Incest Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery

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Update - 32 ~ The Calm before the Storm.
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Ab tak...

Idhar Veer saare intezaamo se khush tha aur ab wo ring waapas karne ke liye jaane hi waala tha.

Wo jese hi darwaaze par aaya toh gate ke baahar hi usse kuch awaaz sunaayi dii.

"Aaiye Dad... Aaiye Mom!"

Aur jese hi usne gate khola...

Saamne Vivek, Sumitra aur Karunesh car se utar ke seedha uske saamne hi khade the.

Ab aage...

Jese hi Veer ne gate se baahar nikal ke saamne dekha toh wo chaunk gaya. Aur kyu na chaunkta? Saamne uska bada bhai Vivek aur uske chacha chachi jo khade hue the.

Jab unn teeno ne Veer ko dekha toh unke chehre par bhi wahi bhaav the jo Veer ke chehre par the.

Hairaani ke bhaav!

"Veeeer!??" Sumitra ke hontho se apne aap Veer ka naam usse dekhte hi nikal gaya.

Karunesh bhi hairaan tha aur Vivek bhi. Akhir Veer Ragini ke ghar kya kar raha tha!?

Agla scene yahi tha ki sabhi hall me baithe hue the aur ek ajeeb sii khaamoshi chhaayi hui thi.

Na koi kuch bol paa raha tha na hi kar paa raha tha. Mahaul behad hi awkward ho chuka tha.

Aur ye ajeeb sa sannaata jese uss awkwardness ko aur badhaata jaa raha tha.

Karunesh aur Sumitra dono hi Ragini ko dekhte jo unke saamne hi sofe par baithi hui thi aur fir Veer ko dekhte jo uske bagal se lage sofe se baitha hua tha.

Ragini ke chehre par koi bhaav nahi the. Wo ekdum nidar hoke baithi thi jiske chalte Veer khud hairaan reh gaya. Usse laga tha ki uski Bhabhi thoda seham gayi hogi yu achanak apne saas sasur ko dekh ke. Par Ragini toh jese ekdum taiyaar baithi hui thi.

Jese maano wo wait hi kar rahi thi ki aao aur puchiye sawaal aur koshish kariye mujhe ghar le jaane ki.

Uska ye attitude dekh Karunesh aur Sumitra ki bolti band thi. Akhir kaar, kuch palo ke baad Sumitra ne badi hi himmat juta ke baat shuru kii.

Sumitra : B-Beta Ragini?

Ragini (smiles) : Jii?

Ragini ki muskaan dekh Sumitra duwidha me pad gayi aur apne shabdo ko kehne me uski hich-kichaahat aur jese badh gayi.

Sumitra : Wo... Dekho beta. Hume ghar me sabhi ko sab kuch pata chal chuka hai. Itni badi ghatna ho gayi... Yaha tak ki ab bhi ye police ke saath lage hue hai... Aur waha uss waqt kya sthiti thi ye hum samajh sakte hai. Tumhare maa baap pe jo beeti wo bhi behad hi dukhad aur chinta janak ghatna thi.

Ragini : Hmm!

Sumitra : Toh... Toh... Beta jo kuch bhi waha hua wo... Wo ek haadsa tha. Iske chalte hume aur ekjut hona chaahiye hai na? Na ki aur aise rishto ke beech misunderstanding paida karni chaahiye.

Ragini : Mene kab hi misunderstanding khadi kii maa jii? Misunderstanding toh... Aapke hi bete ne kari thi. Meri jaan daav pe laga ke.

Ragini ke harr ek shabd kaate ki tarah Sumitra ko chubh rahe the. Akhir baat sach jo thi. Uske apne hi bete se galti hui thi aur wo jaanti thi. Par wo kese bhi karke ye maamla aur nahi bigaadna chaahti thi.

Sumitra : M-Mein jaanti hu beta. Vivek se galti hui hai. Ye toh hai hi naalayak...

Vivek : Huh? W-Wha...!? What?? Maa??

Sumitra : Par... Tum bhi toh samajhdaar ho beta. Aise yu muh ferr ke ghar se aake yaha akele rehne lagna. Ye toh koi hal nahi hua na samasya ka? Humr baith ke baat karke isse suljhaana chaahiye na?

Ragini : Samasya?? Kesi samasya? Mera dil chotil hua hai Maa jii! Mera dil...

Bolte bolte, Ragini ki awaaz tezz ho chuki thi aur aankho me nami bhi panapna shuru ho chuki thi, jo Veer side se gaur se notice kar paa raha tha. Par fir bhi, wo shaant hi raha.

Ragini : Khud ko meri jagah rakh ke dekhiye Maa jii! Kesa lagega aapko? Yadi aap meri jagah hoti aur sasur jii aapko ye kehte ki, "meri jaan bacha lo aur meri patni ki jaan lelo." Kesa lagta aapko? Boliye?? Jawaab dijiyeee!??

Aur bas...

Sumitra ka sarr apne aap jhuk gaya. Wo nazre milaane laayak nahi thi.

Karunesh : Ragini beta... Dekho! Ye baat hum sabhi jaante hai aur tum dono bhi jaante ho ki tum dono hi ek dusre se boht pyaar karte ho. Hai ki nahi Vivek?

Vivek : Of course Dad! Ragini! You do know how much I love you right? Unn baato ko tum soch rahi ho par unn baato ko kese bhul gayi Ragini? Jab humne saath saath jo time spend kiya, saath saath kayi jagah ghumne gaye, kitne sweet moments humne bitaaye... Yaad karo. Kya tum meri bas ek galti ke chalte hamaara saara ateet bhula dogi? Sab kuch?

Vivek ki baat sunn Ragini ki bauhe sikudi aur pal bhar ke liye usse apne ateet ke khush-haal pal yaad aane lage. Waqai! Usne apne dil se Vivek ko chaaha tha. 2 saal se wo dono relationship me the aur uske baad hi unhone shadi kari. Lagbhag teen saal ho chuke the unhe.

Par firse...

Ragini ko jese agle hi pal wo scene yaad aa gaya. Wo scene jidhar wo bandhi hui thi, aur uska pati Vivek, khud ki jaan ki bheenk maang, apni patni ki jaan daav pe laga raha tha.

Aur ye sochte hi Ragini ka paara fir chadh gaya.

Ragini : Mere dil pe jo ghaaat pohuchi hai. Wo tum nahi samjhoge Vivek kabhi. Kabhi nahi!

Vivek : R-Ragini!?

Ragini : Yadi... Yadi uss waqt uss aadmi ne mere sarr par revolver rakh ke yahi sawaal pucha hota toh pata hai mera jawaab kya hota? Mera jawaab hota... Ki meri jaan lelo... Par mere suhaag ko kuch na hone paaye... Mujhe laga tha ki tum bhi mujhse utna hi pyaar karte ho Vivek... Par dekho... Dekho! Mein kitni galat thi. Dekho... *Sniff*

Aur Ragini ke aasuo ka baandh toot gaya.
Wo rone lagi.

Tabhi usse kandhe pe apne kisi ka haath mehsoos hua. Jese hi usne apna sarr utha ke dekha toh paaya ki...

Veer usse dekh uske kandhe par haath rakhe hue tha. Aur na jaane kyu, aaj Veer ko apni taraf se pehli baar pahal karte dekh Ragini ka mann andar se hi behad prafullit ho utha. Wo apna haath badhaa ke Veer ka haath thaamti aur uski bhavnao ko samajhti par...

Saamne uske saas sasur aur uska pati maujood tha. Wo chaah kar bhi... Ye na kar saki.

Idhar Veer ke iss chote se gesture ne jese baaki sab ko hila ke rakh diya. Karunesh aur Sumitra toh the hi hairaan par Vivek aankhe faade Veer ke haath ko dekh raha tha jo iss waqt uski patni ke kandho par maujood tha.

Aur uski aankhein fati ki fati reh gayi thi.

Aur jo usse nahi karna chaahiye tha wo akhir usne kar hi diya.

Vivek : Tum yaha kya kar rahe ho Veer? Akele? Apni Bhabhi ke saath?

Uska sawaal sunte hi agle hi pal Ragini ki aankhein hairaani ke maare fel gayi. Par fir achanak hi uske chehre par ek muskaan aa gayi.

'Mujhe toh samajh jaana chaahiye tha. Tum se akhir yahi ghatiya soch ki umeed thi mujhe Vivek. Mene tumhe kya socha tha aur tum kya nikle. Par... Dosh toh mera hi hai na? Jo mein aise vyakti se pyaar kar baithi? But Thanks to that incident. Akhir meri aankhein toh khul gayi.'

Wo sochte hue ekdum asahaay sii chintan me doob gayi.

Idhar Sumitra apne bete ki baat samjhte hue usse chillaane hi waali thi ki tabhi Veer bol pada.

Veer : Kya kar raha hu matlab? Mein Bhabhi ke saath hi yahi rehta hu.

Vivek : Kyyyyaaaaaa!????

Vivek shock ke maare apni jagah se uth gaya aur unhe ghoorne laga.

Veer : What? Uss ghar se toh mujhe wese hi nikaal diya gaya hai. Uske baad mein apni Ma'am ke saath reh raha tha unke ghar. But mein nahi chaahta tha ki unhe aur pareshaani hoye so I left. Finally, Bhabhi ne mujhe yaha rukne ko keh diya. So, I'm here now. Any problem with that?

Vivek keval daant meesta reh gaya par kuch derr tak bol na paaya. Apni patni ko akele apne chote bhai ke saath dekh, khaas kar uss chote bhai ke saath jis se wo behad nafrat karta aaya hai. Mirchi toh lagni thi. Gussa bhi jayaz tha. Par ek shaq bhi paida ho chuka tha. Wo shaq jo kabhi nahi hona chaahiye tha. Wo shaq jo ghatiya soch ka ek prateek tha.

Aur wo kehte hai na, Gusse me aadmi apna aapa kho baithata hai.

Wahi hua.

Vivek (uchi awaaz me) : Raaaginiiii???? Ye sab kya hai??? Tumhe pata bhi hai tum kya keh rahi ho? Aas paas ke log kya sochenge yadi unhe pata lagega ki ek aurat apna ghar aur pati ko chorr ke yaha akele apne dewar ke saath reh rahi hai? Bolo?? Koi sense hai tum me ya nahi??

Vivek ke teekhe bol poore hall me goonj rahe the . Par Ragini jese helpless ho chuki thi poori tarah. Wo muskuraayi aur fir ek niraasha aur aasha-heen chintan me doob gayi,

'Shayad sach hi kaha gaya hai. Ki insaan apna asli roop tab hi dikhaata hai jab maut uske saamne khadi ho. Vivek! Tumne bhi dikhaaya tha. Aur ab toh tumhaare aur naye naye rang mujhe dekhne ko mil rahe hai. Kitni dukhad gaatha hai na meri? Ya fir yahi sahi tha? Hmm! Veer ke saath bhi toh mene galat kiya tha na? Ye unhi karmo ka fal hai. Uparwaale ki aankho se koi apraadh nahi bachta.'

Wo gusse se Ragini ko dekh raha tha aur jawaab ki maang kar raha tha par bechaari Ragini apne gham me hi doobi hui thi.

Sumitra : Viveeeeekkkkk!

Sumitra ne yaha chillaaya par wo aage kuch keh paati ki tabhi sabhi ke kaano me ek awaaz padi,

"Kisne kaha ki wo yaha akeli apne dewar ke saath reh rahi hai?"

Aur tabhi sab ki nazre upar ki orr gayi toh dekha ki...

Suman, Aabha, aur Sonali teeno stairs se neeche utar unki hi taraf aa rahi thi. Aur wo awaaz bhi Suman ki hi thi.

Wo aise chal ke aa rahi thi jese maano iss ghar ki hi mukhiya ho. Uske chalne ka dhang, uska pehnaava, bol chaal me wo wazan ne jese waha maujood sabhi logo ko shaant rehne ke liye majboor kar diya.

Suman : Aapki himmat kese hui apni patni par itna ghatiya laanchan lagaane ki? Kya itna hi bharosa hai aapko uspe? Upar se apne hi chote bhai ke saamne? Kya aap me koi sense hai?

Vivek (jhepte hue) : K-Kaun ho aap?

Suman : Mein Kaun hu? Itna bhi nahi pata aapko? Ki kisi se naam puchne se pehle apna khud ka parichay dena chahiye. Kherr! Mein Suman hu. Ragini ki sakha. Uske bachpan ki dost. Aur yaha uske ghar rehne aayi hu kyuki usse iss dukhad waqt me meri zaroorat thi. Ye dono meri betiya hai. Ab boliye! Kese aapne bina jaache parkhe ye ghatiya sawaal uthaaya? Aur aap dono? Kese sanskaar diye hai apne bete ko? Kya aise le jaane aaye hai apni bahu ko? Le jaane aaye hai ya uske charitra par keechad uchaalne aaye hai? Boliye!!!!

Suman ke hamlo ne jese teeno Sumitra, Vivek aur Karunesh ko aise ghaayal kar diya tha ki ab wo apna muh kholne ke laayak nahi bache the.

Suman : Arre yadi kapdo ki qadr karo toh kapde bhi aapki qadr karte hai. Fir yaha toh ye aapki bahu hai. Ghar ki Lakshmi. Aapki himmat kese hui uss Lakshmi ka apmaan karne ki? Kuch hi dino me Diwali ka tyohaar hai. Jisme Lakshmi ko poojte hai hum. Aasha karti hu tab tak aap apni iss Lakshmi ko apne ghar poori izzat ke saath apni galtiyo ka paschataap karte hue yaha se le jaenge. Par filhaal ke liye... Jaiye yaha se. Meri dost ko jab aapse milna hoga. Wo aapko khud bulaegi ya milne aa jaegi. Aur tab... Mein beech me nahi aaungi. Ab jaiye! Aur meri dost ko akela chorr dijiye.

Suman iss waqt waha khadi aisi prateet ho rahi thi jese maano ek lecture room me scholar khada ho. Sharmindagi ka aisa aayina dikhaaya usne unn teeno ko ki teeno ko hi waha se bina kuch bole hi forun nikalna pad gaya.

Unke jaate hi jese hi Suman ne palat ke dekha toh paaya Ragini rote hue usse dhanyavaad de rahi thi. Wahi jab usne apne maalik ko dekha toh pata chala unka muh hairat ke maare khula hua tha. Aur ye dekh wo mann hi mann muskuraayi.

'Fufu~ Maalik dang reh gaye. Par unhe ab pata lag gaya hoga ki... Unki musibate meri musibate hai. Aur harr waqt harr mod pe mein unki madad karungi.'

Idhar Veer hakka bakka sa Suman ko ghoor raha tha.

'Daaamnnnnn! What the fuck just happened? I think I know ki kyu tumne Suman ko diamond kaha tha Pari. Damn! She's a fucking Leader. She handled that situation without even knowing the actual truth. Was she listening to us the whole time?'

[Haha~ Didn't I told ya?]

Suman : Maaf kijiyega Ragini jii. Mujhe aapka naam lena pada.

Ragini : H-Huh? N-Nahiii! *Sniff* Aap mujhse badi ho toh... *Sniff* Aap mujhe naam se bula sakti ho.

Suman muskuraayi par kuch na boli. Ab kyuki ye samasya filhal ke liye tal chuki thi toh Veer utha aur Ragini ko samjha ke baahar ki orr jaane laga toh Suman usse baahar tak chorrne aayi.

Suman : Maalik? Aap kidhar jaa rahe hai?

Veer : Kuch zaroori kaam hai Suman! Aur madad ke liye shukriya. Yadi tum na hoti toh pata nahi ye maamla kese nipatata.

Suman (smiles) : Kyu na hoti mein? Ab se... Harr jagah aapke saath hi rehna hai mujhe.

Kehte hue wo qareeb aayi toh iss baar Veer ne bina kisi jhijak ke haule se uske narm narm rass bhare honth choom liye.

Veer : Aata hu. Bhabhi ka dhyaan rakhna.

Suman : Hmm! Aap befiqr rahiye maalik.

Aur Veer waha se nikal gaya.

***

Uska mission akhir poora jo nahi hua tha. Mission tha~ Chase down the unknown guy and bring back the diamond ring.

Ab usne chase down toh kar liya tha par ring waapas bhi karni thi.

Sonia ko call kar usne unke ghar ka address le liya tha. Aur wo wahi ki orr jaa raha tha.

Par raaste me hi usne Pari se uss Alpha trait function ke baare me jaankaari lii.

'What is this Alpha Trait function Pari? Vistaar me samjhao. Tumne kaha tha ki baad me tum samjhaogi.'

[Yes! Master! It's exactly as it sounds. Yaani ki... Ab aap submissive Beta male nahi rahoge. You will become an Alpha male now. Ek aisa male jisse jhukna aata hi nahi. Jidhar bhi jaaye hamesha top pe rahe. Jis bhi hierarchy me ho, hamesha king rahe uska. That is what Alpha male is.]

'Par uss raat wo sab kya tha? Meri body heat up hona and suddenly mera emotional state se ekdum lustful state me chale jaana?'

[It's because of Alpha Trait function Master. Alpha Males, jesa ki mene kaha Submissive nahi hote. Wo jaan de denge ladte ladte par dusre ke saamne jhukenge nahi kabhi. Uss raat aap emotional state me the and Suman ka aapko wese chhuna aur aapko uttejit karna... Uss chakkar me Alpha Trait function trigger ho gaya. Aur ab ye hamesha active rahega.]

'Wh-Whaaatt??'

[Yes! Actually, Master! Levels badhne pe system ka in-built function bhi unlock hota hai. Uss Jatin ko pakadte time waha gaav me aapne yaad hai System ka Path Tracking function use kiya tha?]

'Ab jab tumne uska zikr kiya hai then yeah, I do remember that. Ussi ki wajah se mein Suman ke ghar tak waapas laut paaya tha.'

[Yes! Master! Wo function tab unlock hua tha jab mein level 2 par pohuchi thi.]

'Wait! Wtf? Mujhe notification kyu nahi mila tha fir?'

[Because aapne in-built functions ke notifications band kar ke rakhe hai.]

'The fucccckkk!? Then turn them on now.'

[Okay!]

*Ding*

[Notifications for In-built functions have been turned on.]

'Good!'

[Haan! Toh jesa ki mein bata rahi thi. Ye Alpha Trait function bhi level 3 par unlock ho gaya tha but trigger nahi hua tha. Trigger hone ke liye aapka emotional state me hona zaroori tha. And then Suman ka attraction hua... So you know...]

'Hmm! I see!'

[Aapko thoda control me rehna padega. It's serious. Shuruaati daur me thodi dikkate aaengi.]

'Wh-What do you mean?'

[What I'm trying to say is... Ki aapko gussa jaldi aaega, aapko apni pride sabse zyaada pyaari rahegi ab, ladkiya mahilaaye, aurte ab aapko kahi zyaada aakarshak lagengi, bhook zyaada lagegi aapko, aap fitness ke peeche bhi bhaagoge, materialistic cheezo ke liye bhi, so... You will have to control yourself.]

'T-This... This is too serious.'

[Hmm! Right! So? Do you want to invest points? 65 points available hai.]

'Hmm! Skill list se Basic Martial Arts Skill purchase karo.'

[Are you sure?]

'Hmm! Aur baaki ke 15 points... Add them to my Endurance.'

[O-Okay!]

*Ding*

[Basic Martial Arts Skill is available now.]

[15 Points have been added to Endurance.]

'So? Ab use kese karni hai ye skill? Turn on karni hai?'

[No master! Ye already turned on rehti hai. You just have to fight now. Martial Arts moves apne aap baahar aaenge. The more you fight the more you will learn and more better you will get. Uske baad aap moderate level martial arts skill buy kar sakte ho.]

'Got it! Next time yadi wo mila... Ranga!!! I'm gonna beat the shit outta him.'

[Also...]

'Hmmm?'

[You were sad last night. Kyuki aap apni Mom ki train ka naam nahi padh paaye the. And aapko laga ki ab aap na jaane fir kabhi mil paoge ya nahi. So don't worry! Aapne bhale hi read na kiya ho but I read it. Train ka naam xxxxxxxxxxxxx hai. Ab aapko sirf unn stations par dhyaan dena hai jaha wo train rukti hai. Unhi kisi stations par aapki Mom utri hogi.]

Pari ki baat sunte hi Veer ki kal raat se jo bechaini bhari hui thi wo jese ek jhatke me usne gaayab kar dii.

'Th-Thank you Pari... I... I don't even... I don't even have words to say right now... Thank you! Thank you! It... It means a lot to me Pari!! I...'

[It's okay Master! I'm here!]

***

Veer finally pohuch chuka tha Suhana ke ghar, entry usse asaani se mil gayi thi kyuki iss baar Sonia ne bol ke rakha tha ki uska khaas guest aa raha hai.

Bangle ke andar aate hi Veer ko alag hi nazaara dekhne ko mila. Ek aisa nazaara jisse uski apne sapno me bhi umeed nahi thi.

Suhana light se kapdo me thi par ye kya??

Wo ro rahi thi...

Ro toh rahi thi beshaq par...!??

Wo ek bade se teddy ko jakde huye thi aur uspe ghuso ki barsaat kar rahi thi aur badbadaaye jaa rahi thi.

"Fuck you chor.... Marr jaa tu... Tere muh me keede pade... *Sniff* Dad ne itna daanta mujhe ughhhuuuu...."

*Slaaaaammmm*

*Baaaangggg*

*Dhhhiiiiiiiiiisshooommmm"

Laato se lekar ghuso tak harr ek vaar kar wo bechaare teddy ka kachumar banaaye jaa rahi thi.

Aur idhar Veer ki haalat ye scene dekh ke hi patli ho chuki thi. Kyuki achanak Suhana zorr zorr se bistar par khade hoke haivaano type hassne lagi.

"Buwaahahahahahaha~ Tu mil bas jaa saale chor dekhna... Jisne bhi ring churaayi hai na... Dekhna... I swear... Dekhna... Kya haal karti hu mein tunhaara... Aise gardan ko marod ke na chatka dungi... I... I will kill you... Hahahahahaha~"

'Wh-What the hell? Fuccccckkkk! Is she possessed or what?'

*Baaaaaaangggg*

*Slaaaaaaaaammm*

'Fuuucckkk! This girl is married? Who the fuck married this crazy woman? Rip her husband...'

[Also that Teddy. ]

Par tabhi Veer ka dhyaan Suhana ke bol par gaya, 'Tu mil bas jaa saale chor dekhna... Jisne bhi ring churaayi hai na... Dekhna... I swear... Dekhna... Kya haal karti hu mein tunhaara... Aise gardan ko marod ke na chatka dungi... I... I will kill you... Hahahahahaha~'

Aur ye abhaas hote hi ki uske haantho me abhi wahi ring hai, uske paseene chootne lage. Usne apna thook nigla...

[Rip you too. ]

'Shiiiiittttt!!!'

Aur wo palatne ke liye hua hi tha kyuki usne socha jab Suhana normal hogi tab aana hi behtar hoga....

Par...

Par iss se pehle ki wo mud paata...

*Woof woof*

Side me dur bandha ek labrador usse bade chaav se dekh jeebh nikaal apni pooch matkaate hue bhaunk diya.

'Ohhhhh Fuucccckkkkk!!!'

Aur tabhi...

"E-Ehhhh!?" Suhana palti...

Veer ne usse dekha aur usne Veer ko...

Dono ki hi aankhein hairaani ke maare felti chali gayi. Khaas kar Suhana ki...

Uska haath se teddy chooth ke bed par gir gaya...

*Gulp*

***

Ek alag sii khandar sii jagah me iss waqt ek aadmi table par apne dono perr rakhe, apne haath baandhe ek chair par baitha hua tha. Uska chehra ek hat se dhaka hua tha.

Hat...

Yaani aas paas khade log jaante the ki ye kaun tha. Unka boss. Bole toh Bhau... Aatish Bhau!

Par ye khandar ka adda toh Ranga ka tha. Fir achanak Aatish Bhau khud kyu aa gaye? Aur upar se Ranga ki kursi par baithe the. Kherr! Aatish Ranga ka bhi boss tha toh ye zyaada surprising baat nahi thi.

Par dikkat ye thi ki...

Iss waqt unke Aatish Bhau bade hi kharaab mood me lag rahe the.

Bhala aisa kya ho gaya tha jiske chalte Aatish Bhau aaj itne gusse me the?

Koi kuch nahi bol paa raha tha. Unhe darr tha, ki ek awaaz karne par kahi... Kahi unki gardan hi na udd jaaye.

Tabhi unhe kisi ke kadmo ki awaaz aayi,

"Ayye Pintu... Jaa zara Chai ka bol ke aa re bagal waale Dada ke yaha."

Kehte hue Ranga apne adde me enter hua. Par uske kadam wahi tham gaye jab usne apne Bhau ko apni kursi par dekha...

Ranga : Bh-Bhau!? Aap? I-Idhar?

Aatish : Aao Ranga... Tumhara hi intezaar tha.

Apne Bhau ka aaj vyavhaar dekh Ranga ke paseene chooth rahe the.

Ranga : Kya hua Bhau? A-Aap achanak aaj yaha?

Tabhi Aatish ne apne chehre se hat hataayi aur Ranga ko dekha.

Khade hote hue wo uske paas aaya aur uske ird gird ghoomne laga.

Aatish : Tumhe pata hai kya hua hai?

Ranga : K-Kya hua hai Bhau?

Aatish : Wo ring! Kya hua uska? Kuch pata hai?

Ranga : Bhau... Jatin! Jatin leke gaya tha. Aur wo bataaya tha ki... Ki usne dealer ke aadmi se milne jaana tha.

Aatish : Hmm! Aur?

Ranga : Aur?? Tab se... Tab se uski koi jaankaari nahi aayi hai Bhau.

Aatish : Ohh! Toh tumne ye jaan'ne ki koshish nahi kari?

Ranga : Bhau! Mene usse kayi baar call kiya par wo utha hi nahi raha hai.

Aatish ne tabhi apna phone khola aur usme ek photo dikhaayi...

Photo me ek ladka tha... Jo ki train me maujood tha.

Aur uss ladke ko dekhte hi Ranga ki aankhein chaudi ho gayi.

Ranga : Ye... Ye toh wahi hai... Wo jo... Wo jo uss raat uss Ragini aur parivaar ko bacha ke le gaya tha. Veeeerrrr!!!!

Aatish (smiles) : Ohh! Right! Bilkul sahi.

Ranga : Par ye...

Aatish (smiles) : Ye image mujhe Jatin ne hi bheji thi. Ye bataate hue ki ye ladka uska peecha kar raha tha. Saath hi saath kal hi mujhe phone aaya tha ki ye Veer uss se Ring churra ke le gaya hai. Tum iska matlab samajh rahe ho na!?

Ranga (ghabraate hue) N-Nahi! Aisa...

Aatish tabhi uske kaan ke paas jhuka aur dheere se bola...

"Uss raat bhi wahi tha. Jo tumhe chakma deke unhe bhaga ke le gaya tha. Aur ek baat aur batau?"

Ranga : H-Huh?

Aatish : Club se uss ladki ko uss raat bhi wahi bhaga ke le gaya tha.

Maano ek bomb sa foda tha Aatish ne usse ye bata kar.

Ranga : Ye... Ye...

Aatish : Teen galtiya. Tumhari taraf se. Jaante ho na? Teen galtiyo ki saja?

Ranga : *Gulps* Bhau! Bhau... Suniye...

Aatish bina kuch kahe apna mouth organ jeb se nikaal bajaata hua table ke paas gaya.

Uske mouth organ ki dhwani waha maujood sabhi logo ke raungte khade kar rahi thi.

Ranga : B-Bhau... Maaf kar dijiye... Aage se... Aage se aisa...

Iske pehle ki wo bol paata...

*Baaaaangggggg*

Achanak hi goli chalne ki awaaz aayi aur...

*Thud*

Ek shareer neeche zameen par gir gaya.

Ranga ke sarr ko cheerte hue goli andar ghusi aur uska ek hi baar me kaam tamaam kar dii.

Chehre pe ghabraahat liye hi marr gaya wo. Waha maujood sabhi logo ke badan sihar uthe. Pant me mootne jesi haalat ho chuki thi. Kyuki unke bhau ne apne khaas aadmi ko udaaya tha, Ranga!

"Jalsa me taiyaariya karo. Iss chuhe ko ab mein wo sabak sikhaunga ki ye vinti karega ki kaash ye paida hi na hua hota."

Aur itna keh ke Aatish waha se chala gaya.

Kya kaha tha usne? Ja-Jalsa? Jalsa me? Waha maujood logo ne jese hi ye suna unki aankhein fati ki fati reh gayi.

Jalsa unke Aatish Bhau ki pasandeeda building ka naam tha. Aur uss se juda ithaas ko yaad kar ke hi unke raungte khade ho jaate the.
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Update - 33 ~ The Festive Night
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Ab tak...

"Jalsa me taiyaariya karo. Iss chuhe ko ab mein wo sabak sikhaunga ki ye vinti karega ki kaash ye paida hi na hua hota."

Aur itna keh ke Aatish waha se chala gaya.

Kya kaha tha usne? Ja-Jalsa? Jalsa me? Waha maujood logo ne jese hi ye suna unki aankhein fati ki fati reh gayi.

Jalsa unke Aatish Bhau ki pasandeeda building ka naam tha. Aur uss se juda ithaas ko yaad kar ke hi unke raungte khade ho jaate the.

Ab aage...

Ek bade se bangle me ek bade se kamre me iss waqt ghanghor sannaata chhaaya hua tha.

Aur do shaks iss samay ek dusre ko hairaani se ghur rahe the.

Ye aur koi nahi, Veer aur Suhana hi the.

Suhana bhauchakki sii saamne ekdum se andar aaye Veer ko dekhe jaa rahi thi. Toh wahi Veer iss waqt iss soch me dooba hua tha ki ab aage kya hone waala hai?

Aur tabhi...

*Woof Woof*

Ek baar fir...

Side me bandhe uss labrador ki awaaz se dono ko jese hosh aaya aur agle hi pal...

"Aaaahhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!" Suhana zorr se chillaayi aur...

*Whooooooossshhh*

Ek takiya high speed me Veer ki khopdi ki orr udd ke aaya par reflex ke chalte usne forun hi apne sarr ko side me kar liya. Takiya uske kaano ke bagal se nikla aur...

*Bam*

Peeche bade se darwaaze me jaake bhid ke neeche gir gaya.

'Wtf??? Why is she hitting me? Fucccckkkk! Mujhe nikalna chaahiye yaha se.'

Veer : Ahahaha! I guess... wrong room!

Wo palatne ke liye hua par tabhi peeche se Suhana chillaa padi.

Suhana : Y-Youuuu... Youuu! C-Come... Back... Come back here... Come back...

Na chaahte hue bhi usse mudna hi pada.

Suhana ka chehra poora laal hua jaa raha tha. Wo aisi prateet ho rahi thi jese maano abhi qatl kar degi Veer ka.

'Wait! She... Fuccckkk! She seems pissed. Waqai! Wo waqai boht gusse me lag rahi hai.'

"... see it!?"

Veer ke kaano me kuch shabd pade. Par wo itni dheemi awaaz me bole gaye the ki usko ghanta kuch sunaayi diya.

Veer : Huh!??

Suhana (murmurs) : Y-You... Did you see it?

Veer : Huh? W-What??

Suhana : Youuuuuuuuu!!!! Don't make me repeat. Mene pucha... Did you see that? K-Kya tumne wo sab dekha? And don't you dare lie to me. Ni toh... Ni toh... Mein Cooper ko tumhaare peeche chorr dungi...

Veer : Cooper?

Suhana ne ishaara karte hue side me bandhe labrador ki orr apni nazre kari. Uska kehna tha, ki sach batao, warna wo apne doggy, Cooper ko uski gaand ke peeche laga degi.

'Wtf? That dog won't bite me right? Haha~ I mean C'mon it's a labrador. Look it's so cute...'

*Wooooooooooofffff*

'Fuccccckkkkk!!!'

[Haha]

Suhana : B-Bolo jaldi...

Veer (sighs) : I... Yeah! Mene dekha. And sorry... Aise ekdum se andar aane ke liye.

Ant me usne sach kehna hi sahi samjha. After all, he did saw it though. Ab wo jhoot nahi keh sakta tha.

Par jese hi usne ye baat kubool kii...

Agle hi pal Suhana ka chehra itna laal pad gaya aur wo teddy ko utha ke apni goad me rakh uske peeche chhup gayi.

"Ughhhuuuuu..."

'Huh??? The fuck? Is she crying?'

Apne kadam usne dheere dheere Suhana ki taraf badhaaye aur haule se usne teddy ke kaan pakad usse hataya taaki wo uska chehra dekh sake.

Aur waqai...

'Abeee... Ye... Ye toh ro rahi hai.'

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'Don't laugh Pari! Fuckkk!'

Veer : Umm...

Veer ki aahat paate hi Suhana ne usse aisi aankhein dikhaayi jese ek billi dikhaati hai jab koi uske baccho ke nazdeek jata hai toh.

Par...

Wo apni gulaabi gaal fulaaye, aankho me aasu liye iss waqt.
Daraavni kam... Aur cute zyaada lag rahi thi.

'Wait! Haha~ Shit! She's actually cute... Huh? Ye mein kya sochne laga? No way! Ye aurat kahi se cute nahi ho sakti.'

Wo sochna toh yahi chaahta tha par...

Suhana apne teddy ko kheench ke apna muh jese chhipaane ki koshish kar rahi thi usse dekh ke Veer ke vichaar dagmagaane lage.

'Fucccck! She's cute... I agree!'

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'Mene tumhe hassne ke liye mana kiya hai. Pari!!! Damn!!'

[Master! Looks like Suhana has that split personality]

'Huh? Split personality?'

[Yes! Like... Kuch log aise hote hai jinki split personality hoti hai. Like... Wo ek personality ko sabke saamne dikhaate hai. Log sochte hai ki yahi unka vyaktitv hai. Par... Ek personality unki aur hoti hai jisse wo dabaaye rakhte hai. Jinhe wo kabhi kisi aur ke saamne nahi aane dete. Kyuki wo personality wo kabhi bhi dikhaana pasand nahi karte. Unhe darr rehta hai ki... Uske chalte na jaane log kese react karenge. Aur Suhana shayad unme se ek hai. She has a split personality disorder. In fact, ye personality aur dusri personality ka mixture hi asli Suhana hai.]

'Damnnn!'

[Yeah! Toh ab tak jo aap ne uska behaviour dekha hai. Wo poori tarah se Suhana nahi thi. Aadhi Suhana ki personality ye hai. Timid, shy and cutesy type.]

'Well... I hate to agree but she does have a cute side.'

Pari usse aur samjhaati par tabhi Veer ko Suhana ki ekdum maddham sii awaaz sunaayi dii.

Suhana : Y-You... You won't tell anyone right?

Veer : I... I won't.

Suhana (surprised) : Huh? Really?

Veer (nods) : Y-Yeah!!

Aur agle hi pal Veer ko jese ek jhatka sa laga. Kyuki next second hi, Suhana ne itni pyaari muskaan dii ki Veer ka khud ka muh khula ka khula reh gaya.

Par jese ye muskaan bas kuch seconds ki hi mehmaan thi.

Suhana : Huh? Wait! Tum yaha kar rahe ho? Aur andar kese aaye?

Veer ne bina kuch kahe hi ring ka box khol ke uske aage kar diya.

Aur Suhana ki aankhein hairat ke maare felti chali gayi aur muh khula ka khula reh gaya.

Ye ring? Ye diamond ring? Ye toh wahi ring thi. Uske Mom ka b'day present jo uske Dad dene waale the par kuch din pehle hi uski galti ke chalte wo chori ho chuki thi. Par...

Par iss waqt wahi anguthi uske saamne thi.

"T-This... Ye toh wahi..."

Usne hadbadaate hue Veer se wo ring churraayi aur usse gaur se alag alag angle se dekhne lagi.

Waqai! No doubt ye wahi ring thi.

Suhana : Ye...!? Wait! Ye tumhaare paas!? Kahi tumne...!?

Iske pehle wo bolti Veer ne uske hontho pe apna haath rakh usse chup kara diya.

Suhana (surprised) : Mmphh?

Veer : Bhool ke bhi ilzaam mat lagaana mujh pe. Fuck! I almost died... Boht mehnat se isse chor se chhina ke laaya hu. Take it now.

Suhana : Huh? Wait! What? Tum... Tum isse chor se chhina ke laaye? Kaun hai chor? Tell me... And tumhe kese pata? Kaha hai wo? Ye sab hua kese?

Veer ne ek aah bhari. Wo jaanta tha Suhana aise nahi maan ne waali. Toh usne sab kuch usse bataana shuru kiya, Pari ka secret chorr ke.

Usne apni kahani ko ghumaate hue bataaya ki kese usne chor ko hotel se bhaagte hue dekha tha jab wo khud hotel se baahar nikla tha. Kese usne Jatin ka peecha kiya, kese wo uss gaanv me pohucha peecha karte karte aur kese usne Jatin ko dabocha aur ring waapas lii.

Suhana Veer ke muh se baat sunte sunte ajeebo gareeb expressions de rahi thi. Kahi wo chaunkti toh kahi wo tension me aa jaati, kahi wo raahat ki saas leti toh kahi daato tale apna angutha daba leti.

Jab Veer ne saari vardaat ka varnan kiya toh ant me Suhana ne finally ek raahat ki saas lii aur ring ke box ko zorr se bheench liya.

Halaki abhi bhi usse yakeen nahi ho raha tha Veer ki baat par. Lekin usse iss baat se zyaada khushi thi ki uske paas ring waapas aa chuki thi. Toh usne zyaada sawaal jawaab nahi kiye.

Veer : T-Toh mera kaam ho gaya. Chalta hu.

Suhana : W-Waiiiittt!!

Veer : Hmm?

Suhana : Wo... I'll remember this. So... Tell me? W-What do you want?

Veer : *frowns*

Suhana : Nahi! Mera matlab hai ki... Tum ye waapas laaye so... Haa! Wait!!!

Achanak hi wo daud ke gayi aur apne purse se na jaane kya par kuch nikaal ke laayi.

Aur Usne Veer ka haath thaam uske haath me kuch pakda diya.

Veer ne dekha toh...

Debit card!

Ek debit card tha jo Suhana ne uske haatho me usse pakdaaya. Usne surprised hote hue Suhana ko dekha toh iss baar wo fir halka sa muh fulaate hue boli.

"Wo... Wo... Ye tum ring waapas laaye uske liye. Don't think ki mein tumhe rishvat de rahi hu. It's.. It's not like that at all. Okay? It's a payment for your hardwork. Iska password hai xxxxxx, Also, mene tumhe uss din wo sab kaha uske liye s-sorry... Sonu mujh se behad naraaz thi isliye... I'll... I'll forgive you... Nooo! I mean... Aaarghh! Just take this. Aur ab sawaal jawaab mat karna."

[Take it master. After all, ye aapka hard earned money hai.]

Veer : Meri ek baat samajh me nahi aayi.

Suhana : Huh!??

Veer : Jab aap itne hi paise waale ho toh iss ring ke peeche itna kyu rona? I mean ek do crore toh aapke liye haatho ka mel hoga... So...

Suhana : Idiot! It's not about money... Paisa toh itna hai ki...

Veer : ....

Suhana : Ugh! I-I mean... Yes! Paisa hai. Yadi Dad chaahte toh uss din hi koi dusri ring de dete Mom ko.

Veer : Then??

Suhana : Actually... Baat gift ki hai. Baat hai samay ki. Last year Mom Dad ke saath tour pe gayi thi foreign toh waha unhe ek party ke dauran kisi lady ki ring pasand aa gayi thi. Fir uss lady ne bataaya tha ek behad hi mashoor shop ka naam. Iss saal Dad ussi shop se Mom ke liye ek acchi sii ring unhe dena chaahte the. But dikkat ye rehti hai ki... Diamonds me cuts lagaaye jaate hai. Good cut, very good cut, brilliant cut aise... Jisme samay lagta hai. Uske baad wo export hote hai then yaha aate hai. So it takes time...

Veer : Ohh!

Suhana : Yeah!! And Dad ne thaan liya tha ki wo wahi ki ring iss baar wo Mom ko denge. Aur unhone brilliant cut lagwaane ke liye kaha tha. Saath hi mein shape rounded rakhne ke liye. Toh it takes time... Yahi kaaran hai ki wo itna udaas ho gaye the mujhse. And now that the ring is here... Unki naraazgi ab dur ho jaegi. So... So... Thanks to you.

Veer : Ohhh! W-Well! I think I will leave now...

Suhana : Waaaaaitttt!!

Veer : Hmm?

Suhana : I-I... I'll do one more favour.

Veer : Huh? No thanks!

Wo bolte hue firse palat ke jaane laga toh fir Suhana ne uska haath thaam usse roka.

Suhana : Y-Youuu! Wait! It's... Haa! Ye... Ye isliye hai ki tum mere secret ko kisi ko na batao okay? Don't you dare say it. Even... Even Sonu ko bhi nahi pata hai iss baare me... So... So you must not... Okay!?

'What the hell??'

Suhana : So... If... If you need a job or anything like that... Then I can help you.

Iss prastaav se Veer ke mann me jese kuch aaya aur wo Suhana ko ghur ke dekha.

Veer : Are you sure!?

Suhana : Huh!? Of-course! I-I am sure. Bolo!? Job chahiye!? Mere husband IT company C.E.O hai. You just need to give interview aur bas. Interview bhi formality ke liye hi hoga yadi mein unse keh du ki tumhaari job lagwaani hai.

Veer : Mujhe toh nahi but...

Suhana : Hmm??

Veer (smiles) : Kisi ko chahiye hai... I'll call you later. Thanks for the reward. And ho sake toh Police ke beech mera naam mat aane dena.

Aur itna bol wo baahar nikal gaya.

Suhana stabdh nigaaho se keval usse jaata hua dekhti rahi. Baad me usse jese dhyaan aaya ki Veer ne call karne ke liye kaha par number toh liya hi nahi. Aur ye soch wo fir se usse bad-badaane lagi.

'He's still an idiot. Hmph! I-I will forgive him this time. Aur police... Toh wo nahi chaahta ki mein uska naam aane du? Well wo student hai toh I can guess. Hmph! I will help you this last time only...'

"Sonuuuuu!" Aur wo fudakti hui andar chali gayi jaha uski behan Sonia iss waqt bathroom me naha rahi thi.

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Veer udhar se raaste me ghar ki orr laut raha tha aur jis cheez ka usse intezaar tha wo finally ghatit hui...

*Ding*

['Mission ~ Chase down the unknown guy and bring back the diamond ring' has been completed.]

*Ding*

[50 points have been rewarded.]

[Lifetime favour from Suhana has been achieved.]

*Ding*

[System has reached Level - 4]

[In-built function 'Check II' has been unlocked.
Description : You can now check the objects.]

'Dammmmnnn! Pari!? That's fucking amazing. Wait! Mein ab objects check kar sakta hu? Yaani kisi bhi cheez ko? Huh??'

Wo Pari se jaan'ne ke liye utaawla ho raha tha par tabhi...

[Maaaaaaaaasttttteeerrrrrrrrr!!!!]

'Huh? W-What? Kya hua?'

[Ehehehehe~]

'???'

[Ehehehehehe~]

'The fuck!? Pari? Aise befaaltu kyu khil khila rahi ho? You gone insane or what? Mujhe batao ki ye Check -II kya hai? Iska matlab hai ki mein ab koi bhi objects check kar sakta hu?'

[Yesssss! Maaaasttterrrr! Ab aap kisi bhi object ko check kar sakte ho and unka description jaan sakte ho.]

'Wow!!! This will be useful!'

Wo raaste me apni gaadi chalaaye jaa raha tha aur aaj behad khush tha. Sab kuch sahi dhang se hua. Ring bhi waapas mil gayi thi. Mission bhi complete ho gaye aur toh aur Suhana se favour bhi mil gaya tha.

Abhi wo jaa hi raha tha ki tabhi uski nazar road ke hi side me ek bade se mandir par gayi. Ye sheher ke kaafi prasiddh mandiro me se ek tha. Par iss waqt uski nazro ne mandir ke liye apna rukh nahi badla tha.

Kaaran tha...

Uss mandir me andar jaati hui...

Ek aurat!

Ek behad hi parichit aurat. Wo aurat jo uske jeevan me ek aas waapas leke aayi thi jab usne sab kuch chorr diya tha. Wo aurat jisne uski dekh bhaal tab kii thi jab uske apno ne usse ghar se baahar nikaal diya tha. Wahi aurat jo na keval uski teacher thi balki saath hi saath ek behad hi acchi dost bhi thi.

Aur jis se baatein karte waqt Veer ka rom rom khil uthata tha.

Uski apni...

Nidhi Ma'am...

"M-Ma'am..." Uske hontho se apne aap haule se wo shabd nikal pade. Wo dekh paa raha tha ki uski Ma'am ke saath hi saath Juhi aur Shreya bhi thi.

Wo teeno hi andar jaa rahi thi darshan ke liye. Bheed kaafi thi aur kuch palo ke andar hi Nidhi uski nazro se ojhal ho chuki thi.

Pata nahi usse kya soojha ki agle hi pal wo apni bike se utra aur mandir ke andar chal diya.

Mandir bhi chota mota nahi tha. Andar line lagaane ke liye do bhaag the. Beech me lohe ki jaali thi jo safed rang se puti hui thi. Jaali ke iss taraf Purusho ke liye alag line thi toh wahi jaali ke uss taraf mahilaao ke liye dusri line. Aur aise hi kayi baar idhar se udhar hote hue andar jaane ka raasta tha.

Veer Purusho ki line me lag chuka tha par uski nazre keval ek shaks ko dhundne me lagi hui thi. Wo nahi jaanta tha ki wo yaha kyu aaya hai par uske kadam jese apne aap chalte jaa rahe the bas.

Jese uske perr uski apni marzi se nahi chal rahe the.

Uski nazre bhagwaan ke nahi, kisi aur ke darshan ke liye jese tadap rahi thi.

Wo yu aas liye mandir ke andar aa pohucha par Nidhi kahi na nazar aayi usse.

Usne praarthna kari,

'Hey uparwaale! Wese mene kabhi tumpe utna vishwaash nahi kiya. Par Yadi tum meri pukaar sunn rahe ho, aur logo ki kaamnaaye poori karte ho. Toh... Toh... mein aaj tumse yahi maangta hu... Ki... Meri ma'am ki zindagi se kasht dur kar do. Please! Nahi chaahta mein ab unhe aur pareshani me dekhna. Aaj wo bhi aas leke aayi hai tumhaare paas. Chaahe toh unke dard mujhe de do. Mein yuhi peeth peeche unki hifaazat karta rahunga... Par unke paas nahi jaa sakta. Warna wo mujhe apne saath rakh lengi. Aur... Kahi mein koi paap na kar baithu. Wo nahi samajhti hai... Ki yadi wo mere saath itna pyaar se vyavhaar karti rahengi toh... Toh... Mein unka bann ke reh jaunga... Isliye... Jald se jald unke dukh dard dur kar do. Bas yahi kaamna hai meri.'

Veer ne praarthna kar kuch paise aarti ki thaal me chadhaaye aur aarti aur prasaad lete hue wo baahar aa gaya.

Prasaad ko khaane ke baad uski nazar fir ek baar kuch dur side me bani ek jagah par gayi jaha baithne ke liye patthar ki hi ek bench type maujood thi aur saath hi saath agarbatti ko fassane ki ek jagah thi.

Jis shaks ki usse talaash thi wo akhir kaar uski nazro me aayi.

Nidhi jhuk ke agarbatti uss jagah me khos rahi thi. Roz ki hi tarah wo behad hi khubsoorat lag rahi thi. Aur uss se kuch hi duri par Ek bench par Juhi maujood thi jo prasaad khaane me lagi hui thi. Uske bagal se kayi aur bacche bhi baithe hue the aur unke parents bhi. Shayad aaj chhutti ke chalte mandir me itni bheed thi warna roz nahi raha karti thi.

Ek baar fir...

Veer ke kadam apne aap badh gaye...

Par...

Wo chaah ke bhi jaa nahi paa raha tha.

Kyuki uske saamne wahi jaali jo maujood thi. Uss paar jaane ke liye usse peeche se jaana padta jaha jaali khatam hoti hai. Par shayad ab uske paas utna samay nahi tha.

Wo paas aaya aur apne haath rakh, unn chote chote jaali ke chaukor khando me apni ungliyaa fassaaye wo keval Nidhi se bas do teen kadmo ki duri par maujood tha. Aur usse hi nihaar raha tha.

Aur akhir kaar...

"M-Ma'am!?" Usne pukaar hi diya.

"Haaaah!?" Agle hi pal Nidhi jo jhuki hui thi wo jese ekdum se ye parichit awaaz sunn khadi ho gayi.

Wo awaaz sunte hi uska seena itni zorr se lambi saas lene ke chalte upar hua ki wo haafne lagi.

Veer ke saamne Nidhi ki peeth thi. Abhi tak Nidhi ne usse nahi dekha tha. Keval awaaz hi suni thi uski.

'V-Veer!?? N-Nahi! Wo bhala yaha kese...!?'

Usne apna veham samajh ke uss awaaz ko ignore karna chaaha par...

"Ma'am!?"

Ek baar fir...

Uss awaaz ne jese Nidhi ke raungte khade kar diye. Iss baar usse ek pal nahi laga. Wo forun hi palti aur...

Saamne khade shaks ko dekh uski aankhein felti chali gayi.

Fir bauhe sikudi aur fir...

Aankho me nami apne aap aa basi...

"Veer!!?"

Bas! Uske honth se yahi nikla. Aaj na jaane kitne dino ke baad wo usse dekh rahi thi. Uska letter padhne ke baad wo kitna royi thi keval wahi jaanti thi. Aur aaj uske rone ki wajah uske saamne maujood thi.

Akhir... Veer ke liye hi toh wo itne dino tak royi thi.

Par jese jese din guzar rahe the. Nidhi behad hi toot'ti jaa rahi thi. Usse Veer pe gussa raha tha. Na wo uska call uthaata tha, na uss se baatein karta tha, na hi uss din ke baad se mila tha. Inn sab ke chalte jese wo itni khafa ho gayi thi Veer se ki bas khari khoti sunaana chaahti thi usse...

Uske gaalo par apne aap ek geelapan sa usse mehsoos hua. Apne gaal se aasuo ko poch wo usse dekhi aur boli.

Nidhi : Kyu aaye ho ab Veer? K-Kyu? Tumhe toh accha lagta hai na? Apni ma'am ke calls nahi uthaana!? Unse baatein nahi karna? Hafto hafto tak chehra nahi dikhaana!? Aise rooth jaana!? Toh fir kyu? Veer? Ab... Ab kyi aaye ho? Apni ma'am ka mazaak udaane!? Kabhi nahi socha ki ma'am kya soch rahi hongi? Unhe kitni tension ho rahi hogi tumhare aisa karne se!? Huh?? Tum... Yu late late ghar aate the... Mein kuch na boli... Aur... Aur mene thoda sa uss din kya keh diya... Mene ek galti kya kar dii... Tum... *sniff* Tum yu naraaz hoke mujhse ghar chorr ke chale gaye??

Veer kuch na kaha...

Bas... Usne apna sarr jhuka liya. Jaali par yu sarr tikaaye wo bas chup chaap khada raha.

Nidhi : K-Kyu aaye ho ab Veer!? Ab... Ab tum apni Bhabhi ke ghar rehne lage ho. Mere chote se ghar me ab kaha tumhe wo aisho araam milega...?? Hai na!? M-Mein kaha tumhaari zaroorato ka kharcha uthaa paa rahi thi!? Akhir... Isliye... Isliye toh tum gaye na? Ab bhala kya zaroorat tumhe iss ma'am kii?? Padhaayi bhi chorr dij hai tumne ab shayad hai na? Toh bhala... Ab... Ab mera *sniff* mera matlab kya reh gaya.

Chaah ke bhi iss waqt wo kuch keh na saka. Ya yu kahe ki uske muh me shabd hi na bane.

Toh bhala kya jawaab deta!?

Nidhi itna bol dubaara palat gayi aur ab firse bas uski peeth hi Veer ko nazar aa rahi rhi. Wo itna chaah raha tha ki kaash... Kaash ye jaali uske aur Nidhi ke beech na hoti. Kam se kam uss kandhe par wo apna haath rakh ye jata paata ki Nidhi jesa soch rahi thi wesa bilkul bhi na tha.

Nidhi : You... You should go right? Boht kaam honge tumhe... Kaafi... Kaafi busy jo rehte ho tum. *sniff* So... Mujh par samay waste karni ki zaroorat nahi hai Veer... Kaam toh pehle dekha jaata hai... Hai na!? Y-You should go...

Itna bol usne abhi ek kadam aage badhaaya hi tha jab agle hi pal Veer ki baat sunn uske kadam wahi rukk gaye.

Veer : Parso...

Nidhi : ....

Veer : Parso... Mera janmdin tha...

Nidhi uski baat sunn ekdum sihar gayi. Aur uske aasu bhi behna jese ruk gaye the. Par wo peeche nahi mudi... Wahi stabdh sii bas sthir khadi rahi.

Veer (smiles) : Uss din kuch qareebi logo ne me mujhe wish kiya... Kavya meri behan... Sabse pehle usne kiya tha. Uske baad Shreya jii ka bhi video call aaya tha. Juhi se bhi baat hui... Aur toh koi hai nahi meri zindagii me... Ek shaks aur...

Nidhi : ...

Veer : Aap hi ho. Mein din raat aapke ek message ya call ka wait karta raha. Maana ki mene haha... Aapko reply nahi diya tha... Par mujhe laga tha harr baar ki tarah... Uss din toh aap pakka hi call karogi... Par ...

Nidhi : ......!!????

Veer : Aapki badhaayi na aayi...

Aur bas...

Uska itna kehna tha ki...

Nidhi ke aasuo ka jo baandh abhi tham gaya tha wo ek baar fir laba lab behna shuru ho gaya. Mote mote aasu uske gaalo se lakeer bana ke gir rahe the.

Na jaane kitna kuch suna diya tha usne Veer ko yu khade khade. Par... Uski ek baat na suni.

Wo bhul gayi thi ki keval wahi nahi thi jo naraaz thi. Keval Veer ki hi galti nahi thi. Bhala uska janmdin kese bhul gayi wo? Usse yaad tha. Haan usse yaad tha par kaam, vyastata, tension, aur Rajat se divorce ke chalte wo jese bilkul hi bhul gayi thi.

Aur ab jab usse iss baat ka pata chala toh...

Glaani... Keval glaani ke bhaav the. Jo pehle se hi maujood glaani ke bhaar ko aur badha chuke the.

Itna... Ki ab uss bhaar se uth paana kaafi mushqil tha.

Jab usse iss baat ka ehsaas hua toh wo forun hi palti....

"Veeeeeeeerrrrrr!!!"

Par...

"??????????"

Veer waha maujood nahi tha. Aur aaj pehli baar... Nidhi ko apne andar ek sense of loss mehsoos hua. Maano jese usne behad hi keemti kuch apna kho diya ho. Jisse paana ab shayad behad mushqil tha.

"N-Noooo!" Wo achanak hi idhar udhar bhaagte hue usse dhundne ka prayaas kari... Par...

Veer kahi nahi tha.

Aur wo bilakhti hui rote rote Juhi ke paas pohuchi. Uski ungli pakad wo forun hi mandir ke baahar jaane lagi. Iss aas me ki Veer baahar gaya hoga toh mil jaega.

Par...

Veer idhar se jese hi laut raha tha ki achanak uski shirt kisi ne peeche se pakad lii.

Palat ke dekha toh...

Shreya!!!

'????'

Shreya : Kyu karte ho aisa?

Veer : I... I'll talk to you later...

Wo jaane ke liye hua toh iss baar Shreya ne uska haath thaam liya.

Shreya : Tell me...!

Veer : Trust me! Mujhe kaam hai. Also...

Shreya : ???

Veer : Kya aap job karna chaahti ho???

Shreya : Huh??

Veer : If you want to... Then mujhe bataana. I have an offer ... Chalta hu...

Wo itna bol jaane laga.

Shreya : S-Sunoooo tohhhh....

Par Shreya ki awaaz ka koi matlab na raha.

Veer... Jaa chuka tha.

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Kuch din guzar chuke the. Aur aaj... Diwali ka itna bada tyohaar tha.

Vivek sang Karunesh aur Sumitra Ragini ko waapas se ghar le jaane me asamarth the. Aur aaj ki ye Diwali Ragini apne hi ghar me manaane waali thi. Suman, Abha, Sonali aur... Veer ke saath.

Din me wo apne ghar ho aayi thi. Toh ab raat me jaane ki zaroorat nahi thi.

Aaj wo Veer ke liye aur Suman sang baaki sabhi ke liye kayi saare kapde aur anya samaan khareed kar laayi thi. Diwali ka parv hi rehta hai khushiyo ka...

Aaj Ragini bhi behad khush thi. Ye Diwali Bhale hi wo ghar se alag mana rahi thi. Par yu Veer aur anya ke saath usse jese koi kami nahi mehsoos ho rahi thi. Thoda gham zaroor tha. Par wo jaanti thi... Ki gehre zakhmo ko bharne me samay toh lagta hi tha.

Raat ke samay sabhi taiyaar pooja khatam hone ka intezaar kar rahe the. Pooja ladies log kar rahi thi toh Veer baahar hi maujood tha.

Ki tabhi usse Kavya ka call aaya aur...

Veer : Bol Kavya!

Kavya : Bhaiya! Mein aur Arohi dii udhar aa rahe hai. Okay? Pataakhe fodenge sab milke hehe~

Veer : Arre par... Baahar pataakhe foot rahe hai. Raaste me gaadi chalaana khatre se khaali nahi hai Kavya. Mat aao...

Kavya : Nahiii! Aa rahe hai matlab aa rahe hai... bye!

Aur call end ho gaya.

Idhar Kavya full excited Arohi ke peeche baith chuki thi. Dono hi behad hi khubsoorat dress pehni hui thi.

Aur gaadi me sang baith wo ravaana ho gayi.

Par unhe nahi pata tha...

Ki iss waqt unke peeche kaun aa raha tha.
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
Dhanyavaad!
Like karna na bhuliyo.

 

[Jerry]

Waiting for update bro

 

[Werewolf]

Superb update bhai

Awesome Updateee

Vivek ne ek baar aur apne ghatiya behaviour aur soch ka namunna dikha diya aur iss baar toh apne hi maa baap ke saamne.

Suman ne mast bajaya hai unn teeno ka. Saalon ki bolti hi band kardi maza aagaya.

Idher Suhana bahar toh ekdum mature bani ghumti hai par ghar ke andar toh ekdum immaturity ki hadee paar karti hai.

Aatish ne apna khaash aadmi Ranga ko hi thokk diya gazabbb. Par ab Aatish Veer ke pichhe padh gaya hai.

Dekhte hai ab aage kyaa hota hai aur Jalsa ka aisa kyaa raaz hai.

Awesome update

Lovely update. Khas kar Suhana ka character.....

Suman.. Interesting lady.. Fearless nd confident.. Veer have an awesome back support now... Fabulous update

Bhai suspense main chood diya yaarrr...suhana ka reaction dekhna tha ki vo veer ko dekh kar kya kehti......majadaar update tha bhai.....waiting for next

Zabardast update dost

superb mindblowing fabulous fantastic speechless update............
Keep posting bhai..........
Waiting for next update..............

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Werewolf bhai too good update awesome creativity.
But 2 din ka wait 4 nxt 1.
Veer or pari ka step by step upgrade hona. Ragni ky ghr ka scene. Summan ka teenoon ko munh tood jawab dena veer ky liye. Awesome urs beauty. Keep it up with more nd awesome creative ideas, thinking. 1 last thing if picture discripion add kr doo tu maza double triple hojaey. Once more keep it up.

Awesome update.

Niçe update

Ab 2 din baad ka intazaar h...

Awesome update

Superb update Werewolf bhai....
Suman ka dominating nature vakai Kamal ka laga jaise usne bina situation ko samjhe sab acchi tarah samhal liya....

Suhana ke reaction ke agle update tak wait karna padega jab woh aapni churai hui ring veer ke pass dekhegi.....

Bhut Khub Bhai


Intresting mind blowing.....




wo Ladki Kon h jiske sath veer ne first time sex kiya tha jo abhi tak pata nhi chala hai......





Intezaar Agle Update Ka....

शानदार जबरदस्त भाई लाजवाब भाई
बोले तो एकदम zakassss
Bhai एकदम super update

Just 2 se 3 din per like karta rahu ga har update ko You like ke bhooke writer

Zabardast update

Superb update bro....
Waiting for next

Aaj bhi ring vaapas nahi kar paaya update mediam size ka to tha lekin esa lag raha tha ki kash ye khatam hi na hua hota tk maza aa jata waiting for next update brother

Bahad umda update bhai

Fantastic update

Werewolf next level update.
Specially seeing veer supporting her bhabhi.
Now let's see suhana phela misunderstanding na le aya ki tuna hi chori ki thi but kya milega veer ko iska badle.
Ie both in amount of points hosaka jada dena it was one of the most Difficult one.
Second suhana kya degi usa and will there chemistry start to form a alpha male with a alpha female

Nice one update bro waiting for next

Suman bahot achche se aina dikhaya maa baap beta ko or samindagi m doobe waha nikal liye
Veer sahab pahoch suhana k gher lekin suhana ka autar dekh ker paseena choot gaya
Atish bhau n apne khaas admi ko thonk dia tow chote mote chor uchakko ko kia aukat
Dekhte ab jalsa m kia hota h
Lajawab shaandaar update bhai

Shaandar updated bhai

Nice update...

Super update bhai Mazza AA gaya hai kya update likha hai aapne bahut achcha superb

Nice updates bro

Amazing update

Lagtahe aur 2 update lagega ring sahi hath me pahuchneme aur lagtahe ye story 1000 update tak pahuch jayega keu bhai sahikaha na?

bhai badhiya update..!! lekin veer ne aaj ke update me bhi ring nahi di suhana aur soniya ko..!!

Fabulous update

Ye kisko tag karing ju
kahi wo member report na kar de

ab ye kya hai
are kam se kam us sumitra ka gala kaat deti raagini khoon hi khoon chaaro aurr .... phir ye dekha vivek gusse mein aag babula hoke raagini ko jaan se maar deta, phir veer vivek ka gala daba deta .... phir........ to maujja hi maujja

naa... main maanti ye baat ki aise khamosh rahenge sabhi..... are koi to ek kulhadi laake do raagini ko taaki ek do kirdaaro ko bali chadha de

Nice update bhai lekin lagta hai aadhura reh gaya hai na ring de paya hai aur jalsa to start hone me bakt lagegi

Shaandaar update bhai maja aa gaya hai
Waiting for next update

Vivek ne ragini ko insult karna chaha lekin suman ne pure situation badal diya.veer ring lautane gaya he wahan suhana ki gussewali avtar delhi kar wo pareshan ho gaya .Diamond ko leke ranga aur atish dono pareshan he..

Awesome fabulous update
As expected suhana le legi veer
Ab veer ke intelligence ka test h
Keep posting

Superb very nice

Very nice update

Wonderful update...

majedar update ...ranga ka kaam bhi tamam ho gaya ,par ab veer ke saath kya karega bhau ..
suhana kahi pagal to nahi ho gayi ..

aur ek sawal tha ki agar pari veer ke ander na rahe to veer pehle jaisa darpok ban jayega ya jo skill usne hasil ki hai wo rahenge uske ander ???.

Well said

Nice update.

ओह हो ओ
कहानी का लेवल बढ़ता ही जा रहा है
पर क्या सुहाना वीर को चोर समझेगी या चोर पे मोर

Khubsurat updated bro

Vivek ka to lot gya ..sab Ragini bhi gyi

Ye incest story hai dekhna hai suru kaha se hoti h Ragini ya fir koi aur

Nice

Super update hai Bhai

Million Dollar Question.

Werewolf ji aapne bhi notice kiya hoga jab bhi is forum par koyi acchi story aati hai ek lobby ya kah le group of small people negative comments dena shuru kar deta hai…request hai behave like alpha aap Unhe ignore karte hue routine update dete hue unhe surprise karte raho…
We love you…always with you

Nice story

Mast update bhai

Hmm alpha male ha! Seems like veer ke andar alpha male baali baat suruwaat se hi thi. Kyuki jab suruwaat me ajay aur uske dost veer ko maar rahe the to veer ne apni galati accept nahi ki thi kyuki voh galat tha hi nahi. Us time veer almost ahdmari halat me tha.

Waiting for next

Great update! Nice plot so far! Eagerly waiting to find what happens next!!

Superb update bhai

NICE UpaDATe

BRILENT UpDATe

Wah mind-blowing fantastic update

Great update bro

So sorry Naina ji actually kuch busy ta
aj jaise hi time mila so here I'm

Bahut hi badhiya update diya hai bhai...
Nice and excellent update....

Awesome update once again

Fabulous update bhai

Super wonderful update

Update bahut chota laga mereko

Whenever something like this happens in the middle of relationship it hurts and at present same thing is happening with Ragini and I would say this about Vivek who thinks, speaks and takes decisions based on that and here his thinking is lousy, selfish, so he will have to suffer.
Suman is slave so her job is to end her boss's problemsbut there is some secret she is hiding. Progress is slowly being made, that's a good thing. Well, I want to see a dangerous fight between Aatish and Veer, which has brutal scenes.
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.
Thank You...​

Mast update bhai

BAhUT Hi MAST UDaTE Hai BhAI

Mastt

Superb update

BhaI AApko fir se baat khani h naina ji se unhone bola h hindi me comnt krne ko last baar bta raha hu agli baar aikhayt kr duga

Superb fantastic update yaha bechara veer ring lekr suhana k pas puhnch chuka hy jo ke bilkul achy mod me nhi hy shayad usse pete ya kuttr se katwaye pata nhi agr waha bach gaya to atish bhau se bachna to na mumkin hy jo shayad planing kr chuka hoga usse dabochne ki dekhte kia pari usse hone wale khtre ke bary me btati hy ya veer ko pitne k bad pata chalega eagerly waiting for next update

Nice story brother

Nice story brother

mindblowing superbbb speechless update.......

Behad hi shanadar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.

Aagle update ka intezar hai Werewolf bhai....

Un bechariyo se itni dusmani bhut nainsafi h unhone apka
Esa ky nuksaan kr diya

Wahhhhh jabrdast mindblowing superbbb speechless update.......
waiting for next update.......

superb awsm update to gud luvd it Plzzzz do cont asap

No word for your great and hard work bro... Bahut ho gyi angregi ab Hindi me suno Vaise to mere pass sabdo ki kami hai bahut pr jo 2-4 hai Vo bol deta hu kabhi kabhi...
Veer ne basic martal art tecnik buy kr liya hai yha atish bhau ko veer ke bare me pta chal gya hai ki Vahi hai in sb nakamiyo ke pichhe usne apne jalsha Namak jagah pr veer ki khatirdari karne ka socha hai usne apne pyade Yani Khash admi ka sar uda diya veer pahuch gya hai suhana ke ghar or vha jo usne dekha hai suhana ka pagalpan ek taraf to hashi aa rhi thi or dusri taraf dar bhi lag rha hai veer ko koi is chudail se bcha le... Ab to dekh bhi liya hai suhana ne veer ko
Pari ne veer ko Alfa tread ke bare me btaya hai Jo ki sunne me hi Jabardast lag rha hai indurance me bhi 15 point add kr liye hai dekhte hai atish bhau ke samne ye kya kaam aati hai...
Karunesh or veer ki chachi ke sath sath veer ke bhai ko jo Suman ne sunaya hai Wah wah wah kya bat hai maza type hi aa gya padh kr... Such me great effort bhai sandar jabarjast lajvab update superb

Fabulous update Bhai superb

Hmm.. As I presumed Vivek ne Ragini ke character par hi ungli utha di... Jo thodi bahut umeed ke saath Karunesh & Sumitra Ragini ko manane aaye the wo bhi chaknachoor ho gayi... Vivek ka character kiss prakaar explain kiya jaaye samajh se pare hai... Selfish se selfish insaan ki zindagi mein bhi koyi ek shakhs hota hai jispar wo sab kuchh vaar deta hai... Par pehle apne bhai Veer ke saath ki gayi harkat aur uske baad Aatish ke saath huyi ghatna... Vivek ne saabit kiya hai ke agar matlab parasti ki koyi hadh hai to wo Vivek hi hai... Aur ab just like Kangaali mein Aata Geela iss update mein huyi baatein... Bhul jaa bhai tu ke tera ghar kabhi dobara basegaa... I'm damn sure tu aese hi marega...

Idhar Suman ke dwara ki gayi baaton se laga ke wo jo dikha rahi hai asal mein hai nahi... Par agle hi pal laga ke nahi shayad ye just Veer ki har tarah se sewa karna chahati hai... Suman ka kirdaar kaafi complications se bhara hua lag raha hai... Ab mujhe halka doubt ye bhi ho raha hai ke kahin Suman bhi to kisi bade parivaar se taaluqaat to nahi rakhti jo apni pehchaan chhipaane ke liye ek naakara se aadmi ke saath shaadi karke baithi thi... A little bit Confused right now ...



Na munna na ab wo aadmi tumhe naa milega kyonki Aatish miyan ne uske saath aatishbaazi kar di hai... Aatish ka asli rang ab saamne aa raha hai... Apne sabse khaas aadmi ko tapka diya hai usne to ab game kaafi interesting hone waali hai... Jalsa ka raaz bhi dekhne yogya hoga... Shayad apne sabse bhayankar kaam wahin karta hoga Aatish ya fir shayad Slogan ka gunaahon ka adda ho wo...

Idhar Veer ne 15 points apne Endurance mein add kar liye hain aur saath hi 50 points se basic martial arts skill purchase ki hai joki shayad ab jald hi upyog mein aane waali hai kyonki kabhi bhi uska saamna Aatish Bhau se ho sakta hai...

Ab aate hain iss update ke sabse interesting part par...





Hahahaha... kya tha ye bhai... O bhai maaro mujhe maaro... Kherr, iske liye main kuchh nahi kahunga bas ye C&P waala saaman hai, Werewolf bhaiya Suhana Ji tak pahuncha dijiyega....

“ A psycho is someone who has serious mental problems and who may act in a violent way without feeling sorry for what they have done.”

And Also... RIP Veer... May your Soul rest in peace & in next birth you don't have to face Suhana... Best Wishes...

So, aate hain finally on a little bit more discussion about Ragini... Kahin na kahin galti uski khud ki bhi thi.Maana Mohabbat andhe logon ka khel hai par fir bhi aesa thode hi naa hota hai ke aap saamne waale ki galtiyon aur evil ways ko bhi nazarandaaz kar den... Vivek shuru se hi galath tha jo bhi usne Veer ke saath kiya Ragini ko tabhi samajh lena chahiye tha ke wo kis kadar ghatiya aur neech insaan hai... Par chalo der aaye durust aaye... Kabhi na kabhi to Vivek ka asli rang saamne aana hi tha aur finally Ragini ko uski sachayi dikh hi gayi...

Ab dekhna ye hoga ke kaise Veer uss paagal aur pyscho... Ahem.. ahem.. I mean Suhana ko wo ring waapis karega aur kya Veer zinda bach paayega ya fir Suhana naam ke Jawalamukhi ke andar sada sada ke liye sama jaayega... Aur agar Veer mar gaya to bechari Pari kahaan jaayegi???

Idhar Aatish Bhau ka agla step kya hoga... Shayad jo log Aarohi & Kavya ko follow kar rahe the wo role mein aa sakte hain ya fir Veer ki family ko nuksaan pahunchaya jaa sakta hai...

Overall kaafi badhiya update tha... Teen Chaar scenes cover kar diye aapne matlab length bhi achhi thi update ki... Dheere dheere hi sahi Veer ke stats ab behadh achhe ho chuke hain aur ab ek skill bhi aa gayi hai uske paas... Story ko bilkul bhi rush nahi kar rahe hain lekhak mahodaya aur yahi baat iss kahani ki khubsurti ko badhati hai... Jitni bhi tareef ki jaaye aapki wo kam hi hai...

Outstanding Update Werewolf bhai & Waiting For Next...

Awesome update bhai...waiting for next update eagerly...

Bahut hi badhiya bhai

VERY nice story continue

Very good awesome update
Ragini k nokile nipple ufffffffff

Update diya jaaye

Mind blowing update bhai

Waiting for next update

Nice update

Next update kab aayega bro

Any chance of update

Excellent concept...

Jabardast update bro

Waiting bro

Waiting

Update kb aaega bhai

Awesome superb and laajawab update Bhai

Waiting bro

Bhai app ki story itni achhi hai ki ek update ke baad 20 page only for comments.iss site pe yese koi aisa story nahi hai jo itna comment mil raha hoga ..your mind and writing skills is different from other in story write .you are best writer in xforum. It's one of my favorite story in the xforum .. Thanks bro for writing a wonderful amazing story..

Waiting

Waiting for update

एक सीधे सादे छोकरे को " परी " ने बिल्कुल ही बिगाड़ दिया है । पावर दे रही है कोई बात नहीं लेकिन उसके सेक्सुअल जर्नी को भी हवा दे रही है यह खतरनाक है ।
अल्फा ट्रैट फंक्शन के द्वारा उसे भौतिक सुख भोगने की ओर अग्रसर कर रही है । एक महत्वाकांक्षी पुरूष और एक प्ले ब्वाय बनाने पर तुली हुई है ।

बढ़िया है । इसी बहाने कुछ औरतों का उद्धार भी हो जाए ।

कुसुम ने तो वीर को ही नहीं बल्कि हमें भी आश्चर्यचकित कर दिया था । रागिनी भाभी एक पढ़ी लिखी और आधुनिक ख्यालात की होकर भी वो नहीं कर पाई जो गांव की रहने वाली कुसुम ने कर दिखाया । सुमित्रा और विवेक की बोलती बंद कर दी । वाह , क्या बात है ।

सुहाना एक रईस और अमीर बाप की बेटी होकर भी मात्र डेढ़ करोड़ रुपए की गहने चोरी होने पर रो रो कर अपनी हाल बेहाल कर रखी है । गहने चोरी होने का सदमा लग गया है उसे । एक अरबपति बाप और स्वयं कंपनी की सी ओ होकर भी बड़ा ही ओछा रियेक्सन दे रही है । उसके लिए यह रकम तो उसके हाथ की मैल होनी चाहिए ।
खैर , कुछ देर और रोना - धोना कर ले क्योंकि वीर तो उसकी अमानत लेकर पहुंच ही गया है ।


लास्ट पैराग्राफ में " जलशा " बिल्डिंग का नाम काफी खौफनाक तरीके से आया । देखते हैं वहां ऐसा क्या है जिससे सभी उसका नाम मात्र सुनकर ही डर जा रहे हैं । शायद नेक्स्ट अपडेट में उसका जिक्र हो !

बहुत ही बेहतरीन अपडेट Werewolf bhai.
आउटस्टैंडिंग एंड अमेजिंग ।

Aur 2 story aisi hai
1 Jai Sutar bhai ka story
2 VJ bhai ka story hai
Like this story I love all 3 stories

Bhai meri bhi 3no stories favourite hain pr jai sutr bhai ki story ak audio book the new avatar sa milti julti ha puri is Liya mana wo prhna chor di ab main sirf vj ki or wolf ki hi story read krta hu

Veer ka character awesome ,,,,, lajawab ........

Update 33 has been posted.