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Incest Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery

Kya Veer apni life behtar kar paega ya sab kuch kho baithega?

  • Veer Baadshah banega

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Update - 20 ~ Ragini's Breakout and An Unknown Visit.

Ab tak...

Usse kholte hi Veer seedhi wo knife Ranga ki pasli me ghused thi...


*Splurt*

"Aaaaaarrrrrrrrrrrrrrgggggghhhhhhhhhhh"

Ek zorrdaar cheenkh jisse sunn aadmi ki rooh kaanp jaaye poore basement me fel gayi.

Ranga apni pasli pakad jese hi side hua...

*Thud*


Sarr pe ek waar aaya aur agle hi pal uski aankho ke saamne andhera chhaa gaya.

Ab aage...

"Haaaah... Haaaah...." Zorr zorr se lambi lambi saas lete hue Veer wahi neeche baithe Ranga ko dekh raha tha, jo ki iss waqt sarr par waar khaane ke baad behosh ho chuka tha.

Aur agle hi pal, Veer apne haath se rod ko zameen par giraate hue, apni peeth ke bal dhadaam se floor par gir pada, wo lambi lambi saasein le raha tha, yaha tak ki kaafi khaasi bhi aa rahi thi usse.

Uske peeche se Ragini samet baaki sab kursi par bandhe side muh karke usse hi ghoor rahe the. Ragini ki aankho me ek chinta thi, saath hi saath darr, glaani aur na jaane kitne emotions uski aankhein bayaa kar rahi thi. Aur, wo aasu jo lagataar uske chehre ko bhigoye jaa rahe the, uski haalat ko bakhubi darsha raha the.

'Whyyyy!? Just... Just whyyy!??' Uske mann me yahi sawaal baar baar aa raha tha. Akhir kyu Veer yaha pe tha!? Ye baat toh saaf thi ki wo yaha usse aur baaki sabhi ko inn gundo ke changul se bachaane ke liye aaya tha. Par sawaal tha kyu!??

Jo ravaiyya uske gharwaalo ne uske saath kiya tha uss hisaab se toh usse yaha hona hi nahi chaahiye tha, ulta usse toh khush hona chaahiye tha. Par unn sab ke bawajood wo yaha par tha.

Jis hisaab se wo saasein le raha tha, aur uske shareer par aaye wo chhile hue ghaav jinse khoon beh raha tha, ye dekh ke hi Ragini ko ek chinta sii sataa rahi thi. Aisa hona nahi chahiye tha kyuki Veer se wo kabhi baatein hi nahi karti thi, ulta apne Pati ke plan me jaane ya anjaane me shaamil rehti thi jiske chalte Veer ko harr baar fassaaya jaata tha.

Par aaj Veer ne usse bachaaya, aaj wo uska ek saviour tha. Wo tab aaya jab usne poori umeed chorr di thi. Shayad isliye!? Shayad isliye aaj Ragini ko uski aisi haalat dekh thodi chinta ho rahi thi!? Abhi toh usne khud nahi realize kiya tha ki uska mann Veer ki aisi haalat dekh chinta me hai.

Vivek bhi Veer ko dekh khud hairaan tha.

'Ye!? Ye yaha kya kar raha hai!? Isse kese pata chala?? Jo bhi ho... Iske kaaran aaj mein bach gaya. Accha hua isse nahi pata hai ki Pranjal ke saath mein bhi mila hua hu. Shayad isse ye bhi nahi pata abhi ki Pranjal hi iski ye haalat ka kaaran hai. Hahaha~ good! Good! Ye sahi hai... I just have to console Ragini.'

Wo apne mann me soch apne aage ke plan ki taiyaari karne me abhi se busy ho chuka tha.

Dinesh bhi Veer ko dekh usse mann hi mann dhanyavaad de raha tha. Uske mann me Veer ke prati izzat badh chuki thi. Wahi dusri orr, Vivek ki chhavi uske mann me poori tarah se neeche gir chuki thi. Aaj jo asli Rang Vivek ne apna dikhaya tha usse dekh wo mehsoos kar sakta tha ki uski beti par abhi kya beet rahi hogi.

Idhar Veer unn sabhi ki nazro se anjaan apne gale me dono haatho ko ferr raha tha. Usse mehsoos hua ki kitna close tha wo apni maut ke. Yadi usne wo pocket knife na uthaayi hoti toh Ranga aaj pakka uska gala rod se choke kar ke usse maut ke ghaat utaar diya hota.

Aur maut ke baare me soch ke hi uske andar ek sihran sii daud gayi.

Yadi Pari ne usse uss aadmi ki jebe check karne na kaha hota, toh wo pocket knife usse milti hi nahi, yadi Pari ne usse ek secret weapon khojne ke liye na kaha hota toh uske paas wo rod hoti hi nahi. Ye sab soch ke hi Veer ke mann me Pari ke liye izzat badh gayi.

[Master!? Are you okay!?]

'I'm... I'm fine Pari! Thanks! Thanks a lot! Yadi tum na hoti toh...'

[It's okay master. Don't say it like that. It's okay!]

Veer khud ki saasein control kar neeche zameen se utha. Aur uski nazar jese hi Ranga pe gayi...

'Check!'

[ Name - Ranga
Age - 29
Bio - Ranga apne bhau ke liye kaam karta hai.
Pehle se hi wo anaath tha aur uske bhau ne usse sahaara diya. Apne bhau ke prati poora samarpit hai.

Favourability : -2
Relationship : Strangers.]

'Bhau!?'

[Iska boss Master.]

'Toh kya naam nahi jaan sakta mein!?'

[It's because I'm level 2 master. Level me up then see the magic.]

'Yeah! Yeah!'

'Wait!! Ye minus me favourability??'

[Yes master! Because aapne uspe hamla kiya toh favourability minus me toh jaane hi thi jab wo pehle se hi zero pe thi. Strangers ki favourability zero rehti hai na master. You remember!?]

'Ah! Yes! I do!'

Uske baad thoda karaahte hue Veer utha aur dheere dheere aage badh wo sabse pehle Dinesh ke paas pochucha.

Dinesh ke muh se tape nikaalte hue usne uske ird gird bandhi rassiya kholi.

Dinesh : Beta... Beta aaj tum na aate toh pata nahi kya hota.

Veer ne keval apna sarr haa me hilaaya aur uske bagal me baithi Ragini ki rassiya kholne ke liye wo neeche apne ek ghutne pe baitha aur rassiya kholne laga.

Ragini rote hue usse hi dekhti jaa rahi thi. Wo dekh paa rahi thi ki kese jagah jagah usse chot aayi thi. Par Veer ki nazre ek baar bhi Ragini ki nazro se na takraayi. Wo jese bas bina koi bhaav ke apne haatho se rassiyo ko kholne me laga hua tha.

Na hi usne upar muh karke Ragini ko dekha aur na hi uss se kuch kaha.

Dinesh idhar Vivek ki rassiyo ko kholne me jut gaya.

Jese hi sabhi unn rassiyo ki qaid se azad huye, Ragini uthate hi daudte hue Dinesh ke gale se lag gayi aur sisak sisak ke rone lagi.

Ye sab kuch uske liye boht zyaada tha. Khaaskar jab usse Aatish ka wo tamaacha pada tha, uske baad se hi Ragini me ek darr baith gaya tha. Warna uske pehle toh woh yahi soch rahi thi ki police aake unn sabhi ko bacha legi ya ye gunde zyaada kuch nahi karenge.

Par jab Aatish ne apne hi aadmi ke perr me goli chalaayi aur bas...

Ye dekhte hi Ragini ko samajh me aa chuka tha ki wo kitni badi musibat me phassi hui hai.

Aur ussi musibat se usse bachaane Veer kisi farishte ki tarah aaya. Na keval usne unn teeno ki jaan bachaayi balki ab Vivek ki company bhi bach gayi thi aur saath hi saath ab Dinesh ke kaagaz bhi wo waapas le sakte the aur saare evidence mita sakte the.

Dinesh apni bacchi ko gale se lagaaye uske chehre ko dekh raha tha. Aatish ka tamaacha khaane ke baad bechaari ka poora gaal laal ho chuka tha. Kese uske mote mote aasu uske gaalo se behte hue gir rahe the, wo sab kuch dekh paa raha tha.

Ragini : Papa...

Dinesh : Meri bacchi... Tu theek hai na!?

Ragini : Mein thik hu Papa... Aap theek hai na!? Unhone aap ke saath kuch kiya toh nahi na!? Kahi chot toh nahi aayi na aapko!?

Dinesh : Mein theek hu meri bacchi! Mein theek hu... Kuch nahi hua mujhe...

Vivek idhar dono baap beti ko dekh ab nazre jhukaaye khada tha. Usse samajh nahi aa raha tha ki kese wo Ragini ko face kare. Usne jo kuch derr pehle kiya tha uske kaaran Ragini pakke se behad khafa ho chuki hogi uss se. Aur, Vivek ko ab yahi kaam karna tha ~ Usse Ragini ko manaana tha jese bhi karke.

Abhi wo kuch keh paata ki tabhi Veer ki awaaz unn sabhi ke kaano me padi,

Veer : Hamaare paas samay nahi hai. Hume jald se jald yaha se nikalna hoga.

Veer ki baat sunn Dinesh ne haa me sarr hilaaya aur wo forun hi wahi table me rakhe saare apne kaagaz aur mobile me bane videos ko udaane laga.

Jab usne sab kuch dekh liya ki sab sahi hai uske baad usne Veer ko nikalne ka ishaara kiya.

Veer bhi ye jaan ke hairaan tha ki maamla kitna bada tha. Yaha wo soch raha tha ki sirf Ragini hi musibat me thi par maamla toh kayi guna pecheeda tha. Ragini ke saath saath Vivek aur Dinesh bhi yahi the aur yaha tak ki Dinesh ke Showrooms tak chhin chuke the.

Agle second hi sabhi uss abandoned building se baahar nikal tezz tezz qadmo ke saath main road ki taraf jaane lage.

Aur kuch hi derr me wo road ke paas aa chuke the. Ab unki nazro me kuch kuch gaadiya raaste me chalti nazar aane lagi thi.

Abhi jo sabse zyaada priority ka kaam tha wo tha yaha se nikalna. Kyuki kisi bhi waqt unn gundo ko hosh aa sakta tha aur wo Veer aur unhe dhundne aa sakte the. Isliye, jitna jaldi yaha se nikla jaaye utna behtar tha unke liye.

Kaafi derr tak wo bhaagte hue aage badhe the aur ab bas keval paidal hi chal rahe the kyuki Dinesh thak chuka tha.

Veer sabse aage chal raha tha aur uske peeche peeche Ragini aur baaki sab.

Apne qadmo ki raftaar tezz kar achanak hi Ragini Veer ke bagal se aayi aur uski chaal ke saath saath chalne lagi.

Ragini : Vee... Veer!?

Badi hi dheemi sii awaaz me usne pukaara. Par Veer ki taraf se koi reaction na mila usse. Wo bas saamne dekh chalta jaa raha tha. Jese maano Ragini uske liye bas hawa ke samaan thi.

Bauhe sikodte hue ek baar fir Ragini ne bechaini bhari awaaz me pukaara,
"Veer!!"

Par nateeja!?


Wahi...

Veer ne ek shabd na kaha.

Idhar Vivek apni patni ko Veer ke bagal se dekh hairaan tha.

'Ye!? Ye uss se kya baatein kar rahi hai!? Damn it! Mujhe... maamla suljhaana hoga, warna derr ho jaegi'

Aur agle pal hi Vivek aage badha aur Veer ke haath ko thaamte hue usse rok liya,
"Chote bhai..."

Usne badi hi vinamrta se usse pukaara aur aise me Veer ko rukna hi pada.

Vivek : Chote bhai! Aaj tumne hum sabhi ko bachaaya hai. Mein tumhara ye ehsaan kabhi nahi bhulunga bhai.

Bagal me khadi Ragini ne jese hi ye dekha uski aankhein phati ki phati reh gayi. Vivek kitni asaani se jhooth bol raha tha. Matlab ekdum safed jhooth.

Ab Ragini ko samajh aa raha tha ki uska pati kis kism ka ekdum nihaayti aur ghatiya insaan tha.

Na keval Vivek ne itne saare shadiyantra banaate hue Veer ko bhagaane me saath diya balki aaj usne apni hi patni ki jaan ki parvaah na kar seedhe seedhe usse qurbaan karne ki thaan bhi lii thi. Aur ab wo Veer ko apni meethi chikni chupdi baato me firse fassa kar usse behlaa raha tha.

'I never imagined you would be like this...' wo mann me soch Vivek aur Veer ke beech me hi koodna chaahti thi aur bataana chaahti thi ki uska pati kitna jhootha insaan hai, par Veer ne uski baatein suni hi nahi abhi kuch derr pehle hi...

'He must know... He must... Usse ye pata chalna hi chaahiye kese bhi karke...' Ragini ne jese thaan liya tha ki aage kya karna hai.

Vivek : Chote bhai! Mein jaanta hu tau jii tumse boht naraaz hai aur tumhe ghar se nikaal chuke hai. Par iska ye matlab toh nahi na ki mein aur baaki sab tumhaari parvaah nahi karte!? Bhale hi mein ghar me awaaz nahi utha sakta bhai... Par aaj jo tumne mere liye kiya hai. Usse mein kabhi nahi bhulunga. Tumhe jab bhi meri zaroorat pade bhai... Bejhijak mere paas aa jaana... Aur mein apni poori koshish karunga ki Tau jii ko mana ke tumhe waapas se ghar me laa saku. Kyu hai na Ragini!?

Par Ragini uski baat sunn keval usse dekhti rahi, wo kuch na boli. Aur jese...

Uski aankho me ek gussa tha. Jisse dekh Vivek awkwardly bas apni nazre idhar udhar firaata raha.

Veer : Koi zaroorat nahi hai. I had enough.

Itna bol wo waapas se palta aur kuch kadam chala hi tha ki Ragini bhaagte hue uske peeche se aayi aur uske haath ko thaam lii,

Ragini : Whyyyyy??? Kyu???? Kyu Veer!? Kyu bachaaya tumne hume!?

Usne tezz awaaz me chillaate hue Veer ko dekhte hue kaha.

Aur finally...

Veer uski taraf palta... Dono ki hi iss baar nazre mili aur Ragini achanak shaant pad gayi. Uske haatho ki pakad bhi Veer ke haath par se dheeli pad gayi.

Veer : Why!? Kyuki isme mera hi faayda tha. Just for my sake.

Ragini : Kesaaa faydaaaa!? Kya milaa tumhee!? Tumhe toh mujhe aur baaki sab ko hate karna chaahiye na!? Fir kyuuuu!? Kyu tumne aisa kiya!!!??

Veer : Mene kaha na! Just for my sake...

Ragini (chillaate hue) : I don't believe ittttt!!! I doooon'ttt...

Veer : Then so be it... And leave me alone.

Ragini : Whyyyyyyyyy!???

Par iss baar uske chillaate hi Veer ne apni aankhein dikhaate hue usse dekha jiske chalte bechaari Ragini thodi darr gayi aur uski awaaz achanak hi band ho gayi.

Veer : I won't repeat myself. Leave me fucking alone...

Pata nahi kyu... Par Veer ke bol sunn ek ajeeb sa dard hua usse andar hi andar. Kesa lagega aapko jab aapki koi jaan bachaane waala vyakti, aapke apno ki jaan bachaane waala vyakti aapse aisa kahe toh? Yahi hua tha Ragini ke saath.

Apna nichla honth daato tale dabaaye wo bas Veer ko ghure jaa rahi thi. Aankho se mote mote aasu beh rahe the. Usse apne sawaalo ke uttar bas chaahiye the, fir bhale hi Veer usse dhutkaar deta.
Par usne kuch bhi na bataaya.

Aur yahi sawaal Ragini ko andar hi andar khaaye jaa rahe the. Uski glaani ko badhaate jaa rahe the. Uski samajh me aa chuka tha ki kitna galat kiya tha usne Veer ke saath. Kitni buri bann gayi thi wo kisi ke liye.

Jis Veer se wo kabhi baat karne ke liye interest nahi rakhti thi aaj ussi Veer se baat karne ke liye wo marri jaa rahi thi. Bas ek baar bas wo uske muh se jese sunn'na chaahti thi ki akhir kyu kiya usne ye sab!?

Veer ka kehna tha ye uska swaarth tha, par iss baat pe Ragini ghanta believe karne waali thi.

Usse lag raha tha ki koi aur kaaran hai, aur yahi jaan'ne ke liye wo paagal hui jaa rahi rhi.

Veer : Aap sabhi jaaiye... Mein chala jaunga.

Veer ne Dinesh ko dekhte hue kaha toh Dinesh aage badh uske paas aaya.

Dinesh : Beta... Tum... Tum chalo... Mere saath... Ghar me. Tumne hamaari jaan bachaayi hai. Aise kese mein tumhe jaane de sakta hu? Aur aise akele kese jaoge!?

Veer : Mein akele hi toh aaya tha na? Don't worry! Mein chala jaunga. Aap log late mat kariye. Wo log kisi bhi waqt aa sakte hai yaha. Jald se jald taxi leke ghar ki orr nikaliye.

Kayi baar Dinesh ke manaane par bhi jab Veer na maana toh Dinesh ne ant me kuch paise nikaal Veer ke haatho me thama diye ki wo bhi taxi leke jald se jald yaha se nikal jaaye.

Jab taxi me baithne ki baari aayi toh Ragini ne ek bomb aur fod diya,

Ragini : Papa! Mein aapke saath aa rahi hu...

Aur ye sunte hi Vivek maano darr sa gaya...

'She... She's not leaving me right!?'

Vivek : Ragini!? Ghar nahi chal rahi!?

Ragini (stares) : Ghar hi jaa rahi hu.... Apne!!!!

Vivek : Accha!? Haha~ Theek hai. Aaj... Aaj Papa jii ke saath hi raho. Mein samajh sakta hu... Haha~

Aur Ragini Dinesh ke saath baith nikal gayi. Idhar Vivek bhi ek taxi kar nikal gaya aur bacha tha keval Veer.

Ant me usne bhi ek taxi kari aur wo bhi ghar ki orr nikal gaya.

Raaste me Ragini ne forun hi apna phone nikaal kisi ko call lagaaya,

Ragini : Hello!?

Dusri taraf se : Hello!? Haa bhabhi!

Ragini : Kavya!!! Kaha ho tum!?

Kavya : Mein toh ghar pe bhabhi, par aap kaha ho? Kabse aapko dhund rahe hai sab... Mujhe laga aap apne papa ke ghar gayi ho toh mene sabko wahi bataaya... Aap wahi ho na!?

Ragini : Oh thank god! Haa! Mein wahi hu... Aur suno na... Mujhe tumse boht important kaam hai.

Kavya : Kya kaam Bhabhi!?

Ragini : Kya tumhaare paas Veer ka number hai!?

Kavya (surprised) : Veer bhaiya ka!?

Ragini : Haa!

Kavya : Haa... Hai toh...

Ragini : Thank god! Please... Kavya... Please... Mujhe uska number send kar do jaldi. It's urgent.

Kavya : O... Okay!

Ragini : Haa! Thanks!

*Call ends*

Aur kuch hi seconds ke andar hi Kavya ki taraf se ek message aaya jisme Veer ka number tha.

Apne phone me Veer ka number save kar wo apni soch me pad gayi. Taxi me baithe hue uski nazre window se baahar raat me sadak par daud rahi gaadiyo par thi. Par dhyaan kahi aur...

'I must tell him... Mujhe bataana hoga usse ki kya kya uske saath hua hai. Jitna mujhe pata hai... I'll have to... And Vivek... I can never believe you again...'

***

Nidhi ke ghar pohuchte pohuchte Veer ko 10:30 baj chuke the. Usne door bell bajaayi, aur andar se Nidhi ne hi darwaaza khola.

Jese hi Nidhi ne door khol ke Veer ko dekha, uski aankhein ashcharya ke maare phatt gayi.

Veer ke chehre toh kahi haath me jagah jagah chot ke nishaan the, yaha tak kuch choto se khoon bhi beh raha tha.

Apne dono haatho se muh dhakte hue wo Veer ko stabdh nigaahon se dekhti rahi,

Nidhi : Veeeeeeerrrr!??? Ye...

Aur uska haath pakad wo kheechte hue usse andar laayi, usse baithaayi aur darwaaza band kar bhaagte hue andar se ek first aid ka dibba laayi.

Sofe par uske bagal se baith Nidhi ne bina kuch kahe hi sabse pehle uski first aid karna shuru kiya,

Dono ne hi na kuch kaha aur na hi ek dusre se nazre milaayi.

Veer ki nazre jaha neeche thi toh wahi Nidhi ki nazre uski choto par...

Ek ajeeb sii peeda Veer ko andar se ho rahi thi jis kaaran wo Nidhi se apni nazre nahi mila paa raha tha. Ek toh wo bina koi sacchaayi bataye ghar se gaya tha aur wo bhi tab jab aaj Nidhi ne bade hi pyaar se special dinner banaaya tha.

Dinner chorr ke gaya tha woh. Aur ab jab lauta toh aisi haalat leke. Par uske bawajood, Nidhi bina kuch puche uski itni parvaah kar rahi thi. Wo chaahti toh dherro sawaal kar sakti thi ki kaha se maar peet karke aa rahe ho? Wagarah wagarah.

Par jo sabse pehla reaction tha Nidhi ka wo tha chinta... Parvaah...

Uske prati...

Aur bas isliye Veer Nidhi se nazre nahi mila paa raha tha.

'She's too pure... I... I can't...'

[She cares for you master...]

'I...'

Veer mann me bhi kuch na keh paaya. Usse jese rona aa raha tha. Koi insaan itna accha kese ho sakta hai bhala!?

Na jaane kitne sawaal idhar Nidhi ke andar bhi umad rahe the jinhe puchne ke liye wo bechain thi. Par abhi first aid karna zyaada zaroori thi.

First aid hone ke baad dono hi chup chaap bas agal bagal baithe hue the.

Aur ant me Nidhi ne khaamoshi tod hi dii...

Nidhi : Veer!? You okay?

Veer (smiles) : I'm okay Ma'am! Thank you!

Nidhi (frowns) : Then!? Kya... Kya ab tum bataoge kese hua ye sab!? I mean... If you dont want to then... It's... It's okay...

Usne bolte hue nazre neeche kar lii par tabhi Veer ne uske haath ke upar apna haath rakh diya,

Nidhi : Huh???

Veer : I...

Usne Nidhi ka haath aur kass ke thaama aur bola,

Veer : I'm sorry Ma'am. Urgent tha...

[Master! Keh dijiye ki kisi ladki ko gunde cherr rahe the and you helped her... Isliye aap ko ladte hue chot aa gayi.]

'Nahi Pari! Mein jhooth nahi bolna chaahta unse ab. Kitna jhooth bolu Pari unse!? Look at her... Look at her eyes... I can't Pari... Iss se accha hai ki mein kuch na batau...'

[Then tell her the truth!]

'Huh!?'

[Yeah! Why not!? Tell her the truth. Bas mere baare me chorr ke... Tell her everything.]

Pari ki baat Veer ko sahi lagi aur isliye usne Nidhi ko ek baar fir dekha, uska haath kass ke thaama aur bolna shuru kiya,

Veer : Ma'am!!! Baat ye hai ki...

Aur fir Veer ne sab kuch...
Sab kuch bata diya ki Ragini kese waha gundo ke changul me thi aur kese usne unn sabhi ko waha se bachaaya.

Sunte sunte Nidhi kabhi chaunkti toh kabhi darrti, toh kabhi relax ho jaati ki akhir wo sabhi sahi salaamat the.

Nidhi : Itna sab kuch hua... Aur tumne mujhe nahi bataaya!?

Veer : Time nahi tha Ma'am... Wo....

Abhi wo apni baat aage rakh paata ki tabhi andar se Shreya aayi aur uski nazar Veer pe gayi aur agle hi pal wo hassne lagi,

Shreya : Pfffftttt ~ Hahahahaha~ Dekha!? Mene aapko bola tha na Dii ye gaya hai apni mashooqa ke paas... Par lagta hai aaj iski dhulaayi kar dii usne ya fir uske dusre boyfriend ne...

Nidhi : Shreyyyaaaaaa it's not funny! Tumhe pata bhi hai kya baat hai!?

Shreya : Kya!? I can tell easily ki ye kahi se pit ke aaya hai. Oyeeee! Bolo!? Aisa kya kar diya ki tumhari sutaayi ho gayi!? Haan!?

Nidhi se raha na gaya aur usne zorr se chillaate hue sab kuch bata daala jissse sunn Shreya thodi sann sii reh gayi...

Shreya : I... Wo...

Uske muh se ab ek shabd nahi nikal raha tha.

Uski ye haalat dekh Veer ne pyaar se muskuraate hue usse dekha par iss baar...

Shreya ko uski muskaan bilkul bhi acchi na lagi. Ulta dard hua usse...

"Sorry!" Wo kehte hue andar tezz qadmo ke saath chali gayi.

Nidhi : She didn't mean to...

Veer : I know Ma'am! It's okay! Don't worry! By the way... Aapne khaana khaaya!?

Uska sawaal sunn... Nidhi ne dheere se naa me gardan hila dii. Ye dekhte hi Veer ko ek aur jhatka laga aur uski glaani waale bhaav aur bhi badh gaye.

'If she keeps doing on that... Then... I will fall for her Pari... Inhe koi samjhaaye ki itna accha na rahe ye meri taraf... Warna mein inke pyaar me doob jaunga...'

[Anything is fair in love and war master.]

'I know... She deserves better though. Mein toh kuch bhi nahi unke liye Pari...'

[Maybe you are the best for her!?:blush:]

Pari ne budbudaate hue kaha.

'Huh? Kuch kaha tumne!?'

[Nothing master! :eek1: ]

Ant me dono Nidhi aur Veer ne saath me khaana khaaya aur aaj ki ye raat ek behad hi badi musibat tal chuki thi.

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Naya din...

Nayi subah...

Roz ki tarah Nidhi aur Veer college me the. Aur abhi subah subah first lecture lagne me thoda time bacha hua tha.

Veer apni class me sabse peeche ki bench par baitha hua tha par wo akela nahi tha...

Uske saath ek behad hi pyaari aur khubsoorat ladki baithi hui thi.

"Veer Bhaiyaaaa!!! Rakhiyeee naaa!!!!"

Veer : Kavya I told you na!? Mujhe nahi chahiye...

Kavya : Aapne nahi rakha toh mein udaas ho jaungi.

Veer : But...

Kavya : Mene kaha na rakhiye... Itni mehnat se mene ghanto tak dhund dhund ke liya hai...

Kehte hue usne ek badi sa packet Veer ko thama diya.

Iss packet me wo apne bhaiye ke liye kayi saari t shirts aur baaki samaan laayi hui thi. Ye usne kal khud apne paiso se liya tha. Na jaane kitni derr shopping kari thi usne mall me apne bhaiya ke liye...

Veer : Arre but mujhe zaroorat nahi hai Kavya...

Kavya : Kya...!? Kya aap... Kya aap ab bhi mujhe apna nahi maante bhaiya...!?

Uske aisa kehne par Veer ne ek saas bhari aur usko apne bagal se chipka liya,

Veer : Pagli hai tu... Laa de... Fine... Ab toh khush hai na!?

Kavya (giggles) : Hehe~ Boht khush...

Veer : Jaa accha ab... Apni class me jaa...

Kavya : Haa... Jaati hu... But ek baat aur...

Veer : Hmm!?

Kavya : Wo... Kal... Kal bhabhi ka call aaya tha. Unhone mujhse aap ka number maanga tha, and I have given her...

Aur itna bol wo bhaagte hue baahar nikal gayi.

Veer apni soch me doob gaya par wo neeche chal rahe scene se anjaan tha.

Neeche college ke campus me ek black colour ki Rolls Royce aake jo khadi hui thi.

Sabhi aas paas ke students phone nikaal ke photo le rahe the toh koi bas dekhta hi jaa raha tha.

Itni shandaar gaadi unke campus me kya kar rahi thi bhala!?

Par jese ye gaadi toh kuch bhi nahi thi jab uss gaadi ka darwaaza khula aur andar se ek ladki baahar nikli...

Aur usse dekh waha khade harr ladke ke muh khule ke khule reh gaye. Usne ek tube skirt, andar ek shirt aur upar ek blazer daala hua tha. Poori professional lag rahi thi woh.

Tabhi andar se hi ek ladki aur nikli... Ye thodi umr me badi lag rahi thi aur isne golden colour ki ek saree pehni hui thi jo uske shareer se itni kass ke bandhi thi ki uske akaar ko bakhubi dikha rahi thi.

Ek aadmi bhi nikla jo umr me kareeb 40-45 saal ka prateet ho raha tha.

Ladki : Yahi hai na!?

Aadmi : Jii Madam!

Ladki (smiles) : Interesting...

Dusri ladki : Dekh lena... Yaad hai na mene kya kaha tha!? Wahi hoega...

Ladki : I don't care... Ussi ke liye toh hai hum yaha aakhir...

Dusri ladki : It was just a coincidence... There's no need to...

Ladki : Still... I want to...

Dusri ladki : Hmph! Baad me mujhse mat kehna...

Ladki : Prakaash uncle!?

Aadmi : Jii!?


Ladki : Jaaiye...

Aadmi : Jii Madam!!!

Aur agle hi pal Prakaash campus se andar college ki building me jaane laga.
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!

Dhanyavaad!
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Werewolf

ʏᴏᴜ ᴀʀᴇ ᴀʟʀᴇᴀᴅʏ ᴜɴᴅᴇʀ ᴍʏ ɢᴇɴᴊᴜᴛꜱᴜ
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Superb update bro

Super update

Fantastically awesome update.

Sir ji kamal ke diya dhansu update super

Awesome Updateeee

Fantastic update bhai

Sir suspense create kar diya but update superb

Nice update

Super update hai Bhai

Maverick, mind blowing, Dhansu Update Werewolf bro. So all the earned points are in use today for Veer, this is his first win and it is going to have a good impact on Ragni.

Nice update

So kia update the Maza a gia soooper

Wese Nidhi ko veer ki baato pe trust to h hi

Nidhi ko us k husband ka call aya wo Nidhi ko bula raha why?
Ye to subha ja kr hi pta chale ga

Veer ne badhiya fi8 ki ranga k do larko ko behosh kr dia or bhir gia ranga se marte marte bacha h veer ,,,,,, jy ho pari devi ki,,,,

Ye 3no to totally shocked hain k inhain bachane Wala veer h

Let's see what happend
Waiting for next shidat wala

Gazab update!

:yourock: What A Great Writing Skill
:respekt:

Mind-blowing update zabardast action tha but end p suspence chor dia

Lazawab update bhai

Superb fantastic action sequence Werewolf bhai....

Veer just nailed it....

Nidhi bahit dubidha me hai ki kese aage ki situation aur using life handle karegi.veer sayad ragini ko bacha liya hai.next update bahut emotional hone wala hai.

Super update

Jabardast majedaar, waiting for next update


mja aa gya bhai fight dekh kr or ab sayd ragni or Vivek uske bare me acha soche.........
keep posting bhai.........
waiting for next update............

Zabardast update

Awesome update bhai...waiting for next update eagerly...

Great update

Nice update bhai

Nice update

Nice update

Nice update bro.....

Bahot behtareen zaberdast
Shaandaar update bhai
Veer n tow apna kaam ker dia lekin
Woh khud kafi injured ho gaya ab
Kaise nidhi or shreya k sawalo ka
Jawab dega ki kaha se toot foot k aaya h
Ragini Vivek or Dinesh tow abhi tak shocked m h shock se aane k baad kia
reaction aata h teeno ka
Lajawab update bhai bahot zaberdast

Superb awsm update to gud Plzzz cont asap

Zabardast Update bro
Keep Posting

Nice update

Bhai jabardast

Nice update

Superb behtreen apdate waiting for next apdate

Bahut hi Badhiya Update Jitni Tareef ki Jaye Unti Kam Amazing writing skills

Fight scene is trah likha hai Kiya hi baat hai

Ragni(rand sali) :feelsbadman:isne Socha v nhi hoga kbhi aisa v hoga Marial sa ladka jisko humne Ghr se dhke maar kr niklwa diya wo aakr hume bachayega !?

Khair Shaandaar update safe rhen Aise likhte rhye ♥

Awesome update bhai 😊☺️

Awesome update

Nice and superb update...

Kamal ka likhtey ho pandey giii

Waiting for next update bhai

Waiting next update

Nice update


एक और हसीना वीर पर कुर्बान हो गई । छोटी वाली चचेरी बहन तो थी ही सौतेली बहन की सोच भी धीरे धीरे वीर के लिए बदल रही है । अब भाभी ने जो देखा और कुछ देर पहले तक जो भोगा , उससे तो शर्तिया वो वीर से प्रभावित हो उठेगी ।
अभी तक उसने किसी भी क्षेत्र में पूर्णता हासिल नहीं की है तब यह हाल है । और जिस दिन सभी क्षेत्रों में पूर्णतः सक्षम हो जाएगा तब क्या हाल होगा ! मुझे लगता है उसके सम्पर्क में आने वाली सारी युवतियां उसके मोहपाश में बंध जायेगी । हसिनाओं का बादशाह बन जायेगा वो ।

वैसे सीमित सामर्थ्य के बावजूद भी अच्छी फाइट की उसने रंगा और उसके साथियों से । मैंने पहले ही कहा था बुद्धि और शारीरिक शक्ति में बुद्धि श्रेष्ठ है । उसे पहले अपने फिजिक्स और इंटेलिजेंट पर अधिक फोकस करना चाहिए ।

फाइट सीन को बहुत ही बेहतरीन तरीके से प्रस्तुत किया गया है । कोई अतिशयोक्ति नहीं था उसमें । बिल्कुल ही ओरिजनल लगा मुझे ।

आउटस्टैंडिंग एंड अमेजिंग अपडेट Werewolf bhai.

nice update
so finally veer ne ragini ko bacha hi liya ab dekhte hain aage kya hota hai

Update plz

Waiting for next update Werewolf bhai....

Waiting for next one

Bhot hi badiya story hai yewr.
Mtlb kmal krte ho pandey g.
Khas krke plot bhot heavy hai.
Mean like something different .
Jisne jo diya tha sbko sood samet lotaya ga apna launda.
Pehla shikar bhi ajay hi hua. Koi ni dusro ki baari aye gi...
But one request ksi ko itni jaldi maaf nhi krna... Sabko saza milni chahiye.... Muje kyu lag rha hai ye pari bhot chalu cheez hai... Jhoot bolti hai zarur apne hero se... Lia gand fadu mission milte hain ya ye jaan boj ke deti hai pari... Like mam ko date pe leke jayo... Wtf...
Or muje nhi lgta agr mission fail ho bhi jye to pari kahi jaye gi wo ye wali dhamki zarur isliye derhi hai ye apna hero dil lga ke mission kre or jaldi se jaldi train hojye...
Waiting for the next update veere


Waiting for next update...

Waiting for next update bhai

Updates kab doge yrrr

:bhoi:This is very very bad.......Not expected from a great reader like you....
Like to maar do.....

Great reader kon :?: meri Baat kar rahe ho kai mere ko to review dena bhi nahi ata bus try karta hu :D Like iss liye nahi kia kiu ke review nahi likha abhi tak kal aram se jab review likhta tab like karna tha......But kia karu Writer ji ko like chahiye tha :D Iss liye ache reader ki tarha like ker dia

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Kia karu Writer sahib ko apni kundli dikha ker storie start karni chahiye thi ab un ke naseeb kharab hai aur un ki kismat me hum he like hai to kia kar sakte hai.....Bechare Writer ji :verysad:

Bhai aap story likhte rahiye yhi bhut h hum wait kre ge jb free ho tb update de dena

Bhai sab abhi to naye hi ho forum pe, hamari tarah. Pehle itni aukaat to bana lo phir writer ko gaali de dena. Writer sahab ka is forum pe story likhna hi apne aap mein ek valuable contribution hai. Hum jaison ki haisiyat nahi hai ki kisi writer ko kuchh bhi kahe. So appreciate their contribution and enjoy the updates as and when available.


Sir ji next update kb tak aayega


Eagerly waiting ..Bro


Waiting for update sir g


Waiting for next update.
It will be interesting when the hero meets Nidhi again....

Update kab tak

Waiting for update bro


Or woh bhi apna toota foota thobda leker nidhi ka tow theek h lekin sabse mazedar hoga shreya ka reaction
Dekhte h update kia milta h aaj padhne ko

Werewolf bhai next update kab tak aayega?


Werewolf bhai update redyy hei kya

:congrats: For completed 3.5lk views on your story thread...

Bhaii kab tak de rahe ho update...




Waiting!!!!!!!

Waiting bhai

Hold on guys update is on the way.



Yar de bhi do update

20 minutes hogye:bhoi:
Update 20 has been posted guys!
 
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