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Superb update bro
Super update
Fantastically awesome update.
Sir ji kamal ke diya dhansu update super
Awesome Updateeee
Fantastic update bhai
Sir suspense create kar diya but update superb
Nice update
Super update hai Bhai
Maverick, mind blowing, Dhansu Update Werewolf bro. So all the earned points are in use today for Veer, this is his first win and it is going to have a good impact on Ragni.
Nice update
So kia update the Maza a gia soooper
Wese Nidhi ko veer ki baato pe trust to h hi
Nidhi ko us k husband ka call aya wo Nidhi ko bula raha why?
Ye to subha ja kr hi pta chale ga
Veer ne badhiya fi8 ki ranga k do larko ko behosh kr dia or bhir gia ranga se marte marte bacha h veer ,,,,,, jy ho pari devi ki,,,,
Ye 3no to totally shocked hain k inhain bachane Wala veer h
Let's see what happend
Waiting for next shidat wala
Gazab update!
What A Great Writing Skill
Mind-blowing update zabardast action tha but end p suspence chor dia
Lazawab update bhai
Superb fantastic action sequence Werewolf bhai....
Veer just nailed it....
Nidhi bahit dubidha me hai ki kese aage ki situation aur using life handle karegi.veer sayad ragini ko bacha liya hai.next update bahut emotional hone wala hai.
Super update
Jabardast majedaar, waiting for next update
mja aa gya bhai fight dekh kr or ab sayd ragni or Vivek uske bare me acha soche.........
keep posting bhai.........
waiting for next update............
Zabardast update
Awesome update bhai...waiting for next update eagerly...
Great update
Nice update bhai
Nice update
Nice update
Nice update bro.....
Bahot behtareen zaberdast
Shaandaar update bhai
Veer n tow apna kaam ker dia lekin
Woh khud kafi injured ho gaya ab
Kaise nidhi or shreya k sawalo ka
Jawab dega ki kaha se toot foot k aaya h
Ragini Vivek or Dinesh tow abhi tak shocked m h shock se aane k baad kia
reaction aata h teeno ka
Lajawab update bhai bahot zaberdast
Superb awsm update to gud Plzzz cont asap
Zabardast Update bro
Keep Posting
Nice update
Bhai jabardast
Nice update
Superb behtreen apdate waiting for next apdate
Bahut hi Badhiya Update Jitni Tareef ki Jaye Unti Kam Amazing writing skills
Fight scene is trah likha hai Kiya hi baat hai
Ragni(rand sali) isne Socha v nhi hoga kbhi aisa v hoga Marial sa ladka jisko humne Ghr se dhke maar kr niklwa diya wo aakr hume bachayega !?
Khair Shaandaar update safe rhen Aise likhte rhye ♥
Awesome update bhai
Awesome update
Nice and superb update...
Kamal ka likhtey ho pandey giii
Waiting for next update bhai
Waiting next update
Nice update
Waiting
एक और हसीना वीर पर कुर्बान हो गई । छोटी वाली चचेरी बहन तो थी ही सौतेली बहन की सोच भी धीरे धीरे वीर के लिए बदल रही है । अब भाभी ने जो देखा और कुछ देर पहले तक जो भोगा , उससे तो शर्तिया वो वीर से प्रभावित हो उठेगी ।
अभी तक उसने किसी भी क्षेत्र में पूर्णता हासिल नहीं की है तब यह हाल है । और जिस दिन सभी क्षेत्रों में पूर्णतः सक्षम हो जाएगा तब क्या हाल होगा ! मुझे लगता है उसके सम्पर्क में आने वाली सारी युवतियां उसके मोहपाश में बंध जायेगी । हसिनाओं का बादशाह बन जायेगा वो ।
वैसे सीमित सामर्थ्य के बावजूद भी अच्छी फाइट की उसने रंगा और उसके साथियों से । मैंने पहले ही कहा था बुद्धि और शारीरिक शक्ति में बुद्धि श्रेष्ठ है । उसे पहले अपने फिजिक्स और इंटेलिजेंट पर अधिक फोकस करना चाहिए ।
फाइट सीन को बहुत ही बेहतरीन तरीके से प्रस्तुत किया गया है । कोई अतिशयोक्ति नहीं था उसमें । बिल्कुल ही ओरिजनल लगा मुझे ।
आउटस्टैंडिंग एंड अमेजिंग अपडेट Werewolf bhai.
nice update
so finally veer ne ragini ko bacha hi liya ab dekhte hain aage kya hota hai
Update plz
Waiting for next update Werewolf bhai....
Waiting for next one
Bhot hi badiya story hai yewr.
Mtlb kmal krte ho pandey g.
Khas krke plot bhot heavy hai.
Mean like something different .
Jisne jo diya tha sbko sood samet lotaya ga apna launda.
Pehla shikar bhi ajay hi hua. Koi ni dusro ki baari aye gi...
But one request ksi ko itni jaldi maaf nhi krna... Sabko saza milni chahiye.... Muje kyu lag rha hai ye pari bhot chalu cheez hai... Jhoot bolti hai zarur apne hero se... Lia gand fadu mission milte hain ya ye jaan boj ke deti hai pari... Like mam ko date pe leke jayo... Wtf...
Or muje nhi lgta agr mission fail ho bhi jye to pari kahi jaye gi wo ye wali dhamki zarur isliye derhi hai ye apna hero dil lga ke mission kre or jaldi se jaldi train hojye...
Waiting for the next update veere
Waiting
Waiting for next update...
Waiting for next update bhai
Updates kab doge yrrr
This is very very bad.......Not expected from a great reader like you....
Like to maar do.....
Kia karu Writer sahib ko apni kundli dikha ker storie start karni chahiye thi ab un ke naseeb kharab hai aur un ki kismat me hum he like hai to kia kar sakte hai.....Bechare Writer ji
Bhai aap story likhte rahiye yhi bhut h hum wait kre ge jb free ho tb update de dena
Bhai sab abhi to naye hi ho forum pe, hamari tarah. Pehle itni aukaat to bana lo phir writer ko gaali de dena. Writer sahab ka is forum pe story likhna hi apne aap mein ek valuable contribution hai. Hum jaison ki haisiyat nahi hai ki kisi writer ko kuchh bhi kahe. So appreciate their contribution and enjoy the updates as and when available.
waiting
Sir ji next update kb tak aayega
Eagerly waiting ..Bro
Waiting
Waiting for update sir g
Update
Waiting for next update.
It will be interesting when the hero meets Nidhi again....
Update kab tak
Waiting for update bro
Waiting
Or woh bhi apna toota foota thobda leker nidhi ka tow theek h lekin sabse mazedar hoga shreya ka reaction
Dekhte h update kia milta h aaj padhne ko
Werewolf bhai next update kab tak aayega?
Waiting
Werewolfbhai update redyy hei kya
For completed 3.5lk views on your story thread...
Bhaii kab tak de rahe ho update...
Ok sir g
Waiting
Waiting
Waiting!!!!!!!
Waiting bhai
Hold on guys update is on the way.
Waiting
Yar de bhi do update
Update 20 has been posted guys!20 minutes hogye