Incest Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery

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Ahm ahm
Shuruwat hoi story ki apne sajan
Veer ki pitayi se kamenu ne bht
buri tarah mara or oper se dialogue
alag se chipkaye ruk in ka maa ka
(main to veer ko bola b bhai k akele
maar mat kha tere hise k 1&2 lafe apun
jhel le ga to wo bola na bhai teri pitayi
main sehan nhi ker pau ga is liye ye
baar mujhe hi apne kandu pe uthane de main hami or dur se hi use pitate hove
dekhta rha)
sala larki ko dekhne pe kon marta hai
ye to nainsafi hai my Lord main in pe
case karu ga han ye sahi hai
pitayi khatam ghar pohanche to alag
hi chutiyapa intejar karte hove mila
vo sala pranjal is ki maa ka
100 kamene mare hu ge tab ja ker wo
paida howa ho ga sala kuch b kare ga1
Veer ko takhleef pohanchane k liye
sb mile hove hain bc
heartless sale mader......
Dada ji b bs nam k hi hain sb kuch
unki ankhu k samne howa per na
unko to kuch faraq hi nhi para sirf 1 faisla badal lene se kia faraq parta
lakin nhi in logo ko samjhana
deewar se sar takrane jaisa hai
to chaliye hum b age bharte hain Veer
k sath❤
gari ne thoka larki ne roka per na sala
her bar koi na koi ungli karne
aa hi jata hai sala us driver ki to
jai
hosspital me bharti hove bhai sahab or
phir to kiamat hi ho gyi dimagh jhanjhana utha
dill k taar chir ge moor nachne lage
haye ab main us katil haseena ka
nam lu b to kaise uff sanam hum to
dhobe hain tum ko b le dhoben ge
NIDHI❤
finally 1 bht hi khobsurat character
ko introduce karaye writer babu
or karaye b to aisa k bs hum to deewane hi ho ge
(kitni hi stories read kari hain maine
lakin such kahu to age difference k
bawajod itni strong feeling kabhi na
mehsos kari married hain hain 2 baby
b hain lakin apni niji zindagi se disturb
dill se bura laga k NIDHI ji k sath
aisa kyu howa wo bad me
Veer ne toka sale kuch mera b kheyal ker le sari zindagi akela hi rahu ga
k mujhe b to hak hai khush rehne ka
maine b ashirwad diya phir ja simran
ji le apni zindagi meri duayen tere
sath hain
NIDHI+VEER
ye doni is story k aise pehlu hain
jitna marzi gehrayi me utro utarte chale
jao ge lakin uski koi hud nhi❤
kia hi bolu ab main
(1 time pe mere dimagh me ye bat
b ai k is thread ko incest na ho ker
romance ya fantasy aisa kuch hona
chahiye ta kyu k in dono ko
le ker jo b feelings dikhai gayi hain
wo 1 dum pure hain aisi feelings to
kisi teenage couple me b na dekhne
ko mile lakin phir ye kheyal aya k writer
babu ne kuch soch ker hi aisa kiya
ho ga to koi ni is ko b seh le ge bs
NIDHI ji ka kheyal rakhiye ga sir wo
zarori hai)
JUHI ale meli gudhiya rani
she's so sweet or ho b kyu na akhir
NDHI ji ki parchayi jo hai
SHAREYA apni misal ap dabang larki
hai or character k lehaz se 1 dum
perfect
apni didi or JUHI se bht pyar karne
wali wah kia bat hai❤
(mere kheyal se cmnt thora bara hota
ja rha hai to is ko short me complete
karte hain i hope k writer babu
zaror samjhe ge story k liye kehna
to bht kuch chahte hu ge meri tarah
dosre readers laikin alfaz kum per jain)
lakin kuch to missing hai or kia hai
1 minut aaela is ko kaise bhol sakta hu
(System is activated)
ye kia ta bhai tum b wahi sune jo
main suna
welcome to PARI❤
in VEER ki or humari zindagi me
dill se thanku ap ai humare to larke
k bagh khul ge shukriya dhanewad
(Mer b kuch bolu ya itna kafi hai
PARI:bs bs ju jaise choro ko ache se janti hu main sundar lakrki dekhi nhi k
line marna shiro
Me:ghajab bezati hai)
to is ko yehi pe stop lagate
hain baki k sath sath ata rhe ga
abhi kehna to or b ta lakin filhal k
liye yehi break
thanku so much
keep going
stay with us❤

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Update - 30 ~ The Best Gift​

Ab tak...

Jese hi usne aankhein khol ke dekha toh paaya ki...

Suman ekdum nangi apni dono doodh ki thailiya uske seene par tikaaye usse hi nihaar rahi thi aur muskuraa rahi thi.

Uske baad wo boli,

"Subah ho gayi... Ma-Maalik!"

'Huh?? Wait!!!! What did she sayyyy???'

Ab aage...

Mumbai...
At Nidhi's Home...

Subah subah Nidhi badi hi pareshaan sii hall me hi sofe par viraajmaan thi. Haatho me phone tha aur aankho me nami.

'He doesn't even replies to me. Phone karti hu toh wo bhi nahi uthaana hai usse. Kya itna bura laga hai usse meri baato ka? Jo ab wo mujhse baat bhi nahi karna chaahta? Kya ho gaya tha mujhe bhi uss din? Uss... Uss din itna kese bhadak gayi mein uspe? Meri hi galti hai. Bura laga hai usse tabhi toh dekho na... Na mere calls utha raha hai, na meri baatein maan raha hai college roz aane ki, na messages seen kar raha hai. Itna... He's... He's stupid... Idiot... Pagal... He...'

Nidhi bechaari, Veer ke hi baare me sochi jaa rahi thi. Akhir uska contact jo nahi hua tha Veer se uss raat se. Bechaini se bharpoor thi wo iss waqt. Upar se Rajat ka alag tension. Kahi Rajat ne Veer ko kisi pareshani me toh nahi daal diya. Dherr saare sawaal umad rahe the uske mann me.

Apni aankho me bann rahe aasuo ko poch wo uthne hi waali thi ki uski jaangh pe uske gown ko kisi ne pakad ke kheencha,

Dekha toh Juhi thi jo abhi abhi apni aankhein malte hue uske paas aayi thi.

"Uth gayi meri bacchi!?" Nidhi ne usse thaamte hue apne seene se laga liya.

Juhi : Mmmm

Nidhi : Chalo! Ready kar du tumhe. School bhi jaana hai.

Juhi : Mummy aap yaha kyu baithi ho? Tiffin me kya rakhogi aaj?

Nidhi : Kuch nahi betu. Tumhaare Veer maamu... Boht tang karte hai tumhari mummy ko...

Juhi : Mmm? Veer maamu!? Veer maamu se toh mein parso hi mili thi Ehehehe~

Juhi ki baat sunte hi jese Nidhi ko ek jhatka laga. Uski beti bhala kab aur kaha mil lii Veer se?

Nidhi : ??? Tum?? Kaha!??? Kaha mili thi beta Veer se? Wo toh...

Juhi : Hmm? Parso jab mein maasi ke saath bazaar gayi thi toh waha se jab aaye... Toh Veer Maamu neeche hi khade thi bike pe.

'Bike!??? That means... It was him!!!!!!!'

Nidhi apni bacchi ko kass ke thaame usse ghur rahi thi. Aur uss se jaldbaazi me sawaal karte jaa rahi thi. Jese maano Veer se judi harr ek information wo Juhi se jaan'na chaahti thi.

Nidhi : T-Toh? F-Fir kya hua? Kya kaha usne? Aapke Veer maamu ne?

Juhi : Wo bole unhe kuch kaam hai aur chale gaye... Mummy! Mujhe toilet aayi hai...

Juhi itna bol Nidhi ke aachal se nikal tezz kadmo ke saath andar washroom me bhaag gayi.

Par Nidhi ka sawaal poora nahi hua tha. Sabse bada sawaal ki Veer iss waqt kaha reh raha hai...?? Ye toh woh puchna hi bhul gayi.

Ye khayaal aate hi jese hi wo palti aur Juhi ko awaaz lagaane waali thi ki tabhi, usne dekha ki Shreya darwaaze ki dehleez pe khade usse hi dekh rahi hai.

'???'

Shreya : Don't worry! Wo apni Bhabhi ke saath reh raha hai. Remember? Wahi Bhabhi... Jinhe wo uss din bachaane gaya tha?

Nidhi (surprised) : Tumhe...?? Noo!!! Wo tumse milne aaya aur tumne mujhe bataaya tak nahi Shreya? Itni badi baat...

Shreya : Chill!!! Uska kehna hai ki wo aapke saath nahi reh sakta. Kyuki wo aapki situation jaanta hai aur wo guilt conscious banda hai. Uss se aise nahi raha jaega. Isliye, wo waha reh raha hai.

Nidhi : Aur kaun tha jisne usse meri sacchaayi ke baare me bataaya!? Haa?

Shreya : I...

Nidhi : Mene tumhe mana kiya tha na Shreya? Mene mana kiya tha na? Fir kyu tumne usse...

Wo Shreya ko acchi khaasi sunaati par tabhi usse kuch shabd yaad aa gaye.

'Shreya ji ko mat daatiyega, unhone mujhe wo sab batana zaroori samjha isliye bataaya tha shayad.'

Aur bas...

Nidhi ke khule honth apne aap hi band ho gaye. Letter me Veer ne spasht likha tha ki Shreya jii ko na daanta jaaye. Ab bhala Nidhi uski baat kese nahi rakhti? Uski maujoodgi na hone par bhi, iss tarah se uska mehatv bann chuka tha uske ghar me.

"Idiot...!"

Wo badbadaati hui uthi aur seedhe kitchen me chali gayi.

Par saamne khadi Shreya sab kuch dekh paa rahi thi. Wo dekh paa rahi thi ki kitna significance tha Veer ka Nidhi ke upar aur saath hi saath Juhi par bhi... Even uske khud ke upar bhi.

Wo khud ek gehre chintan me doob gayi.

'I wonder how it would look if he was my Sister's husband!...'

'????'

'Huh?? Wtf!?? Wait! Mein kya sochne lagi??'

Apna sarr hilaate hue wo andar chali gayi.

***

Rajasthan...
At Suman's home...

Veer : Hmm! Toh ab bataogi ki ye kya chakkar hai? Kyu mujhe aap...

Suman : Tum kehke bulaaiye mujhe maalik... Tum... Tum keh ke... Kripya kar!

'She..'

Veer (sighs) : Hmm! Toh ab bataogi ko ye sab kya chakkar hai? Kyu tum... Kyu tum mujhe maalik keh ke bula rahi ho?

Veer kal ki hui ghatna ke baad mann me dherr saare sawaal liye hue tha. Ab chuki wo dono ka hi clear mind tha, Veer ne forun hi sawaal puchna sahi samjha.

Wo iss waqt ussi bistar par baitha hua tha jispe kal raat dono ne hi rangreliyaa manaayi thi. Uske perro ke paas uski jaangh par haath rakhe Suman baithi hui thi jo keval muskuraa ke Veer ko dekhe jaa rahi thi.

Suman (smiles) : Ye toh hona hi tha ek na ek din maalik!

Veer (frowns) : Kya matlab!?

Suman : Maalik! Ye toh hona hi tha... Jis pal mene aapka seena dekha tha.

'Mera seena!?'

Sochte hue Veer ne jese hi apne seene par nazar maari toh usse nazar aaya...

Uska pendant. Wahi pendant jo uski Maa ne diya tha. Wo shirt ke baahar hi tha.

'Huh!?? So... That's why she kept looking at me like that!?'

Veer ne apne haatho me uss pendant ko thaama jo ek sone ki chain ka tha aur usme ek bada hi anokha sa neela patthar chipka hua tha.

Veer : Tumhara matlab hai ye?? Mera pendant?

Suman (nods) : Jii Haa maalik! Yahi! Aur isliye aaj se ye Suman aapki Daasi hai.

'Huh??? Wtf?? Did I heard that right!?'

[Hahaha~ You don't know. You just found the diamond. Wo Heere ki anguthi kuch bhi nahi, asli heera toh ab aapko mila hai master. Haha~ Who needs a diamond ring? When you can have a slave? Hahaha~]

'Oh come on Pari! This is serious.'

[Hehe~]

Veer (pendant pakadte hue) : Isme aisa kya hai?

Suman (surprised) : Maalik? Kya aapko waqai kuch nahi pata iske baare me?

Veer : Hmm? Nahi! Kyu?

Suman Veer ko aise dekh rahi thi jese maano koi bhoot dekh liya ho.

Suman : Maalik!??? Ya toh aap mazaak kar rahe hai ya anjaan bann rahe hai.

Veer : Dekho Suman...

Suman : *smiles*

Veer : ???

Suman : Mujhe accha laga aapne akhir kaar mujhe mere naam se bulaaya. Aur mera ye anurodh hai ki... Aage bhi... Aage bhi maalik... Aise hi mujhe bulaaye.

Veer : Ahem! Haa! Toh dekho Suman... Mein waqai kuch bhi nahi jaanta hu. Tum kya keh rahi ho meri samajh me kuch bhi nahi aa raha hai.

Suman : Par aisa kese ho sakta hai!? Huh!?? Zara rukiye maalik...

Wo hairaan hote hue kuch sochti hai aur fir Veer ko punah dekhti hai,

Suman : Ye aapko kisne diya? Aapke paas ye kese aaya?

Veer : Hmm? Ye!? Ye meri Maa ne mujhe janm ke waqt pehnaaya tha.

Suman (shocked) : Aapki Maa ne!?

Veer (frowns) : Hmm! Tum... Kya tum kuch jaanti ho?

Suman : Aapki... Aapki Maa ka naam kya hai!?

Veer : Bhavana!

Suman ye sunte hi forun khadi ho gayi hai aur muh faade Veer ko dekhne lagi. Stabdh nigaaho se wo usse ghur rahi thi.

Suman : Bh-Bhavana!?

'There's something wrong!'

[Ask her every possible detail master! Something is fishy!!!]

'Yeaaahhh!!'

Veer (frowns) : Tum! Kuch zaroor jaanti ho. Hai na!?

Veer ne khade hote hue agle hi pal kivaad ki chatakni andar se hi band kar lock laga diya.

Veer : Jawaab do!!

Suman haa me sarr hilaayi aur tezz kadmo ke saath almaari ki taraf gayi, usse khol wo kuch hi palo ke andar ek chaavi dhund ke laayi.

Uske baad wo neeche jhuki aur ussi bistar ke neeche se usne ek peti sarka ke nikaali.

Suman ki harr ek harqat Veer dekh raha tha aur uska dil zorr se dhadak raha tha. Zaroor... Zaroor kuch na kuch usse pata chalne waala tha jiske chalte usse shayad jhatke bhi lag sakte the.

Andar peti me se usne ek tasveer nikaali jo photo frame me saji hui thi aur Veer ki taraf badhaayi.

'??'

Sawaalia nazre liye jese hi usne wo photo dekhi...

Usse dikhaayi diya ki ek behad hi shandaar sa mahal ya haweli keh lo jo kaafi badi thi aur phoolo se saji hui thi. Koi bhi insaan nahi tha photo me. Keval ek mahal jitni badi haweli hi thi.

Veer (frowns) : Iska matlab kya hai!?

Suman : Maalik! Mein aapko zyaada kuch nahi bata sakti. Keval itna hi bata sakti hu ki...
Mein aur mera parivaar, mere purvaj asal me...
Hamesha se iss haveli me rehne waale logo ki seva karte aaye hai. Itne pehle se ki sahi anumaan lagaana naamumkin hai.

Veer : Kaun hai ye log? Aur ye haveli?

Suman : Mein nahi bata sakti. Mujhe maaf kijiyega. Mein vachan baddh hu. Bas itna jaan lijiye ki... Mein aur hamaare poorvaj iss haveli ke logo ke sevak the aur hai aur aane waale samay me bhi rahenge.

Veer : Par tumne abhi abhi kaha ki tum meri daasi...!? Wait!! Huh??

Jese usse realize hua...

Suman (smiles) : ....

Veer : Iska matlab toh yahi hua ki... Mein iss haweli se hu... Jo ki bilkul bhi sach nahi hai.

Suman : Ye jo aapke gale me tanga hua hai na??

Veer : Hmm!

Suman : Ye mene iss haveli me rehne waale logo ke paas dekha tha. Aur... Ye unka beshkeemti gehna tha.

Veer (surprised) : Yadi iss hisaab se chale toh... Doesn't that means ki meri Maa... Wo iss haveli ke logo me se ek thi?

Suman : ....

Veer : Ye log kaha hai abhi? Ye haveli kidhar hai?

Suman : Mein nahi bata sakti maalik! Mein vachan baddh hu.

Veer : Dammmn it!!! Toh... Toh ye toh bata sakti ho na ki tumhe ye vachan kisne diya?

Suman (nods) : Meri Nani ne...

Veer : Nani? Okay!! G-Good! Toh chalo... Kaha hai wo? M-Mujhe unse milna hai.

Suman : Maaf kijiyega par... Wo ab iss duniya me nahi hai maalik!

'Fuuuuccccckkkkkkk!!!!'

'There's something wrong!! Yadi Suman ka kehna hai ki wo aur uska parivaar Inn haveli ke logo ki sewa karta tha toh yaha toh wo meri sewa kar rahi hai. Keval mere pendant dekhne ke baad. Kyuki uske hisaab se ye pendant unn haweli ke logo ka beshkeemti gehna tha. Toh fir Mom ke paas kese aaya ye pendant? Did she stole it? No I don't think so. Iska matlab toh bas yahi darsha raha hai ki Mom inn haveli waale logo ke beech ki ek sadasya thi. Ya fir unhone Mom ko ye gehna diya ho? Par wo itna beshkeemti gehna kyu denge bhala? Aaaarrrghhhhhh!!!'

Veer ne kheejte hue apne baal noche. Itne saare sawaal umad rahe the ki uski kuch soojh nahi raha tha kya kare.

[Don't worry! Ye kaafi uljhi hui gutthi hai. Atleast aapko apni Mom ke baare me kuch information mili.]

'Yeaahhh! No wait....'

Kuch sochte hue wo forun hi palta aur Suman se pucha,

"Toh kya tum meri Maa ko jaanti ho? Bhavana?"

Suman Veer ko dekhi aur fir naa me sarr hila dii.

Suman : Nahi maalik!! Mein unhe nahi jaanti.

Veer (frowns) : Par tumhaare haav bhaav toh kuch aur hi the jab tumne mere muh se unka naam suna tha.

Suman : Jesa ki mene kaha maalik. Mein unhe nahi jaanti. Rahi baat mere haav bhaav ki... Toh mein iss se zyaada kuch bhi kehne ke liye vachan badhh hu maalik. Mujhe maaf kar dijiye maalik!

Suman ko Veer ne gaur se dekha aur ant me ek aah bhari. Kyuki Suman ko dekh ke hi pata lagaaya jaa sakta tha ki wo bilkul bhi jhooth nahi bol rahi thi.

Abhi wo baitha hi hua tha ki tabhi uska phone bajne laga,

Screen pe dekha toh...

'Ragini Bhabhi!?'

Veer : Hello?

Ragini : Happy Birthday Veeeeeeeerrrr!!

Ragini ki khil khilaati hui awaaz uske kaano me padi. Aur ye sunte hi Veer ke hontho pe ek muskaan fel gayi.

'I almost forgot... Ki aaj toh mera b'day hai. Bhabhi ko yaad tha!? I wonder... Aur kisse yaad hoga?'

[Fuck! It's your birthday master!? Happy Birthday my dear master.]

'Thanks Pari!'

[Ab gift ke taur pe fataak se mujhe Level 4 pe pohuchao.]

'Gift jiska b'day hota hai wo nahi deta idiot. Wish karne waale dete hai usse.'

[Huh? Ohh yeah! Fuck! I forgot! Ahahaha~]

Veer (sighs) : Thank you Bhabhi!

Ragini : Welcome! Toh!? Wo... Wo... Tum aa rahe ho na? Kab tak aaoge?

Veer : Kal! Aaj reservation karwa lunga. Aur aaj raat me baith jaunga. So kal tak...

Ragini ki tabhi udhar se thodi udaasi bhari awaaz aayi,

"Toh! Tum b'day par yaha nahi rahoge matlab."

Veer : Chaahta hu par possible nahi hai. Kal hi aa paunga.

Ragini : Well! Right! Kal then... I have a surprise for you! Kal aao... And... Acche se safar karna okay?

Veer (smiles) : Jiii!

Ragini : Okay! Toh... Mein rakhu..!?

Veer (smiles) : Jii!

Aur call end ho gaya.

Bechaari Ragini call toh badi hi utsaah se lagaayi thi. Par usse wish karne ke baad samajh hi nahi aa raha tha ki apne dewar se bhala ab aur kya baatein kare. Aur iske chalte usse khud pe sharam aa rahi thi. Wo jald se jald phone rakhi aur khud ko baatein sunaate hue andar chali gayi.

***

Veer ka birthday toh tha hi par saath hi saath aaj kisi aur ka bhi b'day tha. Wo shaks aur koi nahi balki Suhana aur Sonia ki Maa thi ~ Namrita!

Ek badi sii hotel me ek poora hall booked tha. Poore hall ko sajaaya gaya tha. Andar dherr saari lights jal rahi thi aur mand mand awaaz me instrumental music chal raha tha.

Waiters me saari ki saari khubsoorat ladkiya thi jo khubsoorat sii attire pehne guests ko kahi cold drinks toh kahi snacks serve kar rahi thi.

Toh kuch entrance pe unke swaagat ke liye khadi hui thi.

Guests bhi ek se badh ke ek the. Sabhi raees aur bade gharaano se belong kar rahe the.

Mahaul kul milaake boht khushnuma tha par...

Par iss waqt ussi hotel ke ek kamre me do behad hi khubsoorat auratein atyant hi chintan me doobi hui thi.

Ye aur koi nahi balki Suhana aur Sonia hi thi.

Suhana idhar se udhar tahelte hue khud ko shaant karne ki koshish kar rahi thi.

"Kuch nahi hoga Suhana! Phew! Calm down! Phew!"

Sonia : Wo aate hi honge.

Suhana : Tum mujhe aur darra rahi ho Sonu!

Par Suhana ki baat pe Sonia kuch na boli bas muh ferr ke kahi aur dekhne lagi.

Aur uska ye rukhapann Suhana ko andar hi andar tadpa raha tha. Wo Sonia ke sameep aayi aur uske chehre ko apne haatho se ghumaate hue apni orr kii.

Suhana : Ab bhi naraaz ho mujhse?

Sonia : ....

Suhana : Sonuuu! Please! Don't! Tere bina adhuri hu mein ye baat tu bhi jaanti hai. Aur mein tujhse maafi maang chuki hu na. Mene maana hai na ki uss Veer ne ring nahi churaayi hogi kyuki tum uske saath thi. Toh ab kya dikkat hai?

Sonia : ....

Suhana : Sonu!!! Maaf kar de!!! Dekh! Mein kaan pakadti hu.

Wo kaan pakad paati ki uske pehle hi darwaaza khula aur ek aadmi andar aaya. Upar se leke neeche tak wo mehnge kapdo se saja hua tha.

Sonia : Dad!?

Sonia aur Suhana ke pita, yaani ki desh ki jaani maani automobiles company ke maalik ~ Shailendra.

Shailendra : Bolo! Kya baat hai? Tumlogo ko beta waha hall me rehna tha. Sabhi guests kya sochenge?

Suhana apne pita ko dekh ekdum kaanp rahi thi. Akhir kese wo bataegi ki jo ring wo dene waale hai. Wo toh chori ho chuki hai.

Sonia : Dii ko aapse kuch kehna hai.

Shailendra : Hmm? Kya baat hai beta? Jaldi kaho... Baahar bhi jaana hai. Tumhari Mom bhi ready ho hi gayi hai.

Suhana Sonia ko hairani bhare bhaav se ghur rahi thi. Andar aane se pehle hi Sonia ne uss se kaha tha ki Sonia uski madad karegi. Par yaha toh wo jese uski taraf dekh hi nahi rahi thi.

'Oh no!!! Sonu!!! She's really mad...'

Yaha Sonia apne alag hi vichaaro me leen thi.

'Mene kitna call kiya Veer ko. Ki aaj party hai. I wanted to say sorry to him again. Par... Abhi tak uska koi reply na aaya. He probably hates me now. Akhir... Dii ne uski itni beizzati kii hai ki wo mujhe hi inn sab ka kaaran samajh baitha hoga. Par Veer... Kese batau tumhe... Sacchaayi!?'

Shailendra : Bolo beta!

Suhana : Wo... Wo...

Shailendra : Haa?

Suhana : Asal me...

Shailendra : Arre bolo bhi...

Suhana : Wo dedh crore ki ring chori ho chuki hai.

Wo ek saas me bol gayi.

Aur agle hi pal...

Poore kamre me sannaata sa chhaa gaya.

Shailendra : ???

Sonia : ....

Suhana : ....

Shailendra : K-Kya? Kya kaha tumne?

Suhana : Wo... Wo... Dedh crore waali ring... Jo aap Mom ko dene waale the wo... Wo chori ho gayi hai.

Aur agle hi pal Shailendra ki aankhein felti chali gayi.

Uske baad jab Suhana ne poori sachhai bataayi toh Shailendra ka gussa saatve aasmaan par pohuch chuka tha.

Wo aag baboola hoke Suhana aur Sonia dono ko dekh raha tha.

Aisa lag raha tha ki kisi bhi waqt wo dono ko tamaacha jadd dega.

Par usne aisa kiya na...

"Kal tak yadi Ring nahi mili... Toh Suhana... Hmph!"

Daant meeste hue wo agle pal hi mobile nikaal kaan se lagaaya aur baahar nikal ke...

*Slaaammmm*

Zorr se usne darwaaza band kar diya.

Aur Suhana ye dekhte hi bilakhte hue rone lagi. Wo jaanti thi ki jab uske Dad kuch nahi bolte the toh wo kitna naraaz aur gusse me rehte the. Sonia se chipak ke wo rone lagti hai.

Ab usse Veer ke kahe shabd yaad aa rahe the.

"Didn't you say that few minutes ago!? Money can buy happiness. Paisa sab kuch hai. Paisa hi khushiya laata hai. Paise se hi aap khush rehte ho? Paise se kabhi koi udaas reh hi nahi sakta. Didn't you say that!? Then why do you look sad now? Mujhe toh abhi keval yahi dikhaayi de raha hai ki... Paise se... You are not even happy... Look! How distressed you are. Look at yourself. Kaha gaye ab wo shabd??? Hmm?? I can't hear them..."

Iss waqt bhi...

Wo ro rahi thi. Aur kahi se bhi happy nahi thi. Uske shabd jese ekdum sahi saabit ho rahe the. Pata nahi kyu par iss baar Suhana ko Veer ka dhyaan aate hi... Iss baar usse gussa nahi aaya. Keval rulaayi hi chooth rahi thi.

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Idhar Veer reservation karwa ke Jaipur ke station pohuch chuka tha. Ragini ke diye gaye paise waqai boht kaam aaye the uske liye.

Na keval Suman ne idhar apne ghar me poora taala laga diya balki wo apne ghar ki chaavi bhi pados me de aayi ye kehke ki yadi uska pati waapas se aaye toh usse dhundne ki koshish na kare.

Keval Suman hi nahi, Aabha aur Sonali bhi uske sang thi. Suman ka kehna tha ki ab wo Veer ki daasi hai toh harr pal uske aas paas hi rahegi aur uski sewa karegi.

Shaam ko bhi Suman ke aakarshan ke chalte Veer se raha na gaya aur usne ek baar aur Suman ko pel diya.

Pehli baar me jo sex usne Suman ke saath kiya tha uske chalte usse 35 points mile the aur usse bachaane ke 30 points. Toh kul milaake uske paas 65 points maujood the jinhe wo spend nahi kiya tha.

Wo ghar lautne ke baad hi inn points ka sahi istemaal kese karna hai ye decide karne waala tha.

Ab chuki aa toh gaya tha wo station par usne dekha ki Sonali bade hi gusse se usse dekh rahi thi. Aur baat bhi nahi kar rahi thi. Bas dekhti aur gusse se aag baboola ho jaati. Par bolti kuch nahi. Veer ne bhi ignore karna hi behtar samjha filhaal ke liye.

Train aa chuki thi reservation unka AC 1 coach me tha. Veer samaan rakh ke abhi baahar hi aake kuch chips aur biscuits khareedne me laga hua tha jab usse sunaayi diya,

"Bhaiya!! Oo bhaiya! Hello jii!?"

Usne dekha toh paaya ki saamne ek dusri train me ek mahila khidki se apna ek haath nikaale kisi ko awaaz laga rahi thi.

Veer kuch soch aage badha toh agle hi pal uss mahila ki nazar Veer par gayi.

Dono ki nazre jab aapas me takraayi toh uss mahila ne forun hi firse pukaara,

"Betaa! Suno..."

Usne haath se ishaara karte hue Veer ko bulaaya.

Veer jab uske sameep aaya toh thoda hairaan reh gaya. Paas se gaur se jab usne dekha toh paaya ki...

Wo mahila waqai khubsoorat thi. Aur saree nahi balki ek kaali t shirt pehni hui thi. Jisme uski gori twacha alag hi khil ke dikhaayi de rahi thi.

Veer : Jiii!?

Aurat : Beta! Kya tum mere liye waha shop se ek paani ki bottle laa doge please? Mein khud le aati par... Meri back me thoda pain hai.

Veer (smiles) : Sure!

Aurat : Ohh! Th-Thank you beta!

Veer (smiles) : Isme thanks kesa? Aap rukiye! Mein aata hu.

Veer uske diye gaye paiso se ek bottle liya aur apni taraf se usne ek biscuit ka packet bhi liya aur wo leke uss aurat ke paas aaya.

Aurat (surprised) : Ye!?

Veer (smiles) : Ye meri taraf se... Rakh lijiye! Back me pain hai aapki. Aage station me aapko utarna na pade.

Aurat kuch derr ke liye usse dekhi aur fir ek badi hi pyaari sii muskaan usne dii.

Na jaane kyu par wo muskaan dekh Veer ekdum shaant pad gaya.

Aurat : Thank you beta! Wese iski koi zaroorat nahi thi par fir bhi thank you! Aur ruko...

Tabhi wo apne bagal me rakhe bag se kuch tatolti hai aur ek candy ka packet usse thama deti hai.

Aurat : Ye meri taraf se... Haha~

Veer (smiles) : Iski koi zaroorat nahi...

Aurat : Na na! Haha~ Ab ye rakhna padega. Thank you once again.

Veer (smiles) : Jii! Chalta hu! Safe journey!

Aurat (smiles) : Okay! You too!

Aur tabhi uss aurat ki train aur saath hi saath Veer ki bhi train chalne lagti hai.

Ek baar fir wo Veer ko khidki se dekhti hai toh paati hai ki Veer bhi usse hi dekh raha tha. Dono bas muskuraa dete hai.

Veer lapak ke train me chadhta hai par achanak usse pata nahi kya sujhta hai ki...

Wo palat ke ek baar fir uss aurat ko dekhta hai aur...

'Check!'

[Alias name - Geeta
Real Name - Bhavana Singh.
Bio - Bhavana! Ek behad hi strong woman hai. Boht peeda me hai jo kayi saalo se wo bardaasht karti aa rahi hai. Loves her daughter too much. Ek aas hai usse. Aur kisi ki talaash. Peshe se Archeologist hai.

Favourability - 70
Relationship - Mother.]

Aur ye padhte hi Veer ko uski life ka sabse bada jhatka laga tha.

Aaj usse apne janmdin par koi gift mila ho na mila ho. Ye jese...

Uske liye best gift tha.
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
Dhanyavaad!
Don't forget to like.

 

[Werewolf]

Same to u happy diwali

Super wonderful update

Awesome update bhai or ye suman veer ko malik kyu kah rahi he kya iske pichhe bhi koi wajah he ya veer ne unlogo ko bachaya he isliye malik bula rahi he waiting for next update

Awesome update bhai

I think Veer ko ring itna jaldi na milega...
Jatin ne Wo ring dusre aadami ko de diya hoga...

Awesome update

Bahed hi shandaar update, finally veer ko woh cheej mil hi gayi jaise liye woh itni door aaya tha...

Ab dekhna hai un dono sisters ka kya reaction hota hai veer ke liye jab wo unko ring vapas karta hai..


lekin ye suman ne veer ko malik kyu bola??? samajh nahi aaya...

Maalik... Ab ye kya bawaasir hai be... Kya ye aurat Veer ki Maa ke baare mein jaan ne ka zariya ban sakti hai... I think zaroor Veer ki Maa koyi Rajwadon ke khaandan se taaluqat rakhti hogi... That's why usne Veer ko Ma.. Maalik kaha... Lekin agar Veer Ki Maa itne bade khaandan se thi to Brijesh jaise Chutiye ke chakkar mein kaise padi???

Kherr... Chalo lounde ko kaafi din baad sambhog ka sukh praapt hua... Aur lagta hai do aur ladkiyan mil gayi hain isse... Aabha to shayad jald hi mil jaayegi isse aur der sawer Sonali bhi iske saamne taange ...

Jatin ko dhar liya Veer ne aur angoothi bhi mil gayi isse... Par kya wo asli angoothi thi... I mean kahin wo nakli na ho... Warna baad mein dikkat ho sakti hai... Aur Veer ko agar asli bhi mili hai to bhi wo saamne se jaakar Suhana ko to de nahi sakta warna uska shakh yakeen mein badal jaayega ke wo Angoothi churao abhiyaan Veer ki dekh rekh mein hi kaamyab hua tha...

Idhar Sonia to guilt mein hai... Veer ke saath do baar Suhana ne galath vyavahar kiya aur uska asar nishchit hi Sonia ki Veer ke prati favourability par bhi pada hoga... 40 ke aas paas to hogi hi shayad???

Wahin uss aurat Suman ki favourability 30 pehli hi mulaakat mein hona ajeeb tha... Kherr sex ke baad to aur bhi badh hi gayi hogi...

Aur Aarohi aur Kavya ka peechha kaun kar raha hai... Ranga??? Shayad Veer se badla lene ke liye ya fir koyi aur... Maybe wo chutiya Ajay (jo bhi naam tha uska jisse Veer ne dhoya tha)...

Behatreen update Werewolf bhai... Kaafi saare scenes cover kar diye aapne iss update mein aur kahin bhi aesa nahi laga ki flow kharaab hua ho story ka... Ye update ek dum perfect tha ... Dekhte hain Veer ka mission kaise poora hota hai aur kitne points milte hain usse aur jo 30 milen hain unka wo kya karega...

Agle update ka shiddat se intezaar rahega kyonki ab ye Maalik waali guthi jo daal di hai aapne ant mein...

Outstanding Update & Waiting for next....

Awesome update mate.. Maja aa gaya... Veer ko diwali ka bonus mil gaya

Awesome Updateee

Mast update

Super update hai Bhai

Super

Fabulous update

Bhai update badhiya tha or shayad aaj tk ka sbse bda bi vese veer ne aaj dusri bar sex kiya h to es bar bi points milenge kya pichhli bar ki tarah or ye suman veer ko bar bar ma kyu bol rhi h or last me malik ab es gaav se koi relations na nikl aaye and at last thanks a lot for such a mind blowing update

Why has the mission of getting the ring not over. Some twists coming up it seems.

Update Very Good...


Happy Diwali Bro....
And Your Family...

Awesome update bro and keep writing

Mujhe Laga Hi Tha Bar Bar Ma... Pe Aake Rookna Koi Aurat Kisi Ladke Ko To Mama Bolne See Rahi.
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Ab Bas Ye Suspense Khul Jaaye Tab Pata Lage Ki Aakhir Ye Gaon Ki Desi Murgi Matalab Suman Veer Ko Malik Kyon Bol Rahi Hai.
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Jhakkas Rabchik Update.
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Ye To Abhi Suruaat Bhi Nahi Hai Dekhte Hai Jaise Jaise Pari And Veer Ke Levels Up Hote Jaayenge Tasks And Dangers Bhi Badhate Jaayenge.
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Veer Ke Intelligence Me Points Add Karne Ke Karan Usko Is Update Me Bahut Kaam Aaya Jaise Jatin Ko Pakadte Samay Check System Ka Use Karna Aur Ghar Aate Samay System Ki Memorizing Ability Ka Use Karna.
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Is Update Me Sonia Ka Veer Prati Protective Hona Behad Hi Pasand Aaya Saath Hi Uska Veer Ke Prati Jhukav Bhi Ek Alag Hi KAHANI Kah Rahi Hai.

Nice update...

Ab ye kya malik wla lfda h....suman to kamdevi nikli ek hi din me chud gyi khud hi.... jabki apne dusre pati ko chune bhi nhi deti.............
kavya ka picha syd ranga ke hi admi kr rha hoga..........
jabardast mindblowing superbbb speechless update............
keep posting bhai.........
waiting for next update............

Super fantastic Hot update

Mindblowing bhai maza aa gaya...lekin diwali par ek aur bonus banta hai

Bhai diwali pe ek aur update banti hai

शानदार प्रदर्शन

Mast update bhai ring ke bare me to veer bhool hii gaya ab ab dekhte hai kya hota hai aur suman aur veer ki night to bahut hii sexy erotic tha

Awesome update bhai
Kavya aur aruhi ka piche kya aatish hi laga huwa hai?
Kahi veer ke wapis aney se pehle dono behno me sath kahi koi hadsa na hojaye.
Suhana ki soi abhi bhi veer par hi atki huwi hai pata nahi usey aisi kya problem hai veer se.
Finally veer ne jatin se ring hasil karli dekhte hai is mission se konse konse futures unlock honge aur kya rewards milenge veer.
But veer suhana ko ring lotayega kaise kyunki wo aise direct to de nahi sakta.
Ab is kahani mai suman and family ne ek naya mood la diya akhir kon hai suman jo ek hi mulakat mai veer se sharirik sambandh bana li and phir veer ko malik keh kar pukar rahi hai.
Lagta hai ye veer ki asli maa ki hi koi jankar ho.
Dekhte hai kahi yaha se veer ko apni asli maa ki jankari to nahi milti.

Bahut hi khubsurat update tha bro aur last ka cliffhanger bahut mast tha "Ma.. malik" aur saath hi mein bahut jagah bahut kuch ho raha hai jaise kavya aur arohi ko koi follow kar raha aur unko threat ka andaja nahi hai aur woh dono koi regular stalker samajh kar ignore kar diya...wahin aatish sonali ko uthane ke chakkar mein game khel raha hai angoothi chura kar dusri aur suhana sonali ko apna shock veer ke upar batati hai magar wahan humko ye jaan ne ko mila ki andhere mein bhi sonali ne veer ka hath pakda hui thi aur veer bhai sahab ke toh gaon mein alag hi maje ho rakhe hein kahan angoothi dhundte dhundte unko kuch aur hi mil gaya(ma...malik) ab wahan abha bhi apni frustration nikalne ke chakkar mein hai...

Superb update bro

Bahot behtareen zaberdast shaandaar update bhai
Kon tha woh aadmi jo dono behno ka peecha ker raha tha
Veer n teen mission complete kiye
1. Suman or uski bahu ko bachaya jisme 30 points mile
2.chor urf jatin ko pakda
3.suman k saath mast raat gujari
Lekin suman n Veer malik kyon bola
Sawal bahot h
Dekhte h aage kiaa hota h

Awesome update bro plz jaldi jaldi ek or update daldo

𝓦𝓞𝓝𝓓𝓔𝓡𝓕𝓤𝓛𝓛,
𝓦𝓐𝓘𝓣𝓘𝓝𝓖 𝓕𝓞𝓡 𝓝𝓔𝓧𝓣 𝓤𝓟𝓓𝓐𝓣𝓔 𝓑𝓡𝓞

Nice update

Awesome update bhai

Mast update

Naina g ham to aap ki shararton ko enjoy karne walon mein se hn. Phir bhi vivek ki jodi sumitra k saatth theek rahe gi

Ek dum gazab fantastic hot update waiting for next

*शुभं करोति कल्याणमारोग्यं धनसम्पदा। शत्रुबुद्धिविनाशाय दीपज्योतिर्नमोऽस्तु ते॥* I fold my hands before the light that brings prosperity, auspiciousness, good health, abundance of wealth and destruction of the malevolent intent-- Happy Dipawali to you and your family----- Sunny

Awesome update maja ah gya

Awesome update broo ❤❤❤❤❤
Mindblowing...
Mazza aagaya padh ker bhaiii.....


Waiting for next update..

And #happy diwali...

Happy Diwali

Next update please

Awesome update bhai...waiting for next update eagerly...

Shandar update bhai

ᔑᑌᑭᗴᖇᗷᗷᗷᗷ update bro

Great update bhai

Awesome update larke
Aji kamal krte ho kasam se
Ye attish ko me bhot top samjh rha tha but ye to chindi chor nikla. Ring se munafa bhi kamana chahta hai.
But usse kia pata jb tak hmari shaitan ki nani pari hai uska koi plan kamyab hone wala hai nhi.
Abe ye kia afat aurat se mulakat hogyi. Sexbomb bhi hai. Veer ko naye chahne wale mil gye. Kia kismat hai launde ki jb se baap se dhaka diya hai. Launde ki to mojje lg gyi hain.
Or mission bhi comp hogya hai. Or ring wala bhi jaldi hojye ga.
Me smjh rha tha suman baar baar mahi kehne ki koshish kr rhi hai but wo to apne malik ki deewani nikli.
Chalo acha hai ring wala kissa jldi khatm hogya or dhulai bhi achi krdi.
Missing Nidhi
Waiting for next

Nice update...

Shandar update bhai
Waiting for next update

Merko laga tha mission ma veer ki gand uska dusman bajayega
But ab ya Malik aur Suman ka chakar.
And at last Malik kehena just was such a great part to stop story at a clif hanger.
Could not wait to see the next update.
Aur kya veer fasega sex karne ka baad aur.kya history ma pata chalega etc.
Great update keep posting this fast only atleast 2-3 update in a week

mast update

Bahut hi badhiya update
Waiting for next update

Mujhe laga hi tha ki Malik hi hoga maja aa gaya

Mast update waiting for suhana reaction when veer will give her stollen ring

Happy Diwali bro
Veer ko bhi Diwali ka bonus mil gaya
Nice update

प्रश्न स्वतः उठ रहा है मन में
क्या परी अगले लेवल पर अपडेट हो जाएगी
क्या वीर मिले हुए पॉइंट से कोई स्किल हासिल करेगा
वीर का इतिहास कहें या अतीत वह क्या है....
अगले अपडेट की प्रतीक्षा है बंधु
आपने निःसंदेह अच्छी लेखन से हमें बंधा रखा है

Awesome update

waise ab veer ki mom ko entry le leni chahiye....
taaki wo pratishodh apne bete kath milke pratishodh le sake brijesh & sasuraal walo se

Intezaar agle update ke liye....

Nice and thanks for nice diwali gift.
Waiting for more fireworks

Superb update brooo.... Maza aa gya.

Ahm ahm
Shuruwat hoi story ki apne sajan
Veer ki pitayi se kamenu ne bht
buri tarah mara or oper se dialogue
alag se chipkaye ruk in ka maa ka
(main to veer ko bola b bhai k akele
maar mat kha tere hise k 1&2 lafe apun
jhel le ga to wo bola na bhai teri pitayi
main sehan nhi ker pau ga is liye ye
baar mujhe hi apne kandu pe uthane de main hami or dur se hi use pitate hove
dekhta rha)
sala larki ko dekhne pe kon marta hai
ye to nainsafi hai my Lord main in pe
case karu ga han ye sahi hai
pitayi khatam ghar pohanche to alag
hi chutiyapa intejar karte hove mila
vo sala pranjal is ki maa ka
100 kamene mare hu ge tab ja ker wo
paida howa ho ga sala kuch b kare ga1
Veer ko takhleef pohanchane k liye
sb mile hove hain bc
heartless sale mader......
Dada ji b bs nam k hi hain sb kuch
unki ankhu k samne howa per na
unko to kuch faraq hi nhi para sirf 1 faisla badal lene se kia faraq parta
lakin nhi in logo ko samjhana
deewar se sar takrane jaisa hai
to chaliye hum b age bharte hain Veer
k sath❤
gari ne thoka larki ne roka per na sala
her bar koi na koi ungli karne
aa hi jata hai sala us driver ki to
jai
hosspital me bharti hove bhai sahab or
phir to kiamat hi ho gyi dimagh jhanjhana utha
dill k taar chir ge moor nachne lage
haye ab main us katil haseena ka
nam lu b to kaise uff sanam hum to
dhobe hain tum ko b le dhoben ge
NIDHI❤
finally 1 bht hi khobsurat character
ko introduce karaye writer babu
or karaye b to aisa k bs hum to deewane hi ho ge
(kitni hi stories read kari hain maine
lakin such kahu to age difference k
bawajod itni strong feeling kabhi na
mehsos kari married hain hain 2 baby
b hain lakin apni niji zindagi se disturb
dill se bura laga k NIDHI ji k sath
aisa kyu howa wo bad me
Veer ne toka sale kuch mera b kheyal ker le sari zindagi akela hi rahu ga
k mujhe b to hak hai khush rehne ka
maine b ashirwad diya phir ja simran
ji le apni zindagi meri duayen tere
sath hain
NIDHI+VEER
ye doni is story k aise pehlu hain
jitna marzi gehrayi me utro utarte chale
jao ge lakin uski koi hud nhi❤
kia hi bolu ab main
(1 time pe mere dimagh me ye bat
b ai k is thread ko incest na ho ker
romance ya fantasy aisa kuch hona
chahiye ta kyu k in dono ko
le ker jo b feelings dikhai gayi hain
wo 1 dum pure hain aisi feelings to
kisi teenage couple me b na dekhne
ko mile lakin phir ye kheyal aya k writer
babu ne kuch soch ker hi aisa kiya
ho ga to koi ni is ko b seh le ge bs
NIDHI ji ka kheyal rakhiye ga sir wo
zarori hai)
JUHI ale meli gudhiya rani
she's so sweet or ho b kyu na akhir
NDHI ji ki parchayi jo hai
SHAREYA apni misal ap dabang larki
hai or character k lehaz se 1 dum
perfect
apni didi or JUHI se bht pyar karne
wali wah kia bat hai❤
(mere kheyal se cmnt thora bara hota
ja rha hai to is ko short me complete
karte hain i hope k writer babu
zaror samjhe ge story k liye kehna
to bht kuch chahte hu ge meri tarah
dosre readers laikin alfaz kum per jain)
lakin kuch to missing hai or kia hai
1 minut aaela is ko kaise bhol sakta hu
(System is activated)
ye kia ta bhai tum b wahi sune jo
main suna
welcome to PARI❤
in VEER ki or humari zindagi me
dill se thanku ap ai humare to larke
k bagh khul ge shukriya dhanewad
(Mer b kuch bolu ya itna kafi hai
PARI:bs bs ju jaise choro ko ache se janti hu main sundar lakrki dekhi nhi k
line marna shiro
Me:ghajab bezati hai)
to is ko yehi pe stop lagate
hain baki k sath sath ata rhe ga
abhi kehna to or b ta lakin filhal k
liye yehi break
thanku so much
keep going
stay with us❤

Aapki Story bahut behtareen hai,

isliye sabhi Jaldi Jaldi Update ki mang karte hai,

Pichla Update bhi bahut behtar tha,

1 request hai, agar Aap samay manage kar sake to Week me 3-4 ( waise to 7 bolna chah raha hu ) Update dene ki koshish kijeaga,

1 Update padhne ke bad 2-3 din intezar karna muskil lagta hai.

Waiting for your next fabulous update

Yaar bhai super gazab kya likhte ho yaar.
Me xforum pe naya hu thodi hi story padi thi wo muje bahut hi pasand thi par aapki story to un sab se behtarin he. Super bhaipls keep it.

Zabardast update

Superb Update bro
Keep Posting

Nice story I read 24 updates .
i want one thing from you I know it's a erotic story but by your story in the end give a lesson to all your readrs on morality maybe it's funny but every writer did in there stories I know they are not erotic writers

Bahot majedar update..naya update ka intezar hai..jald hi dene ka kosish kijiye

ठीक है लेखक मित्र

साथ बना रहेगा

Pari ko Veer ki maa ne bnaaya hoga Veer ke liye aaur i think paari hamesha Veer ke sath thi jaan Veer ka accident huyea pari unlock hu gaai

Ju jitne baar nidhi ke sath veer ko jodne ki koshish karenge utni baar wo alien pari bhi roast hogi... aur aakhiri baat bhi yahi hai
sleep mode mein nahi balki saamne wali ke andar ghus ke tharak mitati hai pari.... Wo kya hai na shayad uska koi sarir hi nahi hai... isiliye dusron ke sarir ko aadhar banati hai wo...

lo ..writer ne khud kabul kar liya ki un dono ke bich pyar hai

Waiting

Rahul uske universe ka One Above All hai.

Werewolf broo khin pri or veer main hi ghapa ghap ka scene hy kia

Werewolf broo ziada deer intizar sy phal ka maza bhi kabhi kabhi kharab hojata hy

Bro aaj update aaega kya

Werewolf bro, any chance of update

Really......

Then why did she enter into a hopeless looser who was not in a position to protest also....

Waiting

11 ho gaya yaar

Waiting

Behad hi shanadar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.

awesome superb and laajawab update

Update plzz bro

Kabhi galti se ek din pahle update de diya karo bro

Werewolf भाई आप समय से अपडेट दिया करे हम लोग आपके अपडेट का बहुत ही बेसब्री से इंतजार करते है

Night me.10 se 11 ke beech

You fascinate me…

Aatish ne Sonia ko pakad ne k liye sara gameplan taiyaar kiya tha diamond ring chorri ka..jatin unka he banda tha
Arohi aur komal k picche kon pada tha ye abhi tak suspense he..
Veer ne rajasthan me Sonali,abha,aur suman ko bachaya...jatin ka bhi pitayi karli...
Pari ko sab kuch malum he lekin wo veer ko sab kuch batati nehni
Suman aur veer ka romantic night bhi ho gaya jiska pata sirf abha no he..
Lekin malik pukarna koi to raaz he abhi jo veer ko nehni pata....
Amazing ❤ update...

Werewolf bhai update ka intezar hai....

Bhut achi story ha is story ka theme sa milti julti koi or story ha kya

Awesome story script

Bhai bahat sandaar story update, lagta hai veer ka kuch to kissa hoga agla update main

Jabardast update mitr

Bro update kab tak aaega ... Mtlb kitne baje tak ... Plzzz jyda wait mt krwana

For completed 7lk views on your story thread..

Congratulations brother

Je bat apni taraf se happy wala

PYAR VYAR TO NA HOGYAYA APKO
NIDHI SE

Congratulations for completing 71k views on thread

Superb update bro....
Waiting for next

Waiting

Okk bro....

Waiting for here next update

Wah bhai jabarjast superb update juhi ki favourability dekh kr veer or ham Sabhi ko hairani Hui to juhi se milkr nikal gya nidhi ma'm ko dekhne or uske baad apna saman pack kr nikal gya train Jaipur Jisme jatin naam ka chor tha TT ko dekh kr jo veer or jatin ka situation bnaya hai Uspr un mahilao ke samvad anand hi aa gya padh kr bhai jatin ka pta chalte hi veer ne pakadte ki Kosis bhi ki pr veer ko dhakka de diya Jisse veer bahar hi girne vala tha Vo to golu ne puchhe se pakad kr kheech liya... Jatin kafi Chalu admi hai dobara veer ke hath na lga Dekhte hai kya hota hai aage sandar

Writer sahab update aaj ayega ya fir subah

Take your time sir..

Darling wait mat karva yr ....teri story padne mei wait nai hota...or ho sake toh veer ko apni mam se door mat karna. Ab mauka bhi hai dastoor bhi ring milne se us akdu ghamndi ladki ka poori jindgi faver bhi milega osi ke chalte apni launda help le sakta hai nidhi ke bete ko bachane mei

Badhai ho 71k views ke liye... kaafi shaandaar likhte hain aap.
Bada hi intezar hai agle update ka..

The story is very interesting

Suman ne veer ko malik bola kya is gaav me kisi mahila ki madad karne pr Vo mahila uski gulam ho jati hai... Veer ne akhir kar anguthi hasil kar hi liya Suman ne khud se pahal Kari btao veer ko khud hi kiss karne lagi uski bahu Abha ne bhi sab sun liya hai raat ka kissa Dekhte hai subah kya hota hai kahi jatin atish bhau ke admio ko lekr na pahuch jaye Suman ke ghar sandar update bhai jabarjast superb hot also

Sir update me kitna time lagega

Waiting broo

Waiting

Waiting

Waiting

Waiting Next update bro

Kitni der or lagegi bhai please time bata do or wait nahi ho raha

Update 30 has been posted guys!