badi dherr saari eete dali hui thi. Kuch ke upar lohe ki rods. Toh wahi kuch me tezaab dala hua tha.
Jese hi Veer ko inn cheezo ke baare me pata chala uska badan sihar utha, ye soch ke ki yadi uske paas aaj ye Check function na hota aur yadi usne inme se kisi bhi ek rassi ko kheencha hota toh uska kya hota?
Maut!
Yahi jawaab tha bas.
Rassi kheechte hi upar ka chaukor khand palatne ke liye banaaya gaya tha. Zaahir sii baat thi, ki jese hi chaukor palatata, upar rakha jo bhi samaan hota wo seedha aake neeche maujood vyakti par girta.
Aaj Veer teen cheezo se bach gaya tha. Eete, rods aur savse khatarnak cheez ~ Tezaab.
Soch ke hi Veer ke raungte khade ho gaye the...
Tezaab jesi cheez ban hoti hai aur aam aadmi ke paas toh bilkul hi nahi rehti. Na jaane Aatish ne kaha se mangwaaya hoga. Par ye bhi baat thi...
Ki Aatish bhi koi aam aadmi thodi tha.
Aatish bhale hi khush tha abhi. Par iss round me baazi Veer ne maar lii thi.
Apne Check function ke kaaran usne sab kuch pehle hi pata laga liya tha.
Ab keval Veer ko acting karni thi.
Usne aage badh pehli rassi kheechi, aur ceiling ka wo chaukor hissa palat gaya.
Par...
Andar se kuch na nikla.
Aise hi usne kuch rassiya kheenchi jinme se kuch khaali thi toh kuch me eete neeche giri par unke girne se pehle hi Veer peeche hatt gaya. Kyuki usse pehle hi pata tha ki unn sab me kya tha.
Tezaab waali ek bhi rassi Veer ne nahi kheechi. Ye boht risky tha aur Veer risk nahi lena chaahta tha.
Veer ne inn rassiyo ko isliye kheecha tha taaki Aatish ko koi shaq na ho. Yadi wo pehli hi baar me sahi rassi chun leta toh ye suspicious maamla bann jaata. Bas Isliye usne dhong kiya aur aise hi kuch ek do rassiya kheechne laga.
Ant me usne wahi rassi kheechi jiske chalte wo kala case side me khula aur andar ek laal button usse nazar aayi.
Button dabaate hi darwaaza khul gaya aur room se baahar nikal usse dusri lift bhi nazar aa gayi.
Jiske zariye wo second floor par pohuch gaya.
'That was too easy... Golu... Chinta mat karna... Mein aa raha hu... Bas thodi derr aur...'
Veer iss samay thoda asmanjas me bhi tha. Kyuki kuch derr pehle jo Aatish itna zorr zorr se thahaake le raha tha, wo ekdum se shaant sa pad gaya tha.
'Shayad usse nahi laga tha ki mein uska dusra round clear kar paunga itni easily.'
[Haha~ Usse kya pata ki aap akele nahi ho. Ye Pari bhi aapke saath hai.]
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Jab Veer second floor par pohucha. Toh intercom se firse Aatish ki awaaz aayi,
"Maan'na padega Veer. Waqai! Tumhari kismat ke kya kehne. Par pata hai!?... Mein tumhaari issi kismat ko sabak sikhaunga abhi. Bas dekhte jao. Uss Ragini ko jese mene toda tha... Wese hi tumhe todunga Veeeeerrr.... Tumhara jab wo darra hua chehra dekhunga naaaa... Jisme ek pal bhi jaan na bachi hooo.... Jisne jeene ki iccha chorr dii hooo... Wahi... Bas wahi dekhna chaahta hu mein... Aaahhh! Tabhi... Tabhi mujhe chenn milega..."
Uski awaaz achanak hi itni badh gayi ki intercom se sound frequency zyaada hone ke kaaran Veer ko apne kaano me haath lagaana pad gaya.
Next room me enter karte hi...
Usse apne perr pe ek ajeeb sa sensation hua.
Par iske pehle ki wo nazre neeche kar dekh paata...
Achaanak hi wo itni speed me khichta chala gaya ki uski kuch samajh me hi nahi aaya. Uska perr, rassi ke ek phande me phass chuka tha. Aur wo rassi jese kisi pulling machine se bandhi hui thi. Ki Veer ka perr jese hi usme aaya aur machine ne usse kheenchna shuru kar diya.
Iss waqt Veer hawa me ulta latka hua tha. Uska ek perr rassi me bandha hua tha aur wo daaye baaye jhul raha tha. Aur uske neeche...
Paani ka boht bada tank rakha hua tha.
"Daaaaaamnnnn ittttt!!!"
Aatish : Veeeeeerrrr!! Ab tumhe pata chalega ki kya hota hai mujhse ulajhna.
Next second hi...
Achanak hi wo rassi neeche aayi aur...
*Splaaaaaashhhhh*
Veer ko poora ka poora uss paani se bhare tank me dubo dii.
"Blurrrrghhhhhh...grrrhhhh" Paani ke bulbule Veer ke muh se chooth rahe the aur wo kisi machli ki tarah chhatpata raha tha, jab wo paani ke baahar aa jaati hai.
[Master!!!? Hold your breath. Paani andar mat lijiye.]
Kamar tak Veer andar hi tha aur fir rassi upar hui aur Veer paani ke baahar nikal aaya. Wo tezz tezz haaf raha tha, khaas raha tha, theek se saas lene ki koshish kar raha tha.
Uska poora shareer kamar se le kar sarr tak paani se geela ho chuka tha.
Aatish : Veer! Mein chaahta toh tumhe kab ka khatam kar sakta tha. Par bhala... Usme maza hi kaha? Jo maza torture karne me hai. Wo maza kisi cheez me nahi. Hahahaha~
Na jaane kitni hi baar Veer ko yu paani me duboya gaya hoga. Par Veer...
Kuch nahi bola...
Uski aankho me bas krodh ke bhaav the. Ekdum laal aankhein jo badla lene ke liye tadap rahi thi.
Wo taiyaar tha. Chaahe jitna bhi torture kyu na kar liya jaaye usse. Ek na ek din wo iss Aatish ko apne khud ke haatho se saza dega. Usne ye nirnay kar liya tha.
Par achanak hi jis baat ki Veer ko bilkul bhi umeeed nahi thi wo hua uske saath.
Achanak hi usse neeche kiya gaya.
Ab wo aisi position par tha ki wo apna ek haath neeche container par tika sakta tha.
Aur issi ka istemaal kar usne apne jeb se knife nikaali aur khud ko upar kar jitne cuts rassi me maar sakta tha utne maare...
Nateeja...
Wo kuch palo me hi free tha.
"Jao... Tum mere test pass hue Veer. Jao... Intezaar kiska hai? Wo laal button dabao aur darwaaza khol lift me jao. Third floor pe hi tumhara dost hai Veer. Jao..."
Bhale hi Aatish ke shabd positive the. Par the toh Aatish ke muh se nikle shabd...
Itni asaani se kese vishwaash kar leta Veer!?
Usne savdhaani barat'te hue wo button dabaayi, jiske chalte darwaaza khul gaya.
Aur Lift ka istemaal kar wo third floor pe bhi pohuch gaya. Koi bhi takleef ya koi bhi trap nahi mila usse.
Sab kuch ekdum shaant tha. Kahi koi gadbad nazar nahi usse.
Ab bas iss darwaaze ke khulte hi usse Golu nazar aa jaega.
Ek aas liye... Veer apne mann me hi khush hone laga. Bhale hi uski jaan inn traps me jaate jaate bachi thi. Par...
Par aaj wo unn traps ko paar kar Golu ke paas pohuch chuka tha.
Aur Golu ko jald se jald churraane ke liye jese hi Veer ne gate khol ke saamne ka nazaara dekha...
Toh...
Wo apne aap apne ghutno par aa gira...
Saamne ka nazaara dekh uski rooh kaanp gayi.
"N-No...!"
Usne apne kaanpte hue hontho se budbudaaya...
Akhir aisa kya tha jo usse nazar aa gaya tha! Raaste me toh usse koi gadbadi mehsoos nahi hui thi. Fir aisa kya tha...!?
Par saamne ka nazaara hi aisa tha ki Veer ne apni zindagi me iss se zyaada khaufnaak drishya nahi dekha tha.
Uski nazre ek hi jagah par tiki hui thi. Wo jese apni palke jhapakna bhul gaya tha. Bhaiyankar khaufnaak, darrawna aur rooh hila dene waala manzar maujood tha uske saamne.
Kyuki...
Saamne...
Ek sheeshe ka bada sa aquarium tha. Aur andar usme ek magar terr raha tha.
Par... Baat sirf yahi nahi thi.
Jis paani me wo terr raha tha...
Wo...
Ekdum laal hota jaa raha tha. Aur...
Veer ne dekha ki...
Magar ke hi paas me...
Kuch paani me terr raha tha.
Aur wo dekh Veer ki nazre darr ke maare felti chali gayi.
Kyuki...
Wo kuch aur nahi... Balki... Ek insaan ka haath tha.
Jiski twacha ke chithde udd paani me hi terr rahe the aur bhayanak laal rang paani me ghulta jaa raha tha. Wo kya tha... Iss baat ka andaaza lagaana bilkul bhi mushqil nahi tha.
Khoon!
Insaan ka khoon...
"Noooo... Nooooo...."
Uska badan boht tezz kampan maar raha tha.
Harr ek ang darr ke maare hil raha tha. Aur uske badan me harr jagah roye khade ho chuke the. Aisa khaufnaak nazaara pehle kabhi nahi dekha tha Veer ne apni life me.
Aur jese ek awaaz ne uska darr saatve aasmaan par pohucha diya...
*Ding*
['Mission : Get to Golu as fast as possible and save him.' has been failed.]
[Mission Fail Penalty : 100 points Deduction.]
[90 points have been deducted. 10 remaining.]
Ye jhatka jese kam tha tha jab agle hi pal Aatish ki baat sunn Veer ka darr yakeen me badal gaya,
"Hahahahaha~ Sahi soch rahe ho Veeeeeerrrr... Ekdum sahi... Yahi hai tumhara Golu... Arre yahi hai... Jo ab nahi raha hahahaha~ Dekh rahe ho? Laal rang ... Aaahh! Adhbhut! Apni shaqal dekho Veer... Yahi... Yahi toh mein dekhna chaahta tha.."
Veer ki aankho se aasu apne aap nikal rahe the. Wo jese kisi sadme me jaa chuka tha par sabse bada sadma jese usse abhi lagna baaki tha.
"Veeeeeerrrrr!!! Hahahahaha~ Tumhe pata hai? Tumne hi usse maara hai Veer... Tumne... Mene nahi... Tumne apne hi dost ka qatl kar diya Veeeerrr... Haan tumne hi..."
Veer : !!?
Aatish : Mene kaha tha na Veer... Mein tumhari kismat ko bhi sabak sikhaunga... Aur tumhe bhi andar se todunga ... Tumhe pata hai Veer...!? Wo dekho... Tank me tumhe teen gate dikh rahe hai!?
Aatish ki excited sii awaaz sunn Veer ki lifeless sii nazre apne aap hi tank ke uss hisse par chali gayi...
Aur waqai...
Waha usse teen bade gates nazar aaye jo tank ke hi andar maujood the.
Aatish : Wo saare gates band the Veer... Wo saare band the. Aur tumhara dost ek taraf tha aur gates ke uss taraf mera paaltu Magarmacch 'Clutch'.
Veer : ???
Aatish : Tumne apne dost ki jaan leli Veer. Jab jab tum uss Laal button ko daba rahe the... Tab tab yaha tank me maujood andar ke ye gates khul rahe the. Tumhe laga tha... Ki tum apne dost ko bacha rahe ho... Par Veeeeeerrrr... Tum unhi haatho se apne dost ko maut ke muh me dhakel rahe the. Tum apni khud ki jaan bachaane ke liye, uss laal button ko jab jab daba ke aage badh rahe the. Tab tab tumhe nahi pata tha... Ki tum apne dost ko maarte jaa rahe the Veeeeerrrrr... Hahahahaha~ Haan! Yahiiii.... Yahiii chehra mujhe dekhna tha Veeeerrrr....
Maano jese ek bomb sa foota Veer ke sarr aur uski saari sochne samajhne ki shakti gaayab ho gayi ye sunn ne ke baad...
Veer : ....
Aatish : Dekhoooo.... Dekhooo Veeeerrrr! Kese... Kese tumhare dost ke shareer ke tukde paani me terr rahe hai. Kese chithde udaa ke rakh diya mere paaltu magar ne... Khooon hi khooon hai Veerrrr... Aur ye sab... Tumne apne haatho se kiya Veeer... Tumne... Hahahaha~ Tumne hi apne dost ko maar diya... Mene toh kuch na kiya Veer. Tumne hi uski jaan leli...
Veer ka dimaag jese kaam karna band kar chuka tha. Uska haal iss waqt shabdo me bataane laayak nahi tha. Uska chehra safed pad gaya tha. Aankhein aisi jese maano unme jaan hi nahi thi. Ab na toh usse kuch sunaayi de raha tha aur na hi kuch feel ho raha tha.
Jis Golu ne uski do baar jaan bachaayi thi. Aaj ussi Golu ki jaan Veer ne apne haatho se leli. Bhala kese nikal paata wo iss glaani se? Inn feelings ke liye glaani bhi ek chota shabd tha.
Veer yaha ye soch raha tha ki... Wo apne pehle mitr, Golu ko bacha raha tha. Wo ye soch raha tha ki harr pal wo usse bachaane me kaamyaab ho raha hai. Par... Par aisa bilkul bhi na tha.
Wo toh ulta apne ussi dost ko maar raha tha. Aisi dardnaak maut insaan kabhi kisi ko na de. Jo manzar Veer ne dekha tha. Wo bataane me bhi kaho uske raungte khade ho jaaye. Fir wo toh khud experience kar raha tha. Na jaane wo iss waqt kinn bhaavo se guzar raha tha. Ye shock itna bada tha ki bechari Pari bhi ekdum shaant pad chuki thi. Usse bilkul bhi aisi umeed nahi thi.
Toh wo sab neeche gubbaare!? Kisi ke maut ke jashn ke liye the!? Veer ne buttons check nahi kii thi. Kyuki unn buttons ko dabaane se darwaaza khul jaa raha tha. Par usse kya pata tha...
Ki jin buttons ko wo daba raha tha wo saath hi saath tank me maujood gates se bhi connected thi. Akhir sahi hi toh kaha tha Aatish ne. Ek prakaar se Veer hi toh Golu ka hatyaara tha?
Aatish : Ab hamaare mehmaan ki bhi khaatir daari kari jaaye...
Veer ghutno ke bal baithe saamne abhi tak tank me ho rahi halchal ko dekh raha tha. Wo insaan ki taang jiske maans ke na jaane kitne tukde paani me idhar se udhar ho rahe the, wo haath...
Ye wahi haath tha... Jo Golu ne usse dosti ke liye aage badhaaya tha!?
Kuch bhaag aise the... Jo pehchaan me tak nahi aa rahe the.
Poora tank... Lahu luhaan ho chuka tha ekdum.
Aur ye sab dekh... Achanak hi Veer ko ubkaayi sii aayi... Aur uske muh se ulti behna shuru ho gayi.
Par jese Aatish ko ye manzoor nahi tha. Kyuki agle hi pal, Veer ke ird gird 8 se 10 log ikhatta ho gaye aur fir...
Usse itna maara gaya ki adhmari haalat me chorr diya.
Veer toh pehle hi sadme me jaa chuka tha. Usne ek baar bhi apne aap ko defend karne ki koshish na kii. Saare hamle wo tab tak sehta gaya jab tak ki wo behosh na ho gaya.
Ek dost mila tha usse...
Aur Veer ne apne hi haatho se uski hi jaan leli.
Aadmi 1 : Bhau! Ye behosh ho gaya hai. Kya karna hai? Isse maar de?
Aatish : Na Na Na Na! Maar denge toh maza hi kya? Wese ab mera kaam iss se nahi hai. Wo toh bas kuch dino se Jalsa me koi manoranjan nahi hua tha. Aur Veer ki badkismati thi ki wo mere plan ke beech me aa gaya. Nateeja... Saamne hai. Maut se acchi saza hoti hai logo ko tadpa ke unhe zinda rakhna.
Aadmi 1 : Bhau fir?
Aatish : Aksar hum bas yahi dhaarna leke chalte hai ki... Kuch log bure hote hai kuch log acche... Kyu hai na?
Aadmi 2 : J-Jii bhau!
Aatish : Veer ki nazro me mein bura tha kyuki mein uske raaste me aaya. Par yahi baat mein bhi toh keh sakta hu? Meri nazar me Veer bura tha kyuki wo merer raaste me aaya!? Insaan bura ya accha nahi hota kabhi bhi samjhe?
Aadmi 1 : Samjhe Bhau!
Aatish : Harr aadmi apni paristhiti ke hisaab se act karta hai. Ab harr aadmi ke apne apne tareeqe ho sakte hai. Veer ki kismat kharaab thi, jo wo mere raaste ke beech aaya. Ab na keval mene uski kismat ka sach usse bata diya balki usse andar se poora tod diya hai. Zindagi bhar ab wo glaani ki Zindagi jiyega... Hamesha uske mann me yahi rahega ki wahi apne dost ka hatyaara hai. Jao ab... Isse iske ghar ke baahar hi fek aao... Ab ye kisi laayak nahi raha. Aur ab hamaara raasta saaf hai.
Itna bol Aatish camera control room se baahar nikal gaya...
Par... Uska chehre par bade hi gusse ke bhaav the. Aur asantushti ke bhi.
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Poora ek din guzar chuka tha iss ghatna ke baad.
Shaam ka waqt tha aur mand mand hawaaein chal rahi thi.
Nidhi ke ghar iss waqt Nidhi Juhi ke sang baith usse padhaane me lagi hui thi.
Toh wahi Shreya aaj shaam ka evening snack bana rahi thi.
"Ye meri cooking itni buri kyu hai? Aarghh! Kya likha hai?? Vegetables ko kaat ke saute karo?? Hmm! Lo bhai daal diye vegetables..."
Aaj usne josh josh me Juhi ko bol diya tha ki wo aaj noodles banaegi... Aur bas... Shaam hote hi Juhi uske peeche pad gayi. Ab bola hai toh karna toh tha hi kaam...
Isliye mohatarma lagi hui thi, sabhi ke liye Noodles banaane me.
Aur baahar baithi Nidhi Juhi ko pyaar se samjhaate hue padha rahi thi.
Tabhi Achanak hi uska phone baj utha...
Jab Nidhi ne caller name dekha toh wo wahi sthir sii pad gayi aur screen pe naam dekh wo bas wahi dekhti reh gayi.
'Veer!?'
Veer ka call aa raha tha.
'Iss waqt!? Aakhir ab kese usse meri yaad aa gayi? Uss din mandir me toh... Yu naraaz hoke chala gaya tha? Kabhi mujhse baat nahi karta... Fir kyu? Halaki Diwali par usne hi mujhe message kiya tha... Fir bhi...'
Ant me wo call utha leti hai.
Nidhi : Ab kese yaad aa gayi tumhe Veer apni iss madam kii?
Par dusri taraf se koi awaaz na aayi...
Nidhi : ???
Voice : Umm... Wo... Actually... Mein Veer bhaiya ki choti behan bol rahi Ma'am. I'm Kavya.
Nidhi : Aahhh!?
Kavya : J-Jii!
Nidhi (blushes) : Ohh no no! K-Kavya? Haan! Veer ne mujhe bataya tha beta aapke baare me. K-Kaho na? Kya baat ho gayi?
Kavya : Baat boht hi serious hai Ma'am.
Nidhi (frowns) : Kya hua?
Kavya : Mujhe aapse kuch puchna hai? Kya aap aur Veer bhaiya ke beech accha relationship hai?
Nidhi (blushes) : Ehhhhh?? W-Whaat??
Kavya : Hmm! I mean... Ek accha relationship hai na aap dono ke beech?
Nidhi : Y-Ye!? Tum kya puch rahi ho...!?
Tabhi Kavya ki ruwaasi sii awaaz Nidhi ke kaano me padi,
Kavya : Darasal... Kal bhaiya kahi gaye the raat me... Aur... Kal raat me wo... Itni buri haalat me ghar ke baahar mile the. Harr jagah *sniff* chot hi chot thi... Yaha sabhi *sniff* itna pareshan hai... Doctor ko bhi dikhaaya... Wo toh medicine deke chale gaye. Par... Par bhaiya kisi se baat hi nahi kar rahe hai. *sniff* Na jaane kya ho gaya hai unhe. Bas apne room me sarr jhukaaye baithe huye hai. Na khaana khaa rahe aur na kuch... *sniff*
Nidhi : H-Huh???
Kavya : Mene aapko isliye phone kiya hai, kyuki Veer bhaiya ko jab ghar se nikaala gaya tha tab wo aapke hi saath ruke huye the. Toh mujhe laga aapke aur unke beech aachhi khaasi understanding hogi. Shayad aapki baat maan jaaye wo? *sniff* Isliye mene aapko call kiya hai. K-Kya aap yaha aa sakti hai? Please? I-I beg you...
Jab poori baat ka Nidhi ko pata chala toh na jaane kyu par usse ekdum se bechaini sii hone lagi.
Ghabraahat bhi.
Nidhi : M-Mein abhi aati hu.
Aur usne bina koi samay waste kiye, seedha Veer ke ghar ki orr prasthaan kiya.
Juhi ko wo Shreya ki hi nigraani me chorr aayi.
Aur jese hi Veer ke ghar pohuch wo Veer ke kamre me daakhil hui.
Veer ki haalat dekh uski rooh kaanp gayi. Darwaaze ki dehleez pe hi uske kadam tham gaye. Aur ek atyant hi peeda aur ajeeb sa dard uske dil me hua Veer ko uss haalat me dekh.
Nidhi : V-Veeeer!??
Veer : ??
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
Dhanyavaad!
Pasand aaye toh like kar diyo re.
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Lovely update.Update - 36 ~ Despair and LoveAb tak...
Ladkhadaate hue Veer bina kuch kahe aage badha aur button dabaayi toh darwaaza khul gaya.
Par...
Andar aate hi usse ek behad hi bhaiyankar darr ki anubhooti hui. Jese maano uski maut aane waali ho. Usse nahi pata tha ki agla padaav uske liye kya kuch laane waala tha. Kya wo waqai Golu ko bacha paega!?
Ab aage...
"Haaah haaah haaaahhhhh..."
[Master! Calm down! Saas araam araam se lijiye. Aap jitna zorr zorr se saas lenge, utna hi panic karenge aur fir behosh ho sakte ho aap.]
Lift se nikalne ke baad Veer ki haalat sahi toh kahi se bhi nahi thi. Fluothane ka concentration bhale hi kam tha. Par shareer ke andar jaate hi uske kuch na kuch side effects toh hone hi the.
Pari ki baat maan jab usne apni aniyantrit saaso ko control kiya toh kuch pal baad usse thoda sahi mehsoos hua.
Wo already ek naye kamre me aa chuka tha. Ye kamra andar se harr jagah safed rang se puta hua tha. Kamra kehna galat hoga. Balki ek behad bada hall type ka tha. Par...
Par ek hi baat thi jo boht hi zyaada ajeeb sii lag rahi thi iss waqt. Yaha tak ki Veer khud confusion me khada hua tha.
Wo ye ki...
Upar ceiling se dherr saari rassiyaa latak rahi thi. Matlab itni zyaada tadaad thi unki ki aisa lag raha tha maano rassiya nahi balki jangal me ped se latak rahi bel ho.
Aur harr ek rassi, dusri rassi se baraabar ke gap me lagi hui thi. Saath hi saath upar ceiling me chaukor khand bane hue the jinke beecho beech ek ek rassiya lagi hui thi.
'Ye sab... kya hai!?'
[Dusri paheli master! Shayad inni rassiyo se aapko kuch karna hai!?]
Aur Pari ke bol jese sahi saabit ho gaye.
Kyuki uske baad hi Aatish ki awaaz intercom se ek baar fir aayi aur Veer ke kaano me padi,
"Ab tum soch rahe hoge ki bhala ye sab kya hai? Kya bala hai ye!? Toh bataata hu... Ye saari jo rassiya dekh rahe ho, inme se kuch aisi hai jinhe kheechne se kuch nahi hoga. Par inhi me se kuch aisi hai, jinhe kheechne par kuch na kuch hoga. Ab tumhe inhi saari rassiyo me se ek rassi aisi dhundni hai jisse kheechne se wo waha diwaar me laga case khul jaaye."
Aatish ki baat sunn Veer ki nazar bagal me gayi jaha deewaar par ek kaale colour ka case laga hua tha.
"Uske khulte hi tumhe firse ek badi sii wahi gol laal button milegi, jisse daba kar tumhara iss kamre ka lock khul jaega. Simple hai. Hai na!? Toh fir shuru ho jaayo."
Aatish iss waqt jidhar bhi baitha hua tha, wo cameras se Veer ko dekh paa raha tha. Aur iss waqt uski awaaz sunn ke hi ye pata lagaaya jaa sakta tha ki wo kitna khush tha.
[Master!]
'Hmm?'
[Mujhe kuch gadbad lag rahi hai. Lift me gas leakage tha. Par yaha toh sab kuch normal lag raha hai. Aur mein nahi maanti ki ye itna simple hai.]
'Tumne thik kaha Pari... Par mujhe pata hai mujhe kya karna hai.'
[Hmm?]
'Check!!!!'
Veer ne ek ek kar ke ceiling par lagi unn chaukor khando ke beech, harr ek rassi ko check kiya. Aur ye karne ke baad jo results usse mile, usse jaankar hi uska dimaag hil gaya.
Kuch khando ke upar aisi aisi cheeze dali hui thi ki unke baare me sawaal uthna swabhaavik tha.
Kuch khando ke upar badi badi dherr saari eete dali hui thi. Kuch ke upar lohe ki rods. Toh wahi kuch me tezaab dala hua tha.
Jese hi Veer ko inn cheezo ke baare me pata chala uska badan sihar utha, ye soch ke ki yadi uske paas aaj ye Check function na hota aur yadi usne inme se kisi bhi ek rassi ko kheencha hota toh uska kya hota?
Maut!
Yahi jawaab tha bas.
Rassi kheechte hi upar ka chaukor khand palatne ke liye banaaya gaya tha. Zaahir sii baat thi, ki jese hi chaukor palatata, upar rakha jo bhi samaan hota wo seedha aake neeche maujood vyakti par girta.
Aaj Veer teen cheezo se bach gaya tha. Eete, rods aur savse khatarnak cheez ~ Tezaab.
Soch ke hi Veer ke raungte khade ho gaye the...
Tezaab jesi cheez ban hoti hai aur aam aadmi ke paas toh bilkul hi nahi rehti. Na jaane Aatish ne kaha se mangwaaya hoga. Par ye bhi baat thi...
Ki Aatish bhi koi aam aadmi thodi tha.
Aatish bhale hi khush tha abhi. Par iss round me baazi Veer ne maar lii thi.
Apne Check function ke kaaran usne sab kuch pehle hi pata laga liya tha.
Ab keval Veer ko acting karni thi.
Usne aage badh pehli rassi kheechi, aur ceiling ka wo chaukor hissa palat gaya.
Par...
Andar se kuch na nikla.
Aise hi usne kuch rassiya kheenchi jinme se kuch khaali thi toh kuch me eete neeche giri par unke girne se pehle hi Veer peeche hatt gaya. Kyuki usse pehle hi pata tha ki unn sab me kya tha.
Tezaab waali ek bhi rassi Veer ne nahi kheechi. Ye boht risky tha aur Veer risk nahi lena chaahta tha.
Veer ne inn rassiyo ko isliye kheecha tha taaki Aatish ko koi shaq na ho. Yadi wo pehli hi baar me sahi rassi chun leta toh ye suspicious maamla bann jaata. Bas Isliye usne dhong kiya aur aise hi kuch ek do rassiya kheechne laga.
Ant me usne wahi rassi kheechi jiske chalte wo kala case side me khula aur andar ek laal button usse nazar aayi.
Button dabaate hi darwaaza khul gaya aur room se baahar nikal usse dusri lift bhi nazar aa gayi.
Jiske zariye wo second floor par pohuch gaya.
'That was too easy... Golu... Chinta mat karna... Mein aa raha hu... Bas thodi derr aur...'
Veer iss samay thoda asmanjas me bhi tha. Kyuki kuch derr pehle jo Aatish itna zorr zorr se thahaake le raha tha, wo ekdum se shaant sa pad gaya tha.
'Shayad usse nahi laga tha ki mein uska dusra round clear kar paunga itni easily.'
[Haha~ Usse kya pata ki aap akele nahi ho. Ye Pari bhi aapke saath hai.]
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Jab Veer second floor par pohucha. Toh intercom se firse Aatish ki awaaz aayi,
"Maan'na padega Veer. Waqai! Tumhari kismat ke kya kehne. Par pata hai!?... Mein tumhaari issi kismat ko sabak sikhaunga abhi. Bas dekhte jao. Uss Ragini ko jese mene toda tha... Wese hi tumhe todunga Veeeeerrr.... Tumhara jab wo darra hua chehra dekhunga naaaa... Jisme ek pal bhi jaan na bachi hooo.... Jisne jeene ki iccha chorr dii hooo... Wahi... Bas wahi dekhna chaahta hu mein... Aaahhh! Tabhi... Tabhi mujhe chenn milega..."
Uski awaaz achanak hi itni badh gayi ki intercom se sound frequency zyaada hone ke kaaran Veer ko apne kaano me haath lagaana pad gaya.
Next room me enter karte hi...
Usse apne perr pe ek ajeeb sa sensation hua.
Par iske pehle ki wo nazre neeche kar dekh paata...
Achaanak hi wo itni speed me khichta chala gaya ki uski kuch samajh me hi nahi aaya. Uska perr, rassi ke ek phande me phass chuka tha. Aur wo rassi jese kisi pulling machine se bandhi hui thi. Ki Veer ka perr jese hi usme aaya aur machine ne usse kheenchna shuru kar diya.
Iss waqt Veer hawa me ulta latka hua tha. Uska ek perr rassi me bandha hua tha aur wo daaye baaye jhul raha tha. Aur uske neeche...
Paani ka boht bada tank rakha hua tha.
"Daaaaaamnnnn ittttt!!!"
Aatish : Veeeeeerrrr!! Ab tumhe pata chalega ki kya hota hai mujhse ulajhna.
Next second hi...
Achanak hi wo rassi neeche aayi aur...
*Splaaaaaashhhhh*
Veer ko poora ka poora uss paani se bhare tank me dubo dii.
"Blurrrrghhhhhh...grrrhhhh" Paani ke bulbule Veer ke muh se chooth rahe the aur wo kisi machli ki tarah chhatpata raha tha, jab wo paani ke baahar aa jaati hai.
[Master!!!? Hold your breath. Paani andar mat lijiye.]
Kamar tak Veer andar hi tha aur fir rassi upar hui aur Veer paani ke baahar nikal aaya. Wo tezz tezz haaf raha tha, khaas raha tha, theek se saas lene ki koshish kar raha tha.
Uska poora shareer kamar se le kar sarr tak paani se geela ho chuka tha.
Aatish : Veer! Mein chaahta toh tumhe kab ka khatam kar sakta tha. Par bhala... Usme maza hi kaha? Jo maza torture karne me hai. Wo maza kisi cheez me nahi. Hahahaha~
Na jaane kitni hi baar Veer ko yu paani me duboya gaya hoga. Par Veer...
Kuch nahi bola...
Uski aankho me bas krodh ke bhaav the. Ekdum laal aankhein jo badla lene ke liye tadap rahi thi.
Wo taiyaar tha. Chaahe jitna bhi torture kyu na kar liya jaaye usse. Ek na ek din wo iss Aatish ko apne khud ke haatho se saza dega. Usne ye nirnay kar liya tha.
Par achanak hi jis baat ki Veer ko bilkul bhi umeeed nahi thi wo hua uske saath.
Achanak hi usse neeche kiya gaya.
Ab wo aisi position par tha ki wo apna ek haath neeche container par tika sakta tha.
Aur issi ka istemaal kar usne apne jeb se knife nikaali aur khud ko upar kar jitne cuts rassi me maar sakta tha utne maare...
Nateeja...
Wo kuch palo me hi free tha.
"Jao... Tum mere test pass hue Veer. Jao... Intezaar kiska hai? Wo laal button dabao aur darwaaza khol lift me jao. Third floor pe hi tumhara dost hai Veer. Jao..."
Bhale hi Aatish ke shabd positive the. Par the toh Aatish ke muh se nikle shabd...
Itni asaani se kese vishwaash kar leta Veer!?
Usne savdhaani barat'te hue wo button dabaayi, jiske chalte darwaaza khul gaya.
Aur Lift ka istemaal kar wo third floor pe bhi pohuch gaya. Koi bhi takleef ya koi bhi trap nahi mila usse.
Sab kuch ekdum shaant tha. Kahi koi gadbad nazar nahi usse.
Ab bas iss darwaaze ke khulte hi usse Golu nazar aa jaega.
Ek aas liye... Veer apne mann me hi khush hone laga. Bhale hi uski jaan inn traps me jaate jaate bachi thi. Par...
Par aaj wo unn traps ko paar kar Golu ke paas pohuch chuka tha.
Aur Golu ko jald se jald churraane ke liye jese hi Veer ne gate khol ke saamne ka nazaara dekha...
Toh...
Wo apne aap apne ghutno par aa gira...
Saamne ka nazaara dekh uski rooh kaanp gayi.
"N-No...!"
Usne apne kaanpte hue hontho se budbudaaya...
Akhir aisa kya tha jo usse nazar aa gaya tha! Raaste me toh usse koi gadbadi mehsoos nahi hui thi. Fir aisa kya tha...!?
Par saamne ka nazaara hi aisa tha ki Veer ne apni zindagi me iss se zyaada khaufnaak drishya nahi dekha tha.
Uski nazre ek hi jagah par tiki hui thi. Wo jese apni palke jhapakna bhul gaya tha. Bhaiyankar khaufnaak, darrawna aur rooh hila dene waala manzar maujood tha uske saamne.
Kyuki...
Saamne...
Ek sheeshe ka bada sa aquarium tha. Aur andar usme ek magar terr raha tha.
Par... Baat sirf yahi nahi thi.
Jis paani me wo terr raha tha...
Wo...
Ekdum laal hota jaa raha tha. Aur...
Veer ne dekha ki...
Magar ke hi paas me...
Kuch paani me terr raha tha.
Aur wo dekh Veer ki nazre darr ke maare felti chali gayi.
Kyuki...
Wo kuch aur nahi... Balki... Ek insaan ka haath tha.
Jiski twacha ke chithde udd paani me hi terr rahe the aur bhayanak laal rang paani me ghulta jaa raha tha. Wo kya tha... Iss baat ka andaaza lagaana bilkul bhi mushqil nahi tha.
Khoon!
Insaan ka khoon...
"Noooo... Nooooo...."
Uska badan boht tezz kampan maar raha tha.
Harr ek ang darr ke maare hil raha tha. Aur uske badan me harr jagah roye khade ho chuke the. Aisa khaufnaak nazaara pehle kabhi nahi dekha tha Veer ne apni life me.
Aur jese ek awaaz ne uska darr saatve aasmaan par pohucha diya...
*Ding*
['Mission : Get to Golu as fast as possible and save him.' has been failed.]
[Mission Fail Penalty : 100 points Deduction.]
[90 points have been deducted. 10 remaining.]
Ye jhatka jese kam tha tha jab agle hi pal Aatish ki baat sunn Veer ka darr yakeen me badal gaya,
"Hahahahaha~ Sahi soch rahe ho Veeeeeerrrr... Ekdum sahi... Yahi hai tumhara Golu... Arre yahi hai... Jo ab nahi raha hahahaha~ Dekh rahe ho? Laal rang ... Aaahh! Adhbhut! Apni shaqal dekho Veer... Yahi... Yahi toh mein dekhna chaahta tha.."
Veer ki aankho se aasu apne aap nikal rahe the. Wo jese kisi sadme me jaa chuka tha par sabse bada sadma jese usse abhi lagna baaki tha.
"Veeeeeerrrrr!!! Hahahahaha~ Tumhe pata hai? Tumne hi usse maara hai Veer... Tumne... Mene nahi... Tumne apne hi dost ka qatl kar diya Veeeerrr... Haan tumne hi..."
Veer : !!?
Aatish : Mene kaha tha na Veer... Mein tumhari kismat ko bhi sabak sikhaunga... Aur tumhe bhi andar se todunga ... Tumhe pata hai Veer...!? Wo dekho... Tank me tumhe teen gate dikh rahe hai!?
Aatish ki excited sii awaaz sunn Veer ki lifeless sii nazre apne aap hi tank ke uss hisse par chali gayi...
Aur waqai...
Waha usse teen bade gates nazar aaye jo tank ke hi andar maujood the.
Aatish : Wo saare gates band the Veer... Wo saare band the. Aur tumhara dost ek taraf tha aur gates ke uss taraf mera paaltu Magarmacch 'Clutch'.
Veer : ???
Aatish : Tumne apne dost ki jaan leli Veer. Jab jab tum uss Laal button ko daba rahe the... Tab tab yaha tank me maujood andar ke ye gates khul rahe the. Tumhe laga tha... Ki tum apne dost ko bacha rahe ho... Par Veeeeeerrrr... Tum unhi haatho se apne dost ko maut ke muh me dhakel rahe the. Tum apni khud ki jaan bachaane ke liye, uss laal button ko jab jab daba ke aage badh rahe the. Tab tab tumhe nahi pata tha... Ki tum apne dost ko maarte jaa rahe the Veeeeerrrrr... Hahahahaha~ Haan! Yahiiii.... Yahiii chehra mujhe dekhna tha Veeeerrrr....
Maano jese ek bomb sa foota Veer ke sarr aur uski saari sochne samajhne ki shakti gaayab ho gayi ye sunn ne ke baad...
Veer : ....
Aatish : Dekhoooo.... Dekhooo Veeeerrrr! Kese... Kese tumhare dost ke shareer ke tukde paani me terr rahe hai. Kese chithde udaa ke rakh diya mere paaltu magar ne... Khooon hi khooon hai Veerrrr... Aur ye sab... Tumne apne haatho se kiya Veeer... Tumne... Hahahaha~ Tumne hi apne dost ko maar diya... Mene toh kuch na kiya Veer. Tumne hi uski jaan leli...
Veer ka dimaag jese kaam karna band kar chuka tha. Uska haal iss waqt shabdo me bataane laayak nahi tha. Uska chehra safed pad gaya tha. Aankhein aisi jese maano unme jaan hi nahi thi. Ab na toh usse kuch sunaayi de raha tha aur na hi kuch feel ho raha tha.
Jis Golu ne uski do baar jaan bachaayi thi. Aaj ussi Golu ki jaan Veer ne apne haatho se leli. Bhala kese nikal paata wo iss glaani se? Inn feelings ke liye glaani bhi ek chota shabd tha.
Veer yaha ye soch raha tha ki... Wo apne pehle mitr, Golu ko bacha raha tha. Wo ye soch raha tha ki harr pal wo usse bachaane me kaamyaab ho raha hai. Par... Par aisa bilkul bhi na tha.
Wo toh ulta apne ussi dost ko maar raha tha. Aisi dardnaak maut insaan kabhi kisi ko na de. Jo manzar Veer ne dekha tha. Wo bataane me bhi kaho uske raungte khade ho jaaye. Fir wo toh khud experience kar raha tha. Na jaane wo iss waqt kinn bhaavo se guzar raha tha. Ye shock itna bada tha ki bechari Pari bhi ekdum shaant pad chuki thi. Usse bilkul bhi aisi umeed nahi thi.
Toh wo sab neeche gubbaare!? Kisi ke maut ke jashn ke liye the!? Veer ne buttons check nahi kii thi. Kyuki unn buttons ko dabaane se darwaaza khul jaa raha tha. Par usse kya pata tha...
Ki jin buttons ko wo daba raha tha wo saath hi saath tank me maujood gates se bhi connected thi. Akhir sahi hi toh kaha tha Aatish ne. Ek prakaar se Veer hi toh Golu ka hatyaara tha?
Aatish : Ab hamaare mehmaan ki bhi khaatir daari kari jaaye...
Veer ghutno ke bal baithe saamne abhi tak tank me ho rahi halchal ko dekh raha tha. Wo insaan ki taang jiske maans ke na jaane kitne tukde paani me idhar se udhar ho rahe the, wo haath...
Ye wahi haath tha... Jo Golu ne usse dosti ke liye aage badhaaya tha!?
Kuch bhaag aise the... Jo pehchaan me tak nahi aa rahe the.
Poora tank... Lahu luhaan ho chuka tha ekdum.
Aur ye sab dekh... Achanak hi Veer ko ubkaayi sii aayi... Aur uske muh se ulti behna shuru ho gayi.
Par jese Aatish ko ye manzoor nahi tha. Kyuki agle hi pal, Veer ke ird gird 8 se 10 log ikhatta ho gaye aur fir...
Usse itna maara gaya ki adhmari haalat me chorr diya.
Veer toh pehle hi sadme me jaa chuka tha. Usne ek baar bhi apne aap ko defend karne ki koshish na kii. Saare hamle wo tab tak sehta gaya jab tak ki wo behosh na ho gaya.
Ek dost mila tha usse...
Aur Veer ne apne hi haatho se uski hi jaan leli.
Aadmi 1 : Bhau! Ye behosh ho gaya hai. Kya karna hai? Isse maar de?
Aatish : Na Na Na Na! Maar denge toh maza hi kya? Wese ab mera kaam iss se nahi hai. Wo toh bas kuch dino se Jalsa me koi manoranjan nahi hua tha. Aur Veer ki badkismati thi ki wo mere plan ke beech me aa gaya. Nateeja... Saamne hai. Maut se acchi saza hoti hai logo ko tadpa ke unhe zinda rakhna.
Aadmi 1 : Bhau fir?
Aatish : Aksar hum bas yahi dhaarna leke chalte hai ki... Kuch log bure hote hai kuch log acche... Kyu hai na?
Aadmi 2 : J-Jii bhau!
Aatish : Veer ki nazro me mein bura tha kyuki mein uske raaste me aaya. Par yahi baat mein bhi toh keh sakta hu? Meri nazar me Veer bura tha kyuki wo merer raaste me aaya!? Insaan bura ya accha nahi hota kabhi bhi samjhe?
Aadmi 1 : Samjhe Bhau!
Aatish : Harr aadmi apni paristhiti ke hisaab se act karta hai. Ab harr aadmi ke apne apne tareeqe ho sakte hai. Veer ki kismat kharaab thi, jo wo mere raaste ke beech aaya. Ab na keval mene uski kismat ka sach usse bata diya balki usse andar se poora tod diya hai. Zindagi bhar ab wo glaani ki Zindagi jiyega... Hamesha uske mann me yahi rahega ki wahi apne dost ka hatyaara hai. Jao ab... Isse iske ghar ke baahar hi fek aao... Ab ye kisi laayak nahi raha. Aur ab hamaara raasta saaf hai.
Itna bol Aatish camera control room se baahar nikal gaya...
Par... Uska chehre par bade hi gusse ke bhaav the. Aur asantushti ke bhi.
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Poora ek din guzar chuka tha iss ghatna ke baad.
Shaam ka waqt tha aur mand mand hawaaein chal rahi thi.
Nidhi ke ghar iss waqt Nidhi Juhi ke sang baith usse padhaane me lagi hui thi.
Toh wahi Shreya aaj shaam ka evening snack bana rahi thi.
"Ye meri cooking itni buri kyu hai? Aarghh! Kya likha hai?? Vegetables ko kaat ke saute karo?? Hmm! Lo bhai daal diye vegetables..."
Aaj usne josh josh me Juhi ko bol diya tha ki wo aaj noodles banaegi... Aur bas... Shaam hote hi Juhi uske peeche pad gayi. Ab bola hai toh karna toh tha hi kaam...
Isliye mohatarma lagi hui thi, sabhi ke liye Noodles banaane me.
Aur baahar baithi Nidhi Juhi ko pyaar se samjhaate hue padha rahi thi.
Tabhi Achanak hi uska phone baj utha...
Jab Nidhi ne caller name dekha toh wo wahi sthir sii pad gayi aur screen pe naam dekh wo bas wahi dekhti reh gayi.
'Veer!?'
Veer ka call aa raha tha.
'Iss waqt!? Aakhir ab kese usse meri yaad aa gayi? Uss din mandir me toh... Yu naraaz hoke chala gaya tha? Kabhi mujhse baat nahi karta... Fir kyu? Halaki Diwali par usne hi mujhe message kiya tha... Fir bhi...'
Ant me wo call utha leti hai.
Nidhi : Ab kese yaad aa gayi tumhe Veer apni iss madam kii?
Par dusri taraf se koi awaaz na aayi...
Nidhi : ???
Voice : Umm... Wo... Actually... Mein Veer bhaiya ki choti behan bol rahi Ma'am. I'm Kavya.
Nidhi : Aahhh!?
Kavya : J-Jii!
Nidhi (blushes) : Ohh no no! K-Kavya? Haan! Veer ne mujhe bataya tha beta aapke baare me. K-Kaho na? Kya baat ho gayi?
Kavya : Baat boht hi serious hai Ma'am.
Nidhi (frowns) : Kya hua?
Kavya : Mujhe aapse kuch puchna hai? Kya aap aur Veer bhaiya ke beech accha relationship hai?
Nidhi (blushes) : Ehhhhh?? W-Whaat??
Kavya : Hmm! I mean... Ek accha relationship hai na aap dono ke beech?
Nidhi : Y-Ye!? Tum kya puch rahi ho...!?
Tabhi Kavya ki ruwaasi sii awaaz Nidhi ke kaano me padi,
Kavya : Darasal... Kal bhaiya kahi gaye the raat me... Aur... Kal raat me wo... Itni buri haalat me ghar ke baahar mile the. Harr jagah *sniff* chot hi chot thi... Yaha sabhi *sniff* itna pareshan hai... Doctor ko bhi dikhaaya... Wo toh medicine deke chale gaye. Par... Par bhaiya kisi se baat hi nahi kar rahe hai. *sniff* Na jaane kya ho gaya hai unhe. Bas apne room me sarr jhukaaye baithe huye hai. Na khaana khaa rahe aur na kuch... *sniff*
Nidhi : H-Huh???
Kavya : Mene aapko isliye phone kiya hai, kyuki Veer bhaiya ko jab ghar se nikaala gaya tha tab wo aapke hi saath ruke huye the. Toh mujhe laga aapke aur unke beech aachhi khaasi understanding hogi. Shayad aapki baat maan jaaye wo? *sniff* Isliye mene aapko call kiya hai. K-Kya aap yaha aa sakti hai? Please? I-I beg you...
Jab poori baat ka Nidhi ko pata chala toh na jaane kyu par usse ekdum se bechaini sii hone lagi.
Ghabraahat bhi.
Nidhi : M-Mein abhi aati hu.
Aur usne bina koi samay waste kiye, seedha Veer ke ghar ki orr prasthaan kiya.
Juhi ko wo Shreya ki hi nigraani me chorr aayi.
Aur jese hi Veer ke ghar pohuch wo Veer ke kamre me daakhil hui.
Veer ki haalat dekh uski rooh kaanp gayi. Darwaaze ki dehleez pe hi uske kadam tham gaye. Aur ek atyant hi peeda aur ajeeb sa dard uske dil me hua Veer ko uss haalat me dekh.
Nidhi : V-Veeeer!??
Veer : ??
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
Dhanyavaad!
Pasand aaye toh like kar diyo re.
Till now one of the best episodes!!!!!!
Not enough words to praise this update.